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高考英语一轮复习 读后续写
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025春 眉山期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
All the kids in the neighborhood were scared of Joe.We always stayed away when he came out of his tiny cabin(小屋).Joe kept his car parked outside the fence that separated the street from his small yard.He kept his car super clean.He even wiped the door handle with his handkerchief when he closed the door.I usually played in the street and the empty field with other kids,but we made sure to avoid Joe's car.
One day,my parents went out to work.They were always so busy with their work that I learned in advance they wouldn't have time to attend my school spring play performance at the end of this month.Just when I was at home alone with nothing to do,I heard my friends outside calling me to go cycling with them.
While riding my bike,I hit a mud puddle(泥水坑) near Joe's car.I was so worried about getting mud on his clean car that I lost control and crashed.My bike's handlebars hit the side of Joe's car,and the other kids ran away.
Joe came out of his cabin,where he had been sitting by the window,playing chess by himself and watching.He looked at the scratch on his perfectly kept car and asked,"Are you hurt?"
I was hurt.My leg was obviously scratched by the pedal(脚踏板)."Little boy,"Joe said."Come with me."I was too scared to say no.He held the back of my T﹣shirt and led me inside his cabin.
Joe cleaned and bandaged my leg,saying,"I have a grandson about your age.But I haven't seen him for a long time.Anyway,take care of yourself,and remember that cars are expensive."I started crying,"I'm sorry,sir.I can help to make up for it﹣I can mow the grass or water the flowers..."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Well,you'll do my grocery shopping for a month,"Joe said.________
On the day of the school spring play,I was surprised to see Joe in the back row.________
2.(2025春 耒阳市期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was a freshman in college,I liked to write in my free time.I even started writing personal stories online for clients (委托人).At first,everything seemed to go well.However,over time,I began to feel uneasy about my clients and the work.
In the third month,I didn't receive my payment on time,which made me anxious.I sent an email to the client to ask what happened.But I got no reply.I sent more emails,but still no answer.Finally,I got his email,saying that my story wasn't what he had expected.Time and time again,my already low confidence was completely destroyed.I started avoiding friends,stopped answering calls,and locked myself in my room,feeling anxious and helpless.
One night,my phone rang.It was my high school friend Lydia.I answered the call,and hearing her warm voice made me feel better.After a brief chat,I told her all my troubles.Lydia listened quietly.After a moment,she said, "You are very good at writing.Why not try something more meaningful?You like writing,so why not try writing for magazines?There are many opportunities out there."
"Writing for magazines?I'm not sure," I replied. "I don't know how to write that kind of article,and I don't know what they want."
"You can research it yourself," she encouraged me. "In high school,you always found ways to solve problems.Now,you are facing a problem.Why not try to find a way out for yourself?You can take the first step." "You're right," I said. "I will give it a try."
After the call,I started researching magazines online.I learned about the topics they usually covered and the types of articles that were popular.
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(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then,a thought flashed through my mind.________
When I finally finished the article on my own experience,I was excited to send it out.________
3.(2025春 六盘水期末) Mike loved playing computer games.He was good at them and enjoyed teaming up with friends.Each day,he eagerly logged in,uncovering hidden tricks and guiding his friends through tough levels.Helping others brought him joy﹣at first.
But soon,that joy faded.One day,while giving instructions,he lost patience and yelled when they made mistakes."Stop yelling,"Tom said,annoyed."I just want to have fun,"added Jay.Mike suddenly felt the game wasn't fun anymore.
After that incident,Mike decided to go solo instead.He thought it would be better to focus without distractions.Often,he was deep in his own game when his friends wanted to start a new one.Ignoring their invitations,he continued his solo adventures.
As summer vacation began,Mike spent entire days playing the game,with no one to slow him down,completing tasks faster than ever.He often played late into the night,sometimes even skipping meals or staying up until dawn.Lost in battles and adventures,he felt powerful,important,and completely in control.The excitement of leveling up and unlocking new skills made him believe he didn't need anyone else.
By the end of summer,Mike's gains had slowed.Even though he was ranked high,he couldn't reach the top level,and the game started to feel dull.His friends had stopped calling him,and when he tried to reach out,they were often busy or uninterested.
As summer came to an end,Mike felt a deep sense of emptiness.He realized he had spent so much time gaming that he had nothing except tired eyes and a heavy heart.He came to realize that the fun from gaming was not what he truly wanted.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One evening,as he stared at the screen,Mike decided it was time to change.
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They discussed what they had been reading and shared experiences.
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4.(2025 安徽模拟) For some years,I had been in a bad feeling,which resulted from my father,but that day,all changed.
On a Sunday in March,it was my 18th birthday,a day that was supposed to be filled with joy and celebration.My family gathered in a restaurant to celebrate it.The environment filled with laughter,the sounds of plates,and the sweet smell of freshly baked cake.My grandparents sat there,recalling my childhood.Cousins,aunts,uncles,and even a little boy at the neighboring table filled the space.Yet,lively as the atmosphere was,a heavy gap hung over the day﹣ ﹣my father wasn't there.
My father had been gone for over a decade.He was a police officer,a man of strong principles and a deep sense of duty.Years ago,he drowned while saving a child who had fallen into a rushing river.I didn't fully understand what had happened back then,but as I grew older,I began to struggle with his absence in my life.Every missed birthday,every school performance and every hurt knee felt like a betrayal(叛徒).I couldn't help but blame him.He had promised to always be there for me,yet he chose to save a stranger's child over staying with his own family.
As the party continued,I tried to hide my conflicted emotions.The guests clapped and sang as my mother brought out the cake,decorated with 18 glowing candles.Everyone's face lit up,but my mind wandered.Then,out of nowhere,a piercing cry shattered the joyful hum of the party.The little boy sitting at the table next to us,just about five years old,was choking.It seemed that he had been eating a grape and accidentally swallowed it whole.His face turned red as he struggled for air,his tiny hands clawing at his throat.Chaos erupted.His mom screamed and looked helpless.All the people present were extremely nervous.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At that moment,something inside me sprang into action.
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When I breathed a sigh of relief,the boy's parents came to me.
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5.(2025 福建模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
"The adventure race is starting in five minutes,everyone!Please get ready!" the teacher announced cheerfully.On a Saturday morning,I was stretching and warming up with the rest of my teammates as the cool morning breeze brushed against my skin.My school had planned an adventure race for my level and we were required to take pictures of our surroundings with a camera during the race.
