【单元考点培优】Unit 7 专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优

2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优人教新目标Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假设你们学校校报开展英语征文，题目为“Follow and Grow (家规促成长)”，请你写一篇英文短文投稿，文章包括以下内容：
1．两条家规；
2．对你的影响；
3．如何回报你家。
要求： 1.词数90左右；
2．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不能出现任何真实信息。
Follow and Grow
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2．英语课上，同学们针对大部分学校要求学生住校的现状,就“Would you like to live in school ”这一话题展开讨论。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，表达你的意愿并阐述理由。
大部分学生 愿意 1.方便与同学交流； 2.学会照顾自己
一些学生 不愿意 1.在家能休息得更好； 2.与家人相处时间更长
你 …… ……
注意：
1.词数 80～100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Would you like to live in school We had a discussion about it and here are the results.
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3．安全对每个人都很重要。为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，你校将开展以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示及要求，以“Safety rules at school”为题写一篇演讲稿，介绍你们在学校应该注意的安全准则。
提示：1. 上、下楼梯不要拥挤；2. 不要从楼上往下扔杂物；3. 玩耍时不能使用刀等尖锐物品；4. 在学校不抽烟、不喝酒。
要求：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4. 演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Safety rules at school
Hello, everyone! It’s important for us to keep safe at school. To be safe, we must follow these rules at school.
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That’s all. Thank you!
4．假设你是张鹏，临近毕业考试，你的朋友刘宇写信向你倾诉。他热爱跳舞并且获得过多次比赛的大奖。长大后他想成为一名专业的舞者。但是父母不支持他花大量时间练习，而是觉得他应该把所有时间用于文化学习，获得好的成绩，考上理想的高中学校。请你用英语给他回信，说一说你的看法和建议。要点：
1.向刘宇表示理解和支持；
2.青少年应该被允许做出自己的决定及原因；
3.解决与父母矛盾的有效方法。
参考词汇：win big prizes, professional dancer, communicate with
要求：
1.文章须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Liu Yu,
I’m happy to receive your letter
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Yours,
Zhang Peng
5．请结合下面两幅图片，以“How to behave at school ”为题写一篇短文。
要求：
1. 简要描述两幅图片，并谈谈自己在学校应该怎么做（至少两点）；
2. 80词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
参考词汇：beat，kick（踢），make fun of，respect（尊重），harmonious（和谐的）
How to behave at school
There is something unpleasant happening at school.
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6．每个人都是独一无二的，都会发出自身特有的光芒。结合自己的爱好、性格和生活经历，以“What I like about myself”为题，并根据写作要点和写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。
写作要点：（1）你喜欢自己的哪些方面；
（2）你喜欢的原因是什么；
写作要求：（1）文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）词数不少于80词。（文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
What I like about myself
Everyone is special, so am I. What I like about myself is
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7．如今很多中学生开始学开车，极个别学生甚至开车上学。学校要求穿校服，但是一些学生拒绝穿校服。针对这些不良现象，请以“Rules”为题，谈谈你的观点。80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
内容包括：1.喜欢开车的理由：很酷；向同伴炫耀（show off）；
2.不想穿校服的理由：不时尚；
3.不允许开车的理由：危险；没有驾照；
4.穿校服的理由：学校要求；
5.你的看法。
Rules
Now more and more families have cars. Children, especially
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8．假如你是Lin Tao，你的父母对于你要求过多，过于严格，你有点感到厌烦。你准备在家庭会议上发表自己的看法以及解决方法。请根据下列提示，准备一篇发言稿。90词左右。
提示：
1.父母的要求：每天打扫房间，不能玩电脑，晚上10点之前必须睡觉.....
2. 你的看法：太过于严厉，但是有些能理解.....
3. 解决方法：与父母多多交流，希望他们相信自己，允许自己做一些自己的决定....
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9．升入九年级之后，你有没有经常和父母争执周末是否可以外出活动？请以“Are teenagers allowed to go out on weekends ”为题，根据所给提示写一篇英语短文。
写作提示：
1. What’s your parents’ opinion
2. What’s your opinion
写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2. 100词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Are teenagers allowed to go out on weekends
I often argue with my parents about whether teenagers should go out on weekends after I am in Grade 9.
