(共23张PPT)
Guess who he is
Abraham Lincoln
why did he wear a beard(胡须) Because of a letter of advice.
I have got 4 brothers and part of them will vote for you any way and if you let your whiskers grow ,I will try and get the rest of them to vote for you. You would look a great deal better for your face is so thin.
我有4个哥哥,他们肯定会投你的票,但如果你听我的话留起连鬓胡子来,我会说服其余的哥哥也来投你的票。你的脸太瘦了,留胡子后看上去一定会好看得多。
letters of advice
A thousand mile journey starts from the first step.
千里之行始于足下。
date(日期),greeting(称呼), body(正文), close(结尾), signature.(署名)
段落:3段或2段
应用文:信件(letters of advice)五要素:
建议信(letters of advice)正文(body)段落结构:
Task 1 preparation复习准备
第一段:翻译出信件表述的问题。
第二段:提出建议
第三段:提出希望
第一段复述对方问题;表达理解:
常用句式:
1. You wrote that...+问题
2. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.
1. I ________ that you should..+do 原形
2. I _______ you should...+do 原形
3. ____ ____ +do 原形
recommend
think
Why not
第二段:提建议常用句式:
第三段:结尾表达希望用句式:
I am sure ...
Looking forward to your early reply
Best wishes for you
Task 2 Outline 审题总结
假设你是李华,你的英国网友Linda最近在中国学习。她写信向你诉说了她的困扰:不适应新的生活学习环境,想家,感到很焦虑和困惑。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信。要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议并给出理由。(例如:加入各种社团或课外活动;多交朋友;培养各种爱好;向老师寻求建议和帮助等)
3.可适当添加细节,使行文连贯,词数100左右(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:environment 环境;
Hi,Linda,
I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time.
Yours,
Li Hua
建议信(letters of advice)五要素:
Body(正文)
_________________________
_____
________________________
Para.1.描述对方问题并表示理解并给予安慰;
Hi,Linda,
I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time.Actually,most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place,especially a foreign country.So don’t worry too much.
一.常用表示理解安慰句式:
二.words and expressions:
1.______________想家 2. ____________感到焦虑
3.______________离开家 4. _________adv. 尤其 5. _________外国
Paragraph 2:提出建议并给出理由。(例如:加入各种社团或课外活动;多交朋友;培养各种爱好;向老师寻求建议和帮助等
Here are some tips for you.First,you’d better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible.Second,make more new friends,who can share their hobbies and ideas with you.You will feel less homesick with many friends around you.Third,you should take part in some social activities.It will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures.
一.提建议句式:
二.words and expressions:
1._________改变习惯 2. ___________适应3.___________新环境
4. ________交朋友 5. _________和...分享6.__________参加
7. _______社交活动8. _______了解9.___________当地风俗和文化
Paragraph 3:结尾表希望
I hope my advice will be useful.
Other useful Sentences
①知道你有麻烦,我很抱歉。(have a bad time)
________________________________________________________________________
②一下是我的建议
________________________________________________________________________
③交一些可以跟你朋友,分享爱好和意见。
________________________________________________________________________
④你应该参加社交活动________________________________________________________________________⑤希望我的建议对你有帮助。________________________________________________________________________
I am sorry to know that you are having a bad time.
Here are some tips for you.
make more new friends,who can share their hobbies and ideas with you.
you should take part in some social activities.
I hope my advice will be useful.
Activity 3 润色字词,请用下列短语替换单词.
to begin with,in addition,last but not least
Hi,Linda,
I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time.Actually,most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place,especially a foreign country. So don’t worry too much.
Task 3 Polishing 润色
Here are some tips for you. First , you’d better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible.Second, make more new friends,who can share their hobbies and ideas with you.You will feel less homesick with many friends around you. Third, you should take part in some social activities.It will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures.
I hope my advice will be useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
加分秘诀一: 短语要比单词妙
To begin with
In addition,
Last but not least
考考你:请用委婉的语句表达:
I love you.
You may be one person to the world, but to me you are the world.
I will sue(起诉) you for you have stolen(偷) my heart.
Activity 3 润色句子结构,语气更委婉,请用下列句子结构.
Here are some tips for you.To begin with, you’d better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. In addition, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you.You will feel less homesick with many friends around you.Last but not least, you should take part in some social activities.It will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures.
I hope my advice will be useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
why not...,/i think you should...,/I recommend that you should...
why not make more new friends
I think you should
加分秘诀二: 语气委婉是高招
Task 4 creation 创作(一)
假定你是李华。你的英国笔友杰克刚刚升入高中,但他一时无法适应新的校园生活,写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信,主要内容包括:
1.不必过分焦虑;
2.制定合理的学习计划;
3.多参加集体社交活动,结交新朋友。参考词汇: 适应 adjust to
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear jack,
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adjusting to your high school life.
I will be more than happy to hear good news from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Para. 1:第一段复述对方问题表达理解/表示理解并给予安慰;
不必过分焦虑;
常用句式
1. I’m _______________________ that you are having such a bad time.
2. Don’t worry __________________..
3. you_______________that...+问题
4. I __________ quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.
5.__________________________that you are having trouble adjusting to
your high school life.
sorry to learn
too much
wrote
understand
i am sorry to hear
para.2.制定合理的学习计划;多参加集体活动,结交新朋友。
提建议句式:
1. why not...,
2.i think you should...,
3.I recommend that you should...
内容:
1.制定合理的学习计划;____________________
2.多参加集体活动,____________________
3.结交新朋友______________________
para. 3结尾:
i am sure....
i hope my advice _________________.
make a good plan
take part in activities
make new friends
will be useful
Task 4 creation 创作(二)
假定你是李华,你的同学小明刚刚升入高中,但因为疫情(pandemic)原因不能放假回家,想家,感到很焦虑,写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信,主要内容包括:
1.表示理解,你也是一样的情况;2.多参加集体活动,结交新朋友。
3.向老师求助;给父母写信。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给,不计入总词数。
Dear jack,
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adjusting to your high school life because of the pandemic. —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
I will be more than happy to hear good news from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Task5 assessment 展评
作文评判标准
Share the draft
1.分段是否正确。1/0
2.第一段是否用到常用语。2/1/0。(每个一分)
3.第二段是否用到提建议的语句。3/2/1
4.第三段是否用到结束语。1/0
5.主要内容是否写全。3/2/1/0
6. 书写是否干净清晰。2/1/0
7. 是否有自己独特的建议。3/2/1.
Thank you!
语法填空
Hi,Linda,
I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time._______(actual),most people will feel homesick and ______(anxiously) when they leave home and come to a new place,especially a foreign country.So don’t worry too much.
Here are some _____(tip) for you.First,you’d better try ________( change) some of your habits _____ that you can get ______(use) to the new environment as soon as possible.Second,make more new friends,who can share their hobbies and ideas ______ you.You will feel _____(little) homesick with many friends around you.Third,you should take part ____ some social activities.It will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures.
I hope my advice will be _______-(use).
Yours,
Li Hua
Actually
anxious
tips
to change
so
used
with
less
in
作文背诵自测
useful
I quite understand well that you are anxious and feel terrible. However, it is common that many students have the same problem when going to a new school. I'm writing to give you some suggestions.
I think you can make a good plan for your studies. This will help you get used to the new studying environment in a short time. I also recommend that you make some friends and take an active part in class activities. I'm sure that you won't feel lonely and your school life will become colorful and interesting.