Before I knew it,the adventure race was starting as teams started gathering at the checkpoints.It was not long before the sound of the whistle was heard.Determinedly,my team members,Irene,Jennie and Lucas started venturing out in the forest.Walking purposefully onto the path of the forest,we took numerous photographs of the greenery around us.Not too long after,we started feeling anxious as we could no longer see any trees that were marked,indicating that we lost the path we were supposed to follow.
Finding ourselves in a fix,we were worried about how we were going to get back on track and were panicking. "Perhaps...we can look through the photographs we took to see our previous location," Jennie suggested while holding the camera.Needless to say,we readily agreed to her idea and started looking through the pictures.Little did we know that "someone" was stealthily spying us.Out of nowhere,our camera was suddenly taken away!Apparently nobody was there and we stood in shocked silence,feeling thunderstruck.
Just then,I heard the rustling(沙沙声) of trees.Confused,I looked up at the trees.Then,I saw it!A flash appeared on one of the tree branches,and I gestured my teammates to keep quiet.I was astonished by the sight that greeted me.A monkey was holding up our camera on the tree.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"How are we supposed to get back our one and only camera now?" Irene asked.________
Quite coincidentally,we had been back on track.________
6.(2025 云安区模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In 1989,fresh out of high school,I had the difficult task of choosing a career path before college started in three months.In those days in Pakistan,there were limited choices:becoming a doctor or an engineer,or entering the financial world after getting a business degree.I wasn't interested in engineering,so that I was left with medicine or business.I couldn't decide.
My uncle suggested that I do a work placement (实习) to experience it for a month in an international company followed by a month in a hospital.After that,I could make a decision.It seemed like a good idea.
I was accepted for a month's placement at a foreign bank in Karachi.I got a feel for how the world of finance functioned,made new friends,and generally enjoyed the mostly easy﹣going work surroundings.
The month passed rapidly,and soon I began working at a leading hospital in Karachi.The experience couldn't have been more different.The hospital had a stressful environment.The days started early (at 7 am,compared to 9 am at the bank),and were filled with endless duties.And the night calls!This was crazy,working all day,through the night,and again the next day.
I began thinking about my two experiences.The bank had offered a more relaxing atmosphere,better working hours and less stress.The hospital was full of excitement,but the studying and training was difficult.It seemed that the business choice was going to win out.
Near the end of my month at the hospital,I was driving home after an especially busy night call.In front of me was a public bus,with college students sitting on the top.As the driver weaved through (穿梭) traffic,I could see the boys shaking from side to side.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Suddenly,a boy fell off the back of the bus._____
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The next day,when I went to the hospital to see the boy,all his family got up,with grateful smiles on their faces._____
7.(2025 惠农区校级三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a sunny Saturday morning.Tom,a passionate hiker,set out on a trail in the mountains.The path was narrow but well﹣marked,winding through thick forests and across bubbling brooks (小溪).As he walked deeper into the mountains,he noticed the sky gradually becoming cloudy.
Suddenly,a strong gust of wind blew through the trees,making them sway violently.Tom realized a storm was approaching.He quickened his pace,looking for shelter.Just then,he saw a small,abandoned cabin (小木屋) by the side of the trail.Its roof was partially damaged,but it was better than nothing.Tom rushed inside and started to look around.It was dirty and filled with spider webs,but in a corner,he found an old flashlight.He hoped it still worked.
As the storm hit,the rain poured down in sheets and thunder roared.Lightning flashed,lighting up the dark interior of the cabin.Tom sat on the floor,waiting for the storm to pass.After what seemed like hours,the rain finally began to ease.Tom decided to head back home before it got dark.
He stepped out of the cabin and started walking back along the trail.But the storm had caused several landslides,blocking parts of the path.Tom had to carefully climb over rocks and fallen trees.As he was making his way,he heard a faint cry for help.It seemed to be coming from a nearby ravine (沟壑).
Tom stopped and listened carefully.The cry came again,more desperate this time.He knew he had to find out where it was coming from.He tied a rope he had brought to a solid tree near the edge of the ravine and slowly started to go down to a lower level,using the flashlight to guide his way.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As he reached the bottom of the ravine,he saw a young girl hide under a rock.________
Then,Tom picked up the girl and started to climb back up the ravine.________
8.(2025 河南模拟) 65﹣year﹣old Mr.Jenkins had lived a simple life in a town for a year.He liked almost everything there,especially a grocery store where there were many sugar jars(罐子) beside the counter.
Every Thursday,Mr.Jenkins would shop at the store.Coffee was always on his shopping list as he liked it very much.Each time,Mrs.Rao,the kind and enthusiastic owner,would greet him warmly from the counter and chat with him for a while.
What Mrs.Rao talked about most was her son Dave,a college student.Dave often checked on his mother through the store's security camera,which allowed him to see what happened almost everywhere of the store,especially the counter.A month ago,when Mr.Jenkins came as usual,Mrs.Rao shared the good news that her son would soon go home for a winter break.
When Dave returned on Monday,his mother caught a bad cold."Take a good rest.I will mind the store,"Dave said to his mother.Although Dave hadn't done that before,Mrs.Rao agreed.
Actually,everything went well when Dave was in charge.On the afternoon of the fourth day,Dave met Mr.Jenkins.After a few exchanges with Dave,Mr.Jenkins began to look for desired groceries.After he got the last item﹣a bag of coffee,he headed to the counter,ready to make the payment.
"30 dollars,please!"Dave said as he packed Mr.Jenkins's groceries into a shopping bag.
Mr.Jenkins took out his wallet and counted the bills carefully."30 dollars,exactly,"Mr.Jenkins said.
"Mr.Jenkins...I'm afraid we're short one dollar,"Dave smiled after counting the bills twice.
A little confused as he was,Mr.Jenkins apologized immediately and took out one extra dollar.Dave waved goodbye to Mr.Jenkins as he took the shopping bag and walked outside the store.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However,Dave found a one﹣dollar bill behind the sugar jars that evening.
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The next Thursday,Dave and Mrs.Rao apologized to Mr.Jenkins.
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9.(2025 碧江区 校级模拟) Once upon a time,there was a teenager named Jack who had always wanted a dog.His parents,however,were hesitant,citing the cost and responsibility of caring for a pet.Jack insisted,though,and eventually convinced them to let him adopt a little dog from the local shelter.
The dog,whom Jack named Buddy,quickly became his best friend.They did everything together and Buddy was always by Jack's side,whether things were going well or not.
