九年级英语人教版第5单元作文导学案
简介:本单元作文有两项任务:一是介绍一项自己喜欢的已存在的发明,二是介绍一项自己新发明并推销。
文体:说明文 时态:一般现在时、一般过去时
语态:主动语态、被动语态 人称:第一、三人称
可用短语:
1.日常生活 2.由……制成 3.意外地
4.被用来…… 5.在那时 6.毫无疑问
7.不但…而且… 8.由于;多亏 9.众所周知
仿写课文经典例句(替换划横线部分)
1.Basketball is a much-loved and active sport that is enjoyed by many for fun and exercise.
2.The popularity of basketball has risen around the world.
3.The number of foreign players has increased.
4.The most popular drink in the world was invented by accident.
5.One of the world’s favorite drinks was invented.
三、常用短语
起头用语:As is known to all 众所周知 as far as I know 就我所知
first of all /at first/to begin with/to startwith首先
中间用语:In fact/To tell the truth/To be honest实话说
Moreover/What’s more/besides还有
However, 然而 after all毕竟 that is to say也就是说
结束用语:in the end/at last/Finally最后 in a word/all in all 总而言之 In shor/brief 简而言之
四、写作参考模板
篇目一
My Favorite Invention -##
开头一:As far as we know,##is becoming more and more popular/important in our daily life.I think it’s the greatest invention in history/in the world.
开头二:There are a number of许多useful inventions around the world.In my opinion,##is the greatest.
正文:Do you know when##was invented Could you tell us who##was invented by Let me help you to know about it. (问句引发兴趣,宾语从句提升文章质量。)
To begin with, ##was invented by___in_____.It is one of inventions that change the world/our life.It is widely used and much-loved . First of all ,it is used for/to用途.In fact, you can see it列举能见到这项发明的地方. Besides,People use ## to用途.It makes us adj./v.益处.What’s more, It helps usV.用途 .Thanks to ## , life become easier and more convenient. That is why I admire欣赏##.
结尾一:In a word,## does强调 have a great influence on our life,even though someone doesn’t realize that.Not only will it be produced better itself,but it will also make us live better.
结尾二:All in all,the popularity of ##has risen rapidly/quickly.
With the help of##,we can do things that 定从we couldn’t in the past.As for至于me,I make a decision to study hard in order to create more useful inventions one day.
写作一:
My Favorite Invention
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篇目二
My New Invention-##
开头:写困难参考句型:
①Do you have difficulty/trouble/problems in +V.ing(困难)
②Do you want to+V.ing(想解决的事)?
③Do you find it difficult to+V.原(困难)
推荐:##can solve your problem. It was invented by me.You will never regret to use it.
正文: 1.受众:## is designed for+受众如students,doctors等.
2.外观及材质:It looks like___ .It is made up of__ (由…组成).
It is+颜色.It is made of/from+材质.
用途:##is used for+用途. It can also+V.
Moreover,it makes it possible to+V.
用法:When you meet difficulties like+V.ing困难,you need to+V.用法.
Then it will work.It’s easy to learn how to use it.
5.动力:It runs on electricity/water/wind.
结尾:You can have it for just价格yuan.It is both cheap and useful,isn’t it
it makes a big difference to me and it will help you a lot.Let me pack one for you.
写作二 My New Invention
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评价量表
评分点 评价标准 自我评价 同伴互评 教师评价
结构 2分 分段合理段落特征明显。 至少有开,头、正文、结尾三段。
内容 8分 1.包括所有题干提及的内容(1分) 2.格式正确(1分) 3.发明物;发明人;时间; 发明原因2分 4.外观;材料;用途;用法2分 5.个人感受及此发明的好处 2分
语法2 时态、语态、人称无误且无其他语法问题
语言1 无单词、拼写错误,运用连词等使行文连贯流畅。
卷面1 整洁美观