【期中考点突破】突破01 书面表达-话题作文（含答案解析）--2025-2026学年七年级英语上册期中复习考点突破外研版（2024）
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/ 让学习更有效 期中考点突破 | 英语学科
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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册期中复习考点突破外研版（2024）
突破01 书面表达-话题作文
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．同学们，祝贺你们开启了崭新的初中生活。在初中的三年，你们要养成良好的学习习惯和生活习惯，遵守各种规章制度。请以“To be a good middle school student”为题，写一篇不少于80个词的短文。（已给出的提示不计入总词数。）
To be a good middle school student
To be a good middle school student, I
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2．请根据要求完成短文写作，题目：请以“My School Life”为题，写一篇关于你的学校生活的短文。
要求：1.包含学校的环境、喜欢的科目、老师、朋友以及课后活动等内容。
2.语句通顺，语法正确，不少于60词。
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3．以“My First Day of junior high”为题目，写一篇关于你初中第一天开学的经历的英语作文。内容包括你的感受、遇到的事情以及你和同学、老师之间的互动。用具体的例子来描述你在这一天遇到的挑战和成功。
要求：1.要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺。
2.字数不少于80词。
3.文中不得出现真实校名及姓名，否则不予评分。
My First Day of Junior High
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4．假如你是李华，你校广播站以“My First Day at Junior High School”为题向学生们征稿。请你写一篇英语文章投稿，内容包括：学习、活动、遇到的问题、这一天的感受等等。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My First Day at Junior High School
Dear Schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua.
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5．从小到大，你听了那么多课，可曾有一节课在你心中留下不可磨灭的痕迹？如果有，又是因为什么？我们不妨来讲讲自己最难忘的一节课。
要求：
（1）根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥；
（2）80词左右。
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6．假如你是Li Hua，以“Myself”为题，写一个自我介绍。
提示：
Information: name age country class
Favourite food: Beijing roast duck Mapo tofu
Favourite subject: English
Hobbies: play basketball play the guitar
要求：（1）包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥。
（2）词数60～80词。
（3）语句通顺、语意连贯、语法正确。
（4）文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
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7．我们进入初中生活已经两个月了！迎来了期中考试，借此请你以“My self-introduction”为题写一篇自我介绍，内容包括姓名（用英文名代替）、年龄、喜爱的运动和食物及其他爱好等。
要求：
1. 表达正确，语句通顺；
2. 字迹工整，书写规范；
3. 不少于60词；
4. 不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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8．自我介绍可以提高自身的人际交往能力，通过自我介绍可以建立起良好的人际关系。假如你叫Dave，来自俄罗斯(Russia)，即将作为一名交换生(exchange student)在太原五中学习。为了让同学们进一步了解你，认识你，更快地和你交朋友，请你用英语写一篇短文介绍自己。
内容包括：◆your name, age, country;
◆favourite things like food, colour, animal and so on;
◆your hobbies.
要求：1.词数不少于60词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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9．学校为帮助七年级新生交朋友，组织了一次主题为“找朋友”的演讲活动。请你根据提示信息写一篇自我介绍，让更多的人认识你吧！
内容包括：1) 性别，年龄，班级
2) 爱好或特长 (play basketball...)
3) 喜欢的颜色，食物
要求：1) 语句通顺，条理清楚，结构合理
2) 词数：80-100
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10．人们常说：“我运动，我健康，我快乐。”你喜欢哪些运动？你有哪些体育用品？请以“My Favorite Sports”为题用英文写一篇短文，介绍你喜欢的运动及看法。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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11．My Favorite Day
提示：一周七天中你最喜欢哪天？你在这一天里都做些什么事？请以“My Favorite Day”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于 60；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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12．学校为同学们提供了丰富多彩的社团活动，以 “My Favourite Club” 为题写一篇英语短文，说说你想参加的社团并说明理由。
要求：1. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息；
3. 不少于 60词。
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13．爱好是梦想的起点。作为新时代的青少年，你的爱好是什么？你的梦想又是什么？你的爱好如何帮助你实现梦想？请以“My Hobby and My Dream”为题，写一篇短文。
要求：
1. 文章语言正确，要点齐全，行文连贯，书写工整；
2. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息；
3. 词数100左右。
My Hobby and My Dream
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14．假如你是七年五班的王丽丽，你进入初中认识了许多新老师，谁给你的印象最深呢？请向我们介绍和描述一下他或她。
写作要求：（1）短文要符合题意，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
（3）语义通顺，书写规范；
（4）词数：60词左右。
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15．My family
Write about your family members. You can write something about age, appearance, personality, hobby...
提示：介绍你的家庭成员，你可以从年龄，外貌，性格，爱好等方面介绍。
要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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16．假如你家有一个农场，想象一下你的农场上都有什么？可爱的兔子？温顺的绵羊？还是憨憨的鸭子？你家房子的后面有院子吗？院子里都种了什么蔬菜或是瓜果？周末就要到了，你想邀请你的朋友去农场上玩，请你向他(她)介绍一下你的农场吧！
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名；
2. 词数60左右；
3. 语法正确，语句通顺，行文连贯。
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17．家人是我们最熟悉的人，也是我们最爱的人，请以“My ________ ”为题，介绍你的一位家人。请从年龄、外貌、才能、爱好、职业等方面写一写，也可自行补充其他内容。
要求：
1. 条理清晰，句子通顺，意思明确，标点正确，书写工整。
2. 不少于五个句子。
My ________
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18．亲子时光是家庭中特别珍贵的时刻。请以“A Meaningful Thing Between My Parent and I”为题，用英语写一篇短文叙述你和父亲或母亲做过的一件有意义的事。谈谈它的意义以及你的感受。
要求：
1.语言流畅、书写规范，词数不少于70；
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
A Meaningful Thing Between My Parent and I
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
To be a good middle school student
To be a good middle school student, I should develop good habits.
