2026届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写 A Birthday Balloon 课件(共23张PPT)
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(共23张PPT)
A Birthday Balloon
读后续写
读后续写三步走：
1.解析语篇
2.构思情节
3.编写润色
第二节读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Desiree, a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly over a photo of her father, Ker, who had died nine months earlier. She was hugging the photo with her fingers running around his face. “Daddy,” she said softly, “why won't you come back "
Instead of gradually adjusting to her father's death, Desiree refused to accept it."Daddy will be home soon,” she'd tell her mother “He's at work.” When she played with her toy telephone, she pretended she was chating with her father. “I miss you, Daddy,"she'd say. "When will you come back ” Desiree's situation made her mother worried.
Days later, it was Ken's birthday. “How will I send him a card ” Desiree asked her mother. “How about if we tie a letter to a balloon,” her mother said,“and send it up to the sky " Desiree's eyes immediately lit up.
Step 1 解析语篇1:通读全文
Her mother took her to a store and Desiree picked out a balloon with Happy birthday above a drawing of The Little Mermaid （《美人鱼》). Desiree and her father had often watched it. The child's eyes shone as they were on the way to Ken's grave. Then Desiree read a letter to her dad. “Happy birthday, Daddy. I love you and miss you,” she said quickly. “I hope you will get this and can write to me on my birthday in January."
Her mother wrote the message and their address on a small piece of paper, which was then wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string on the balloon. Finally, Desiree released the balloon. For almost an hour, they watched the shining spot of silver grow smaller and smaller till it disappeared. “Now Dad’s going to write back to me,” Desiree declared confidently.
Every day since they'd released the balloon, Desiree had asked her mother, “Do you think Daddy has received my balloon yet ” Several weeks passed, and she stopped asking.
Step 1 解析语篇1：通读全文
第二节读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Desiree,a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly over a photo of her father, Ken, who had died nine months earlier. She was hugging the photo with her fingers running around his face. “Daddy,” she said softly, “why won't you come back "
Instead of gradually adjusting to her father's death, Desiree refused to accept it."Daddy will be home soon,” she'd tell her mother “He's at work.” When she played with her toy telephone, she pretended she was chating with her father. “I miss you, Daddy,"she'd say. "When will you come back Desiree's situation made her mother worried.
Days later, it was Ken's birthday. “How will I send him a card ” Desiree asked her mother.“How about if we tie a letter to a balloon,”"her mother said,“and send it up to the sky " Desiree's eyes immediately lit up.
故事要素
When
Where
Who
What
why
Step 1 解析语篇2：故事要素
Ken’s birthday
Desiree, ken, mother
gave the father, Ken a birthday card
at home
missed and wanted her father to come back
Her mother took her to a store and Desiree picked out a balloon with Happy birthday above a drawing of The Little Mermaid （《美人鱼》). Desiree and her father had often watched it. The child's eyes shone as they were on the way to Ken's grave. Then Desiree read a letter to her dad. “Happy birthday, Daddy. I love you and miss you,” she said quickly. “I hope you will get this and can write to me on my birthday in January."
Her mother wrote the message and their address on a small piece of paper, which was then wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string on the balloon. Finally, Desiree released the balloon. For almost an hour, they watched the shining spot of silver grow smaller and smaller till it disappeared. “Now Dad’s going to write back to me,” Desiree declared confidently.
Every day since they'd released the balloon, Desiree had asked her mother, “Do you think Daddy has received my balloon yet ” Several weeks passed, and she stopped asking.
故事要素
how
Step 1 解析语篇2：故事要素
send a Happy birthday balloon with a small paper of message and address tied to the end of the string
注意：
(1) 续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day, 3,000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes. _______________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived. __________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One day, 3,000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes. _______________ __________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived. _____________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 2 构思情节：3衔接 2过渡 1主题
衔接1
衔接3
衔接2
主题句
过渡1
过渡2
One day, 3,000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes. _______________ __________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived. _____________________________________
Step 2 构思情节para1：动作链
get close +find
take it home+read
decide to help
curious
write back+send
buy a birthday balloon,
a letter and the book
moved
Actions
Emotions
过去时
One day, 3,000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes. _______________ __________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 2 构思情节para1：动作链
出于好奇，他靠近并发现了一个生日气球，气球的绳子末端还系着用塑料包起来的卡纸片。把气球带回家，他打开包装读了卡片上的信息。卡片上Desiree的话语让Wade感动地泪流满面，他立刻决定帮助这个小女孩。买了生日气球、信和《小美人鱼》之后，他仿照父亲的语气回了信并按照纸片上的地址邮寄了。
第二节读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Desiree, a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly over a photo of her father, Ker, who had died nine months earlier. She was hugging the photo with her fingers running around his face. “Daddy,” she said softly, “why won't you come back "
Instead of gradually adjusting to her father's death, Desiree refused to accept it."Daddy will be home soon,” she'd tell her mother “He's at work.” When she played with her toy telephone, she pretended she was chating with her father. “I miss you, Daddy,"she'd say. "When will you come back ” Desiree's situation made her mother worried.
