2026年高考英语一轮复习 应用文写作（含答案解析）
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高考英语一轮复习 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025春 天水期末）假定你是李华，你校将在下周举办以"Green Campus，New Beginnings"为主题的校园低碳活动周（Campus Low﹣carbon Action Week）。请你写一篇短文向英文报投稿，内容包括：
（1）活动的时间与主题；
（2）低碳行动的意义；
（3）具体实践建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Green Campus，New Beginnings
_______
2．（2025春 邯郸期末）你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以"Let's take action for a greener future"为题写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
1.环境问题的紧迫性；
2.提出建议；
3.呼吁师生共同参与。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Let's take action for a greener future
Good morning，everyone._____
3．（2025春 莆田期末）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将开设选修课《烹饪初体验》，请以学生会名义在校英语报上发布一则通知。内容包括：
（1）课程的时间、地点；
（2）课程的内容。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80个左右；
（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：
选修课 elective course；烹饪初体验 Culinary Basics
NOTICE
_______
Student Union
4．（2025春 吉林期末）假定你是李华，你班上周五下午组织学生去西山植树，请你为你班的英语报写一篇短文，内容包括：
（1）简述经过：
（2）分享感受。
注意：（1）词数 100 左右：
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：铲 shovel；桶 bucket
5．（2025 湖北三模）请你以"Science And Technology Influence Our Life"为题，给校刊"英语角"栏目写一篇英文稿件，内容包括：（1）举例说明科学技术给学校教育和我们生活带来的新变化；
（2）你的感受。
注意：（1）短文词数不少于100词。
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（3）文中不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Science And Technology Influence Our Life
________
6．（2025 浙江）你将参加英语课上的"一分钟演讲"活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
（1）陈述看法；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
_____
7．（2025 葫芦岛二模）近日，国家卫生健康委员会号召公众重视体重管理。请你以高中生的身份写一篇英语短文，投稿至校英文报，内容包括：
（1）你的感想；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Recently，the National Health Commission has highlighted the importance of weight management._________
8．（2025 包河区校级模拟）假定你是李华，你的交换生好友Peter想报名参加校乒乓球比赛，但因担心表现不佳而犹豫不决。请你写封邮件鼓励他参加，内容包括：
（1）参赛的好处；
（2）承诺提供帮助。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
9．（2025 广东模拟） 假定你是李华，你马上就要高考了，心里非常紧张，请你给你写一封电子邮件，安慰自己，内容包括：
（1）不要紧张；
（2）建议；
（3）加油鼓励。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______
10．（2025 腾冲市校级二模） （满分15分）假定你是中学生李华，你校英语俱乐部计划在暑假期间组织一次志愿活动，现向在校同学征集活动建议。请你给活动负责人Ms.White写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你的建议；（2）你的理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）可适当添加细节，以使行文完整。
Dear Ms.White，
____________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
11．（2025 眉山三模）你校正举办主题为"An Inspiring Person"的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）人物简介及事迹；
（2）意义或启示。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）短文题目已为你写好，可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。
An Inspiring Person
12．（2025 金川区校级二模） 假定你是李华，你校校园网站英文栏目正在开展主题为"The Charming Village in My Eyes"的征文活动。请你根据以下内容投稿：
（1）生态环境；
（2）生活条件；
（3）精神面貌。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）题目已给出，不计入总词数。
The Charming Village in My Eyes
______
13．（2025 河南模拟） 假定你是校英语学习俱乐部的主席李华。为了提高学生们的英语口语，俱乐部决定成立口语练习小组。请你写一则英文通知，内容包括：
（1）小组活动的时间、地点和内容；
（2）报名截止时间和报名方式。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
______
14．（2025 湖北三模）假设你是学生李华，你校即将举办一场以"绿色生活，从我做起"为主题的环保宣传活动，现面向全校学生征集环保创意。请你给校英语报纸写一封投稿，内容包括：
（1）你的创意（如活动形式、具体内容等）：
（2）呼吁大家积极参与。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右：
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor，
________
Sincerely，
Li Hua
15．（2025 巧家县校级模拟）你校将举办关于"Failure and Growth"的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。内容包括：
（1）你的一次失败经历；
（2）这次经历给你带来的成长。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Good morning，everyone!
________
Thank you.
16．（2025 山西模拟）假定你是李华。上周六你校美术社团去湿地公园进行了写生（sketch）活动，请你给你的英国朋友Cluck写封邮件分享这次经历。内容包括：
（1）你的写生经历；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Cluck，
I am writing to share with you my sketching experience in Wetland Park.
Yours，
Li Hua
17．（2025 攀枝花三模） 假定你是李华。目前，中国中学生每天校内体育活动时间不少于2个小时。你的英国笔友John对于央视英语频道的这条新闻很感兴趣。请你给他回封邮件，内容如下：
（1）你们学校的体育活动开展情况；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear John，
Glad to know you're interested in the news about Chinese students ' sports activities._________
Yours，
Li Hua
18．（2025 惠农区校级模拟）假定你是李华，上周六你们班参加了一次烹饪课程。请你给你的新加坡朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）一道菜肴的做法；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you a cooking class we attended last Saturday.________
Yours，
Li Hua
19．（2025 雁峰区校级模拟）假设你是李华，学校英文报正在举办主题征文活动。请根据以下提示写一篇短文介绍清华大学人工智能医院，并谈谈你对AI医疗的看法：
（1）医院基本信息（成立时间/目标）；
（2）主要功能与技术优势；
（3）你的观点。
20．（2025 河南模拟） 许多学生花费大量时间背诵英语范文以期提高写作技能，你认为这样存在问题。请你给校英语报学习园地投稿讨论此事，内容包括：
（1）分析弊端；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Many students spend too much time memorizing English model essays，hoping to improve their writing skills.
______
高考英语一轮复习 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025春 天水期末）假定你是李华，你校将在下周举办以"Green Campus，New Beginnings"为主题的校园低碳活动周（Campus Low﹣carbon Action Week）。请你写一篇短文向英文报投稿，内容包括：
（1）活动的时间与主题；
（2）低碳行动的意义；
（3）具体实践建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Green Campus，New Beginnings
_______
【答案】
Green Campus，New Beginnings
Our school will hold a Campus Low﹣carbon Action Week themed "GreenCampus，New Beginnings" next week.This event aims to raise the awareness of environmental protection and encourage low﹣carbon lifestyles among students.
Why does a low﹣carbon lifestyle matter？It reduces carbon emissions that harm our planet and saves precious resources for future generations.Even small choices add up to big changes.Here's how to take action.To save energy，turn off lights in classrooms.For green transport，organize a "bike or bus day" with classmates，or share rides with neighbors.
Let's make our campus a model of sustainability!Your effort today plants the seed for a greener world.
【分析】高分句型一：Our school will hold a Campus Low﹣carbon Action Week themed "GreenCampus，New Beginnings" next week.
翻译：下周，我校将举办以"绿色校园，新起点"为主题的校园低碳行动周。
分析：本句使用了过去分词短语themed"GreenCampus，New Beginnings"作后置定语。
高分句型二：It reduces carbon emissions that harm our planet and saves precious resources for future generations.
翻译：它减少了危害我们星球的碳排放，为子孙后代节省了宝贵的资源。
分析：本句使用了that引导的定语从句。
【解答】
Green Campus，New Beginnings
Our school will hold a Campus Low﹣carbon Action Week themed "GreenCampus，New Beginnings" next week.【高分句型一】This event aims to raise the awareness of environmental protection and encourage low﹣carbon lifestyles among students.（活动的时间与主题）
Why does a low﹣carbon lifestyle matter？It reduces carbon emissions that harm our planet and saves precious resources for future generations.【高分句型二】Even small choices add up to big changes.（低碳行动的意义）Here's how to take action.To save energy，turn off lights in classrooms.For green transport，organize a "bike or bus day" with classmates，or share rides with neighbors.（具体实践建议）
Let's make our campus a model of sustainability!Your effort today plants the seed for a greener world.（发出号召）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
2．（2025春 邯郸期末）你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以"Let's take action for a greener future"为题写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
1.环境问题的紧迫性；
2.提出建议；
3.呼吁师生共同参与。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Let's take action for a greener future
Good morning，everyone._____
【答案】
Let's take action for a greener future
Good morning，everyone.Our planet faces urgent environmental threats like climate change and pollution，endangering our future and consuming precious resources.Immediate action is essential!
To start with，save water and electricity daily.What's more，it's important to minimize plastic use and choose reusable alternatives.Last，recycle and compost waste properly.
Every effort counts!Please join me in adopting these simple habits.Together，we can build a healthier planet for everyone.Let's act now!
【分析】高分句型一：Our planet faces urgent environmental threats like climate change and pollution，endangering our future and consuming precious resources.
译文：我们的星球正面临着气候变化和污染等紧迫的环境威胁，这些威胁不仅危及我们的未来，还消耗着宝贵的资源。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语endangering our future and consuming precious resources作状语。
高分句型二：What's more，it's important to minimize plastic use and choose reusable alternatives.
译文：此外，尽量减少塑料使用并选择可重复使用的替代品也很重要。
分析：这句话使用了it作为形式主语，不定式短语to minimize plastic use and choose reusable alternatives是真正的主语。
【解答】
Let's take action for a greener future
Good morning，everyone.Our planet faces urgent environmental threats like climate change and pollution，endangering our future and consuming precious resources.【高分句型一】Immediate action is essential!（环境问题的紧迫性）
To start with，save water and electricity daily.What's more，it's important to minimize plastic use and choose reusable alternatives. 【高分句型二】Last，recycle and compost waste properly.（提出建议）
Every effort counts!Please join me in adopting these simple habits.Together，we can build a healthier planet for everyone.Let's act now!（呼吁师生共同参与）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
3．（2025春 莆田期末）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将开设选修课《烹饪初体验》，请以学生会名义在校英语报上发布一则通知。内容包括：
（1）课程的时间、地点；
（2）课程的内容。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80个左右；
（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：
选修课 elective course；烹饪初体验 Culinary Basics
NOTICE
_______
Student Union
【答案】
Notice
The Student Union is excited to announce the launch of our new elective course，Culinary Basics.This unique course，which is designed to ignite your passion for food and cooking，will be held every Tuesday afternoon in Room 302.
This immersive course，led by professional cooks，will take you on a journey from mastering basic cooking techniques to exploring healthy diets.Not only will you gain hands﹣on experience ，but your awareness of healthy eating will be enhanced.
Interested students can register online before September 12th.Don't miss this chance to turn ingredients into joy—join us and let the culinary journey begin!
Student Union
【分析】高分句型一：This unique course，which is designed to ignite your passion for food and cooking，will be held every Tuesday afternoon in Room 302.
翻译：这门独特的课程旨在激发您对食物和烹饪的热情，将于每周二下午在302室举行。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Not only will you gain hands﹣on experience ，but your awareness of healthy eating will be enhanced.
