2026年高考英语一轮复习 应用文写作（含答案解析）
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高考英语一轮复习 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 射阳县校级模拟）假如你是晨光中学的李津，5月18日为国际博物馆日，学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为The Power Of Museums的征文活动，根据你搜集的以下图表信息，写一篇稿件。
内容：
（1）简单分析图表展示的现象；
（2）简要分析该现象产生的原因；
（3）鼓励大家走进博物馆。
要求：
（1）词数不少于80；
（2）可以适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
______
2．（2025 郫都区三模）假定你是李明，你校英语报正举办以"AI 改变生活"为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）AI在生活中的运用；
（2）个人感悟。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
AI Changes Life
________
3．（2025 宜章县校级模拟） 第十届"书香节"将在学校举行。假如你是李华，为响应"书香节"活动，请你写一篇演讲稿。
要点：
（1）读书的益处。get knowledge；open our minds；make us confident and happy
（2）结合自身经验谈谈要怎么读书、读什么书。read proper books；read in a good way；think more while reading
（3）倡议大家都读书。develop a good habit of reading；make reading part of our life
注意：
（1）词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello，everyone!Today my topic is reading.
______
4．（2025 琼海校级一模）假如你是李华，校报英语论坛（English Forum）公布了最新海报和征稿启示。请结合海报，以"Apps Kill Time"为题，写一篇文章投稿。内容包括：
（1）你的理解；
（2）发出倡议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Apps Kill Time
_______
5．（2025 闽清县校级三模）口语课上，外教组织同学们讨论："假如你可以带一件现代物品穿越到古代，你会带什么？"请你准备一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）简介物品；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello，everyone!
________
6．（2025 临泉县校级三模）上周你校组织学生去食品厂参观，观看了月饼的制作过程。请你写一篇短文向校报英文栏目投稿，报道此事，内容包括：
（1）活动经过；
（2）活动评价。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
7．（2025 淇滨区校级三模）假设你是李华，得知美国笔友Tom在学校机器人比赛中获第一名，请写信祝贺他，同时告知你将代表班级参加校科学展览，并向他征求建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom，
Yours truly，
Li Hua
8．（2025 西峰区校级三模） 假定你是李华，上周你的外教Mr Green布置了一份家庭作业，截止时间是本周五，但是你因故不能如期提交。请你给Mr Green写一封邮件，申请延期提交作业，要点如下：
（1）表示歉意；
（2）解释原因；
（3）申请延期。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Green，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
9．（2025 宁德三模）假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，下周五你校将在校园农场（Campus Farm）开展劳动实践活动，请你用英语写一则通知邀请全校师生参与活动，内容包括：
（1）活动内容；
（2）注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
NOTICE
Dear teachers and students，
________
Students' Union
May 9th，2025
10．（2025 汕头一模）假定你是李华，针对校园常有学生受伤的现象，外教Allen要求学生分组完成一份校园生活急救手册。请你代表小组写封邮件给Allen，内容包括：
（1）汇报任务完成情况；
（2）询问外教改进意见。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：急救手册a first﹣aid manual
Dear Allen，
________
11．（2025 榕江县校级模拟）假定你是李华，在高三毕业之际，想邀请外教Amy来参加你们班的毕业典礼（graduation ceremony）。请你代表全班同学给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）时间、地点；
（2）活动内容；
（3）希望她在毕业典礼上发言。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增添细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Amy，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
12．（2025 琼海校级模拟）假定你是李华，你校交换生Jim对你校即将举行的"礼物伴成长：山区儿童关爱行动"活动很感兴趣，发邮件向你询问关于送礼物的建议，请你用英文回复邮件，内容包括：
（1）推荐礼物；
（2）推荐该礼物的原因。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
13．（2025 辽宁三模）假定你是李华，你的英国交换生朋友Eric报名参加了以"绿色校园"为主题的中文演讲比赛。他写信向你求助。请你写一封回信，内容包括：
（1）你的建议；
（2）你的祝愿。
注意：
（1）字数80词左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
14．（2025 襄阳三模）你校上周末举行了一次以"健康第一"为主题的登山比赛，校英文报现正以此为主题举行征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）活动当天的天气情况；
（2）比赛的过程与结果；
（3）你的感受。
注意：（1）短文长度100词左右；
（2）标题和开头句已为你写好，不计入总词数。
A Hill﹣climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students' awareness of body building，a hill﹣climbing competition，with the theme of "Health Is First"，was held last Sunday by our school.__________
15．（2025 九江三模） 假定你是李华，在"世界环境日"到来之际，你校英文报将举办以"If the Earth Could Speak"为主题的英语征文活动。请你以地球的口吻写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
（1）对人类某些行为的感受；
（2）对人类的提醒和希望。
注意：
（1）词数80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A Cry from Mother Earth：Listen Up，Humans!
Dear humans，
I have watched over you for hundreds of thousands of years.
______
16．（2025 江西模拟） 假定你是李华，你校英语报正在举办以"What Abilities Should We Prepare for Future Careers？"为题的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
（1）列举必备的能力；
（2）阐述理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
What Abilities Should We Prepare for Future Careers？
______________
17．（2025 河南三模） 假定你是李华，近日，你发现同学们参与外教Thomas组织的"英语月"活动的兴趣不高，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）说明问题；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Thomas，
______
Yours truly，
Li Hua
18．（2025 巴中模拟）假如你是李华，你校外籍老师Linda计划回国，她想给妈妈送一份具有中国传统文化特色的礼物，向你询问，请你给她回复邮件，推荐并介绍礼物。内容包括：
（1）礼物名称；
（2）礼物特点及推荐理由；
（3）向她家人表示祝愿并祝她旅途愉快。
Dear Linda，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
19．（2025 黄梅县校级模拟）假定你是李华，你们班开展了主题为"How to Be a Qualified Volunteer"的课前一分钟英语演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右：
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning，
I am very pleased to talk about how to be a qualified volunteer.________
20．（2025 黄梅县校级模拟）假定你是李华，你校的交换生Jack想请你教他学习中国象棋，发邮件跟你约时间。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）上课时间及安排；
（2）提前需做的准备。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
高考英语一轮复习 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 射阳县校级模拟）假如你是晨光中学的李津，5月18日为国际博物馆日，学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为The Power Of Museums的征文活动，根据你搜集的以下图表信息，写一篇稿件。
内容：
（1）简单分析图表展示的现象；
（2）简要分析该现象产生的原因；
（3）鼓励大家走进博物馆。
要求：
（1）词数不少于80；
（2）可以适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
______
【答案】
The Power of Museums
As vividly shown in the chart，there has been a remarkable increase in the number of visitors to museums in China.In 2014，the number was merely 720 million，while in 2024，it soared to 1.4 billion.
This trend can be attributed to several factors.Firstly，museums nowadays present a rich variety of exhibitions.They display not only historical relics but also artworks and modern scientific achievements，catering to diverse interests.Secondly，museums have enhanced interactivity.Visitors can engage in hands﹣on activities like virtual reality experiences and DIY workshops，making their visits more immersive and appealing.
Since museums are so attractive and beneficial，why not pay them a visit？Whether you're a history enthusiast，an art lover，or simply eager to learn，museums have something for everyone.Let's step into museums and explore the wonderful world they offer!
【分析】高分句型一：Visitors can engage in hands﹣on activities like virtual reality experiences and DIY workshops，making their visits more immersive and appealing.
翻译：游客们可以参与虚拟现实体验和 DIY 工作坊等实践性活动，这让他们的参观更具沉浸感和吸引力。
分析：句中运用了现在分词短语making their visits more immersive and appealing作状语。
高分句型二：Whether you're a history enthusiast，an art lover，or simply eager to learn，museums have something for everyone.
翻译：无论你是历史爱好者、艺术迷，还是单纯渴望学习新知识，博物馆都有适合每个人的东西。
分析：句中运用了whether...or...引导的让步状语从句。
【解答】
The Power of Museums
As vividly shown in the chart，there has been a remarkable increase in the number of visitors to museums in China.In 2014，the number was merely 720 million，while in 2024，it soared to 1.4 billion.（简单分析图表展示的现象）
This trend can be attributed to several factors.Firstly，museums nowadays present a rich variety of exhibitions.They display not only historical relics but also artworks and modern scientific achievements，catering to diverse interests.Secondly，museums have enhanced interactivity.Visitors can engage in hands﹣on activities like virtual reality experiences and DIY workshops，making their visits more immersive and appealing.【高分句型一】（简要分析该现象产生的原因）
Since museums are so attractive and beneficial，why not pay them a visit？Whether you're a history enthusiast，an art lover，or simply eager to learn，museums have something for everyone.【高分句型二】Let's step into museums and explore the wonderful world they offer!（鼓励大家走进博物馆）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
2．（2025 郫都区三模）假定你是李明，你校英语报正举办以"AI 改变生活"为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）AI在生活中的运用；
（2）个人感悟。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
AI Changes Life
________
【答案】
AI Changes Life
Artificial Intelligence （AI） has become an integral part of our daily lives.From voice assistants like Siri and Alexa to personalized recommendations on streaming platforms，AI simplifies tasks and enhances efficiency.It also powers innovations in healthcare，education，and transportation，which makes life more convenient and connected.
Personally，I find AI fascinating.It not only saves time but also opens up new possibilities for the future.However，it's important to use AI responsibly to ensure it benefits society as a whole.AI is truly changing the way we live，and I'm excited to see what it brings next.
【分析】高分句型一：It also powers innovations in healthcare，education，and transportation，which makes life more convenient and connected.
翻译：它还推动了医疗保健、教育和交通方面的创新，使生活更加便利和互联。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It not only saves time but also opens up new possibilities for the future.
翻译：它不仅节省了时间，而且为未来开辟了新的可能性。
分析：本句运用了"not only...but also...不但……而且……"连接对等成分。
【解答】
AI Changes Life
Artificial Intelligence （AI） has become an integral part of our daily lives.From voice assistants like Siri and Alexa to personalized recommendations on streaming platforms，AI simplifies tasks and enhances efficiency.It also powers innovations in healthcare，education，and transportation，which makes life more convenient and connected.【高分句型一】（AI在生活中的运用）
Personally，I find AI fascinating.It not only saves time but also opens up new possibilities for the future.【高分句型二】However，it's important to use AI responsibly to ensure it benefits society as a whole.AI is truly changing the way we live，and I'm excited to see what it brings next.（个人感悟）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
3．（2025 宜章县校级模拟） 第十届"书香节"将在学校举行。假如你是李华，为响应"书香节"活动，请你写一篇演讲稿。
要点：
（1）读书的益处。get knowledge；open our minds；make us confident and happy
（2）结合自身经验谈谈要怎么读书、读什么书。read proper books；read in a good way；think more while reading
（3）倡议大家都读书。develop a good habit of reading；make reading part of our life
注意：
（1）词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello，everyone!Today my topic is reading.
