【期中考点突破】突破01 书面表达-话题作文（含答案解析）--2025-2026学年八年级英语上册期中复习考点突破仁爱科普版（2024）

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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册期中复习考点突破仁爱科普版（2024）突破01 书面表达-话题作文
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1．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A wonderful job in my eyes”（以“你眼中的美好工作”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as the reference（以下内容仅供参考）：
●What is a wonderful job in your eyes
●What do people do in the job
●Is the job important, interesting or challenging (有挑战性的) Why
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2．你对你的将来有什么打算？你有哪些理想？为了实现自己的理想，你会怎么做？请以“My dream job”为题，写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：
1. What is your dream job
2. Why do you like the dream job
3. How are you going to do that
要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My dream job
Everyone has his dream job. I also have my dream job. My dream job
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3．假如你是李华，你们学校正在举办“英语特色活动周”活动，英语社团组织开展以“说梦想，话未来”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的梦想职业。
内容包括以下要点：
1. 你梦想的职业是什么；
2. 你选择这一职业的原因；
3. 你打算如何去实现它。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名；
2. 词数约60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Dream Job
Boys and girls! It’s my honor to speak here. Today, I’d like to talk about my dream job in the future. I want to be…
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4．今天英语课上我们学习了关于职业的话题， 了解了兴趣的重要性，老师给我们布置了写作任务，以“My hobby and my career”为题，用英文写一篇不少于70 词的短文。短文要包含以下内容：
1. 你有什么兴趣爱好？
2. 你是怎样培养你的爱好的？
3. 是否想把你的兴趣爱好变成你将来的职业？
My hobby and my career
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5．我们每个人都有自己的梦想，有人想成为老师，有人想成为医生，有人想成为科学家，那么你的梦想是什么？请以“On the Way to My Dream”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的梦想，并谈谈在实现梦想的路上，你会怎么做。
要求：
1. 注意语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计；
3. 短文必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分；
4. 抄袭试题中阅读部分的，抄袭部分不得分。
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6．习近平总书记在2025年新年贺词中说道：“梦虽遥，追则能达；愿虽艰，持则可圆。”校英文报现正征稿，请你结合自身实际谈谈你的梦想，该梦想的原因及如何实现，以“Fighting for dreams”为题写一篇短文投稿。写作要求：
1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯；
4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。
Fighting for Dreams
Everyone has a dream. My dream is
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7．2025年春节档影片《哪吒2》重磅上映，它不仅仅是一个关于神话英雄的故事，更是一部关于成长、梦想和命运的励志之作。请你结合提示和自身实际，以“Fighting for Dreams”为题写一篇不少于90词的短文，谈谈你的梦想是什么，具体原因及如何实现。注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Fighting for Dreams
Everyone has a dream. My dream is
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8．中国历史，源远流长。中国的很多手工艺品、美食、植物等事物都能展现出中国文化的博大精深，体现中华民族的传统美德。请以“The Cultural Symbol of China” 为主题，写一篇英语短文。
内容要点：1．描述你选择的事物；
2．阐述你选择的理由；
3．表达此事物对你的影响。
写作要求：1．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2．词数100左右。
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9．本卷阅读理解C篇介绍了中国传统乐器唢呐。近年来，除了传统乐器，京剧、汉服(hanfu)、书法(calligraphy)、茶艺、剪纸等中国传统文化也受到了越来越多人的喜爱。校英文报正在组织主题为“Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture”的征文活动, 请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿。先介绍你最喜欢的一种传统文化的形式和特点，再分享你体验这种传统文化的经历，最后谈谈你的收获及感受。
写作要点：
1. Your favorite form of traditional Chinese culture.
2. Your experience with this traditional culture.
3. Your feelings about the experience.
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, many people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture.
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10．中国传统服装越来越受年轻人的欢迎。假如《学习周报》正在以“Traditional Chinese Clothes”为主题举办征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
1. 介绍你最喜欢的中国传统服装（风格、材质······）；
2. 喜欢的理由；
3. 如何向全世界推广的建议。
In recent years, more and more young people would like to try traditional Chinese clothes. They become a new fashion.
