2016年高考英语母题题源专练：专题20 短文改错（含解析）

母题二十短文改错
【母题来源一】【2016·全国新课标I】
【母题原题】
【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错（10
分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。21世纪教育网
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My
uncle
is
the
owne
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of
a
restaurant
close
to
that
1
live
.Though
not
very
big
,but
the
restaurant
is
popular
in
our
area
.It
is
always
crowded
with
customers
at
meal
times
.Some
people
even
had
to
wait
outside
My
uncle
tells
me
that
the
key
to
his
success
is
honest.
Every
day
he
makes
sure
that
fresh
vegetables
or
high
quality
oil
are
using
for
cooking.
My
uncle
says
that
he
never
dreams
becoming
rich
in
the
short
period
of
time.
Instead,
he
hopes
that
our
business
will
grow
steady.
【答案】
1.
that
→where
2.
but去掉
3.
had
→have
4.
honest→
honesty
5.
or→
and
6.
using
→used
7.
becoming前加of
8.
the
→a
9.
our→
his
10.
stead→steadily
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去掉but
考查连词。Though不和but连用，故去掉but。
【归纳总结】在英语中tho
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3.
had
→have
考查动词时态。
文章是介绍现在的情况，应该用一般现在时。
4.
honest→
honesty
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而形容词honest意思是“诚实的”，是指人的性格特点。
5.
or→
and
考查连词。根据句意判断此处是表示并列关系，故把or改为and。
6.
using
→used
考查被动语态。根据句意可知此处表示被动含义，be
used
for“被用来去做”。
7.
becoming前加of
考查介词。
固定短语:
dream
of
梦想做某事。
78.
the
→a
考查冠词。
固定短语：in
a
short
time在短时间内。
9.
our→
his
考查代词。根据句意可知此处是指叔叔的生意，用his指代。
10.
stead→steadily
考查副词。根据句意可知此处grow是实意动词，意思是
“增长”，不是系动词，故用副词修饰。
考点：考查短文改错
【母题来源二】【2016·全国新课标II】
【母题原题】
【2016·全国新课标II】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The
summer
holida
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is
coming.
My
classmates
and
I
are
talking
about
how
to
do
during
the
holiday.
We
can
chose
between
staying
at
home
and
take
a
trip.
If
we
stay
at
home,
it
is
comfortable
but
there
is
no
need
to
spend
money.
But
in
that
case,
we
will
learn
little
about
world.
If
we
go
on
a
trip
abroad,
we
can
broaden
you
view
and
gain
knowledges
we
cannot
get
from
books.
Some
classmates
suggest
we
can
go
to
places
of
interest
nearby.
I
thought
that
it
is
a
good
idea.
It
does
not
cost
many,
yet
we
can
still
learn
a
lot.
【答案】
1.how改为what
2.chose改为choose
3.take改为taking4.but改为and
5.about后加the
6.your改为our7.knowledges改为knowledge8.删除can或can改为should
9.thought改为think
10.many改为much
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考查并列结构。本句中动名词短语staying
at
home与taking
a
trip构成并列关系，都作为介词between的宾语。
4.but改为and
考查连词。句意：如果我
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5.about后加the
考查定冠词。在英语中定冠词the通常表示特指，本句中the修饰world表示特指这个世界。
6.your改为our
考查代词。应该使用our与本句的主语we保持一致。句意：如果我们出国旅游，我们就拓宽视野并学到书本上学不到的知识。
7.knowledges改为knowledge
考查名词单复数。本句中名词knowledge是不可数名词，没有复数形式。
8.删除can或can改为
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考查虚拟语气。动词suggest作为建议的时候，后面的宾语从句要使用虚拟语气“(should)+动词原形”,所以本句可以删除can或can改为should。
9.thought改为think
考查时态。本文介绍我和同学们商量暑假旅游的事情，全文以一般现在时为主，所以本句使用现在时think。
10.many改为muc
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考查代词。本句中代词much代替不可数名词much
money作为动词cost的宾语，而many通常代替可数名词复数形式。
【名师点睛】
高考短文改错考点层次一般而言可依次分为
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )词法的测试、句法的测试和语篇的测试三个层面。考点层次越高，就越能测试出考生运用语言的能力。低层次的考点往往侧重于语法方面的考查，而高层次的考点往往侧重于考生对文章意义方面的理解。
一、词法改错
词法的测试包括：定冠词和不定冠词的用法
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例如：本题中的
5.about后加the
考查定冠词
7.knowledges改为knowledge
考查名词单复数
10.many改为much
考查代词
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【命题意图】本类题通常主要考查学生对英语基本语言的准确掌握程度，为以后的校对和准确表达做准备。
【考试方向】这类试题主要考查学生的基本的语法知识，主要是时态、非谓语动词、从句等的用法。还有句子间的的连接成分，有时涉及篇章和逻辑关系。
【得分要点】熟练掌握中学阶段重要的语法项目，注意文章语句间的的逻辑关系。对每个句子进行逐一诊断，对常见的错误类型成竹在胸。
【母题1】
【广东省惠州市2016届高三上学期
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )第三次调研】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My
family
was
very
p
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when
I
was
a
child.
