【期中考点突破】突破01 书面表达-话题作文（含答案解析）--2025-2026学年八年级英语上册期中复习考点突破外研版（2024）

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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册期中复习考点突破外研版（2024）
突破01 书面表达-话题作文
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．每个人的成长都离不开榜样的引领。榜样就在我们身边，他们可能是我们的老师、朋友。假设你是李华，某英文报社发起了主题为“A good example around me”的征文活动。你结合以下要点，写一篇英语小短文，介绍一下你身边的榜样，并谈一谈你对“何为榜样”的看法。
1.一件身边的具体事例 2.简单描述一下你对榜样的一点儿看法
注意：
1.词数： 80～100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
4.标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A good example around me
There are many good examples around me.
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2． 榜样的力量是无穷的，每个人心中都有一个英雄形象激励自己。请你阅读下面一位英雄的信息，以“The Hero in My Heart”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：1. 包含信息卡上的所有内容；
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts.
So do I. ... is my hero.
2. 适当拓展，如向英雄学习的感想、行动等；
3. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
4. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
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3．你的努力成就更好的自己，你的帮助温暖了别人。你应该为更好的自己或这种助人为乐的品质而感到骄傲。请以“Be proud of myself”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你成长进步或助人为乐的经历，展现你的骄傲与自豪。要求：
1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
Be proud of myself
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4．在班级里，有值得我们学习的模范学生(model student)。他们有的勤学好问，有的乐于助人，有的多才多艺。你所在班级的模范学生是怎样的呢？你能从他(她)身上学到什么呢？请以“The model student in my class”为题写一篇英语短文介绍你眼中的一位模范学生。
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
2.词数80左右。
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5．青少年时期是一个人成长的重要阶段。处于这一时期的你经历了哪些身体和心理上的变化呢？学校英文报Teens栏目正在以“How I’ve Changed!”为题开展征文活动。请你根据下列提示，用英文写一篇110词左右短文投稿，分享你在外貌、个性、爱好和能力这四个方面的变化，并具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化，谈谈你从这个变化中得到的启发。
注意：（1）开头已给，不计入总词数；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。
How I’ve Changed!
In the past few years, I’ve changed a lot cloth physically and mentally.
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6．学校微信公众号专栏“This Is Us”向同学们征集稿件，话题为My Changes(改变)。
请对比一年前的自己，写一篇文章投稿，从外表，性格，日常生活习惯和学习等方面谈一谈自己的变化，并作适当说明。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.覆盖题目中所有要点；
3.语句通顺正确，衔接自然。
My Changes
It’s been a year since I entered middle school.
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7．某英文网站正在开展以“How I Have Changed”为题的征文活动，请根据以下思维导图和要求写一篇不少于80词的英语短文投稿，谈谈你的成长故事。
要求: 1. 文中必须包含思维导图内的所有信息，可适当发挥;
2. 重点谈谈最重要的改变的原因或影响;
3. 文中不得出现真实的个人信息。
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8．良好的同学关系能让我们收获友谊，快乐学习。请以“How to get along with classmates”为题，用英语写一篇短文，内容须包含以下要点：
（1）What do you do when getting along with classmates (List at least two things you do.)
（2）How is your relationship with classmates after doing these things
要求：词数80左右；文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
How to get along with classmates
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9．某英文网站正在开展以“Teamwork”为主题的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，分享你的一次团队合作经历，如体育活动、小组合作学习、团队游戏等，并谈谈你从中得到的收获。
要求：
1.文章可根据提示内容适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Teamwork is very important.
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10．为彰显沟通在人际交往中的意义，营造充满爱与理解的校园氛围，我们借着“和谐人际关系月”的东风，面向全体同学开展主题征文活动。在这段温暖的时光里，相信大家都有与沟通和爱相关的动人故事——或是一封道歉信重燃友谊，或是一场坦诚谈心温暖家庭。请以“Talk More, Love Always”为题，写一篇英语短文，分享你们用沟通化解矛盾、增进彼此感情的经历；或谈谈沟通在人际交往中的重要性。传递“多沟通，爱常在”的温暖力量！
要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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11．俗话说，“众人拾柴火焰高。”这句话体现了团队合作的重要性。请你结合所学知识，以“The Importance of Teamwork”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你对团队合作的认识。
写作要求：1. 文中须列举至少三点原因，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：reasons原因， importance重要性
The Importance of Teamwork
Teamwork is very important in our life.