______
【答案】Hello，everyone!Today my topic is reading.Firstly，reading can help us get knowledge from books.Besides，it can open our minds and it is good for us to study.What's more，reading can make us confident and happy.We all know reading is good，but how can we read books correctly？
First，we should read proper books，which are suitable for us and can improve ourselves.Second，we should read in a good way，which means we should think more while we are reading.
In my opinion，we should develop a good habit of reading.So let's start reading and make reading part of our life.
【分析】高分句型一：First，we should read proper books，which are suitable for us and can improve ourselves.
翻译：首先，我们应该读合适的书，这些书适合我们，可以提高我们自己。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Second，we should read in a good way，which means we should think more while we are reading.
翻译：第二，我们应该以一种好的方式阅读，这意味着我们在阅读时应该多思考。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句以及while引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】Hello，everyone!Today my topic is reading.Firstly，reading can help us get knowledge from books.Besides，it can open our minds and it is good for us to study.What's more，reading can make us confident and happy.We all know reading is good，but how can we read books correctly？（读书的益处）
First，we should read proper books，which are suitable for us and can improve ourselves.【高分句型一】Second，we should read in a good way，which means we should think more while we are reading.【高分句型二】（结合自身经验谈谈要怎么读书、读什么书）
In my opinion，we should develop a good habit of reading.So let's start reading and make reading part of our life.（倡议大家都读书）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4．（2025 琼海校级一模）假如你是李华，校报英语论坛（English Forum）公布了最新海报和征稿启示。请结合海报，以"Apps Kill Time"为题，写一篇文章投稿。内容包括：
（1）你的理解；
（2）发出倡议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Apps Kill Time
_______
【答案】
Apps Kill Time
In modern society，mobile phones have become an indispensable part of our lives，which brings us great convenience and rich entertainment.However，the excessive use of mobile phone apps also has a negative impact on our lives.I often spend hours watching short videos or browsing websites，completely losing track of time that could have been spent on meaningful activities and unaware of the time slipping away.
To reclaim our time，I appeal to everyone to use apps wisely.We can try to set limits，explore alternative activities and engage in more face﹣to﹣face conversations with our families and friends.After all，time killed is time wasted and lost forever.
【分析】高分句型一：In modern society，mobile phones have become an indispensable part of our lives，which brings us great convenience and rich entertainment.
翻译：在现代社会，手机已成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分，它给我们带来了极大的便利和丰富的娱乐体验。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I often spend hours watching short videos or browsing websites，completely losing track of time that could have been spent on meaningful activities and unaware of the time slipping away.
翻译：我常常花好几个小时看短视频或浏览网页，完全没意识到时间在不知不觉中流逝，而这些时间本可以用来做更有意义的事情。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语completely losing track of time that could have been spent on meaningful activities and unaware of the time slipping away作状语和that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Apps Kill Time
In modern society，mobile phones have become an indispensable part of our lives，which brings us great convenience and rich entertainment.【高分句型一】However，the excessive use of mobile phone apps also has a negative impact on our lives.I often spend hours watching short videos or browsing websites，completely losing track of time that could have been spent on meaningful activities and unaware of the time slipping away.【高分句型二】（个人理解）
To reclaim our time，I appeal to everyone to use apps wisely.We can try to set limits，explore alternative activities and engage in more face﹣to﹣face conversations with our families and friends.After all，time killed is time wasted and lost forever.（发出倡议）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
5．（2025 闽清县校级三模）口语课上，外教组织同学们讨论："假如你可以带一件现代物品穿越到古代，你会带什么？"请你准备一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）简介物品；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello，everyone!
________
【答案】Hello，everyone!
If I could travel back to ancient times and bring one modern item，I'd bring a solar﹣powered flashlight.It is a lighting device that uses solar energy to charge its batteries.When exposed to sunlight，the solar panel will convert the light energy into electrical energy，which is then stored in the flashlight's batteries.
In ancient times，lighting was often limited to torches，candles，or oil lamps，which were inconvenient and carried the risk of fire.A solar﹣powered flashlight would provide a clean and long﹣lasting source of light，reducing the reliance on flammable materials.Besides，it would enable ancient people to engage in a wider variety of activities，such as traveling at night or working in dark places.
Just imagine how amazed people would be to see such a useful device!
【分析】高分句型一：It is a lighting device that uses solar energy to charge its batteries.
译文：它是一种利用太阳能为电池充电的照明设备。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：In ancient times，lighting was often limited to torches，candles，or oil lamps，which were inconvenient and carried the risk of fire.
译文：在古代，照明通常仅限于手电筒、蜡烛或油灯，这既不方便，又有火灾的风险。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Hello，everyone!
If I could travel back to ancient times and bring one modern item，I'd bring a solar﹣powered flashlight.It is a lighting device that uses solar energy to charge its batteries.【高分句型一】When exposed to sunlight，the solar panel will convert the light energy into electrical energy，which is then stored in the flashlight's batteries.（简介物品）
In ancient times，lighting was often limited to torches，candles，or oil lamps，which were inconvenient and carried the risk of fire.【高分句型二】A solar﹣powered flashlight would provide a clean and long﹣lasting source of light，reducing the reliance on flammable materials.Besides，it would enable ancient people to engage in a wider variety of activities，such as traveling at night or working in dark places.（理由）
Just imagine how amazed people would be to see such a useful device!（总结）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
6．（2025 临泉县校级三模）上周你校组织学生去食品厂参观，观看了月饼的制作过程。请你写一篇短文向校报英文栏目投稿，报道此事，内容包括：
（1）活动经过；
（2）活动评价。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】 Last Friday，our school organized a visit to a food factory for us students with the goal of learning about food processing and food safety procedures.
Upon our arrival，we were warmly welcomed by the staff.The director then gave a brief introduction to the history of the factory.After that，we were shown around the factory，where we observed how mooncakes were made.At the end of the visit，we were invited to taste the freshly made mooncakes.
The activity was well﹣received by all the students.Not only did it provide us with insight into the traditional food﹣making process but it allowed us to appreciate the hard work and skill involved in creating these delicious treats.We hope our school will arrange more such informative activities in the future.
【分析】高分句型一：After that，we were shown around the factory，where we observed how mooncakes were made.
翻译：之后，我们参观了工厂，在那里我们观察了月饼是如何制作的。
分析：本句使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句；how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Not only did it provide us with insight into the traditional food﹣making process but it allowed us to appreciate the hard work and skill involved in creating these delicious treats.
翻译：它不仅让我们深入了解了传统的食品制作过程，还让我们欣赏了制作这些美味佳肴所涉及的辛勤工作和技巧。
分析：本句使用了not only位于句首的部分倒装。
【解答】 Last Friday，our school organized a visit to a food factory for us students with the goal of learning about food processing and food safety procedures.
Upon our arrival，we were warmly welcomed by the staff.The director then gave a brief introduction to the history of the factory.After that，we were shown around the factory，where we observed how mooncakes were made.【高分句型一】At the end of the visit，we were invited to taste the freshly made mooncakes.（活动经过）
The activity was well﹣received by all the students.Not only did it provide us with insight into the traditional food﹣making process but it allowed us to appreciate the hard work and skill involved in creating these delicious treats.【高分句型二】We hope our school will arrange more such informative activities in the future.（活动评价）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
7．（2025 淇滨区校级三模）假设你是李华，得知美国笔友Tom在学校机器人比赛中获第一名，请写信祝贺他，同时告知你将代表班级参加校科学展览，并向他征求建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom，
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom，
I am glad to hear that you won the first place in the robotics challenge!Congratulations on this incredible achievement!Your hard work and creativity have truly paid off，and I'm so proud of you.
As you know，I'm about to participate in our school's science fair representing my class.I'm both excited and a bit nervous.Working on a project related to renewable energy，I'm not sure how to make it stand out.Could you share some tips on how to effectively showcase my project，capture the audience's attention，and answer potential questions？Your experience and insights on these aspects would be invaluable.
I'd really appreciate any advice you can offer.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：As you know，I'm about to participate in our school's science fair representing my class.
翻译：如你所知，我即将代表我的班级参加我们学校的科学博览会。
分析：本句使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句及现在分词短语representing my class作状语。
高分句型二：Working on a project related to renewable energy，I'm not sure how to make it stand out.
翻译：忙于一个与可再生能源相关的项目，我不知道如何让它脱颖而出。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语working on a project related to renewable energy作状语。
【解答】Dear Tom，
I am glad to hear that you won the first place in the robotics challenge!Congratulations on this incredible achievement!Your hard work and creativity have truly paid off，and I'm so proud of you.（表达祝贺）
As you know，I'm about to participate in our school's science fair representing my class.【高分句型一】I'm both excited and a bit nervous.Working on a project related to renewable energy，I'm not sure how to make it stand out.【高分句型二】Could you share some tips on how to effectively showcase my project，capture the audience's attention，and answer potential questions？Your experience and insights on these aspects would be invaluable.（征求建议）
I'd really appreciate any advice you can offer.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.（期待回复）
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．（2025 西峰区校级三模） 假定你是李华，上周你的外教Mr Green布置了一份家庭作业，截止时间是本周五，但是你因故不能如期提交。请你给Mr Green写一封邮件，申请延期提交作业，要点如下：
（1）表示歉意；
（2）解释原因；
（3）申请延期。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Green，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr Green，
I am writing to express my deep apology for not being able to submit my homework on Friday.
As one of the representatives of our school，I am scheduled to participate in a Poetry Reading Competition，which does not leave enough time for my homework.I sincerely hope you can offer me another chance and let me submit my homework next Monday.
Once again，I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.I hope you can accept my apology，and thank you for your understanding.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：As one of the representatives of our school，I am scheduled to participate in a Poetry Reading Competition，which does not leave enough time for my homework.
翻译：作为我们学校的代表之一，我计划参加诗歌阅读比赛，这导致没有足够的时间做作业。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I sincerely hope you can offer me another chance and let me submit my homework next Monday.
翻译：我衷心希望你能再给我一次机会，让我下周一提交作业。
分析：本句使用了省略了that的宾语从句you can offer me another chance and let me submit my homework next Monday。
【解答】Dear Mr Green，
I am writing to express my deep apology for not being able to submit my homework on Friday.（表示歉意）
As one of the representatives of our school，I am scheduled to participate in a Poetry Reading Competition，which does not leave enough time for my homework.【高分句型一】（解释原因）I sincerely hope you can offer me another chance and let me submit my homework next Monday.【高分句型二】（申请延期）
Once again，I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.I hope you can accept my apology，and thank you for your understanding.（再次致歉）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9．（2025 宁德三模）假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，下周五你校将在校园农场（Campus Farm）开展劳动实践活动，请你用英语写一则通知邀请全校师生参与活动，内容包括：
（1）活动内容；
（2）注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
NOTICE
Dear teachers and students，
________
Students' Union
May 9th，2025
【答案】
NOTICE
Dear teachers and students，
To cultivate practical skills and teamwork spirit，our school will hold a labor practice activity at the Campus Farm next Friday.All members of our school are sincerely invited to join this meaningful event.
