Unit 2 Let’s talk teens Integrated skills 建议信写作 课件(共30张PPT)-译林版(2019)必修第一册
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(共30张PPT)
Unit 2 Let’s talk teens
Integrated skills
You feel unhappy when your parents ...
interfere/ nt f (r)/(干涉) too much in your life
don't respect your privacy/ pr v si/ (隐私)
make decisions for you
force you into doing soething you don't want to
don't trust you
always compare you with others
Rebecca
Simon
Laura
The three teenagers write to Cynthia, the host of a radio program called Teen Time, about their problems with their parents.
Read and summarize
Rebecca's problem:
She _______ hard as her _______ wishes, but her mother pays too much _______ to her ______.
studies
mother
attention
grades
Read and summarize
Read and summarize
Simon's problem:
He is _____ and ______ for parents' love, but they are always ______ and spend _____ time with him.
lonely
eager
busy
little
Read and summarize
Laura's problem:
She desires ________, but her parents ______ her too much.
adventure
protect
Rebecca’s problem: She wants her mother to pay less attention to her grades.
Simon’s problem: He feels lonely because his parents do not spend much time with him.
Laura’s problem: Her parents protect her too much.
1.Which problem is the most difficult one to deal with Why
2. Did you have any suggestions to Rebecca
Questions
Discuss and share
Circle some keywords
Pre-listening
While-listening
Pre-listening
v.
n.
n.
v.
v.
n.
v.
v.
v.
Talk to
your feelings
a good time
do well at school
meet in the middle
your interests
enjoy it
Put yourself
go out with
your friends
While-listening
Dear Rebecca,
I understand your feelings. As you mentioned in the email, you put a lot of effort into your schoolwork. If your mother doesn’t value that, of course you’re going to be unhappy. But remember: every parent has high hopes for their children. Your mother wants you to be successful but she probably fails to see how you struggle. Try these pieces of advice and see if they help improve your relationship.
What are the features of a letter of advice
Post-listening
Show her _____________
understanding
Show her _____________
attitude
First, talk to your mother. Make sure she understands your feelings. Choose a good time and start the conversation politely. You can begin with something like, “I know that you expect me to do well at school, but I’m struggling sometimes. Can we please talk ” you should also try to meet in the middle when talking to your mother. Of course, school matters, but relaxation is good for you too. Tell your mother about your interests and ask for more free time to spend on them. For example, if you like listening to music, explain why you enjoy it and how it helps you. Why don’t you make a deal that you are both satisfied with
What are the features of a letter of advice
Post-listening
Offer _______ on how to improve the relationship
advice
Second, put yourself in your mother’s shoes and try to understand what she does. I know it isn’t easy, but you must be patient. When your mother keeps pressing you to study all the time, think about the reason why she does so. When I was your age, I thought senior high school was tiring too. I couldn’t understand why my parents were so strict with me. However, when I grew up, I realized that they just wanted me to have the best possible future. After that, I became so much closer to my mum and dad.
Everything will turn out all right, I promise.
Yours sincerely,
Cynthia
What are the features of a letter of advice
Post-listening
End the letter with _______ message
Offer _______ on how to improve the relationship
advice
comfort
假如你是李华，你的朋友Rebecca来信告诉你，她因父母太过于关注自己的成绩而感到十分苦恼，请你给她写一封回信，提出你的建议和理由。
Dear Rebecca,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Homework
If you are to give advice to someone, you should:
Offer some useful advice to help solve the problem
Start by showing background and understanding
End the letter with a positive message (give comfort)
TIPS for writing
Dear Rebecca,
Knowing that you want your mother to pay less attention to your grades, I’m writing to give you a hand. Here are some suggestions for you.
First of all, it might be a good idea to talk to your mother. Tell your mother about your interests and explain how they help you. In that way, she will understand your feelings. What’s more, if I were you, I would put myself in her shoes and try to understand what she does. By doing this, maybe you will realize they just want you to have the best possible future.
I do hope you will find these suggestions useful. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Cynthia
Dear Rebecca,
Knowing that you want your mother to pay less attention to your grades, I’m writing to give you a hand. Here are some suggestions for you.
First of all, it might be a good idea to talk to your mother. Tell your mother about your interests and explain how they help you. In that way, she will understand your feelings. What’s more, if I were you, I would put myself in her shoes and try to understand what she does. By doing this, maybe you will realize she just want you to have the best possible future.
I do hope you will find these suggestions useful. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Cynthia
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
背景信息
背景信息
写信目的
写信目的
建议1
建议1
建议1
原因
原因
建议2
建议2
建议2
原因
原因
希望祝愿
期待回信
the structure(结构) of advice letters
useful expressions
Dear Rebecca,
Knowing that you want your mother to pay less attention to your grades, I’m writing to give you a hand. Here are some suggestions for you.