Days later, it was Ken's birthday. “How will I send him a card ” Desiree asked her mother. “How about if we tie a letter to a balloon,” her mother said,“and send it up to the sky " Desiree's eyes immediately lit up.
Para1 隐线伏笔
Her mother took her to a store and Desiree picked out a balloon with Happy birthday above a drawing of The Little Mermaid （《美人鱼》). Desiree and her father had often watched it. The child's eyes shone as they were on the way to Ken's grave. Then Desiree read a letter to her dad. “Happy birthday, Daddy. I love you and miss you,” she said quickly. “I hope you will get this and can write to me on my birthday in January."
Her mother wrote the message and their address on a small piece of paper, which was then wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string on the balloon. Finally, Desiree released the balloon. For almost an hour, they watched the shining spot of silver grow smaller and smaller till it disappeared. “Now Dad’s going to write back to me,” Desiree declared confidently.
Every day since they'd released the balloon, Desiree had asked her mother, “Do you think Daddy has received my balloon yet ” Several weeks passed, and she stopped asking.
Para1 隐线伏笔
出于好奇，他靠近并发现了一个生日气球，气球的绳子末端还系着用塑料包装的卡纸片。
把气球带回家，他打开包装读了卡片上的信息。
卡片上Desiree的话语让Wade感动地泪流满面，他立刻决定帮助这个小女孩。
买了生日气球、信和《小美人鱼》之后，他仿照父亲的语气写回了信并按照纸片上的地址邮寄了。
Moved to tears by what Desiree wrote, he immediately decided to help the little girl.
Taking it home, he opened and read the message on the card.
Out of curiosity, he got close and found a birthday balloon with a small piece of paper wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string.
Step 3 编写润色 para1：
After buying a balloon, a letter and the book Little Mermaid, he wrote back in the tone of her father and sent them back to the address on the paper.
One day, 3,000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes.Out of curiosity, he got close and found a Happy birthday balloon with a small piece of paper tied to the end of the string and wrapped in plastic. Taking it home, he opened and read the message on the card. Moved to tears by what Desiree wrote, Wade immediately decided to help the little girl. After buying a balloon, a letter and the book Little Mermaid, he wrote back to the girl in the tone of her father and sent them to the address on the paper.
Step 3 编写润色 para1：接头续尾中点缀
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived. _____________________________________ __________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 2 构思情节para2：动作链
look at the strange address
open+find
think of
confused
hug+eyes shine
rush to+show
moved
Actions
Emotions
过去时
read+understand
joyful
excited
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived.______________________________________ __________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 2 构思情节para2：动作链
看着包裹上陌生的地址，妈妈感到很疑惑。打开包裹，她发现一封写着至我心爱的女儿的信。她想起了他们几周前放飞的银色气球。激动又感动，她跑到Desiree的房间给她看信。紧紧地把信捂在胸前，Desiree高兴地两眼放光，接着让妈妈赶紧给她读。欣喜的泪水滑落脸庞，妈妈知道了.....。
第二节读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Desiree, a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly over a photo of her father, Ker, who had died nine months earlier. She was hugging the photo with her fingers running around his face. “Daddy,” she said softly, “why won't you come back "
Instead of gradually adjusting to her father's death, Desiree refused to accept it."Daddy will be home soon,” she'd tell her mother “He's at work.” When she played with her toy telephone, she pretended she was chating with her father. “I miss you, Daddy,"she'd say. "When will you come back ” Desiree's situation made her mother worried.
Days later, it was Ken's birthday. “How will I send him a card ” Desiree asked her mother. “How about if we tie a letter to a balloon,” her mother said,“and send it up to the sky " Desiree's eyes immediately lit up.
Para2 隐线伏笔
Her mother took her to a store and Desiree picked out a balloon with Happy birthday above a drawing of The Little Mermaid （《美人鱼》). Desiree and her father had often watched it. The child's eyes shone as they were on the way to Ken's grave. Then Desiree read a letter to her dad. “Happy birthday, Daddy. I love you and miss you,” she said quickly. “I hope you will get this and can write to me on my birthday in January."