One day,Jack experienced a particularly tough day at school.He struggled with a difficult test and received a not﹣so﹣great grade on a paper he had worked hard on.Feeling discouraged and down,he trudged (缓慢地走) home,feeling sorry for himself.
As soon as he walked in the door,however,Buddy rushed over to greet him excitedly.Jack couldn't help but smile at the sight of his loyal friend,and before he knew it,he was telling Buddy all about his day.
Buddy listened attentively,raising his ears as if trying to understand every word.As Jack talked,he found himself feeling better and better.It was as if Buddy somehow knew just what to do to cheer him up.From then on,whenever Jack was feeling down,he turned to Buddy to lift his spirits.
As the years passed,Jack and Buddy's relationship grew stronger and stronger.And eventually,Jack grew up and left for college.He knew it would be tough to leave Buddy behind,but he trusted that his parents would take good care of him.Still,he couldn't help but feel sad as he said goodbye to Buddy.
Months passed,and Jack settled into his new life at college.He made new friends,took challenging classes,and thought about his future.But no matter how busy or stressed he got,he never forgot about Buddy.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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One day,Jack's phone rang,and he saw that it was his dad calling.
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For days,Jack stayed by Buddy's side.
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10.(2025 湖北三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Long ago,in a small country school,there lived two close friends named Ray and Tatu.Ray came from a wealthy family,while Tatu's family struggled to make ends meet.Despite their differences in status,the two were inseparable and shared a deep bond of friendship.They spent countless hours together,whether it was playing games after school,helping each other with homework,or simply sharing stories under the shade of the old banyan tree.
One day,Ray brought his prized stamp collection to school,eager to show Tatu his latest treasure—a rare stamp gifted by his uncle Tatu,who had never seen such delicate stamps before,marveled at the collection,his eyes wide with wonder. "These are amazing,Ray!" he exclaimed,his voice filled with admiration.After school,Ray carefully packed the stamps back into his bag,ensuring each one was secure,and returned home,his heart light with the joy of sharing his passion with his best friend.
However,the next morning,Ray's joy turned to panic when he discovered that the rare stamp was missing.He tore through his room,searching every corner,every book,and even the pockets of his school uniform,but the stamp was nowhere to be found.His heart sank as a troubling thought crept into his mind—Tatu had been the only one who had seen the stamps up close.Could he have taken it?
The next day at school,he confronted Tatu,his voice tinged with accusation. "Did you take my stamp?" he asked bluntly,his eyes searching Tatu's face for any sign of guilt.Tatu,taken aback by the question,replied with a mix of shock and hurt, "No,Ray!I would never take something that belongs to you.You're my best friend!"
But Ray,consumed by frustration and disappointment,couldn't let go of his doubts. "You were the only one who saw it," he said coldly. "If you didn't take it,then where is it?" Tatu,deeply hurt by Ray's lack of trust,turned away without another word,his heart heavy with the weight of the accusation.
The days that followed were filled with an uncomfortable silence between the two friends.They avoided each other,the once﹣strong bond strained by the loss of the stamp注意:
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(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Meanwhile,Ray continued to search for the stamp.________
Tatu smiled gently and extended his hand.________
11.(2025 如皋市模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Nina walked along the road with a sad look on her face.Next Saturday was her friend Betty's birthday,but she did not have anything nice to wear to the party.Her father had just lost his job,so she couldn't ask for a new dress.Nina decided to wear an old dress that had been her favorite for many years but had become a little too short for her now. "I'll ask the tailor to increase the length," Nina said to herself.
The tailor,however,refused to do so. "The dress is too old.Any alteration(改动) won't work for it.Besides,I have too many other orders.My hands are full." With a sad heart,she walked out of the tailor's shop. "What am I to do?" she thought.
Just as she was about to go home,she saw a lady getting out of a car not far away and walking toward the bank in a hurry.The lady opened her handbag to take out some papers,and her wallet fell on the ground.Unaware of it,she went into the bank.
Nina ran and picked up the wallet.There were so many people inside the bank that she decided to wait on the steps.After a long time,the lady came out.Nina handed her the wallet that she had dropped.The lady could not believe it.The little girl had been waiting for her for so long to hand her the wallet.She looked at the contents in it,and everything was just the way she had left it.
"Thank you,sweetheart.What is your name,and where are you going?Can I drop you home?" the lady asked Nina softly.
Nina told the lady her name and that she was going home.The lady invited Nina to get into the car.On the way,Nina told her what had happened in the tailor's shop and the difficulty her father was facing.The lady looked at the dress and then at Nina.She was the owner of a boutique(时装店) that stitched(缝制) clothes for children and young adults.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Come to my shop and collect your dress tomorrow," the lady told Nina.________
On Saturday,Nina wore the dress with a fresh new design to Betty's birthday party.________
12.(2025 杜集区校级模拟)
Benched?
Anxious,Devin sat in the back seat of the car. "I have so much energy!" he said. "Do I really have to sit and watch?"
"It's just for one more game." Devin's father said as he drove into the parking lot by the outdoor basketball court. "It's better to stay on the safe side."
Devin sighed. "It's been a week since I got injured," he said. "It doesn't hurt at all."
But it did hurt when he was in last week's game.He twisted to avoid a defender and ended up spraining his ankle. "The doctor said 10 days," his father reminded him. "No jumping.You can ease back into basketball next week."
Devin ran his fingers over the logo on his basketball uniform.He was ready for the game,but he knew he'd be spending it on the bench.The summer season was short —just eight games —and he'd already missed one.
"I just want to help my team win," he said as he got out of the car. "I can't do that if I'm not on the court."
Devin loved hearing the thump (沉闷的撞击声),thump,thump of basketballs and the feeling of excitement before every game.Hip﹣hop music from the loudspeaker made him feel like dancing.The energy in the air would make it even harder for him not to participate.
Before the game,Coach reminded the players to make smart passes and play tough defense.Without Devin's leadership and skill,his team would need a huge effort.
By halftime,Coach praised the players for their hard work.With Devin unable to play,the team had only one extra player,so no one was getting much rest.
The game was fierce.The score stood at 47 to 49 with three minutes left in the game.Devin sat down and rubbed his hands together. "I'm a loser here on the bench.I can do nothing to help." he thought.
Coach called a timeout(比赛暂停) and gathered the players to give some advice.
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(1)续写词数为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Suddenly,Coach turned to Devin. "Do you have anything to add?"
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The game was over and his team had a two﹣point victory!