First, I need to study hard. I should attend class on time, listen to the teacher carefully, take notes, and finish my homework. Reviewing lessons after school is also important. Second, I should live a healthy life. This means going to bed and getting up early, eating healthy food, and doing exercise. Finally, I must follow the school rules. I should keep quiet in class, be polite to teachers and classmates, and keep our school clean.
If I do all these things, I can make progress and become a good student.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：题目给出了要点，必须写出所给内容，可以适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍成为一名好学生需要做什么；
第二步，分几方面详细陈述需要如何做；
第三步，总结升华，表达对自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①study hard努力学习
②go to bed去睡觉
③follow the rules遵守规则
[高分句型]
If I do all these things, I can make progress and become a good student.（条件状语从句）
2．例文
My School Life
My school is big and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers around the teaching building. My favorite subject is English because my teacher, Miss Wang, makes it fun. She often plays games with us in class. My best friend is Lily. We always study and play together. After school, we sometimes join the art club to draw pictures. I love my school life—it’s colorful and happy!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时态”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，直接描述学校的整体环境；
第二步：具体阐述学校生活的核心内容，先说明最喜欢的科目、老师，解释原因，再介绍最好的朋友莉莉及两人的日常，最后补充课后活动；
第三步：书写结语，总结对学校生活的感受，表达对学校生活的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①make it fun 使它有趣
②play…with与……一起玩耍
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is English because my teacher, Miss Wang, makes it fun.（because引导原因状语从句）
3．例文
My First Day of Junior High
I was excited as well as worried on my first day of junior high. I was excited because I was a student of junior high school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers and students in this school. However, when I sat down at my desk and began to know about my teachers and classmates, I found everyone was really nice to me. Teachers were very kind and ready to help us. One of the teachers asked us to introduce ourselves. My classmates were active and easy to get along with. After class, I played soccer with my newly-made friends on the playground. I chatted with my English teacher. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于话题作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头以及标题已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，描述你入校当天的感受；
第二步，结合自身经历，描述你入校时的所见所闻和经历感受，介绍具体的事例；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as也，又，和
②get along with和睦相处
③chat with聊天
[高分句型]
①I was excited because I was a student of junior middle school now.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②However, when I sat down at my desk and began to know about my teachers and classmates, I found everyone was really nice to me.（时间状语从句）
4．例文
My First Day at Junior High School
Dear Schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua. My first day here was good because I learned many new things. The classes were interesting. I like science and history best. After school, I joined the book club. We read and talked about books. I also played games with my new friends. How fun it was! But sometimes, I found it’s difficult for me to learn English. I should spend more time learning new words.
Overall, I’m happy here. I’m making new friends and learning new things. I’m looking forward to more days like this.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。向大家问好，介绍自己。（开头已给出）
第二步，具体阐述。根据提示的要点，阐述在初中第一天的学习、活动、遇到的问题、这一天的感受等。
第三步，书写结语。展望未来，感谢大家的聆听。
[亮点词汇]
① find it+adj. for sb. to do sth. 发现做某事对某人来说很怎么样
② spend time doing sth. 花时间做某事
③ overall adv. 总之
④ look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
① How fun it was!（感叹句）
② But sometimes, I found it’s difficult for me to learn English.（省略that的宾语从句）省略（）
5．参考范文
I have a lot of lessons in my school life, but I’ll never forget the lesson from a young American man. It was interesting.
One day, a young American came into our classroom. He talked to us in English and then began his class. It was quite different from our lessons before. In class, he taught us some English songs, played games with us and helped us remember some new words. He smiled at each of us when he was in the class.
I will never forget his smile, his songs and his games.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我最难忘的一节课”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“课程内容、感受”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①come into走进来
②be different from与……不同
③help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①He smiled at each of us when he was in the class.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．例文
Myself
My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old. I come from China and I’m in Class 5, Grade 7. My favourite subject is English because it’s interesting and useful. I like eating Beijing roast duck and Mapo tofu—they are delicious! In my free time, I enjoy playing basketball with my friends and playing the guitar. I think sports and music make me happy and healthy. That’s all about me!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的相关信息，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己的基本信息；
第二步：介绍自己最喜欢的科目、食物和爱好；
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②in my free time在我的空闲时间
③enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
④play basketball打篮球
⑤play the guitar弹吉他
[高分句型]
①My favourite subject is English because it’s interesting and useful. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think sports and music make me happy and healthy. (宾语从句)
7．范文：
My Self-Introduction
Hello! My name is Lily, and I’m a fresh start in the seventh grade. I’m 12 years old and full of energy.
