【期中考点突破】突破01 书面表达-话题作文（含答案解析）--2025-2026学年九年级英语全册期中复习考点突破人教新目标版

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2025-2026学年九年级英语全册期中复习考点突破人教新目标版
突破01 书面表达-话题作文
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1．亲爱的初三同学，经过两年多的初中学习，你一定在英语学习方面有很大收获和成长，请你结合以下提示，以“How to Learn English”为题写一篇英文短文，把你的英语学习经验介绍给初一初二的同学们。
提示：
(1) Why should you learn English
(2) What is your advice to them
要求：
(1)短文须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥。
(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
(3)词数80词左右。（题目和开头已给出，不计入词数）。
How to Learn English
As we all know, English is used very widely in the world. .
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2．根据已学知识，结合自己的实际情况，谈谈自己常用的学英语的方法，不少于五种，并与你的同学交流、分享。80个词左右。
题型分析：
由题目要求可知，本次写作是使用第一人称来表述自己学习英语的五种方法。
行文思路：
此次写作可以从听、说、读、写、练五个方面来分享自己是如何学习英语的。
高分点拨：
可以使用“ I often do… to improve.”及“…is a good way to do .”等结构以避免句子结构的单一。
How to learn English well
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3．转眼间，你已升入九年级，请你根据以下要点和要求，以Some changes in my life为题，用英语谈谈你在经历了两年的初中生活之后你的生活有哪些变化。
要点：1）健康方面的变化；
2）学习方面的变化。
要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名。
2）80个词左右：内容完整；层次清晰；表达清楚；书写规范。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Some changes in my life
How lime flies! It has been two years since I went to middle school.
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4．你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步，比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握。良好习惯的养成。请选取其中一个方面，结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的，以及毕业前你下一步的打算。请以My progress为题写一篇短文。
要求：（1）观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅；
（2）文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）卷面整洁，书写工整，词数80词左右。
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5．近年来，全球掀起了汉语学习的热潮，越来越多的人渴望了解中国文化和掌握汉语。假如你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Emma对中文和中国文化非常感兴趣。她想要向你寻求学习中文的方法并了解一个重要的中国传统节日，请给Emma写一封回信。
注意：
1.学习中文的方法 (至少两条)；
2.中国传统节日 (至少三个方面)；
3.内容可适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅；
4.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
5.词数：100词左右。
Dear Emma,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
6． 中国传统节日在国际上的 “存在感” 越来越强。从春节的全球联动庆祝，到中秋的跨国赏月，再到端午的龙舟竞技，这些充满魅力的节日活动引起了越来越多的外国友人的关注。你的英国笔友Alice想了解一下中国的传统节日。假如你是国兴，请你给她写一封邮件，向她介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
提示：
1. What is the festival When is it
2. How do people celebrate the festival
3. Why do you introduce this festival
要求：文中不得透露个人的真实信息；词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Alice,
I’m glad you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.
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Guo Xing
7．中国有许多传统节日，每个节日都承载着独特的文化和家庭记忆。假设你是Li Hua，请向你的笔友Mike介绍你最喜欢的中国传统节日以及你的家庭是如何庆祝它的。
内容要点：
1. 你最喜欢哪个中国传统节日？它通常在什么时候？
2. 你的家人在这个节日里通常会做什么？(例如：准备特色食物、进行特定活动等)
3. 你认为这个节日最重要的意义是什么？
4. 开头和结尾已给出，文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息，字数不少于80词。
Dear Mike,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．行为举止是否文明礼貌体现的不仅仅是个人形象和城市形象，也在一定程度上反映了社会的文明程度。为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校号召同学们做一个文明的中学生，特举办以“How to Behave Well”为题的英文征文比赛。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇90词左右的短文。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1. 在学校我们应该怎么做；
2. 在校外我们应该怎么做；
3. 号召大家为此次活动共同努力。
How to Behave Well
To be a civilized student is very important for a student. Here are what we should do and shouldn’t do.
