高中英语必修第一册应用文写作指导与实战训练
写学生简介:
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指导要点:
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篇章结构:
◎介绍姓名、年龄、年级、学校 ◎介绍性格特征 ◎介绍兴趣爱好
◎介绍最喜欢的科目、学习风格 ◎介绍未来规划
2.常用表达:
1) 介绍姓名、年龄、年级、学校
My name is …,a student from …High School.
I am studying in the first grade at …High School.
2)介绍性格特点
kind-hearted ; outgoing ; diligent; generous ; humorous ; active
3)介绍兴趣爱好
be fond of ….. ; be good at; take a strong interest in… ; have a gift for…
Being an active person, I like sports and outdoor activities.
I am also crazy about music .
4)介绍学习科目和风格
My favourite subject is …
I exchange learning experience with my classmates.
I prefer to learn knowledge by doing .
5)介绍未来规划
I am looking forward to laying a solid foundation for my future profession, which is based on three years of hard study here.
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实战演练1:
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假设你是育才高中的学生彭欣,你校预选拔一些优秀学生,利用暑假到星光希望小学为学生辅导英语。你想参加此活动。请根据提示,用英语学校评选组写一封申请信:
个人优势(如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等)
你的计划(如怎样进行辅导等)
注意:词数100左右
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m PengXin from Class one, Senior Two.__________________________________________
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I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity .
Yours Sincerely,
PengXin
[参考范文1]:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Peng Xin from Class One, Senior Two. I’m writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Xingguang Hope Primary School with their English .
I’m kind ,easy-going and always ready to help others . I wash clothes and make the bed by myself to develop independence .English is my favourite subject and I’ve won several prizes in English contests. So I think that I’m qualified for the position .
I plan to communicate with the students first to know what they need .Besides, I’ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories ,singing songs , playing games and so on .
I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.
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实战演练2:
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假如你是李华,你从网上看到英国学生彼得征求笔友。请你用英语写一封电子邮件应征笔友,要点包括:
1.介绍自己的年龄、性别、学校 2.介绍自己喜欢做的事情
3.表达愿望
注意:词数80左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Dear Peter,
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Sincerely ,
Li Hua
写建议信
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指导要点:
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建议信是写信人向收信人针对某事提出的建议或忠告。信的内容包括写信原因、具体建议及提出建议的理由等。文章结构通常是三段式,常以firstly ,secondly ,thirdly 或to begin /start with, then ,later , last but not least (最后同样重要的是)等依次提出建议。
具体段落安排:
:表明写作意图。陈述理由,需要的话可以简单介绍自己,注意礼貌用语的使用和语气。
:最好先肯定对方的优点,然后指出需要改进的地方或针对具体情况给出具体的建议或忠告。
:对提出的建议进行总结。
◆常用句式:
1.首段
I am writing to express my views on / concerning …我写信是想表达我对…的看法。
You have asked for my advice about / with regard to … and I will try to make some suggestions .你已经问了我一些有关…的建议,我会尽量给你一些建议。
I know you have trouble in …after reading your letter.
读完你的来信后,得知你在…方面有麻烦。
2.提建议
I think it would be more beneficial if you could …如果你…..能会更有益
I would like to suggest / recommend that …我建议/推荐…
You’d better …
As far as I am concerned / In my opinion , it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来,采取以下行动是明智的。
3.段尾
I hope you will take my advice into account /consideration .
我希望你会考虑我的建议
I believe you will find these suggestions practical /useful /helpful .
我相信你将会发现这些建议是实用的/有用的/有帮助的。
In the end ,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful .
最后,如果你觉得我色建议有用的话,我会很高兴。
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实战演练1:
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为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开设了“HEART –TO –HEART ”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jane,收到一封匿名为“Worried ” 的同学的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信,内容要点如下:
表示理解并给与安慰
提出建议并说明理由
注意:词数100左右
信中不能出现与本人相关的信息
Hi,“Worried”,
I am sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
Yours ,
Jane
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实战演练2:
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假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter 是高一年级的学生,他进入高中后,不知道如何适应高中生活,请你给他写一封建议信,要点如下:
1.多与老师沟通交流 2.积极参加班级活动
3.与志趣相同的同学交朋友
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[参考范文2]:
Hi,“Worried ”,
I am sorry to know that you are having such a bad time at the moment .The truth is that everyone has one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong ,so you don’t have to worry too much .The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you will regret . Here are three useful tips .
First ,talk to someone you trust about how you feel . This is a good way to let your anger out without hurting others or yourself . Second ,go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger . Third, remain optimistic about your future . Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits .
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as usual .
Yours ,
Jane
写电子邮件(旅行计划)
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指导要点:
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电子邮件类似信件的写法。
◆常用表达:
1.开头
I am extremely pleased to receive your email .And I would like to write an email to tell you that …我很高心收到你的电子邮件,我想写电子邮件告诉你…
From your email ,I have known that … 从你的电子邮件中,我知道了…
I am writing to tell you that … 我写电子邮件是想告诉你…
2.主题内容------旅行计划常用表达
I am planning to go to …to see …我打算去…看看….
I am also planning to visit several other places in …我还打算游览其他几个地方。。。
I am looking forward to going to …because …我期待着去…因为…
3.交通方式
I am taking the train /plane to go to …我坐火车或飞机去…
4.邮件结尾
I am looking forward to your reply at your convenience .我期待你方便的时候的回复。
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实战演练1:
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假如你是学生李华,打算告诉朋友Kate 你的暑假计划。你准备去中国的北方旅行,并告诉她原因。根据下面提示写一封电子邮件给她。要点如下:
1.8月初乘火车
2.了解当地风俗
3.品尝美食,购买纪念品。
Dear Kate ,
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Yours ,
Li Hua
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实战演练2:
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假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter 寒假想来中国旅游,向你征求旅游路线,你建议他沿着长江(the Yangtze River)旅行。请你给他写一封邮件,内容如下:
简单介绍长江
祝愿旅途愉快
Dear Peter ,
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Yours ,
Li Hua
[参考范文3]:
Dear Kate ,
How are you doing recently I am writing to tell you about my plan for the coming summer holiday .As the summer holiday is coming, I am travelling to North China .
To start with , I am going to take the train in early August . It can offer me a chance to enjoy the scenery of areas it passes . Then as planned , I will collect some information about local custom in the north .
In addition , I am planning to have a taste of the local food and snacks and of course , I will buy some souvenirs . What about your arrangements for the summer holiday
四、描述健康方面的今昔对比
第一部分:点明自己目前在运动和饮食上存在的问题
第二部分:提出解决问题所采取的措施,说明采取这些措施的理由。
第三部分:描述自己身体的变化,告诉读者这些变化对自己生活的影响
●常用表达
1.描述问题
Recently I have been concerned about some pain in my neck.
近来我一直担心我的颈部疼痛
I find it becomes harder for me to fall asleep.我发现我入睡变得更加困难
2.采取措施:
Doing physical activity is an important factor in maintaining fitness 进行体育活动是保持身体健康的一个重要因素。
Then I tried to do the following things.然后我试着做以下事情
First , I took part in some sports , such as jogging, swimming and playing basketball.首先我参加了一些运动,比如慢跑、游泳和打篮球
The most important thing that I have done is to keep a good state of mind and enjoy what life offers you 我做的最重要的事是保持良好的心态,享受生活所给与的一切
3.身体变化
I am more than happy to see the improvements in my health.看到我健康有所改善我非常开心。
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实战演练1:
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假如你是李华,你的笔友Jane 最近总是感觉身体不适,因此向你写信询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点提示用英语给她回一封信。
要点提示:
合理饮食,避免吃脂肪高及含糖多的食物,多吃新鲜蔬菜和水果
锻炼身体,合理锻炼有助于身体健康
保证充足睡眠,不要熬夜 4.你的其他建议
Dear Jane ,
I am glad to receive your letter .But at the same time , I’m sorry to hear that you are not very well these days .____________________________________________________________________
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Yours ,
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实战演练2:
) Li Hua
假如你是红星中学的礼花,你从网上看到一则面对所有国家征集北京冬奥会志愿者的消息,你喜爱冰雪活动,想去担任志愿者。请根据提示用英语写一封申请信。内容包括:
你的基本情况
你的申请理由
希望获准
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[参考范文4]:
Dear Jane ,
I am glad to receive your letter .But at the same time , I’m sorry to hear that you are not very well these days . In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy . Here is my advice .
Firstly , you should keep a balanced diet . You should avoid eating food in fat and too much sweet food .You’d better eat more fresh vegetables and fruits . Secondly , taking exercise every day helps build up a strong body . As we all know , regular exercise is an important part of keeping us healthy . Finally , make sure you have enough sleep and you mustn’t stay up too late at night .
By eating properly and exercising regularly , you can keep your body at a proper weight and stay healthy . I truly hope my advice is helpful and you’ll get well soon .
Beat wishes !
Yours ,
Li Hua