First of all, it might be a good idea to talk to your mother. Tell your mother about your interests and explain how they help you. In that way, she will understand your feelings. What’s more, if I were you, I would put myself in her shoes and try to understand what she does. By doing this, maybe you will realize she just want you to have the best possible future.
I do hope you will find these suggestions useful. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Cynthia
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
假如你是李华，你的朋友Simon来信告诉你，他因父母太过于忙碌而感到十分孤独，请你给他写一封回信，提出你的建议和理由。
Dear Simon,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Sample
Dear Simon,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel lonely because they’re too busy to accomany you. But it’s because they are struggling for a better life for you. Try these pieces of advice and see if they help.
Firstly, it might be a good idea to talk to your parents about your feelings and put yourself in their shoes, so that you can understand each other better and make a deal that a family activity can be hold once a week. In addition, if I were you, I would spend more time enjoying interests and making new friends, which help reduce stress and enrich your life.
I do hope you will find my advice useful. I wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，曾在新西兰某高中做交换生。该校学生会主席John发来邮件，请你对他校下个月举办的以中国春节为主题的图片展提一些建议。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1.认为图片展很有意义；2.对图片展的建议：3.预祝展览成功。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，曾在新西兰某高中做交换生。该校学生会主席John发来邮件，请你对他校下个月举办的以中国春节为主题的图片展提一些建议。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.认为图片展很有意义； 2.对图片展的建议： 3.预祝展览成功。
注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
1.文章体裁是什么？
2.图片展怎么翻译？
3.文章要点及重要程度怎么分？
4.“认为图片展很有意义”怎么切题？（不落要点）
5.“对图片展的建议”，怎么提建议更有针对性？
6.“预祝展览成功”，这个需要包括什么？
1.文章体裁是什么？以“中国春节”为话题的建议信。
2.图片展怎么翻译？ picture show/exhibition
3.文章开头布局包括什么？
I. 应用文题目里的每句话都需要一读再读，然后确定哪些是要保留文章里的。
3.文章开头布局包括什么？
II. 开头应该包括：背景+目的 根据“图片展提一些建议”可得，目的是“提建议”，背景是对方向你询问下个月春节主题图片展的建议。（你的心情：喜悦）
开头举例：Given that you’ll hold a picture show themed on Chinese Spring Festival next month, I’m glad to share some related suggestions.
4.文章要点及重要程度怎么分？
文章要点2“对图片展的建议”
5.“认为图片展很有意义”怎么切题？（不落要点）
从图片展的主题→中国春节画展；
画展的举办方→新西兰的学校。
那怎么把两个点结合起来呢？
5.“认为图片展很有意义”怎么切题？（不落要点）
1. 切实评价画展的好；
2. 描述它的意义的时候把“中新”两国文化的交融/共同设计进去。
例：Undoubtedly, such a wonderful event would offer all the members of your school a platform to feel the distinctive flavor of the Spring Festival. Through this activity, some shared features may be found between the culture of New Zealand and China.
6.“对图片展的建议”，怎么提建议更有针对性？
建议信的拆字法：把需要提建议的主题词拆开来，分别对拆开的主题词提建议。
主题词：图片展, 拆成“图片”和“展”两个主题词。可从图片的选材和展的布置分别提建议，比如图片必须选择相关能够反映中国春节文化的图片；展可以布置成中国红。
例：It’s recommended you should decorate all the sites of the show into Chinese red and pick out some relevant pictures to exhibit.
7.“预祝展览成功”，这个需要包括什么？
从人和物两个角度出发。
人：出席人员收获颇丰
物：祝愿画展大获成功
8.请思考整篇文章的布局。
一、审题构思
1.确定体裁: 春节主题的“回信+建议信”
2.确定人称: 第一人称+第二人称
3.确定时态:一般将来时+一般现在时
二、谋篇布局
第一段: 得知消息+分享建议
第二段: 评价画展（从跨文化交流出发）+提建议（从“画的内容”和“展的设计”两方面出发）
第三段: 祝画展大获成功+祝参展人员有所收获
Dear John,
Given that you’ll hold a picture show themed on Chinese Spring Festival next month, I’m glad to share some related suggestions.
Undoubtedly, such a wonderful event would offer all the members of your school a platform to feel the unique tradition of the Spring Festival. Through this way, some shared features may be found between the culture of New Zealand and China. As for the advice, firstly, it’s recommended you should decorate all the sites into Chinese red and pick out some relevant pictures to exhibit. What’s more, you can invite Chinese exchange students like me to introduce exhibited pictures.
