高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练03
一、无灵主语句（情绪具象化）
A wave/surge of + 情绪名词 + 动作动词（swept/flooded/rushed）+ over sb.
情绪名词 + 动作动词（filled/clung/lingered）+ 范围/感官部位, making sb. + 状态
1. 原句：_______________________________________when she heard her grandma was safe.
翻译：听到奶奶平安的消息时，一股如释重负的感觉涌上她的心头。
2. 原句：_____________________________, making it hard for him to look his friend in the eye.
翻译：愧疚像湿布一样缠着他，让他难以直视朋友的眼睛。
段落一（A wave/surge of...句式+情绪名词+动作动词句式）
Lila paced back and forth in the hospital waiting room, her hands twisted tightly together. The clock on the wall ticked loudly, each sound stretching her nerves thinner. Just as she was about to burst into tears, the doctor walked out and nodded at her. (1)_______________________
_________________, (一股如释重负的感觉涌上心头) making her legs go weak for a moment—she’d been terrified something bad had happened to her dad. She rushed to the doctor, and when he said “your father is out of danger,” (2)__________________________________(喜悦充满了她的胸膛), making her voice shake as she thanked him repeatedly. Even the cold, sterile air of the hospital felt warmer now, wrapped in the comfort of the good news.
段落二（情绪名词+动作动词句式+A wave/surge of...句式）
Jake stared at the broken model plane on the table—he’d promised to fix it for his little brother, but he’d forgotten and played video games instead. (1)__________________
________________, (愧疚像湿布一样缠着他)making it hard for him to look his brother in the eye when the boy walked in. His brother’s lips trembled as he picked up the pieces, and (2)__________________________________(一股悔恨涌上杰克的心头). He knelt down beside his brother, taking the model from his hands. “Let’s fix it together—better than before,” he said, rummaging through his drawer for glue. As they worked side by side, (3)__________
________________________, (愧疚感慢慢消退)replaced by a quiet warmth that made Jake vow never to break a promise again.
二、感官融合句（多维度渲染）
感官名词 + 感官动词 + 方式状语, like + 喻体, making + 身体反应
具体事物 + 感官动词, carrying/mingling with + 另一感官内容
原句：The sound of confetti falling echoed, like a series of tiny bells ringing, ____________________________________
翻译：五彩纸屑飘落的声音回荡着，如同一连串清脆的小铃铛响，让她惊喜得睁大眼睛。
原句：The scent of jasmine drifted through the window, mingling with the soft breeze, _________________________________________
翻译：茉莉花香从窗外飘进来，与轻柔的微风交织在一起，让她的心情立刻平静下来。
段落一（声音+气味感官融合）
Luna pushed open the door of the old bakery, and the sound of a bell above the frame jingled, like a child’s laughter dancing in the air, (1)__________________________________. (让她顿了顿仔细聆听) The warmth inside wrapped around her immediately, chasing away the autumn chill on her cheeks. A fresh scent of butter and cinnamon drifted from the counter, mingling with the sweet aroma of刚出炉的 croissants, (2)__________________________________. (让她的肚子轻轻咕咕叫起来) She smiled, walking toward the cashier—this was exactly the cozy feeling she’d been looking for after a long, tiring day at school. The baker handed her a warm pastry, and when she took a bite, the crisp crust crunched between her teeth, mixing with the creamy filling, (3)__________________________________. (留下甜甜的余味，让她的眼睛瞬间亮了起来)
段落二（视觉+触觉+气味感官融合）
The sun dipped below the mountain, and the light of the sky faded to soft pink, like a watercolor painting left out to dry, (1)__________________________________. (忍不住停下自行车驻足凝望) He reached out his hand, and the cool evening air brushed against his palm, carrying the earthy scent of wet grass from the field nearby, (2)___________________
_______________. (让他深吸了一口气) A cricket started chirping in the bushes, its sound mixing with the distant bark of a dog, wrapping around him like a quiet lullaby. He got off his bike, sitting on a stone by the road, and touched the rough surface of the stone with his fingertips—this quiet moment, filled with soft colors, cool air, and gentle sounds, (3)_______________________
_________. (让他考试周的所有压力都烟消云散了)
三、高级语法结构（强调与衔接）
倒装句：否定副词/Only + 状语 + 助动词/情态动词 + 主语 + 谓语
with复合结构：主句, with + 宾语 + 宾语补足语（分词/形容词/介词短语）
1. 原句：______________________________________________ with the old town before.
