2026届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写 课件(共20张PPT)

(共20张PPT)
汇报：稻壳儿
五步妙笔生花 续写满溢芳华
--以2024年新高考I卷读后续写为例
一审
审要素
二定
定主题
三推测
两步段首句定发展
四构思
“Q&A模式”构思 每段三个微情节
五成文
梳理思路
草拟正文
六要素
when where who what why how
正能量原则
弘扬社会主义价值观；民族和文化自豪感；人类共有的人文精神...
标出段首的________
________原则
关键词
“三衔接”
第一段：衔接______;故事______；
衔接______
第二段：解决________；故事_____；
主题_____
首句
发展
第二段
矛盾冲突
结局
升华
“六所”技巧，即主角的所见、所闻、所做、所说、所想和所感
应用
高级词汇、高级语法结构、亮点句型
衡水字体、卷面整洁
解题方略
五步
妙笔生花
解题原则
5绝不
3原则
1.不添加枝叶：不可以增加______，否则会使情节发展偏离原文主题。
2.不节外生枝：续写的情节需要和原文达成协调一致，不额外扩展______
情节。
3.不悬而未决：题目要求中已表明“使之构成一篇完整的短文”，悬而未决
无法使整个故事完整，因此续写部分要___________。
4.不偏离主题：续写的内容应围绕__________进行情节推进不能有任何相悖。
5.不违背常理：续写的情节发展和细节要符合一般规律、道理、日常认知和
生活_________。
角色
1.正能量原则：围绕_________展开，增长知识或传播正能量，弘扬社会主
义核心价值观。
2.冲突解决原则：在续写部分，矛盾趋于解决，故事走向_______。
3.协同原则：______协同、______协同、______协同、______协同。
旁支
解决问题
原文中心
常识
真善美
结局
主题
情节
语言
情感
汇报：稻壳儿
真题感悟
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
（2024新高考全国I卷）I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry."
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
I ran to Gunter and told him the bad news.________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.______________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一审
审要素
When&where
[1] I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable _________ in September.
[1] I had planned to fly to________and take a bus to _________for a conference.
Who
I;________
What happened
[1] I _____________ in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I ________ the plane, I ____ like crazy through the airport building and ___________ the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
[2] After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter ____________________ and _______ the car.
[3] Finally, with just two minutes to spare we ___________the bus station.
evening
Vienna
Prague
Gunter
touched down
got off
ran
jumped into
put his phone down
started
rolled into
What happened
[4] Just then I realised that I _____________ in my wallet.
[5] I ______________ the car, made a mad_____for the machine, and _______ my card in, only to read the message:“Out of order. Sorry."
How did I feel
[1] The moment I got off the plane, I ran like _____...
[3] __________, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus.
[4] I flashed him an ___________smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard.
[4] A feeling of _____________washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
[5] I jumped out of the car, made a_____run for the machine...
had zero cash
jumped out of
run
popped
crazy
Thankfully
apologetic
helplessness
mad
二定
定主题:正能量原则
最大的 冲突
解决
主题
With Gunter’s help, I arrived at the bus station in time but I could couldn’t pay Gunter the taxi fare.
Gunter charged didn’t charge me. I promised to
pay back Gunter and didn’t keep keep my promise
————— —————— ————
kindness
honesty
trust
★
★
★
标出段首的关键词
“三衔接”原则
三推测
两步段首句定发展:“三衔接”原则
第一段段首句： I ran to Gunter and told him the bad news.
第二段段首句： Four days later, when I was back in Vienna,
I called Gunter as promised.
1.根据第一段段首句可知，“我”跑回去告诉冈特这个坏消息。之后的衔接应为：_________________________
2.根据第二段段首句可知，四天后，当我回到维也纳时，我按照承诺给冈特打了电话。由此可推测第一段的结局：冈特帮助了我，
_________________________
3.由此可知，第二段段首句之后的衔接应为：________________
冈特听到坏消息之后的反应。
让我顺利地登上了公共汽车。
我和冈特之后的互动。
四构思
Q&A模式：构思每段三个微情节（“六所”技巧）
第一段段首句：I ran to Gunter and told him the bad news.
根据第一段段首句的关键词_____________和第二段段首句的关键词
_______________、______________和_________构思三个微情节。
[Question1] How did I feel （所感）
[Answer]_______________________________________
[Question2] What’s Gunter’s reaction （所做，正能量原则作答）
[Answer]__________________
[Question3] What’s my promise （所说，根据第二段段首句作答）
[Answer]________________________________________________________
____________
the bad news
back in Vienna
called Gunter
promised
I felt extremely embarrased and anxious.
He comforted me.
I promised to call him and pay the taxi fare when I was back to Vienna.
第二段段首句：Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as
promised.
根据第二段段首句的关键词_______________、______________和_________构思三个微情节。
[Question1] What’s Gunter’s reaction （所感、所做）
[Answer]________________________________________________________
________
[Question2] What happened when we met （所做，正能量原则作答）
[Answer]______________________________
[Question3] What did I learn from the experience （总结全文，升华主题）
[Answer]________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
back in Vienna
called Gunter
promised
Though hesitating, he nodded his head and waved goodbye to me.
I paid the fare and thanked him.
Looking back, I realized it was this experience that made me understand the importance of honesty and trust.
