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2026人教版高中英语选择性必修第二册
UNIT 5 FIRST AID
Part 4 Writing
关于急救的写作
写作题目
假设你和你的同学李明一起去锅炉房打开水,在回寝室的路上,李明的热水瓶突然破裂,开水烫伤了他的脚。于是你对他实施了必要的急救。请你结合此事,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,向学校英文报投稿,主要内容包括:
1.描述事故发生的经过;
2.你是如何实施急救的(冷水冲洗、送医院做进一步的处理);
3.简要谈谈你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
参考词汇:锅炉房 boiler room;热水瓶 Thermos bottle
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. adj.(身体部位)肿起的;肿胀的
2. adj.切实可行的;实际的;实践的
3. vi.& vt.减轻;缓解
4. 立刻;马上
答案 1.swollen 2.practical 3.ease
4.at once
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:描述事故发生的经过和烫伤的症状
(1)The boiled water (对……造成伤害) his feet.
(2)The burn was (非常严重).
(3)The skin was (又红又肿).
第二段:实施急救的措施
(4)I managed to (保持镇静), and quickly recalled what I had learnt in my (急救课程).
(5)I placed his feet under the cool running water (立刻) to (减轻疼痛).
第三段:简述对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识
(6)Only then was I aware of (多么重要和实用) the basic knowledge about first aid was.
答案 (1)caused an injury to (2)very serious (3)red and swollen (4)remain calm; first-aid course (5)at once; ease the pain (6)how important and practical
2.句式升级
(7)将句(2)和句(3)合并为含有so...that...引导的状语从句的主从复合句
(8)将句(4)改写为含有现在分词短语的句子
答案 (7)The burn was so serious that the skin was red and swollen. (8)I managed to remain calm, quickly recalling what I had learnt in my first-aid course.
连句成篇
One day, Li Ming and I were walking back
bottle burst. The boiled water caused an injury to his feet. The burn was
red and swollen. However, I
calm, quickly recalling
first-aid course.
I placed his feet under the cool running water at once to ease the pain. Afterwards, I called a taxi and
how important and
写作积累
如何处理/避免常见的伤害
Bleeding Try to stop the bleeding. Press a handkerchief onto the bleeding point and hold it there. Hold up the part of the body which is bleeding if possible.
The sprain(扭伤) It is better to avoid walking on the injured ankle. It is correct to use an ice pack for relieving the pain.
The choke Make him/her spit(吐) it out by slapping him/her on the back. To avoid this, we shouldn't talk or laugh when eating.
The nosebleed Stay calm. Sit up, bow the head and lean slightly forward. Pinch(捏) both nostrils(鼻孔) together between the thumb and forefinger. Breathe through the mouth, not the nose.
实战演练
(2024广东广州市执信中学月考)
假设你是李华,你们学校英语报正要做一期关于安全教育(safety education)的栏目,欢迎各位同学投稿分享本人或他人在急救方面的经历。请你写一篇文章投稿,主要内容包括:
1.事件经过和急救措施;
2.简述急救知识的重要性。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
An Experience of First Aid
答案与分层梯度式解析
实战演练
One possible version:
An Experience of First Aid
Learning that the English newspaper is going to publish a column about safety education, I'd like to share my story. As a little child, my hand was scalded by the boiled water due to my carelessness. Seeing the burn on my hand, my mother placed the injured part under the cool running water. Then she applied the medicine. Thanks to my mother's calm and timely treatment, the burn didn't leave a scar.
Not only can first aid knowledge save lives, but it can also help reduce the severity of injuries. It is hoped that this event will make people understand the significance of learning some knowledge about first aid.
1.重点词汇
①publish v.发表;刊登;登载
②scald v.烫伤
③due to/thanks to由于/幸亏
④reduce v.减少
2.亮点句型
Learning that the English newspaper is going to publish a column about safety education, I'd like to share my story.(现在分词短语作状语,that引导宾语从句)得知英语报将要刊登一个关于安全教育的专栏,我想分享我的故事。
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