【期中考点突破】突破01 书面表达-话题作文（含答案解析）--2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期中复习考点突破牛津译林版

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期中复习考点突破牛津译林版
突破01 书面表达-话题作文
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．某英文网站正在开展以“Should Teenagers Do Housework at Home ”为题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文投稿。
提示：
1. Do you often do housework at home
2. Do you think teenagers should do housework at home
3. Why do you think so
参考词汇: tired, help sb. with, pleased, useful skills, a sense of responsibility
要求：
1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
Should Teenagers Do Housework at Home
Housework is a necessary part of running a home.
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2．地球是人类赖以生存的家园。让我们守护地球生态，共筑绿色未来。
某英文网站正在开展以“How to Be Green”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你平时的做法、理由以及感受。
提示词语：reduce, reuse, recycle, protect, proud
提示问题：
●What do you often do to be green
●Why do you do so
●How do you feel
How to Be Green
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3．习总书记说，“平凡铸就伟大，英雄来自人民，每个人都了不起!”我校英语校刊正在开展以“I’m Proud of Myself”为主题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你所做过的一件引以为傲的事情。
要求：
1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于 80个;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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4．假如你是李华，戴眼镜的同学在你周围普遍存在，请你以“My suggestions on protecting our eyesight”为题写一篇80—100词左右的短文，从视力的重要性、保护视力的方法等方面给你周围的人提几点建议，并表达你的祝愿。
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包括所给的信息，可适当发挥，使行文连贯：
2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范：
3. 文中不得出现除题目以外的个人信息，否则一律不予评分：
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My suggestions on protecting our eyesight
My name is Li Hua. As we all know, eyes are very important.
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5．How to Protect the Rainforests
提示：热带雨林在调节全球气候，防止水土流失，净化空气，保证全球生态循环有序进行等方面发挥着重要的作用。然而，由于人类乱砍滥伐和过度开荒，有很大一部分热带雨林已经遭受了严重的破坏。请以“How to Protect the Rainforests”为题，写一篇短文，谈一谈我们应该如何保护热带雨林。
要求：
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2.文中不得使用真实的姓名、校名等，否则以零分计。
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6．假如你的同学 Mark 在学习英语方面遇到了困难，请你给他提出一些建议。请以“How to learn English”为题写一篇短文。
要求：
1. 内容必须包含所有写作要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文章不得出现真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：80词左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
How to learn English
How can you learn English well Here is my advice.
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I hope my advice can help you.
7．本周你们班将举办以”My English Learning Experience”为主题的英语学习交流会。请你根据对英语的看法、提升英语的方法和英语学习的体悟等方面进行经验分享。
内容提示：
Do you like English Why or why not
How have you improved your English
What can you learn from your experience
Something more about learning English.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数100词左右；标题、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
My English Learning Experience Good morning, everyone! _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
8．“凡事预则立，不预则废”——《礼记·中庸》
无论是在生活还是学习中，设定合理目标有助于自我提升，实现梦想。某英文杂志社正在开展以 “Setting and Achieving My Goal” 为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华, 请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你给自己设定了什么目标，简单说明设定该目标的原因，以及你打算如何实现这一目标。
要求：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已经给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
提示词语：improve, come true, practice, hard work, help
提示问题：
What is your goal
Why do you set this goal
How do you plan to achieve it
Setting and Achieving My Goal
Setting goals is important for personal growth and development.
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9．习近平总书记强调，加快建设教育强国，就是培养一代又一代德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人，请根据以下提示，以“How to be an excellent middle school student ”为题。谈谈你的看法。
提示词： honest；keep one’s promise；take exercise；protect the environment；take an active part in ...
要求：1. 词数80-100之间。
2. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
3. 开头以给出，不计入总次数。
Teenagers are the builders and successors of our country. To be an excellent middle school students,
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10．英语听说能力是学好英语的关键。请你以“How to Improve English Listening and Speaking”为题，分享一下提高英语听说能力的方法。
提示词： improve, listen to the teacher, English cartoons, conversation, communicate
写作要求：
(1) 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
(2) 书写规范，卷面整洁，词数90—100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
(3) 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
How to Improve English Listening and Speaking
As we know, English listening and speaking are really important in learning English.