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11．书法、剪纸、绘画、戏曲、汉服等，这些中国传统艺术有着几千年的积累，透着五千年中华文明古国深厚的文化底蕴。请你根据自己的见闻或经历，从众多中国传统艺术中选择一种，以“Traditional Chinese Art and Me”为题，向来自美国的外教老师 Ms. Smith 讲述一段你与中国传统艺术之间的故事，并写出你的感受。
要求：
1. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
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12．同学们好，《中学生英语报》正在征集发扬中国传统文化的文章，请大家以Chinese Traditional Skill为题，向报社投稿。词数：80左右。
要求：
1. 围绕主题，进行叙述；
2. 鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分；
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名；
4. 字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范。
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13．中国传统节日是中华民族丰富多彩的文化的重要组成部分。假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展以“Traditional Chinese Festivals”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文投稿，介绍中秋节的习俗和意义，并描述今年的中秋节你是如何度过的。
要求：
1. 内容充实，行文连贯；
2. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰；
3. 词数90左右。
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14．某国外旅游杂志向你约稿，请你以“When in China, do as the Chinese do!”为题，用英语写一篇短文。向西方读者介绍中国的问候方式、饮食文化、餐桌礼仪等。
1.词数100左右。
2.内容合理，句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，语意通顺，书写规范。
3.不得出现真实的人名和班级等相关信息。
When in China, do as the Chinese do!
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15．假设你校英语社团正在开展征文比赛，请你根据所学内容及写作要求，以“The Story of Yu Gong”为题写一篇短文投稿参赛。
写作内容：
1. 移山原因 (two mountains... )
2. 故事发展的过程 (call on his family...laugh at...keep digging...)
3. 故事结局 (A god was moved...)
4. 你的感悟 (至少2点)
写作要求：
1. 短文必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 字数不少于80词；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
Zhi Sou (n. 智叟)
The Story of Yu Gong
Once upon a time, there lived an old man called Yu Gong.
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16．健康是学业进步与愉快生活的基石。作为九年级学生，保持身心健康有助于我们更好地迎接毕业与升学的挑战。学校英语月刊拟开设“Health”专栏，现以“How to Keep a Healthy Life”为题征集短文，诚邀你从饮食、运动、心态三个方面，分享自己在日常生活中践行健康生活的做法，并提出你的倡议。
注意：
1.词数为80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：diet (n. 饮食), regularly (adv. 有规律地), positive (adj. 乐观的)
How to Keep a Healthy Life
Keeping a healthy life is important for everyone!
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17．享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？学校英语报正在征集稿件，请以“Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，并谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。
要求：
1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，不少于80个字；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
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18．新学期开始了，我校《紫荆校园》月刊英语专栏正在开展“My plan for the new term”主题征文活动。请你围绕学习、运动、饮食和娱乐等方面，撰写一篇英文计划投稿，并说明计划的原因。注意事项：
1.词数为80词左右；
2.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及班级名称。
参考词汇：preview (v.预习)，balanced diet (平衡饮食)，positive (adj.乐观的)
My plan for the new term
As the new term starts, I have a plan to
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19．假设你所在的学校正在开展“健康生活周”活动，请你以“How to Be a Healthy Student”为标题，在班上分享一下你保持健康的方式，并呼吁大家行动起来，践行这些健康方式。
要求：
1. 内容必须包含提示中所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级及姓名；
3. 词数80左右。
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20．运动有益健康。作为一名中学生，你喜欢运动吗？你最喜欢的一项运动是什么？你是如何进行这项运动的？请你以“My favourite sport”为题，根据下面的要点提示写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. 你最喜爱的一项运动是什么；
2. 你做这项运动的时间，方式，……；
3. 这项运动带给你的好处（至少两点）。
注意：
1. 词数为70左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：keep healthy(保持健康)；relaxed(adj. 放松的)；team spirit(团队精神)
My favourite sport
It’s very important for us to do sports. My favourite sport is
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参考答案及试题解析
1．
A wonderful job in my eyes
A wonderful job in my eyes is being a doctor. Doctors are responsible for diagnosing illnesses, prescribing treatments, and caring for patients. They work tirelessly to save lives and improve people’s health. This job is wonderful because it requires a high level of skill and dedication, and it has a profound impact on individuals and communities. Doctors bring hope and healing, making a significant difference in the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：话题作文
②时态：一般现在时（描述普遍事实和个人观点）
③提示：需回答三个问题：眼中的美好工作是什么、工作内容、该工作的重要性/趣味性/挑战性及原因
[写作步骤]
1. 第一步：明确主题——直接点明心中最美好的职业，呼应题目要求。
2. 第二步：分层回答——用2-3句描述工作内容，再用1-2句说明其重要性。
3. 第三步：总结升华——用简单句表达个人感悟，强调工作的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①caring for照顾
②high level of skill高水平的技能
③profound impact深远影响
[高分句型]
This job is wonderful because it requires a high level of skill and dedication, and it has a profound impact on individuals and communities.（because引导的原因状语从句）
2．例文
My dream job
Everyone has his dream job. I also have my dream job. My dream job is to be a doctor in the future.