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10．升入九年级后，很多家长不允许孩子周末参加艺术培训班，认为会影响学习。请以“Should teenagers be allowed to take art classes on weekends ”为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示：1. 父母的观点：影响学习，学业繁重；
2. 你的观点：放松心情，培养兴趣；
3. 你的建议：合理安排时间，平衡学习与爱好。
要求：1. 语句通顺，条理清晰，词数100左右；
2. 题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Should teenagers be allowed to take art classes on weekends
After entering Grade 9, many parents don’t allow their children to take art classes on weekends. They think
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11．青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend 予以回复。假设你是Sigmund Friend，最近Lucy也遇上了些烦心事，请你回复一封英文邮件，为她的烦恼提出建议。
Lucy的烦恼 你的建议
经常熬夜学习，无暇顾及个人爱好 1.更好地理时间来平衡学业和爱好； 2.保证睡眠，可以用色彩疗法 (colour therapy) 举一例。
父母要求严格，太在意我的分数 1.冷静交谈，分享感受； 2.向老师寻求帮助。
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注意：
1.省略处需要至少有一点补充，可适当发挥；
2.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总字数。
Dear Lucy,
Thank you very much for telling me about your worries.
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Best wishes,
Sigmund Friend
12．压力无处不在。每个人都会遇到压力，青少年也不例外。我们无法避免压力，但却可以选择应对压力的方法。请你根据以下写作要点，写一篇作文。
写作要点：
1. What made you feel stressed out last time
2. How did you get out of that situation
3. What is your advice for teenagers on dealing with pressure
写作要求：
1. 作文须包括全部写作要点内容；
2. 不得出现个人真实信息，如校名、姓名等；
3. 词数不少于 80，作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. Many factors can cause pressure.
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13．假如你是校报编辑，最近你就初三学生的学习和生活做了一项调查，发现同学们有一些共同的烦恼。请你根据调查出来的结果，给同学们提出建议并陈述理由。
烦恼 建议与理由
学习压力大，晚上很晚才睡 做好计划才能更好地利用时间复习
觉得父母给自己制订了太多规则 （请补充）
考试前很紧张 （请补充）
要求：
1. 词数80~120，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 不得透露学校名、姓名等任何个人信息；
3. 写作要点包含以上表格中的内容，可适当发挥。
The school newspaper has carried out a survey on the study and life of Junior 3 students recently. As the result shows, the students have some problems in common.
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14．进入初三以来，你和你的同学都遇到了不少问题，作为班长李华，你收集了同学们遇到的问题，将以邮件的形式发送到校报邮箱。请根据以下表格提示，陈述问题，适当补充细节，并向Aunt Judy寻求帮助和建议。
Students Problems
Amy 1. 和父母沟通有困难 2. 父母制定许多规则，让我受不了。比如，…… (至少举一个例子)
Peter 1. 压力很大，经常考试不合格，…… 2. 对运动不感兴趣，……
Me (请补充至少一个问题并谈谈自己的感受)
要求：
1. 语言通顺，观点明确，书写工整；
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名，可适当发挥。
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15．假如你是Aunt Linda，昨天你收到了李华的来信。请根据内容，针对她的问题给她提出一些合理的建议。
Dear Aunt Linda,
Last Sunday, I had a fight with my parents. They always expect too much from me and arrange (安排) many extra lessons for me at the weekend without my permission. Besides, I am not allowed to go out with my friends or classmates. I get really bored with such a busy and dull life. I just can’t stand it anymore. What can I do
Li Hua
要求：1.词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
Dear Li Hua,
I am sorry to hear that
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Hope that my advice can help you.