When it comes to sports, I’m really into badminton. I love the fast pace and the way it gets my heart racing. As for food, I’m a big fan of pizza. I could eat it every day and never get tired of it! Apart from sports and food, I have a few other interests. I love to draw in my free time. I find it very relaxing and it’s a great way to express myself. I also enjoy playing the guitar. I’ve been learning for a couple of years now, and I’m getting pretty good at it.
I’m really excited to be in middle school and to meet all of you. I can’t wait to make new friends and learn new things together. Let’s have a great year ahead! Thank you for listening to my introduction.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题，介绍姓名、年龄等基本信息。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“喜爱的运动和食物及其他爱好”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达期待和感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①When it comes to当提及……时
②every day每天
③get tired of 对……感到疲倦
④apart from除……之外
⑤love to do sth喜欢做某事
⑥be good at擅长
⑦be excited to do 对做某事感到兴奋
⑧can’t wait to do sth迫不及待做某事
⑨let sb do sth让某人做某事
⑩thank sb for doing sth因做某事而感谢某人
[高分句型]
①My name is Lily, and I’m a fresh start in the seventh grade. (并列句)
②I love the fast pace and the way it gets my heart racing. (定语从句)
③I find it very relaxing and it’s a great way to express myself. (it作形式主语的固定句型和并列句)
8．例文
My name is Dave. I am 15 years old. I come from Russia. I am an exchange student and I am going to study at Taiyuan No.5 Middle School. I like eating Chinese food, especially dumplings. My favourite colour is blue. My favourite animal is the panda because it is very cute. I have many hobbies. I like playing basketball and football. I also like reading books and listening to music. I hope to make more friends in China and learn more about Chinese culture.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的基本信息；
第二步，根据题干的要点，分享自己的爱好，喜欢的食物，颜色等情况；
第三步，表示希望交更多好朋友。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①My favourite animal is the panda because it is very cute.（原因状语从句）
②I hope to make more friends in China and learn more about Chinese culture.（不定式作宾语）
9．例文
Hello, everyone!
I’m very happy to have this chance to introduce myself. I am a 13-year-old girl from Class 1, Grade 7.
In my free time, I enjoy playing basketball with my friends. It’s not only fun but also helps me stay active and healthy. My favorite color is blue because it reminds me of the sky and the sea. As for food, I love eating noodles, especially when they’re made by my mom.
I really hope to make more friends here. If you have the same hobbies or just want to chat, feel free to come and say hello! Thank you!
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章写作需要围绕“个人介绍”展开，内容要涵盖年龄、班级、课余活动、喜爱的颜色与原因、喜爱的食物、交友愿望，考生应注意完整呈现自我介绍的核心要素，适当补充细节，避免遗漏关键信息。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。以问候语开篇，说明很开心有机会做自我介绍，引出个人信息介绍；
第二步，具体阐述个人情况。先介绍基本信息，再说明课余爱好及爱好的意义，接着介绍喜爱的颜色及原因、喜爱的食物；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望在这里交到更多朋友的愿望，发出交友邀请。
［亮点词汇］
①have this chance有这个机会
②introduce myself自我介绍
③in my free time在我的空闲时间
④stay active and healthy保持活力和健康
⑤reminds me of让我想起
⑥feel free to随意做某事
［高分句型］
①It’s not only fun but also helps me stay active and healthy.（“not only...but also...”连接并列成分）
②My favorite color is blue because it reminds me of the sky and the sea.（because引导的原因状语从句）
③If you have the same hobbies or just want to chat, feel free to come and say hello!（if引导的条件状语从句）
10．例文：
My Favorite Sports
There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as swimming, running, and dancing. However, the sports that I like most are basketball and swimming.
When I was in junior high, I started to play basketball. I have many basketballs. I often go to swim with my good friend Lily. When I am swimming in the pool, I am very happy. I look like a lovely fish in the pond.
I enjoy doing sports, because it can make me strong and healthy. Sports can also bring me a lot of happiness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示和要求进行写作，介绍最喜欢的运动。写作中适当使用连接词、短语和句型，确保行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍最喜欢的运动是什么；
第二步，具体介绍最喜欢的运动；
第三步，结尾总结。
[亮点词汇]
①kinds of 各种各样的
②look like 看起来像
③a lot of 许多
[高分句型]
①There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as swimming, running, and dancing. (定语从句)
②When I am swimming in the pool, I am very happy. (状语从句)
11．例文：
My Favorite Day
My favorite day of the week is Saturday. On this day, I usually get up early in the morning and go for a run in the park with my father. After breakfast, I help my mother with housework. In the afternoon, I like to go to the library to read books. I enjoy reading novels and stories about history. In the evening, I watch TV with my family or play games with my friends. We often have a lot of fun together. Saturday is a relaxing and enjoyable day for me, and I look forward to it every week.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作内容要回答提示中的问题，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点明自己最喜欢哪一天；
第二步，按时间顺序具体介绍这一天的活动；
第三步，结尾点题，总结喜欢这一天的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①get up 起床
②watch TV 看电视
③look forward to 盼望
[高分句型]
①After breakfast, I help my mother with housework.（help...with...句型）
② I enjoy reading novels and stories about history.（enjoy doing sth句型）
12．例文
My Favourite Club
Our school provides all the students with kinds of after-class activities, such as club activities. We have different clubs, such as science club, English club, art club, sports club and so on. I would like to join the English club, because I love English so much. I want to participate in English activities, such as English corner and English speaking contest so that I can improve my English skill. What about you
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校的俱乐部；
第二步，介绍自己想加入的俱乐部以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①provide...with...向……提供……
②such as例如
③would like to do sth想要做某事
[高分句型]
①I would like to join the English club, because I love English so much.（because引导原因状语从句）
13．例文
My Hobby and My Dream
Everyone has his own hobby and dream. My hobby is reading, and my dream is to become a writer.
