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UNIT 1 A new start
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模仿写作 学范文
Friday 8 September
Finally,it’s Friday! I can’t believe the first week is coming to an end.Things are going well,but there is always something new just around the corner.
At junior high,I took lots of notes during class.So in physics class on Monday,I did the same,but the teacher spoke so fast that I couldn’t take everything down.The teacher found I was struggling with note-taking and told me to stop and just listen.“Thinking is a more important ability than note-taking and memorising,” he said.
原文呈现
终于到星期五了。
真不敢相信,第一周就要结束了
一切进展顺利,
但总有一些新的事情发生。
上初中时
我在课堂上做大量笔记。
所以在星期一的物理课上
我也这样做了
但老师说得太快,我不能记下所有的内容。
老师发现 我在努力做笔记
就叫我停下来专心听讲
思考是一种比记笔记和记忆更重要的能力,
他说。
come to an end 结束 go well进展顺利 just around the corner即将发生 take notes 记笔记
take down 记下struggle with努力应付,与...作斗争
After class on Wednesday,I hurried to the school skateboarding club.I was running out of the classroom when I bumped into a girl literally.I said sorry to her and she smiled at me.At the club,I had my first try at skateboarding and fell off the board a lot.Suddenly,a girl bumped into me — the same girl from the corridor! This time,both of us laughed.Her name is Sarah.We started to practise together and soon became friends.
I’m going to watch a film with Sarah tomorrow evening.I’m looking forward to it!
星期三下课后,
我急忙赶往学校的滑板社团。
我正跑出教室,
突然与一个女孩撞了个满怀
我像她说对不起
她对我笑了笑
在社团里
我第一次尝试玩滑板,
摔下来很多次。
突然,
一个女孩撞到了我
就是走廊上那个女孩
这一次, 我两都笑了。
我们开始 一起练习
很快成了好朋友
明天晚上我们要一起去看电影。
我很期待。
bump into 撞上,撞到 say sorry to sb 向某人道歉 fall off 从...摔下 look forward to 期待,盼望
What is this passage about
It’s about the author’s first week ___________at senior high,including what happened in___________and __________.
experiences
physics class
after class
任务一
任务二
1.亮点词汇和句型
①Things are going well, but there is always something new just around the corner.
②The teacher found I was struggling with note-taking and told me to stop and just listen.
③I was running out of the classroom when I bumped into a girl literally.
由课文学写作
II.学写作架构
本文属于生活日记,生活日记是最基本的日记形式,主要用于记录真实生活。本文的写作范式提炼如下:
I.文体指导
(1)日记的内容多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情,所以要用_______人称。
(2)日记多是记述当天或者某一天发生过的事情,因此常使用__________时态,但使用时必须灵活掌握。
(3)日记格式:日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。
日记的书端由日期、星期和天气构成。
左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。(September 1, 2022/September 1st, 2022/Sept. 1, 2022/Sept. 1st, 2022)
右上角写上当天的天气情况如:Sunny,Fine,Rainy, Windy,Snowy, Cloudy
日记的正文一般由三部分构成。内容为所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情。
第一
一般过去式
How to write a journal entry
The basic structure of diaries
II.素材积累
【开头】
1. It was a fine/nice day. 天气晴朗。
2. Today is ... 今天是...
【中间】
1. What we did ?我们做了什么?
2.What happened 发生了什么?
3.Our altitudes and opinions .我们的态度和观点。
4.Introducing sth
【结尾】
1. I had a good time today./I enjoyed myself today. 我今天玩得很高兴。
2. What a warm and meaningful day! 多么温暖而有意义的一天啊!
3. I will never forget the memorable day! 我永远不会忘记这难忘的一天!
4. Although everyone was very tired,we felt very happy because we had done a
meaningful job.
虽然大家都很累,但我们很开心,因为我们做了一项有意义的工作。
5. All in all, I think that 总之,我认为...
假定你是李华,今天(星期三,3月20日,晴)在校园散步时遇到一个外国人来学校参观。你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇英语日记。要点如下:
1.想跟他谈话却不知所措。
2.你向他介绍你的学校及城市。
3.他向你提供了一些学习英语的建议。
4. 今天很有意义。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
情境任务写作
1.一仿结构布局合理
首段:____________________________________________;
主体:________________________;
尾段:________________。
仿写程序步骤
开门见山,简要介绍自己在校园偶遇一个外国人
具体介绍两人交谈的情况
进行评论和总结
2.二仿语言规范美观
I was taking a walk in the campus this morning.
①今天早晨我在校园散步。(过去进行时)
I saw a foreigner.
②我看见一个外国人。(SVO结构)
③他正在欣赏校园的美景。(过去进行时)
He was enjoying the beauty of the campus.
④我很兴奋也很紧张。(SVP结构)
I was so excited and nervous.
⑤我不知道做什么也不知道怎么开始谈话。(疑问词+to do)
_____________________________________________________________
⑥我渴望练习英语口语。(be eager to do...)
______________________________________________
⑦我鼓励自己走过去向他问好。(encourage)
________________________________________________
I didn’t know what to do and how to start a conversation.
I encouraged myself to go over and greet him.
I was eager to practise my spoken English.
3.三仿句式表达高级
⑧用when引导的时间状语从句和分词作宾语补足语把句①、句②和句③合成一个句子
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________
⑨用so...that...把句④和句⑤合成一个句子
________________________________________________________________________________________________
⑩用形容词短语作状语把句⑥和句⑦合成一个句子
_______________________________________________________________________________________
This morning when I was taking a walk in the campus,I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the campus.
I was so excited and nervous that I didn’t know what to do and how to start a conversation.
Eager to practise my spoken English,I encouraged myself to go over and greet him.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
Wednesday March 20,2023 Sunny
This morning when I was taking a walk in the campus,I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the campus.I was so excited and nervous that I didn’t know what to do and how to start a conversation,though I did well in English classes.
Eager to practise my spoken English,I encouraged myself to go over and greet him.He was very friendly.As a native student,I introduced our campus , some tourist attractions of the cityand some tasty food to him.Finally,he gave me some advice on how to improve my English.
What a warm and meaningful day!
(2024·潍坊高一期末)
假定你是高一学生李华,你进入高一已经大约一个月,请根据下列提示用英语写一篇日记,记录你新学校的情况。
1.校园面貌;
2.老师、同学情况;
3.校园生活。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
学以致用
Friday November 2nd
Today is Friday,it has been about a month since I became a high school student,so I have gradually adapted myself to my life here.
The new campus is very beautiful and modern,which has a variety of advanced facilities and green plants as well as colorful flowers.Our teachers are patiently and friendly,the class is orderly,and everyone here studies hard.
参考范文
Every day,we’re occupied with our study.We have more subjects than we did in junior high school.With more subjects to learn,we have more homework to do and less leisure time.Though our life is busy,we still have time to relax ourselves.There are lots of activities and different clubs,which make our after-class life rich.
I love my new campus and new friends.
谢 谢 观 看 !