Aunt Linda
16．进入初三以来，Amy遇到了一些问题，这些问题让她很苦恼，甚至影响学习。假如你是Li Hua，为帮助Amy更好地适应初三的学习生活，请你结合自己的初三生活及学习经验给她写一封信，帮助她解答困惑并给予鼓励。请根据以下表格提示，陈述Amy的问题，可适当补充细节，并给出建议及鼓励。
Amy的问题 1. 和父母沟通有困难，不被理解，感到孤独
2. 初三新增化学学科……
3. （结合实际，至少补充1个问题）
你的建议 请你根据问题提出建议 （至少补充2点）
你的鼓励 （请你至少补充1点）
提示词：化学 Chemistry
写作要求：
1. 紧扣主题和提示写作，可适当拓展；
2. 词数80左右；
3. 不得透露学校名称以及个人姓名等信息，否则不予评分。
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17．假设你叫李华，你的好朋友Lingling上了九年级后感觉学习难度加大，作业太多，睡眠不足。请你给Lingling写一封信，提些建议。
要求：
1.要点齐全，适当发挥；
2.行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.100词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Lingling,
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble with your life and study.
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Believe yourself and everything will get better.
Yours,
Li Hua
18．假设你是李华，最近你在选择课外活动时与父母产生了分歧——你想参加学校的篮球队，而父母认为训练和比赛会占用你太多学习时间。这让你感到很烦恼。请给学校英语报社的“Agony Aunt”专栏写一封信，分享你的烦恼和做过的尝试，并寻求建议。
写作要求：
1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Agony Aunt,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Grade
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I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
19．假设你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到交换生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。请根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。
要求：
Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons
朋友少，跟同学相处不好， 感觉孤单 1. 参加学校社团——认识更多朋友
2. ？(补充)
中文难学，不了解中国文化 1. 多阅读中文故事、新闻——在运用中学习中文
2. ？(补充)
1. 回信应包括所有要点；
2. 词数在80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the exchange life in the middle school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
20．你经常用手机阅读吗？有人认为用手机阅读方便且花费少；也有人认为用手机阅读对眼睛有害，并且容易使人沉迷其中。校刊英语专栏正在以“是否应该使用手机进行阅读 ”为主题开展征文活动。请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。
Do you think we should read on mobile phones
What are your reasons
What advice would you like to give your classmates
Something more about your opinion
注意：文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；词数100左右。注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息：词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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《写作》参考答案
1．One possible version：
Follow and Grow
A country has its laws and a family has its rules, too. My family also has some rules.
My parents don’t allow me to play computer games in my free time. I am not allowed to stay up late because they think teenagers should have enough sleep to keep healthy. I can’t go out on school nights. Because they worry about my safety.
I think my parents are too strict with me. But I understand they really love me. I communicate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I often help them with housework. All in all, I love my family rules which make me grow.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的家规；
第二步，介绍家规对自己的影响
第三步，介绍自己如何回报家。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
②stay up late熬夜
③keep healthy保持健康
④worry about担心
⑤be strict with sb.对某人严格要求
⑥communicate with sb.与某人沟通
[高分句型]
I am not allowed to stay up late because they think teenagers should have enough sleep to keep healthy.(because引导原因状语从句)
2．例文
Would you like to live in school We had a discussion about it and here are the results. Most students prefer to live in school because they find it convenient to communicate with their classmates. Also, they can learn how to look after themselves in this way.
However, some students think living at home is a better choice. The main reason is that they can relax better at home. Besides, they can spend more time with their family members and get on better with them.
As for me, I’d like to live in school. That's because I can spend more time on my study. What’s more, it’s a wonderful experience to live with other classmates.
【详解】[总体分析]
1.题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
2.时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
3.提示：根据表格进行阐述，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明文章主旨，引出讨论结果。提出愿意住校学生观点并阐明理由；
第二步，展示想要走读学生观点并陈述理由；
第三步，点明自己观点并给出理由。
[亮点词汇]
1.communicate with sb.与某人交流
2.look after照顾
3.as for至于
4.what’s more此外
[高分句型]
1. Most students prefer to live in school because they find it convenient to communicate with their classmates.(it作形式宾语，不定式作真正的宾语)
2. The main reason is that they can relax better at home. (表语从句)
3．One possible version:
Safety rules at school
Hello, everyone! It’s important for us to keep safe at school. To be safe, we must follow these rules at school.