When I was young, I had a strong interest in books. Whenever I open a book, it’s as if I enter a magical world. Through reading, I cannot only learn a lot of knowledge, but also broaden my horizons.
I hope to use my pen to write vivid and interesting stories. To achieve my dream, I work hard to improve my writing skills. I read books, keep a diary every day, and actively take part in different writing competitions.
Although I am still a junior high school student, I believe that as long as there is a dream in my heart, I will be able to achieve it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：根据所给话题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍自己的爱好和梦想是什么；
第二步，具体描述你的爱好如何帮助你实现梦想；
第三步，最后书写小结。
[亮点词汇]
① broaden my horizons开阔我的视野
② keep a diary写日记
③ be able to能够
[高分句型]
①When I was young, I had a strong interest in books.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Although I am still a junior high school student, I believe that as long as there is a dream in my heart, I will be able to achieve it.（although引导的让步状语从句，that引导的宾语从句）
14．例文
Hi! I’m Wang Lili. I’m in Class 5, Grade 7. I meet some new teachers this term. They are good and friendly. My class teacher is Mr. Gao. He is very popular. We all like him. Now I tell you something about him. He is tall and handsome. He has a long face and short black hair. He teaches us Chinese very well. Sometimes he tells us some Chinese stories. They are very interesting. He likes sports and plays football with us. He asks us to study hard and help each other to get good grades. He is my favourite teacher.
【详解】 ［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇命题作文。
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕主题，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开头点明自己的身份及要介绍新老师，引出高老师。
第二步，具体阐述。描述高老师的外貌，介绍他的教学情况和讲故事的爱好，阐述他热爱运动及与学生互动的情况。
第三步，书写结语。表明高老师是自己最喜欢的老师。
［亮点词汇］
①class teacher班主任
②tell stories讲故事
③play football踢足球
④ask sb to do让某人做某事
⑤study hard努力学习
⑥teach well教得好
［高分句型］
He asks us to study hard and help each other to get good grades.（并列句；动词不定式作宾补）
15．例文
My family
My name is Gina. I’m a student. I am 11 years old. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my sister and I. My mother is a doctor. Her name is Linda. And she is 40 years old. She likes cooking and is good at cooking all kinds of food. My father is a teacher. His name is Mike. And he is 41 years old. My father likes playing basketball. He often watches basketball games on TV. My sister is Mary. How old is she She is six. She likes singing and dancing. I love my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，介绍自己的家庭信息。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②all kinds of各种各样的
③like doing sth.喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
There are four people in my family.（there be句型）
16．
范文
I hope to have a farm of our own. What’s it like This is my dream farm. Our farm has fluffy rabbits and white sheep. Behind the house is a garden full of ripe tomatoes and sweet strawberries. Near the pond, five yellow ducks play happily. At weekends, we can pick strawberries and feed the animals together. Would you like to come
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时；
③提示：需包含动物、植物及邀请信息，注意词数控制。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍农场动物；
第二步：描述后院种植；
第三步：发出周末邀请。
[亮点词汇]
①full of充满
②sweet strawberries甜甜的草莓
③dream farm梦想农场
[高分句型]
①At weekends, we can pick strawberries and feed the animals together.（and并列结构）
②Would you like to come （Would you like…邀请句型）
17．例文
My Father My father is 40 years old. He is tall with short black hair. He is a doctor and he is very good at helping sick people. In his free time, he likes playing basketball and reading books. I love my father very much because he is always kind and helpful to me.
【总体分析】①题材：话题作文（介绍家人）；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：从年龄、外貌、才能、爱好、职业等方面介绍一位家人，符合题目要求。
【写作步骤】第一步：确定要介绍的家人是父亲，点明其年龄；
第二步：描述父亲的外貌、职业、才能以及爱好；
第三步：表达对父亲的爱及原因。
【亮点词汇】①be good at擅长……
②play basketball打篮球
【高分句型】①He is a doctor and he is very good at helping sick people.（含有and的并列句）
②I love my father very much because he is always kind and helpful to me.（because引导的原因状语从句）
18．例文
A Meaningful Thing Between My Parent and I
Cooking with my mother is a wonderful memory for me. It brings me warmth and love.
On a lazy afternoon, my mother asks me to cook together. I’m happy to learn cooking. Everything is ready in the kitchen, and then my mother teaches me to cook dishes step by step. When we cook, we talk, laugh and share stories. After we finish cooking, my father comes back and tastes them. He says the dishes are delicious.