The activity includes three main tasks：planting vegetable seedlings，clearing weeds in the crop area，and learning eco﹣friendly farming methods.For safety and efficiency，please wear long﹣sleeved clothes，gloves，and sports shoes.
The event will run from 2：00 pm to 4：30 pm.Gather at the farm entrance by 1：50 pm.Let's work together to make our campus greener!
Students' Union
May 9th，2025
【分析】高分句型一：To cultivate practical skills and teamwork spirit，our school will hold a labor practice activity at the Campus Farm next Friday.
翻译：为了培养实践技能和团队合作精神，我们学校将于下周五在校园农场举行劳动实践活动。
分析：运用了不定式To cultivate作目的状语。
高分句型二：All members of our school are sincerely invited to join this meaningful event.
翻译：我们学校诚挚地邀请所有成员参加这一有意义的活动。
分析：运用了不定式to join作主语补足语。
【解答】
NOTICE
Dear teachers and students，
To cultivate practical skills and teamwork spirit，our school will hold a labor practice activity at the Campus Farm next Friday.All members of our school are sincerely invited to join this meaningful event.
The activity includes three main tasks：planting vegetable seedlings，clearing weeds in the crop area，and learning eco﹣friendly farming methods.For safety and efficiency，please wear long﹣sleeved clothes，gloves，and sports shoes.（活动内容）
The event will run from 2：00 pm to 4：30 pm.Gather at the farm entrance by 1：50 pm.Let's work together to make our campus greener!（注意事项）
Students' Union
May 9th，2025
【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．（2025 汕头一模）假定你是李华，针对校园常有学生受伤的现象，外教Allen要求学生分组完成一份校园生活急救手册。请你代表小组写封邮件给Allen，内容包括：
（1）汇报任务完成情况；
（2）询问外教改进意见。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：急救手册a first﹣aid manual
Dear Allen，
________
【答案】Dear Allen，
I'm writing on behalf of our group to report that we've completed the campus life first aid manual.We've included common injuries at school and corresponding first aid methods.It includes detailed steps for immediate response and contact information for emergency services.
However，we' re not sure if our content is accurate and comprehensive.We would greatly appreciate your feedback and suggestions for improvement.Your expertise and guidance would be invaluable in making this manual more effective and user﹣friendly.Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm writing on behalf of our group to report that we've completed the campus life first aid manual.
译文：我代表我们小组写信报告，我们已经完成了校园生活急救手册。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：However，we' re not sure if our content is accurate and comprehensive.
译文：然而，我们不确定我们的内容是否准确和全面。
分析：这句话使用了if引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Allen，
I'm writing on behalf of our group to report that we've completed the campus life first aid manual.【高分句型一】We've included common injuries at school and corresponding first aid methods.It includes detailed steps for immediate response and contact information for emergency services.（汇报任务完成情况）
However，we' re not sure if our content is accurate and comprehensive.【高分句型二】We would greatly appreciate your feedback and suggestions for improvement.Your expertise and guidance would be invaluable in making this manual more effective and user﹣friendly.Thank you for your attention to this matter.（询问外教改进意见）
Looking forward to your reply.（盼望）
Best regards，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
11．（2025 榕江县校级模拟）假定你是李华，在高三毕业之际，想邀请外教Amy来参加你们班的毕业典礼（graduation ceremony）。请你代表全班同学给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）时间、地点；
（2）活动内容；
（3）希望她在毕业典礼上发言。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增添细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Amy，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Amy，
On behalf of our class，I'm writing to invite you to our graduation ceremony，which will take place in the school auditorium at 9 a.m.on June 30.
We've prepared performances like singing and poem reciting，and after that，we'll get our graduation certificates.It would mean a lot to us if you could give a speech to inspire us.
Looking forward to your presence.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：On behalf of our class，I'm writing to invite you to our graduation ceremony，which will take place in the school auditorium at 9 a.m.on June 30.
翻译：我代表我们班写信邀请您参加我们的毕业典礼，典礼将于 6 月 30 日上午 9 点在学校礼堂举行。
分析：句中运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It would mean a lot to us if you could give a speech to inspire us.
翻译：如果您能发表一篇鼓舞我们的演讲，这对我们来说意义非凡。
分析：句中运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Amy，
On behalf of our class，I'm writing to invite you to our graduation ceremony，which will take place in the school auditorium at 9 a.m.on June 30.【高分句型一】（时间、地点）
We've prepared performances like singing and poem reciting，and after that，we'll get our graduation certificates. （活动内容）It would mean a lot to us if you could give a speech to inspire us.【高分句型二】（希望她在毕业典礼上发言）
Looking forward to your presence.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
12．（2025 琼海校级模拟）假定你是李华，你校交换生Jim对你校即将举行的"礼物伴成长：山区儿童关爱行动"活动很感兴趣，发邮件向你询问关于送礼物的建议，请你用英文回复邮件，内容包括：
（1）推荐礼物；
（2）推荐该礼物的原因。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim，
Learning you are wondering what to choose for the children in the mountainous area as gifts，I'd like to give you some advice.
Personally，I recommend dictionaries.As we know，the mountainous area is short of learning resources.As a result，the children there are eager for books.Besides，a dictionary will not only broaden their horizons but also help them learn more new information.I'm convinced that it will be of great value to them.
If you have any further questions，please don't hesitate to contact me.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm convinced that it will be of great value to them.
翻译：我相信这对他们来说将是非常有价值的。
分析：运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：If you have any further questions，please don't hesitate to contact me.
翻译：如果您有任何其他问题，请随时与我联系。
分析：运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
Learning you are wondering what to choose for the children in the mountainous area as gifts，I'd like to give you some advice.（写邮件目的）
Personally，I recommend dictionaries.（推荐礼物）As we know，the mountainous area is short of learning resources.As a result，the children there are eager for books.Besides，a dictionary will not only broaden their horizons but also help them learn more new information.I'm convinced that it will be of great value to them.【高分句型一】（推荐该礼物的原因）
If you have any further questions，please don't hesitate to contact me.【高分句型二】Looking forward to your early reply.（期望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
13．（2025 辽宁三模）假定你是李华，你的英国交换生朋友Eric报名参加了以"绿色校园"为主题的中文演讲比赛。他写信向你求助。请你写一封回信，内容包括：
（1）你的建议；
（2）你的祝愿。
注意：
（1）字数80词左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric，
Having learned you've signed up for a Chinese Speech Competition on the theme of "Green Campus，" and that you're hoping for some assistance，I'm writing to share a few recommendations.
First and foremost，start your speech with a short story or real﹣life example，enabling you to capture the audience's attention right from the beginning.Furthermore，focus on practical ideas，which are closely related to campus life，such as saving energy，reducing plastic use，and protecting green spaces.Last but not least，not only should you use simple Chinese expressions，but you should also speak slowly to make your ideas clearer and more understandable.
I'm confident that with your enthusiasm and effort，you will deliver an outstanding speech.Wishing you all the best in the competition.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Furthermore，focus on practical ideas，which are closely related to campus life，such as saving energy，reducing plastic use，and protecting green spaces.
翻译：此外，应聚焦于与校园生活密切相关的实用理念，例如节约能源、减少塑料使用以及保护绿地等。
分析：句中运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Last but not least，not only should you use simple Chinese expressions，but you should also speak slowly to make your ideas clearer and more understandable.
翻译：最后同样重要的一点是，你不仅要使用简单的中文表达，还应该放慢语速，让自己的想法更清晰、更易懂。
分析：句中运用了not only...but also..."不但...而且..."连接并列句，not only置于句首句中部分倒装结构。
【解答】Dear Eric，
Having learned you've signed up for a Chinese Speech Competition on the theme of "Green Campus，" and that you're hoping for some assistance，I'm writing to share a few recommendations.
First and foremost，start your speech with a short story or real﹣life example，enabling you to capture the audience's attention right from the beginning.Furthermore，focus on practical ideas，which are closely related to campus life，such as saving energy，reducing plastic use，and protecting green spaces.【高分句型一】Last but not least，not only should you use simple Chinese expressions，but you should also speak slowly to make your ideas clearer and more understandable.【高分句型二】（自己的建议）
I'm confident that with your enthusiasm and effort，you will deliver an outstanding speech.Wishing you all the best in the competition.（自己的祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
14．（2025 襄阳三模）你校上周末举行了一次以"健康第一"为主题的登山比赛，校英文报现正以此为主题举行征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）活动当天的天气情况；
（2）比赛的过程与结果；
（3）你的感受。
注意：（1）短文长度100词左右；
（2）标题和开头句已为你写好，不计入总词数。
A Hill﹣climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students' awareness of body building，a hill﹣climbing competition，with the theme of "Health Is First"，was held last Sunday by our school.__________
【答案】
A Hill﹣climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students' awareness of body building，a hill﹣climbing competition，with the theme of "Health Is First"，was held last Sunday by our school.
It was a sunny day.All students who were joyful gathered on the school gate first.Then，after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules，we set off excitedly at 7：30.All the way，we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of nature and shared interesting stories besides trying our best to move up﹣ward.It was at about 10：00 that we all reached the top of the hill.The top three students come from class one，four，and nine.
Although not receiving an award，I wasn't disappointed at all，for I had received better health and friendship.
【分析】高分句型一：All students who were joyful gathered on the school gate first.
翻译：所有的学生都兴高采烈地聚集在校门口。
分析：本句运用了who引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：Although not receiving an award，I wasn't disappointed at all，for I had received better health and friendship.
翻译：虽然没有获奖，但我一点也不失望，因为我得到了更好的健康和友谊。
分析：本句运用了although引导的让步状语从句和for引导的原因状语从句。
【解答】
A Hill﹣climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students' awareness of body building，a hill﹣climbing competition，with the theme of "Health Is First"，was held last Sunday by our school.（登山比赛的目的）
It was a sunny day.（活动当天的天气情况）All students who were joyful gathered on the school gate first.【高分句型一】Then，after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules，we set off excitedly at 7：30.All the way，we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of nature and shared interesting stories besides trying our best to move up﹣ward.It was at about 10：00 that we all reached the top of the hill.The top three students come from class one，four，and nine.（比赛的过程与结果）
Although not receiving an award，I wasn't disappointed at all，for I had received better health and friendship.【高分句型二】（作者的感受）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
15．（2025 九江三模） 假定你是李华，在"世界环境日"到来之际，你校英文报将举办以"If the Earth Could Speak"为主题的英语征文活动。请你以地球的口吻写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
（1）对人类某些行为的感受；
（2）对人类的提醒和希望。
注意：
（1）词数80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A Cry from Mother Earth：Listen Up，Humans!