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9．近几年来，人们的交流方式发生了天翻地覆的变化。几年前我们通过写信、打电话和发邮件与他人联系，现在越来越多的人使用微信(WeChat)交流。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对微信的看法。
写作提示：1.使用微信交流的好处；
2. 微信带来的问题；
3. 你对微信的态度。
写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2. 100词左右。
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10．转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化？请以“My changes”为题写一篇英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。
要求:
1. 写你三个方面的变化，用上used to结构；
2. 紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First,
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11．初中即将毕业，三年时间，同学们各有变化！比如：李华同学小学时挺害羞的，现在担任学生会干部，工作积极主动大胆。王芳小时候有爸爸妈妈无微不至的照顾，现在的她经常分担家务活。那你呢？结合自身情况，写一篇短文，从学习生活和家庭生活两方面谈谈自己的变化和成长。每个方面至少谈两点内容。
要求：
1.文章需包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
How time flies! We are going to graduate soon.
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12．写一篇题目为My changes关于自己成长变化的短文。
提示：外貌、性格、学习生活等方面的变化。
注意：
1. 词数 80—100；
2. 可适当增加细节及要点以外的内容，要求行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My changes
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13．假设某中学生英文报开展关于村庄变化的征文活动，请你根据下面提示的要点，以“Changes in Our Town”为题，用英语为该报写一篇稿件，简述家乡、学校、个人及生活中的若干变化，展望未来生活及如何为此努力。
注意：
1. 100词左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
2. 作文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Changes in Our Town
With the rapid development of China’s economy (经济), great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
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14．重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）又称老人节，是我国一个传统节日。在那天人们会出游、登高。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，以“重阳敬老”为主题为学校英语报投稿，介绍人们怎样庆祝这个节日，你通常做些什么来敬老助老，以及你的想法。
要求∶
1.意思连贯、符合逻辑。
2.提示词语仅供选用。
3.不要写出你的校名和姓名。
4.不少于70词，文章的开头不计入总词数。
提示词语∶go outing，climb，help，look after
1. How do Chinese people celebrate the Double Ninth Festival 2. What do you usually do to show respect(尊重)to the old 3. Do you think it is important to respect the old Why
The Double Ninth Festival is a traditional Chinese festival.
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15．中国结是一种传统的中国艺术形式，在明朝开始流行。参考所给词汇写一篇介绍中国结的文章。
要求：
1.70词左右；
2.注意字迹工整，语句通顺，句意完整。
参考词汇：Chinese Knots（中国结），the Ming Dynasty（明朝）， decorate（装饰）， thread（线）
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16．云“百善孝为先”，自古以来“孝文化”承载着中华传统美德。“孝”字老在上，子在下，请结合自身经历，以 “Respecting the elders”为题写一篇短文。
注意：
90词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
内容中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
开头已写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：filial piety 孝顺 virtue 美德 responsibility 责任
Respecting the elders
Through the history, being filial and respectful to the elders has been a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation.
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17．中国早已不是一百年前的中国！这掷地有声的强音道出了我们所有中国人的自豪和心声。一百年来，我们的国家发生了翻天覆地的变化，中国已经屹立于世界民族之林。请根据以下提示，以“Great changes in China”为题，写一篇英语短文描述中国近百年来的巨大变化。
提示：
一百年前：国弱家贫，民不聊生，落后于世界；
当今中国：国富民强，安居乐业，领先于世界。
要求：
1.内容包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
2.90词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Great changes in China
In the past 100 years, China has changed a lot.
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18．科技改变生活，发明无处不在，如computers，cars，smart phones，e-books，robots，Internet…请结合自身经历，谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的。
要求:
1. 词数80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life,
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19．从下面两个题目中任选—题，根据中文和英文提示，完成—篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
当今科技日新月异，各种发明不断涌现。高科技产品在我们生活中不可或缺，如智能手机、自动语音识别技术（ASR）、二维码（QR code）等；服务类产品也蓬勃发展, 如网上购物、共享经济（sharing economy）、外卖服务（take-away service）等。
假如你是李华，你校英语报社近期计划开设“科技改变生活”版面，现面向全校学生征集相关素材。请你以“An Important Invention”为题投稿，介绍—款你认为重要的发明，简单描述它并说明你选择它的原因。
提示词语：search and store information, benefit, provide, convenient
提示问题：
●In your opinion, what is an important invention for people Please describe it.
●Why do you think it is important
I’m Li Hua, from Class 3, Grade 9
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I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks !
20．发明改变了世界，改变了我们的生活。比如，电视和自行车给我们的生活带来了许多变化和便利。请你以“Invention”为题，根据提示写一篇短文。先简要介绍电视和自行车的用途，再发挥想象，说说你想发明的东西，并说明其用途或发明的理由。
要求：
1.内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥；
2.书写规范，卷面整洁，词数80—100词；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Invention
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
How to Learn English
As we all know, English is used very widely in the world. So it will be helpful for us to master it. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to English songs and watch English movies. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we will make. Third, we should read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should keep a diary in English.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明英语的重要性；
第二步，介绍如何学好英语。
[亮点词汇]
①widely广泛地
②master掌握
③be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
①The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we will make.（“the+比较级..., the 比较级”结构）
②In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.（“as long as”引导条件状语从句）
2．例文
How to learn English well
Do you have any good ways of learning English I’d like to share some of my learning methods with you.
1. I often read English aloud in the morning.
2. Listening to English songs is a good way to improve listening ability.
3. I usually watch English movies to practice my spoken English.
4. I often keep a diary in English to improve my writing ability.
5. Doing more practice is a good way to study English grammar.
I think these ways are helpful to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求结合自身的学习经历，与同学分享不少于5种学习英语的方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，采用问问题的方式引出主题；
第二步，具体阐述学习英语的具体方法；
[亮点词汇]
①would like to想要
②share...with...与……分享……
③keep a diary写日记
[高分句型]
Listening to English songs is a good way to improve listening ability.（动名词作主语；不定式作后置定语）
3．One possible version:
Some changes in my life
How time flies! It has been two years since I went to middle school. During the past two years, there were two main changes in my life.
On the one hand, I have become healthier. At first. I often fell ill. Later I took exercise with my classmates every morning, and I began to eat healthy food like vegetables and fruit every day. Now I am strong and healthy.
On the other hand. I have become much more confident. In the beginning, I was worried about my lessons. However, with the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made great progress and I do well in all the subjects.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是记叙文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主，描述过去事情用“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：按照题目中“信息提示”的两个方面来写，具体描述初中生活在健康和学习这两个方面的变化。可以适当增加细节但要突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先承接短文开头，引出你要写的内容“我有两个方面的主要变化”；
第二步，具体介绍第一方面的主要改变，可以采用对比法描述具体的改变，并说明改变给你带来的影响，叙述的时候注意突出重点。
第三步，具体介绍第二方面的主要改变，要选一个方面来写，比如“变得自信”“学习方法更有效”“独立性更强”等，也可以采用对比法描述，但要围绕重点描述。
[亮点词汇]
①main主要的；
②with the help of 在某人的帮助下；
③make great progress取得很大进步；
④do well in擅长。
[高分句型]
①On the one hand, I have become healthier…On the other hand, I have become much more confident. （On the one hand…On the one hand表示“一方面……另一方面……”表示从不同方面描述事情。）
②However, with the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made great progress and I do well in all the subjects。（with the help of表示“在什么帮助下”，介词短语做状语；“make great progress”取得很大进步；do well in表示“擅长”，动词短语）
4．例文
My progress
I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing which I consider very difficult.
The biggest problem was that after reading a passage, I couldn’t fully understand it, which makes me feel very depressed and upset. But I kept on reading difficult English articles instead of just giving up. And I also practiced English writing whenever I had a chance. Little by little, I made much progress in English and gained a lot of confidence through my constant effort. As you can imagine, nothing makes me prouder than feeling my progress in English.
I realize that as long as I bravely face my weaknesses and take effective ways to overcome them, I believe I will be successful in the future. I will fight for my dream in the following months!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。要求从生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成等三个方面，来选择其中的一个，以“My progress”为题写一篇作文，谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的，以及毕业前你下一步的打算。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来书写；时态采用一般过去时为主；首先要选择写什么内容，引出话题；然后根据你的话题来详细的陈述是如何取得进步的；最后要介绍毕业前的打算。书写要工整，语言要简练，句子前后要连贯、通顺、符合逻辑。
5．
例文：
Dear Emma,
I’m glad to hear you’re keen on Chinese and its culture! To learn Chinese well, try watching Chinese movies with subtitles and listening to Chinese songs, which can improve your listening and vocabulary. Also, practice speaking with Chinese friends or language partners online regularly.
As for a traditional festival, the Spring Festival is vital. Families gather for a big dinner on New Year’s Eve, sharing stories and laughter. We set off fireworks and paste red couplets for good luck. Kids get lucky money in red envelopes, feeling excited and happy. It’s full of joy and warmth!