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12．某英文网站正在开展以“用心沟通，让问题迎刃而解”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你生活中一次与他人沟通的经历，以及你的收获。
提示词语：listen to, understand, respect
提示问题：●What happened to you
● How did you communicate with others
● What have you learned from the experience
Good communication helps solve problems
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13．团队是梦想的起航地，团结是成功的基石。请以“Teamwork makes the dream work”为题，根据下列提示写一篇英语短文，介绍你的一次团队合作经历。
写作要求：1. 介绍事情的起因、经过、结果；
2. 谈谈你的收获和感想；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称：
4. 词数100左右。
Teamwork makes the dream work
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14．我校英语论坛发起主题为 “和睦相处，快乐成长” 的讨论，希望同学们能和睦友好相处，建设和谐校园。假如你是李华，请你就这一主题发表一些看法。提示：
（1） Do you think it is important to build a good relationship with classmates Why or why not
（2） How can you get along well with your classmates (At least 3 pieces)
（3） What can you do when getting into an argument with your classmates
要求：
（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数100左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
School is not just a place for learning knowledge, but also a community where we connect with classmates.
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15．假设你校英文报开辟了Amazing Inventions专栏，向同学们介绍那些对生活产生重大影响的科技产品。请你根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文给该栏目投稿，介绍智能手表的发展变化以及你对未来智能手表的畅想。
提示：Past: appear in the early 2010s; show the time; give alerts (提醒)
Present: advanced features; tracking health; helping with directions
Future: …
要求：1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确；
2.适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3.80-100词。
The Invention of the Smartwatch
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16．如今，越来越多的家庭拥有了智能设备，如智能音箱、智能手表等。请你根据自己的生活体验，以“My Smart Device”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你家中的一款智能设备。内容包括：
1. 设备的名称和外观；
2. 它的主要功能；
3. 你对它的评价。
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数150左右；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
17．机器人将会给我们的生活带来巨大的变化，未来人们生活中的很多事情将由机器人完成，如：做一些家务、购物、做饭以及不出家门就可以看医生等。请以“The life in the future”为题, 写一篇不少于60词的短文，畅想一下未来有机器人的生活会是什么样子。作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The life in the future
I think in the future there will be more and more robots in our daily lives.
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18．当今科技日新月异，各种发明不断涌现。高科技产品在我们的生活中不可或缺，如智能手机。智能手机是重要的发明，请描述智能手机的功能和带来的便利，以及对我们生活的影响。
要求：
1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺、书写规范；
3.词数：90词左右；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
参考词汇： benefit 益处
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19．伟大的发明促进人类的进步。请你以“The Greatest Invention in My Eyes”为题，并根据以下要点，用英文写一篇短文介绍一项伟大的发明。
要点提示：
1、你认为最伟大的发明是什么；
2、这项发明起到什么作用；
3、这项发明对我们生活的影响
要求：
1、参考要点内容，可适当发挥；
2、语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3、词数80词左右。
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20．当今科技日新月异，各种发明不断涌现。高科技产品在我们的生活中不可或缺，如智能手机(smart phone)、自动语音识别技术(ASR)等； 服务类产品也蓬勃发展， 如网上购物(online shopping)，移动支付(mobile payment)，共享单车(bike sharing)等。请你介绍一款你认为重要的发明，简单描述它并说明你选择它的原因。
要求：
1.要点齐全， 可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺、书写规范；
3.词数： 90 词左右；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
参考词汇： benefit 益处
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
A good example around me
There are many good examples around me. My deskmate, Xiao Yu, is the one who impresses me most.