It’s a really happy moment for my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给标题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出写作话题；
第二步，讲述这件有意义的事发生的经过；
第三步，介绍这件事的意义及自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①wonderful精彩的
②warmth温暖
③be ready做好准备
④step by step一步一步地
⑤share分享
[高分句型]
When we cook, we talk, laugh and share stories.(when引导时间状语从句)
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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册期中复习考点突破外研版（2024）
突破01 书面表达-话题作文
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．同学们，祝贺你们开启了崭新的初中生活。在初中的三年，你们要养成良好的学习习惯和生活习惯，遵守各种规章制度。请以“To be a good middle school student”为题，写一篇不少于80个词的短文。（已给出的提示不计入总词数。）
To be a good middle school student
To be a good middle school student, I
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2．请根据要求完成短文写作，题目：请以“My School Life”为题，写一篇关于你的学校生活的短文。
要求：1.包含学校的环境、喜欢的科目、老师、朋友以及课后活动等内容。
2.语句通顺，语法正确，不少于60词。
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3．以“My First Day of junior high”为题目，写一篇关于你初中第一天开学的经历的英语作文。内容包括你的感受、遇到的事情以及你和同学、老师之间的互动。用具体的例子来描述你在这一天遇到的挑战和成功。
要求：1.要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺。
2.字数不少于80词。
3.文中不得出现真实校名及姓名，否则不予评分。
My First Day of Junior High
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4．假如你是李华，你校广播站以“My First Day at Junior High School”为题向学生们征稿。请你写一篇英语文章投稿，内容包括：学习、活动、遇到的问题、这一天的感受等等。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My First Day at Junior High School
Dear Schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua.
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5．从小到大，你听了那么多课，可曾有一节课在你心中留下不可磨灭的痕迹？如果有，又是因为什么？我们不妨来讲讲自己最难忘的一节课。
要求：
（1）根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥；
（2）80词左右。
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6．假如你是Li Hua，以“Myself”为题，写一个自我介绍。
提示：
Information: name age country class
Favourite food: Beijing roast duck Mapo tofu
Favourite subject: English
Hobbies: play basketball play the guitar
要求：（1）包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥。
（2）词数60～80词。
（3）语句通顺、语意连贯、语法正确。
（4）文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
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7．我们进入初中生活已经两个月了！迎来了期中考试，借此请你以“My self-introduction”为题写一篇自我介绍，内容包括姓名（用英文名代替）、年龄、喜爱的运动和食物及其他爱好等。
要求：
1. 表达正确，语句通顺；
2. 字迹工整，书写规范；
3. 不少于60词；
4. 不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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8．自我介绍可以提高自身的人际交往能力，通过自我介绍可以建立起良好的人际关系。假如你叫Dave，来自俄罗斯(Russia)，即将作为一名交换生(exchange student)在太原五中学习。为了让同学们进一步了解你，认识你，更快地和你交朋友，请你用英语写一篇短文介绍自己。
内容包括：◆your name, age, country;
◆favourite things like food, colour, animal and so on;
◆your hobbies.
要求：1.词数不少于60词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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9．学校为帮助七年级新生交朋友，组织了一次主题为“找朋友”的演讲活动。请你根据提示信息写一篇自我介绍，让更多的人认识你吧！
内容包括：1) 性别，年龄，班级
2) 爱好或特长 (play basketball...)
3) 喜欢的颜色，食物
要求：1) 语句通顺，条理清楚，结构合理
2) 词数：80-100
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10．人们常说：“我运动，我健康，我快乐。”你喜欢哪些运动？你有哪些体育用品？请以“My Favorite Sports”为题用英文写一篇短文，介绍你喜欢的运动及看法。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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11．My Favorite Day
提示：一周七天中你最喜欢哪天？你在这一天里都做些什么事？请以“My Favorite Day”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于 60；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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12．学校为同学们提供了丰富多彩的社团活动，以 “My Favourite Club” 为题写一篇英语短文，说说你想参加的社团并说明理由。
要求：1. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息；
3. 不少于 60词。
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13．爱好是梦想的起点。作为新时代的青少年，你的爱好是什么？你的梦想又是什么？你的爱好如何帮助你实现梦想？请以“My Hobby and My Dream”为题，写一篇短文。
要求：
1. 文章语言正确，要点齐全，行文连贯，书写工整；
2. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息；
3. 词数100左右。
My Hobby and My Dream
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14．假如你是七年五班的王丽丽，你进入初中认识了许多新老师，谁给你的印象最深呢？请向我们介绍和描述一下他或她。
写作要求：（1）短文要符合题意，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
（3）语义通顺，书写规范；
（4）词数：60词左右。
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15．My family
Write about your family members. You can write something about age, appearance, personality, hobby...
提示：介绍你的家庭成员，你可以从年龄，外貌，性格，爱好等方面介绍。
要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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16．假如你家有一个农场，想象一下你的农场上都有什么？可爱的兔子？温顺的绵羊？还是憨憨的鸭子？你家房子的后面有院子吗？院子里都种了什么蔬菜或是瓜果？周末就要到了，你想邀请你的朋友去农场上玩，请你向他(她)介绍一下你的农场吧！
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名；
2. 词数60左右；
3. 语法正确，语句通顺，行文连贯。
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17．家人是我们最熟悉的人，也是我们最爱的人，请以“My ________ ”为题，介绍你的一位家人。请从年龄、外貌、才能、爱好、职业等方面写一写，也可自行补充其他内容。
要求：
1. 条理清晰，句子通顺，意思明确，标点正确，书写工整。
2. 不少于五个句子。
My ________
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18．亲子时光是家庭中特别珍贵的时刻。请以“A Meaningful Thing Between My Parent and I”为题，用英语写一篇短文叙述你和父亲或母亲做过的一件有意义的事。谈谈它的意义以及你的感受。
要求：
1.语言流畅、书写规范，词数不少于70；
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
A Meaningful Thing Between My Parent and I
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
To be a good middle school student
To be a good middle school student, I should develop good habits.