Hope these help! Enjoy learning!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中学习中文的方法和中国传统节日的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“对Emma对中文和中国文化的兴趣表示高兴”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“看带字幕的电影、听中文歌、与中国人聊天”等方面介绍学习中文的方法，从“吃年夜饭、放鞭炮和贴春联、发红包”等方面介绍中国传统节日；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望这些建议能帮到Emma”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be keen on热衷于
②share stories and laughter分享故事和欢笑
③set off fireworks燃放烟花
④for good luck为了好运
⑤lucky money压岁钱
[高分句型]
①To learn Chinese well, try watching Chinese movies with subtitles and listening to Chinese songs, which can improve your listening and vocabulary.（动词不定式作目的状语，which引导非限制性定语从句）
②Families gather for a big dinner on New Year’s Eve, sharing stories and laughter.（现在分词作伴随状语）
6．例文
Dear Alice,
I’m glad you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. My favorite is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month. On this day, families get together to have a big dinner. We also enjoy mooncakes and admire the full moon outdoors. The moon on that night is especially round and bright. I introduce this festival because it’s a time for family reunion, which is very important in Chinese culture. I hope you can experience it someday.
Yours,
Guo Xing
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：电子邮件（介绍中国传统节日）；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：需介绍节日名称及时间、庆祝方式、介绍原因，词数80左右，不得透露真实信息，开头已给。
［写作步骤］
第一步：说明最喜欢的节日是中秋节及时间；
第二步：描述人们的庆祝方式，如家庭聚餐、吃月饼、赏月；
第三步：阐述介绍该节日的原因是它体现家庭团聚的文化内涵，表达希望对方体验的祝愿。
［亮点词汇］
①traditional festivals 传统节日
②Mid-Autumn Festival 中秋节
③get together 团聚
④family reunion 家庭团聚
［高分句型］
①On this day, families get together to have a big dinner.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I introduce this festival because it’s a time for family reunion, which is very important in Chinese culture.（because引导的原因状语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句）
7．例文
Dear Mike,
My favorite traditional Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. It usually falls in January or February.
During this time, my family gets together to celebrate. We clean the house, decorate it with red lanterns, and prepare special food like dumplings. My grandparents tell stories about the festival, and we all enjoy the delicious meal.
I think the most important meaning of the Spring Festival is family reunion. It brings us closer and helps us share love and happiness. It also marks the start of a new year, giving everyone hope for the future.
I hope you can experience it one day!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一、三人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，明确节日 (Spring Festival) 和时间 (January or February)；
第二步，描述家庭活动 (清洁房屋、装饰、准备食物、讲故事)；
第三步，阐述节日意义 (家庭团聚、分享爱和希望)。
[亮点词汇]
① get together相聚
② the start of a new year新的一年伊始
[高分句型]
① My grandparents tell stories about the festival, and we all enjoy the delicious meal. (含and的并列句)
② I hope you can experience it one day! (宾语从句)
8．例文
How to Behave Well
To be a civilized student is very important for a student. Here are what we should do and shouldn’t do.
As a middle school student, it’s very important to keep our environment clean and tidy and take care of flowers and trees. Don’t throw litter everywhere. And we should respect our parents and teachers and help our parents do housework.
We are supposed to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite to others and ready to help others in need. And remember to obey the traffic rules, family rules and school rules. We’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
If everyone behaves well, our city and school will become more and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：文章应围绕题目，根据要点提示进行写作，准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语等，注意语句通顺，表述连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接文章开头。
第二步，表述在学校应该怎么举止文明。
第三步，表述在校外我们应该怎么举止文明。
第四步，号召大家为此次活动共同努力。
[亮点词汇]
①be very important to do sth做某事非常重要
②take care of照顾
③respect尊重
④help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
⑤be supposed to do sth应该做某事
⑥keep promises遵守承诺
⑦remember to do sth记得做某事
[高分句型]
If everyone behaves well, our city and school will become more and more beautiful.（If引导的条件状语从句）
9．范文：
WeChat is becoming more and more popular now. A few years ago, people got in touch with each other by sending letters, calling or writing e-mails, but now more people are using WeChat. By using WeChat, making friends is becoming easier. We can also share our life experiences. However, there are also some problems. If we use WeChat too often, we will have less time to study. Sometimes it is not safe for students to make friends by WeChat. I think WeChat is helpful in our life, but we should use it carefully.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。题目要求是根据提示要点写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对微信的看法。要包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；语句要通顺，条理要清晰，详略要得当，书写要工整书，100词左右。
2.写作指导：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
10．例文
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First, I used to be thin, but now I am a little fatter. I used to have curly hair, but now I have short straight hair, because I am busy with my study. Second, I have made much progress in English, I used to be weak in it. But with my English teacher’s help, now I often get good scores on my English exams. What’s more, I’m more outgoing than I used to be. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of people. But now I can give a speech in public. I’ve also made many friends.