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11．曾子曰：“吾日三省吾身：为人谋而不忠乎？与朋友交而不信乎？传不习乎？”习近平总书记在演讲中多次引用这句话，告诫青少年要勇于面对自己的缺点，在学习中求真务实。怎样成为更好的自己？请根据以下内容提示，以“How to Be a Better Self”为题写一篇英语短文。
要点：1. 健康方面；2. 学习方面；3. 人际交往方面。
要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和班级；
3. 词数100左右。
How to Be a Better Self
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12．生命只有一次，学生的安全非常重要。请你根据以下要点提示，以“How to Keep Safe”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. 校园安全：和同学友好相处；遇到麻烦向老师求助；
2. 交友安全：谨慎交友，特别是网上交友；不独自会见网友；
3. 食品安全：吃健康食物；拒绝垃圾食品等；
4. 交通安全：守规则；不闯红绿灯等；
5. 个人观点：……（补充至少一条其他安全注意事项）。
要求：
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；
3. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
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13．假如你是Anna，你的同桌David最近情绪不是很好。你在跟他沟通之后，发现他经常因为各种各样的问题惹他的父母生气。他想要改变自己，请你给他提出一些建议来帮助他。
参考词汇：let…down, carefully, communicate, help with, a close relationship, get along well with
要求：
1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
My friend David always drives his parents mad
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14．每个青少年在成长的过程中，都会发生改变，以成为更好的自己。作为九年级的学生，你一定在外表、性格、生活习惯等一些方面发生了改变。请以“How I have changed!”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你过去和现在的生活变化。
写作要求：
（1）词数100左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
How I have changed!
I have changed a lot in the last three years.
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15．充实而又漫长的暑假生活已经结束了，同学们再次走向了校园，开启了初三紧张的生活。请你回忆一下，暑假里，为了初三的英语学习，你在听、说、读、写方面都做了什么样的准备？请你梳理一下，将暑假的学习方法介绍给你的同学听。
参考内容：听录音，大声读，阅读杂志，记笔记，看英文电影，查词典，向老师寻求帮助等
要求：1. 100词左右，开头不计；
2. 以上内容只是参考，可以有重点的写，也可以根据需要适当拓展。
Hello. everyone. The summer vacation is over and the new term starts. I had a colorful and meaningful vacation. Do you want to know how I learned English
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16．在初三的英语学习中，我们认识了很多名人，例如：Spud Webb，Tan Dun，Audrey Hepburn，Jackie Chan，Neil Armstrong，Marie Curie，Yuan Longping等，他们都是我们学习的榜样。生活中也有许多优秀的家长、老师、同学等值得我们学习。某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model (我的榜样)”为话题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容涵盖以下要点：
1. Who is your role model
2. What meaningful things he/she did influence you most
3. What can you learn from him/her
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺，可适当发挥；
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model. My role model is
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17．在你的成长过程中，你会因学会了某种新的生活技能（如种植、烹饪、洗衣……）而感到高兴，请以“I learned to __________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，简要叙述你学习的原因、过程及感受。
要求：
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2.文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。
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18．当前，历经三年的“新冠”疫情，我国已经宣布结束，根据提示信息以“What shall we do to protect ourselevles ”为题目，写一篇英语短文介绍一下，在后疫情时代，我们自身应该怎样去做，保护我们自己。
提示信息：
wear a mask (带口罩), get together (聚集), 75% alcohol (百分之75的酒精), fresh vegetables and fruits (新鲜的蔬菜和水果), do sports, wash hands, open windows
要求：1. 体现所给提示信息，写出5点以上的措施，可以适当扩展。
2. 字迹工整，书写规范。
3. 注意大小写和标点符号的使用，字数不少于60词。
What shall we do to protect ourselves
The epidemic (传染病) is over. In China, everyone is happy. But we know, it hasn’t gone yet, so we should do something to protect ourselves from COVID-19. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
19．随着国家疫情防控全面放开，我们的学习和生活等各方面都面临着新的形势和挑战。请结合自身实际，以“How to Face the New Challenge”为题，并根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法。
生活习惯 早睡早起、不熬夜……
学习态度 努力学习、严于律己……
安全提示 不去人员聚集之地、出门戴口罩（mask）……
你的希望
注意：
1. 词数在80～100词之间，开头、结尾已给的部分不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
How to Face the New Challenge
Hello, everyone I’d like to share my ideas about how to face the new challenge.