翻译：你不仅会获得实践经验，而且你对健康饮食的意识也会增强。
分析：本句使用了not only置于句首引起的部分倒装。
【解答】
Notice
The Student Union is excited to announce the launch of our new elective course，Culinary Basics.This unique course，which is designed to ignite your passion for food and cooking，will be held every Tuesday afternoon in Room 302.【高分句型一】（课程的时间、地点）
This immersive course，led by professional cooks，will take you on a journey from mastering basic cooking techniques to exploring healthy diets.Not only will you gain hands﹣on experience ，but your awareness of healthy eating will be enhanced.【高分句型二】（课程的内容）
Interested students can register online before September 12th.Don't miss this chance to turn ingredients into joy—join us and let the culinary journey begin!（号召参与）
Student Union
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4．（2025春 吉林期末）假定你是李华，你班上周五下午组织学生去西山植树，请你为你班的英语报写一篇短文，内容包括：
（1）简述经过：
（2）分享感受。
注意：（1）词数 100 左右：
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：铲 shovel；桶 bucket
【答案】
Planting Trees in Xishan
In order to welcome the coming of the Tree Planting Day，our class organized students to plant trees in Xishan last Friday afternoon.
We gathered at the school gate and took a bus to the west mountain.On the west mountain，we assigned our own tasks.Some were responsible for shoveling soil while others were responsible for fetching water with buckets.It took us three hours to finish the tree planting work.
After planting trees，although I was very tired，I felt very happy to see the saplings in the sunlight.Because trees can benefit our environment，we should take more activities like this.
【分析】高分句型一
Some were responsible for shoveling soil while others were responsible for fetching water with buckets.
翻译：一些人负责铲土，另一些人负责用水桶取水。
分析：连词while表示前后的对比。
高分句型二
After planting trees，although I was very tired，I felt very happy to see the saplings in the sunlight.
翻译：种树后，虽然我很累，但看到阳光下树苗我感到很高兴。
分析：句子里，although引导让步状语从句I was very tired。
【解答】
Planting Trees in Xishan
In order to welcome the coming of the Tree Planting Day，our class organized students to plant trees in Xishan last Friday afternoon.（活动目的，时间和地点）
We gathered at the school gate and took a bus to the west mountain.On the west mountain，we assigned our own tasks.Some were responsible for shoveling soil while others were responsible for fetching water with buckets.【高分句型一】It took us three hours to finish the tree planting work.（简述经过）
After planting trees，although I was very tired，I felt very happy to see the saplings in the sunlight.【高分句型二】Because trees can benefit our environment，we should take more activities like this.（分享感受）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
5．（2025 湖北三模）请你以"Science And Technology Influence Our Life"为题，给校刊"英语角"栏目写一篇英文稿件，内容包括：（1）举例说明科学技术给学校教育和我们生活带来的新变化；
（2）你的感受。
注意：（1）短文词数不少于100词。
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（3）文中不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Science And Technology Influence Our Life
________
【答案】
Science And Technology Influence Our Life
Science and technology have been deeply influencing both our our life and study.
Take our school for example.Now there are several HD﹣cameras monitoring the whole campus in case of emergency or school bullying.At meal time，we can watch TV news in the dinning hall，learning the latest international and domestic events.Not only can our teachers use multimedia equipment to make their classes more lively，but also they can mark papers on the computer，which greatly improves the efficiency of paper﹣scoring.Additionally，in our daily life we can do many things conveniently，such as paying by Alipay，getting food by card，going to school by shared bike and so on.
In a word，it is the development of science and technology that makes such a comfortable and convenient life available to us.
【分析】高分句型一：At meal time，we can watch TV news in the dinning hall，learning the latest international and domestic events.
翻译：用餐时，我们可以在餐厅看电视新闻，了解最新的国际和国内事件。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语learning the latest international and domestic events作状语。
高分句型二：Not only can our teachers use multimedia equipment to make their classes more lively，but also they can mark papers on the computer，which greatly improves the efficiency of paper﹣scoring.
翻译：我们的老师不仅可以使用多媒体设备使课堂更加生动，还可以在电脑上批改试卷，大大提高了阅卷效率。
分析：本句使用了not only位于句首的部分倒装。
【解答】
Science And Technology Influence Our Life
Science and technology have been deeply influencing both our our life and study.
Take our school for example.Now there are several HD﹣cameras monitoring the whole campus in case of emergency or school bullying.At meal time，we can watch TV news in the dinning hall，learning the latest international and domestic events.【高分句型一】Not only can our teachers use multimedia equipment to make their classes more lively，but also they can mark papers on the computer，which greatly improves the efficiency of paper﹣scoring.【高分句型二】Additionally，in our daily life we can do many things conveniently，such as paying by Alipay，getting food by card，going to school by shared bike and so on.（举例说明科学技术给学校教育和我们生活带来的新变化）
In a word，it is the development of science and technology that makes such a comfortable and convenient life available to us.（感受）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6．（2025 浙江）你将参加英语课上的"一分钟演讲"活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
（1）陈述看法；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
_____
【答案】
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
It's an honor to be here and share with you the trend among a few students to film short videos on smartphones on campus.To my mind，this practice is actually quite detrimental.
Firstly，it has a negative effect on those who film videos themselves.As high school students with limited time，filming short videos wastes valuable minutes and negatively impacts memory，which is essential for learning.Secondly，it also disrupts the concentration of the fellow students.When someone is filming a video，it often draws the attention of others around them，which is not conducive to a positive learning environment.
To address this issue，firstly，we could organize a class meeting where we discuss the potential harms of short videos，thus raising awareness among our peers.Secondly，I also recommend handing phones over to the teachers or parents for safekeeping while we're at school.
I hope we all can put our phones away，develop good self﹣discipline，and fully engage in our school life.
【分析】高分句型一：As high school students with limited time，filming short videos wastes valuable minutes and negatively impacts memory，which is essential for learning.
翻译：作为时间有限的高中生，拍摄短视频浪费了宝贵的时间，而且对学习至关重要的记忆产生了负面影响。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：To address this issue，firstly，we could organize a class meeting where we discuss the potential harms of short videos，thus raising awareness among our peers.
翻译：为了解决这个问题，首先，我们可以组织一次班会，讨论短视频的潜在危害，从而提高同龄人的意识。
分析：本句运用了where引导的限制性定语从句和现在分词短语thus raising awareness among our peers作结果主语。
【解答】
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
It's an honor to be here and share with you the trend among a few students to film short videos on smartphones on campus.To my mind，this practice is actually quite detrimental.（开篇点题）
Firstly，it has a negative effect on those who film videos themselves.As high school students with limited time，filming short videos wastes valuable minutes and negatively impacts memory，which is essential for learning.【高分句型一】Secondly，it also disrupts the concentration of the fellow students.When someone is filming a video，it often draws the attention of others around them，which is not conducive to a positive learning environment.（陈述看法）
To address this issue，firstly，we could organize a class meeting where we discuss the potential harms of short videos，thus raising awareness among our peers.【高分句型二】Secondly，I also recommend handing phones over to the teachers or parents for safekeeping while we're at school.（提出建议）
I hope we all can put our phones away，develop good self﹣discipline，and fully engage in our school life.（表达希望）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
7．（2025 葫芦岛二模）近日，国家卫生健康委员会号召公众重视体重管理。请你以高中生的身份写一篇英语短文，投稿至校英文报，内容包括：
（1）你的感想；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Recently，the National Health Commission has highlighted the importance of weight management._________
【答案】 Recently，the National Health Commission has highlighted the importance of weight management.As a senior high student，I strongly agree that maintaining a healthy weight is vital for our physical and mental well﹣being.It enables us to focus better on studies and enjoy an active campus life.
To manage weight，we should adopt a balanced diet with more fruits，vegetables and whole grains，while cutting down on sugary drinks and snacks.Regular exercise like swimming or playing badminton is also essential，as it not only burns fat but also relieves stress.
As the saying goes，"A healthy body is the foundation of a lively mind."Let's act now to better our lives and build a healthier nation.
【分析】高分句型一：Regular exercise like swimming or playing badminton is also essential，as it not only burns fat but also relieves stress.
翻译：定期锻炼，如游泳或打羽毛球，也至关重要，因为它不仅能燃烧脂肪，还能缓解压力。
分析：句中运用了as引导的原因状语从句。
高分句型二：As the saying goes，"A healthy body is the foundation of a lively mind."
翻译：俗话说："健康的身体是充满活力的头脑的基础。"
分析：句中运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】 Recently，the National Health Commission has highlighted the importance of weight management.As a senior high student，I strongly agree that maintaining a healthy weight is vital for our physical and mental well﹣being.It enables us to focus better on studies and enjoy an active campus life.（我的感想）
To manage weight，we should adopt a balanced diet with more fruits，vegetables and whole grains，while cutting down on sugary drinks and snacks.Regular exercise like swimming or playing badminton is also essential，as it not only burns fat but also relieves stress. 【高分句型一】（我的建议）
As the saying goes，"A healthy body is the foundation of a lively mind."【高分句型二】Let's act now to better our lives and build a healthier nation.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．（2025 包河区校级模拟）假定你是李华，你的交换生好友Peter想报名参加校乒乓球比赛，但因担心表现不佳而犹豫不决。请你写封邮件鼓励他参加，内容包括：
（1）参赛的好处；
（2）承诺提供帮助。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you're considering the table tennis competition!Participating will definitely improve your skills and help you make new friends who share the same petitions are valuable experiences that teach us sportsmanship regardless of results.Most importantly，it's about enjoying the game you love.
Don't worry about performance.Everyone starts from scratch，and this is a great chance to challenge yourself.To help you prepare，I'll practice with you every afternoon and share serving techniques.
Let me help you register too!Just say the word.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Participating will definitely improve your skills and help you make new friends who share the same interest.
翻译：参与肯定会提高你的技能，帮助你结交志同道合的新朋友。
分析：本句使用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Competitions are valuable experiences that teach us sportsmanship regardless of results.
翻译：比赛是宝贵的经验，无论结果如何，都能教会我们体育精神。
分析：本句使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you're considering the table tennis competition!Participating will definitely improve your skills and help you make new friends who share the same interest.【高分句型一】Competitions are valuable experiences that teach us sportsmanship regardless of results.【高分句型二】Most importantly，it's about enjoying the game you love.（参赛的好处）
Don't worry about performance.Everyone starts from scratch，and this is a great chance to challenge yourself.To help you prepare，I'll practice with you every afternoon and share serving techniques.（承诺提供帮助）
Let me help you register too!Just say the word.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9．（2025 广东模拟） 假定你是李华，你马上就要高考了，心里非常紧张，请你给你写一封电子邮件，安慰自己，内容包括：
（1）不要紧张；
（2）建议；
（3）加油鼓励。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______
【答案】Dear Li Hua，
I know you are feeling very nervous about the upcoming college entrance exam.Remember，it's important to stay calm and focused.Here are a few suggestions to help you.First，make sure to get enough sleep and eat well，which are all key to your physical and mental health.Second，take short breaks during your study sessions to avoid burnout.Finally，believe in yourself and your abilities.You have worked hard and are well﹣prepared.I'm sure you will do a great job.