These are my changes. What about yours
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我的改变”写一篇短文，要求从三个方面描写自己的变化。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。本文分为两段式：第一段从身形，英语学习以及性格方面介绍自己的变化；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
11．范文
How time flies! We are going to graduate soon. I experienced a meaningful and colorful middle school life. I will say goodbye to my middle school life. During the three years, I have learned a lot.
First, study plays an important role in my middle school life. I spent too much effort on learning. And I am so pleased with the progress that I have made. The most proud of myself is that my study habits are getting better and better. I can not only finish my homework on time, but also take the initiative to study. Second, at first, I couldn’t get on well with my parents. We always argued with everything like playing computers, cleaning the room and so on. But now, we can have a talk peacefully and from time to time, my parents ask me some advice.
Looking back on the past three years, fortunately, I am getting better and better. I hope I can make further efforts in the future.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求从学习生活和家庭生活两方面谈谈初中三年的变化和成长。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；采用第一人称口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：开门见山，引出下文；第二段：从学习生活和家庭生活两方面阐述自己的变化和成长；第三段：总结全文，鼓励自己再接再厉。
12．例文：
My changes
Now, I am a Junior 3 student, and I have changed a lot.
My biggest change is that I don’t have enough time any more. When I was in Grade 7, I used to have a little homework and I had a lot of time to chat with my friends. But now, even though I do homework or exercises all the time, I can’t find much free time. In the evening, I used to play the piano and watch TV, but now I have to study and read books till very late. What’s more, I used to have long hair, but to save time, I cut my hair short now.
Another change is that I used to be crazy and wild, but now I’m quiet and friendly. Although I am busy preparing for the high school entrance examination next year, I am happy and I feel good about my progress.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应对应文章标题，注意写出今昔对比。文章可以涉及三方面变化，包括外貌变化，性格变化及学习生活方面的变化。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态用一般过去时描述过去的状态，用一般现在时描述目前的状态；在描写对比场景时，应描写细致；为了使文章更加流畅，可以多使用关联词。
13．例文
Changes in Our Town
With the rapid development of China’s economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years. In our hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they not only learn from books but also through computers.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder now so that I can realize my dream.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生以“Changes in Our Town”为题，写一篇短文介绍家乡、学校、自己及生活中的若干变化，属于话题作文。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应综合运用现在完成时、一般过去时和一般现在时，以第三人称为主展开陈述。写作中要承接上文，围绕“Changes”这个话题，介绍家乡、学校、自己及生活中的若干变化，最后展望未来生活。行文注意主谓一致和上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
14．范文：
The Double Ninth Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. On that day, people usually climb mountains and go outing with their family. It’s also a day to show respect to the old.
As a teenager, I try my best to do what I can to be nice to the old. I often visit my grandparents on weekends and talk to them and cheer them up. I also help them with the housework. Meanwhile, I am polite to the old. When I see them on the bus, I always offer them my seat. Moreover, I volunteer to look after the old who live alone in our neighborhood. I help them carry heavy things when they need help.
I think it’s very important to respect the old because they have done a lot for their family and for the country. One day, we will all be old.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态用“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容向人们介绍重阳节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述中国人如何庆祝重阳节；
第二步，阐述自己是如何尊重老人的；
第三步，阐述认为重阳节重要的原因和理由。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best to do尝试做某事；
②volunteer to do志愿做某事；
③look after照顾。
[高分句型]
①As a teenager, I try my best to do what I can to be nice to the old.（宾语从句）
②Moreover, I volunteer to look after the old who live alone in our neighborhood.（定语从句）
③I think it’s very important to respect the old because they have done a lot for their family and for the country.（宾语从句和原因状语从句）
15．例文
The Chinese Knot is a traditional art form of China. It’s famous in China and has a long history. Every knot is made with a single rope or thread. Every knot is named by its specific form and meaning. People used it to record events. But now it’s mainly used as a decoration. It’s seen as a symbol of happiness and good luck. We can give it to friends as a gift or hang it in our houses. It has become more and more popular around the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作的中心话题已给出，考生应注意围绕中心话题去写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍中国结。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍中国结是什么，由来，制作方法，它的象征意义。
第三步，书写结语。写出它的受欢迎程度。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional art form传统艺术形式
②is made 被制造
③more and more popular 越来越受欢迎
[高分句型]
① It has become more and more popular around the world.（现在完成时；比较级句型）
②But now it’s mainly used as a decoration. （被动语态）
16．例文：
Respecting the elders
Through the history, being filial and respectful to the elders has been a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation.