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Thank you!
20．每个人都有心情不好的时候，当情绪不好的时候，该怎样调节自己？有人通过旅行忘掉烦恼，有人通过听音乐换种心情，有人通过阅读找回快乐……某英语报社开展“How I change my bad feelings”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你是怎样调节心情的。
要求：
1.词数100词左右；
2.须包括所有要点提示，并适当补充，语句通顺，内容连贯；
3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
How I change my bad feelings!
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
Should Teenagers Do Housework at Home
Housework is a necessary part of running a home. I often do housework at home, such as washing dishes after meals and helping my parents with gardening on weekends. I firmly believe teenagers should do housework.
First, it can help our tired parents, and they will be pleased with our efforts. Second, we can learn useful skills like cooking and cleaning, which are valuable for our future. Third, doing housework develops a sense of responsibility, making us know we should contribute to the family.
In a word, doing housework is beneficial for teenagers. Let’s start doing it now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕“青少年是否应该在家做家务”这一话题，结合自身情况阐述观点及原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点明家务是家庭运转的必要部分，说明自己常做的家务。
第二步，表明青少年应该做家务的观点，从帮助父母、学习技能、培养责任感三个方面阐述原因。
第三步，结尾总结做家务对青少年有益，呼吁行动。
[亮点词汇]
①firmly坚定地
②tired疲惫的
③pleased高兴的
④useful skills有用的技能
[高分句型]
①I often do housework at home, such as washing dishes after meals and helping my parents with gardening on weekends.（使用“such as”列举具体家务，使内容更丰富具体。）
②Second, we can learn useful skills like cooking and cleaning, which are valuable for our future.（运用“which”引导的非限制性定语从句，进一步说明技能的价值。）
2．
例文
How to Be Green
Hello, I’m Li Hua. Being green is very important to me.
In my daily life, I often try to reduce waste by using fewer plastic bags and bottles. I also reuse things like bottles and paper whenever I can. Recycling is another way I help the environment. I sort my trash and make sure recyclable materials are properly disposed of. I do these things because I believe it’s our duty to protect the Earth. It’s the only home we have.
By being green, I feel proud that I’m doing my part to make the world a better place. I hope more people will join me in this effort.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态：主要运用“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开头以自我介绍引入话题，强调环保的重要性。
第二步，具体阐述。先介绍减少浪费的做法；再说明重复利用物品；接着讲述回收利用；之后阐述环保的原因，突出地球是唯一家园，每个人都有保护它的责任。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己践行环保的自豪感，并呼吁更多人参与。
［亮点词汇］
①reduce waste 减少浪费
②plastic bag 塑料袋
③reuse 重复使用
④recycling 回收利用
⑤sort trash 分类垃圾
⑥recyclable materials 可回收材料
⑦properly dispose of 妥善处理
［高分句型］
①Recycling is another way I help the environment.（定语从句）
②I do these things because I believe it’s our duty to protect the Earth.（because引导的状语从句）
3．
例文
I’m Proud of Myself
I still remember how I became good at English.
Every English class used to be like a bad dream for me. I didn’t understand my teacher most of the time. One day, the teacher talked with me and gave me some useful suggestions. After this talk, I began to review new words from time to time, even on the way to school and home. I read aloud to practice pronunciation. I watched English videos and kept a diary in English. Whenever I met new words, I looked them up in the dictionary. I kept using English every day. Practice makes perfect. About two months later, I got “A” in the final exam.
I am really proud of myself, because this experience helps me realize that everyone can achieve their goals through hard work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，以“I’m Proud of Myself”为题，介绍自己做过的一件引以为傲的事，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一件自己做过的感到骄傲的事；
第二步，具体阐述自己如何一步步提高英语成绩的；
第三步，最后这次经历对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长……
②begin to do开始做某事
③from time to time不时地
[高分句型]
①Whenever I met new words, I looked them up in the dictionary.（时间状语从句）
②Practice makes perfect. （熟语）
③I am really proud of myself, because this experience helps me realize that everyone can achieve their goals through hard work.（原因状语从句）
4．例文：
My suggestions on protecting our eyesight
My name is Li Hua. As we all know, eyes are very important. So it is necessary for us to pay attention to our eyesight, and here are some suggestions to protect our eyesight.