Last month, our classmate Lin Lin fell ill and missed a week of lessons. Xiao Yu noticed she was worried after returning to school. Every day after class, he spent 30 minutes helping her go over math formulas. He even made handwritten notes for her to review key points. With his help, Lin Lin caught up quickly.
To me, a good example isn’t someone perfect. It’s someone who uses small, kind actions to help others, and whose goodness makes you want to do better too.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：本文写作需要围绕“身边的好榜样”展开，涵盖确定榜样、具体事例及对“好榜样”的定义，考生应注意将“叙事”与“议论”结合，适当补充细节，确保不遗漏任何要点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇提出“身边有很多好榜样”，明确点出“同桌小雨是最让我印象深刻的一个”，引出对小雨事例的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述榜样事例。上个月琳琳生病缺课一周，返校后很担心，小雨每天课后花30分钟帮她复习数学公式，还手写笔记供她复习重点，最终琳琳跟上了进度；
第三步，书写结语。提出对“好榜样”的看法——不是完美的人，而是用微小善举助人、能带动他人变好的人，升华主题，点明榜样的意义。
［亮点词汇］
①good example好榜样
②deskmate同桌
③impresses me most最让我印象深刻
④missed lessons缺课
⑤go over复习
⑥handwritten notes手写笔记
⑦catch up跟上（进度）
［高分句型］
①My deskmate, Xiao Yu, is the one who impresses me most.（who引导的定语从句）
②It’s someone who uses small, kind actions to help others, and whose goodness makes you want to do better too.（who引导的定语从句，whose引导的定语从句）
2．例文：
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. So do I. John is my hero. He is a doctor. He works very hard and he is always ready to help others. He once saved many people during a serious illness outbreak. He is kind, brave and never gives up.
I admire him because he uses his skills to make the world a better place. He teaches me that helping others is very important. I want to learn from his hard work and kindness. I will study hard and try my best to help people around me, just like my hero.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：结合所给话题，介绍自己的英雄以及适当拓展部分内容，如向英雄学习的感想、行动等，注意行文逻辑和连贯性。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引出话题，点明心中的英雄是谁；
第二步：描述英雄的事迹和品质；说明英雄对自己的影响；
第三步：书写结语，表达向英雄学习的决心和具体行动。
[亮点词汇]
①learn from 从……学到
②try one’s best to do sth .尽某人最大努力做某事
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①I admire him because he uses his skills to make the world a better place. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I will study hard and try my best to help people around me, just like my hero. (and连接的并列句)
3．例文
Be proud of myself
Everyone should be proud of himself. I’m proud of myself because of a wonderful experience.
Last month, our school had a sports meeting. I am good at running and I really hoped to get good grades in the running race. So I did lots of exercise to build myself up. Every day I got up early and ran for at least 30 minutes. In the running race, I tried my best to catch up with others and passed the finish line successfully. I won first place. How happy and proud I felt!
I’m proud of myself not only for the good result but also for my hard work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：叙述你成长进步或助人为乐的经历，需要遵照所给要求，适当补充细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我为自己感到骄傲”的话题；
第二步，讲述为自己感到骄傲的一件事；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②be good at擅长
③catch up with赶上
[高分句型]
①How happy and proud I felt! (感叹句)
②I’m proud of myself not only for the good result but also for my hard work. (not only... but also连接的并列句)
4．One possible version
The model student in my class
In my class, there are some model students we can look up to. Among them, Tom impresses me deeply.
He is really hardworking. He listens carefully in class and asks questions actively. After school, he always finishes his homework on time. What’s more, he is very helpful. Whenever someone is in trouble, he is ready to offer help.
From him, I’ve learned that I should be diligent in study and kind to others. I hope I can be a student like him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作话题已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干中的信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，引出主题，指出自己眼中的模范学生是谁；
②第二步，围绕“模范学生”的特质展开叙述；
③第三步，总结感悟，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①look up to崇拜
②on time按时
③be ready to准备好
[高分句型]
①Whenever someone is in trouble, he is ready to offer help.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）
②From him, I’ve learned that I should be diligent in study and kind to others.（that引导的宾语从句）
5．例文：
How I’ve Changed!