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13.(2025 榕江县校级模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My father and I were taking a well﹣deserved vacation to Disneyland.I had never been there before and was eagerly anticipating the magical experience it promised.
There was another reason why this trip was special.My father was a person who worked long hours.I longed to spend time with him.I wanted to sit down with my father,whom I loved more than life,and just talk.It always seemed like there was never time.
The day finally arrived when I was allowed to pack.I chose only my favourite clothes and my Disney autograph (签名) book.I set my suitcase down on my bed and smiled.I was ready.
I did not get any sleep that night.I lay in my bed and stared out the window.I knew that my father's work was going to be left at home,finally.
After an early breakfast,we hit the open road.For the first two hours,it was all smooth sailing,until I unexpectedly felt a sharp jerk (震动).We pulled over to the side of the road,and my father said something about the engine being shot.He decided that the easiest thing to do would be to flag someone down and get a ride to town.
An hour later,my father was still waving his hands at each and every passing car but it was not doing any good.Not a single soul would stop to assist my helpless family.Finally,my father gave up and wanted to walk into town.I was certain it was a very long distance.He just said that he would not let anything ruin this trip for me.I begged him to stay and try again.After thinking it over,he decided to stay by our car and keep waving for help.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After what felt like forever,a truck finally pulled over.________
On our way home,while stopping for gas,I saw a familiar figure.________
14.(2025 山西模拟) John and David had been friends since they met in college,and now they found themselves hiking through a local mountain.The noon sun shone through the forest as they walked forward,their backpacks heavy with supplies.
"How much further do you think we need to go before reaching the top?" John said. "The guy we met at the foot of the mountain probably has already made it.I think we should speed up."
David consulted the map and said, "We should reach the top in about an hour.We' re making good progress.There's no hurry—we shouldn't miss the surrounding scenery."
As they continued their journey,the landscape around them changed.The forest gradually thinned out,revealing the beauty of the surroundings.They stopped occasionally to photograph the unique flowers and trees they encountered along the way.
"Look at that!" John suddenly shouted,pointing to a pair of monkeys swinging through the trees.The animals seemed to be playing a game of chase,their movements quick and smooth.The friends took some photos of the scene and then decided to continue their journey.
Just then,they heard a distant cry for help.Both of them stopped in their tracks,listening carefully.The call came again,clearer this time.Without hesitation,John and David dropped their planned route and headed in the direction of the voice.
After about ten minutes of careful search,they found a young hiker,Michael,who turned out to be the guy they had met a few hours before.
"What happened to you,Michael?Do you need any help?" John asked.
"I hiked so fast that I hurt my ankle and couldn't walk.I was tired and hungry...I was wondering if you could..." Michael said hesitantly.
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(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Of course we could help you," John said firmly,pulling out his first﹣aid kit.
Michael said, "You' re almost reaching the top.You shouldn't give up because of me."
15.(2025 武功县校级模拟) One day,when I was a freshman in high school,I saw a kid from my class walking home from school.His name was Kyle.It looked like he was carrying all of his books.I thought to myself, "Why would anyone bring home all his books on a Friday?He must really be a nerd." I had quite a weekend planned parties and a football game with my friend tomorrow afternoon,so I shrugged my shoulders and went on.As I was walking,I saw a bunch of kids running toward him.They ran at him,knocking all his books out of his arms and tripping him so he landed in the dirt.His glasses went flying,and I saw them land in the grass about ten feet from him.He looked up and I saw this terrible sadness in his eyes.So,I jogged over to him and as he crawled around looking for his glasses,and I saw a tear in his eye.As I handed him his glasses,I said, "Those guys are jerks.They really should get lives."
He looked at me and said, " Hey thanks!" There was a big smile on his face.It was one of those smiles that showed real gratitude.I helped him pick up his books,and asked him where he lived.As it turned out,he lived near me,so I asked him why I had never seen him before.He said he had gone to private school before now.
We talked all the way home,and I carried his books.He turned out to be a pretty cool kid.I asked him if he wanted to play football on Saturday with me and my friends.He said yes.The more I got to know Kyle,the more I liked him.And my friends thought the same of him.We agreed to go to school together on Monday.
Over the next several years,Kyle and I became best friends.Kyle was the valedictorian (优秀毕业生代表),he had to prepare a speech for graduation.I was so glad it wasn't me having to get up there and speak.I can see that he was nervous about his speech.So,I smacked him on the back and said, "Hey,big guy,you'll be great!" He looked at me with one of those looks (the really grateful one) and smiled. "Thanks," he said.As he started his speech,he cleared his throat,and began. "Graduation is a time to thank those who helped you make it through those tough years.Your parents,your teachers,your siblings,maybe a coach ...but mostly your friends.I am here to tell all of you that being a friend to someone is the best gift you can give him or her.I am going to tell you a story." I just looked at my friend with disbelief as he told the story of the first day we met.He had planned to kill himself over the weekend.He talked of how he had cleaned out his locker so his Mom wouldn't have to do it later and was carrying his stuff home.He looked hard at me and gave me a little smile. "Thankfully,I was saved,My friend saved me from doing the unspeakable."
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Monday morning came,and there was Kyle with the huge stack of books again.______________
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I heard the gasp go through the crowd._____________
16.(2025 江西模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
No one knew where he came from.He just appeared in the hallway of a local rescue center.We managed to put him in a cage for the moment.
Max was a striking gray cat but was not a friendly cat.He glared at us with sharp eyes,and his tail would twitch(抽动)angrily when we came too close.Unlike most cats who enjoy being petted,this one would duck away or even nip(啃咬)at fingers when we reached out our hands.He preferred to be left alone,watching from a distance with a look that clearly said, "Don't bother me!" He seemed to hate being caged.I visited him daily and explained that life would soon be better.
We gave him a physical checkup and detected feline herpesvirus (FHV),an infectious virus,in Max.As a small rescue center with limited cat isolation region(隔离区),he would be sent away.I realized that I had become attached to this little cat.However,adopting him seemed out of the question as I already had three cats and no place to isolate an infectious one.I decided to build a category(猫舍)for him in a corner of the center.He would be enclosed by himself with his illness.
When I suggested my idea,my caring colleagues responded quickly with "We'll help".Planning to get this completed within a week,everybody pitched in to finish in only four days.Everyone wanted Max to have his own home.Soon,Max moved into his new house,a category with lots of toys.I still felt bad because living alone in a cage was not my idea of a quality life.