（1）话题词汇
（2）形容词短语作状语
（3）介词短语 作状语
_____________________________（既尴尬又着急）, I was
___________（不知所措）what to do.
“六所”细节 语言协同
着急的 adj.___________
尴尬的adj._______________
催促 v.________
又说到 v._______
安慰 v./n.__________
放松，如释重负 n.______
立刻 adv.___________
上车 v.________
错误 n._______
善解人意的adj._______________
冲向 v.______
真诚的 adj._________
表达感谢 v._________________
不知所措 prep.___________
下车 v.___________
犹豫的 adj.____________
anxious
embarrassed
urge
add
comfort
relief
instantly
board
fault
understanding
rush
sincere
express gratitude
at a loss
get out of
Embarrassed and anxious
at a loss
hesitating
_______________________（令我非常惊讶的是）, Gunter __________（安慰） me and ______（催促） me to get on the bus.
Much to my surprise
comforted
urged
（4）with的 复合结构
（5）无灵主语
（6）现在分词作状语
“六所”细节 语言协同
__________________________________________（脸上带着善解人意的微笑）, he _______（又说到）that I didn’t have to pay him because it was not my ______（错误）.
With an understanding smile on his face
added
fault
___________________________________________________（一股强烈的放松和感激之情笼罩着我）as I walked towards the bus.
A wave of relief and gratitude washed over me
Before ___________（登车）, I asked Gunter for his phone number, ____________（承诺）that I would call and pay him when I was back to Vienna.
boarding
promising
（7）副词作 状语
（8）动词的 联动
（9）虚拟语气
“六所”细节 语言协同
A few minutes later, when Gunter ____________（下车）his car, I__________（冲向）to him, _______（给予）a bear hug and__________________________________（表达我诚挚的感谢）.
got out of
_________（幸运的是）, he was free and agreed to meet me.
Luckily
I told him that ________（没有）his help, I _______________
__________ （不可能参加）the important conference in time.
without
rushed
gave
expressed my sincere gratitude
couldn’t have
attended
汇报：稻壳儿
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Embarrased and anxious, I was at a loss what to do. Much to my surprise, Gunter comforted me and urged me to get on the bus. With an understanding smile on his face, he added that I didn’t have to pay him because it was not my fault. Instantly, a wave of relief and gratitude washed over me as I walked towards the bus.Before boarding, I asked Gunter for his phone number, promsing that I would call and pay him when I was back to Vienna. Though hesitating, Gunter nodded his head and waved goodbye to me.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Luckily, he was free and agreed to meet me. A few minutes later, when Gunter got out of his car, I rushed to him, gave him a bear hug and expressed my sincere gratitude. Then I gave him the money and a small gift. I told him that without his help, I couldn’t have attended the important conference in time. Looking back, I realised it was this experience that made me understand the importance of honesty and trust.
五成文
梳理思路，草拟成文
续写满溢芳华
汇报：稻壳儿
I ran back to Gunter and old him the bad news. So embarrassed was I that I could feel my face turn red.To my surprise,Gunter comforted me with an understanding expression,explaining that he didn't need the payment and insisted that I should get on the bus instead of just wasting time.His sincere words touched my heart, and warmth take place of coldness.As return,I promised to Gunter that I would call him after exchanging our phone numbers. He smiled,waving me good-bye.
Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised.The minute he answered the phone and heard my voice,he was able to recognize me.Obviously that he kept our story in mind. I invited him to have dinner at a restaurant.He agreed and we were then sitting face to face expressing our thoughts and recalling the old memory.It was by this chance I could ultimately show my gratitude and reward him for his trust and kindness.
习作点评
汇报：稻壳儿
I ran back to Gunter and old him the bad news. So embarrassed was I that I could feel my face turn red.To my surprise,Gunter comforted me with an understanding expression,explaining that he didn't need the payment and insisted that I should get on the bus instead of just wasting time.His sincere words touched my heart, and warmth take place of coldness.As return,I promised to Gunter that I would call him after exchanging our phone numbers. He smiled,waving me good-bye.
so+adj.位于句首的部分倒装
现在分词短语作状语
with 的复合结构作状语
现在分词短语作状语
insist引导的虚拟语气
无灵主语
turning
took
In
Para1
汇报：稻壳儿
Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised.The minute he answered the phone and heard my voice,he was able to recognize me.Obviously that he kept our story in mind. I invited him to have dinner at a restaurant.He agreed and we were then sitting face to face, expressing our thoughts and recalling the old memory.It was by this chance I could ultimately show my gratitude and reward him for his trust and kind.
Para2
the minute 引导状语从句
Obviously，
现在分词作状语
强调句型
^ that
kindness
汇报：稻壳儿
第五档(优秀)21-25分:
情节丰富合理，与原文高度融洽；语言准确多样；衔接自然流畅。
第四档(良好)16-20分：
情节比较丰富合理，与原文融洽度较高；语言较为丰富，有个别错误；衔接比较有效。
第三档(中等)11-15分:
内容基本合理，与原文相关但可能不够丰富；语言表达足够但有错误；使用了简单的衔接手段。
第二档(较差)6-10分:
内容或逻辑有重大问题，与原文脱节；词汇语法有限且错误多；缺乏有效衔接。
第一档(差/未完成)0-5分:
内容与原文基本脱节或不完整；语言错误严重影响理解；或未作答、大量抄写原文。
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