In the past few years, I’ve changed a lot both physically and mentally.
I used to be thin and short. But now I’m tall and strong. I’m a brave and outgoing student. However, I was a little bit shy before. My hobby has changed, too. I used to play computer games on weekends. But now I spend much time playing basketball with my friends. Besides, my English has improved a lot. I used to be afraid of speaking English. Later I tried to listen more and speak more. Now I even dare to make speeches in public in English. The most important change in my life was becoming interested in reading. Last summer, my best friend gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books. It was the most important change because I learned a lot from reading. What’s more, reading makes me happy and relaxed.
What great changes! I hope I can become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”穿插；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。用“在过去的几年里，我的身体和精神都发生了很大的变化”引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述外貌、个性、爱好和能力这四个方面的变化，具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化以及启发；
第三步，总结全文，表明“我希望我能变得越来越好”，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
③be afraid of害怕
[高分句型]
It was the most important change because I learned a lot from reading.（because引导的原因状语从句）
6．例文
My Changes
It’s been a year since I entered middle school. I have changed a lot.
I used to be short, shy and silent. I’m much taller, outgoing and active now. I used to have poor English study results, poor oral English and often made mistakes. Now I have found the right learning methods, such as making foreign friends and speaking more English. I also make fewer and fewer mistakes by keeping an English diary. Now my English is among the best. I used to like playing games and watching short videos on my mobile phone. Now I like listening to music and joining the school basketball team. I play basketball very well. If I have time on weekends, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends.
I really like my changes. They make me better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，从外表，性格，日常生活习惯和学习等方面谈一谈自己的变化，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，从外表，性格，日常生活习惯和学习等方面谈一谈自己的变化；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②make mistakes犯错误
③keep an English diary记英语日记
[高分句型]
①If I have time on weekends, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends.(if引导的条件状语从句)
7．
例文
In the past few years, I’ve changed a lot, both physically and mentally.
I used to be thin and short. But now I’m tall and strong. I’m a brave and outgoing student. However, I was a little bit shy before. My hobby has changed, too. I used to play computer games on weekends. But now I spend much time playing basketball with my friends. Besides, my English has improved a lot. I used to be afraid of speaking English. Later I tried to listen more and speak more. Now I even dare to make speeches in public in English.
The most important change in my life was becoming interested in reading. Last summer, my best friend gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books. It was the most important change because I learned a lot from reading. What’s more, reading makes me happy and relaxed.
What great changes! I hope I can become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，直接点明自己变化很大；
第二步，从外貌、性格、爱好等方面具体阐述变化；
第三步，介绍最重要的变化，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常常
②a little bit一点点
③spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
④be afraid of害怕
[高分句型]
①I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books.（so... that引导的结果状语从句）
②I hope I can become better and better.（省略that的宾语从句）
8．例文：
How to get along with classmates
Good relationships with classmates make school life happier.
To get along well with them, I always try to be friendly and helpful. For example, I share my notes and offer help when they need it. Also, I respect their opinions and listen carefully during discussions.
After doing these things, my classmates and I have become closer. We trust each other more and enjoy studying together. I feel happier in class because of our strong friendship.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：结合所给话题，介绍两件与同学相处时做的事情并描述采取这些行动后与同学的关系如何，可适当增加细节，注意行文逻辑和连贯性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，简要说明良好的同学关系的重要性；
第二步，列举具体与同学相处时做的事情，至少写两件事；
第三步，总结关系变化，说明采取这些行动后，同学关系变得更融洽。
[亮点词汇]
①get along with 与……相处
②because of 因为
[高分句型]
To get along well with them, I always try to be friendly and helpful. (动词不定式表目的)
9．例文
Teamwork is very important. When I see the word “teamwork”, I can’t help thinking of my basketball team.
Last term, our school held a basketball game. Because of my carelessness, we lost that game. But my team members didn’t say any hard words to me. They offered to help me practice “throwing and catching” after school. With their help, I improved a lot. Two months later, we won the championship.