Within a couple of weeks,I received a call from a friend who urgently sought placement for Simon,a cat also infected with FHV.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Naturally,Max got a companion._______________________
Max moved into a shared category and began his new life with other animals._________________
17.(2025 沙市区校级模拟) Mary watched as students erowded around a notice announcing that the school's radio station was looking for a second host.Butterflies filled her stomach—she had always dreamed of becoming a campus host.
The radio station was a big deal:it aired music,school announcements,and entertaining shows that everyone turned to during lunch breaks.Olivia,the current host,was confident and talented,earning widespread admiration.In contrast,Mary was naturally shy,and speaking in front of others made her nervous.Still,she decided to give it a try,even as a classmate remarked, "You?You can barely read aloud in class without stumbling!"
Not discouraged,Mary practiced every evening by reading aloud from her textbooks.At first,she stumbled over her words,but gradually her reading grew smoother and her pronunciation clearer.She even borrowed books on public speaking from the library to learn vocal techniques.While her classmates chatted and laughed,she quietly absorbed every detail,determined to build her skills.
The day of the interview finally arrived.Holding the cold microphone,Mary felt her hands grow sweaty.She read the required texts perfectly—rehearsed thousands of times—but she struggled during the improvised(即兴的) part.
"Sir,I' ve been practicing for months,and I'm willing to work hard to learn,"she begged.
Mr.Carter smiled gently and said, "I appreciate your determination and your excellent reading.But during a live broadcast,anything can happen,and you need to draw your audience' s attention with genuine emotion rather than simply reading from a script."
That day,no one passed the interview;everyone left except Mary.Lost in thought,she realized, "The problem isn't with my pronunciation or reading…" It suddenly struck her that she could join the radio team in a supporting role to learn what it truly takes to be a host.
注意:
(1)写作词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She asked Mr.Carter for permission and began by taking on small tasks.______
Then one day,Mr.Carter rushed in with unexpected news:Olivia had suddenly fallen ill.______
18.(2025 黄梅县校级模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
In December 2023,Kevin DePaolo and Josh Nelson set off for the Inyo Mountains,in eastern California.This corner of California was DePaolo's favorite.Even though the 26﹣year old had visited almost every part of the USA since university,DePaolo,with blond shoulder﹣ length hair and a strong build,had been in search of adventure.
He and Nelson met in a Bishop coffee shop a few years ago and bonded instantly.Nelson found they both had a lot in common and DePaolo found an older brother figure in the 38﹣year﹣old Nelson,who taught him many things like rock﹣climbing and where to find crystals(晶体).
That morning,DePaolo,back in Bishop,found a great spot for searching rocks and wanted to show it to Nelson.After an hour and a half's walk,they reached a rocky hillside.There were a lot of "cool rocks"in front of two huge rocks.
For nearly two hours,they dug side by side.At 3 pm,Nelson stepped aside to rest while DePaolo continued digging for rocks.Suddenly,Nelson yelled,"Look out,Kevin!"A huge rock started to roll towards DePaolo,crushing(挤压) his legs into the sand.
Nelson quickly put a pickaxe(鹤嘴锄) under the rock to stop it from rolling more.DePaolo was in extreme pain,his body in shock.Nelson managed to free DePaolo's left leg.But his right leg was still trapped,and his left leg was severely injured.
Nelson double﹣wrapped the leg with a T﹣shirt and his sweater,and applied pressure.He then tried his phone.Fortunately,despite being in the middle of nowhere,he got a signal.He called emergency services and told the operator where they were.Over speakerphone,the operator urged DePaolo to stay calm.DePaolo kept asking if he was going to die,and Nelson told him he wouldn't,though he wasn't sure himself.All they could do was wait for the rescue team,hoping DePaolo would make it out alive.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As they waited,the sun began to set.________
The helicopter circled above,its searchlight lighting up the two men below.________
19.(2025 山西三模) For as long as I could remember,fear had been a constant shadow in my life.It went into my thoughts at the most inconvenient moments,whispering that I wasn't good enough,that I would fail.When I considered pursuing my dreams,the fear was always there,reminding me that failure would be waiting to embarrass me.It was easier to listen to its warnings﹣taking the safe,familiar path rather than risking everything.
One day,while browsing through a local newspaper,I came across an advertisement for a writing competition.The grand prize﹣a publishing deal﹣seemed like a distant dream,something only those with true talent could achieve.I paused,the excitement briefly overshadowing my doubts.I had always loved writing,but the thought of others reading my work﹣judging my deepest thoughts and emotions﹣made my hands tremble.I could already hear the voice of fear,louder now,"You'll never be good enough.Don't bother.It's not worth the pain of failure."
As the submission deadline grew closer,my mind became a battlefield.My fingers paused over the keyboard,and I would write a sentence,then delete it,doubting every word.My heart raced as I questioned whether my story could stand up to the others.Would I be laughed at?Funny?I spent hours reworking my entry,staring at the flashing line,unsure if it was even worth submitting.The fear ate at me,whispering."You don't belong here."
Then,one afternoon,as the sun dipped low,I sat back in my chair,my eyes closed.The silence in the room pressed down on me,and I suddenly realized something important.The fear of never knowing﹣of never trying﹣was far worse than failing.If I didn't submit,I would regret it forever.With shaking hands,I clicked the submit button,and in that instant,my story was out there in the world,exposed and open to the judgment of strangers.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The days that followed were filled with constant anxiety.______
The email confirmed it:I had won the competition.______
20.(2025 商城县二模) Before seven o'clock one Saturday morning,a large crowd had already gathered at the stadium.David sat at the starting line,his gloved hands holding his wheelchair.With his heart beating,the boy wondered if he would be able to complete the race.His classmates were all there to support him.From a distance,he could see them holding up big banners (横幅) which screamed:WE ARE WITH YOU!ALL THE WAY,DAVID!Heartened,he smiled and waved back.He was not going to let them down.
Born with a severe condition that left him paralysed (瘫痪) from the waist down.At six,he underwent several surgeries to improve his condition.As a result,he was able to attend school and even took up sports to help strengthen his bones and muscles.Then,he fell in love with wheelchair racing.Unfortunately,he did not have a lot of coordination (协调) or strength but he had a will to keep going.Once,without warning,his condition took a turn for the worse and it almost destroyed his pursuit of his passion.
One day,David's teachers encouraged him to compete alongside his non﹣wheelchair schoolmates.Unsure and yet grateful for the opportunity,he thought he should give it a shot.By the time the race was about to begin,the sun had risen.David was glad that he was well prepared.Adjusting the cap on his head and his gloves,David was all ready to protect himself from the heat and the strong strokes to his wheelchair.David's eyes followed the starter who was waving a red flag.As soon as the gun was fired,David was off.The entire stadium erupted into thunderous cheers.
