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How to describe emotions more vividly and specifically?
读后续写之情绪描写技能
Learning objectives
Some skills to make emotional descriptions more vivid and specific.
recommend
(1)vt. 建议,劝告
recommend doing sth 建议做某事
recommend sb to do sth 建议某人做某事
recommend that... 建议.... (从句中的谓语动词应用“should+动词原形”形式,其中should可以省略)
(1)We strongly recommend reporting (report) the incident to the police.
(2)他建议我改变我的生活方式。
一坚持:insist
二命令:order, command
三建议:suggest, advise, recommend
四要求:ask, demand, request, require
recommend sth to sb
=(recommend sb sth)把某物推荐给某人
recommend sb as... 推荐某人担任....
(2)vt. 推荐,介绍
她向我们推荐了另家餐馆。
我要推荐鲍勃当她的秘书。
quit
(1) vt.&vi. 停止;戒掉
quit (doing) sth. 停止(做)某事
It is not easy to quit smoking (smoke) cigarettes.
(2) V. 离开(工作职位,学校等)
Why does Cathy want to quit her job
基础技巧
使用无灵主语
adj.1+adj.2,句子, doing
使用独立主格结构
进阶技巧
使用倒装句
Part 01
Basic Skills 基础技巧
Skill 1: 使用无灵主语
At the thought of holding the sports meeting , I was so excited. How did I express my excitement
基本表达:I was excited.
Excitement seized me.
A wave/sense of excitement took hold of me.
换情绪
做主语
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无灵主语(名词短语+情绪名词)
有灵动词
I was nervous.
→Nervousness seized me.
→A wave/sense/flush/flood of nervousness seized me.
→A wave of nervousness seized me as I received the assignment.
总结:名词短语+情绪名词+固定动词+sb.+ as / when sb. did sth. 当某人做某事时,一阵/种...情绪涌上心头。
Practice
换主语
加名词
短语
加从句
情绪名词 固定动词
开心 happiness/joy/delight 感激 gratitude/appreciation 狂怒 anger/rage/annoyance/fury 悲伤 sadness/sorrow/grief 害怕 fear/horror / fright / panic 愧疚悔恨 guilt / regret / remorse 震惊 astonishment / shock / surprise 紧张/焦虑 nervousness/anxiety/worry 欣慰 relief 失望/沮丧disappointment/frustration 抓住 seize catch (caught ) strike ( struck ) 围绕着 surround 控制 take hold of 包围/支配 come over 袭/涌来sweep/flood over 笼罩 envelop 使难以承受 overwhelm + sb.
A wave of + 情绪名词+固定动词+sb.+ as/when sb. did sth.
1.当SpongeBob发表演讲时,一阵紧张笼罩着他。
A wave of nervousness enveloped SpongeBob as he delivered a speech.
2.当她听到她没有通过考试时,一阵悲伤席卷而来。
A surge of sadness flooded over her when she heard the news that she failed in the exam.
3. 一种强烈的紧张和不安立刻涌上Hector的心头,当他敲Mr. Alder的门的时候。(2023.广东一模)
Instantly, a strong wave of tension and unease came over Hector when he knocked on Mr. Alder's door.
活学活用: 使用无灵主语
Skill 2: adj.1+adj.2, sb.did, doing...
___________________, Director Xie showed his great talent for dancing, ___________________________________________.
感到开心和自信的,解局长展示了他舞蹈的天赋,希望吸引更多的人来他家乡旅游。
Delighted and confident
hoping to attract more people to visit his hometown
既...又..., 某人做了...,并做了...
前加情绪
形容词
后加非谓语
活学活用: adj.1+adj.2, sb. did, doing...
1. ______________________(感到坚定和受到鼓舞的), David raised his head, ________________________(感激地看着我).(2022全国1卷)
2.____________________(感到放松的和快乐的), David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line, ______________
_____________________(表达他的开心与感激).(2022全国1卷)
3.(2023广东一模) 既惊讶又感动, Mr. Alder 相信了我所说的,并又给了我一次机会。
Surprised and touched, Mr. Alder believed what I said, giving me a second chance.