From this experience, I learned that one tree can’t make a forest. With good teamwork, nothing is impossible.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出“团队合作”的主题；
第二步，分享自己团队合作的经历；
第三步，分享自己的感悟与收获。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t help doing sth.忍不住做某事
②because of因为，由于
③offer to do sth.主动提出做某事
[高分句型]
①When I see the word “teamwork”, I can’t help thinking of my basketball team.（when引导时间状语从句）
②From this experience, I learned that one tree can’t make a forest.（that引导宾语从句）
10．范文：
Talk More, Love Always
Communication is the bridge between hearts.
Last year, I had a quarrel with my best friend over a misunderstanding. For days, we avoided each other until I decided to talk openly. Through honest conversation, we realized our mistakes and reconciled.
This experience taught me that love grows when we dare to express our feelings. In daily life, conflicts are inevitable, but communication can turn them into opportunities for deeper connections. A simple “thank you” or “I’m sorry” can warm relationships. Let’s remember: where words flow, love follows.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般过去时（叙述经历）和一般现在时（阐述观点）；
③提示：需结合个人经历和沟通的重要性展开，注意情感表达和逻辑衔接。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引入主题，强调沟通的意义；
第二步：用个人故事佐证（矛盾→沟通→和解）；
第三步：总结观点，呼吁行动。
[亮点词汇]
①reconcile 和解
②inevitable不可避免的
③turn sth into...将……转变为……
[高分句型]
①This experience taught me that love grows when we dare to express our feelings.（宾语从句+时间状语从句）
11．范文：
The Importance of Teamwork
Teamwork is very important in our life.
Teamwork can do good to us in many ways. There are some reasons for it. First, we always help each other and we are close friends. Second, it helps us overcome difficulties more easily. When we face a problem, teammates can offer various ideas and support. Third, we can learn from each other, which improves our abilities. We were happy with our teamwork.
In a word, teamwork plays an important role in our success and growth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：结合题干中“俗语”内容，介绍团队合作的重要性以及原因（至少三点），可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从三个不同方面介绍需要团队合作的原因；
第三步，书写结语。再次强调团队合作的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①help each other互相帮助
②overcome difficulties克服困难
③in a word总之
④play an important role起重要作用
[高分句型]
①When we face a problem, teammates can offer various ideas and support.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Third, we can learn from each other, which improves our abilities.（which引导的定语从句）
12．例文：
Good communication helps solve problems
Last month, I had a disagreement with my best friend because she thought I broke her favorite pen. In fact, it was someone else. At first, we were both angry and didn’t talk to each other.
Later, I decided to communicate with her. I listened to her feelings patiently and explained everything calmly. We both realized it was a misunderstanding. After that, we apologized and made up.
From this experience, I have learned that listening, understanding and respect are the keys to good communication. It helps us rebuild our friendship.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：围绕“沟通”展开，结合自身经历写清楚事件发生的背景、沟通过程及收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出事件，说明发生了什么误会或问题；
第二步，叙述自己是如何通过沟通解决问题的，包括倾听、理解与尊重等方式；
第三步，总结自己从这次经历中学到的沟通技巧与感悟。
[亮点词汇]
① have a disagreement with与……闹矛盾
② communicate with与……交流
③ at last最后
④ make up和好
[高分句型]
① I had a disagreement with my best friend because she thought I broke her favorite pen. （because引导的原因状语从句）
② I have learned that listening, understanding and respect are the keys to good communication.（宾语从句）
13．例文
Teamwork makes the dream work
Teamwork is very important in our life and study. I learned this from an unforgettable experience.
Last Tuesday, we had a basketball match with Class Two. At the beginning, every player tried to show himself. We just ran around and didn’t pass the ball to others. Soon we fell behind. Then our teacher advised us to work together as a team. “You must know that basketball is a team sport,” he said. We followed his advice. We play with each other as well as possible. In the end, we won the game.
This experience made me understand that one player doesn’t make a team.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍团队合作的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述自己篮球比赛团队合作成功的经历；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己对团队合作的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事
②as well as possible尽可能好
③in the end最后
[高分句型]
This experience made me understand that one player doesn’t make a team. (that引导的宾语从句)
14．例文：
School is not just a place for learning knowledge, but also a community where we connect with classmates. It is very important to build a good relationship with our classmates. Because it can help us to study better and happier.