First, don’t crowd when we go upstairs or downstairs, or we may hurt ourselves by falling off steps. Second, we are not allowed to throw rubbish out of the windows of tall buildings. Third, we mustn’t use sharp things like knives when we play with our classmates. Fourth, smoking and drinking are not allowed at school, either. They’re bad for our health. Last, we should be friendly to our teachers and classmates. Don’t fight with our classmates.
Remember these rules, and we’ll be safe at school.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“在学校保持安全非常重要”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——不要拥挤、不要扔杂物、不拿尖锐物品、不抽烟喝酒均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“谢谢您的聆听”的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①follow these rules遵守这些规则
②hurt ourselves伤害我们自己
③fight with与……战斗
[高分句型]
①Third, we mustn’t use sharp things like knives when we play with our classmates. (when引导的状语从句）
②Don’t fight with our classmates. (祈使句)
4．Dear Liu Yu,
I'm happy to receive your letter, and I completely understand your situation. Your passion for dance and your success in winning big prizes is admirable. As a teenager, we should be allowed to make our own decisions. It’s essential for success in any field. Try to communicate with your parents effectively. Explain your love for dance and your dream of becoming a professional dancer. Share with them your plan to keep a balance between dance practice and your studies. As they say, when you are determined to do something, the whole world will make way for you.
Best wishes for you!
Your friend,
Zhang Peng
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文内容是给别人建议，主要用第一人称和第二人称。应注意书信的格式，并按写作要点表达出理解和支持的态度、提出允许自己做决定的观点和原因、提出解决方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示态度：对来信者的理解、支持和赞赏；
第二步，提出自己的观点：青少年应该被允许做出自己的决定，以及该观点的原因；
第三步，给出解决父母矛盾的有效方法：尝试沟通、阐明成为专业舞者的目标、提出平衡舞蹈练习和学习的计划；
第四步，鼓励对方，附上结束语以示祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①make decisions做出决定
②keep a balance保持平衡
③professional专业的
④understand理解
⑤effectively有效地
[高分句型]
①Share with them your plan to keep a balance between dance practice and your studies. （动词不定式作目的状语）
②As a teenager, we should be allowed to make our own decisions.（被动语态）
5．例文
How to behave at school
There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One, a group of girls are beating a girl. In Picture Two, some students are making fun of their classmates.
How rude they are! We should say “No” to such things. As a student, I think we should respect each other and be friendly to others. If we have different ideas, we’d better discuss instead of fighting. Besides, we should help our classmates when they’re in trouble.
Let’s play a role in building a harmonious school.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。要求以“How to behave at school ”为题，结合图片内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段描述两张图片内容；第二段对图片内容进行评价，表明自己的观点；第三段收尾总结。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
6．例文：
What I like about myself
Everyone is special, so am I. What I like about myself is mainly my healthy life habits and good personality.
To begin with, I have developed healthy life habits. For example, I never stay up so that I can focus in class. Besides, running for half an hour every day helps me keep in good health. What’s more, it’s my personality that enables me to live happily. Being an outgoing girl, I can make friends easily and express my thoughts freely.
What I own has brought me lots of benefits, and I will insist on working hard to make me a better person.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出喜欢自己的哪些方面以及理由，可以适当发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
7．例文：
Rules
Now more and more families have cars. Children, especially middle school students, want to drive a car themselves. They think it’s cool. And they want to show off. What’s more, a small number of students drive cars to school. But actually they are not allowed to drive cars. Because they don’t have driving licenses. And driving is dangerous for them.
Besides, we must wear school uniforms at school every day. But some students don’t like wearing them. They think the uniforms aren’t fashionable.