Determined and inspired
Relieved and delighted
looking at me with gratitude
conveying his
happiness and gratitude
Part 02
Advanced Skills 进阶技巧
Tell(陈述):我很感动和惊讶。
I was moved and surprised.
To show(展示):
我是如此的感动和惊讶以至于我一句话也说不出来。
I was so moved and surprised that I could hardly bring out a word.
句式升级(使用倒装句)
So moved and surprised was I that I could hardly bring out a word.
句型探索
倒装句型:So+情绪形容词+be动词+sb. + that 从句.
某人是如此的...以至于...
Skill 3: 使用倒装句
活学活用: So + 情绪形容词+be动词+sb.+ that 从句.
她气得忍不住大叫起来
So angry was she that she couldn’t help shouting.
活学活用: So + 情绪形容词+be动词+sb.+ that 从句.
她感到如此的羞愧,以至于脸如出血般发烫。
So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.
活学活用: So + 情绪形容词+be动词+sb.+ that 从句.
我感到如此害怕以至于我脸色发白, 心在狂跳。
So scared was I that my face turned pale and my heart beat wildly.
思考并分析 : Skill 4 使用独立主格结构
一看到这条蛇, 我就顿感恐惧, 心在狂跳。
Seeing the snake, I was seized by a sense of horror, my heart beating wildly.
状语(动词非谓语)
一个完整的句子
名词
动词
非谓语
总结:状语, sb did sth, 独立主格结构(身体部位+动词非谓语 ) 状语,某人做某事,感觉怎样
(状语:介短,形容词,非谓语,副词,状语从句)
常见独立主格结构归纳(身体部位+动词非谓语)
tears welling up in one’s eyes
tears/sweat streaming down one’s cheeks
eyes glittering with relief /joy/excitement...
eyes blazing with anger/annoyance
face gleaming with delight
heart beating with happiness/tension/excitement...
hands trembling with fright/fear
眼泪涌上某人的眼睛/热泪盈眶
眼泪/汗水顺着脸颊流下来
眼睛闪烁着欣慰/喜悦/兴奋的光芒
眼里充满怒火
脸上洋溢着喜悦
某人的心因...而怦怦直跳
某人的手因...而颤抖
我一定要全部背下来!!
活学活用: 状语, sb did sth, 独立主格结构(身体部位+动词非谓语 )
1.__________________ (既高兴又激动), she finally got the admission letter from her ideal university, ___________________
(眼里闪烁着喜悦的光芒) .
2.出乎意料, 大卫顺利越过终点线, 脸上洋溢着满足的喜悦。[2022全国1卷]
Delighted and excited
eyes glittering with joy
Unexpectedly , David crossed the finish line smoothly , his face gleaming with satisfied delight .
Summary
Skill 1:介词短语+情绪名词+固定动词+sb.+as / when sb. did sth.
当某人做某事时,一阵/种...情绪涌上心头
Skill 2:adj.1+adj.2, sb. did, doing...
感到...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2
Skill 3:So+情绪形容词+be动词+sb.+ that 从句.
某人是如此的...以至于...
Skill 4: 状语, sb did sth, 独立主格结构 (身体部位+动词非谓语 )
某人做某事,感觉怎样
综合训练:用今天所学的技巧补全语篇
(2021.全国一卷)
1. Instantly, ________________________________________
(一阵强烈的愤怒涌上他们父亲心头) when he caught sight of the messy kitchen. ___________________(感到害怕和焦虑的), the twins explained the situation to their father in a trembling voice,________________________________ ________________.(希望可以得到父亲的理解和帮助).
a strong wave of annoyance surged through their father
Frightened and anxious
hoping that they can get father’s understanding and help
2. When we had our meal and went to sleep, somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. ___________________________________.(我是如此的害怕以至于我从床上一跃而起。) I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I found Spotty, a small puppy.
3. (2023广东一模) Much to his surprise, Mr. Alder believed him and comforted him to get ready for the final contest. ________________________________________________
_________________________________________.(听了Mr. Alder的话, Helctor向老师表达了他真诚地感谢,眼睛里闪烁着如释重负的光芒。)
So scared was I that I jumped out of my bed.
Hearing what Mr. Alder said, Helctor expressed his sincere gratitude to his teacher, eyes glittering with relief
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