I think it is a great and interesting job. First, I can help many patients to be healthy. So I can find joy in the job. Second, I think I can also help my family and myself if I become a doctor. Third, I think I can learn a lot from my job. Being a doctor needs hard work. Besides, I can meet different people in my job and I can learn something from them.
To realize my dream, I will study harder. Then I will go to a university to learn something about being a doctor. I’m sure I will realize my dream one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作需涵盖梦想职业、喜欢的原因、实现的做法，需保证内容连贯，细节丰富，且避免出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，直接说明自己的梦想职业；
第二步，阐述喜欢该梦想职业的原因，可从职业价值、个人收获等角度展开；
第三步，说明为实现梦想职业将采取的具体行动，最后表达实现梦想的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①patient病人
②different people不同的人
③hard work努力工作
④realize one’s dream实现某人的梦想
[高分句型]
①I think it is a great and interesting job. (宾语从句，清晰表达对职业的看法)
②To realize my dream, I will study harder. (动词不定式“to do”表目的，清晰呈现实现梦想的步骤)
3．例文
My Dream Job Boys and girls! It’s my honor to speak here. Today, I’d like to talk about my dream job in the future. I want to be a doctor. I’ve always been inspired by doctors’ ability to relieve patients’ pain and even save lives. When I see people suffering from illnesses, I wish I could help them. To achieve this dream, I’ll study diligently in all subjects, especially biology and chemistry. I’ll also read medical books in my spare time and try to volunteer in hospitals to gain experience. I believe with hard work, I can become a good doctor one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：围绕“我的理想职业”展开，介绍自己想成为医生的理想，阐述选择该职业的原因以及为实现理想将采取的行动等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇以礼貌用语问候听众；
第二步，详细阐述选择成为医生的原因；
第三步，说明为实现当医生的梦想将采取的具体行动，如努力学习各科知识、空闲时读医学书籍、尝试在医院做志愿者积累经验，最后表达通过努力终将成为好医生的信念。
[亮点词汇]
①dream job理想职业
②relieve pain缓解痛苦
③achieve the dream实现梦想
④diligently努力地
[高分句型]
①I’ve always been inspired by doctors’ ability to relieve patients’ pain and even save lives. (被动语态)
4．例文
My hobby and my career
Different people have different hobbies. My hobby is playing basketball.
When I was young, my family lived next to a stadium. My father used to take my sister and me to play basketball on weekends. From then on I began to love playing basketball. I spend all my free time playing basketball because I want to be a player in the future. I know teamwork is the most important in basketball games, so I have to practice hard.
It is important to follow our interests, so I want to turn my interest into my career. And I will love it forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生写作时应注意紧扣题目要求，涵盖爱好是什么、如何培养爱好、是否想转化为职业等要点，根据实际情况可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明不同人有不同爱好，引出自己的爱好是打篮球；
第二步，讲述因小时候家邻体育场，父亲周末带自己和姐姐打球，从而培养出对篮球的热爱，以及为未来成为球员，利用空闲时间练习篮球，深知团队合作重要性并努力训练；
第三步，结尾表明遵循兴趣将爱好转化为职业的决心，强调会永远热爱。
[亮点词汇]
① different hobbies 不同爱好
② used to 过去常常
③ from then on 从那时起
④ spend ... doing sth. 花费……做某事
⑤ turn ... into ... 把……变成……
[高分句型]
① When I was young, my family lived next to a stadium. (含时间状语从句的复合句)
② I know teamwork is the most important in basketball games, so I have to practice hard. (含宾语从句和结果状语从句的复合句)
5．例文
On the Way to My Dream
Everyone has a dream. Dreams can make us better and better. As for me, I want to be a doctor.