David pushed forward with all his strength,his hands holding the wheels the whole time for the long﹣distance race.His wheelchair rolled steadily out of the stadium,passing the shop houses.Despite doing everything he could to keep up with the other competitors,David fell behind.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Overhead,the sun continued to burn in the cloudless sky.
He was determined to overcome every single challenge.
高考英语一轮复习 读后续写
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025春 眉山期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
All the kids in the neighborhood were scared of Joe.We always stayed away when he came out of his tiny cabin(小屋).Joe kept his car parked outside the fence that separated the street from his small yard.He kept his car super clean.He even wiped the door handle with his handkerchief when he closed the door.I usually played in the street and the empty field with other kids,but we made sure to avoid Joe's car.
One day,my parents went out to work.They were always so busy with their work that I learned in advance they wouldn't have time to attend my school spring play performance at the end of this month.Just when I was at home alone with nothing to do,I heard my friends outside calling me to go cycling with them.
While riding my bike,I hit a mud puddle(泥水坑) near Joe's car.I was so worried about getting mud on his clean car that I lost control and crashed.My bike's handlebars hit the side of Joe's car,and the other kids ran away.
Joe came out of his cabin,where he had been sitting by the window,playing chess by himself and watching.He looked at the scratch on his perfectly kept car and asked,"Are you hurt?"
I was hurt.My leg was obviously scratched by the pedal(脚踏板)."Little boy,"Joe said."Come with me."I was too scared to say no.He held the back of my T﹣shirt and led me inside his cabin.
Joe cleaned and bandaged my leg,saying,"I have a grandson about your age.But I haven't seen him for a long time.Anyway,take care of yourself,and remember that cars are expensive."I started crying,"I'm sorry,sir.I can help to make up for it﹣I can mow the grass or water the flowers..."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Well,you'll do my grocery shopping for a month,"Joe said.________
On the day of the school spring play,I was surprised to see Joe in the back row.________
【答案】 "Well,you'll do my grocery shopping for a month,"Joe said.I nodded quickly,relieved that he wasn't calling my parents.Every day I showed up at Joe's place to pick up his shopping list.At first,we barely spoke.But over time,he began to tell me stories about his youth and especially about his grandson.I started looking forward to our little chats.One day,my script fell out while unpacking groceries. "School play?" he asked.I nodded sadly. "But my parents will have a business trip on that day," I explained,not expecting him to care.
On the day of the school spring play,I was surprised to see Joe in the back row.He gave me a small wave and a nod,his face softer than I'd ever seen it.My heart lifted.After the performance,he came up. "You did great," he said. "Your parents may be busy,but someone has to show up for you." I smiled,holding back tears.In that moment,I realized my view of the "scary old man" had completely changed.Sometimes people aren't who we think they are;they're who we take the time to discover.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在骑自行车时不小心撞到了邻居乔的车,留下了划痕,作者原本以为会受到严厉的惩罚,但乔却以让作者为他采购一个月的杂货作为补偿。在这个过程中,作者与乔逐渐熟悉,乔还分享了他的故事,特别是关于他孙子的。当作者因父母无法参加学校春季戏剧表演而感到失落时,乔却意外地出现在了表演现场,给予了作者支持和鼓励,让作者意识到乔并非想象中的可怕老人,而是需要被理解和发现的人。
高分句型一:I smiled,holding back tears.
翻译:我笑了,强忍住泪水。
分析:本句运用了现在分词短语holding back tears作状语。
高分句型二:Sometimes people aren't who we think they are;they're who we take the time to discover.
翻译:有时候,人们并不像我们最初认为的那样;他们的样子,需要我们花时间去发现。
分析:本句运用了两个who引导的表语从句。
【解答】 "Well,you'll do my grocery shopping for a month,"Joe said.I nodded quickly,relieved that he wasn't calling my parents.Every day I showed up at Joe's place to pick up his shopping list.At first,we barely spoke.But over time,he began to tell me stories about his youth and especially about his grandson.I started looking forward to our little chats.One day,my script fell out while unpacking groceries. "School play?" he asked.I nodded sadly. "But my parents will have a business trip on that day," I explained,not expecting him to care.(描写了作者与乔逐渐熟悉,乔开始分享他的故事,特别是关于他孙子的,以及作者因父母无法参加学校春季戏剧表演而感到失落时,乔的反应)
On the day of the school spring play,I was surprised to see Joe in the back row.He gave me a small wave and a nod,his face softer than I'd ever seen it.My heart lifted.After the performance,he came up. "You did great," he said. "Your parents may be busy,but someone has to show up for you." I smiled,holding back tears.【高分句型一】In that moment,I realized my view of the "scary old man" had completely changed.Sometimes people aren't who we think they are;they're who we take the time to discover.【高分句型二】(描写了乔出现在表演现场,给予作者支持和鼓励,以及作者对乔的看法发生的改变)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
2.(2025春 耒阳市期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was a freshman in college,I liked to write in my free time.I even started writing personal stories online for clients (委托人).At first,everything seemed to go well.However,over time,I began to feel uneasy about my clients and the work.
In the third month,I didn't receive my payment on time,which made me anxious.I sent an email to the client to ask what happened.But I got no reply.I sent more emails,but still no answer.Finally,I got his email,saying that my story wasn't what he had expected.Time and time again,my already low confidence was completely destroyed.I started avoiding friends,stopped answering calls,and locked myself in my room,feeling anxious and helpless.
One night,my phone rang.It was my high school friend Lydia.I answered the call,and hearing her warm voice made me feel better.After a brief chat,I told her all my troubles.Lydia listened quietly.After a moment,she said, "You are very good at writing.Why not try something more meaningful?You like writing,so why not try writing for magazines?There are many opportunities out there."
"Writing for magazines?I'm not sure," I replied. "I don't know how to write that kind of article,and I don't know what they want."
"You can research it yourself," she encouraged me. "In high school,you always found ways to solve problems.Now,you are facing a problem.Why not try to find a way out for yourself?You can take the first step." "You're right," I said. "I will give it a try."