翻译：他以前从未对这座老城有过如此强烈的归属感。
2. 原句：She sat by the window, ____________________________________________________翻译：她坐在窗边，手指摩挲着旧照片，泪水顺着脸颊滑落。
段落一（倒装句+with复合结构）
Tom wandered along the stone streets of the old town, his boots tapping softly on the cobblestones. He’d visited here once as a child, but back then, he’d only cared about the candy shop on the corner. Now, as he passed the wooden bookstore with chipped paint and the café where an old man played the accordion, he felt something shift in his chest. (1)_____________
_____________________________ (他以前从未对这座老城有过如此强烈的归属感)—every brick seemed to hold a story, every breeze carried the scent of childhood memories. He stopped at a bench in the square, (2)__________________________________(阳光洒在肩头) and a stray cat curling up at his feet. For a moment, he forgot about the busy city life he’d left behind, lost in the quiet charm of this place.
段落二（with复合结构+倒装句）
Luna sat at her desk, trying to focus on her homework, but her mind kept drifting to the letter she’d received that morning. It was from her pen pal in Paris, filled with stories of springtime by the Seine. She set down her pen, (1)__________________________________ (胳膊肘撑在桌上) and her chin propped in her hands, replaying the words of the letter in her head. “The cherry blossoms are falling like snow here,” it had said. (2)__________________________________ (直到妈妈喊她吃饭) did she snap out of her daydream. She stood up, stretching slightly, and walked toward the kitchen—yet the image of pink petals dancing over the river stayed with her, making her smile even as she picked up her chopsticks.
四、动作链与转折句（情节推进）
动作链：Sb. + 副词 + v-ed1, v-ed2, and then v-ed3, 伴随状语
意外转折：Just as/When + 情节进行, 主句（意外事件）
原句：He threw down his backpack, grabbed a bottle of water, and then dashed out of the house_________________________________
翻译：他扔下背包，抓起一瓶水，然后冲出家门，迫不及待地去见朋友们。
2. 原句：________________________________, a sudden rainstorm started pouring down.
翻译：就在他们收拾野餐用品时，一场突如其来的暴雨倾盆而下。
段落一（动作链+意外转折）
Ella checked the time on her phone, realized she was already ten minutes late for the art exhibition, and immediately sprang into action. (1)_______________________________
____________________________________, (她扔下没看完的杂志，从沙发上抓起包，然后冲出公寓) her shoes thudding against the stairs as she hurried down.(2)___________________
_______________________________________, (就在她跑到公交站、朝驶来的公交车挥手时) a gust of wind blew her bus card out of her hand—it spun twice in the air before landing in a puddle by the curb. Ella froze for a second, then groaned, rushing to fish the soaked card out, watching the bus drive away without her.
段落二（意外转折+动作链）
When Tom and his little sister were building a sandcastle on the beach, a big wave rolled in suddenly,(1)__________________________________, (冲垮了一半的沙堡) . They stared at the lopsided sandcastle in shock for a moment, then Tom clapped his hands to get his sister’s attention.(2)__________________________________________________________, (他从包里拿出小桶，装满湿沙子，然后帮妹妹把沙子堆回沙堡上) , his voice cheerful as he said, “We’ll make it bigger this time—add a moat so the waves can’t get it!” Together, (3)________
__________________________________________________, (他们把沙子拍实，在沙堡周围挖了条小沟，还用贝壳装饰) they’d collected earlier, turning the accident into a more fun project.高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练03
一、无灵主语句（情绪具象化）
A wave/surge of + 情绪名词 + 动作动词（swept/flooded/rushed）+ over sb.
情绪名词 + 动作动词（filled/clung/lingered）+ 范围/感官部位, making sb. + 状态
1. 原句：_______________________________________when she heard her grandma was safe.
翻译：听到奶奶平安的消息时，一股如释重负的感觉涌上她的心头。
2. 原句：_____________________________, making it hard for him to look his friend in the eye.
翻译：愧疚像湿布一样缠着他，让他难以直视朋友的眼睛。
答案：
A surge of relief flooded over her
Guilt clung to him like wet cloth
段落一（A wave/surge of...句式+情绪名词+动作动词句式）
Lila paced back and forth in the hospital waiting room, her hands twisted tightly together. The clock on the wall ticked loudly, each sound stretching her nerves thinner. Just as she was about to burst into tears, the doctor walked out and nodded at her. (1)_______________________
_________________, (一股如释重负的感觉涌上心头) making her legs go weak for a moment—she’d been terrified something bad had happened to her dad. She rushed to the doctor, and when he said “your father is out of danger,” (2)__________________________________(喜悦充满了她的胸膛), making her voice shake as she thanked him repeatedly. Even the cold, sterile air of the hospital felt warmer now, wrapped in the comfort of the good news.
答案：
A surge of relief flooded over her
joy filled her chest
段落二（情绪名词+动作动词句式+A wave/surge of...句式）
Jake stared at the broken model plane on the table—he’d promised to fix it for his little brother, but he’d forgotten and played video games instead. (1)__________________
________________, (愧疚像湿布一样缠着他)making it hard for him to look his brother in the eye when the boy walked in. His brother’s lips trembled as he picked up the pieces, and (2)__________________________________(一股悔恨涌上杰克的心头). He knelt down beside his brother, taking the model from his hands. “Let’s fix it together—better than before,” he said, rummaging through his drawer for glue. As they worked side by side, (3)__________
________________________, (愧疚感慢慢消退)replaced by a quiet warmth that made Jake vow never to break a promise again.
答案：
Guilt clung to him like wet cloth
a wave of regret flooded over Jake
the guilt slowly faded
二、感官融合句（多维度渲染）
感官名词 + 感官动词 + 方式状语, like + 喻体, making + 身体反应
具体事物 + 感官动词, carrying/mingling with + 另一感官内容
原句：The sound of confetti falling echoed, like a series of tiny bells ringing, ____________________________________
翻译：五彩纸屑飘落的声音回荡着，如同一连串清脆的小铃铛响，让她惊喜得睁大眼睛。
原句：The scent of jasmine drifted through the window, mingling with the soft breeze, _________________________________________
翻译：茉莉花香从窗外飘进来，与轻柔的微风交织在一起，让她的心情立刻平静下来。
答案：
making her eyes widen in surprise.
making her mind calm instantly.
段落一（声音+气味感官融合）
Luna pushed open the door of the old bakery, and the sound of a bell above the frame jingled, like a child’s laughter dancing in the air, (1)__________________________________. (让她顿了顿仔细聆听) The warmth inside wrapped around her immediately, chasing away the autumn chill on her cheeks. A fresh scent of butter and cinnamon drifted from the counter, mingling with the sweet aroma of刚出炉的 croissants, (2)__________________________________. (让她的肚子轻轻咕咕叫起来) She smiled, walking toward the cashier—this was exactly the cozy feeling she’d been looking for after a long, tiring day at school. The baker handed her a warm pastry, and when she took a bite, the crisp crust crunched between her teeth, mixing with the creamy filling, (3)__________________________________. (留下甜甜的余味，让她的眼睛瞬间亮了起来)
答案：
making her pause for a second to listen.
making her stomach growl softly.
leaving a sweet aftertaste that made her eyes light up.
段落二（视觉+触觉+气味感官融合）
The sun dipped below the mountain, and the light of the sky faded to soft pink, like a watercolor painting left out to dry, (1)__________________________________. (忍不住停下自行车驻足凝望) He reached out his hand, and the cool evening air brushed against his palm, carrying the earthy scent of wet grass from the field nearby, (2)___________________
_______________. (让他深吸了一口气) A cricket started chirping in the bushes, its sound mixing with the distant bark of a dog, wrapping around him like a quiet lullaby. He got off his bike, sitting on a stone by the road, and touched the rough surface of the stone with his fingertips—this quiet moment, filled with soft colors, cool air, and gentle sounds, (3)_______________________
_________. (让他考试周的所有压力都烟消云散了)
答案：
making Tom stop his bike to stare.
making him take a deep breath.
(3) made all the stress from his exam week melt away.
三、高级语法结构（强调与衔接）
倒装句：否定副词/Only + 状语 + 助动词/情态动词 + 主语 + 谓语
with复合结构：主句, with + 宾语 + 宾语补足语（分词/形容词/介词短语）
1. 原句：______________________________________________ with the old town before.
翻译：他以前从未对这座老城有过如此强烈的归属感。
2. 原句：She sat by the window, ____________________________________________________翻译：她坐在窗边，手指摩挲着旧照片，泪水顺着脸颊滑落。
答案：
Never had he felt such a strong connection
with her fingers tracing the old photo and tears sliding down her cheeks.
段落一（倒装句+with复合结构）
Tom wandered along the stone streets of the old town, his boots tapping softly on the cobblestones. He’d visited here once as a child, but back then, he’d only cared about the candy shop on the corner. Now, as he passed the wooden bookstore with chipped paint and the café where an old man played the accordion, he felt something shift in his chest. (1)_____________
_____________________________ (他以前从未对这座老城有过如此强烈的归属感)—every brick seemed to hold a story, every breeze carried the scent of childhood memories. He stopped at a bench in the square, (2)__________________________________(阳光洒在肩头) and a stray cat curling up at his feet. For a moment, he forgot about the busy city life he’d left behind, lost in the quiet charm of this place.
答案：
Never had he felt such a strong connection with the old town before
(2) with sunlight spilling over his shoulders
段落二（with复合结构+倒装句）
Luna sat at her desk, trying to focus on her homework, but her mind kept drifting to the letter she’d received that morning. It was from her pen pal in Paris, filled with stories of springtime by the Seine. She set down her pen, (1)__________________________________ (胳膊肘撑在桌上) and her chin propped in her hands, replaying the words of the letter in her head. “The cherry blossoms are falling like snow here,” it had said. (2)__________________________________ (直到妈妈喊她吃饭) did she snap out of her daydream. She stood up, stretching slightly, and walked toward the kitchen—yet the image of pink petals dancing over the river stayed with her, making her smile even as she picked up her chopsticks.
答案：
with her elbows resting on the desk
Only when her mom called her for dinner
四、动作链与转折句（情节推进）
动作链：Sb. + 副词 + v-ed1, v-ed2, and then v-ed3, 伴随状语
意外转折：Just as/When + 情节进行, 主句（意外事件）
原句：He threw down his backpack, grabbed a bottle of water, and then dashed out of the house_________________________________
翻译：他扔下背包，抓起一瓶水，然后冲出家门，迫不及待地去见朋友们。
2. 原句：________________________________, a sudden rainstorm started pouring down.
翻译：就在他们收拾野餐用品时，一场突如其来的暴雨倾盆而下。
答案：
eager to meet his friends.
When they were packing up the picnic things
段落一（动作链+意外转折）
Ella checked the time on her phone, realized she was already ten minutes late for the art exhibition, and immediately sprang into action. (1)_______________________________
____________________________________, (她扔下没看完的杂志，从沙发上抓起包，然后冲出公寓) her shoes thudding against the stairs as she hurried down.(2)___________________
_______________________________________, (就在她跑到公交站、朝驶来的公交车挥手时) a gust of wind blew her bus card out of her hand—it spun twice in the air before landing in a puddle by the curb. Ella froze for a second, then groaned, rushing to fish the soaked card out, watching the bus drive away without her.
答案：
She threw down her half-read magazine, grabbed her bag from the sofa, and then dashed out of the apartment
Just as she reached the bus stop and waved at the approaching bus
段落二（意外转折+动作链）
When Tom and his little sister were building a sandcastle on the beach, a big wave rolled in suddenly,(1)__________________________________, (冲垮了一半的沙堡) . They stared at the lopsided sandcastle in shock for a moment, then Tom clapped his hands to get his sister’s attention.(2)__________________________________________________________, (他从包里拿出小桶，装满湿沙子，然后帮妹妹把沙子堆回沙堡上) , his voice cheerful as he said, “We’ll make it bigger this time—add a moat so the waves can’t get it!” Together, (3)________
__________________________________________________, (他们把沙子拍实，在沙堡周围挖了条小沟，还用贝壳装饰) they’d collected earlier, turning the accident into a more fun project.
答案：
washing away half of their creation
He fetched a bucket from their bag, filled it with wet sand, and then helped his sister pile the sand back onto the castle
they patted the sand firmly, dug a small ditch around the castle, and even decorated it with seashells