Keep going，Li Hua!You can do this!
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I know you are feeling very nervous about the upcoming college entrance exam.
翻译：我知道你对即将到来的高考感到非常紧张。
分析：本句使用了省略了that的宾语从句you are feeling very nervous about the upcoming college entrance exam。
高分句型二：First，make sure to get enough sleep and eat well，which are all key to your physical and mental health.
翻译：首先，确保充足的睡眠和良好的饮食习惯，这些都是你身心健康的关键。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Li Hua，
I know you are feeling very nervous about the upcoming college entrance exam.【高分句型一】Remember，it's important to stay calm and focused.（告诉自己不要紧张）Here are a few suggestions to help you.First，make sure to get enough sleep and eat well，which are all key to your physical and mental health.【高分句型二】Second，take short breaks during your study sessions to avoid burnout.Finally，believe in yourself and your abilities.You have worked hard and are well﹣prepared.I'm sure you will do a great job.（个人建议）
Keep going，Li Hua!You can do this!（加油鼓励）
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．（2025 腾冲市校级二模） （满分15分）假定你是中学生李华，你校英语俱乐部计划在暑假期间组织一次志愿活动，现向在校同学征集活动建议。请你给活动负责人Ms.White写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你的建议；（2）你的理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）可适当添加细节，以使行文完整。
Dear Ms.White，
____________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ms.White，
I am writing to propose my suggestion for the upcoming volunteer activity organized by our English Club.
I earnestly advocate that we partner with a local community center to offer free English conversation courses for children from disadvantaged families.During the two﹣week teaching sessions，our club members could design interactive lessons，incorporating games and multimedia resources to make learning engaging and effective.Additionally，this initiative provides us with an excellent opportunity to enhance our communication and teaching skills，which will also reinforce the bond between our school and the local community.
I would be very grateful if you could give my idea due consideration.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I earnestly advocate that we partner with a local community center to offer free English conversation courses for children from disadvantaged families.
翻译：我诚挚地建议我们与当地社区中心合作，为弱势家庭的儿童提供免费的英语会话课程。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Additionally，this initiative provides us with an excellent opportunity to enhance our communication and teaching skills，which will also reinforce the bond between our school and the local community.
翻译：此外，这一举措为我们提供了一个很好的机会来提高我们的沟通和教学技能，这也将加强我们学校与当地社区之间的联系。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Ms.White，
I am writing to propose my suggestion for the upcoming volunteer activity organized by our English Club.（写信目的）
I earnestly advocate that we partner with a local community center to offer free English conversation courses for children from disadvantaged families.【高分句型一】During the two﹣week teaching sessions，our club members could design interactive lessons，incorporating games and multimedia resources to make learning engaging and effective.Additionally，this initiative provides us with an excellent opportunity to enhance our communication and teaching skills，which will also reinforce the bond between our school and the local community.【高分句型二】（个人建议及理由）
I would be very grateful if you could give my idea due consideration.（表达期待）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
11．（2025 眉山三模）你校正举办主题为"An Inspiring Person"的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）人物简介及事迹；
（2）意义或启示。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）短文题目已为你写好，可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。
An Inspiring Person
【答案】
An Inspiring Person
Once inspiring people are mentioned，Helen Keller comes to my mind.Her story shows how one can overcome the most difficult challenges.
Helen Keller lost both her sight and hearing as a child.With the help of her teacher，Helen Keller learned to communicate and later became the first deaf﹣blind person to earn a college degree.She then dedicated her life to working for the benefit of those who faced disabilities.
Helen's story teaches us the power of resilience and compassion.Her determination encourages us to face challenges bravely and reminds us to help others achieve their potentials.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正在举办的征文活动投稿，谈谈一位鼓舞人心者。
高分句型一：Her story shows how one can overcome the most difficult challenges.
翻译：她的故事告诉我们如何克服最困难的挑战。
分析：本句话使用了how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：She then dedicated her life to working for the benefit of those who faced disabilities.
翻译：然后，她把自己的一生都奉献给了那些残疾人的利益。
分析：本句话使用了who引导的定语从句。
【解答】
An Inspiring Person
Once inspiring people are mentioned，Helen Keller comes to my mind.Her story shows how one can overcome the most difficult challenges.【高分句型一】（人物简介）
Helen Keller lost both her sight and hearing as a child.With the help of her teacher，Helen Keller learned to communicate and later became the first deaf﹣blind person to earn a college degree.She then dedicated her life to working for the benefit of those who faced disabilities.【高分句型二】（人物事迹）
Helen's story teaches us the power of resilience and compassion.Her determination encourages us to face challenges bravely and reminds us to help others achieve their potentials.（意义）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
12．（2025 金川区校级二模） 假定你是李华，你校校园网站英文栏目正在开展主题为"The Charming Village in My Eyes"的征文活动。请你根据以下内容投稿：
（1）生态环境；
（2）生活条件；
（3）精神面貌。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）题目已给出，不计入总词数。
The Charming Village in My Eyes
______
【答案】
The Charming Village in My Eyes
The charming village in my eyes is a place where people are living a peaceful，happy and healthy life.
Surrounded by green mountains and beautiful lakes，the village takes on a nice look with neat paths and furnished houses.In addition，villagers have easy access to clean water and the Internet.It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online，thus improving their lives.It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits.
This is the beautiful picture of the village in my mind.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇文章，参加"The Charming Village in My Eyes征文活动。"
高分句型一：The charming village in my eyes is a place where people are living a peaceful，happy and healthy life.
翻译：在我眼中，迷人的村庄是一个人们过着和平、快乐和健康生活的地方。
分析：本句话使用了where引导限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits.
翻译：和谐的环境，丰富多彩的生活，让每个人都乐观向上，精神抖擞。
分析：本句话使用了强调句。
【解答】
The Charming Village in My Eyes
The charming village in my eyes is a place where people are living a peaceful，happy and healthy life.【高分句型一】（引出话题）
Surrounded by green mountains and beautiful lakes，the village takes on a nice look with neat paths and furnished houses.In addition，villagers have easy access to clean water and the Internet.It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online，thus improving their lives.It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits.【高分句型二】（生态环境、生活条件以及精神面貌）
This is the beautiful picture of the village in my mind.（总结上文）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
13．（2025 河南模拟） 假定你是校英语学习俱乐部的主席李华。为了提高学生们的英语口语，俱乐部决定成立口语练习小组。请你写一则英文通知，内容包括：
（1）小组活动的时间、地点和内容；
（2）报名截止时间和报名方式。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
______
【答案】
Notice
To improve students' spoken English，our English Learning Club will set up speaking practice groups.
The groups will meet in the school English corner every Friday from 4：00 to 5：30 p.m.Activities include topic discussions，role﹣plays and story﹣telling.
Those who are interested should sign up by sending an email to englishclub@ by July 15.Don't miss this chance to enhance your speaking skills!
【分析】高分句型一：To improve students' spoken English，our English Learning Club will set up speaking practice groups.
翻译：为了提高学生们的英语口语水平，我们英语学习俱乐部将成立口语练习小组。
分析：句中运用了不定式短语To improve students' spoken English作目的状语。
高分句型二：Those who are interested should sign up by sending an email to englishclub@ by July 15.
翻译：感兴趣的人请在 7 月 15 日前通过发送邮件至 englishclub@ 进行报名。
分析：句中运用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Notice
To improve students' spoken English，our English Learning Club will set up speaking practice groups.【高分句型一】
The groups will meet in the school English corner every Friday from 4：00 to 5：30 p.m.Activities include topic discussions，role﹣plays and story﹣telling.（小组活动的时间、地点和内容）
Those who are interested should sign up by sending an email to englishclub@ by July 15. 【高分句型二】Don't miss this chance to enhance your speaking skills!（报名截止时间和报名方式）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
14．（2025 湖北三模）假设你是学生李华，你校即将举办一场以"绿色生活，从我做起"为主题的环保宣传活动，现面向全校学生征集环保创意。请你给校英语报纸写一封投稿，内容包括：
（1）你的创意（如活动形式、具体内容等）：
（2）呼吁大家积极参与。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右：
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor，
________
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor，
Learning that our school is scheduled to hold a campaign themed "Green Life，Start from Me"，I would like to propose the idea of hosting a "Green Fashion Show" as part of this initiative.
The show could take place in the school meeting hall where students will design and model clothes made entirely from recycled or repurposed materials，such as old clothes，plastic bags，or newspapers.Meanwhile，a panel of judges will be invited to evaluate the designs based on creativity，sustainability，and presentation，with prizes awarded to the most innovative entries.
I'm convinced that the fashion show will inspire everyone to take action for a greener future.I hope all students will participate and make this event a success!
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Learning that our school is scheduled to hold a campaign themed "Green Life，Start from Me"，I would like to propose the idea of hosting a "Green Fashion Show" as part of this initiative.
翻译：得知我校计划举办以"绿色生活，从我做起"为主题的活动，我想提议将举办 "绿色时装秀"作为该活动的一部分。
分析：句中运用了现在分词短语Learning that our school is scheduled to hold a campaign themed "Green Life，Start from Me"作状语以及that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：The show could take place in the school meeting hall where students will design and model clothes made entirely from recycled or repurposed materials，such as old clothes，plastic bags，or newspapers.
翻译：这场时装秀可在学校会议厅举办，学生们将设计并展示完全由可回收或再利用材料制成的服装，比如旧衣物、塑料袋或报纸。
分析：句中运用了where引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Editor，
Learning that our school is scheduled to hold a campaign themed "Green Life，Start from Me"，I would like to propose the idea of hosting a "Green Fashion Show" as part of this initiative.【高分句型一】
The show could take place in the school meeting hall where students will design and model clothes made entirely from recycled or repurposed materials，such as old clothes，plastic bags，or newspapers.【高分句型二】Meanwhile，a panel of judges will be invited to evaluate the designs based on creativity，sustainability，and presentation，with prizes awarded to the most innovative entries.（自己的创意）
I'm convinced that the fashion show will inspire everyone to take action for a greener future.I hope all students will participate and make this event a success!（呼吁大家积极参与）
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
15．（2025 巧家县校级模拟）你校将举办关于"Failure and Growth"的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。内容包括：
（1）你的一次失败经历；
（2）这次经历给你带来的成长。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Good morning，everyone!
________
Thank you.
【答案】 Good morning，everyone!
Today，I'd like to deliver a speech on" Failure and Growth".I believe failures are inevitable in life.A school music competition witnessed my setback experience.I had prepared diligently，but on the day of the performance，my nerves got the better of me.My voice trembled and I forgot the lyrics.The audience's whispers and disappointed expressions were a harsh reminder of my failure，which urges me to strive forward.Not only does this experience make me stronger，but it teaches me a valuable lesson.Failure is not the end but a stepping stone to success，which motivates me to practice harder，stay more focused and get better prepared for the future.
Thank you.
【分析】高分句型一：The audience's whispers and disappointed expressions were a harsh reminder of my failure，which urges me to strive forward.