First, go to the hospital and check our eyes every year. On one hand, it can prevent our eyesight from being worse. On the other hand, we can know our eyes better. Second, eat more fruits and vegetables. They are good for our eyes. Third, get enough sleep. We should make sure that our eyes have a good rest. Last but not least, we must do eye exercises every day to relax our eyes.
If we follow the suggestions above and do what we can to protect our eyes, I believe we can have good eyesight.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中视力的重要性、保护视力的方法等方面给周围的人提几点建议的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍视力的重要性；
第二步，介绍保护视力的方法，给周围的人提几点建议；
第三步，书写结语。希望大家都有好视力。
[亮点词汇]
① as we all know众所周知
② on one hand…on the other hand…一方面……另一方面……
③ last but not least最后但同样重要的是
④ have good eyesight有好的视力
[高分句型]
① So it is necessary for us to pay attention to our eyesight, and here are some suggestions to protect our eyesight. (it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语)
② We should make sure that our eyes have a good rest. (should用于提建议)
③ I believe we can have good eyesight. (宾语从句)
5．例文
How to Protect the Rainforests
Tropical rain forest plays an important role in regulating global climate, preventing soil erosion, purifying air and ensuring the orderly progress of global ecological cycle. So, it is necessary for us to protect them. Here are some suggestions to protect the rainforests.
Firstly, we should show and tell people about the importance of protecting the rainforests by some channels, such as advertisement, broadcast and school education etc. Secondly, we should do anything we can. When we eat, we can’t use disposable chopsticks or paper cups. We should use less paper and make sure not to waste paper. Thirdly, the government should also publish some regulations to protect the rainforests.
In a word, it is our duty to protect the rainforests. Let us try our best to leave a green home together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述热带雨林的重要作用，开门见山，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“人人们了解保护热带雨林的重要性”、“做我们力所能及的的事情”以及“政府应该发布相关法律法规”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，倡导大家一起保护热带雨林。
[亮点词汇]
①plays an important role in在……中发挥重要作用
②global climate全球气候
③soil erosion水土流失
④disposable一次性的
⑤make sure确保
⑥indiscriminately任意地
⑦In a word换言之
[高分句型]
①Here are some suggestions to protect the rainforests. (倒装句)
②When we eat, we can’t use disposable chopsticks or paper cups. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③Let us try our best to leave a green home together. (祈使句)
6．例文：
How to learn English
How can you learn English well Here is my advice.
First, you can learn it by listening to English songs and watching English films. You can learn some new words. Second, you can speak it as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. You can also learn from these mistakes. Third, read more English magazines and newspapers. It can improve your reading skills. Last but not least, remember some good sentences in English. They are really useful for writing.
I hope my advice can help you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作意图开头已给出，写作时可直接介绍学习英语的方法。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“通过听英语歌和看英语电影”、“尽可能说英语”、“读更多的英语杂志和报纸”以及“记一些英语好句”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to English songs听英语歌
②watch English films看英语电影
③as much as possible尽可能多地
④be afraid of害怕
⑤make mistakes犯错
⑥learn from学到
⑦Last but not least最后
⑧be useful for对……有用
[高分句型]
①Here is my advice. (倒装句)
②Last but not least, remember some good sentences in English. (祈使句)
③I hope my advice can help you. (宾语从句)
7．例文
My English Learning Experience
Good morning, everyone! I’m very glad to share my English learning experience with you.
I have been keen on English since I first got to know this language. For me, it is like a golden key to open a wider world. I enjoy reading English books and watching English movies, which helps me understand a different culture. To improve my English, I make it a rule to read aloud every morning. This helps me better communicate with others in English. What’s more, I keep writing English diaries for it can greatly improve my writing skills. From my experience, I’ve come to realize that practice makes perfect. And only by working hard can you achieve your goals.
