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2025年秋人教版高一上册期中考前押题必练--书面表达
类型 篇章
一．续写类 Passage 1-2
二．书信类 Passage 3-5
三．解决问题类 Passage 6-9
四．介绍分享类 Passage 10-13
Passage 1
一、续写类
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus (马戏团). Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.
This family made a big impression on me. There were four children, all probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money.
Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, and all of them were standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns (小丑), elephants, and other acts they would see that night with their brothers or sisters in a low voice.
One could sense they had never been to the circus before. It promised to be highlight of their young lives. The father and mother were at the head of the crowd, standing proud as they could be. The mother was holding her husband’s hand, looking up at him as if to say, “You are my knight (骑士) in shining armor (盔甲).” He was smiling and responding (回复) in pride, looking back at her as if to say, “You got that right.”
The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded, “Please let me buy four children’s tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus.”
The ticket lady gave the price. The wife let go of her husband’s hand. Her head dropped, and his lips began to shake. There was no longer a smile on the man’s face. He quietly asked, “How much did you say ”
The ticket lady told him the price again. It was clear that the man didn’t have enough money. But how could he tell his kids the bad news
Actually we were not rich in any sense. So I understood how the kids would feel. I felt sorry for them.
注意：
1. 所需写的短文词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好;
Paragraph 1
Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $50 bill and dropped it on the ground.
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Paragraph 2
That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.
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【答案】Paragraph 1
Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $50 bill and dropped it on the ground. Then my father reached down, picked up the bill and tapped the man on the shoulder, “Excuse me, sir, this fell out of your pocket.” The man turned around and saw the $50 bill. He realized what was going on, and looked up at my father with his lips shaking and grateful tears sparkling in his eyes. He shook hands with my father tightly and said, “Thank you, thank you, sir! This really means a lot for my whole family.”Paragraph 2
That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. Although we failed to see the circus, we were overwhelmed with happiness. I asked my father,“Dad, why did you do that ” He gently patted me on the shoulder and replied, “My child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father. We should be grateful for what we have and try to help those who are in need. And after all, we can always go next time.” What he said and what he did set a good example for me and made a big difference to my life.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者少年时与父亲去买马戏团门票，遇到一个经济拮据的家庭因钱不够无法购票，父亲用巧妙的方式帮助他们，最终作者和父亲虽未看成马戏，却收获了助人的快乐与人生感悟的故事。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句“看到发生的一切，我爸爸把手伸进口袋，掏出一张50美元的钞票扔在地上。”可知，第一段可描写作者父亲如何巧妙地将钱给那个家庭的父亲，以及那个家庭收到钱后的反应。
②由第二段首句“那天，我和爸爸回到车里，没有买票就开车回家了。”可知，第二段可描写作者和父亲没有买到票开车回家的感受，以及作者与父亲的对话和作者的感悟。
2. 续写线索：父亲丢钱并假装捡到钱——归还男子——男子感激——父子返程——作者提问——父亲解惑——作者感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类：
①轻拍：tap/pat
②与某人紧握双手：shake hands with sb. tightly/clasp hands with sb. firmly
③（眼泪）闪烁：sparkle/glisten
④有重大影响：make a big difference/have a profound influence
情感类：
①感激：grateful/thankful
②幸福：happiness/joy
③羞愧：embarrassing/awkward
【点睛】[高分句型 1]. He realized what was going on, and looked up at my father with his lips shaking and grateful tears sparkling in his eyes.（运用了what引导的宾语从句；以及with复合结构作状语）
[高分句型 2]. We should be grateful for what we have and try to help those who are in need.（运用了what引导的宾语从句；以及who引导的定语从句，先行词为those）
Passage 2
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a sunny day. Anabia, an 11-year-old girl, was excited because today was the drawing contest at her school. Anabia was really good at drawing and usually got the highest marks in art. Her teachers would often ask her to make posters for school plays and call on her during free periods to help with cuttings, drawing, shading, colouring and much more. There was an art competition taking place in school and Anabia had worked really hard and wanted to win it. But there was one thing that was disturbing her today.