Dear humans，
I have watched over you for hundreds of thousands of years.
______
【答案】
A Cry from Mother Earth：Listen Up，Humans!
Dear humans，
I have watched over you for hundreds of thousands of years.I have gifted you with fresh air，clean water，and fertile soil to sustain your being.But now，I am gasping for breath.
Open your eyes!You cut down my forests，leaving numerous creatures homeless.You pour poison into the oceans，making the waters lifeless.You choke the skies with smog，turning my air harmful.I feel hurt，exhausted，and ignored.
I still hope you will change from today.Plant trees，conserve water，and embrace clean energy.Only in this way，can you and I reestablish a shared world，where we can coexist in harmony.
【分析】高分句型一：You cut down my forests，leaving numerous creatures homeless.
翻译：你砍伐了我的森林，让许多生物无家可归。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语leaving numerous creatures homeless作状语。
高分句型二：Only in this way，can you and I reestablish a shared world，where we can coexist in harmony.
翻译：只有这样，你和我才能重建一个共同的世界，在那里我们可以和谐共处。
分析：本句使用了"only+状语"置于句首引起的部分倒装及where引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】
A Cry from Mother Earth：Listen Up，Humans!
Dear humans，
I have watched over you for hundreds of thousands of years.I have gifted you with fresh air，clean water，and fertile soil to sustain your being.But now，I am gasping for breath.
Open your eyes!You cut down my forests，leaving numerous creatures homeless.【高分句型一】You pour poison into the oceans，making the waters lifeless.You choke the skies with smog，turning my air harmful.I feel hurt，exhausted，and ignored.（对人类某些行为的感受）
I still hope you will change from today.Plant trees，conserve water，and embrace clean energy.Only in this way，can you and I reestablish a shared world，where we can coexist in harmony.【高分句型二】（对人类的提醒和希望）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
16．（2025 江西模拟） 假定你是李华，你校英语报正在举办以"What Abilities Should We Prepare for Future Careers？"为题的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
（1）列举必备的能力；
（2）阐述理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
What Abilities Should We Prepare for Future Careers？
______________
【答案】
What Abilities Should We Prepare for Future Careers？
In an era of rapid technological advancement and global competition，I am convinced that armed with two crucial abilities — lifelong learning and creative thinking，our future careers will be more promising.
In the first place，there is no doubt that lifelong learning is fundamental.Nowadays，with knowledge outdated quickly，we must continuously acquire new skills to adapt to evolving job requirements.For instance，many traditional jobs are being transformed by AI，making constantly learning new skills necessary.Equally important is innovation.As automation handles routine tasks，creative problem﹣solving becomes our competitive edge.Innovative thinkers can identify opportunities，develop original solutions，and drive progress in any field.Only by combining lifelong learning with creative thinking can we thrive in future s workplace.
【分析】高分句型一：In the first place，there is no doubt that lifelong learning is fundamental.
翻译：首先，毫无疑问，终身学习是至关重要的。
分析：本句运用了that引导的同位语从句。
高分句型二：Only by combining lifelong learning with creative thinking can we thrive in future s workplace.
翻译：只有把终身学习和创造性思维结合起来，我们才能在未来的职场中茁壮成长。
分析：本句运用了"only+介词短语"放在句首引起的部分倒装。
【解答】
What Abilities Should We Prepare for Future Careers？
In an era of rapid technological advancement and global competition，I am convinced that armed with two crucial abilities — lifelong learning and creative thinking，our future careers will be more promising.（开篇点题）
In the first place，there is no doubt that lifelong learning is fundamental.【高分句型一】Nowadays，with knowledge outdated quickly，we must continuously acquire new skills to adapt to evolving job requirements.For instance，many traditional jobs are being transformed by AI，making constantly learning new skills necessary.Equally important is innovation.As automation handles routine tasks，creative problem﹣solving becomes our competitive edge.Innovative thinkers can identify opportunities，develop original solutions，and drive progress in any field.Only by combining lifelong learning with creative thinking can we thrive in future s workplace.【高分句型二】（列举必备的能力并且阐述理由）
【点评】 写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
17．（2025 河南三模） 假定你是李华，近日，你发现同学们参与外教Thomas组织的"英语月"活动的兴趣不高，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）说明问题；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Thomas，
______
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Thomas，
I'm Li Hua，one of your students.I'm writing to talk about the "English Month" activities.I've noticed that many classmates aren't very interested in them，which makes me a little worried.
Maybe we can make some changes.For example，adding fun games like English quizzes or role﹣playing could attract more students.Also，letting us choose activities we like might help.I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change.In that case，the English Month will surely become one of the fondest memories rooted in our hearts.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I've noticed that many classmates aren't very interested in them，which makes me a little worried.
翻译：我注意到很多同学对这些活动不太感兴趣，这让我有点担心。
分析：句中运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change.
翻译：如果您能做一点改动，我将不胜感激。
分析：句中能运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Thomas，
I'm Li Hua，one of your students.I'm writing to talk about the "English Month" activities.I've noticed that many classmates aren't very interested in them，which makes me a little worried.【高分句型】（说明问题）
Maybe we can make some changes.For example，adding fun games like English quizzes or role﹣playing could attract more students.Also，letting us choose activities we like might help.（提出建议） I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change.In that case，the English Month will surely become one of the fondest memories rooted in our hearts.【高分句型二】
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
18．（2025 巴中模拟）假如你是李华，你校外籍老师Linda计划回国，她想给妈妈送一份具有中国传统文化特色的礼物，向你询问，请你给她回复邮件，推荐并介绍礼物。内容包括：
（1）礼物名称；
（2）礼物特点及推荐理由；
（3）向她家人表示祝愿并祝她旅途愉快。
Dear Linda，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Linda，
Learning that you'd like to choose a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home，I'm writing to recommend a silk dress as a gift.
Silk is one of China's greatest treasures，which has a long history.Therefore，the beautiful soft silk is one of the most popular handcrafts with strong Chinese cultural characteristics.What's more，Chinese silk messes are comfortable and elegant to wear.They are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother's age.I'm sure your mother will definitely be glad to have one.
Best wishes to your family and have a wonderful trip!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Learning that you'd like to choose a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home，I'm writing to recommend a silk dress as a gift.
翻译：知道你想在回家前给你妈妈选一件中国礼物，我写信向你推荐一件丝绸连衣裙作为礼物。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Learning that you'd like to choose a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home作状语及that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：I'm sure your mother will definitely be glad to have one.
翻译：我相信你妈妈一定会很高兴能有一件丝绸连衣裙。
分析：本句使用了省略了that的宾语从句your mother will definitely be glad to have one。
【解答】Dear Linda，
Learning that you'd like to choose a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home，I'm writing to recommend a silk dress as a gift.【高分句型一】（礼物名称）
Silk is one of China's greatest treasures，which has a long history.Therefore，the beautiful soft silk is one of the most popular handcrafts with strong Chinese cultural characteristics.What's more，Chinese silk messes are comfortable and elegant to wear.They are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother's age.I'm sure your mother will definitely be glad to have one.【高分句型二】（礼物特点及推荐理由）
Best wishes to your family and have a wonderful trip!（向她家人表示祝愿并祝她旅途愉快）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
19．（2025 黄梅县校级模拟）假定你是李华，你们班开展了主题为"How to Be a Qualified Volunteer"的课前一分钟英语演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右：
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning，
I am very pleased to talk about how to be a qualified volunteer.________
【答案】Good morning，
I am very pleased to talk about how to be a qualified volunteer.Firstly，you should understand the mission clearly.Whether it's community service or event support，you must know your role.Secondly，you may sharpen key skills：effective communication to convey care，teamwork to cooperate seamlessly.Besides，you can stay adaptable—unexpected situations may arise，so flexibility matters.Most crucially，you do keep passion alive.A sincere desire to help，paired with consistent effort，turns ordinary acts into meaningful impacts.Let's strive to be volunteers who inspire through dedication!
Thanks for listening!
【分析】高分句型一：Whether it's community service or event support，you must know your role.
翻译：无论是社区服务还是活动支持，你都必须清楚自己的角色。
分析：运用了Whether...or..."不管…还是…，无论…还是…"引导的状语从句。
高分句型二：Let's strive to be volunteers who inspire through dedication!
翻译：让我们努力成为通过奉献精神激励他人的志愿者吧！
分析：运用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Good morning，
I am very pleased to talk about how to be a qualified volunteer.Firstly，you should understand the mission clearly.Whether it's community service or event support，you must know your role. 【高分句型一】Secondly，you may sharpen key skills：effective communication to convey care，teamwork to cooperate seamlessly.Besides，you can stay adaptable—unexpected situations may arise，so flexibility matters.Most crucially，you do keep passion alive.A sincere desire to help，paired with consistent effort，turns ordinary acts into meaningful impacts.Let's strive to be volunteers who inspire through dedication!【高分句型二】（如何成为合格的自愿者）
Thanks for listening!
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
20．（2025 黄梅县校级模拟）假定你是李华，你校的交换生Jack想请你教他学习中国象棋，发邮件跟你约时间。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）上课时间及安排；
（2）提前需做的准备。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】Dear Jack，
I'm thrilled to help you learn Chinese chess!Let's schedule our lessons for 3：30 p.m.every Saturday.We can meet in the school library，which is quiet and suitable for teaching and learning.
We'll start with the basics：piece movements，the board layout，and winning conditions.It would also be helpful if you can bring an open mind and some eagerness to learn the rules and strategies of the game.After that，we'll practice simple matches.To prepare，watch a short Chinese chess rules video online and get a chess set—you can buy a small one or use a virtual app.This will make our first lesson smoother.Chinese chess is full of wisdom.
Looking forward to our session!
Best regards，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：We can meet in the school library，which is quiet and suitable for teaching and learning.
翻译：
分析：运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It would also be helpful if you can bring an open mind and some eagerness to learn the rules and strategies of the game.
翻译：
分析：运用了if引导的状语从句。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I'm thrilled to help you learn Chinese chess!Let's schedule our lessons for 3：30 p.m.every Saturday.We can meet in the school library，which is quiet and suitable for teaching and learning.【高分句型一】（上课时间及安排）
We'll start with the basics：piece movements，the board layout，and winning conditions.It would also be helpful if you can bring an open mind and some eagerness to learn the rules and strategies of the game. 【高分句型二】After that，we'll practice simple matches.To prepare，watch a short Chinese chess rules video online and get a chess set—you can buy a small one or use a virtual app.This will make our first lesson smoother.Chinese chess is full of wisdom. （提前需做的准备）
Looking forward to our session!