After the call,I started researching magazines online.I learned about the topics they usually covered and the types of articles that were popular.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then,a thought flashed through my mind.________
When I finally finished the article on my own experience,I was excited to send it out.________
【答案】 Then,a thought flashed through my mind.What if I write about my own struggles as a college writer?Many students might relate to self﹣doubt and rejection.With trembling fingers,I searched "student writing magazines" and discovered New Voices Quarterly,a publication dedicated to authentic youth stories.Their latest theme was "Overcoming Creative Blocks" — perfect for my story.That night,I outlined an article blending my client disasters with hard﹣won lessons,tentatively titled "From Rejection to Redemption:A Writer's Journey".I included practical tips I wished I'd known earlier,like how to vet clients and set clear expectations.
When I finally finished the article on my own experience,I was excited to send it out.Two weeks later,the editor gave a surprising reply: "Your raw honesty is exactly what our readers need.Would you consider expanding this into a monthly column?" That acceptance letter became my turning point.Readers' messages poured in — some shared similar struggles,others thanked me for the hope.I realized that meaningful writing wasn't about pleasing clients,but connecting with real people.My dorm walls no longer felt like a hopeless prison.
【分析】本文以作者的写作经历为线索展开,讲述了大一那年,热爱写作的作者在网上接单代笔,却被客户拖欠酬劳并否定作品,陷入自我怀疑。好友Lydia建议作者为杂志投稿。受此启发,作者将自身挫折写成文章投给一家杂志,意外获得刊登并受邀开设专栏。读者们的共鸣让作者明白:真诚写作才能打动人心,作者终于重拾写作的快乐与自信。
高分句型一:Your raw honesty is exactly what our readers need.
翻译:你的真诚正是我们的读者所需要的。
分析:本句使用了what引导表语从句。
高分句型二:I realized that meaningful writing wasn't about pleasing clients,but connecting with real people.
翻译:我意识到,有意义的写作不是为了取悦客户,而是为了与真实的人建立联系。
分析:本句使用了that引导宾语从句。
【解答】 Then,a thought flashed through my mind.What if I write about my own struggles as a college writer?Many students might relate to self﹣doubt and rejection.With trembling fingers,I searched "student writing magazines" and discovered New Voices Quarterly,a publication dedicated to authentic youth stories.Their latest theme was "Overcoming Creative Blocks" — perfect for my story.That night,I outlined an article blending my client disasters with hard﹣won lessons,tentatively titled "From Rejection to Redemption:A Writer's Journey".I included practical tips I wished I'd known earlier,like how to vet clients and set clear expectations.(作者萌生将自身受挫经历写成文章的想法,搜索到一家聚焦青年故事的杂志,于是着手写下经历)
When I finally finished the article on my own experience,I was excited to send it out.Two weeks later,the editor gave a surprising reply: "Your raw honesty is exactly what our readers need.【高分句型一】Would you consider expanding this into a monthly column?" That acceptance letter became my turning point.Readers' messages poured in — some shared similar struggles,others thanked me for the hope.I realized that meaningful writing wasn't about pleasing clients,but connecting with real people. 【高分句型二】My dorm walls no longer felt like a hopeless prison.(杂志给出回复,非常欣赏作者的文章,作者还收到产生共鸣的读者的来信,与真实的人建立了联系,重拾写作的快乐与自信)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后,最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
3.(2025春 六盘水期末) Mike loved playing computer games.He was good at them and enjoyed teaming up with friends.Each day,he eagerly logged in,uncovering hidden tricks and guiding his friends through tough levels.Helping others brought him joy﹣at first.
But soon,that joy faded.One day,while giving instructions,he lost patience and yelled when they made mistakes."Stop yelling,"Tom said,annoyed."I just want to have fun,"added Jay.Mike suddenly felt the game wasn't fun anymore.
After that incident,Mike decided to go solo instead.He thought it would be better to focus without distractions.Often,he was deep in his own game when his friends wanted to start a new one.Ignoring their invitations,he continued his solo adventures.
As summer vacation began,Mike spent entire days playing the game,with no one to slow him down,completing tasks faster than ever.He often played late into the night,sometimes even skipping meals or staying up until dawn.Lost in battles and adventures,he felt powerful,important,and completely in control.The excitement of leveling up and unlocking new skills made him believe he didn't need anyone else.
By the end of summer,Mike's gains had slowed.Even though he was ranked high,he couldn't reach the top level,and the game started to feel dull.His friends had stopped calling him,and when he tried to reach out,they were often busy or uninterested.
As summer came to an end,Mike felt a deep sense of emptiness.He realized he had spent so much time gaming that he had nothing except tired eyes and a heavy heart.He came to realize that the fun from gaming was not what he truly wanted.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One evening,as he stared at the screen,Mike decided it was time to change.
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They discussed what they had been reading and shared experiences.
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【答案】 One evening,as he stared at the screen,Mike decided it was time to change..He turned off the computer,feeling a wave of relief wash over him.The next day,he messaged Tom and Jay,apologizing for his past impatience. "I miss playing together," he typed,suggesting a get﹣together.To his delight,they agreed.Mike decided to bring along some books he'd recently picked up,thinking they might spark interesting conversations.
They discussed what they had been reading and shared experiences.Tom had read a thrilling adventure novel,while Jay talked about hiking trips.Mike shared how he had started reading too,finding a book about teamwork inspiring.The discussion was lively,filled with laughter and new perspectives.Mike felt a warmth he hadn't experienced in months.He understood then that the true richness came from sharing moments with friends,not from virtual achievements alone.
【分析】本文以Mike的转变为主线展开,讲述了Mike曾沉迷于电脑游戏,忽视了与朋友的情谊,最终感到空虚和失落。在意识到游戏并非他真正想要的生活后,他决定改变,并主动联系朋友,通过分享阅读经历重新找回了与朋友间的温暖和快乐。
高分句型一:Mike decided to bring along some books he'd recently picked up,thinking they might spark interesting conversations.
翻译:迈克决定带一些他最近捡到的书,认为它们可能会引发有趣的对话。
分析:运用了省略了关系代词that的定语从句 he'd recently picked up修饰books,现在分词作状语和省略了连接词that的宾语从句they might spark interesting conversations。
高分句型二:He understood then that the true richness came from sharing moments with friends,not from virtual achievements alone.