Recently, a new girl, Rida, had joined her class. She was also interested in art but she was not as good at drawing as Anabia was. Miss Saima, the art teacher, helped Rida and taught her tips and tricks to improve her drawing skill. And now Rida was also considered among the best artists in grade six.
Rida was quick, smart and intelligent. Anabia became jealous of Rida’s intelligence and felt that the new girl would be tough to beat.
So that day, for the art competition, Miss Saima took all the students to the art room, told them their roll numbers and gave important instructions. Anabia’s roll number was 16, while Rida was number 17. The bell rang, indicating the beginning of the contest. Miss Saima wrote on the board: make a scene of a sunset with a flowing river and a sailing boat.
Anabia knew that the best tools to make a sunset were oil pastels (油画棒). Anabia started to look for her oil pastels in her art bag. Then, after looking through the bag, she remembered that she had left them at home. Immediately, she got up to tell Miss Saima.
Miss Saima was disappointed at Anabia’s carelessness and told her that she could not help her, as it was her responsibility to come prepared for the contest that had been announced a week in advance. Anabia’s best friends were also there, but none of them offered to share anything, much to Anabia’s surprise and disappointment.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Anabia’ s eyes filled with tears.
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Then Rida held Anabia’s hand, and the two girls waited for the winners to be announced.
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【答案】 Anabia’ s eyes filled with tears. She found something hard to swallow. To her sadness, she lost the art competition before she even started. Just then, a box of oil painting sticks appeared in front of her eyes. “If you don’t mind, I think we can share these.”, Rida, the girl who she once hoped to beat, extended a helping hand. Anabia hesitated, but quickly they were both devoted into their works. Time flies in the blink of an eye. After handing in their works, Anabia reach out her hand.
Then Rida held Anabia’s hand, and the two girls waited for the winners to be announced. “I’m sorry. I once became jealous of your intelligence, and hoped to beat you” , Anabia apologized, sincerely. Rida hugged her delightedly and said she hoped they would be friends in the future. It seemed that who would be the winner was not so important at the moment. The sun shone warm sunlight into the room and also shone on the hearts of the two girl. The world always prepare surprise for the people who like sun. They both got the first place.
【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写。本文以人物为线索展开。Anabia 很擅长画画，通常在艺术方面得到最高分。新来的女孩Rida敏捷、聪明，也被认为是六年级最好的艺术家之一。Anabia开始嫉妒Rida。今天学校举办绘画比赛，Anabia忘记带必须的油画棒了，朋友却没有人借给她。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“阿纳比亚的眼里充满了泪水。”可知，第一段可以描写Anabia的心理活动，然后得到Rida帮助一起比赛的细节。
②由第二段句首内容“随后，瑞达握着阿纳比亚的手，两个女孩等待着获胜者的宣布。”可知，第二段可以描写二人等待结果时，Anabia和Rida的互动，Anabia的感悟，最后升华文章的主旨：爱让人欢乐。
2.续写线索：哭泣—得到帮助—顺利完成—道歉—拥抱—感悟—成功
3.词汇激活
行为类
①出现： appear/ occur/ show up
②伸出援手：extend a helping hand/ lend a helping hand
③道歉：apologize/ say sorry
情绪类
①悲伤：sadness/ sorrow
②高兴地：delightedly/ gladly/happily
【点睛】【高分句型1】“If you don’t mind, I think we can share these.”, Rida, the girl who she once hoped to beat, extended a helping hand. ( 运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It seemed that who would be the winner was not so important at the moment. ( 运用了固定句型It seemed that，who引导的主语从句)
【高分句型3】The world always prepare surprise for the people who like sun. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
二．书信类
Passage 3
3．假设你是李华，你的英国网友Jack最近在中国学习。他写信向你述说了他的困扰：不适应新的生活和学习环境，感到很焦虑。请你根据以下要点写一封回信。内容包括：
（1）.表示理解并给予安慰;
（2）.提出合理建议。
注意：1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having a difficult time.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having a difficult time. Actually, most people will feel it hard to fit in and then feel anxious when they leave home and come to an unfamiliar place, especially a foreign country. So don’t worry too much.