In a word, learning English is both challenging and rewarding. Let’s keep working hard and enjoy the process.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文。
时态：一般现在时和现在完成时。
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，很开心和同学们分享英语学习的方法和体验。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，我为什么喜欢英语、如何提高英语、经验是什么等等。
第三步，书写结语，学习英语是挑战也是值得的，号召大家继续努力学习，享受学习的过程。
[亮点词汇]
What’s more 更重要的是
[高分句型]
From my experience, I’ve come to realize that practice makes perfect. （that引导的宾语从句）
8． Setting and Achieving My Goal
Setting goals is important for personal growth and development. My goal is to improve my English speaking skills. I set this goal because I want to communicate more effectively with people from different countries and cultures. To achieve this goal, I plan to practice speaking English every day. I will join an English club to converse with others and watch English movies to improve my listening skills. Additionally, I will ask my teacher for help to correct my pronunciation. With my hard work , I believe my goal will come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，注意使用连接词以确保行文流畅，避免语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，阐述你给自己设定的目标；
第二步，简单说明设定该目标的原因，打算如何实现这一目标；
第三步，书写结语，升华主题，相信自己能够实现目标。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate...with...与……交流
②plan to do sth.计划做某事
③ask for help向……寻求帮助
④come true实现
[高分句型]
①I set this goal because I want to communicate more effectively with people from different countries and cultures.（原因状语从句)
②With my hard work , I believe my goal will come true.（宾语从句）
9．范文：
Teenagers are the builders and successors of our country. To be an excellent middle school student, there are some suggestions.
First of all, we must love our country and home. We should treat the people around us honestly and keep our promise. Secondly, we should have our own dreams and work hard to achieve them. Taking exercise can make us healthier and study better. Thirdly, we should protect the environment and animals. Because protecting them is protecting ourselves. What’s more, we should take an active part in all kinds of activities in or out of school, such as cleaning up the classroom or the city park.
Come on, my classmates! I believe we can make it and become excellent middle school students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题目，谈谈如何做一名优秀的中学生；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作主旨；
第二步，具体介绍如何做一名优秀的中学生；
第三步，号召大家行动起来，为成为一名优秀的中学生而努力。
[亮点词汇]
①keep one’s promise 遵守承诺
②take an active part in 积极参与
③such as 例如
[高分句型]
I believe we can make it and become excellent middle school students.（宾语从句）
10．例文:
How to Improve English Listening and Speaking
As we know, English listening and speaking are really important in learning English. Today I would like to share some useful tips on how to improve English listening and speaking skills with you.
First of all, we can have more interactive activities in class, such as discussions, interviews, story-telling and role-play. In this way, we can have more fun learning English. Secondly, we can take part in more out-of-class activities like English speech competitions and English evenings. Through these activities we can improve our English skills in an easy and relaxing way. Thirdly, we need to find more opportunities to communicate with people in English, whether they are English teachers or classmates, foreigners or Chinese, because using English is the best way to learn.
All in all, what we need is more free time and more space. We must be able to master listening and speaking skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题目内容介绍如何提高英语听说能力，可结合实例。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示要分享一些提高英语听说能力的方法；
第二步，详细介绍提高听说能力的方法；
第三步，提出希望或鼓励。
[亮点词汇]
①interactive activities互动活动
②such as例如
③have fun doing sth.做某事玩得开心
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①As English learners, we all know that only by mastering listening and speaking skills can we learn English well. (宾语从句以及倒装句)
②Thirdly, we need to find more opportunities to communicate with people in English, whether they are English teachers or classmates, foreigners or Chinese, because using English is the best way to learn. (because引导的原因状语从句)
11．例文
How to Be a Better Self
To become a better version of yourself, it’s important to focus on health, learning, and interpersonal relationships.
Firstly, health is the foundation of everything. Maintain a balanced diet and exercise regularly. A healthy body leads to a healthy mind, which is necessary for personal development. Secondly, in terms of learning, always be curious and eager to learn new things. Set clear goals and work hard to achieve them. Remember, learning is a lifelong journey, and knowledge is power. Lastly, when it comes to interpersonal relationships, be honest and respectful. Good communication skills and trust are essential in building strong friendships. Always be there for your friends and help them when needed.
By improving these aspects, you can become a better self.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍要从哪些方面开始做起；
第二步，根据要点提示具体叙述；
第三步，最后书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① the foundation of……的基础
② in terms of就……而言
③ help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①A healthy body leads to a healthy mind, which is necessary for personal development. （定语从句）
②Lastly, when it comes to interpersonal relationships, be honest and respectful.（时间状语从句）
12．例文：
How to Keep Safe Life is only once, so safety is important for us teenagers. But how can we keep safe Here are some suggestions.
First, we should get on well with our classmates at school. Don’t fight with them. If we really have trouble in communicating with them, we can ask our teachers for help. Second, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. We shouldn’t meet net-friends alone. Third, we’d better buy and eat food carefully. We should eat healthy food such as vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat junk food. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Fourth, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Besides, summer is coming and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.