翻译：观众们的窃窃私语和失望的表情严厉地提醒着我的失败，这促使我继续努力。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Not only does this experience make me stronger，but it teaches me a valuable lesson.
翻译：这段经历不仅让我变得更强大，而且给我上了宝贵的一课。
分析：本句运用了"not only...but （also）...不但……而且……"连接对等成分，并且not only放在句首引起句子的部分倒装。
【解答】 Good morning，everyone! （问候）
Today，I'd like to deliver a speech on" Failure and Growth".I believe failures are inevitable in life.A school music competition witnessed my setback experience.I had prepared diligently，but on the day of the performance，my nerves got the better of me.My voice trembled and I forgot the lyrics.The audience's whispers and disappointed expressions were a harsh reminder of my failure，which urges me to strive forward. 【高分句型一】（自己的一次失败经历）Not only does this experience make me stronger，but it teaches me a valuable lesson. 【高分句型二】Failure is not the end but a stepping stone to success，which motivates me to practice harder，stay more focused and get better prepared for the future. （这次经历给自己带来的成长）
Thank you.（感谢）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
16．（2025 山西模拟）假定你是李华。上周六你校美术社团去湿地公园进行了写生（sketch）活动，请你给你的英国朋友Cluck写封邮件分享这次经历。内容包括：
（1）你的写生经历；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Cluck，
I am writing to share with you my sketching experience in Wetland Park.
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Cluck，
I am writing to share with you my sketching experience in Wetland Park.
Last Saturday，our school's art club organized a sketching activity in the park，where we spent the day capturing the beauty of the wetland and its diverse wildlife.I particularly enjoyed sketching the serene pond and the vibrant birds.
The experience was incredibly refreshing as it was wonderful to connect with nature and practice our art skills in such a peaceful setting.After the inspiring activity，I feel more motivated to continue improving my sketching techniques.
I have attached some of my drawings to the email，hoping you will like them.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Last Saturday，our school's art club organized a sketching activity in the park，where we spent the day capturing the beauty of the wetland and its diverse wildlife.
翻译：上周六，我们学校的艺术俱乐部在公园组织了一场写生活动，我们一整天都在捕捉湿地的美景以及其中多样的野生动物。
分析：句中运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I have attached some of my drawings to the email，hoping you will like them.
翻译：我在邮件中附上了我的一些画作，希望你能喜欢。
分析：句中运用了现在分词短语hoping you will like them作状语。
【解答】Dear Cluck，
I am writing to share with you my sketching experience in Wetland Park.
Last Saturday，our school's art club organized a sketching activity in the park，where we spent the day capturing the beauty of the wetland and its diverse wildlife.【高分句型一】I particularly enjoyed sketching the serene pond and the vibrant birds.（自己的写生经历）
The experience was incredibly refreshing as it was wonderful to connect with nature and practice our art skills in such a peaceful setting.After the inspiring activity，I feel more motivated to continue improving my sketching techniques.（自己的感想）
I have attached some of my drawings to the email，hoping you will like them.【高分句型二】
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
17．（2025 攀枝花三模） 假定你是李华。目前，中国中学生每天校内体育活动时间不少于2个小时。你的英国笔友John对于央视英语频道的这条新闻很感兴趣。请你给他回封邮件，内容如下：
（1）你们学校的体育活动开展情况；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear John，
Glad to know you're interested in the news about Chinese students ' sports activities._________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John，
Glad to know you're interested in the news about Chinese students' sports activities.Our sports activities are rich and colorful.In our school，various sports activities are carried out.We have two﹣hour sports time every day.We have basketball，football and running﹣races during the two﹣hour sports time，in which students actively take part.
As for me，I really enjoy these activities.They not only make me physically stronger but also relieve my study pressure.I feel energetic and focused after exercising.I'm really glad that we have enough time for sports at school and that our school attaches so much importance to sports.
What about the sports activities in your school？Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：We have basketball，football and running﹣races during the two﹣hour sports time，in which students actively take part.
翻译：在两小时的体育活动时间里，我们有篮球、足球和赛跑活动，学生们积极参与这些活动。
分析：运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：They not only make me physically stronger but also relieve my study pressure.
翻译：它们不仅让我身体更强壮，而且缓解了我的学习压力。
分析：运用了not only...but also..."不仅...而且..."连接两个并列的谓语。
【解答】Dear John，
Glad to know you're interested in the news about Chinese students' sports activities.Our sports activities are rich and colorful.In our school，various sports activities are carried out.We have two﹣hour sports time every day.We have basketball，football and running﹣races during the two﹣hour sports time，in which students actively take part.【高分句型一】（我们学校的体育活动开展情况）
As for me，I really enjoy these activities.They not only make me physically stronger but also relieve my study pressure.【高分句型二】I feel energetic and focused after exercising.I'm really glad that we have enough time for sports at school and that our school attaches so much importance to sports.（自己的感受）
What about the sports activities in your school？Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
18．（2025 惠农区校级模拟）假定你是李华，上周六你们班参加了一次烹饪课程。请你给你的新加坡朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）一道菜肴的做法；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you a cooking class we attended last Saturday.________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you a cooking class we attended last Saturday.We learned to make Mapo Tofu.First，fry tofu cubes until golden.Then，cook minced meat with spicy bean paste.Add tofu and seasonings，and simmer briefly.
The class was a delightful experience，which was my first time to make Mapo Tofu from scratch，and I enjoyed every step of the process.The activity not only brought our class closer together but also allowed us to have a lot of fun tasting our own creations.It was an unforgettable experience.
I'm eager to try more Chinese dishes and share the joy of cooking.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The class was a delightful experience，which was my first time to make dumplings from scratch，and I enjoyed every step of the process.
翻译：这堂课是一次令人愉快的经历，这是我第一次从零开始包饺子，并且我享受这个过程的每一步。
分析：运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：The activity not only brought our class closer together but also allowed us to have a lot of fun tasting our own creations.
翻译：这次活动不仅让我们班级更加团结，而且让我们在品尝自己的创作时获得了很多乐趣。
分析：运用了not only...but also..."不仅...而且..."连接两个并列的谓语。
【解答】Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you a cooking class we attended last Saturday.We learned to make Mapo Tofu.First，fry tofu cubes until golden.Then，cook minced meat with spicy bean paste.Add tofu and seasonings，and simmer briefly.（一道菜肴"麻婆豆腐"的做法）
The class was a delightful experience，which was my first time to make Mapo Tofu from scratch，and I enjoyed every step of the process.【高分句型一】The activity not only brought our class closer together but also allowed us to have a lot of fun tasting our own creations.【高分句型二】It was an unforgettable experience.（自己的感想）
I'm eager to try more Chinese dishes and share the joy of cooking.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
19．（2025 雁峰区校级模拟）假设你是李华，学校英文报正在举办主题征文活动。请根据以下提示写一篇短文介绍清华大学人工智能医院，并谈谈你对AI医疗的看法：
（1）医院基本信息（成立时间/目标）；
（2）主要功能与技术优势；
（3）你的观点。
【答案】
AI﹣Powered Hospital of Tsinghua University
The AI﹣powered hospital of Tsinghua University，established in 2024，aims to leverage advanced technology to transform medical services.
It boasts remarkable functions.AI﹣driven systems can swiftly analyze massive medical data，like patient histories and test results，for accurate diagnosis.For instance，it identifies diseases through imaging with high precision，helping doctors detect problems earlier.Also，robotic﹣assisted surgeries enable more precise operations，reducing risks.
In my view，AI hospitals make medical services quicker and cheaper.Although some worry about privacy，strict data protection gives me confidence.I believe combining AI with human care will create a healthier future.
【分析】高分句型一：The AI﹣powered hospital of Tsinghua University，established in 2024，aims to leverage advanced technology to transform medical services.
翻译：清华大学的人工智能医院成立于2024年，旨在利用先进技术改造医疗服务。
分析：运用了过去分词短语established in 2024作后置定语。
高分句型二：For instance，it identifies diseases through imaging with high precision，helping doctors detect problems earlier.
翻译：例如，它通过成像高精度识别疾病，帮助医生更早发现问题。
分析：运用了现在分词短语helping doctors detect problems earlier作状语。
【解答】
AI﹣Powered Hospital of Tsinghua University
The AI﹣powered hospital of Tsinghua University ，established in 2024，aims to leverage advanced technology to transform medical services.【高分句型一】（医院基本信息包括成立时间和目标）
It boasts remarkable functions.AI﹣driven systems can swiftly analyze massive medical data，like patient histories and test results，for accurate diagnosis.For instance，it identifies diseases through imaging with high precision，helping doctors detect problems earlier. 【高分句型二】Also，robotic﹣assisted surgeries enable more precise operations，reducing risks.（主要功能与技术优势）
In my view，AI hospitals make medical services quicker and cheaper.Although some worry about privacy，strict data protection gives me confidence.I believe combining AI with human care will create a healthier future.（自己的观点）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
20．（2025 河南模拟） 许多学生花费大量时间背诵英语范文以期提高写作技能，你认为这样存在问题。请你给校英语报学习园地投稿讨论此事，内容包括：
（1）分析弊端；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Many students spend too much time memorizing English model essays，hoping to improve their writing skills.
______
【答案】 Many students spend too much time memorizing English model essays，hoping to improve their writing skills.However，this approach leads to dependency rather than genuine competence.Rote memorization destroys creativity and critical thinking，leaving students unprepared for unfamiliar topics.Worse still，it prioritizes imitation over understanding grammar，vocabulary，and logical flow.
To address this，students should shift focus to active practice.Instead of memorizing entire essays，analyze their structures—introductions，transitions and conclusions—to grasp writing patterns.Regularly write short paragraphs on diverse topics，applying learned phrases thoughtfully，and seek feedback from teachers or peers to identify weaknesses.
Remember，writing is a skill honed through consistent practice，not passive copying.
【分析】高分句型一：To address this，students should shift focus to active practice.
翻译：为了解决这个问题，学生应该把重点转移到积极的实践上。
分析：运用了动词不定式短语to active practice作目的状语。
高分句型二：Instead of memorizing entire essays，analyze their structures—introductions，transitions and conclusions—to grasp writing patterns.