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.
Respecting the old and cherishing the young is a traditional Chinese virtue. I am proud of what I have done for my grandparents.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；要求我们关于“孝”这个这个主题，并联系实际，发表自己的观点。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称为主来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主；紧贴题目要求和文章主旨；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。
17．例文
Great changes in China
In the past 100 years, China has changed a lot.
One hundred years ago. China used to be a poor and broken country. Chinese people used to be very poor and live a difficult life. China’s science, technology and education used to be worse than other countries’ and fall behind the world.
But now, China is completely different. Our country has been richer and stronger. Chinese people are living a rich and comfortable life. Our education. Science and technology have improved a lot and in some ways our country is playing a more and more important role. What’s more, our country always loves and cares for its people.
China is developing better and better and Chinese people will have a better and better life in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，以”Great changes in China”为题，讲述中国近百年来的巨大变化。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。本文可分为四段式：第一段引出话题。第二段介绍一百年前的中国情况。第三段介绍当今中国的变化。最后一段展望中国的未来。在写作时要做到无标点和语法错误，正确运用好几种时态。
18． Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, the computer has become an important part . And it changed me a lot. With the help of the computer, I can search for some useful information and read different kinds of books. By receiving and sending emails, I can communicate with my friends freely. If I have some problems with my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the Internet. If I feel stressed from time to time, I can listen to music online to relax myself. I can also buy all kinds of things online.
But if I meet some difficult problems in my homework, I often look for answers on the Internet. This makes me lazy and too much computer work is bad for my eyes. So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：从题干所给的科技中选择一种，谈谈这个发明对自己的影响以及是如何改变自己的生活的。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，是哪一个发明改变了自己；
第二步，介绍这项发明是如何改变自己的生活的；
第三步，介绍自己的感受总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of在……的帮助下
②search for寻找
③from time to time不时
[高分句型]
①If I have some problems with my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the Internet.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.（省略that的宾语从句）
19．例文
An Important Invention
I’m Li Hua, from Class 3, Grade 9. There are many modern inventions in our daily life. Among all of them, I think the smartphone is one of the most important inventions.
The smartphone can connect to the Internet, and we can not only have video calls with our families or friends whenever we want, but also search and store information whenever we need. What’s more, we can shop online at any time.
The smartphone is important because it brings plenty of benefits to people. It makes life convenient by helping us save a lot of time and money. The smartphone provides more possibilities for our life.
I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!
【详解】题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以An Important Invention为题给学校英语报社投稿，介绍一款你认为重要的发明，并简要描述一下这项发明以及你选择它的原因。这是一篇话题作文，题目中对文章的内容并没有给出太多的提示，学生们可结合自己的实际生活，从身边的高科技产品和服务入手，如智能手机、二维码、网购等等，介绍一下它们给我们的生活带来的改变。
写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第三人称、一般现在时为主来叙述。写作时应首先亮明自己的观点，点明自己认为重要的发明是什么；然后阐述这个产品的作用和好处，即你选择这项发明的原因。注意英语句式结构的特点和表达习惯，不要按照汉语逐词翻译。可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句和复合句的使用，提升作文档次。同时注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯、表达流畅。
20．One possible version:
Invention
Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier. There are famous inventions like the TV and the bicycle. TV provides us with different kinds of information so that we can know more about the world and do better in our subjects. We watch entertainment programs to relax ourselves.
The bicycle is very useful, too. We can go to school or work by bike when there is no bus or subway. It’s not so expensive that most of us can afford it. It makes no pollution, which is good for our environment. What’s more, bicycle riding is a kind of exciting sport which is quite good for our health.
Though there have been many great inventions, I wish to invent a kind of pen which can help us write more quickly and neatly. When we have problems doing our homework or taking exams, it will tell us how to solve them.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求根据“Invention”为题，写一篇短文，介绍电视和自行车的用途，以及说说你想发明的东西，并说明其用途或发明的理由。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第三人称为主。写作时注意语句通顺，可适当发挥，使行文连贯，注意时态和语态的正确使用。
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