In a word, safety must come first!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据要点提示写作，可适当增添内容，注意不要遗漏“补充至少一条其他安全注意事项”的写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，通过写“生命只有一次”引出话题；
第二步，从“校园、交友、食品、交通”等方面讲述安全注意事项；
第三步，书写结语，阐述个人观点。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with和……相处得好
②do harm to对……有害
③besides此外
[高分句型]
①If we really have trouble in communicating with them, we can ask our teachers for help. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. (祈使句的否定形式，when引导的时间状语从句)
13．例文：
My friend David always drives his parents mad. He often angers his parents with various problems. He wants to change himself because he doesn’t want to disappoint his parents. Here are some suggestions I gave him.
First of all, discuss the rules ahead of time. In this way he will be able to know whether they will agree or not before making plans. What’s more, it’s a good idea to communicate with parents personally. Try to keep calm when parents disagree with him. Last but not least, spend time with his family. He’d better do some activities that his whole family will enjoy together such as going for a hike, a bike ride, or going to the beach.
Hopefully, he will find my suggestions helpful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍朋友遇到的问题是什么；
第二步，具体介绍自己给出的建议是什么；
第三步，最后希望自己的建议有用。
[亮点词汇]
① drive sb mad使某人发疯
② make plans制定计划
③ last but not least最后但同样重要的一点
[高分句型]
① In this way he will be able to know whether they will agree or not before making plans. (whether引导的宾语从句)
② He’d better do some activities that his whole family will enjoy together such as going for a hike, a bike ride, or going to the beach. (that引导的定语从句)
14．例文
How I have changed!
I have changed a lot in the last three years. I used to be short, but now I’m one of the tallest students in my class. I used to be shy and quiet, but now I’m outgoing and I like to make friends. I didn’t use to like reading, but now I have fallen in love with it. The most important change in my life is that I become interested in reading. Last summer, my best friend gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books. This is the most important change because reading gives me a lot of knowledge and makes me very happy. Just as the famous saying goes, “Reading makes a full man”.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：根据图示信息介绍自己发生的变化，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述自己发生的变化有哪些；
第二步，介绍自己发生的最大变化；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be曾经是
②fall in love with爱上
③become interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①The most important change in my life is that I become interested in reading. (that引导的表语从句)
②This is the most important change because reading gives me a lot of knowledge and makes me very happy.(because引导原因状语从句)
15．例文
Hello. everyone. The summer vacation is over and the new term starts. I had a colorful and meaningful vacation. Do you want to know how I learned English
To prepare for the challenges of junior high school, I focused on all four language skills: listening, speaking, reading, and writing. For listening, I practiced with English recordings and watched English movies to improve my comprehension and pronunciation. Speaking was enhanced by speaking out loud daily, imitating native speakers’ accents. Reading was a key part of my routine. I read English magazines and books, noting down new words and phrases. Writing was also essential, so I kept a journal in English and wrote essays on various topics. I made good use of dictionaries to look up unfamiliar words and sought help from my teachers when needed.
These methods not only improved my English but also made learning fun. I hope you find these tips helpful for your own studies!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般过去时
③提示：写作要点和开头部分已给出，考试应注意“要求”中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，表达自己从哪些方面提高英语学习；
第二步，详细说明自己学习内容和学习方法；
第三步，表达自己的学习的感受以及希望这些方法能对同学有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①enhance增强，提高
②imitate模仿
③note down记下
④essential必要的
⑤unfamiliar不熟悉的
⑥seek寻求,谋求
[高分句型]
① To prepare for the challenges of junior high school, I focused on all four language skills: listening, speaking, reading, and writing. (不定式作目的状语)
② I made good use of dictionaries to look up unfamiliar words and sought help from my teachers when needed.(并列句和时间状语从句)
16．例文
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model. My role model is Spud Webb.
When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. He wanted to play in the NBA. He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. He kept on practising playing basketball hard. His talent for basketball was fully developed through his hard work. At last, his dream came true. His story of becoming an NBA player has influenced me most.
