(共32张PPT)
Lead-in
Li Ziqi wrote a blog post about making Chinese food out of roses.
A blog post is like an online diary where you write about something you’re interested in.
Lead-in
What did Li Ziqi write
It can include content in the form of:
text
photos
infographics [' nf ɡr f k](信息图)
videos
What problems does the boy meet online
Danger of sharing personal information online
What do you think about sharing personal information online
We are more likely to become an easy target for criminals.
We should stay safe online.
Do you know some ways to stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet
Unit 3 The Internet
Reading for Writing
Write a blog post
Learning objectives
01
Language competence (语言能力)
02
03
04
Study the common structure and language features of blog posts.
Write a blog post about online safety.
Cultural awareness(文化意识)
Promote the awareness of online safety.
Thinking quality (思维品质)
Learning ability (学习能力)
Come up with some guidelines on online safety.
Apply and adjust their learning strategies.
1. Where does the passage come from
2. What type of passage is it
3. What is discussed in the passage
Write a title for it.
A blog post.
Internet.
How to stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet.
comments
Online safety
Activity 1: Read for skimming
Reading
Reading
Title
Introduction
Body
Ending
Comments
Online safety
background information and introduce
the topic
Share three suggestions
Ask for comments
Activity 2: Read for structure
Reading
Reading
Activity 3: Read for details
Para. 1
Introduction
Tick what the writer tells the readers in Para.1.
definition of online safety
background information
the writer's knowledge
the topic of the post
√
√
How
“How do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet ”
Tip 1: Ask a question to introduce and go straight to the topic.
Reading
Reading
Activity 3: Read for details
Para. 2
Body
How does the author answer the question
By giving three golden rules.
Body Tell the reader what they should do or keep in mind.
do don't
leave the site immediately
protect your privacy
be polite
post comments/click on anything
give out your address/
phone number
How are the golden rules connected
first of all, to begin with, in the first place, on top of the list, for a start
besides, in addition, plus, additionally, moreover, furthermore, what’s more, on top of all that;
finally, lastly, most importantly,
last but not the least;
What counts most is ....
Linking words
What are the three golden rules
Tip 2: Use imperative sentences to make the language powerful.
Tip 3: Use linking words to express ideas clearly, logically and coherently (连贯地).
Reading
Reading
Activity 3: Read for details
Whom should you be aware of online
Identity Theft
A Troll
A Cyberbully
It is a ...problem...steal your identity.
A troll is a person ... stir up trouble online.
Like a troll, a cyberbully will use ... be mean to others.
How did the author explain new words or key terms
explanation
definition
comparison
Tip 4: Add details and use skills such as explanation, definition and comparison to make the information clear and understandable.
Reading
Reading
Activity 3: Read for details
Para. 3
Ending
What does the author ask the readers to do
Post your comments below.
By asking for comments
Blog post
Title
Introduction
Body
Ending
Tell the main idea.
Ask a question to introduce the topic.
Use linking words to express ideas clearly, logically and coherently.
Use imperative sentences to make the language powerful.
Add details. Such as explanation, definition and comparison to make the information clear and understandable.
Ask for comments.
Reading
Activity 4: Read for summary
Activity 4: Read for chunks
1. 略知一二
2. 黄金法则
3. 点击
4. 保护某人的隐私
5. 泄露
6. 不是......的借口
7. ......的目标/对象
8. 惹事
9. 假名
10. 对某人刻薄
11. 针对特定的人
teach sb. one thing or two
the golden rule
click on...
protect one’s privacy
give out
no excuse for ...
a target for ...
stir up trouble
false names
be mean to sb.
be directed at particular people
Activity 5: Read for writing
最近,你在博客上发起一次英语征文活动,邀请读者围绕“ Online shopping safety ” 这个话题,谈谈对于网络购物安全的建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
OnlineShopping Safety
Use familiar websites.
Mind Mapping
Use a strong password.
Do not use public computers.
Value/protect your personal information.