First, I need to study hard. I should attend class on time, listen to the teacher carefully, take notes, and finish my homework. Reviewing lessons after school is also important. Second, I should live a healthy life. This means going to bed and getting up early, eating healthy food, and doing exercise. Finally, I must follow the school rules. I should keep quiet in class, be polite to teachers and classmates, and keep our school clean.
If I do all these things, I can make progress and become a good student.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：题目给出了要点，必须写出所给内容，可以适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍成为一名好学生需要做什么；
第二步，分几方面详细陈述需要如何做；
第三步，总结升华，表达对自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①study hard努力学习
②go to bed去睡觉
③follow the rules遵守规则
[高分句型]
If I do all these things, I can make progress and become a good student.（条件状语从句）
2．例文
My School Life
My school is big and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers around the teaching building. My favorite subject is English because my teacher, Miss Wang, makes it fun. She often plays games with us in class. My best friend is Lily. We always study and play together. After school, we sometimes join the art club to draw pictures. I love my school life—it’s colorful and happy!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时态”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，直接描述学校的整体环境；
第二步：具体阐述学校生活的核心内容，先说明最喜欢的科目、老师，解释原因，再介绍最好的朋友莉莉及两人的日常，最后补充课后活动；
第三步：书写结语，总结对学校生活的感受，表达对学校生活的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①make it fun 使它有趣
②play…with与……一起玩耍
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is English because my teacher, Miss Wang, makes it fun.（because引导原因状语从句）
3．例文
My First Day of Junior High
I was excited as well as worried on my first day of junior high. I was excited because I was a student of junior high school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers and students in this school. However, when I sat down at my desk and began to know about my teachers and classmates, I found everyone was really nice to me. Teachers were very kind and ready to help us. One of the teachers asked us to introduce ourselves. My classmates were active and easy to get along with. After class, I played soccer with my newly-made friends on the playground. I chatted with my English teacher. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于话题作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头以及标题已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，描述你入校当天的感受；
第二步，结合自身经历，描述你入校时的所见所闻和经历感受，介绍具体的事例；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as也，又，和
②get along with和睦相处
③chat with聊天
[高分句型]
①I was excited because I was a student of junior middle school now.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②However, when I sat down at my desk and began to know about my teachers and classmates, I found everyone was really nice to me.（时间状语从句）
4．例文
My First Day at Junior High School
Dear Schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua. My first day here was good because I learned many new things. The classes were interesting. I like science and history best. After school, I joined the book club. We read and talked about books. I also played games with my new friends. How fun it was! But sometimes, I found it’s difficult for me to learn English. I should spend more time learning new words.
Overall, I’m happy here. I’m making new friends and learning new things. I’m looking forward to more days like this.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。向大家问好，介绍自己。（开头已给出）
第二步，具体阐述。根据提示的要点，阐述在初中第一天的学习、活动、遇到的问题、这一天的感受等。
第三步，书写结语。展望未来，感谢大家的聆听。
[亮点词汇]
① find it+adj. for sb. to do sth. 发现做某事对某人来说很怎么样
② spend time doing sth. 花时间做某事
③ overall adv. 总之
④ look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
① How fun it was!（感叹句）
② But sometimes, I found it’s difficult for me to learn English.（省略that的宾语从句）省略（）
5．参考范文
I have a lot of lessons in my school life, but I’ll never forget the lesson from a young American man. It was interesting.
One day, a young American came into our classroom. He talked to us in English and then began his class. It was quite different from our lessons before. In class, he taught us some English songs, played games with us and helped us remember some new words. He smiled at each of us when he was in the class.
I will never forget his smile, his songs and his games.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我最难忘的一节课”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“课程内容、感受”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①come into走进来
②be different from与……不同
③help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①He smiled at each of us when he was in the class.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．例文
Myself
My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old. I come from China and I’m in Class 5, Grade 7. My favourite subject is English because it’s interesting and useful. I like eating Beijing roast duck and Mapo tofu—they are delicious! In my free time, I enjoy playing basketball with my friends and playing the guitar. I think sports and music make me happy and healthy. That’s all about me!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的相关信息，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己的基本信息；
第二步：介绍自己最喜欢的科目、食物和爱好；
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②in my free time在我的空闲时间
③enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
④play basketball打篮球
⑤play the guitar弹吉他
[高分句型]
①My favourite subject is English because it’s interesting and useful. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think sports and music make me happy and healthy. (宾语从句)
7．范文：
My Self-Introduction
Hello! My name is Lily, and I’m a fresh start in the seventh grade. I’m 12 years old and full of energy.