Wish your show a great success and all of you could reap a lot in it. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Unit 2 Let’s talk teens
Integrated skills
You feel unhappy when your parents ...
interfere/ nt f (r)/(干涉) too much in your life
don't respect your privacy/ pr v si/ (隐私)
make decisions for you
force you into doing soething you don't want to
don't trust you
always compare you with others
Rebecca
Simon
Laura
The three teenagers write to Cynthia, the host of a radio program called Teen Time, about their problems with their parents.
Read and summarize
Rebecca's problem:
She _______ hard as her _______ wishes, but her mother pays too much _______ to her ______.
studies
mother
attention
grades
Read and summarize
Read and summarize
Simon's problem:
He is _____ and ______ for parents' love, but they are always ______ and spend _____ time with him.
lonely
eager
busy
little
Read and summarize
Laura's problem:
She desires ________, but her parents ______ her too much.
adventure
protect
Rebecca’s problem: She wants her mother to pay less attention to her grades.
Simon’s problem: He feels lonely because his parents do not spend much time with him.
Laura’s problem: Her parents protect her too much.
1.Which problem is the most difficult one to deal with Why
2. Did you have any suggestions to Rebecca
Questions
Discuss and share
Circle some keywords
Pre-listening
While-listening
Pre-listening
v.
n.
n.
v.
v.
n.
v.
v.
v.
Talk to
your feelings
a good time
do well at school
meet in the middle
your interests
enjoy it
Put yourself
go out with
your friends
While-listening
Dear Rebecca,
I understand your feelings. As you mentioned in the email, you put a lot of effort into your schoolwork. If your mother doesn’t value that, of course you’re going to be unhappy. But remember: every parent has high hopes for their children. Your mother wants you to be successful but she probably fails to see how you struggle. Try these pieces of advice and see if they help improve your relationship.
What are the features of a letter of advice
Post-listening
Show her _____________
understanding
Show her _____________
attitude
First, talk to your mother. Make sure she understands your feelings. Choose a good time and start the conversation politely. You can begin with something like, “I know that you expect me to do well at school, but I’m struggling sometimes. Can we please talk ” you should also try to meet in the middle when talking to your mother. Of course, school matters, but relaxation is good for you too. Tell your mother about your interests and ask for more free time to spend on them. For example, if you like listening to music, explain why you enjoy it and how it helps you. Why don’t you make a deal that you are both satisfied with
What are the features of a letter of advice
Post-listening
Offer _______ on how to improve the relationship
advice
Second, put yourself in your mother’s shoes and try to understand what she does. I know it isn’t easy, but you must be patient. When your mother keeps pressing you to study all the time, think about the reason why she does so. When I was your age, I thought senior high school was tiring too. I couldn’t understand why my parents were so strict with me. However, when I grew up, I realized that they just wanted me to have the best possible future. After that, I became so much closer to my mum and dad.
Everything will turn out all right, I promise.
Yours sincerely,
Cynthia
What are the features of a letter of advice
Post-listening
End the letter with _______ message
Offer _______ on how to improve the relationship
advice
comfort
假如你是李华，你的朋友Rebecca来信告诉你，她因父母太过于关注自己的成绩而感到十分苦恼，请你给她写一封回信，提出你的建议和理由。
Dear Rebecca,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Homework
If you are to give advice to someone, you should:
Offer some useful advice to help solve the problem
Start by showing background and understanding
End the letter with a positive message (give comfort)
TIPS for writing
Dear Rebecca,
Knowing that you want your mother to pay less attention to your grades, I’m writing to give you a hand. Here are some suggestions for you.
First of all, it might be a good idea to talk to your mother. Tell your mother about your interests and explain how they help you. In that way, she will understand your feelings. What’s more, if I were you, I would put myself in her shoes and try to understand what she does. By doing this, maybe you will realize they just want you to have the best possible future.
I do hope you will find these suggestions useful. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Cynthia
Dear Rebecca,
Knowing that you want your mother to pay less attention to your grades, I’m writing to give you a hand. Here are some suggestions for you.
First of all, it might be a good idea to talk to your mother. Tell your mother about your interests and explain how they help you. In that way, she will understand your feelings. What’s more, if I were you, I would put myself in her shoes and try to understand what she does. By doing this, maybe you will realize she just want you to have the best possible future.
I do hope you will find these suggestions useful. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Cynthia
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
背景信息
背景信息
写信目的
写信目的
建议1
建议1
建议1
原因
原因
建议2
建议2
建议2
原因
原因
希望祝愿
期待回信
the structure(结构) of advice letters
useful expressions
Dear Rebecca,
Knowing that you want your mother to pay less attention to your grades, I’m writing to give you a hand. Here are some suggestions for you.