Best regards，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
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一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 射阳县校级模拟）假如你是晨光中学的李津，5月18日为国际博物馆日，学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为The Power Of Museums的征文活动，根据你搜集的以下图表信息，写一篇稿件。
内容：
（1）简单分析图表展示的现象；
（2）简要分析该现象产生的原因；
（3）鼓励大家走进博物馆。
要求：
（1）词数不少于80；
（2）可以适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
______
2．（2025 郫都区三模）假定你是李明，你校英语报正举办以"AI 改变生活"为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）AI在生活中的运用；
（2）个人感悟。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
AI Changes Life
________
3．（2025 宜章县校级模拟） 第十届"书香节"将在学校举行。假如你是李华，为响应"书香节"活动，请你写一篇演讲稿。
要点：
（1）读书的益处。get knowledge；open our minds；make us confident and happy
（2）结合自身经验谈谈要怎么读书、读什么书。read proper books；read in a good way；think more while reading
（3）倡议大家都读书。develop a good habit of reading；make reading part of our life
注意：
（1）词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello，everyone!Today my topic is reading.
______
4．（2025 琼海校级一模）假如你是李华，校报英语论坛（English Forum）公布了最新海报和征稿启示。请结合海报，以"Apps Kill Time"为题，写一篇文章投稿。内容包括：
（1）你的理解；
（2）发出倡议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Apps Kill Time
_______
5．（2025 闽清县校级三模）口语课上，外教组织同学们讨论："假如你可以带一件现代物品穿越到古代，你会带什么？"请你准备一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）简介物品；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello，everyone!
________
6．（2025 临泉县校级三模）上周你校组织学生去食品厂参观，观看了月饼的制作过程。请你写一篇短文向校报英文栏目投稿，报道此事，内容包括：
（1）活动经过；
（2）活动评价。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
7．（2025 淇滨区校级三模）假设你是李华，得知美国笔友Tom在学校机器人比赛中获第一名，请写信祝贺他，同时告知你将代表班级参加校科学展览，并向他征求建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom，
Yours truly，
Li Hua
8．（2025 西峰区校级三模） 假定你是李华，上周你的外教Mr Green布置了一份家庭作业，截止时间是本周五，但是你因故不能如期提交。请你给Mr Green写一封邮件，申请延期提交作业，要点如下：
（1）表示歉意；
（2）解释原因；
（3）申请延期。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Green，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
9．（2025 宁德三模）假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，下周五你校将在校园农场（Campus Farm）开展劳动实践活动，请你用英语写一则通知邀请全校师生参与活动，内容包括：
（1）活动内容；
（2）注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
NOTICE
Dear teachers and students，
________
Students' Union
May 9th，2025
10．（2025 汕头一模）假定你是李华，针对校园常有学生受伤的现象，外教Allen要求学生分组完成一份校园生活急救手册。请你代表小组写封邮件给Allen，内容包括：
（1）汇报任务完成情况；
（2）询问外教改进意见。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：急救手册a first﹣aid manual
Dear Allen，
________
11．（2025 榕江县校级模拟）假定你是李华，在高三毕业之际，想邀请外教Amy来参加你们班的毕业典礼（graduation ceremony）。请你代表全班同学给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）时间、地点；
（2）活动内容；
（3）希望她在毕业典礼上发言。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增添细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Amy，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
12．（2025 琼海校级模拟）假定你是李华，你校交换生Jim对你校即将举行的"礼物伴成长：山区儿童关爱行动"活动很感兴趣，发邮件向你询问关于送礼物的建议，请你用英文回复邮件，内容包括：
（1）推荐礼物；
（2）推荐该礼物的原因。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
13．（2025 辽宁三模）假定你是李华，你的英国交换生朋友Eric报名参加了以"绿色校园"为主题的中文演讲比赛。他写信向你求助。请你写一封回信，内容包括：
（1）你的建议；
（2）你的祝愿。
注意：
（1）字数80词左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
14．（2025 襄阳三模）你校上周末举行了一次以"健康第一"为主题的登山比赛，校英文报现正以此为主题举行征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）活动当天的天气情况；
（2）比赛的过程与结果；
（3）你的感受。
注意：（1）短文长度100词左右；
（2）标题和开头句已为你写好，不计入总词数。
A Hill﹣climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students' awareness of body building，a hill﹣climbing competition，with the theme of "Health Is First"，was held last Sunday by our school.__________
15．（2025 九江三模） 假定你是李华，在"世界环境日"到来之际，你校英文报将举办以"If the Earth Could Speak"为主题的英语征文活动。请你以地球的口吻写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
（1）对人类某些行为的感受；
（2）对人类的提醒和希望。
注意：
（1）词数80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A Cry from Mother Earth：Listen Up，Humans!
Dear humans，
I have watched over you for hundreds of thousands of years.
______
16．（2025 江西模拟） 假定你是李华，你校英语报正在举办以"What Abilities Should We Prepare for Future Careers？"为题的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
（1）列举必备的能力；
（2）阐述理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
What Abilities Should We Prepare for Future Careers？
______________
17．（2025 河南三模） 假定你是李华，近日，你发现同学们参与外教Thomas组织的"英语月"活动的兴趣不高，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）说明问题；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Thomas，
______
Yours truly，
Li Hua
18．（2025 巴中模拟）假如你是李华，你校外籍老师Linda计划回国，她想给妈妈送一份具有中国传统文化特色的礼物，向你询问，请你给她回复邮件，推荐并介绍礼物。内容包括：
（1）礼物名称；
（2）礼物特点及推荐理由；
（3）向她家人表示祝愿并祝她旅途愉快。
Dear Linda，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
19．（2025 黄梅县校级模拟）假定你是李华，你们班开展了主题为"How to Be a Qualified Volunteer"的课前一分钟英语演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右：
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning，
I am very pleased to talk about how to be a qualified volunteer.________
20．（2025 黄梅县校级模拟）假定你是李华，你校的交换生Jack想请你教他学习中国象棋，发邮件跟你约时间。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）上课时间及安排；
（2）提前需做的准备。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
高考英语一轮复习 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 射阳县校级模拟）假如你是晨光中学的李津，5月18日为国际博物馆日，学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为The Power Of Museums的征文活动，根据你搜集的以下图表信息，写一篇稿件。
内容：
（1）简单分析图表展示的现象；
（2）简要分析该现象产生的原因；
（3）鼓励大家走进博物馆。
要求：
（1）词数不少于80；
（2）可以适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
______
【答案】
The Power of Museums
As vividly shown in the chart，there has been a remarkable increase in the number of visitors to museums in China.In 2014，the number was merely 720 million，while in 2024，it soared to 1.4 billion.
This trend can be attributed to several factors.Firstly，museums nowadays present a rich variety of exhibitions.They display not only historical relics but also artworks and modern scientific achievements，catering to diverse interests.Secondly，museums have enhanced interactivity.Visitors can engage in hands﹣on activities like virtual reality experiences and DIY workshops，making their visits more immersive and appealing.
Since museums are so attractive and beneficial，why not pay them a visit？Whether you're a history enthusiast，an art lover，or simply eager to learn，museums have something for everyone.Let's step into museums and explore the wonderful world they offer!
【分析】高分句型一：Visitors can engage in hands﹣on activities like virtual reality experiences and DIY workshops，making their visits more immersive and appealing.
翻译：游客们可以参与虚拟现实体验和 DIY 工作坊等实践性活动，这让他们的参观更具沉浸感和吸引力。
分析：句中运用了现在分词短语making their visits more immersive and appealing作状语。
高分句型二：Whether you're a history enthusiast，an art lover，or simply eager to learn，museums have something for everyone.
翻译：无论你是历史爱好者、艺术迷，还是单纯渴望学习新知识，博物馆都有适合每个人的东西。
分析：句中运用了whether...or...引导的让步状语从句。
【解答】
The Power of Museums
As vividly shown in the chart，there has been a remarkable increase in the number of visitors to museums in China.In 2014，the number was merely 720 million，while in 2024，it soared to 1.4 billion.（简单分析图表展示的现象）
This trend can be attributed to several factors.Firstly，museums nowadays present a rich variety of exhibitions.They display not only historical relics but also artworks and modern scientific achievements，catering to diverse interests.Secondly，museums have enhanced interactivity.Visitors can engage in hands﹣on activities like virtual reality experiences and DIY workshops，making their visits more immersive and appealing.【高分句型一】（简要分析该现象产生的原因）
Since museums are so attractive and beneficial，why not pay them a visit？Whether you're a history enthusiast，an art lover，or simply eager to learn，museums have something for everyone.【高分句型二】Let's step into museums and explore the wonderful world they offer!（鼓励大家走进博物馆）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
2．（2025 郫都区三模）假定你是李明，你校英语报正举办以"AI 改变生活"为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）AI在生活中的运用；
（2）个人感悟。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
AI Changes Life
________
【答案】
AI Changes Life
Artificial Intelligence （AI） has become an integral part of our daily lives.From voice assistants like Siri and Alexa to personalized recommendations on streaming platforms，AI simplifies tasks and enhances efficiency.It also powers innovations in healthcare，education，and transportation，which makes life more convenient and connected.
Personally，I find AI fascinating.It not only saves time but also opens up new possibilities for the future.However，it's important to use AI responsibly to ensure it benefits society as a whole.AI is truly changing the way we live，and I'm excited to see what it brings next.
【分析】高分句型一：It also powers innovations in healthcare，education，and transportation，which makes life more convenient and connected.
翻译：它还推动了医疗保健、教育和交通方面的创新，使生活更加便利和互联。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It not only saves time but also opens up new possibilities for the future.
翻译：它不仅节省了时间，而且为未来开辟了新的可能性。
分析：本句运用了"not only...but also...不但……而且……"连接对等成分。
【解答】
AI Changes Life
Artificial Intelligence （AI） has become an integral part of our daily lives.From voice assistants like Siri and Alexa to personalized recommendations on streaming platforms，AI simplifies tasks and enhances efficiency.It also powers innovations in healthcare，education，and transportation，which makes life more convenient and connected.【高分句型一】（AI在生活中的运用）
Personally，I find AI fascinating.It not only saves time but also opens up new possibilities for the future.【高分句型二】However，it's important to use AI responsibly to ensure it benefits society as a whole.AI is truly changing the way we live，and I'm excited to see what it brings next.（个人感悟）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
3．（2025 宜章县校级模拟） 第十届"书香节"将在学校举行。假如你是李华，为响应"书香节"活动，请你写一篇演讲稿。
要点：
（1）读书的益处。get knowledge；open our minds；make us confident and happy
（2）结合自身经验谈谈要怎么读书、读什么书。read proper books；read in a good way；think more while reading
（3）倡议大家都读书。develop a good habit of reading；make reading part of our life
注意：
（1）词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello，everyone!Today my topic is reading.