Here are some suggestions for you. Firstly, you’d better change some of your habits so that you can adapt to the new environment as soon as possible. Secondly, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and exchange ideas with you. You will feel more comfortable with many friends around you. What’s more, taking part in some social activities will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures.
Hope my advice will be useful and everything will be fine with you.
Yours.
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封建议信。要求考生以李华的名义为英国网友Jack写一封建议信，对有关如何适应新的生活和学习环境提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
艰难的：difficult→ tough
环境：environment → surroundings
此外：What’s more→ Moreover
参加：take part in→ participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You will feel more comfortable with many friends around you.
拓展句：It will be of comfort to you if you have many friends around you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Actually, most people will feel it hard to fit in and then feel anxious when they leave home and come to an unfamiliar place, especially a foreign country.（使用it形式宾语和when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】What’s more, taking part in some social activities will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures.（使用了非谓语动词作主语）
Passage 4
4．为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jessica，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：高中学习压力较大，导致自己近期比较焦虑且容易发脾气，从而影响了正常的学习和生活。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下：1. 表示理解并给予安慰；2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Worried,
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Yours,
Jessica
【答案】例文
Dear worried,
Learning that you’re feeling anxious and losing your temper due to high school pressures, I completely understand what you’re going through and want to offer some advice.
Firstly, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anxiety and anger out without hurting others or yourself. Secondly, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of negative emotions. Finally, keep in mind that you should always concentrate yourself on some positive and relaxing things when you feel fed up with academic stress, since it can be helpful in lifting your spirits and gathering up your courage to face those difficulties again.
I hope what I say will be a comfort to you and help you out.
Yours,
Jessica
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Worried同学写封回信，对他觉得高中学习压力较大，导致自己近期比较焦虑且容易发脾气，从而影响了正常的学习和生活这一情况表示理解并给予安慰，提出建议并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力：pressure→stress
由于：due to→because of
最后：finally→lastly
记住：keep in mind→bear in mind
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Secondly, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of negative emotions.
拓展句：Secondly, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way in which you can get rid of negative emotions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anxiety and anger out without hurting others or yourself. (运用了how引导的宾语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Finally, keep in mind that you should always concentrate yourself on some positive and relaxing things when you feel fed up with academic stress, since it can be helpful in lifting your spirits and gathering up your courage to face those difficulties again. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，when引导的时间状语从句和since引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 5
5．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack最近选修了中文这门课程，遇到了不少困难，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回信。
要点：1. 对他进行安慰；
2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter and understand that you’re facing some challenges in your Chinese course. Don’t worry too much! Learning a new language always comes with difficulties at the beginning, which is a common experience for everyone.
Here are some suggestions that I think will be helpful. Firstly, practice makes perfect. Try to use Chinese as much as possible in daily life, such as by chatting with Chinese friends or watching Chinese movies. Secondly, it’s a good idea to keep a vocabulary notebook where you can write down new words and review them regularly. Remember, patience and persistence are key.
I believe that if you keep working hard, you will make great progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，给遇到中文学习困难的英国笔友Jack回信，对其进行安慰并提出学习中文的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad → delighted
理解：understand → comprehend
建议：suggestion → proposal
坚持：persistence → perseverance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, practice makes perfect.