First of all, it might be a good idea to talk to your mother. Tell your mother about your interests and explain how they help you. In that way, she will understand your feelings. What’s more, if I were you, I would put myself in her shoes and try to understand what she does. By doing this, maybe you will realize she just want you to have the best possible future.
I do hope you will find these suggestions useful. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Cynthia
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
假如你是李华，你的朋友Simon来信告诉你，他因父母太过于忙碌而感到十分孤独，请你给他写一封回信，提出你的建议和理由。
Dear Simon,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Sample
Dear Simon,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel lonely because they’re too busy to accomany you. But it’s because they are struggling for a better life for you. Try these pieces of advice and see if they help.
Firstly, it might be a good idea to talk to your parents about your feelings and put yourself in their shoes, so that you can understand each other better and make a deal that a family activity can be hold once a week. In addition, if I were you, I would spend more time enjoying interests and making new friends, which help reduce stress and enrich your life.
I do hope you will find my advice useful. I wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，曾在新西兰某高中做交换生。该校学生会主席John发来邮件，请你对他校下个月举办的以中国春节为主题的图片展提一些建议。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1.认为图片展很有意义；2.对图片展的建议：3.预祝展览成功。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，曾在新西兰某高中做交换生。该校学生会主席John发来邮件，请你对他校下个月举办的以中国春节为主题的图片展提一些建议。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.认为图片展很有意义； 2.对图片展的建议： 3.预祝展览成功。
注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
1.文章体裁是什么？
2.图片展怎么翻译？
3.文章要点及重要程度怎么分？
4.“认为图片展很有意义”怎么切题？（不落要点）
5.“对图片展的建议”，怎么提建议更有针对性？
6.“预祝展览成功”，这个需要包括什么？
1.文章体裁是什么？以“中国春节”为话题的建议信。
2.图片展怎么翻译？ picture show/exhibition
3.文章开头布局包括什么？
I. 应用文题目里的每句话都需要一读再读，然后确定哪些是要保留文章里的。
3.文章开头布局包括什么？
II. 开头应该包括：背景+目的 根据“图片展提一些建议”可得，目的是“提建议”，背景是对方向你询问下个月春节主题图片展的建议。（你的心情：喜悦）
开头举例：Given that you’ll hold a picture show themed on Chinese Spring Festival next month, I’m glad to share some related suggestions.
4.文章要点及重要程度怎么分？
文章要点2“对图片展的建议”
5.“认为图片展很有意义”怎么切题？（不落要点）
从图片展的主题→中国春节画展；
画展的举办方→新西兰的学校。
那怎么把两个点结合起来呢？
5.“认为图片展很有意义”怎么切题？（不落要点）
1. 切实评价画展的好；
2. 描述它的意义的时候把“中新”两国文化的交融/共同设计进去。
例：Undoubtedly, such a wonderful event would offer all the members of your school a platform to feel the distinctive flavor of the Spring Festival. Through this activity, some shared features may be found between the culture of New Zealand and China.
6.“对图片展的建议”，怎么提建议更有针对性？
建议信的拆字法：把需要提建议的主题词拆开来，分别对拆开的主题词提建议。
主题词：图片展, 拆成“图片”和“展”两个主题词。可从图片的选材和展的布置分别提建议，比如图片必须选择相关能够反映中国春节文化的图片；展可以布置成中国红。
例：It’s recommended you should decorate all the sites of the show into Chinese red and pick out some relevant pictures to exhibit.
7.“预祝展览成功”，这个需要包括什么？
从人和物两个角度出发。
人：出席人员收获颇丰
物：祝愿画展大获成功
8.请思考整篇文章的布局。
一、审题构思
1.确定体裁: 春节主题的“回信+建议信”
2.确定人称: 第一人称+第二人称
3.确定时态:一般将来时+一般现在时
二、谋篇布局
第一段: 得知消息+分享建议
第二段: 评价画展（从跨文化交流出发）+提建议（从“画的内容”和“展的设计”两方面出发）
第三段: 祝画展大获成功+祝参展人员有所收获
Dear John,
Given that you’ll hold a picture show themed on Chinese Spring Festival next month, I’m glad to share some related suggestions.
Undoubtedly, such a wonderful event would offer all the members of your school a platform to feel the unique tradition of the Spring Festival. Through this way, some shared features may be found between the culture of New Zealand and China. As for the advice, firstly, it’s recommended you should decorate all the sites into Chinese red and pick out some relevant pictures to exhibit. What’s more, you can invite Chinese exchange students like me to introduce exhibited pictures.
Wish your show a great success and all of you could reap a lot in it. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua