【期中考点突破】突破02 书面表达-材料作文（含答案解析）--2025-2026学年九年级英语全册期中复习考点突破人教新目标版

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2025-2026学年九年级英语全册期中复习考点突破人教新目标版
突破02 书面表达-材料作文
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．本单元的话题是“学会如何学习”，所涉及的写作内容通常是介绍学习方法或根据他人学习中遇到的困难给出合理的建议。写作时可参考本单元所提到的学习方法。
假设你是李华，三年的初中生活即将过去，你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习上曾帮助过你。在即将毕业之际，请你在给Sam的毕业纪念册上用英语写一段100词左右的留言，要求包括以下内容要点：
1.你在学习上曾遇到的困难；
2.Sam对你的帮助、建议及措施：
(1) 多听多读；
(2) 多看英语电影，多唱英文歌曲；
(3) ……(自由发挥；不少于一项内容)
3．你的收获及对Sam的感谢和祝福。
Dear Sam,
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．亲爱的同学，随着“双减”政策的落地，面对轻松的学业负担和课余生活，如何成为一个好的学习者至关重要。请根据以下信息，谈谈你的建议吧！词数80左右。
develop good habits How to Be a Good Learner？ finish homework efficiently
make full use of the time …
注意事项：
1.必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总数。
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
How to Be a Good Learner
As we know, the policy of “double-lightening the burden” has been carried out.
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3．“研学旅行”是以组织中小学生集体旅行的方式走出校园，以各种不同的形式亲近社会与自然而开展的研究性学习与旅行体验相结合的教育活动。每个学期学校都会组织类似活动，大部分学生会参加，他们认为通过研学活动可以增加不一样的体验，也有小部分学生不参加，他们认为学习时间过于紧张，不如在学校自习。对此，你的看法是什么？请根据以下要点提示为校刊写一篇英语短文。
1、要点提示：①介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受；
②表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由(至少2点)。
2、注意事项：①短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；
②80词左右；
③文中不得出现个人姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：研学旅行 study trip； 乘骑设施 ride
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
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4．节日带给我们快乐，节日也给我们以独特的感受。假如你是王文，代表学校参加某英文网站以“My favorite festival”为题开展的征文活动。请你根据下面的内容，从中西方节日中任选一个，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点：
1.说出一个你喜欢的节日，并说明理由；
2.描述自身的一次经历或你通常是怎样度过这个节日的；
3.谈谈你对这个节日的感受。
注意：
1.词数80～100；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.短文要包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
My favorite festival
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5．某英语报社开辟专栏“Reading is Very Important”，向中学生征稿。假设你叫李华，请写一篇英语征文，向该报社投稿，内容如下：
1.阅读的益处：
①获取大量知识；②给生活带来乐趣；③是一种放松的好方式。
2.你的阅读习惯。
3.号召大家多阅读。
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括以上要点；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；
4.100词左右，题目和开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
Reading is Very Important
It’s very important for us students to do some reading.
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6．根据中文提示和英文提示，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。词数：60~70左右。
提示：1. 昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步；
2. 在路上我们遇见了一个外国人；
3. 他向我询问如何去温泉酒店（the Hot Spring Hotel）；
4. 我告诉他沿路往前走，在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见酒店；
5. 他非常感谢我，我也为能帮他而高兴。
提示词语：go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank sb. for sth., be happy that
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7．假如你们班级新来了一位同学，她打算周末步行去中央公园（Central Park），请你为她指路。
提示：出校园沿着Main Street一直走，到第一个路口右转，沿着Oak Street 走大概10分钟，看到一家银行向左转，再经过一家大超市，中央公园就在超市的对面。
要求：字迹工整，信息齐全，40词左右；开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Central Park is not far from here. It is easy to get there
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8．“不学礼，无以立。”《21世纪英语学习报》正在就“礼貌”这一话题开展征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文进行投稿。
提示：(1) Why do you think politeness is important
(2) What do you usually do to be polite
要求：（1）征文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
（2）征文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It’s important and necessary to be polite in our daily life.
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9．假如你是一名警察，一位名叫布朗的美国人向你问路，他需要到超市购买一个旅行包，但他不知道怎么走。你告诉他沿着你们所在的那条街道一直向前走，在第三个路口向左拐入朝阳路，然后乘坐114路公交车，到崇文街下车，然后向右走就能找到一家超市。它在一家饭店和一个银行之间。请根据以上信息写一篇短文，告诉布朗先生具体的路线。
要求：
1. 短文须包含以上全部信息；
2. 可以适当发挥，使行文流畅；
3. 60词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Nice to meet you, Mr. Brown.
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10．你校英语报正举办以“My Country, My Pride (骄傲)”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 简要阐述在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等4个方面中国近几年的变化；
2. 谈谈你的感想。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等关键信息。
My Country, My Pride
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11．时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝，和三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化，请以 “I have changed a lot” 为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。
提示：
1. What did you use to be like
2. What is the most important change
3. And how did it happen Tell a story about it.
要求：
1.不少于80词；
2.短文需包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；
3.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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12．随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下要点提示，以“Great Changes Around Me”为题，写一篇短文。
写作要点：1. In the past（narrow roads，…houses，air…，water…）；2. At present（wide and clean roads，different kinds of transportation，…houses，…sky)；3. Your feelings…
要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现任何真实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）；3. 90词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Great Changes Around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
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13．时光荏苒，跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I Have Changed a Lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其是如何发生的。
要求：
1. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息；
2. 100 词左右。
提示：
1. What did you use to be like
2. What is the most important change
3. And how did it happen Tell a story about it.
I Have Changed a Lot!
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14．每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，以“My Favorite ________”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。
提示语： 思路导引
要求：
1. 请将短文题目补充完整；
2. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；
3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
4. 文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
5. 词数：不少于70。
My Favorite ________
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15．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友John发邮件给你，他说他非常喜欢放风筝，想了解潍坊风筝及潍坊国际风筝节的有关情况。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封电子邮件，做相关介绍。
History over 2, 000 years
Materials bamboo, paper/silk
Features (特征) different sizes, shapes and colors
Weifang International Kite Festival start in 1984; once a year; famous around the world; usually in April or May
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear John,
I’m very glad to receive your email.
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16．你根据如表提示，用英语写一篇短文向校刊投稿，阐述书写的重要性。
你的观点 在电脑普及时代，书写依然重要
你的理由 (1)书写是中国传统文化的一个重要组成部分，所以练习书写有助于传承文化；
(2)每个人的字迹都有个人意义，例如手写信更能表达情感；
(3)……(再自拟至少一个理由加以阐述)
[参考词汇] handwriting 书法；字迹；书写(不可数名词)；inherit 传承(及物动词)
The importance of handwriting
Nowadays many Chinese students no longer pay much attention to their handwriting.
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17．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Linda想了解你所在城市的一种新发明的情况。请你根据内容提示，给她写一封信。
要点：
1.该发明是一种新型小汽车；
2.能利用太阳能在陆地上和水中行驶；
3.也能利用电能行驶。
注意：
1.信的内容要详略得当，并注意内容的完整、丰富与流畅；
2.词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad to introduce the new invention to you.
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With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
18．假设这周你们学校英语角谈论的话题是“手机的发展史”。请你在英语角向同学们介绍一下它的发展变化，并描述你对未来手机的畅想。
提示：
1. 发明时间——1973年；
2. 当时的手机——large, heavy ；
3. 现在的手机——take photos, listen to music, pay for things ；
4. 畅想
要求：
1. 语意连贯，语句通顺；
2. 不少于80词。
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19．发明改变世界，不少中学生都梦想成为发明家。某英语报社正组织题为“My invention: ________”的征文活动，请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文参赛。
要点提示：
1. 你梦想的发明是什么
2. 这项发明能帮你或他人解决什么问题
3. 你为什么想发明这个东西
要求：
1.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名。
2.开头已为你写出，不计入总词数。
I hope to invent a (an)
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20．鉴于机器人在我们生活中的使用日益广泛，某青少年科技杂志正开展以“If I had a chance to create a robot”为主题的征文活动，请你给该杂志投稿。
内容包括：
1. 你准备为谁设计机器人？为什么？
2. 你设计的机器人可以做些什么？
要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现考生和学校的真实名称；
2. 语句连贯，逻辑清晰，卷面整洁；
3. 100词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
If I had a chance to create a robot
If I had a chance to create a robot, I would create one for
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Sam,
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye.
During the past three years, you have given me so much help in English that I can’t thank you too much.
I still remember three years ago, I had difficulty in learning English. It was difficult for me to memorize so many words and understand what people were saying. My spoken English and written English were poor, too. However, I’m lucky that I met you, a kind hearted, smart and patient boy. Firstly, you taught me to listen and read more. And they really helped me a lot. Besides, you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing classical English songs. In addition, you told me to form the habit of reading aloud in the morning and reading novels before going to bed. As a result, I finally made great progress.
Thank you for all your help and best wishes to you.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本题是一篇便条作文；
② 时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合；
③ 提示：描述自己是如何学会学习的，需要遵照所给要求，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，陈述自己在初中三年里学习上遇到了困难，为后文做铺垫；
第二步，具体描述自己遇到的困难，以及是如何解决的，注意涵盖所有材料要点，适当发挥；
第三步，总结致谢。
[亮点词汇]
① too much 太多
② in addition 此外
③ the habit of ……的习惯
[高分句型]
① you have given me so much help in English that I can’t thank you too much.（结果状语从句）
② Besides, you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing classical English songs. （宾语从句）
2．例文
How to Be a Good Learner
As we know, the policy of “double-lightening the burden” has been carried out. Being a good learner has become even more important. But how to be a good learner Here are some suggestions.
We are supposed to develop some good habits of learning. For example, we should preview the lesson before class and review what we have learnt after class. We’d better make full use of the time at school. We ought to concentrate on our lessons in class and solve all the problems just in time. In this way, we will be able to finish our homework more efficiently. To be a good learner, studying in groups and helping each other are also good for us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用提出问题的方式引出本文的主题；
第二步，根据提示材料分别提出相应的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out 实施
②be supposed to do sth 应该做某事
③make full use of 充分利用
④in time 及时
[高分句型]
①To be a good learner, studying in groups and helping each other are also good for us.（动词不定式作目的状语）
3．例文：
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Last year, we went to the USA. We had a good time there. We made friends with them who are interested in Chinese. We studied English with them. I think a study trip is a good way for students to study.
When we have a study trip, we can visit many places of natural beauty. During the study trip, we can learn many things that we can’t learn at school. We can be served with different new food and know more things about different customs.
In my opinion, we should hold more activities like this. If we travel to other countries, we will speak English every day, because English can help us understand people from different countries.
I hope study trips are becoming more and more popular.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”关于研学旅行的写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已给出，点名主题，“研学旅行”现在很受学生欢迎；
第二步，介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受；
第三步，表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由；
第四步，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②have a good time玩得高兴
③be served with向……提供
④in one’s opinion在某人看来
[高分句型]
①We made friends with them who are interested in Chinese. (who引导的定语从句)
②If we travel to other countries, we will speak English every day, because English can help us understand people from different countries. (If引导的条件状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句)
4．例文
My favorite festival
My favorite festival is Mother’s Day because I can show my love to my mother on that day.
Last Mother’s Day, I invited my mother to go to the movies, but I forgot it. When I got there, the movie had almost finished. My mother still waited at the theater. I said sorry to her. She wasn't angry but said patiently, “You should do everything on time.” I felt really sorry.
I’ll never forget that day. Mother’s love is as deep as the ocean. I love my mom. I’ll do all the chores to make my mother have a rest on Mother’s Day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先说出一个你喜欢的节日，并说明理由。然后描述自身的一次经历或你通常是怎样度过这个节日的。最后谈谈你对这个节日的感受。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事
②say sorry to sb向某人道歉
③on time准时
④have a rest休息一下
[高分句型]
①When I got there, the movie had almost finished. (When引导的时间状语从句)
②I’ll do all the chores to make my mother have a rest on Mother’s Day. (动词不定式短语做目的状语)
5．例文
Reading is Very Important
It’s very important for us students to do some reading. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study will be improved if we read more books. It’s a good way to relax. Reading also helps us grow up.
I spend half an hour reading before going to bed every day. I like reading classical novels. However, it’s a great pity that many activities such as playing with the smart phone, listening to music, watching TV and going online take up much of our reading time. So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. When you read books, you had better take some notes. It will be good for us! Let’s start reading now!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给的要点提示，围绕“Reading is Very Important”写一篇英语短文，向某英文报社投稿；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一、三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
6．例文
Last night, my mother and I went out for a walk. On the way back we met a foreigner who asked us the way to the Hot Spring Hotel. I told him that he should walk along the street and then turn left at the third corner, and then he will see the hotel. He thanked me a lot. And my mother also praised me that I was a good boy. For me, I felt very happy for helping him. Besides, I realized that helping others was a really good thing. It can not only help others out of emergencies but also make ourselves feel happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为一般过去时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。表明昨晚外出遇到外国人问路一事；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、如何指路、感受”几个方面重点介绍此次经历的细节；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己从中收到的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
① went out for a walk 散步
② on the way 在路上
③ walk along 沿着
[高分句型]
① I told him that he should walk along the street and then turn left at the third corner, and then he will see the hotel.（that引导的宾语从句）
② On the way back we met a foreigner who asked us the way to the Hot Spring Hotel.（who引导的定语从句）
7．例文：
Central Park is not far from here. It is easy to get there. When you get out of school, you just go straight. And then turn right at the first crossing. After that walk along Oak Street for about 10 minutes and turn left when you see a bank. Then pass a big supermarket. Central Park is across from the supermarket.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的地点和方位等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍中央公园的大概位置；
第二步，具体描述如何到中央公园的路线；
[亮点词汇]
①far from远离
②at the first crossing在第一个转角
③aross from在……对面
[高分句型]
①When you get out of school, you just go straight.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②It is easy to get there.（“it is+adj+to do sth”句型）
8．例文
It’s important and necessary to be polite in our daily life. Politeness can help us gain respect from others and communicate well with others. In fact, we can’t do anything without politeness.
In my daily life, I’m always trying to be polite. Whenever I meet my teachers, I always greet them with a bow and a big smile. Also, I always say “hello” to my classmates wherever I see them. Besides, “thank you” and “sorry” are what I say most when others help me or when I do something wrong. What’s more, in some special places like the library, I especially follow the public rules and try to be very quiet.
All in all, I think if everyone can do a bit to become more polite, our world will surely be different.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“礼貌”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称主要采用第一人称。分为三段式：第一段解释礼貌的重要性；第二段结合自己的经历，讲述自己通常是保持礼貌的；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．One possible version:
Nice to meet you, Mr. Brown. I am a traffic police. I’m glad to tell you the way to the supermarket. Go along this street and turn left to Chaoyang Street at the third crossing, then take the No. 114 bus there and get off at Chongwen Street. And then you walk to the right. You will find it. It is between a restaurant and a bank. You won’t miss it.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。向路人展示如何到超市。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。根据提示内容，仔细介绍去超市的路线。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
10．例文：
My Country, My Pride
Obviously, great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures. Clear rivers and blue sky return to our life. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. What’s more, China has made great progress in its space industry. Many spaceships have been successfully launched, making China’s space dream a reality. Finally, with the improvement of people’s living standard, people not only travel to the country, but also travel to the whole world.
I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍中国近几年的发展；
第二步，具体阐述中国在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等方面的变化；
第三步，表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②interested in对……感兴趣
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures.（时间状语从句）
②At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it.（定语从句）
11．例文
I have changed a lot
Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. I used to be shy, but now I am more confident than before. The most important change is my attitude to English. I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldn’t remember the words freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help. Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，过去和现在最重要的改变是什么；
第二步，介绍过去是什么样的；
第三步，介绍如何发生这样的改变的。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常
②encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①how happy I am!（感叹句）
②Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject.（so…that引导的结果状语从句）
12．One possible version：
Great Changes Around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. In my hometown, the roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were small and old. The air wasn’t fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly.
Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It’s really convenient for people to go out. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built. Most of us have moved to big and beautiful houses. The sky is very blue. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.
We are living a happy life. I’m sure as time goes by, our life will become better and better!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述过去的生活；
第二步，描述现在发生的变化；
第三步，描述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常常做某事
②different kinds of各种各样
③live a happy life过一个幸福的生活
[高分句型]
①It’s really convenient for people to go out.（it作形式主语）
②I’m sure as time goes by, our life will become better and better!（宾语从句）
13．例文
I Have Changed a Lot!
Time goes by quickly. My life has changed a lot in the past few years. Let me show you my changes.
I used to be really short and thin. Because I used to be shy and quiet, I was always silent in class. But now I have changed a lot. The most important change in my life is that I become more outgoing. What made me change a lot I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school. I wanted to take part in it, but I was afraid of it. Our English teacher, Mr. Wang encouraged me to take part in it. He guided me a lot, and I practiced a lot every day. Finally, I won the first prize in the speech contest. I felt very proud and happy. Since then, I have become more outgoing.
I hope my life will become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先总述和之前相比，自己改变了很多；
第二步，再描述你之前是什么样子的，例如可以从之前的外貌、性格等方面来描述；接着描述自己发生了哪些变化，其中最重要的变化是什么，这个变化是如何发生的。
第三步，书写结束语，表达自己对未来生活的憧憬。
[亮点词汇]
① used to be 过去是
② take part in 参加
③ be afraid of 害怕
④ encourage sb to do 鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
① Because I used to be shy and quiet, I was always silent in class.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② The most important change in my life is that I become more outgoing.（that引导的表语从句）
③ I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school.（when引导的时间状语从句和there be句型）
14．例文
My Favorite T-shirt
Among all my clothes, I like one of the T-shirts best.
The T-shirt is white. It is made of cotton and fiber, so it’s very comfortable. I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. It’s a special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with friends. It makes me remember the time that we two have spent together.
This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括“思路导引”提到的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山：介绍自己最喜欢的衣服名称；
第二步，详细介绍最喜欢的衣服，包括颜色、材质、喜欢的原因以及穿它的场合等；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
［亮点词汇］
① be made of 由……制成
② a lot of happy memories 有很多快乐的回忆
［高分句型］
① I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. (because引导原因状语从句)
② It makes me remember the time that we two have spent together. (that引导限制性定语从句)
15．例文
Dear John,
I’m very glad to receive your email. In your e-mail, you said you were interested in kites in my hometown. Now let me tell you something about them.
Weifang is famous for making and flying kites. The history of making kites can date back to over 2,000 years ago. Kites are usually made of bamboo and paper. They have different sizes, shapes and colors. The Weifang International Kite Festival is held once a year. It started in 1984. It is the most famous kite sports event around the world. It is usually in April or May. A large number of Chinese and foreign kite fans come to Weifang to take part in the competition.
Flying kites is exciting. I hope you can come to China and fly kites with me some day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，主要包括向朋友详细介绍风筝的历史、制作材质、特征以及潍坊国际风筝节的概况，写作的过程中注意使用表格里所给单词、短语。可以适当增加细节，行文要连贯，注意字数。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对朋友进行问候；
第二步，向朋友详细介绍风筝的历史、制作材质、特征以及潍坊国际风筝节的概况；
第三步，希望朋友来中国和自己一起放风筝。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而著名
②date back to追溯到
③be made of由……制成
④a large number of许多，大量
⑤take part in参加
[高分句型]
①It is the most famous kite sports event around the world.（the+形容词的最高级+范围）
②A large number of Chinese and foreign kite fans come to Weifang to take part in the competition.（动词不定式作目的状语）
16．One possible version:
The importance of handwriting
Nowadays many Chinese students no longer pay much attention to handwriting. They believe their keyboards can do the work. However, I think that handwriting is still important.
First of all, handwriting is an important part in traditional Chinese culture. It’s important to pass on the traditional culture to practice writing Chinese characters. Good handwriting can make us proud as a Chinese and make us love our country further. Next, there’s a certain meaning in one’s handwriting. For example, some ways of writing can show feelings in writing letters. Also, writing Chinese characters carefully can help you form a habit of learning Chinese well. At last, a good handwriting can help you get good grades in exams from your excellent look of papers.
All in all, it’s everyone’s duty to write characters well and take action to be good at writing.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己的观点；
第二步，介绍自己认为书写仍然重要的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all 首先
②pass on 传递
③at last 最后
[高分句型]
①I think that handwriting is still important（that引导宾语从句）
②It’s important to pass on the traditional culture to practice writing Chinese characters（动词不定式作主语）
17．例文
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad to introduce the new invention to you.
It's a kind of new car invented by a great young man in my local city. He is really clever. It's so great that it can run on solar power. It's certainly good for our environment. Although it mainly depends on solar power, it can still run very fast. Also, it can run not only on the land but also in the water safely. What's more, it can also use electricity to run when it's cloudy, rainy or snowy. Lots of people love this kind of car. I believe you'll also love it very much if you use it.
With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信，围绕向英国朋友介绍所在城市新型小汽车这一发明展开交流；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，用于描述发明的特征、性能等客观情况；
③提示：文章符合书信要求，包含发明的主体、动力来源、行驶场景等要点，内容完整，逻辑清晰，向朋友清晰介绍新发明。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表明写信目的，即向 Linda 介绍所在城市的新发明；
第二步，详细描述新发明（新型小汽车），包括发明者（虽未着重强调，提及 “invented by a great young man” ）、动力来源（太阳能、电能 ）、行驶场景（陆地、水中 ）以及人们对其的喜爱；
第三步，结尾表达相信对方也会喜欢该发明，让书信交流更自然。
[亮点词汇]
①invent 发明
②solar power 太阳能
③environment 环境
④not only...but also... 不仅…… 而且……
[高分句型]
①It's so great that it can run on solar power.（so...that... 引导结果状语从句 ）
②I believe you'll also love it very much if you use it.（believe 后接宾语从句，从句中含 if 引导的条件状语从句 ）
18．参考例文：
Cell phones are becoming more and more important. Do you know the history of cell phones
The first cell phone was invented in 1973. At that time, it was as large as a building brick and much heavier than the cell phone today. Now, cell phones have many uses. For example, we can use cell phones not only to talk to others, but also to take photos or listen to music. We can even pay by cell phones.
I believe that cell phones will become thinner and thinner and they may take the place of computers in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达手机的重要性，引出手机发展史的话题；
第二步，介绍手机的发明时间，以及过去手机的外观和现在手机的功能；
第三步，书写结束语，表达对未来手机的畅想。
[亮点词汇]
①invent 发明
②at that time 在那时
③as...as 和……一样
④for example 例如
⑤not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
⑥take the place of 代替
[高分句型]
①Cell phones are becoming more and more important.（形容词比较级）
②I believe that cell phones will become thinner and thinner and they may take the place of computers in the future.（that引导的宾语从句）
19．例文
My invention: Super Shoes
I hope to invent a kind of super shoes.
Many of us may have to throw away our shoes when they are too small for our feet. This is a great waste. And lost shoes are also bad for the environment. If I could invent a kind of super shoes, there would be no such waste.
This kind of shoes is made of a special material, which can grow with your feet and always fit your feet. You don’t have to worry about your shoes being too small or too tight. In addition, if the shoes are dirty, they will start the automatic cleaning function between 12:00 a.m. and 3:00 a.m., and it will automatically dry. So your shoes always look clean. If you walk too much, there will be a massage function at the bottom of the shoes to help you relax your feet.
These shoes can not only help us save some time for cleaning and massage, but also are environmentally friendly. It is also good for us to protect the environment. The most important thing is that the shoes are cheap.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，写自己的一项发明；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括想要发明的东西、能解决的问题以及发明的原因等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍想要发明的是什么；
第二步，具体介绍想要发明的原因；
第三步，介绍发明物能解决的问题。
第四步， 总结发明物的优点。
[亮点词汇]
① throw away扔掉
② be bad for对……有害
③ not only…but also 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
① If you walk too much, there will be a massage function at the bottom of the shoes to help you relax your feet.（if引导的条件状语从句）
② This kind of shoes is made of a special material, which can grow with your feet and always fit your feet.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
20．例文
If I had a chance to create a robot
If I had a chance to create a robot, I would create one for myself. It will do a lot of things for me. I think my study and life will be much easier.
The robot can not only help me with my study, but also play an important role in daily life. First, it will help me study. I won’t have to go to after-school classes. I will study at home. Second, it will cook different kinds of delicious food for me. That way, my mom won’t get very tired. And when I feel sad, it will talk with me like a friend and make me happy.
In a word, robots can bring us a lot of convenience.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：要求提示内容介绍你准备为谁设计机器人及原因，介绍你设计的机器人可以做些什么。学生不要提示中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍你准备为谁设计机器人及原因；
第二步，具体阐述你设计的机器人可以做些什么；
第三步，书写结语。表达机器人能够给我们带来好处。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also不仅……而且……
②a lot of大量
③play an important role in在……中起重要作用
④different kinds of不同种类的
[高分句型]
①I think my study and life will be much easier.（宾语从句）
②The robot can not only help me with my study, but also play an important role in daily life.（not only…but also的句型）
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