拓展句：Firstly, as the saying goes, practice makes perfect.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning a new language always comes with difficulties at the beginning, which is a common experience for everyone.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I believe that if you keep working hard, you will make great progress.（运用了that引导的宾语从句、if引导的条件状语从句）
三、解决问题类
Passage 6
6．主题—How to establish a good relationship with your parents
青春期时，你与父母之间经历激烈的争论和冰冷的沉默是很正常的。父母都对自己的孩子有很高的期望。他们希望你成功，但是他们也许没有看见你是如何奋斗的。如果你没有取得好成绩，他们会认为你没有尽力，因此会更加严格，这样会造成家庭关系的紧张。
解决方式：经常与你父母进行交流，让他们理解你的感受；站在父母的立场考虑问题，仔细倾听并设法消除他们的担忧。
结论：通过共同努力，你和你的父母可以建立起良好的关系。
写作要求：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How to establish a good relationship with your parents
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【答案】How to establish a good relationship with your parents
During your teenage years, it’s quite normal to experience some heated arguments and moments of silence with your parents.
To improve this situation, it’s important to communicate with your parents regularly. Share your thoughts and feelings with them so they can understand you better. Try to put yourself in their shoes, listen to their concerns, and find ways to address them. By showing that you care and are willing to work together, you can build a stronger and more understanding relationship with your parents.
Remember, it takes effort from both sides to make a relationship work. But with patience, understanding, and open communication, you and your parents can create a loving and supportive bond that will last a lifetime.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就“如何与父母建立良好的关系”这一主题进行阐述，包括青春期与父母之间的冲突、解决方式以及最终结论。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激烈的：heated → intense/fierce
重要的：important → significant
理解：understand → comprehend
担心：concern → worry
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：During your teenage years, it’s quite normal to experience some heated arguments and moments of silence with your parents.
拓展句：During your teenage years, it’s quite normal to experience some heated arguments and moments of silence with your parents, as you are going through a period of significant personal growth and change.
【点睛】[高分句型1] By showing that you care and are willing to work together, you can build a stronger and more understanding relationship with your parents. (运用了连词that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] But with patience, understanding, and open communication, you and your parents can create a loving and supportive bond that will last a lifetime.(运用了关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 7
7．假定你是李华，你在学校英语学习论坛上看到了你的同校同学Simon发布的以下求助帖。请给他回帖，内容包括：
(1)你对他的困扰的看法;
(2)你的建议。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Forum: English Learning
User: Simon
Post: I feel so anxious about my English I work hard, but I just can’t seem to improve. I have to look up every other word when I read, and I’m too nervous to speak in class. Does anyone have any good strategies I’m starting to lose confidence.
Your Reply:
Hi Simon,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Hi Simon,
I totally understand how you feel. Many students experience similar anxiety when learning English. It’s completely normal to find it challenging at times.
Here’s my advice. First, don’t try to understand every single word when reading. Instead, concentrate on the main ideas. This will help you read faster and feel less frustrated. Second, to improve your speaking, start by talking to yourself in English every day. This can help build your confidence. You could also join our school’s English Corner - it’s a friendly place to practice.
Remember, progress takes time. Don’t be too hard on yourself. I’m confident that with the right strategies, you’ll see improvement soon. Why not give these methods a try
【导语】这是一篇应用文。请考生就在学校英语学习论坛上看到了同校同学Simon发布的以下求助帖给他回帖。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
经历：experience→undergo
具有挑战性的：challenging→demanding
专注于：concentrate on→focus on
沮丧的：frustrated→discouraged
2.句式拓展：
合并句子
原句：Instead, concentrate on the main ideas. This will help you read faster and feel less frustrated.
拓展句：Instead, concentrate on the main ideas, which will help you read faster and feel less frustrated.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Many students experience similar anxiety when learning English.（运用了状语从句的省略）
【高分句型 2】I'm confident that with the right strategies, you’ll see improvement soon.（运用 that 引导的宾语从句）
Passage 8
8．假定你是李华，你的好友Wayne刚升入高中，他给你发邮件表示高中快节奏的学习和繁重的课业让他感到压力很大，难以适应。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示理解；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Wayne,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version：
Dear Wayne,
I am sorry to hear that you’ve been feeling stressed since entering high school. Please know that what you’re experiencing is completely normal — many students go through this phase.