Her mother wrote the message and their address on a small piece of paper, which was then wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string on the balloon. Finally, Desiree released the balloon. For almost an hour, they watched the shining spot of silver grow smaller and smaller till it disappeared. “Now Dad’s going to write back to me,” Desiree declared confidently.
Every day since they'd released the balloon, Desiree had asked her mother, “Do you think Daddy has received my balloon yet ” Several weeks passed, and she stopped asking.
Para2 隐线伏笔
主题：
爱人者人恒爱之。
爱能点亮一切。
心中有爱，春暖花开。
He who loves is always loved.
It is love that lights up the world.
With a loving heart, spring blossoms.
看着包裹上陌生的地址，妈妈感到很疑惑。
打开包裹，她发现一封写着至我心爱的女儿的信。
激动又感动，她冲到Desiree的房间给她看信。
把信紧紧捂在胸前，Desiree高兴地两眼放光，让妈妈赶紧给她读。
欣喜的泪水滑落脸庞，妈妈知道是爱点亮了女儿的世界。
Excited and moved, she rushed to Desiree’s room and showed her the letter.
Opening it, she found a letter writing “To my beloved daughter”.
Looking at the strange address on the package, the mother was confused.
Step 3 编写润色 para1：
Hugging the letter tightly on her chest, Desiree’s eyes shone with joy and then asked her mother to read the message for her.
Tears of delight rolling down her eyes, the mother understood that it was love that lit up the world of her little girl.
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived.Looking at the strange address on the package, Desiree’s mother was confused. Opening it, she found a letter writing “ To my beloved daughter”. Suddenly, she thought of the silver balloon they released several weeks ago. Moved and excited, she rushed to Desiree’s room and showed her the letter. Hugging the letter tightly on her chest, Desiree’s eyes shone with joy and then asked her mother to read the message for her. Tears of delight rolling down her eyes, the mother understood that it was love that lit up the world of her little girl.
Step 3 编写润色 para1：接头续尾中点缀
读后续写三步走：
1.解析语篇:
2.构思情节:
3.编写润色:
Summary
故事要素加伏笔
衔接过渡主题句
接头续尾中点缀
Thanks for cooperation!
A Birthday Balloon
读后续写
读后续写三步走：
1.解析语篇
2.构思情节
3.编写润色
第二节读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Desiree, a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly over a photo of her father, Ker, who had died nine months earlier. She was hugging the photo with her fingers running around his face. “Daddy,” she said softly, “why won't you come back "
Instead of gradually adjusting to her father's death, Desiree refused to accept it."Daddy will be home soon,” she'd tell her mother “He's at work.” When she played with her toy telephone, she pretended she was chating with her father. “I miss you, Daddy,"she'd say. "When will you come back ” Desiree's situation made her mother worried.
Days later, it was Ken's birthday. “How will I send him a card ” Desiree asked her mother. “How about if we tie a letter to a balloon,” her mother said,“and send it up to the sky " Desiree's eyes immediately lit up.
Step 1 解析语篇1:通读全文
Her mother took her to a store and Desiree picked out a balloon with Happy birthday above a drawing of The Little Mermaid （《美人鱼》). Desiree and her father had often watched it. The child's eyes shone as they were on the way to Ken's grave. Then Desiree read a letter to her dad. “Happy birthday, Daddy. I love you and miss you,” she said quickly. “I hope you will get this and can write to me on my birthday in January."
Her mother wrote the message and their address on a small piece of paper, which was then wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string on the balloon. Finally, Desiree released the balloon. For almost an hour, they watched the shining spot of silver grow smaller and smaller till it disappeared. “Now Dad’s going to write back to me,” Desiree declared confidently.
Every day since they'd released the balloon, Desiree had asked her mother, “Do you think Daddy has received my balloon yet ” Several weeks passed, and she stopped asking.
Step 1 解析语篇1：通读全文
第二节读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Desiree,a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly over a photo of her father, Ken, who had died nine months earlier. She was hugging the photo with her fingers running around his face. “Daddy,” she said softly, “why won't you come back "
Instead of gradually adjusting to her father's death, Desiree refused to accept it."Daddy will be home soon,” she'd tell her mother “He's at work.” When she played with her toy telephone, she pretended she was chating with her father. “I miss you, Daddy,"she'd say. "When will you come back Desiree's situation made her mother worried.