______
【答案】Hello，everyone!Today my topic is reading.Firstly，reading can help us get knowledge from books.Besides，it can open our minds and it is good for us to study.What's more，reading can make us confident and happy.We all know reading is good，but how can we read books correctly？
First，we should read proper books，which are suitable for us and can improve ourselves.Second，we should read in a good way，which means we should think more while we are reading.
In my opinion，we should develop a good habit of reading.So let's start reading and make reading part of our life.
【分析】高分句型一：First，we should read proper books，which are suitable for us and can improve ourselves.
翻译：首先，我们应该读合适的书，这些书适合我们，可以提高我们自己。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Second，we should read in a good way，which means we should think more while we are reading.
翻译：第二，我们应该以一种好的方式阅读，这意味着我们在阅读时应该多思考。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句以及while引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】Hello，everyone!Today my topic is reading.Firstly，reading can help us get knowledge from books.Besides，it can open our minds and it is good for us to study.What's more，reading can make us confident and happy.We all know reading is good，but how can we read books correctly？（读书的益处）
First，we should read proper books，which are suitable for us and can improve ourselves.【高分句型一】Second，we should read in a good way，which means we should think more while we are reading.【高分句型二】（结合自身经验谈谈要怎么读书、读什么书）
In my opinion，we should develop a good habit of reading.So let's start reading and make reading part of our life.（倡议大家都读书）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4．（2025 琼海校级一模）假如你是李华，校报英语论坛（English Forum）公布了最新海报和征稿启示。请结合海报，以"Apps Kill Time"为题，写一篇文章投稿。内容包括：
（1）你的理解；
（2）发出倡议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Apps Kill Time
_______
【答案】
Apps Kill Time
In modern society，mobile phones have become an indispensable part of our lives，which brings us great convenience and rich entertainment.However，the excessive use of mobile phone apps also has a negative impact on our lives.I often spend hours watching short videos or browsing websites，completely losing track of time that could have been spent on meaningful activities and unaware of the time slipping away.
To reclaim our time，I appeal to everyone to use apps wisely.We can try to set limits，explore alternative activities and engage in more face﹣to﹣face conversations with our families and friends.After all，time killed is time wasted and lost forever.
【分析】高分句型一：In modern society，mobile phones have become an indispensable part of our lives，which brings us great convenience and rich entertainment.
翻译：在现代社会，手机已成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分，它给我们带来了极大的便利和丰富的娱乐体验。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I often spend hours watching short videos or browsing websites，completely losing track of time that could have been spent on meaningful activities and unaware of the time slipping away.
翻译：我常常花好几个小时看短视频或浏览网页，完全没意识到时间在不知不觉中流逝，而这些时间本可以用来做更有意义的事情。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语completely losing track of time that could have been spent on meaningful activities and unaware of the time slipping away作状语和that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Apps Kill Time
In modern society，mobile phones have become an indispensable part of our lives，which brings us great convenience and rich entertainment.【高分句型一】However，the excessive use of mobile phone apps also has a negative impact on our lives.I often spend hours watching short videos or browsing websites，completely losing track of time that could have been spent on meaningful activities and unaware of the time slipping away.【高分句型二】（个人理解）
To reclaim our time，I appeal to everyone to use apps wisely.We can try to set limits，explore alternative activities and engage in more face﹣to﹣face conversations with our families and friends.After all，time killed is time wasted and lost forever.（发出倡议）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
5．（2025 闽清县校级三模）口语课上，外教组织同学们讨论："假如你可以带一件现代物品穿越到古代，你会带什么？"请你准备一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）简介物品；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello，everyone!
________
【答案】Hello，everyone!
If I could travel back to ancient times and bring one modern item，I'd bring a solar﹣powered flashlight.It is a lighting device that uses solar energy to charge its batteries.When exposed to sunlight，the solar panel will convert the light energy into electrical energy，which is then stored in the flashlight's batteries.
In ancient times，lighting was often limited to torches，candles，or oil lamps，which were inconvenient and carried the risk of fire.A solar﹣powered flashlight would provide a clean and long﹣lasting source of light，reducing the reliance on flammable materials.Besides，it would enable ancient people to engage in a wider variety of activities，such as traveling at night or working in dark places.
Just imagine how amazed people would be to see such a useful device!
【分析】高分句型一：It is a lighting device that uses solar energy to charge its batteries.
译文：它是一种利用太阳能为电池充电的照明设备。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：In ancient times，lighting was often limited to torches，candles，or oil lamps，which were inconvenient and carried the risk of fire.
译文：在古代，照明通常仅限于手电筒、蜡烛或油灯，这既不方便，又有火灾的风险。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Hello，everyone!
If I could travel back to ancient times and bring one modern item，I'd bring a solar﹣powered flashlight.It is a lighting device that uses solar energy to charge its batteries.【高分句型一】When exposed to sunlight，the solar panel will convert the light energy into electrical energy，which is then stored in the flashlight's batteries.（简介物品）
In ancient times，lighting was often limited to torches，candles，or oil lamps，which were inconvenient and carried the risk of fire.【高分句型二】A solar﹣powered flashlight would provide a clean and long﹣lasting source of light，reducing the reliance on flammable materials.Besides，it would enable ancient people to engage in a wider variety of activities，such as traveling at night or working in dark places.（理由）
Just imagine how amazed people would be to see such a useful device!（总结）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
6．（2025 临泉县校级三模）上周你校组织学生去食品厂参观，观看了月饼的制作过程。请你写一篇短文向校报英文栏目投稿，报道此事，内容包括：
（1）活动经过；
（2）活动评价。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】 Last Friday，our school organized a visit to a food factory for us students with the goal of learning about food processing and food safety procedures.
Upon our arrival，we were warmly welcomed by the staff.The director then gave a brief introduction to the history of the factory.After that，we were shown around the factory，where we observed how mooncakes were made.At the end of the visit，we were invited to taste the freshly made mooncakes.
The activity was well﹣received by all the students.Not only did it provide us with insight into the traditional food﹣making process but it allowed us to appreciate the hard work and skill involved in creating these delicious treats.We hope our school will arrange more such informative activities in the future.
【分析】高分句型一：After that，we were shown around the factory，where we observed how mooncakes were made.
翻译：之后，我们参观了工厂，在那里我们观察了月饼是如何制作的。
分析：本句使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句；how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Not only did it provide us with insight into the traditional food﹣making process but it allowed us to appreciate the hard work and skill involved in creating these delicious treats.
翻译：它不仅让我们深入了解了传统的食品制作过程，还让我们欣赏了制作这些美味佳肴所涉及的辛勤工作和技巧。
分析：本句使用了not only位于句首的部分倒装。
【解答】 Last Friday，our school organized a visit to a food factory for us students with the goal of learning about food processing and food safety procedures.
Upon our arrival，we were warmly welcomed by the staff.The director then gave a brief introduction to the history of the factory.After that，we were shown around the factory，where we observed how mooncakes were made.【高分句型一】At the end of the visit，we were invited to taste the freshly made mooncakes.（活动经过）
The activity was well﹣received by all the students.Not only did it provide us with insight into the traditional food﹣making process but it allowed us to appreciate the hard work and skill involved in creating these delicious treats.【高分句型二】We hope our school will arrange more such informative activities in the future.（活动评价）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
7．（2025 淇滨区校级三模）假设你是李华，得知美国笔友Tom在学校机器人比赛中获第一名，请写信祝贺他，同时告知你将代表班级参加校科学展览，并向他征求建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom，
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom，
I am glad to hear that you won the first place in the robotics challenge!Congratulations on this incredible achievement!Your hard work and creativity have truly paid off，and I'm so proud of you.
As you know，I'm about to participate in our school's science fair representing my class.I'm both excited and a bit nervous.Working on a project related to renewable energy，I'm not sure how to make it stand out.Could you share some tips on how to effectively showcase my project，capture the audience's attention，and answer potential questions？Your experience and insights on these aspects would be invaluable.
I'd really appreciate any advice you can offer.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：As you know，I'm about to participate in our school's science fair representing my class.
翻译：如你所知，我即将代表我的班级参加我们学校的科学博览会。
分析：本句使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句及现在分词短语representing my class作状语。
高分句型二：Working on a project related to renewable energy，I'm not sure how to make it stand out.
翻译：忙于一个与可再生能源相关的项目，我不知道如何让它脱颖而出。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语working on a project related to renewable energy作状语。
【解答】Dear Tom，
I am glad to hear that you won the first place in the robotics challenge!Congratulations on this incredible achievement!Your hard work and creativity have truly paid off，and I'm so proud of you.（表达祝贺）
As you know，I'm about to participate in our school's science fair representing my class.【高分句型一】I'm both excited and a bit nervous.Working on a project related to renewable energy，I'm not sure how to make it stand out.【高分句型二】Could you share some tips on how to effectively showcase my project，capture the audience's attention，and answer potential questions？Your experience and insights on these aspects would be invaluable.（征求建议）
I'd really appreciate any advice you can offer.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.（期待回复）
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．（2025 西峰区校级三模） 假定你是李华，上周你的外教Mr Green布置了一份家庭作业，截止时间是本周五，但是你因故不能如期提交。请你给Mr Green写一封邮件，申请延期提交作业，要点如下：
（1）表示歉意；
（2）解释原因；
（3）申请延期。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Green，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr Green，
I am writing to express my deep apology for not being able to submit my homework on Friday.
As one of the representatives of our school，I am scheduled to participate in a Poetry Reading Competition，which does not leave enough time for my homework.I sincerely hope you can offer me another chance and let me submit my homework next Monday.
Once again，I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.I hope you can accept my apology，and thank you for your understanding.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：As one of the representatives of our school，I am scheduled to participate in a Poetry Reading Competition，which does not leave enough time for my homework.
翻译：作为我们学校的代表之一，我计划参加诗歌阅读比赛，这导致没有足够的时间做作业。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I sincerely hope you can offer me another chance and let me submit my homework next Monday.
翻译：我衷心希望你能再给我一次机会，让我下周一提交作业。
分析：本句使用了省略了that的宾语从句you can offer me another chance and let me submit my homework next Monday。
【解答】Dear Mr Green，
I am writing to express my deep apology for not being able to submit my homework on Friday.（表示歉意）
As one of the representatives of our school，I am scheduled to participate in a Poetry Reading Competition，which does not leave enough time for my homework.【高分句型一】（解释原因）I sincerely hope you can offer me another chance and let me submit my homework next Monday.【高分句型二】（申请延期）
Once again，I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.I hope you can accept my apology，and thank you for your understanding.（再次致歉）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9．（2025 宁德三模）假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，下周五你校将在校园农场（Campus Farm）开展劳动实践活动，请你用英语写一则通知邀请全校师生参与活动，内容包括：
（1）活动内容；
（2）注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
NOTICE
Dear teachers and students，
________
Students' Union
May 9th，2025
【答案】
NOTICE
Dear teachers and students，
To cultivate practical skills and teamwork spirit，our school will hold a labor practice activity at the Campus Farm next Friday.All members of our school are sincerely invited to join this meaningful event.