When I was 10 years old, I hurt my leg badly. I felt sad. My doctor looked after me and encouraged me. He brought hope to me. From then on, I decided to be a doctor like him. I know it’s difficult but I’m not afraid. I will study hard so that I can go to a medical university. I need to learn how to get on well with others. It’s important for a doctor, too.
All in all, I’ll try my best to be a doctor. And I believe my dream can come true. Could you share your dream with me
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 目的：表达自己的人生理想，并阐述为实现梦想所做的努力与信念，传递积极价值观。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的梦想；
第二步，介绍自己产生这个梦想的原因；
第三步，介绍自己在实现梦想的路上要做的事情；
第四步，总结全文，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②look after照顾
③get on well with与……相处融洽
⑤come true 实现
[高分句型]
①When I was 10 years old, I hurt my leg badly.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I know it’s difficult, but I’m not afraid.（省略that的宾语从句）
6．例文
Fighting for Dreams
Everyone has a dream. My dream is to become a teacher. Last year, my math teacher patiently helped me solve problems, and I was deeply inspired by her kindness. This experience touched me profoundly, making me realize that teachers have the power to transform students’ lives.
To turn my dream into reality, I should study academic subjects diligently and explore educational books in my free time. Additionally, I’ve volunteered to help classmates with their homework, which has improved my communication skills and deepened my understanding of teaching.
I firmly believe that as long as I persist, I will stand on the teaching platform one day. As the old saying goes, “Dreams, though distant, can be reached if pursued; wishes, though difficult, can be fulfilled if persevered in.”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，通过个人经历引出梦想，强调教师职业的意义；
第二步，从理论学习和实践积累两方面，展现追梦的实际行动；
第三步，用坚定信念+名言引用强化主题，首尾呼应。
[亮点词汇]
①as long as 只要
②turn one’s dream into reality 将某人的梦想变为现实
[高分句型]
①I firmly believe that as long as I persist, I will stand on the teaching platform one day. (宾语从句、条件状语从句)
②Additionally, I’ve volunteered to help classmates with their homework, which has improved my communication skills and deepened my understanding of teaching. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．例文
Fighting for Dreams
Everyone has a dream. My dream is to become a doctor. The main reason is that I want to help sick people, especially those who can’t afford medical care.
Last year, my grandmother was seriously ill. Seeing doctors save her life made me realize how meaningful this job is. To achieve my dream, I will study harder, especially in science subjects like biology and chemistry. I also plan to read more medical books during holidays. Every morning I do exercise to keep healthy because a doctor needs strong energy.
No matter how difficult it is, I’ll never give up. Just like Ne Zha in the movie who fought against his fate, I believe hard work will make my dream come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，介绍自己的梦想；
第二步，结合提示和自身实际，介绍自己为什么想当医生，计划如何做；
第三步，表示自己的决心，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②give up放弃
[高分句型]
①Every morning I do exercise to keep healthy because a doctor needs strong energy. （原因状语从句）
②Just like Ne Zha in the movie who fought against his fate, I believe hard work will make my dream come true.（宾语从句，定语从句）
8．One possible version:
The Cultural Symbol of China
China has many cultural symbols, and paper cutting is one of the most famous. Paper cutting is a traditional art. People use red paper and scissors to cut it into different shapes, like animals, flowers or people. These shapes are full of life and color.
I choose paper cutting because it shows the wisdom of Chinese people. It has a long history and is popular in China. During festivals, people put paper cutting on windows, which means good luck and happiness.
Paper cutting influences me a lot. It makes me love traditional culture. I enjoy making paper cutting in my free time. It helps me relax and learn more about China’s past. I hope more people will like this amazing art.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，选择“剪纸艺术”作为重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述选择剪纸的理由；
第三步，具体介绍剪纸对自己的影响，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①one of the most...最……的之一
②be full of充满
③have a long history历史悠久
④enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①I choose paper cutting because it shows the wisdom of Chinese people.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②During festivals, people put paper cutting on windows, which means good luck and happiness.（which引导的定语从句）
③I hope more people will like this amazing art.（省略that的宾语从句）
9．
例文：
Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, many people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture. My favorite traditional Chinese culture is calligraphy. It has a long history and has influenced many people.