When it comes to sports, I’m really into badminton. I love the fast pace and the way it gets my heart racing. As for food, I’m a big fan of pizza. I could eat it every day and never get tired of it! Apart from sports and food, I have a few other interests. I love to draw in my free time. I find it very relaxing and it’s a great way to express myself. I also enjoy playing the guitar. I’ve been learning for a couple of years now, and I’m getting pretty good at it.
I’m really excited to be in middle school and to meet all of you. I can’t wait to make new friends and learn new things together. Let’s have a great year ahead! Thank you for listening to my introduction.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题，介绍姓名、年龄等基本信息。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“喜爱的运动和食物及其他爱好”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达期待和感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①When it comes to当提及……时
②every day每天
③get tired of 对……感到疲倦
④apart from除……之外
⑤love to do sth喜欢做某事
⑥be good at擅长
⑦be excited to do 对做某事感到兴奋
⑧can’t wait to do sth迫不及待做某事
⑨let sb do sth让某人做某事
⑩thank sb for doing sth因做某事而感谢某人
[高分句型]
①My name is Lily, and I’m a fresh start in the seventh grade. (并列句)
②I love the fast pace and the way it gets my heart racing. (定语从句)
③I find it very relaxing and it’s a great way to express myself. (it作形式主语的固定句型和并列句)
8．例文
My name is Dave. I am 15 years old. I come from Russia. I am an exchange student and I am going to study at Taiyuan No.5 Middle School. I like eating Chinese food, especially dumplings. My favourite colour is blue. My favourite animal is the panda because it is very cute. I have many hobbies. I like playing basketball and football. I also like reading books and listening to music. I hope to make more friends in China and learn more about Chinese culture.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的基本信息；
第二步，根据题干的要点，分享自己的爱好，喜欢的食物，颜色等情况；
第三步，表示希望交更多好朋友。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①My favourite animal is the panda because it is very cute.（原因状语从句）
②I hope to make more friends in China and learn more about Chinese culture.（不定式作宾语）
9．例文
Hello, everyone!
I’m very happy to have this chance to introduce myself. I am a 13-year-old girl from Class 1, Grade 7.
In my free time, I enjoy playing basketball with my friends. It’s not only fun but also helps me stay active and healthy. My favorite color is blue because it reminds me of the sky and the sea. As for food, I love eating noodles, especially when they’re made by my mom.
I really hope to make more friends here. If you have the same hobbies or just want to chat, feel free to come and say hello! Thank you!
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章写作需要围绕“个人介绍”展开，内容要涵盖年龄、班级、课余活动、喜爱的颜色与原因、喜爱的食物、交友愿望，考生应注意完整呈现自我介绍的核心要素，适当补充细节，避免遗漏关键信息。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。以问候语开篇，说明很开心有机会做自我介绍，引出个人信息介绍；
第二步，具体阐述个人情况。先介绍基本信息，再说明课余爱好及爱好的意义，接着介绍喜爱的颜色及原因、喜爱的食物；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望在这里交到更多朋友的愿望，发出交友邀请。
［亮点词汇］
①have this chance有这个机会
②introduce myself自我介绍
③in my free time在我的空闲时间
④stay active and healthy保持活力和健康
⑤reminds me of让我想起
⑥feel free to随意做某事
［高分句型］
①It’s not only fun but also helps me stay active and healthy.（“not only...but also...”连接并列成分）
②My favorite color is blue because it reminds me of the sky and the sea.（because引导的原因状语从句）
③If you have the same hobbies or just want to chat, feel free to come and say hello!（if引导的条件状语从句）
10．例文：
My Favorite Sports
There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as swimming, running, and dancing. However, the sports that I like most are basketball and swimming.
When I was in junior high, I started to play basketball. I have many basketballs. I often go to swim with my good friend Lily. When I am swimming in the pool, I am very happy. I look like a lovely fish in the pond.
I enjoy doing sports, because it can make me strong and healthy. Sports can also bring me a lot of happiness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示和要求进行写作，介绍最喜欢的运动。写作中适当使用连接词、短语和句型，确保行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍最喜欢的运动是什么；
第二步，具体介绍最喜欢的运动；
第三步，结尾总结。
[亮点词汇]
①kinds of 各种各样的
②look like 看起来像
③a lot of 许多
[高分句型]
①There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as swimming, running, and dancing. (定语从句)
②When I am swimming in the pool, I am very happy. (状语从句)
11．例文：
My Favorite Day
My favorite day of the week is Saturday. On this day, I usually get up early in the morning and go for a run in the park with my father. After breakfast, I help my mother with housework. In the afternoon, I like to go to the library to read books. I enjoy reading novels and stories about history. In the evening, I watch TV with my family or play games with my friends. We often have a lot of fun together. Saturday is a relaxing and enjoyable day for me, and I look forward to it every week.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作内容要回答提示中的问题，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点明自己最喜欢哪一天；
第二步，按时间顺序具体介绍这一天的活动；
第三步，结尾点题，总结喜欢这一天的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①get up 起床
②watch TV 看电视
③look forward to 盼望
[高分句型]
①After breakfast, I help my mother with housework.（help...with...句型）
② I enjoy reading novels and stories about history.（enjoy doing sth句型）
12．例文
My Favourite Club
Our school provides all the students with kinds of after-class activities, such as club activities. We have different clubs, such as science club, English club, art club, sports club and so on. I would like to join the English club, because I love English so much. I want to participate in English activities, such as English corner and English speaking contest so that I can improve my English skill. What about you
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校的俱乐部；
第二步，介绍自己想加入的俱乐部以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①provide...with...向……提供……
②such as例如
③would like to do sth想要做某事
[高分句型]
①I would like to join the English club, because I love English so much.（because引导原因状语从句）
13．例文
My Hobby and My Dream
Everyone has his own hobby and dream. My hobby is reading, and my dream is to become a writer.