To cope with the pressure, I suggest breaking your tasks into smaller steps and setting a daily study schedule. Also, don’t hesitate to talk to teachers or friends when you feel overwhelmed. Regular exercise, such as a short walk or jogging, can also help clear your mind.
Remember, it takes time to adjust. I’m sure you’ll find your rhythm soon. Feel free to share more with me anytime.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友Wayne回一封邮件，对他升入高中后觉得压力很大表示理解，并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
完全地：completely→absolutely
帮助：help→assist
肯定的：sure→certain
处理：cope with→deal with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To cope with the pressure, I suggest breaking your tasks into smaller steps and setting a daily study schedule.
拓展句：To cope with the pressure, I suggest that you should break your tasks into smaller steps and set a daily study schedule.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you’ve been feeling stressed since entering high school. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Please know that what you’re experiencing is completely normal — many students go through this phase. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和what引导的主语从句)
Passage 9
9．假设你是中学生李华，你的朋友Eric刚进入高中，面对学校的各种社团不知道如何选择，发邮件向你询问。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 提出建议并说明理由；
3. 表达美好希望。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear Eric,
I’m glad to receive your email asking for advice on choosing school clubs.
Since you’re new to high school, I think you should first consider your interests. If you like communicating with others, the English Club would be a good choice because it can improve your language skills through different activities like debates and speech contests. If you enjoy sports, the Basketball Club is perfect as it helps you stay healthy and make friends.
Don’t worry about making the wrong choice. Many clubs allow you to try out for a few weeks. I hope you can find a club that suits you and have a great time in high school!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，给刚上高中的朋友Eric提供关于选择学校社团的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestions
首先：first→above all
考虑：consider→take into account
担心：worry about→be concerned about
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m glad to receive your email asking for advice on choosing school clubs.
拓展句：I’m glad to receive your email that asks for advice on choosing school clubs.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If you like communicating with others, the English Club would be a good choice because it can improve your language skills through different activities like debates and speech contests.（运用了if引导条件状语从句和because引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】 I hope you can find a club that suits you and have a great time in high school!（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句和省略that的宾语从句）
四．介绍分享类
Passage 10
10．假如你是高一新生李华，进入高中学习已经一个月，现在请你以“My New School Life”为主题，描述下你对高一生活的感受。
要点如下：
（1）对校园的印象。
（2）感触最深的人或事。
（3）谈谈学习英语的感受。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100字；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯
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【答案】
My New School Life
After a month in senior high school, I have many impressions and feelings about my new school life. The campus is very beautiful and modern. The facilities are advanced, providing us with a great environment for learning and activities.
The person who has impressed me the most is my English teacher. Her teaching style is engaging and inspiring, making us eager to participate in class activities. Her passion for the subject has motivated me to improve my English. Learning English here has been a challenging yet rewarding experience. I enjoy the interactive discussions and the focus on practical usage of the language. I am confident that with persistent effort, I will make great progress in my English studies.
Overall, my new school life is filled with opportunities and challenges that are shaping my academic and personal growth.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“My New School Life”为主题，描述对高一生活的感受，包括对校园的印象、感触最深的人或事以及学习英语的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
渴望的：eager → keen
参加：participate in → take part in
热情：passion → enthusiasm
提高：improve → enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Her teaching style is engaging and inspiring, making us eager to participate in class activities.
拓展句：Her teaching style is engaging and inspiring, which makes us eager to participate in class activities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The person who has impressed me the most is my English teacher.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Overall, my new school life is filled with opportunities and challenges that are shaping my academic and personal growth.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
Passage 11
11．进入高中，挑战与机遇并存。只有设定好目标并朝着目标努力奋进才能实现个人潜能。请你就设定目标展开写作，具体包括以下几点：
1. 设定目标的重要性；
2. 如何设定目标。
要求：词数 100 左右；适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version
Entering high school brings both challenges and opportunities. To achieve our full potential, it is important to set clear goals and work hard toward them.
Setting goals helps us stay focused. Without goals, we might lose our way or waste time. But with clear goals, we know what steps to take each day. Goals also give us motivation. When we face difficulties, remembering our goals encourages us to work harder. Most importantly, achieving small goals builds confidence and pushes us closer to bigger dreams.
To set effective goals, we should be specific. Instead of saying “I want to improve my English,” we can aim to “learn 20 new words every week.” Besides, goals should be realistic. Start with small targets and move step by step. Finally, write down your goals and make a plan. Regularly check your progress and adjust your plan if needed.
By setting and going after meaningful goals, we grow stronger and build a bright future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就设定目标展开写作，说明设定目标的重要性以及如何设定目标。
【详解】1.词汇积累
实现：achieve→realize
重要：important→essential
记住：remember→keep in mind
光明：bright→promising
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Setting goals helps us stay focused. Without goals, we might lose our way or waste time.
拓展句：Setting goals helps us stay focused because without goals, we might lose our way or waste time.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But with clear goals, we know what steps to take each day.（运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语）
【高分句型2】By setting and going after meaningful goals, we grow stronger and build a bright future.（运用了动名词作宾语）
Passage 12
12．假定你是李华，收到了你校国际班同学王磊的来信，请给他回信，内容如下：
1.表示理解; 2.提出建议; 3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右; 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua,
Hope you’re doing well! I’ve been a bit stuck since the new term started.
High school lessons are harder than junior high, and I often can’t finish homework on time. But I really want to join the basketball club — yet. I’m scared it’ll make my studies worse. Every day I’m torn between them and don’t know how to manage time.
You seem to balance study and hobbies well. Could you share some tips with me I’d be really grateful!
Yours,
Wang Lei
Dear Wang Lei,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Wang Lei,
Thanks for your letter. I totally understand how you feel — adjusting to high school coursework can be challenging at first.
However, balancing studies and activities is possible! Actually, joining the basketball club could help. Physical activity often makes you feel refreshed and study more efficiently afterwards. Besides, time management counts. Try making a realistic daily schedule. Set aside fixed times for homework, club practice, and rest. Stick to it as much as possible. It is also important that we prioritize tasks: finish urgent homework first. Also, use small breaks wisely, like reviewing notes during commute. Believe in yourself! With a good plan, you can enjoy basketball and keep up with studies.
I’m sure you’ll find your rhythm soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给国际班学生王磊回信，对于对方提出的高中生活遇到的问题表示理解，并提出合理建议，同时表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
完全：totally → completely
帮助：help → give sb. a hand
留出：set aside → put aside
任务：task → assignment
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Actually, joining the basketball club could help. Physical activity often makes you feel refreshed and study more efficiently afterwards.
拓展句：Actually, joining the basketball club could help because physical activity often makes you feel refreshed and study more efficiently afterwards.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, balancing studies and activities is possible!（运用了动名词作主语）
【高分句型2】It is also important that we prioritize tasks: finish urgent homework first.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句）
Passage 13
13．假定你是高一新生李华，你的英国笔友 Mike 对中国高中校园生活很感兴趣。请你用英语给他写一封信，内容包括：
1.介绍你的高中校园；
2.开学一个月来你的感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
I hope this letter finds you well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear Mike,
I hope this letter finds you well. Learning that you’re interested in Chinese senior high school life, I’m writing to share mine with you.
Our campus is grand and modern. There are tall buildings with advanced facilities, a spacious gym for sports, and a big library full of books. After class, we can take part in various activities, like club events, and also some volunteer work, which not only help us gain more skills but also teach us to care about others.