I started learning calligraphy at eight. At first, it was challenging for me to use the brush to write Chinese characters. My hand would ache after holding the brush for a long time. Luckily, with the help of my teacher, I gradually improved. Now, I can write Chinese characters very well. It makes me proud.
Learning calligraphy has a great influence on me. I become more patient and careful thanks to years of practice. I also feel honored to be able to pass down this traditional Chinese culture.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“传播传统文化”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。“你最喜欢的中国传统文化形式”、“你对这种传统文化的体验”、“对这段经历的感受”；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be able to do sth. 能够做某事
②feel honored 倍感荣幸
③pass down 传承；传递
④has a great influence on… 对……有巨大影响
⑤thanks to 幸亏，由于
[高分句型]
①At first, it was challenging for me to use the brush to write Chinese characters. (It +be+形容词+for sb+ to do sth.)
②I also feel honored to be able to pass down this traditional Chinese culture.(用于表达对做某事感到荣幸以及表示有能力做某事)
10．范文：
In recent years, more and more young people would like to try traditional Chinese clothes. They become a new fashion.
Of all the traditional Chinese clothes, I like hanfu best. They’re usually loose with a belt. They’re made of different materials, like cotton and silk.
Hanfu are very beautiful. They’re suitable for people of all ages. They’re always comfortable to wear. So they’re popular with young people now.
Wearing hanfu is a good way to show our traditional culture to the world. Maybe we can have some hanfu festivals and give some hanfu shows in holidays.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢的中国传统服饰；
第二步，说明自己喜欢的理由；
第三步，提出向全世界推广的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① are made of由……组成
② are suitable for适合……
③ people of all ages各个年龄阶段的人
[高分句型]
①Wearing hanfu is a good way to show our traditional culture to the world.(动名词作主语)
②Maybe we can have some hanfu festivals and give some hanfu shows in holidays.(and并列句)
11．例文：
Traditional Chinese Art and Me Today I’m glad to introduce my favorite traditional Chinese art, paper cutting to you.
Paper cutting is a kind of folk art in China, with a history of more than 1,500 years. People cut different pictures of people, animals or plants with knives or scissors on red paper. I’ve been practicing paper cutting for more than five years. It’s such a wonderful art form that I fell in love with it the first time I came across it. Firstly, it’s a perfect way to train me to be patient and careful. Secondly, paper cutting works are great presents for my family and friends on special occasions.
Paper cutting is part of Chinese culture that all Chinese people should be proud of. And I want to spread it to others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给要求完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，详细介绍剪纸以及你与剪纸之间的故事；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①folk art民间艺术
②with a history of…有着……的历史
③practice练习
④fall in love with爱上
⑥came across偶然遇见
⑦be proud of…为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
It’s such a wonderful art form that I fell in love with it the first time I came across it. (such…that…引导结果状语从句)
12．例文：
Chinese Traditional Skill
Dear editors,
Traditional Chinese culture plays an important role in the development of our society. We should learn about them.
My favorite traditional Chinese skill is paper cutting. Paper cutting has been around for over 1,500 years. It sounds very easy but it can be difficult to do. The paper, usually red is folded before it is cut with scissors. The most common pictures are flowers, animals, and things about Chinese history. During the Spring Festival, they are put on windows, doors and walls as symbols of wishes and good luck and a happy new year. I like paper cutting because it shows the things that are important in life, such as love, beauty and family. I think paper cutting is very interesting, and I hope more and more people will learn it.
Each of Chinese should feel proud about our national wealth inherited from our ancestors. Moreover, we should devote great efforts in protecting and developing them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍中国传统文化的重要性；
第二步，具体介绍自己喜欢的中国传统技艺的一些情况；
第三步，最后表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① learn about了解
② play an important role in在……中起重要作用
[高分句型]
① I think paper cutting is very interesting, and I hope more and more people will learn it.（宾语从句）
② I like paper cutting because it shows the things that are important in life（because引导的原因状语从句）
13．例文：
The Mid-Autumn Festival, an important part of Chinese traditional culture, symbolizes reunion and harmony. It falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month every year.