When I meet difficulties during my study, I always think of my role model Spud Webb. I can get courage from him to go ahead. I will work hard and never lose heart like him to fight for my dream. Spud Webb is always my hero!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的榜样，要求要点齐全，语句连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点题，点明谁是自己的榜样；
第二步，介绍榜样做的哪些有意义的事情对自己影响最大；
第三步，表达自己从榜样身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①kept on doing sth继续做某事
②give up放弃
③think of想起
④go ahead前进
[高分句型]
①When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. (but连接的并列句)
17．例文
I Learned How to Learn English Well
At the beginning of middle school, I always got bad grades in English. I was very upset and didn’t know how to learn it well.
One day, my English teacher talked to me and understood my problem. She gave me some advice, like speaking more. From that day, I made an English study plan. First, I listened to English songs or watched English movies. Second, I listened to the teacher in class carefully and took notes. Thirdly, I took part in the English corner. I communicated with others as much as possible in English. Finally, I have made great progress in English.
From this experience, I know that when you face some difficulties, don’t give up easily. You should find some ways to deal with them. You will succeed one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中从这项生活技能中学到了什么。注意动词时态的变换。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题。介绍我以前的学习问题；
第二步，具体介绍学习的生活技能；
第三步，我从这项技能中学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②give up放弃
③deal with处理
④take notes做笔记
[高分句型]
①I was very upset and didn’t know how to learn it well.（how to do结构）
②She gave me some advice like speaking more.（动名词作宾语）
③I communicated with others as much as possible in English.（as...as possible结构）
18．例文
What shall we do to protect ourselves
The epidemic (传染病) is over. In China, everyone is happy. But we know, it hasn’t gone yet, so we should do something to protect ourselves from COVID-19. Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, we should wear a mask when we go out. Secondly, we shouldn’t get together. Thirdly, we should use 75% alcohol to disinfect some things, such as doors, books, phones and so on. Fourthly, we should eat more fresh vegetables and fruits and do more sports to keep us healthier. At last, we should wash hands often and open the windows of our rooms to keep the air fresher. We believe that we Chinese will beat the epidemic.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示信息写作，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给出开头，具体阐述保护自己的方法；
第三步，总结，相信能打败病毒。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and so on等等
③keep us healthier让我们更健康
[高分句型]
①Firstly, we should wear a mask when we go out.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②We believe that we Chinese will beat the epidemic.（that引导的宾语从句）
19．例文：
How to Face the New Challenge
Hello, everyone I’d like to share my ideas about how to face the new challenge.
We should go to bed and wake up early, and shouldn’t stay up late. Exercise more to make our bodies stronger. Besides, we should study hard and be strict with ourselves. In order to achieve good results in the middle school entrance examination, we should attach importance to every subject. What’s more, don’t go to places where people gather. We should wear masks when going out. Wash hands frequently in daily life.
I believe we all can develop good study and living habits. We can take on new challenges.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇话题作文，为说明文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点包括四个部分：生活习惯、学习态度、安全提示和个人希望，前三部分可以适当补充，最后一部分需要自己发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍要分享的话题——如何面对新的挑战；
第二步，具体介绍自己是如何面对新的挑战的；
第三步，表达自己的希望和期待。
[亮点词汇]
① be strict with ourselves 严于律己
② in order to 为了
③ attach importance to 重视
④ develop good study and living habits 养成良好的学习和生活习惯
⑤ take on new challenges 接受新的挑战
[高分句型]
① Thirdly, don’t go to places where people gather.（定语从句）
② I believe we all can develop good study and living habits.（宾语从句）
20．例文
How I change my bad feelings!
It’s normal to feel sad when something bad happens to us. I often feel bad when I have lots of homework to do. Every time I’m tired of it, I’d go to Lisa, my best friend. She can always find ways to cheer me up. So chat with a friend with a sense of humor when you feel bad. For me, another way to deal with bad feelings is to spend time on hobbies. When I’m sad and alone, I’d like to write poems. By writing poems, I can express and release my bad feelings in a positive way.
These are my ways of dealing with bad feelings. Try our best, and we can find many ways to change bad feelings.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给题目完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主旨，介绍自己的坏心情；
第二步，具体描述调节心情的方法；
第三步，最后表达总结。
[亮点词汇]
① be tired of厌倦
② a sense of humor幽默感
③ spend time on sth在某事上花时间
[高分句型]
When I’m sad and alone, I’d like to write poems.（when引导的时间状语从句）
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