翻译：与其记住整篇文章，不如分析它们的结构——介绍、转换和结论——以掌握写作模式。
分析：运用了动名词短语memorizing entire essays作宾语。
【解答】 Many students spend too much time memorizing English model essays，hoping to improve their writing skills.However，this approach leads to dependency rather than genuine competence.Rote memorization destroys creativity and critical thinking，leaving students unprepared for unfamiliar topics.Worse still，it prioritizes imitation over understanding grammar，vocabulary，and logical flow.（分析弊端）
To address this，students should shift focus to active practice.【高分句型一】Instead of memorizing entire essays，analyze their structures—introductions，transitions and conclusions—to grasp writing patterns.【高分句型二】Regularly write short paragraphs on diverse topics，applying learned phrases thoughtfully，and seek feedback from teachers or peers to identify weaknesses.（提出建议）
Remember，writing is a skill honed through consistent practice，not passive copying.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
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高考英语一轮复习 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025春 天水期末）假定你是李华，你校将在下周举办以"Green Campus，New Beginnings"为主题的校园低碳活动周（Campus Low﹣carbon Action Week）。请你写一篇短文向英文报投稿，内容包括：
（1）活动的时间与主题；
（2）低碳行动的意义；
（3）具体实践建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Green Campus，New Beginnings
_______
2．（2025春 邯郸期末）你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以"Let's take action for a greener future"为题写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
1.环境问题的紧迫性；
2.提出建议；
3.呼吁师生共同参与。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Let's take action for a greener future
Good morning，everyone._____
3．（2025春 莆田期末）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将开设选修课《烹饪初体验》，请以学生会名义在校英语报上发布一则通知。内容包括：
（1）课程的时间、地点；
（2）课程的内容。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80个左右；
（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：
选修课 elective course；烹饪初体验 Culinary Basics
NOTICE
_______
Student Union
4．（2025春 吉林期末）假定你是李华，你班上周五下午组织学生去西山植树，请你为你班的英语报写一篇短文，内容包括：
（1）简述经过：
（2）分享感受。
注意：（1）词数 100 左右：
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：铲 shovel；桶 bucket
5．（2025 湖北三模）请你以"Science And Technology Influence Our Life"为题，给校刊"英语角"栏目写一篇英文稿件，内容包括：（1）举例说明科学技术给学校教育和我们生活带来的新变化；
（2）你的感受。
注意：（1）短文词数不少于100词。
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（3）文中不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Science And Technology Influence Our Life
________
6．（2025 浙江）你将参加英语课上的"一分钟演讲"活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
（1）陈述看法；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
_____
7．（2025 葫芦岛二模）近日，国家卫生健康委员会号召公众重视体重管理。请你以高中生的身份写一篇英语短文，投稿至校英文报，内容包括：
（1）你的感想；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Recently，the National Health Commission has highlighted the importance of weight management._________
8．（2025 包河区校级模拟）假定你是李华，你的交换生好友Peter想报名参加校乒乓球比赛，但因担心表现不佳而犹豫不决。请你写封邮件鼓励他参加，内容包括：
（1）参赛的好处；
（2）承诺提供帮助。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
9．（2025 广东模拟） 假定你是李华，你马上就要高考了，心里非常紧张，请你给你写一封电子邮件，安慰自己，内容包括：
（1）不要紧张；
（2）建议；
（3）加油鼓励。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______
10．（2025 腾冲市校级二模） （满分15分）假定你是中学生李华，你校英语俱乐部计划在暑假期间组织一次志愿活动，现向在校同学征集活动建议。请你给活动负责人Ms.White写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你的建议；（2）你的理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）可适当添加细节，以使行文完整。
Dear Ms.White，
____________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
11．（2025 眉山三模）你校正举办主题为"An Inspiring Person"的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）人物简介及事迹；
（2）意义或启示。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）短文题目已为你写好，可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。
An Inspiring Person
12．（2025 金川区校级二模） 假定你是李华，你校校园网站英文栏目正在开展主题为"The Charming Village in My Eyes"的征文活动。请你根据以下内容投稿：
（1）生态环境；
（2）生活条件；
（3）精神面貌。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）题目已给出，不计入总词数。
The Charming Village in My Eyes
______
13．（2025 河南模拟） 假定你是校英语学习俱乐部的主席李华。为了提高学生们的英语口语，俱乐部决定成立口语练习小组。请你写一则英文通知，内容包括：
（1）小组活动的时间、地点和内容；
（2）报名截止时间和报名方式。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
______
14．（2025 湖北三模）假设你是学生李华，你校即将举办一场以"绿色生活，从我做起"为主题的环保宣传活动，现面向全校学生征集环保创意。请你给校英语报纸写一封投稿，内容包括：
（1）你的创意（如活动形式、具体内容等）：
（2）呼吁大家积极参与。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右：
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor，
________
Sincerely，
Li Hua
15．（2025 巧家县校级模拟）你校将举办关于"Failure and Growth"的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。内容包括：
（1）你的一次失败经历；
（2）这次经历给你带来的成长。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Good morning，everyone!
________
Thank you.
16．（2025 山西模拟）假定你是李华。上周六你校美术社团去湿地公园进行了写生（sketch）活动，请你给你的英国朋友Cluck写封邮件分享这次经历。内容包括：
（1）你的写生经历；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Cluck，
I am writing to share with you my sketching experience in Wetland Park.
Yours，
Li Hua
17．（2025 攀枝花三模） 假定你是李华。目前，中国中学生每天校内体育活动时间不少于2个小时。你的英国笔友John对于央视英语频道的这条新闻很感兴趣。请你给他回封邮件，内容如下：
（1）你们学校的体育活动开展情况；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear John，
Glad to know you're interested in the news about Chinese students ' sports activities._________
Yours，
Li Hua
18．（2025 惠农区校级模拟）假定你是李华，上周六你们班参加了一次烹饪课程。请你给你的新加坡朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）一道菜肴的做法；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you a cooking class we attended last Saturday.________
Yours，
Li Hua
19．（2025 雁峰区校级模拟）假设你是李华，学校英文报正在举办主题征文活动。请根据以下提示写一篇短文介绍清华大学人工智能医院，并谈谈你对AI医疗的看法：
（1）医院基本信息（成立时间/目标）；
（2）主要功能与技术优势；
（3）你的观点。
20．（2025 河南模拟） 许多学生花费大量时间背诵英语范文以期提高写作技能，你认为这样存在问题。请你给校英语报学习园地投稿讨论此事，内容包括：
（1）分析弊端；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Many students spend too much time memorizing English model essays，hoping to improve their writing skills.
______
高考英语一轮复习 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025春 天水期末）假定你是李华，你校将在下周举办以"Green Campus，New Beginnings"为主题的校园低碳活动周（Campus Low﹣carbon Action Week）。请你写一篇短文向英文报投稿，内容包括：
（1）活动的时间与主题；
（2）低碳行动的意义；
（3）具体实践建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Green Campus，New Beginnings
_______
【答案】
Green Campus，New Beginnings
Our school will hold a Campus Low﹣carbon Action Week themed "GreenCampus，New Beginnings" next week.This event aims to raise the awareness of environmental protection and encourage low﹣carbon lifestyles among students.
Why does a low﹣carbon lifestyle matter？It reduces carbon emissions that harm our planet and saves precious resources for future generations.Even small choices add up to big changes.Here's how to take action.To save energy，turn off lights in classrooms.For green transport，organize a "bike or bus day" with classmates，or share rides with neighbors.
Let's make our campus a model of sustainability!Your effort today plants the seed for a greener world.
【分析】高分句型一：Our school will hold a Campus Low﹣carbon Action Week themed "GreenCampus，New Beginnings" next week.
翻译：下周，我校将举办以"绿色校园，新起点"为主题的校园低碳行动周。
分析：本句使用了过去分词短语themed"GreenCampus，New Beginnings"作后置定语。
高分句型二：It reduces carbon emissions that harm our planet and saves precious resources for future generations.
翻译：它减少了危害我们星球的碳排放，为子孙后代节省了宝贵的资源。
分析：本句使用了that引导的定语从句。
【解答】
Green Campus，New Beginnings
Our school will hold a Campus Low﹣carbon Action Week themed "GreenCampus，New Beginnings" next week.【高分句型一】This event aims to raise the awareness of environmental protection and encourage low﹣carbon lifestyles among students.（活动的时间与主题）
Why does a low﹣carbon lifestyle matter？It reduces carbon emissions that harm our planet and saves precious resources for future generations.【高分句型二】Even small choices add up to big changes.（低碳行动的意义）Here's how to take action.To save energy，turn off lights in classrooms.For green transport，organize a "bike or bus day" with classmates，or share rides with neighbors.（具体实践建议）
Let's make our campus a model of sustainability!Your effort today plants the seed for a greener world.（发出号召）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
2．（2025春 邯郸期末）你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以"Let's take action for a greener future"为题写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
1.环境问题的紧迫性；
2.提出建议；
3.呼吁师生共同参与。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Let's take action for a greener future
Good morning，everyone._____
【答案】
Let's take action for a greener future
Good morning，everyone.Our planet faces urgent environmental threats like climate change and pollution，endangering our future and consuming precious resources.Immediate action is essential!
To start with，save water and electricity daily.What's more，it's important to minimize plastic use and choose reusable alternatives.Last，recycle and compost waste properly.
Every effort counts!Please join me in adopting these simple habits.Together，we can build a healthier planet for everyone.Let's act now!
【分析】高分句型一：Our planet faces urgent environmental threats like climate change and pollution，endangering our future and consuming precious resources.
译文：我们的星球正面临着气候变化和污染等紧迫的环境威胁，这些威胁不仅危及我们的未来，还消耗着宝贵的资源。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语endangering our future and consuming precious resources作状语。
高分句型二：What's more，it's important to minimize plastic use and choose reusable alternatives.
译文：此外，尽量减少塑料使用并选择可重复使用的替代品也很重要。
分析：这句话使用了it作为形式主语，不定式短语to minimize plastic use and choose reusable alternatives是真正的主语。
【解答】
Let's take action for a greener future
Good morning，everyone.Our planet faces urgent environmental threats like climate change and pollution，endangering our future and consuming precious resources.【高分句型一】Immediate action is essential!（环境问题的紧迫性）
To start with，save water and electricity daily.What's more，it's important to minimize plastic use and choose reusable alternatives. 【高分句型二】Last，recycle and compost waste properly.（提出建议）
Every effort counts!Please join me in adopting these simple habits.Together，we can build a healthier planet for everyone.Let's act now!（呼吁师生共同参与）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
3．（2025春 莆田期末）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将开设选修课《烹饪初体验》，请以学生会名义在校英语报上发布一则通知。内容包括：
（1）课程的时间、地点；
（2）课程的内容。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80个左右；
（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：
选修课 elective course；烹饪初体验 Culinary Basics
NOTICE
_______
Student Union
【答案】
Notice
The Student Union is excited to announce the launch of our new elective course，Culinary Basics.This unique course，which is designed to ignite your passion for food and cooking，will be held every Tuesday afternoon in Room 302.
This immersive course，led by professional cooks，will take you on a journey from mastering basic cooking techniques to exploring healthy diets.Not only will you gain hands﹣on experience ，but your awareness of healthy eating will be enhanced.
Interested students can register online before September 12th.Don't miss this chance to turn ingredients into joy—join us and let the culinary journey begin!
Student Union
【分析】高分句型一：This unique course，which is designed to ignite your passion for food and cooking，will be held every Tuesday afternoon in Room 302.
翻译：这门独特的课程旨在激发您对食物和烹饪的热情，将于每周二下午在302室举行。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Not only will you gain hands﹣on experience ，but your awareness of healthy eating will be enhanced.