People usually get together to enjoy the bright moonlight and eat mooncakes. This festival not only brings families closer but also strengthens the sense of belonging among Chinese people.
This year, I spent the Mid-Autumn Festival with my family, enjoying the delicious mooncakes and the beautiful night sky. Thanks to this festival, I felt a deeper connection with my family and culture.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，描述今年中秋节的经历时可用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点包括中秋节的习俗和意义，以及今年中秋节的个人经历，需确保内容完整且条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。简要介绍中秋节在中国传统文化中的重要地位，引出下文对中秋节习俗和意义的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细描述中秋节的习俗（如赏月、吃月饼）和意义（象征团圆和和谐），并分享今年中秋节的个人经历；
第三步，书写结语。表达对中秋节的喜爱和对未来中秋节的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①important part of……的重要部分
②symbolize象征
③get together聚会
[高分句型]
This festival not only brings families closer but also strengthens the sense of belonging among Chinese people.（not only...but also...）
14．例文
When in China, do as the Chinese do!
Visiting China Welcome! To enjoy your trip, knowing some local customs is helpful. A friendly smile and a nod work well. We usually shake hands gently, especially at first meetings. Unlike hugs or kisses, a warm “Ni Hao!” is perfect. Chinese food is delicious and diverse! Meals are often shared. You’ll see many dishes on the table for everyone to try. Using chopsticks is common—don’t worry if you’re new, practice is fun! Wait for the host to invite you to start eating. It’s polite to try a bit of everything.
Don’t stick chopsticks upright in your rice bowl, because it resembles incense sticks for the dead. When finished, placing chopsticks across your bowl is fine. By respecting these traditions, you’ll feel more welcome and have a wonderful experience in China!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍中国的问候方式、饮食文化、餐桌礼仪等；
第二步，补充说明一些禁忌，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①wait for等待
②invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It’s polite to try a bit of everything.（it is adj to do sth固定句型）
15．例文
The Story of Yu Gong
Once upon a time, there lived an old man called Yu Gong. There were two big mountains in front of his house, so it took a long time to walk around them. Yu Gong called on his family to move the mountains. A wise man, Zhi Sou, laughed at him, but Yu Gong said his family would keep going until the mountains were moved. Finally, a god was moved by their determination and helped move the mountains.
This story tells us that nothing is impossible if we work hard. We should never give up when facing difficulties.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的信息，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出《愚公移山》的故事；
第二步，根据提示内容，从移山的原因、过程和结局展开阐述；
第三步，抒发你对故事的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①once upon a time从前
②in front of在……前面
③call on号召
④give up放弃
[高分句型]
①There were two big mountains in front of his house, so it took a long time to walk around them.（There be句型+so引导的结果状语从句）
②A wise man, Zhi Sou, laughed at him, but Yu Gong said his family would keep going until the mountains were moved.（省略that的宾语从句+until引导的时间状语从句）
③This story tells us that nothing is impossible if we work hard.（that引导的宾语从句+if引导条件状语从句）
16．One possible version:
How to Keep a Healthy Life
Keeping a healthy life is important for everyone! It helps us keep healthy both in body and mind. Here are my ways to live healthily.
First of all, it’s important for me to keep a balanced diet. I have vegetables, fruit and milk every day and I seldom eat fast food. Secondly, I do exercise regularly. I play basketball for about 40 minutes every day. It makes me strong and happy. Last but not least, I stay positive and keep smiling every day. When I feel stressed, I listen to music to relax myself.
Let’s live a healthy and happy life together!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：根据题目要求，需从饮食、运动、心态三个方面展开，并提出倡议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接引入主题，说明健康生活的重要性；
第二步，阐述饮食、运动、心态的具体做法；
第三步，提出倡议，呼吁大家共同践行健康生活。
[亮点词汇]
① balanced diet 均衡饮食
② fast food 快餐
③ do exercise 做运动
④ stay positive 保持积极
[高分句型]
When I feel stressed, I listen to music to relax myself.（时间状语从句）
17．参考范文
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
Cycling is one of my favorite sports. It always makes me relaxed and full of energy.