In the first month, studying is both challenging and rewarding. I feel pressured sometimes but stay calm by organizing my schedule well.
Well begun, half done. This was a good start to my new school life, and I believe it leads to a great ending. By the way, how’s your school life Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。请考生给英国笔友Mike 写一封信，介绍考生的高中校园以及开学一个月来你的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
参加：take part in→participate in
获得：gain→attain
各种各样的：various→diverse
收获的：rewarding→fulfilling
2.句式拓展：
同义句
原句：Learning that you’re interested in Chinese senior high school life, I’m writing to share mine with you.
拓展句：Since I have learned that you’re interested in Chinese senior high school life, I’m writing to share mine with you.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Learning that you’ re interested in Chinese senior high school life, I’m writing to share mine with you.（运用现在分词短语作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型 2】After class, we can take part in various activities, like club events, and also some volunteer work, which not only help us gain more skills but also teach us to care about others.（运用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句）/ 让教学更有效 高效备考 | 英语学科
2025年秋人教版高一上册期中考前押题必练--书面表达
类型 篇章
一．续写类 Passage 1-2
二．书信类 Passage 3-5
三．解决问题类 Passage 6-9
四．介绍分享类 Passage 10-13
Passage 1
一、续写类
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus (马戏团). Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.
This family made a big impression on me. There were four children, all probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money.
Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, and all of them were standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns (小丑), elephants, and other acts they would see that night with their brothers or sisters in a low voice.
One could sense they had never been to the circus before. It promised to be highlight of their young lives. The father and mother were at the head of the crowd, standing proud as they could be. The mother was holding her husband’s hand, looking up at him as if to say, “You are my knight (骑士) in shining armor (盔甲).” He was smiling and responding (回复) in pride, looking back at her as if to say, “You got that right.”
The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded, “Please let me buy four children’s tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus.”
The ticket lady gave the price. The wife let go of her husband’s hand. Her head dropped, and his lips began to shake. There was no longer a smile on the man’s face. He quietly asked, “How much did you say ”
The ticket lady told him the price again. It was clear that the man didn’t have enough money. But how could he tell his kids the bad news
Actually we were not rich in any sense. So I understood how the kids would feel. I felt sorry for them.
注意：
1. 所需写的短文词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好;
Paragraph 1
Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $50 bill and dropped it on the ground.
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Paragraph 2
That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.
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Passage 2
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a sunny day. Anabia, an 11-year-old girl, was excited because today was the drawing contest at her school. Anabia was really good at drawing and usually got the highest marks in art. Her teachers would often ask her to make posters for school plays and call on her during free periods to help with cuttings, drawing, shading, colouring and much more. There was an art competition taking place in school and Anabia had worked really hard and wanted to win it. But there was one thing that was disturbing her today.
Recently, a new girl, Rida, had joined her class. She was also interested in art but she was not as good at drawing as Anabia was. Miss Saima, the art teacher, helped Rida and taught her tips and tricks to improve her drawing skill. And now Rida was also considered among the best artists in grade six.
Rida was quick, smart and intelligent. Anabia became jealous of Rida’s intelligence and felt that the new girl would be tough to beat.
So that day, for the art competition, Miss Saima took all the students to the art room, told them their roll numbers and gave important instructions. Anabia’s roll number was 16, while Rida was number 17. The bell rang, indicating the beginning of the contest. Miss Saima wrote on the board: make a scene of a sunset with a flowing river and a sailing boat.
Anabia knew that the best tools to make a sunset were oil pastels (油画棒). Anabia started to look for her oil pastels in her art bag. Then, after looking through the bag, she remembered that she had left them at home. Immediately, she got up to tell Miss Saima.
Miss Saima was disappointed at Anabia’s carelessness and told her that she could not help her, as it was her responsibility to come prepared for the contest that had been announced a week in advance. Anabia’s best friends were also there, but none of them offered to share anything, much to Anabia’s surprise and disappointment.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Anabia’ s eyes filled with tears.