The activity includes three main tasks：planting vegetable seedlings，clearing weeds in the crop area，and learning eco﹣friendly farming methods.For safety and efficiency，please wear long﹣sleeved clothes，gloves，and sports shoes.
The event will run from 2：00 pm to 4：30 pm.Gather at the farm entrance by 1：50 pm.Let's work together to make our campus greener!
Students' Union
May 9th，2025
【分析】高分句型一：To cultivate practical skills and teamwork spirit，our school will hold a labor practice activity at the Campus Farm next Friday.
翻译：为了培养实践技能和团队合作精神，我们学校将于下周五在校园农场举行劳动实践活动。
分析：运用了不定式To cultivate作目的状语。
高分句型二：All members of our school are sincerely invited to join this meaningful event.
翻译：我们学校诚挚地邀请所有成员参加这一有意义的活动。
分析：运用了不定式to join作主语补足语。
【解答】
NOTICE
Dear teachers and students，
To cultivate practical skills and teamwork spirit，our school will hold a labor practice activity at the Campus Farm next Friday.All members of our school are sincerely invited to join this meaningful event.
The activity includes three main tasks：planting vegetable seedlings，clearing weeds in the crop area，and learning eco﹣friendly farming methods.For safety and efficiency，please wear long﹣sleeved clothes，gloves，and sports shoes.（活动内容）
The event will run from 2：00 pm to 4：30 pm.Gather at the farm entrance by 1：50 pm.Let's work together to make our campus greener!（注意事项）
Students' Union
May 9th，2025
【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．（2025 汕头一模）假定你是李华，针对校园常有学生受伤的现象，外教Allen要求学生分组完成一份校园生活急救手册。请你代表小组写封邮件给Allen，内容包括：
（1）汇报任务完成情况；
（2）询问外教改进意见。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：急救手册a first﹣aid manual
Dear Allen，
________
【答案】Dear Allen，
I'm writing on behalf of our group to report that we've completed the campus life first aid manual.We've included common injuries at school and corresponding first aid methods.It includes detailed steps for immediate response and contact information for emergency services.
However，we' re not sure if our content is accurate and comprehensive.We would greatly appreciate your feedback and suggestions for improvement.Your expertise and guidance would be invaluable in making this manual more effective and user﹣friendly.Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm writing on behalf of our group to report that we've completed the campus life first aid manual.
译文：我代表我们小组写信报告，我们已经完成了校园生活急救手册。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：However，we' re not sure if our content is accurate and comprehensive.
译文：然而，我们不确定我们的内容是否准确和全面。
分析：这句话使用了if引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Allen，
I'm writing on behalf of our group to report that we've completed the campus life first aid manual.【高分句型一】We've included common injuries at school and corresponding first aid methods.It includes detailed steps for immediate response and contact information for emergency services.（汇报任务完成情况）
However，we' re not sure if our content is accurate and comprehensive.【高分句型二】We would greatly appreciate your feedback and suggestions for improvement.Your expertise and guidance would be invaluable in making this manual more effective and user﹣friendly.Thank you for your attention to this matter.（询问外教改进意见）
Looking forward to your reply.（盼望）
Best regards，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
11．（2025 榕江县校级模拟）假定你是李华，在高三毕业之际，想邀请外教Amy来参加你们班的毕业典礼（graduation ceremony）。请你代表全班同学给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）时间、地点；
（2）活动内容；
（3）希望她在毕业典礼上发言。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增添细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Amy，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Amy，
On behalf of our class，I'm writing to invite you to our graduation ceremony，which will take place in the school auditorium at 9 a.m.on June 30.
We've prepared performances like singing and poem reciting，and after that，we'll get our graduation certificates.It would mean a lot to us if you could give a speech to inspire us.
Looking forward to your presence.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：On behalf of our class，I'm writing to invite you to our graduation ceremony，which will take place in the school auditorium at 9 a.m.on June 30.
翻译：我代表我们班写信邀请您参加我们的毕业典礼，典礼将于 6 月 30 日上午 9 点在学校礼堂举行。
分析：句中运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It would mean a lot to us if you could give a speech to inspire us.
翻译：如果您能发表一篇鼓舞我们的演讲，这对我们来说意义非凡。
分析：句中运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Amy，
On behalf of our class，I'm writing to invite you to our graduation ceremony，which will take place in the school auditorium at 9 a.m.on June 30.【高分句型一】（时间、地点）
We've prepared performances like singing and poem reciting，and after that，we'll get our graduation certificates. （活动内容）It would mean a lot to us if you could give a speech to inspire us.【高分句型二】（希望她在毕业典礼上发言）
Looking forward to your presence.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
12．（2025 琼海校级模拟）假定你是李华，你校交换生Jim对你校即将举行的"礼物伴成长：山区儿童关爱行动"活动很感兴趣，发邮件向你询问关于送礼物的建议，请你用英文回复邮件，内容包括：
（1）推荐礼物；
（2）推荐该礼物的原因。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim，
Learning you are wondering what to choose for the children in the mountainous area as gifts，I'd like to give you some advice.
Personally，I recommend dictionaries.As we know，the mountainous area is short of learning resources.As a result，the children there are eager for books.Besides，a dictionary will not only broaden their horizons but also help them learn more new information.I'm convinced that it will be of great value to them.
If you have any further questions，please don't hesitate to contact me.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm convinced that it will be of great value to them.
翻译：我相信这对他们来说将是非常有价值的。
分析：运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：If you have any further questions，please don't hesitate to contact me.
翻译：如果您有任何其他问题，请随时与我联系。
分析：运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
Learning you are wondering what to choose for the children in the mountainous area as gifts，I'd like to give you some advice.（写邮件目的）
Personally，I recommend dictionaries.（推荐礼物）As we know，the mountainous area is short of learning resources.As a result，the children there are eager for books.Besides，a dictionary will not only broaden their horizons but also help them learn more new information.I'm convinced that it will be of great value to them.【高分句型一】（推荐该礼物的原因）
If you have any further questions，please don't hesitate to contact me.【高分句型二】Looking forward to your early reply.（期望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
13．（2025 辽宁三模）假定你是李华，你的英国交换生朋友Eric报名参加了以"绿色校园"为主题的中文演讲比赛。他写信向你求助。请你写一封回信，内容包括：
（1）你的建议；
（2）你的祝愿。
注意：
（1）字数80词左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric，
Having learned you've signed up for a Chinese Speech Competition on the theme of "Green Campus，" and that you're hoping for some assistance，I'm writing to share a few recommendations.
First and foremost，start your speech with a short story or real﹣life example，enabling you to capture the audience's attention right from the beginning.Furthermore，focus on practical ideas，which are closely related to campus life，such as saving energy，reducing plastic use，and protecting green spaces.Last but not least，not only should you use simple Chinese expressions，but you should also speak slowly to make your ideas clearer and more understandable.
I'm confident that with your enthusiasm and effort，you will deliver an outstanding speech.Wishing you all the best in the competition.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Furthermore，focus on practical ideas，which are closely related to campus life，such as saving energy，reducing plastic use，and protecting green spaces.
翻译：此外，应聚焦于与校园生活密切相关的实用理念，例如节约能源、减少塑料使用以及保护绿地等。
分析：句中运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Last but not least，not only should you use simple Chinese expressions，but you should also speak slowly to make your ideas clearer and more understandable.
翻译：最后同样重要的一点是，你不仅要使用简单的中文表达，还应该放慢语速，让自己的想法更清晰、更易懂。
分析：句中运用了not only...but also..."不但...而且..."连接并列句，not only置于句首句中部分倒装结构。
【解答】Dear Eric，
Having learned you've signed up for a Chinese Speech Competition on the theme of "Green Campus，" and that you're hoping for some assistance，I'm writing to share a few recommendations.
First and foremost，start your speech with a short story or real﹣life example，enabling you to capture the audience's attention right from the beginning.Furthermore，focus on practical ideas，which are closely related to campus life，such as saving energy，reducing plastic use，and protecting green spaces.【高分句型一】Last but not least，not only should you use simple Chinese expressions，but you should also speak slowly to make your ideas clearer and more understandable.【高分句型二】（自己的建议）
I'm confident that with your enthusiasm and effort，you will deliver an outstanding speech.Wishing you all the best in the competition.（自己的祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
14．（2025 襄阳三模）你校上周末举行了一次以"健康第一"为主题的登山比赛，校英文报现正以此为主题举行征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）活动当天的天气情况；
（2）比赛的过程与结果；
（3）你的感受。
注意：（1）短文长度100词左右；
（2）标题和开头句已为你写好，不计入总词数。
A Hill﹣climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students' awareness of body building，a hill﹣climbing competition，with the theme of "Health Is First"，was held last Sunday by our school.__________
【答案】
A Hill﹣climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students' awareness of body building，a hill﹣climbing competition，with the theme of "Health Is First"，was held last Sunday by our school.
It was a sunny day.All students who were joyful gathered on the school gate first.Then，after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules，we set off excitedly at 7：30.All the way，we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of nature and shared interesting stories besides trying our best to move up﹣ward.It was at about 10：00 that we all reached the top of the hill.The top three students come from class one，four，and nine.
Although not receiving an award，I wasn't disappointed at all，for I had received better health and friendship.
【分析】高分句型一：All students who were joyful gathered on the school gate first.
翻译：所有的学生都兴高采烈地聚集在校门口。
分析：本句运用了who引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：Although not receiving an award，I wasn't disappointed at all，for I had received better health and friendship.
翻译：虽然没有获奖，但我一点也不失望，因为我得到了更好的健康和友谊。
分析：本句运用了although引导的让步状语从句和for引导的原因状语从句。
【解答】
A Hill﹣climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students' awareness of body building，a hill﹣climbing competition，with the theme of "Health Is First"，was held last Sunday by our school.（登山比赛的目的）
It was a sunny day.（活动当天的天气情况）All students who were joyful gathered on the school gate first.【高分句型一】Then，after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules，we set off excitedly at 7：30.All the way，we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of nature and shared interesting stories besides trying our best to move up﹣ward.It was at about 10：00 that we all reached the top of the hill.The top three students come from class one，four，and nine.（比赛的过程与结果）
Although not receiving an award，I wasn't disappointed at all，for I had received better health and friendship.【高分句型二】（作者的感受）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
15．（2025 九江三模） 假定你是李华，在"世界环境日"到来之际，你校英文报将举办以"If the Earth Could Speak"为主题的英语征文活动。请你以地球的口吻写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
（1）对人类某些行为的感受；
（2）对人类的提醒和希望。
注意：
（1）词数80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A Cry from Mother Earth：Listen Up，Humans!