Here are some ways to get along well with our classmates. Firstly, we should learn to share. If we share our happiness with them, we will feel happier. If we share our sadness with them, we will feel more comfortable. Secondly, we should respect them. That will make them feel more appreciated. Thirdly, we should help them more. If we give them a hand when they are in trouble, we will feel closer to each other.
Getting into an argument with our classmates is sometimes unavoidable. When this happens, we should keep calm and try to solve the problem by communicating.
In a word, if we want to get along well with our classmates, we should treat them in a friendly way.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，强调与同学建立良好关系的重要性；
第二步，阐述与同学友好相处的方法；
第三步，说明与同学发生争执时的做法及总结；
[亮点词汇]
①get along well with 与……友好相处
②give them a hand 帮助他们
③in a word 总之
[高分句型]
①School is not just a place for learning knowledge, but also a community where we connect with classmates.（where引导的定语从句）
15．例文
The Invention of the Smartwatch
Smartwatches have made a significant impact on our lives. They first appeared in the early 2010s. At that time, their main functions were showing the time and giving alerts for calls or messages.
Now, smartwatches have advanced features. They can track our health, such as heart rate and sleep patterns. They also help with directions, making it easy for us to find our way when we’re out.
Looking to the future, I think smartwatches will be even more powerful. Maybe they can monitor our health more accurately and even predict potential health issues. They might also integrate with more smart devices, allowing us to control our homes just through the watch. It’s exciting to imagine how smartwatches will continue to change our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”、“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作主题已给出，介绍智能手表的发展历程（过去、现在）并畅想未来功能，可适当发挥，增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，说明智能手表的重要性并介绍智能手表的过去；
第二步，介绍智能手表的现在发展；
第三步，对未来智能手表的畅想。
[亮点词汇]
①make a significant impact on对……产生重大影响
②at that time在那时
[高分句型]
They also help with directions, making it easy for us to find our way when we’re out. (when引导时间状语从句)
16．例文：
My Smart Device
Nowadays, there are more and more smart devices in our daily lives. In my family, we have a smart speaker named Xiaodu. It is really cool and useful.
Xiaodu is small and round like a cute drum. It is mainly white, with a touch-sensitive panel on the top and a speaker at the bottom. Its simple design makes it easy to fit in any corner of our living room.
Xiaodu has many amazing functions. First, it can play various kinds of music. Whenever I feel tired or want to relax, I just say “Xiaodu, play my favorite music”, and then beautiful melodies will fill the room. Besides, it is a great helper for my study. I can ask it questions about my homework, like grammar points or math problems. It can give clear explanations right away. Also, it can tell interesting stories. At bedtime, I often let it tell me some fairy tales to help me fall asleep.
In my opinion, Xiaodu is more than just a device. It brings much convenience and joy to our family. It makes our lives more colorful and easier. I really love my smart speaker!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：从三个方面进行写作，每方面需要具体展开。注意条理清晰、语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家中智能设备的名称和外观；
第二步，介绍此智能设备的主要功能；
第三步，对此智能设备进行评价。
[亮点词汇]
①amazing functions令人惊叹的功能
②various kinds of各种各样的
③more than just不只是
④much convenience and joy许多便利和欢乐
[高分句型]
Its simple design makes it easy to fit in any corner of our living room. (it作形式宾语)
17．One possible version:
The life in the future
I think in the future there will be more and more robots in our daily lives. Robots are very common nowadays. People can see them in the factory, mall and even in the army. I’m thinking about that it will be wonderful if we have our own robots. First of all, we can save much time on unnecessary things, such as washing clothes, doing dishes and cleaning the floor. Secondly, people no longer feel lonely when they are alone. Robots can talk with people, and even play with people. If parents don’t have enough time to be with their kids, they can completely let robots take care of their children. The most important is that robots can make people safe. In a word, it will be very convenient if we all have robots!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇想象类短文，主题是“未来的生活”；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应围绕“未来有机器人的生活”进行畅想，适当添加细节，突出未来生活的变化与便利。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我认为未来在我们的日常生活中会有越来越多的机器人”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“做家务、购物、做饭以及看医生”等几个方面畅想未来有机器人的生活具体是什么样子;
第三步，书写结语。表达“未来生活将因机器人而更加美好”的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more 越来越多的
②First of all 首先
③no longer 不再
④In a word 总之
[高分句型]
①I’m thinking about that it will be wonderful if we have our own robots.（that引导的宾语从句+if引导的条件状语从句）
②If parents don’t have enough time to be with their kids, they can completely let robots take care of their children.（if引导的条件状语从句）
18．例文
In today’s rapidly advancing world, many inventions have become essential in our daily lives. Among them, I believe the smartphone is one of the most important inventions.