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Then Rida held Anabia’s hand, and the two girls waited for the winners to be announced.
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二．书信类
Passage 3
3．假设你是李华，你的英国网友Jack最近在中国学习。他写信向你述说了他的困扰：不适应新的生活和学习环境，感到很焦虑。请你根据以下要点写一封回信。内容包括：
（1）.表示理解并给予安慰;
（2）.提出合理建议。
注意：1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having a difficult time.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 4
4．为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jessica，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：高中学习压力较大，导致自己近期比较焦虑且容易发脾气，从而影响了正常的学习和生活。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下：1. 表示理解并给予安慰；2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Worried,
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Yours,
Jessica
Passage 5
5．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack最近选修了中文这门课程，遇到了不少困难，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回信。
要点：1. 对他进行安慰；
2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、解决问题类
Passage 6
6．主题—How to establish a good relationship with your parents
青春期时，你与父母之间经历激烈的争论和冰冷的沉默是很正常的。父母都对自己的孩子有很高的期望。他们希望你成功，但是他们也许没有看见你是如何奋斗的。如果你没有取得好成绩，他们会认为你没有尽力，因此会更加严格，这样会造成家庭关系的紧张。
解决方式：经常与你父母进行交流，让他们理解你的感受；站在父母的立场考虑问题，仔细倾听并设法消除他们的担忧。
结论：通过共同努力，你和你的父母可以建立起良好的关系。
写作要求：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How to establish a good relationship with your parents
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Passage 7
7．假定你是李华，你在学校英语学习论坛上看到了你的同校同学Simon发布的以下求助帖。请给他回帖，内容包括：
(1)你对他的困扰的看法;
(2)你的建议。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Forum: English Learning
User: Simon
Post: I feel so anxious about my English I work hard, but I just can’t seem to improve. I have to look up every other word when I read, and I’m too nervous to speak in class. Does anyone have any good strategies I’m starting to lose confidence.
Your Reply:
Hi Simon,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 8
8．假定你是李华，你的好友Wayne刚升入高中，他给你发邮件表示高中快节奏的学习和繁重的课业让他感到压力很大，难以适应。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示理解；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Wayne,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 9
9．假设你是中学生李华，你的朋友Eric刚进入高中，面对学校的各种社团不知道如何选择，发邮件向你询问。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 提出建议并说明理由；
3. 表达美好希望。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
四．介绍分享类
Passage 10
10．假如你是高一新生李华，进入高中学习已经一个月，现在请你以“My New School Life”为主题，描述下你对高一生活的感受。
要点如下：
（1）对校园的印象。
（2）感触最深的人或事。
（3）谈谈学习英语的感受。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100字；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 11
11．进入高中，挑战与机遇并存。只有设定好目标并朝着目标努力奋进才能实现个人潜能。请你就设定目标展开写作，具体包括以下几点：
1. 设定目标的重要性；
2. 如何设定目标。
要求：词数 100 左右；适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 12
12．假定你是李华，收到了你校国际班同学王磊的来信，请给他回信，内容如下：
1.表示理解; 2.提出建议; 3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右; 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua,
Hope you’re doing well! I’ve been a bit stuck since the new term started.
High school lessons are harder than junior high, and I often can’t finish homework on time. But I really want to join the basketball club — yet. I’m scared it’ll make my studies worse. Every day I’m torn between them and don’t know how to manage time.
You seem to balance study and hobbies well. Could you share some tips with me I’d be really grateful!
Yours,
Wang Lei
Dear Wang Lei,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 13
13．假定你是高一新生李华，你的英国笔友 Mike 对中国高中校园生活很感兴趣。请你用英语给他写一封信，内容包括：
1.介绍你的高中校园；
2.开学一个月来你的感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
I hope this letter finds you well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