It was sunny last Saturday morning. After finishing my schoolwork, I felt a little bit tired. So I went cycling along the road in a forest not far from my home. What great beauty of nature it was when I got close to it! Colorful flowers were smiling at me. Birds were flying here and there in the trees and they never stopped singing. Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster. I got relaxed and refreshed at once. What an enjoyment of cycling it is!
I enjoy my life by doing sports.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动；
第二步，具体阐述自己运动的经历；
第三步，最后总结全文，通过运动可以享受生活。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb. adj.使某人处于……状态
②get close to接近
③far from远离
[高分句型]
①Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②What an enjoyment of cycling it is! （感叹句）
18．例文：
My plan for the new term
As the new term starts, I have a plan to make myself better. For study, I’ll preview lessons before class and review them after school to understand better. For sports, I plan to run every morning to keep fit. As for diet, I’ll eat more vegetables and fruits for a balanced diet. For entertainment, I’ll spend less time on games and more on reading to broaden my horizons. I believe this plan will help me become more positive and successful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应围绕学习、运动、饮食和娱乐等方面撰写计划，并适当增加细节，同时说明计划的原因，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“新学期开始，我有一个计划”来引出下文计划的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学习（预习、复习）、运动（跑步）、饮食（平衡饮食）、娱乐（阅读）”几个方面重点介绍计划的具体情况，并说明原因；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望新学期能更积极乐观”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①have a plan to有计划做某事
②as for至于
③a balanced diet均衡饮食
④broaden one’s horizons拓宽某人的视野
[高分句型]
①I’ll preview lessons before class and review them after school to understand better.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I believe this plan will help me become more positive and successful.（宾语从句）
19．例文：
How to Be a Healthy Student
To be a healthy student, we can start with several aspects.
First, develop good eating habits. Eat plenty of fruits, vegetables, and whole grains. Avoid too much junk food as it’s bad for our health.
Second, do sports regularly. Activities like running, playing basketball, or swimming can strengthen our bodies and keep us energetic.
Third, ensure enough sleep. We should have at least 8 hours of sleep every night. Adequate sleep helps our brains rest and improves our learning efficiency.
Let’s all take action to follow these healthy ways and enjoy a healthy life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇分享保持健康方式的短文，围绕如何成为一个健康的学生展开；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中饮食习惯、运动、充足睡眠的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出健康方式的重要性并呼吁践行。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出保持健康的几个方面；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从饮食习惯、运动、充足睡眠几方面，说明保持健康的方式；
第三步，书写结语。发出呼吁，结束短文。
[亮点词汇]
①develop培养
②whole grains全谷物
③strengthen增强
④adequate充足的
[高分句型]
①First, develop good eating habits. Eat plenty of fruits, vegetables, and whole grains. Avoid too much junk food as it’s bad for our health. (first开启方式介绍，as引导原因状语从句，说明远离垃圾食品的原因)
②Activities like running, playing basketball, or swimming can strengthen our bodies and keep us energetic. (like举例说明运动类型，and连接并列作用)
③We should have at least 8 hours of sleep every night. Adequate sleep helps our brains rest and improves our learning efficiency. (at least说明睡眠时长，and连接睡眠的好处)
20．例文：
My favourite sport
It’s very important for us to do sports. My favourite sport is basketball. I play it with my classmates after school every day.
Playing basketball is not only fun but also keeps me healthy. It helps me build strong muscles and improves my endurance. Besides, it teaches me teamwork and how to cooperate with others. Whenever I feel stressed, playing basketball makes me relaxed and happy.
In short, basketball is more than just a sport for me. It brings me health, joy, and good friendships.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括最喜欢的运动、进行这项运动的时间和方式，以及这项运动带来的好处，需确保所有要点都被涵盖，并适当发挥，使内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图，直接点明自己最喜欢的运动是篮球。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。详细描述进行这项运动的时间和方式以及这项运动带来的好处。
第三步：总结全文，表达自己对篮球的喜爱和篮球对自己的重要意义。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②improve endurance提高耐力
③cooperate with与……合作
[高分句型]
①Playing basketball is not only fun but also keeps me healthy. (not only...but also...)
②Whenever I feel stressed, playing basketball makes me relaxed and happy. (whenever引导时间状语从句)
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