The smartphone can connect to the Internet, allowing us to search for and store information easily. It also enables us to communicate with our family and friends through video calls and messages anytime, anywhere. Moreover, smartphones support various applications like online shopping, mobile payment, and bike sharing, making our lives more convenient.
The benefits of smartphones are numerous, as they save us time and provide us with endless possibilities. Therefore, I think the smartphone is a crucial invention that has significantly improved our quality of life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中功能、便利、影响的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出智能手机的重要性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出智能手机是重要发明；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从功能、便利、对生活的影响几方面介绍智能手机；
第三步，书写结语。强调其重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①essential必不可少的
②connect to连接
③enable使能够
④numerous众多的
[高分句型]
①The benefits of smartphones are numerous, as they save us time and provide us with endless possibilities. (as引导原因状语从句)
②I think the smartphone is a crucial invention that has significantly improved our quality of life. (宾语从句)
19．例文
The Greatest Invention in My Eyes
What do you think is the greatest invention In my opinion, the Internet is the greatest invention in the world which brings us much convenience.
In fact, the invention of the Internet may be the most important for humans, bringing us into the new age of information technology. Even the use of 5G today is based on the Internet. It has also completely changed our life. The whole world has become a global village. People from different places are connected together by the Internet. It offers lots of convenience to our daily life, such as online classes, mobile payment, online shopping and self-driving cars.
In a word, the Internet has made our life wonderful and it will continue to do so.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题，点出你眼中最伟大的发明是什么；
第二步，发明起到的作用；
第三步，这项发明对我们生活的影响。
【亮点词汇】①the new age of information technology信息技术新时代
②be based on基于……
③online classes在线课程
【高分句型】①In my opinion, the Internet is the greatest invention in the world which brings us much convenience. （which引导的定语从句）
20．例文
In today’s rapidly advancing world, many inventions have become essential in our daily lives. Among them, I believe the smartphone is one of the most important inventions.
The smartphone can connect to the Internet, allowing us to search for and store information easily. It also enables us to communicate with our family and friends through video calls and messages anytime, anywhere. Moreover, smartphones support various applications like online shopping, mobile payment, and bike sharing, making our lives more convenient.
The benefits of smartphones are numerous, as they save us time and provide us with endless possibilities. Therefore, I think the smartphone is a crucial invention that has significantly improved our quality of life.
【总体分析】① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作时必须要描述这项发明，并说明它的益处。
【写作步骤】第一步，点明观点，认为智能手机是重要的发明；
第二步，描述智能手机的功能和带来的便利，如上网、视频通话、信息存储、支持各种应用等；
第三步，总结智能手机的益处，强调其对生活质量的提升。
【亮点词汇】① rapidly快速地
② invention发明
③ essential基本的
④ search for搜索
⑤ store存储
⑥ communicate交流
⑦ convenient方便的
⑧ benefit益处
【高分句型】①In today’s rapidly advancing world, many inventions have become essential in our daily lives. (现在完成时)
②The smartphone can connect to the Internet, allowing us to search for and store information easily. (非谓语动词)
③Therefore, I think the smartphone is a crucial invention that has significantly improved our quality of life. (宾语从句)
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