Days later, it was Ken's birthday. “How will I send him a card ” Desiree asked her mother.“How about if we tie a letter to a balloon,”"her mother said,“and send it up to the sky " Desiree's eyes immediately lit up.
故事要素
When
Where
Who
What
why
Step 1 解析语篇2：故事要素
Ken’s birthday
Desiree, ken, mother
gave the father, Ken a birthday card
at home
missed and wanted her father to come back
Her mother took her to a store and Desiree picked out a balloon with Happy birthday above a drawing of The Little Mermaid （《美人鱼》). Desiree and her father had often watched it. The child's eyes shone as they were on the way to Ken's grave. Then Desiree read a letter to her dad. “Happy birthday, Daddy. I love you and miss you,” she said quickly. “I hope you will get this and can write to me on my birthday in January."
Her mother wrote the message and their address on a small piece of paper, which was then wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string on the balloon. Finally, Desiree released the balloon. For almost an hour, they watched the shining spot of silver grow smaller and smaller till it disappeared. “Now Dad’s going to write back to me,” Desiree declared confidently.
Every day since they'd released the balloon, Desiree had asked her mother, “Do you think Daddy has received my balloon yet ” Several weeks passed, and she stopped asking.
故事要素
how
Step 1 解析语篇2：故事要素
send a Happy birthday balloon with a small paper of message and address tied to the end of the string
注意：
(1) 续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day, 3,000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes. _______________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived. __________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One day, 3,000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes. _______________ __________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived. _____________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 2 构思情节：3衔接 2过渡 1主题
衔接1
衔接3
衔接2
主题句
过渡1
过渡2
One day, 3,000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes. _______________ __________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived. _____________________________________
Step 2 构思情节para1：动作链
get close +find
take it home+read
decide to help
curious
write back+send
buy a birthday balloon,
a letter and the book
moved
Actions
Emotions
过去时
One day, 3,000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes. _______________ __________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 2 构思情节para1：动作链
出于好奇，他靠近并发现了一个生日气球，气球的绳子末端还系着用塑料包起来的卡纸片。把气球带回家，他打开包装读了卡片上的信息。卡片上Desiree的话语让Wade感动地泪流满面，他立刻决定帮助这个小女孩。买了生日气球、信和《小美人鱼》之后，他仿照父亲的语气回了信并按照纸片上的地址邮寄了。
第二节读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Desiree, a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly over a photo of her father, Ker, who had died nine months earlier. She was hugging the photo with her fingers running around his face. “Daddy,” she said softly, “why won't you come back "
Instead of gradually adjusting to her father's death, Desiree refused to accept it."Daddy will be home soon,” she'd tell her mother “He's at work.” When she played with her toy telephone, she pretended she was chating with her father. “I miss you, Daddy,"she'd say. "When will you come back ” Desiree's situation made her mother worried.
Days later, it was Ken's birthday. “How will I send him a card ” Desiree asked her mother. “How about if we tie a letter to a balloon,” her mother said,“and send it up to the sky " Desiree's eyes immediately lit up.
Para1 隐线伏笔
Her mother took her to a store and Desiree picked out a balloon with Happy birthday above a drawing of The Little Mermaid （《美人鱼》). Desiree and her father had often watched it. The child's eyes shone as they were on the way to Ken's grave. Then Desiree read a letter to her dad. “Happy birthday, Daddy. I love you and miss you,” she said quickly. “I hope you will get this and can write to me on my birthday in January."
Her mother wrote the message and their address on a small piece of paper, which was then wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string on the balloon. Finally, Desiree released the balloon. For almost an hour, they watched the shining spot of silver grow smaller and smaller till it disappeared. “Now Dad’s going to write back to me,” Desiree declared confidently.
Every day since they'd released the balloon, Desiree had asked her mother, “Do you think Daddy has received my balloon yet ” Several weeks passed, and she stopped asking.
Para1 隐线伏笔
出于好奇，他靠近并发现了一个生日气球，气球的绳子末端还系着用塑料包装的卡纸片。
把气球带回家，他打开包装读了卡片上的信息。
卡片上Desiree的话语让Wade感动地泪流满面，他立刻决定帮助这个小女孩。
买了生日气球、信和《小美人鱼》之后，他仿照父亲的语气写回了信并按照纸片上的地址邮寄了。
Moved to tears by what Desiree wrote, he immediately decided to help the little girl.
Taking it home, he opened and read the message on the card.
Out of curiosity, he got close and found a birthday balloon with a small piece of paper wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string.