翻译：你不仅会获得实践经验，而且你对健康饮食的意识也会增强。
分析：本句使用了not only置于句首引起的部分倒装。
【解答】
Notice
The Student Union is excited to announce the launch of our new elective course，Culinary Basics.This unique course，which is designed to ignite your passion for food and cooking，will be held every Tuesday afternoon in Room 302.【高分句型一】（课程的时间、地点）
This immersive course，led by professional cooks，will take you on a journey from mastering basic cooking techniques to exploring healthy diets.Not only will you gain hands﹣on experience ，but your awareness of healthy eating will be enhanced.【高分句型二】（课程的内容）
Interested students can register online before September 12th.Don't miss this chance to turn ingredients into joy—join us and let the culinary journey begin!（号召参与）
Student Union
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4．（2025春 吉林期末）假定你是李华，你班上周五下午组织学生去西山植树，请你为你班的英语报写一篇短文，内容包括：
（1）简述经过：
（2）分享感受。
注意：（1）词数 100 左右：
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：铲 shovel；桶 bucket
【答案】
Planting Trees in Xishan
In order to welcome the coming of the Tree Planting Day，our class organized students to plant trees in Xishan last Friday afternoon.
We gathered at the school gate and took a bus to the west mountain.On the west mountain，we assigned our own tasks.Some were responsible for shoveling soil while others were responsible for fetching water with buckets.It took us three hours to finish the tree planting work.
After planting trees，although I was very tired，I felt very happy to see the saplings in the sunlight.Because trees can benefit our environment，we should take more activities like this.
【分析】高分句型一
Some were responsible for shoveling soil while others were responsible for fetching water with buckets.
翻译：一些人负责铲土，另一些人负责用水桶取水。
分析：连词while表示前后的对比。
高分句型二
After planting trees，although I was very tired，I felt very happy to see the saplings in the sunlight.
翻译：种树后，虽然我很累，但看到阳光下树苗我感到很高兴。
分析：句子里，although引导让步状语从句I was very tired。
【解答】
Planting Trees in Xishan
In order to welcome the coming of the Tree Planting Day，our class organized students to plant trees in Xishan last Friday afternoon.（活动目的，时间和地点）
We gathered at the school gate and took a bus to the west mountain.On the west mountain，we assigned our own tasks.Some were responsible for shoveling soil while others were responsible for fetching water with buckets.【高分句型一】It took us three hours to finish the tree planting work.（简述经过）
After planting trees，although I was very tired，I felt very happy to see the saplings in the sunlight.【高分句型二】Because trees can benefit our environment，we should take more activities like this.（分享感受）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
5．（2025 湖北三模）请你以"Science And Technology Influence Our Life"为题，给校刊"英语角"栏目写一篇英文稿件，内容包括：（1）举例说明科学技术给学校教育和我们生活带来的新变化；
（2）你的感受。
注意：（1）短文词数不少于100词。
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（3）文中不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Science And Technology Influence Our Life
________
【答案】
Science And Technology Influence Our Life
Science and technology have been deeply influencing both our our life and study.
Take our school for example.Now there are several HD﹣cameras monitoring the whole campus in case of emergency or school bullying.At meal time，we can watch TV news in the dinning hall，learning the latest international and domestic events.Not only can our teachers use multimedia equipment to make their classes more lively，but also they can mark papers on the computer，which greatly improves the efficiency of paper﹣scoring.Additionally，in our daily life we can do many things conveniently，such as paying by Alipay，getting food by card，going to school by shared bike and so on.
In a word，it is the development of science and technology that makes such a comfortable and convenient life available to us.
【分析】高分句型一：At meal time，we can watch TV news in the dinning hall，learning the latest international and domestic events.
翻译：用餐时，我们可以在餐厅看电视新闻，了解最新的国际和国内事件。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语learning the latest international and domestic events作状语。
高分句型二：Not only can our teachers use multimedia equipment to make their classes more lively，but also they can mark papers on the computer，which greatly improves the efficiency of paper﹣scoring.
翻译：我们的老师不仅可以使用多媒体设备使课堂更加生动，还可以在电脑上批改试卷，大大提高了阅卷效率。
分析：本句使用了not only位于句首的部分倒装。
【解答】
Science And Technology Influence Our Life
Science and technology have been deeply influencing both our our life and study.
Take our school for example.Now there are several HD﹣cameras monitoring the whole campus in case of emergency or school bullying.At meal time，we can watch TV news in the dinning hall，learning the latest international and domestic events.【高分句型一】Not only can our teachers use multimedia equipment to make their classes more lively，but also they can mark papers on the computer，which greatly improves the efficiency of paper﹣scoring.【高分句型二】Additionally，in our daily life we can do many things conveniently，such as paying by Alipay，getting food by card，going to school by shared bike and so on.（举例说明科学技术给学校教育和我们生活带来的新变化）
In a word，it is the development of science and technology that makes such a comfortable and convenient life available to us.（感受）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6．（2025 浙江）你将参加英语课上的"一分钟演讲"活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
（1）陈述看法；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
_____
【答案】
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
It's an honor to be here and share with you the trend among a few students to film short videos on smartphones on campus.To my mind，this practice is actually quite detrimental.
Firstly，it has a negative effect on those who film videos themselves.As high school students with limited time，filming short videos wastes valuable minutes and negatively impacts memory，which is essential for learning.Secondly，it also disrupts the concentration of the fellow students.When someone is filming a video，it often draws the attention of others around them，which is not conducive to a positive learning environment.
To address this issue，firstly，we could organize a class meeting where we discuss the potential harms of short videos，thus raising awareness among our peers.Secondly，I also recommend handing phones over to the teachers or parents for safekeeping while we're at school.
I hope we all can put our phones away，develop good self﹣discipline，and fully engage in our school life.
【分析】高分句型一：As high school students with limited time，filming short videos wastes valuable minutes and negatively impacts memory，which is essential for learning.
翻译：作为时间有限的高中生，拍摄短视频浪费了宝贵的时间，而且对学习至关重要的记忆产生了负面影响。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：To address this issue，firstly，we could organize a class meeting where we discuss the potential harms of short videos，thus raising awareness among our peers.
翻译：为了解决这个问题，首先，我们可以组织一次班会，讨论短视频的潜在危害，从而提高同龄人的意识。
分析：本句运用了where引导的限制性定语从句和现在分词短语thus raising awareness among our peers作结果主语。
【解答】
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
It's an honor to be here and share with you the trend among a few students to film short videos on smartphones on campus.To my mind，this practice is actually quite detrimental.（开篇点题）
Firstly，it has a negative effect on those who film videos themselves.As high school students with limited time，filming short videos wastes valuable minutes and negatively impacts memory，which is essential for learning.【高分句型一】Secondly，it also disrupts the concentration of the fellow students.When someone is filming a video，it often draws the attention of others around them，which is not conducive to a positive learning environment.（陈述看法）
To address this issue，firstly，we could organize a class meeting where we discuss the potential harms of short videos，thus raising awareness among our peers.【高分句型二】Secondly，I also recommend handing phones over to the teachers or parents for safekeeping while we're at school.（提出建议）
I hope we all can put our phones away，develop good self﹣discipline，and fully engage in our school life.（表达希望）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
7．（2025 葫芦岛二模）近日，国家卫生健康委员会号召公众重视体重管理。请你以高中生的身份写一篇英语短文，投稿至校英文报，内容包括：
（1）你的感想；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Recently，the National Health Commission has highlighted the importance of weight management._________
【答案】 Recently，the National Health Commission has highlighted the importance of weight management.As a senior high student，I strongly agree that maintaining a healthy weight is vital for our physical and mental well﹣being.It enables us to focus better on studies and enjoy an active campus life.
To manage weight，we should adopt a balanced diet with more fruits，vegetables and whole grains，while cutting down on sugary drinks and snacks.Regular exercise like swimming or playing badminton is also essential，as it not only burns fat but also relieves stress.
As the saying goes，"A healthy body is the foundation of a lively mind."Let's act now to better our lives and build a healthier nation.
【分析】高分句型一：Regular exercise like swimming or playing badminton is also essential，as it not only burns fat but also relieves stress.
翻译：定期锻炼，如游泳或打羽毛球，也至关重要，因为它不仅能燃烧脂肪，还能缓解压力。
分析：句中运用了as引导的原因状语从句。
高分句型二：As the saying goes，"A healthy body is the foundation of a lively mind."
翻译：俗话说："健康的身体是充满活力的头脑的基础。"
分析：句中运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】 Recently，the National Health Commission has highlighted the importance of weight management.As a senior high student，I strongly agree that maintaining a healthy weight is vital for our physical and mental well﹣being.It enables us to focus better on studies and enjoy an active campus life.（我的感想）
To manage weight，we should adopt a balanced diet with more fruits，vegetables and whole grains，while cutting down on sugary drinks and snacks.Regular exercise like swimming or playing badminton is also essential，as it not only burns fat but also relieves stress. 【高分句型一】（我的建议）
As the saying goes，"A healthy body is the foundation of a lively mind."【高分句型二】Let's act now to better our lives and build a healthier nation.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．（2025 包河区校级模拟）假定你是李华，你的交换生好友Peter想报名参加校乒乓球比赛，但因担心表现不佳而犹豫不决。请你写封邮件鼓励他参加，内容包括：
（1）参赛的好处；
（2）承诺提供帮助。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you're considering the table tennis competition!Participating will definitely improve your skills and help you make new friends who share the same petitions are valuable experiences that teach us sportsmanship regardless of results.Most importantly，it's about enjoying the game you love.
Don't worry about performance.Everyone starts from scratch，and this is a great chance to challenge yourself.To help you prepare，I'll practice with you every afternoon and share serving techniques.
Let me help you register too!Just say the word.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Participating will definitely improve your skills and help you make new friends who share the same interest.
翻译：参与肯定会提高你的技能，帮助你结交志同道合的新朋友。
分析：本句使用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Competitions are valuable experiences that teach us sportsmanship regardless of results.
翻译：比赛是宝贵的经验，无论结果如何，都能教会我们体育精神。
分析：本句使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you're considering the table tennis competition!Participating will definitely improve your skills and help you make new friends who share the same interest.【高分句型一】Competitions are valuable experiences that teach us sportsmanship regardless of results.【高分句型二】Most importantly，it's about enjoying the game you love.（参赛的好处）
Don't worry about performance.Everyone starts from scratch，and this is a great chance to challenge yourself.To help you prepare，I'll practice with you every afternoon and share serving techniques.（承诺提供帮助）
Let me help you register too!Just say the word.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9．（2025 广东模拟） 假定你是李华，你马上就要高考了，心里非常紧张，请你给你写一封电子邮件，安慰自己，内容包括：
（1）不要紧张；
（2）建议；
（3）加油鼓励。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______
【答案】Dear Li Hua，
I know you are feeling very nervous about the upcoming college entrance exam.Remember，it's important to stay calm and focused.Here are a few suggestions to help you.First，make sure to get enough sleep and eat well，which are all key to your physical and mental health.Second，take short breaks during your study sessions to avoid burnout.Finally，believe in yourself and your abilities.You have worked hard and are well﹣prepared.I'm sure you will do a great job.