Online
Shopping Safety
main points
1
4
2
3
sample shopping websites
Tao Bao
Amoazon
new terms
hacker, firewall
1. 发表关于...的博客
2. 网上购物安全
3. 对....熟悉
4. 这是一个好的选择。
5. 避免使用这个密码
6. 越复杂,越安全
7. 在公共场所
8. 在家购物
Chunks
It's a good choice.
avoid using this password
be familiar with
the more complicated...., the safer...
shop at home
write/post a blog about ....
online shopping safety
in public places
Make sentences: Para. 1
1. 今天我想写一篇关于网上购物的博客。
2. 这个话题最近已经引起了广泛的关注。
3. 我不是专家,但多年来作为一名博主/网民/网上购物者,我略知一二。
Today, I’d like to psot a blog about online shopping safety.
The topic has aroused widespread attention
has been brought into focus recently.
I am not an expert, but many years as a blogger(博主)/ netizen(网民)/an online shopper(网上购物者)have taught me a thing or two.
Make sentences: Para. 2
4. 使用熟悉的网站。
5. 不要使用你的生日和电话号码作为密码。
6. 最好使用数字和字母的组合作为密码。
7. 密码越复杂,你就越安全。
Use the website (that/ which) you are familiar with.
Don’t use your birthday and phone number as your password.
It’s better to use a mix of numbers and letters as your password.
The more complicated the password is, the safer you will be.
Make sentences: Para. 2
8. 一些人在公共场所上网购物。
9. 让他们成为黑客(hacker)的目标。
10. 在家网购更安全。
Some people shop online in public places.
Make them become the targets for hackers.
It is much safer to shop at home .
Shopping at home is much safer.
Make sentences: Para. 3
11. 你有什么关于网购不好的经历吗?
12. 你有什么关于安全网上购物的建议吗?
13. 在下面发表您的评论。
Have you had any bad experiences about online shopping?
Do you have any good advice for online shopping safety?
Post your comments below!
斟酌词句,妙笔生花
Today, I’d like to write a blog about online shopping safety.
The topic has aroused widespread attention / has been brought into focus recently.
Today, I’d like to wirte a blog about online shopping safety, which has aroused widespread attention recently.
Use the website you are familiar with. 加上时间状语“当网上购物时”。
Use the website you are familiar with while (you are) shopping online.
It’s better to use a mix of numbers and letters as your password.加上目的状语“保护你的隐私”
It’s better to use a mix of numbers and letters as your password to / in an effort to protect your privacy.
Some people shop online at public places.
Make them become the targets for hackers
Some people shop online at public places, which will make them become the targets for hackers.
Some people shop online at public places, making them the targets for hackers.
衔接过渡、斐然成章
Title: _____________________________
Introduction (topic & background)
Today, I want to write a blog about ________________, which has aroused widespread attention nowadays. Many years as an online shopper have taught me a thing or two about this topic.
Body
First of all
Additionally
What’s more
Ultimately,
Ending
Do you have some good advice to share with us Your comments are highly welcome.
Online shopping Safety/How to shop Online safely
Use a website you are familiar with
Use strong passwords
Don’t use public computers
value/protect personal information
explanation
definition
comparison
Online Shopping Safety
Today, I’d like to post a blog about online shopping safety, which has aroused widespread attention nowadays. Many years as an online shopper have taught me a thing or two about this topic.
First of all, you’re strongly recommended to use the website you are familiar with. It is easy for us to be open-minded and try a new website, but for the sake of safety, shopping at a familiar app or software like taobao is a better choice. Second, avoid shopping online with public computers. The more cautious you are online, the less likely you are to become the easy target for hackers. A computer hacker is someone who tries to break into computer systems with the intention of getting secret information. Therefore, shopping at home is much safer. Plus, keep in mind that you must use a mix of numbers and letters rather than your birthday or your phone number as your srtong password. What counts most is that were I you, I would install a firewall. A firewall is a kind of software to protect your using Internet and personal information as well. As long as you use the safety tips mentioned above, you’ll be bound to have a better chance of being safe while shopping online.
Do you have some good advice to share with us Post your comments below!
Exchange drafts with a partner. Use the checklist to help your parter revise his / her draft.
Things I can do Evaluation Does the writer tell the reader what he / she knows about the topic 5 4 3 2 1
Are the tips and suggestions well organized 5 4 3 2 1
Has the writer defined the new words 5 4 3 2 1
Does the writer end by asking readers to leave comments and / or suggestions 5 4 3 2 1
Does the author include examples, comparisons, or explanations 5 4 3 2 1
Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes 5 4 3 2 1