Step 3 编写润色 para1：
After buying a balloon, a letter and the book Little Mermaid, he wrote back in the tone of her father and sent them back to the address on the paper.
One day, 3,000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes.Out of curiosity, he got close and found a Happy birthday balloon with a small piece of paper tied to the end of the string and wrapped in plastic. Taking it home, he opened and read the message on the card. Moved to tears by what Desiree wrote, Wade immediately decided to help the little girl. After buying a balloon, a letter and the book Little Mermaid, he wrote back to the girl in the tone of her father and sent them to the address on the paper.
Step 3 编写润色 para1：接头续尾中点缀
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived. _____________________________________ __________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 2 构思情节para2：动作链
look at the strange address
open+find
think of
confused
hug+eyes shine
rush to+show
moved
Actions
Emotions
过去时
read+understand
joyful
excited
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived.______________________________________ __________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 2 构思情节para2：动作链
看着包裹上陌生的地址，妈妈感到很疑惑。打开包裹，她发现一封写着至我心爱的女儿的信。她想起了他们几周前放飞的银色气球。激动又感动，她跑到Desiree的房间给她看信。紧紧地把信捂在胸前，Desiree高兴地两眼放光，接着让妈妈赶紧给她读。欣喜的泪水滑落脸庞，妈妈知道了.....。
第二节读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Desiree, a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly over a photo of her father, Ker, who had died nine months earlier. She was hugging the photo with her fingers running around his face. “Daddy,” she said softly, “why won't you come back "
Instead of gradually adjusting to her father's death, Desiree refused to accept it."Daddy will be home soon,” she'd tell her mother “He's at work.” When she played with her toy telephone, she pretended she was chating with her father. “I miss you, Daddy,"she'd say. "When will you come back ” Desiree's situation made her mother worried.
Days later, it was Ken's birthday. “How will I send him a card ” Desiree asked her mother. “How about if we tie a letter to a balloon,” her mother said,“and send it up to the sky " Desiree's eyes immediately lit up.
Para2 隐线伏笔
Her mother took her to a store and Desiree picked out a balloon with Happy birthday above a drawing of The Little Mermaid （《美人鱼》). Desiree and her father had often watched it. The child's eyes shone as they were on the way to Ken's grave. Then Desiree read a letter to her dad. “Happy birthday, Daddy. I love you and miss you,” she said quickly. “I hope you will get this and can write to me on my birthday in January."
Her mother wrote the message and their address on a small piece of paper, which was then wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string on the balloon. Finally, Desiree released the balloon. For almost an hour, they watched the shining spot of silver grow smaller and smaller till it disappeared. “Now Dad’s going to write back to me,” Desiree declared confidently.
Every day since they'd released the balloon, Desiree had asked her mother, “Do you think Daddy has received my balloon yet ” Several weeks passed, and she stopped asking.
Para2 隐线伏笔
主题：
爱人者人恒爱之。
爱能点亮一切。
心中有爱，春暖花开。
He who loves is always loved.
It is love that lights up the world.
With a loving heart, spring blossoms.
看着包裹上陌生的地址，妈妈感到很疑惑。
打开包裹，她发现一封写着至我心爱的女儿的信。
激动又感动，她冲到Desiree的房间给她看信。
把信紧紧捂在胸前，Desiree高兴地两眼放光，让妈妈赶紧给她读。
欣喜的泪水滑落脸庞，妈妈知道是爱点亮了女儿的世界。
Excited and moved, she rushed to Desiree’s room and showed her the letter.
Opening it, she found a letter writing “To my beloved daughter”.
Looking at the strange address on the package, the mother was confused.
Step 3 编写润色 para1：
Hugging the letter tightly on her chest, Desiree’s eyes shone with joy and then asked her mother to read the message for her.
Tears of delight rolling down her eyes, the mother understood that it was love that lit up the world of her little girl.
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived.Looking at the strange address on the package, Desiree’s mother was confused. Opening it, she found a letter writing “ To my beloved daughter”. Suddenly, she thought of the silver balloon they released several weeks ago. Moved and excited, she rushed to Desiree’s room and showed her the letter. Hugging the letter tightly on her chest, Desiree’s eyes shone with joy and then asked her mother to read the message for her. Tears of delight rolling down her eyes, the mother understood that it was love that lit up the world of her little girl.
Step 3 编写润色 para1：接头续尾中点缀
读后续写三步走：
1.解析语篇:
2.构思情节:
3.编写润色:
Summary
故事要素加伏笔
衔接过渡主题句
接头续尾中点缀
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