Keep going，Li Hua!You can do this!
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I know you are feeling very nervous about the upcoming college entrance exam.
翻译：我知道你对即将到来的高考感到非常紧张。
分析：本句使用了省略了that的宾语从句you are feeling very nervous about the upcoming college entrance exam。
高分句型二：First，make sure to get enough sleep and eat well，which are all key to your physical and mental health.
翻译：首先，确保充足的睡眠和良好的饮食习惯，这些都是你身心健康的关键。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Li Hua，
I know you are feeling very nervous about the upcoming college entrance exam.【高分句型一】Remember，it's important to stay calm and focused.（告诉自己不要紧张）Here are a few suggestions to help you.First，make sure to get enough sleep and eat well，which are all key to your physical and mental health.【高分句型二】Second，take short breaks during your study sessions to avoid burnout.Finally，believe in yourself and your abilities.You have worked hard and are well﹣prepared.I'm sure you will do a great job.（个人建议）
Keep going，Li Hua!You can do this!（加油鼓励）
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．（2025 腾冲市校级二模） （满分15分）假定你是中学生李华，你校英语俱乐部计划在暑假期间组织一次志愿活动，现向在校同学征集活动建议。请你给活动负责人Ms.White写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你的建议；（2）你的理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）可适当添加细节，以使行文完整。
Dear Ms.White，
____________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ms.White，
I am writing to propose my suggestion for the upcoming volunteer activity organized by our English Club.
I earnestly advocate that we partner with a local community center to offer free English conversation courses for children from disadvantaged families.During the two﹣week teaching sessions，our club members could design interactive lessons，incorporating games and multimedia resources to make learning engaging and effective.Additionally，this initiative provides us with an excellent opportunity to enhance our communication and teaching skills，which will also reinforce the bond between our school and the local community.
I would be very grateful if you could give my idea due consideration.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I earnestly advocate that we partner with a local community center to offer free English conversation courses for children from disadvantaged families.
翻译：我诚挚地建议我们与当地社区中心合作，为弱势家庭的儿童提供免费的英语会话课程。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Additionally，this initiative provides us with an excellent opportunity to enhance our communication and teaching skills，which will also reinforce the bond between our school and the local community.
翻译：此外，这一举措为我们提供了一个很好的机会来提高我们的沟通和教学技能，这也将加强我们学校与当地社区之间的联系。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Ms.White，
I am writing to propose my suggestion for the upcoming volunteer activity organized by our English Club.（写信目的）
I earnestly advocate that we partner with a local community center to offer free English conversation courses for children from disadvantaged families.【高分句型一】During the two﹣week teaching sessions，our club members could design interactive lessons，incorporating games and multimedia resources to make learning engaging and effective.Additionally，this initiative provides us with an excellent opportunity to enhance our communication and teaching skills，which will also reinforce the bond between our school and the local community.【高分句型二】（个人建议及理由）
I would be very grateful if you could give my idea due consideration.（表达期待）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
11．（2025 眉山三模）你校正举办主题为"An Inspiring Person"的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）人物简介及事迹；
（2）意义或启示。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）短文题目已为你写好，可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。
An Inspiring Person
【答案】
An Inspiring Person
Once inspiring people are mentioned，Helen Keller comes to my mind.Her story shows how one can overcome the most difficult challenges.
Helen Keller lost both her sight and hearing as a child.With the help of her teacher，Helen Keller learned to communicate and later became the first deaf﹣blind person to earn a college degree.She then dedicated her life to working for the benefit of those who faced disabilities.
Helen's story teaches us the power of resilience and compassion.Her determination encourages us to face challenges bravely and reminds us to help others achieve their potentials.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正在举办的征文活动投稿，谈谈一位鼓舞人心者。
高分句型一：Her story shows how one can overcome the most difficult challenges.
翻译：她的故事告诉我们如何克服最困难的挑战。
分析：本句话使用了how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：She then dedicated her life to working for the benefit of those who faced disabilities.
翻译：然后，她把自己的一生都奉献给了那些残疾人的利益。
分析：本句话使用了who引导的定语从句。
【解答】
An Inspiring Person
Once inspiring people are mentioned，Helen Keller comes to my mind.Her story shows how one can overcome the most difficult challenges.【高分句型一】（人物简介）
Helen Keller lost both her sight and hearing as a child.With the help of her teacher，Helen Keller learned to communicate and later became the first deaf﹣blind person to earn a college degree.She then dedicated her life to working for the benefit of those who faced disabilities.【高分句型二】（人物事迹）
Helen's story teaches us the power of resilience and compassion.Her determination encourages us to face challenges bravely and reminds us to help others achieve their potentials.（意义）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
12．（2025 金川区校级二模） 假定你是李华，你校校园网站英文栏目正在开展主题为"The Charming Village in My Eyes"的征文活动。请你根据以下内容投稿：
（1）生态环境；
（2）生活条件；
（3）精神面貌。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）题目已给出，不计入总词数。
The Charming Village in My Eyes
______
【答案】
The Charming Village in My Eyes
The charming village in my eyes is a place where people are living a peaceful，happy and healthy life.
Surrounded by green mountains and beautiful lakes，the village takes on a nice look with neat paths and furnished houses.In addition，villagers have easy access to clean water and the Internet.It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online，thus improving their lives.It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits.
This is the beautiful picture of the village in my mind.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇文章，参加"The Charming Village in My Eyes征文活动。"
高分句型一：The charming village in my eyes is a place where people are living a peaceful，happy and healthy life.
翻译：在我眼中，迷人的村庄是一个人们过着和平、快乐和健康生活的地方。
分析：本句话使用了where引导限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits.
翻译：和谐的环境，丰富多彩的生活，让每个人都乐观向上，精神抖擞。
分析：本句话使用了强调句。
【解答】
The Charming Village in My Eyes
The charming village in my eyes is a place where people are living a peaceful，happy and healthy life.【高分句型一】（引出话题）
Surrounded by green mountains and beautiful lakes，the village takes on a nice look with neat paths and furnished houses.In addition，villagers have easy access to clean water and the Internet.It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online，thus improving their lives.It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits.【高分句型二】（生态环境、生活条件以及精神面貌）
This is the beautiful picture of the village in my mind.（总结上文）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
13．（2025 河南模拟） 假定你是校英语学习俱乐部的主席李华。为了提高学生们的英语口语，俱乐部决定成立口语练习小组。请你写一则英文通知，内容包括：
（1）小组活动的时间、地点和内容；
（2）报名截止时间和报名方式。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
______
【答案】
Notice
To improve students' spoken English，our English Learning Club will set up speaking practice groups.
The groups will meet in the school English corner every Friday from 4：00 to 5：30 p.m.Activities include topic discussions，role﹣plays and story﹣telling.
Those who are interested should sign up by sending an email to englishclub@ by July 15.Don't miss this chance to enhance your speaking skills!
【分析】高分句型一：To improve students' spoken English，our English Learning Club will set up speaking practice groups.
翻译：为了提高学生们的英语口语水平，我们英语学习俱乐部将成立口语练习小组。
分析：句中运用了不定式短语To improve students' spoken English作目的状语。
高分句型二：Those who are interested should sign up by sending an email to englishclub@ by July 15.
翻译：感兴趣的人请在 7 月 15 日前通过发送邮件至 englishclub@ 进行报名。
分析：句中运用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Notice
To improve students' spoken English，our English Learning Club will set up speaking practice groups.【高分句型一】
The groups will meet in the school English corner every Friday from 4：00 to 5：30 p.m.Activities include topic discussions，role﹣plays and story﹣telling.（小组活动的时间、地点和内容）
Those who are interested should sign up by sending an email to englishclub@ by July 15. 【高分句型二】Don't miss this chance to enhance your speaking skills!（报名截止时间和报名方式）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
14．（2025 湖北三模）假设你是学生李华，你校即将举办一场以"绿色生活，从我做起"为主题的环保宣传活动，现面向全校学生征集环保创意。请你给校英语报纸写一封投稿，内容包括：
（1）你的创意（如活动形式、具体内容等）：
（2）呼吁大家积极参与。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右：
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor，
________
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor，
Learning that our school is scheduled to hold a campaign themed "Green Life，Start from Me"，I would like to propose the idea of hosting a "Green Fashion Show" as part of this initiative.
The show could take place in the school meeting hall where students will design and model clothes made entirely from recycled or repurposed materials，such as old clothes，plastic bags，or newspapers.Meanwhile，a panel of judges will be invited to evaluate the designs based on creativity，sustainability，and presentation，with prizes awarded to the most innovative entries.
I'm convinced that the fashion show will inspire everyone to take action for a greener future.I hope all students will participate and make this event a success!
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Learning that our school is scheduled to hold a campaign themed "Green Life，Start from Me"，I would like to propose the idea of hosting a "Green Fashion Show" as part of this initiative.
翻译：得知我校计划举办以"绿色生活，从我做起"为主题的活动，我想提议将举办 "绿色时装秀"作为该活动的一部分。
分析：句中运用了现在分词短语Learning that our school is scheduled to hold a campaign themed "Green Life，Start from Me"作状语以及that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：The show could take place in the school meeting hall where students will design and model clothes made entirely from recycled or repurposed materials，such as old clothes，plastic bags，or newspapers.
翻译：这场时装秀可在学校会议厅举办，学生们将设计并展示完全由可回收或再利用材料制成的服装，比如旧衣物、塑料袋或报纸。
分析：句中运用了where引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Editor，
Learning that our school is scheduled to hold a campaign themed "Green Life，Start from Me"，I would like to propose the idea of hosting a "Green Fashion Show" as part of this initiative.【高分句型一】
The show could take place in the school meeting hall where students will design and model clothes made entirely from recycled or repurposed materials，such as old clothes，plastic bags，or newspapers.【高分句型二】Meanwhile，a panel of judges will be invited to evaluate the designs based on creativity，sustainability，and presentation，with prizes awarded to the most innovative entries.（自己的创意）
I'm convinced that the fashion show will inspire everyone to take action for a greener future.I hope all students will participate and make this event a success!（呼吁大家积极参与）
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
15．（2025 巧家县校级模拟）你校将举办关于"Failure and Growth"的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。内容包括：
（1）你的一次失败经历；
（2）这次经历给你带来的成长。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Good morning，everyone!
________
Thank you.
【答案】 Good morning，everyone!
Today，I'd like to deliver a speech on" Failure and Growth".I believe failures are inevitable in life.A school music competition witnessed my setback experience.I had prepared diligently，but on the day of the performance，my nerves got the better of me.My voice trembled and I forgot the lyrics.The audience's whispers and disappointed expressions were a harsh reminder of my failure，which urges me to strive forward.Not only does this experience make me stronger，but it teaches me a valuable lesson.Failure is not the end but a stepping stone to success，which motivates me to practice harder，stay more focused and get better prepared for the future.
Thank you.
【分析】高分句型一：The audience's whispers and disappointed expressions were a harsh reminder of my failure，which urges me to strive forward.
翻译：观众们的窃窃私语和失望的表情严厉地提醒着我的失败，这促使我继续努力。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Not only does this experience make me stronger，but it teaches me a valuable lesson.
翻译：这段经历不仅让我变得更强大，而且给我上了宝贵的一课。
分析：本句运用了"not only...but （also）...不但……而且……"连接对等成分，并且not only放在句首引起句子的部分倒装。
【解答】 Good morning，everyone! （问候）
Today，I'd like to deliver a speech on" Failure and Growth".I believe failures are inevitable in life.A school music competition witnessed my setback experience.I had prepared diligently，but on the day of the performance，my nerves got the better of me.My voice trembled and I forgot the lyrics.The audience's whispers and disappointed expressions were a harsh reminder of my failure，which urges me to strive forward. 【高分句型一】（自己的一次失败经历）Not only does this experience make me stronger，but it teaches me a valuable lesson. 【高分句型二】Failure is not the end but a stepping stone to success，which motivates me to practice harder，stay more focused and get better prepared for the future. （这次经历给自己带来的成长）
Thank you.（感谢）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
16．（2025 山西模拟）假定你是李华。上周六你校美术社团去湿地公园进行了写生（sketch）活动，请你给你的英国朋友Cluck写封邮件分享这次经历。内容包括：
（1）你的写生经历；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Cluck，
I am writing to share with you my sketching experience in Wetland Park.
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Cluck，
I am writing to share with you my sketching experience in Wetland Park.
Last Saturday，our school's art club organized a sketching activity in the park，where we spent the day capturing the beauty of the wetland and its diverse wildlife.I particularly enjoyed sketching the serene pond and the vibrant birds.
The experience was incredibly refreshing as it was wonderful to connect with nature and practice our art skills in such a peaceful setting.After the inspiring activity，I feel more motivated to continue improving my sketching techniques.
I have attached some of my drawings to the email，hoping you will like them.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Last Saturday，our school's art club organized a sketching activity in the park，where we spent the day capturing the beauty of the wetland and its diverse wildlife.
翻译：上周六，我们学校的艺术俱乐部在公园组织了一场写生活动，我们一整天都在捕捉湿地的美景以及其中多样的野生动物。
分析：句中运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I have attached some of my drawings to the email，hoping you will like them.
翻译：我在邮件中附上了我的一些画作，希望你能喜欢。
分析：句中运用了现在分词短语hoping you will like them作状语。
【解答】Dear Cluck，
I am writing to share with you my sketching experience in Wetland Park.
Last Saturday，our school's art club organized a sketching activity in the park，where we spent the day capturing the beauty of the wetland and its diverse wildlife.【高分句型一】I particularly enjoyed sketching the serene pond and the vibrant birds.（自己的写生经历）
The experience was incredibly refreshing as it was wonderful to connect with nature and practice our art skills in such a peaceful setting.After the inspiring activity，I feel more motivated to continue improving my sketching techniques.（自己的感想）
I have attached some of my drawings to the email，hoping you will like them.【高分句型二】
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
17．（2025 攀枝花三模） 假定你是李华。目前，中国中学生每天校内体育活动时间不少于2个小时。你的英国笔友John对于央视英语频道的这条新闻很感兴趣。请你给他回封邮件，内容如下：
（1）你们学校的体育活动开展情况；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear John，
Glad to know you're interested in the news about Chinese students ' sports activities._________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John，
Glad to know you're interested in the news about Chinese students' sports activities.Our sports activities are rich and colorful.In our school，various sports activities are carried out.We have two﹣hour sports time every day.We have basketball，football and running﹣races during the two﹣hour sports time，in which students actively take part.
As for me，I really enjoy these activities.They not only make me physically stronger but also relieve my study pressure.I feel energetic and focused after exercising.I'm really glad that we have enough time for sports at school and that our school attaches so much importance to sports.
What about the sports activities in your school？Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：We have basketball，football and running﹣races during the two﹣hour sports time，in which students actively take part.
翻译：在两小时的体育活动时间里，我们有篮球、足球和赛跑活动，学生们积极参与这些活动。
分析：运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：They not only make me physically stronger but also relieve my study pressure.
翻译：它们不仅让我身体更强壮，而且缓解了我的学习压力。
分析：运用了not only...but also..."不仅...而且..."连接两个并列的谓语。
【解答】Dear John，
Glad to know you're interested in the news about Chinese students' sports activities.Our sports activities are rich and colorful.In our school，various sports activities are carried out.We have two﹣hour sports time every day.We have basketball，football and running﹣races during the two﹣hour sports time，in which students actively take part.【高分句型一】（我们学校的体育活动开展情况）
As for me，I really enjoy these activities.They not only make me physically stronger but also relieve my study pressure.【高分句型二】I feel energetic and focused after exercising.I'm really glad that we have enough time for sports at school and that our school attaches so much importance to sports.（自己的感受）
What about the sports activities in your school？Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
18．（2025 惠农区校级模拟）假定你是李华，上周六你们班参加了一次烹饪课程。请你给你的新加坡朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）一道菜肴的做法；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you a cooking class we attended last Saturday.________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you a cooking class we attended last Saturday.We learned to make Mapo Tofu.First，fry tofu cubes until golden.Then，cook minced meat with spicy bean paste.Add tofu and seasonings，and simmer briefly.
The class was a delightful experience，which was my first time to make Mapo Tofu from scratch，and I enjoyed every step of the process.The activity not only brought our class closer together but also allowed us to have a lot of fun tasting our own creations.It was an unforgettable experience.
I'm eager to try more Chinese dishes and share the joy of cooking.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The class was a delightful experience，which was my first time to make dumplings from scratch，and I enjoyed every step of the process.
翻译：这堂课是一次令人愉快的经历，这是我第一次从零开始包饺子，并且我享受这个过程的每一步。
分析：运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：The activity not only brought our class closer together but also allowed us to have a lot of fun tasting our own creations.
翻译：这次活动不仅让我们班级更加团结，而且让我们在品尝自己的创作时获得了很多乐趣。
分析：运用了not only...but also..."不仅...而且..."连接两个并列的谓语。
【解答】Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you a cooking class we attended last Saturday.We learned to make Mapo Tofu.First，fry tofu cubes until golden.Then，cook minced meat with spicy bean paste.Add tofu and seasonings，and simmer briefly.（一道菜肴"麻婆豆腐"的做法）
The class was a delightful experience，which was my first time to make Mapo Tofu from scratch，and I enjoyed every step of the process.【高分句型一】The activity not only brought our class closer together but also allowed us to have a lot of fun tasting our own creations.【高分句型二】It was an unforgettable experience.（自己的感想）
I'm eager to try more Chinese dishes and share the joy of cooking.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
19．（2025 雁峰区校级模拟）假设你是李华，学校英文报正在举办主题征文活动。请根据以下提示写一篇短文介绍清华大学人工智能医院，并谈谈你对AI医疗的看法：
（1）医院基本信息（成立时间/目标）；
（2）主要功能与技术优势；
（3）你的观点。
【答案】
AI﹣Powered Hospital of Tsinghua University
The AI﹣powered hospital of Tsinghua University，established in 2024，aims to leverage advanced technology to transform medical services.
It boasts remarkable functions.AI﹣driven systems can swiftly analyze massive medical data，like patient histories and test results，for accurate diagnosis.For instance，it identifies diseases through imaging with high precision，helping doctors detect problems earlier.Also，robotic﹣assisted surgeries enable more precise operations，reducing risks.
In my view，AI hospitals make medical services quicker and cheaper.Although some worry about privacy，strict data protection gives me confidence.I believe combining AI with human care will create a healthier future.
【分析】高分句型一：The AI﹣powered hospital of Tsinghua University，established in 2024，aims to leverage advanced technology to transform medical services.
翻译：清华大学的人工智能医院成立于2024年，旨在利用先进技术改造医疗服务。
分析：运用了过去分词短语established in 2024作后置定语。
高分句型二：For instance，it identifies diseases through imaging with high precision，helping doctors detect problems earlier.
翻译：例如，它通过成像高精度识别疾病，帮助医生更早发现问题。
分析：运用了现在分词短语helping doctors detect problems earlier作状语。
【解答】
AI﹣Powered Hospital of Tsinghua University
The AI﹣powered hospital of Tsinghua University ，established in 2024，aims to leverage advanced technology to transform medical services.【高分句型一】（医院基本信息包括成立时间和目标）
It boasts remarkable functions.AI﹣driven systems can swiftly analyze massive medical data，like patient histories and test results，for accurate diagnosis.For instance，it identifies diseases through imaging with high precision，helping doctors detect problems earlier. 【高分句型二】Also，robotic﹣assisted surgeries enable more precise operations，reducing risks.（主要功能与技术优势）
In my view，AI hospitals make medical services quicker and cheaper.Although some worry about privacy，strict data protection gives me confidence.I believe combining AI with human care will create a healthier future.（自己的观点）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
20．（2025 河南模拟） 许多学生花费大量时间背诵英语范文以期提高写作技能，你认为这样存在问题。请你给校英语报学习园地投稿讨论此事，内容包括：
（1）分析弊端；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Many students spend too much time memorizing English model essays，hoping to improve their writing skills.
______
【答案】 Many students spend too much time memorizing English model essays，hoping to improve their writing skills.However，this approach leads to dependency rather than genuine competence.Rote memorization destroys creativity and critical thinking，leaving students unprepared for unfamiliar topics.Worse still，it prioritizes imitation over understanding grammar，vocabulary，and logical flow.
To address this，students should shift focus to active practice.Instead of memorizing entire essays，analyze their structures—introductions，transitions and conclusions—to grasp writing patterns.Regularly write short paragraphs on diverse topics，applying learned phrases thoughtfully，and seek feedback from teachers or peers to identify weaknesses.
Remember，writing is a skill honed through consistent practice，not passive copying.
【分析】高分句型一：To address this，students should shift focus to active practice.
翻译：为了解决这个问题，学生应该把重点转移到积极的实践上。
分析：运用了动词不定式短语to active practice作目的状语。
高分句型二：Instead of memorizing entire essays，analyze their structures—introductions，transitions and conclusions—to grasp writing patterns.
翻译：与其记住整篇文章，不如分析它们的结构——介绍、转换和结论——以掌握写作模式。
分析：运用了动名词短语memorizing entire essays作宾语。
【解答】 Many students spend too much time memorizing English model essays，hoping to improve their writing skills.However，this approach leads to dependency rather than genuine competence.Rote memorization destroys creativity and critical thinking，leaving students unprepared for unfamiliar topics.Worse still，it prioritizes imitation over understanding grammar，vocabulary，and logical flow.（分析弊端）
To address this，students should shift focus to active practice.【高分句型一】Instead of memorizing entire essays，analyze their structures—introductions，transitions and conclusions—to grasp writing patterns.【高分句型二】Regularly write short paragraphs on diverse topics，applying learned phrases thoughtfully，and seek feedback from teachers or peers to identify weaknesses.（提出建议）
Remember，writing is a skill honed through consistent practice，not passive copying.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
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