翻译:他当时明白,真正的财富来自与朋友分享的时刻,而不仅仅是虚拟的成就。
分析:运用了连接词that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】 One evening,as he stared at the screen,Mike decided it was time to change.He turned off the computer,feeling a wave of relief wash over him.The next day,he messaged Tom and Jay,apologizing for his past impatience. "I miss playing together," he typed,suggesting a get﹣together.To his delight,they agreed.Mike decided to bring along some books he'd recently picked up,thinking they might spark interesting conversations.【高分句型一】(Mike决定改变,并主动联系朋友,提议聚会,还准备带上书籍以激发有趣对话的经过)
They discussed what they had been reading and shared experiences.Tom had read a thrilling adventure novel,while Jay talked about hiking trips.Mike shared how he had started reading too,finding a book about teamwork inspiring.The discussion was lively,filled with laughter and new perspectives.Mike felt a warmth he hadn't experienced in months.He understood then that the true richness came from sharing moments with friends,not from virtual achievements alone.【高分句型二】(Mike和朋友们分享阅读体验,感受到与朋友共度时光的真正丰富性,而非仅仅来自虚拟成就)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后,最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
4.(2025 安徽模拟) For some years,I had been in a bad feeling,which resulted from my father,but that day,all changed.
On a Sunday in March,it was my 18th birthday,a day that was supposed to be filled with joy and celebration.My family gathered in a restaurant to celebrate it.The environment filled with laughter,the sounds of plates,and the sweet smell of freshly baked cake.My grandparents sat there,recalling my childhood.Cousins,aunts,uncles,and even a little boy at the neighboring table filled the space.Yet,lively as the atmosphere was,a heavy gap hung over the day﹣ ﹣my father wasn't there.
My father had been gone for over a decade.He was a police officer,a man of strong principles and a deep sense of duty.Years ago,he drowned while saving a child who had fallen into a rushing river.I didn't fully understand what had happened back then,but as I grew older,I began to struggle with his absence in my life.Every missed birthday,every school performance and every hurt knee felt like a betrayal(叛徒).I couldn't help but blame him.He had promised to always be there for me,yet he chose to save a stranger's child over staying with his own family.
As the party continued,I tried to hide my conflicted emotions.The guests clapped and sang as my mother brought out the cake,decorated with 18 glowing candles.Everyone's face lit up,but my mind wandered.Then,out of nowhere,a piercing cry shattered the joyful hum of the party.The little boy sitting at the table next to us,just about five years old,was choking.It seemed that he had been eating a grape and accidentally swallowed it whole.His face turned red as he struggled for air,his tiny hands clawing at his throat.Chaos erupted.His mom screamed and looked helpless.All the people present were extremely nervous.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At that moment,something inside me sprang into action.
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When I breathed a sigh of relief,the boy's parents came to me.
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【答案】 At that moment,something inside me sprang into action.I rushed to the boy,my heart pounding with fear and determination.Bending down behind him,I wrapped my arms around his small body and performed the Heimlich maneuver,just as I had practiced in school.The room was deathly silent,everyone's eyes fixed on us.With a sharp push,the grape shot out of his mouth and landed on the floor.The boy took a deep breath,his face gradually regaining its normal color,and his panicked sobs turning into relieved whimpers.
When I breathed a sigh of relief,the boy's parents came to me.They were teary﹣eyed,their voices trembling with gratitude.The mother kept saying that I saved their whole family.Looking at them,I suddenly understood my father.I realized that saving lives wasn't a choice he made lightly—it was an instinct,a calling,something he couldn't turn away from.For the first time,I felt a profound sense of pride.My father's actions had shaped the person I was becoming,even if he wasn't here to see it.And for the first time in years,I felt at peace and celebrated my birthday excitedly,even with the strangers.
【分析】本文以情感为线索展开,讲述了作者在18岁生日当天经历的一次意外事件,通过救助一个窒息的小男孩,作者终于理解了多年前因救人而牺牲的父亲,并从中获得了内心的释怀与成长的故事。
高分句型一:I rushed to the boy,my heart pounding with fear and determination.
翻译:我冲向那个男孩,我的心因恐惧和决心而砰砰直跳。
分析:本句使用了独立主格结构my heart pounding with fear and determination。
高分句型二:I realized that saving lives wasn't a choice he made lightly—it was an instinct,a calling,something he couldn't turn away from.
翻译:我意识到拯救生命不是他轻易做出的选择,而是一种本能,一种使命,一种他无法回避的东西。
分析:本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】 At that moment,something inside me sprang into action.I rushed to the boy,my heart pounding with fear and determination.【高分句型一】Bending down behind him,I wrapped my arms around his small body and performed the Heimlich maneuver,just as I had practiced in school.The room was deathly silent,everyone's eyes fixed on us.With a sharp push,the grape shot out of his mouth and landed on the floor.The boy took a deep breath,his face gradually regaining its normal color,and his panicked sobs turning into relieved whimpers.(作者在关键时刻挺身而出,用海姆立克急救法救了窒息的小男孩)
When I breathed a sigh of relief,the boy's parents came to me.They were teary﹣eyed,their voices trembling with gratitude.The mother kept saying that I saved their whole family.Looking at them,I suddenly understood my father.I realized that saving lives wasn't a choice he made lightly—it was an instinct,a calling,something he couldn't turn away from.【高分句型二】For the first time,I felt a profound sense of pride.My father's actions had shaped the person I was becoming,even if he wasn't here to see it.And for the first time in years,I felt at peace and celebrated my birthday excitedly,even with the strangers.(男孩父母的感激之情,以及作者对父亲的理解和释怀,最终在生日会上感到内心的平静与自豪)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
5.(2025 福建模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
"The adventure race is starting in five minutes,everyone!Please get ready!" the teacher announced cheerfully.On a Saturday morning,I was stretching and warming up with the rest of my teammates as the cool morning breeze brushed against my skin.My school had planned an adventure race for my level and we were required to take pictures of our surroundings with a camera during the race.
Before I knew it,the adventure race was starting as teams started gathering at the checkpoints.It was not long before the sound of the whistle was heard.Determinedly,my team members,Irene,Jennie and Lucas started venturing out in the forest.Walking purposefully onto the path of the forest,we took numerous photographs of the greenery around us.Not too long after,we started feeling anxious as we could no longer see any trees that were marked,indicating that we lost the path we were supposed to follow.
Finding ourselves in a fix,we were worried about how we were going to get back on track and were panicking. "Perhaps...we can look through the photographs we took to see our previous location," Jennie suggested while holding the camera.Needless to say,we readily agreed to her idea and started looking through the pictures.Little did we know that "someone" was stealthily spying us.Out of nowhere,our camera was suddenly taken away!Apparently nobody was there and we stood in shocked silence,feeling thunderstruck.
Just then,I heard the rustling(沙沙声) of trees.Con