When I was young, I had a strong interest in books. Whenever I open a book, it’s as if I enter a magical world. Through reading, I cannot only learn a lot of knowledge, but also broaden my horizons.
I hope to use my pen to write vivid and interesting stories. To achieve my dream, I work hard to improve my writing skills. I read books, keep a diary every day, and actively take part in different writing competitions.
Although I am still a junior high school student, I believe that as long as there is a dream in my heart, I will be able to achieve it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：根据所给话题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍自己的爱好和梦想是什么；
第二步，具体描述你的爱好如何帮助你实现梦想；
第三步，最后书写小结。
[亮点词汇]
① broaden my horizons开阔我的视野
② keep a diary写日记
③ be able to能够
[高分句型]
①When I was young, I had a strong interest in books.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Although I am still a junior high school student, I believe that as long as there is a dream in my heart, I will be able to achieve it.（although引导的让步状语从句，that引导的宾语从句）
14．例文
Hi! I’m Wang Lili. I’m in Class 5, Grade 7. I meet some new teachers this term. They are good and friendly. My class teacher is Mr. Gao. He is very popular. We all like him. Now I tell you something about him. He is tall and handsome. He has a long face and short black hair. He teaches us Chinese very well. Sometimes he tells us some Chinese stories. They are very interesting. He likes sports and plays football with us. He asks us to study hard and help each other to get good grades. He is my favourite teacher.
【详解】 ［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇命题作文。
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕主题，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开头点明自己的身份及要介绍新老师，引出高老师。
第二步，具体阐述。描述高老师的外貌，介绍他的教学情况和讲故事的爱好，阐述他热爱运动及与学生互动的情况。
第三步，书写结语。表明高老师是自己最喜欢的老师。
［亮点词汇］
①class teacher班主任
②tell stories讲故事
③play football踢足球
④ask sb to do让某人做某事
⑤study hard努力学习
⑥teach well教得好
［高分句型］
He asks us to study hard and help each other to get good grades.（并列句；动词不定式作宾补）
15．例文
My family
My name is Gina. I’m a student. I am 11 years old. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my sister and I. My mother is a doctor. Her name is Linda. And she is 40 years old. She likes cooking and is good at cooking all kinds of food. My father is a teacher. His name is Mike. And he is 41 years old. My father likes playing basketball. He often watches basketball games on TV. My sister is Mary. How old is she She is six. She likes singing and dancing. I love my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，介绍自己的家庭信息。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②all kinds of各种各样的
③like doing sth.喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
There are four people in my family.（there be句型）
16．
范文
I hope to have a farm of our own. What’s it like This is my dream farm. Our farm has fluffy rabbits and white sheep. Behind the house is a garden full of ripe tomatoes and sweet strawberries. Near the pond, five yellow ducks play happily. At weekends, we can pick strawberries and feed the animals together. Would you like to come
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时；
③提示：需包含动物、植物及邀请信息，注意词数控制。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍农场动物；
第二步：描述后院种植；
第三步：发出周末邀请。
[亮点词汇]
①full of充满
②sweet strawberries甜甜的草莓
③dream farm梦想农场
[高分句型]
①At weekends, we can pick strawberries and feed the animals together.（and并列结构）
②Would you like to come （Would you like…邀请句型）
17．例文
My Father My father is 40 years old. He is tall with short black hair. He is a doctor and he is very good at helping sick people. In his free time, he likes playing basketball and reading books. I love my father very much because he is always kind and helpful to me.
【总体分析】①题材：话题作文（介绍家人）；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：从年龄、外貌、才能、爱好、职业等方面介绍一位家人，符合题目要求。
【写作步骤】第一步：确定要介绍的家人是父亲，点明其年龄；
第二步：描述父亲的外貌、职业、才能以及爱好；
第三步：表达对父亲的爱及原因。
【亮点词汇】①be good at擅长……
②play basketball打篮球
【高分句型】①He is a doctor and he is very good at helping sick people.（含有and的并列句）
②I love my father very much because he is always kind and helpful to me.（because引导的原因状语从句）
18．例文
A Meaningful Thing Between My Parent and I
Cooking with my mother is a wonderful memory for me. It brings me warmth and love.
On a lazy afternoon, my mother asks me to cook together. I’m happy to learn cooking. Everything is ready in the kitchen, and then my mother teaches me to cook dishes step by step. When we cook, we talk, laugh and share stories. After we finish cooking, my father comes back and tastes them. He says the dishes are delicious.
It’s a really happy moment for my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给标题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出写作话题；
第二步，讲述这件有意义的事发生的经过；
第三步，介绍这件事的意义及自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①wonderful精彩的
②warmth温暖
③be ready做好准备
④step by step一步一步地
⑤share分享
[高分句型]
When we cook, we talk, laugh and share stories.(when引导时间状语从句)
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