My
parents
lost
their
jobs
or
lived
with
heavy
pressure.
As
a
result,
I
wanted
to
study
hardly
so
as
to
have
different
future.
During
my
high
school
life,
I
spent
all
my
time
studied
those
difficult
subjects,
which
made
me
one
of
the
best
student
in
our
school.
After
graduation,
I
was
admitted
in
a
key
university
where
I
meet
a
lot
of
interesting
friends.
Now,
I
am
working
in
a
big
company
and
I
am
able
to
afford
anything
I
wanted.
What’s
more,
my
parents
also
have
been
found
new
jobs.
So
I
believe
that
our
dream
will
came
true
if
we
try
our
best.
【答案】
51.or
→
and
52.hardly
→
hard
53.different
future
前加a
54.studied
→
studying
55.student
→
students
56.in
→
to
/
into
/
by
57.meet
→
met
58.wanted
→want
59.去掉been
60.came
→
come
【解析】
试题分析：通过阅读并修改短文，考查学生对固定搭配，动词时态和语态，冠词以及并列连词的辨别和运用。
or
→
and
考查并列连词。句意：我的父母失业了然后生活地很有压力。前后表并列用and，or
的意思是：或者。
52.hardly
→
hard
考查副词。句意：我想努力地学习。hardly几乎不，hard
努力。
53.different
future
前加a
考查冠词。future是可数名词，这里是指一个不同的未来，用a。
54.studied
→
studying
考查固定搭配。spend
time
doing
sth.
所以用studying。
55.student
→
students
考查复数名词。one
of
后面用复数名词students。
56.in
→
to
/
into
/
by
考查固定搭配。be
admitted
to/
into
/
by
被…..录取。
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考点：短文改错。
【母题2】
【河南省郑州市2016年高三上学期第
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )一次质量预测】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I
can
still
remembe
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I
was
once
asked
to
make
speech
before
the
whole
class
at
the
age
of
9.
You
can
imagine
how
shy
I
was
when
I
thought
of
that
with
so
many
eyes
fixed
to
me.
I
had
no
more
choice
but
to
prepare
for
it,
though.
The
hardest
part
was
my
oral
presentation
from
my
memory,
for
reading
from
the
paper
wasn’t
allowing.
The
real
moment
began
before
I
stood
on
the
platform
with
my
legs
trembling
or
my
mind
blank.
But
my
listeners
were
waiting
patient.
Gradually,
I
found
me
back,
giving
my
speech
at
last.
After
what
seemed
to
be
a
long
time,
I
heard
all
the
listeners
applauding
loudly.
Ever
since
then,
my
fear
of
speak
before
a
big
audience
had
disappeared.
Actually,
now
I’ve
become
a
great
speaker!
【答案】
71.make后添加a
72.to---on
73.去掉more
74.allowing---allowed
75.before---when
76.or---and
77.patiedt---patiently
78.me---myself
79.speak---speaking
80.had---has
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【母题3】
【山东省淄博市淄川第一中学20
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )16届高三上学期期末】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Ladies
and
gentlemen，
It’s
my
honor
to
gi
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a
speech
here．After-class
activities
play
a
important
part
in
our
school
life．Proper
activities
help
enrich
our
lives，broaden
our
horizons
or
develop
our
personalities.
Mine
own
experience
c
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serve
as
a
case
in
point.
When
I
was
in
Senior
one，I
become
a
member
of
our
drama
club，that
I
used
to
visit
on
weekends．Since
my
participation
in
various
activities
organizing
by
the
club，I
achieved
a
lot．
These
activiti
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bring
me
a
lot
of
funs，provide
me
with
good
opportunities
to
develop
new
friend-ships
and
open
a
window
through
which
I
have
a
brand-new
outlook．With
so
much
advantages
shown
above，why
not
to
join
us
at
once？
【答案】
71.a---an
72.or---and
73.Mine---Wy
74.become---became
75.that---which
76.organizing---organized
77.I前添加have
78.funs---fun
79.much---many
80.去掉to
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )考点：考查词汇和句型的用法。