Dear humans，
I have watched over you for hundreds of thousands of years.
______
【答案】
A Cry from Mother Earth：Listen Up，Humans!
Dear humans，
I have watched over you for hundreds of thousands of years.I have gifted you with fresh air，clean water，and fertile soil to sustain your being.But now，I am gasping for breath.
Open your eyes!You cut down my forests，leaving numerous creatures homeless.You pour poison into the oceans，making the waters lifeless.You choke the skies with smog，turning my air harmful.I feel hurt，exhausted，and ignored.
I still hope you will change from today.Plant trees，conserve water，and embrace clean energy.Only in this way，can you and I reestablish a shared world，where we can coexist in harmony.
【分析】高分句型一：You cut down my forests，leaving numerous creatures homeless.
翻译：你砍伐了我的森林，让许多生物无家可归。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语leaving numerous creatures homeless作状语。
高分句型二：Only in this way，can you and I reestablish a shared world，where we can coexist in harmony.
翻译：只有这样，你和我才能重建一个共同的世界，在那里我们可以和谐共处。
分析：本句使用了"only+状语"置于句首引起的部分倒装及where引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】
A Cry from Mother Earth：Listen Up，Humans!
Dear humans，
I have watched over you for hundreds of thousands of years.I have gifted you with fresh air，clean water，and fertile soil to sustain your being.But now，I am gasping for breath.
Open your eyes!You cut down my forests，leaving numerous creatures homeless.【高分句型一】You pour poison into the oceans，making the waters lifeless.You choke the skies with smog，turning my air harmful.I feel hurt，exhausted，and ignored.（对人类某些行为的感受）
I still hope you will change from today.Plant trees，conserve water，and embrace clean energy.Only in this way，can you and I reestablish a shared world，where we can coexist in harmony.【高分句型二】（对人类的提醒和希望）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
16．（2025 江西模拟） 假定你是李华，你校英语报正在举办以"What Abilities Should We Prepare for Future Careers？"为题的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
（1）列举必备的能力；
（2）阐述理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
What Abilities Should We Prepare for Future Careers？
______________
【答案】
What Abilities Should We Prepare for Future Careers？
In an era of rapid technological advancement and global competition，I am convinced that armed with two crucial abilities — lifelong learning and creative thinking，our future careers will be more promising.
In the first place，there is no doubt that lifelong learning is fundamental.Nowadays，with knowledge outdated quickly，we must continuously acquire new skills to adapt to evolving job requirements.For instance，many traditional jobs are being transformed by AI，making constantly learning new skills necessary.Equally important is innovation.As automation handles routine tasks，creative problem﹣solving becomes our competitive edge.Innovative thinkers can identify opportunities，develop original solutions，and drive progress in any field.Only by combining lifelong learning with creative thinking can we thrive in future s workplace.
【分析】高分句型一：In the first place，there is no doubt that lifelong learning is fundamental.
翻译：首先，毫无疑问，终身学习是至关重要的。
分析：本句运用了that引导的同位语从句。
高分句型二：Only by combining lifelong learning with creative thinking can we thrive in future s workplace.
翻译：只有把终身学习和创造性思维结合起来，我们才能在未来的职场中茁壮成长。
分析：本句运用了"only+介词短语"放在句首引起的部分倒装。
【解答】
What Abilities Should We Prepare for Future Careers？
In an era of rapid technological advancement and global competition，I am convinced that armed with two crucial abilities — lifelong learning and creative thinking，our future careers will be more promising.（开篇点题）
In the first place，there is no doubt that lifelong learning is fundamental.【高分句型一】Nowadays，with knowledge outdated quickly，we must continuously acquire new skills to adapt to evolving job requirements.For instance，many traditional jobs are being transformed by AI，making constantly learning new skills necessary.Equally important is innovation.As automation handles routine tasks，creative problem﹣solving becomes our competitive edge.Innovative thinkers can identify opportunities，develop original solutions，and drive progress in any field.Only by combining lifelong learning with creative thinking can we thrive in future s workplace.【高分句型二】（列举必备的能力并且阐述理由）
【点评】 写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
17．（2025 河南三模） 假定你是李华，近日，你发现同学们参与外教Thomas组织的"英语月"活动的兴趣不高，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）说明问题；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Thomas，
______
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Thomas，
I'm Li Hua，one of your students.I'm writing to talk about the "English Month" activities.I've noticed that many classmates aren't very interested in them，which makes me a little worried.
Maybe we can make some changes.For example，adding fun games like English quizzes or role﹣playing could attract more students.Also，letting us choose activities we like might help.I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change.In that case，the English Month will surely become one of the fondest memories rooted in our hearts.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I've noticed that many classmates aren't very interested in them，which makes me a little worried.
翻译：我注意到很多同学对这些活动不太感兴趣，这让我有点担心。
分析：句中运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change.
翻译：如果您能做一点改动，我将不胜感激。
分析：句中能运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Thomas，
I'm Li Hua，one of your students.I'm writing to talk about the "English Month" activities.I've noticed that many classmates aren't very interested in them，which makes me a little worried.【高分句型】（说明问题）
Maybe we can make some changes.For example，adding fun games like English quizzes or role﹣playing could attract more students.Also，letting us choose activities we like might help.（提出建议） I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change.In that case，the English Month will surely become one of the fondest memories rooted in our hearts.【高分句型二】
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
18．（2025 巴中模拟）假如你是李华，你校外籍老师Linda计划回国，她想给妈妈送一份具有中国传统文化特色的礼物，向你询问，请你给她回复邮件，推荐并介绍礼物。内容包括：
（1）礼物名称；
（2）礼物特点及推荐理由；
（3）向她家人表示祝愿并祝她旅途愉快。
Dear Linda，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Linda，
Learning that you'd like to choose a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home，I'm writing to recommend a silk dress as a gift.
Silk is one of China's greatest treasures，which has a long history.Therefore，the beautiful soft silk is one of the most popular handcrafts with strong Chinese cultural characteristics.What's more，Chinese silk messes are comfortable and elegant to wear.They are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother's age.I'm sure your mother will definitely be glad to have one.
Best wishes to your family and have a wonderful trip!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Learning that you'd like to choose a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home，I'm writing to recommend a silk dress as a gift.
翻译：知道你想在回家前给你妈妈选一件中国礼物，我写信向你推荐一件丝绸连衣裙作为礼物。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Learning that you'd like to choose a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home作状语及that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：I'm sure your mother will definitely be glad to have one.
翻译：我相信你妈妈一定会很高兴能有一件丝绸连衣裙。
分析：本句使用了省略了that的宾语从句your mother will definitely be glad to have one。
【解答】Dear Linda，
Learning that you'd like to choose a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home，I'm writing to recommend a silk dress as a gift.【高分句型一】（礼物名称）
Silk is one of China's greatest treasures，which has a long history.Therefore，the beautiful soft silk is one of the most popular handcrafts with strong Chinese cultural characteristics.What's more，Chinese silk messes are comfortable and elegant to wear.They are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother's age.I'm sure your mother will definitely be glad to have one.【高分句型二】（礼物特点及推荐理由）
Best wishes to your family and have a wonderful trip!（向她家人表示祝愿并祝她旅途愉快）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
19．（2025 黄梅县校级模拟）假定你是李华，你们班开展了主题为"How to Be a Qualified Volunteer"的课前一分钟英语演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右：
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning，
I am very pleased to talk about how to be a qualified volunteer.________
【答案】Good morning，
I am very pleased to talk about how to be a qualified volunteer.Firstly，you should understand the mission clearly.Whether it's community service or event support，you must know your role.Secondly，you may sharpen key skills：effective communication to convey care，teamwork to cooperate seamlessly.Besides，you can stay adaptable—unexpected situations may arise，so flexibility matters.Most crucially，you do keep passion alive.A sincere desire to help，paired with consistent effort，turns ordinary acts into meaningful impacts.Let's strive to be volunteers who inspire through dedication!
Thanks for listening!
【分析】高分句型一：Whether it's community service or event support，you must know your role.
翻译：无论是社区服务还是活动支持，你都必须清楚自己的角色。
分析：运用了Whether...or..."不管…还是…，无论…还是…"引导的状语从句。
高分句型二：Let's strive to be volunteers who inspire through dedication!
翻译：让我们努力成为通过奉献精神激励他人的志愿者吧！
分析：运用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Good morning，
I am very pleased to talk about how to be a qualified volunteer.Firstly，you should understand the mission clearly.Whether it's community service or event support，you must know your role. 【高分句型一】Secondly，you may sharpen key skills：effective communication to convey care，teamwork to cooperate seamlessly.Besides，you can stay adaptable—unexpected situations may arise，so flexibility matters.Most crucially，you do keep passion alive.A sincere desire to help，paired with consistent effort，turns ordinary acts into meaningful impacts.Let's strive to be volunteers who inspire through dedication!【高分句型二】（如何成为合格的自愿者）
Thanks for listening!
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
20．（2025 黄梅县校级模拟）假定你是李华，你校的交换生Jack想请你教他学习中国象棋，发邮件跟你约时间。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）上课时间及安排；
（2）提前需做的准备。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】Dear Jack，
I'm thrilled to help you learn Chinese chess!Let's schedule our lessons for 3：30 p.m.every Saturday.We can meet in the school library，which is quiet and suitable for teaching and learning.
We'll start with the basics：piece movements，the board layout，and winning conditions.It would also be helpful if you can bring an open mind and some eagerness to learn the rules and strategies of the game.After that，we'll practice simple matches.To prepare，watch a short Chinese chess rules video online and get a chess set—you can buy a small one or use a virtual app.This will make our first lesson smoother.Chinese chess is full of wisdom.
Looking forward to our session!
Best regards，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：We can meet in the school library，which is quiet and suitable for teaching and learning.
翻译：
分析：运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It would also be helpful if you can bring an open mind and some eagerness to learn the rules and strategies of the game.
翻译：
分析：运用了if引导的状语从句。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I'm thrilled to help you learn Chinese chess!Let's schedule our lessons for 3：30 p.m.every Saturday.We can meet in the school library，which is quiet and suitable for teaching and learning.【高分句型一】（上课时间及安排）
We'll start with the basics：piece movements，the board layout，and winning conditions.It would also be helpful if you can bring an open mind and some eagerness to learn the rules and strategies of the game. 【高分句型二】After that，we'll practice simple matches.To prepare，watch a short Chinese chess rules video online and get a chess set—you can buy a small one or use a virtual app.This will make our first lesson smoother.Chinese chess is full of wisdom. （提前需做的准备）
Looking forward to our session!
Best regards，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
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