In my opinion, students shouldn’t be allowed to drive. Because they are too young to be careful enough. But I think we should be allowed to choose our own clothes.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是材料作文。针对目前个别学生违反学校规定的行为进行叙述，同时需要陈述自己的看法。具体的内容要包含所给的提示。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出，可以接着介绍喜欢开车和不允许开车的理由；第二介绍不想穿校服和穿校服的理由；最后一段表达自己的看法。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
8．例文：
Dear parents,
I know you love me very much.But there are too many rules in my family.For example,I have to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play computers in my free time.I can’t go out on school nights.I have to go to bed by 10 pm.I know you worry about me.However,I think you are too strict with me.Sometimes I feel unhappy.I think I should be allowed to make my own decisions.I understand you.I will communicate with you as much as possible.And I often help do housework.Please trust me.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以林涛的身份写一篇发言稿，在家庭会议上就父母要求过多，过于严格的做法发表自己的看法以及解决方法。
2.写作指导：本文是一篇发言稿，发表的是自己的看法和解决方法，时态上主要以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。结构上，主要从提示的三方面来写：父母的要求，自己的看法以及解决方法。
9．参考范文：
Are teenagers allowed to go out on weekends
I often argue with my parents about whether teenagers should go out on weekends after I am in Grade 9. My parents think that teenagers should stay at home to go over their lessons. Teenagers should also have enough time to have a good rest on weekends. Also, teenagers are supposed to help their parents do some housework.
In my opinion, we teenagers need to go out with our friends for fun so that we can relax ourselves after a busy week. And we can share ideas with each other. What's more, we can also take some exercise together to keep healthy. So I think teenagers should be allowed to go out on weekends.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以“Are teenagers allowed to go out on weekends ”为题，根据写作提示，谈一谈父母和自己各自的看法。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一、三人称和一般现在时为主来叙述，写作时要写出父母的观点及自己的观点，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
10．例文
Should teenagers be allowed to take art classes on weekends After entering Grade 9, many parents don’t allow their children to take art classes on weekends. They think it may get in the way of their studies because teenagers have too much homework. Parents worry art classes will make them fall behind.
However, I believe art classes can help us reduce stress and develop new interests. For example, drawing or singing can make us feel relaxed and happy.
My advice is that teenagers should learn to manage time wisely. We can set a clear schedule: finish homework first on weekends, then spend one hour on art classes. If we balance study and hobbies properly, we can not only keep up with schoolwork but also find joy in art.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：文章时态为一般现在时（讨论普遍现象和观点）；
③提示：需涵盖父母观点、个人观点及建议，词数100左右。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入父母观点（影响学习、学业繁重），使用提示句开头；
第二步，提出个人观点（放松心情、培养兴趣），并用例子支持；
第三步，给出建议（合理安排时间，平衡学习与爱好），总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①get in the way of妨碍，阻碍
②reduce stress减轻压力
③manage time wisely明智地管理时间
[高分句型]
①However, I believe art classes can help us reduce stress and develop new interests.（宾语从句）
②If we balance study and hobbies properly, we can not only keep up with schoolwork but also find joy in art.（if引导的条件状语从句）
11．
Dear Lucy,
Thank you very much for telling me about your worries.
First, you often stay up late studying and have no time for hobbies. I suggest you manage your time better. Make a study plan and balance schoolwork and hobbies. Also, get enough sleep. You can try colour therapy. For example, blue helps you feel calm and sleep better. Second, your parents are strict with you and care too much about your grades. Try to talk with them calmly. Share your feelings and tell them you are working hard. If needed, ask your teacher for help. Finally, remember to relax. Listen to music or take a walk. It can make you happier.
I hope my advice helps.
Best wishes,
Sigmund Friend
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：根据Lucy的烦恼，从平衡学业爱好、处理父母关系、补充自我放松建议等方面给出建议，需包含色彩疗法举例及至少一处补充内容。
［写作步骤］
第一步：开篇感谢Lucy倾诉烦恼，引出建议主题；
第二步：针对“熬夜缺爱好”“父母在意分数”“补充放松方式”三个方面分别给出建议，每个建议结合具体方法（如时间管理、色彩疗法、冷静交谈、寻求老师帮助、听音乐散步等）；
第三步：结尾表达希望建议有用的祝愿。
［亮点词汇］
①stay up late 熬夜
②manage time 管理时间
③balance...and... 平衡……和……
④colour therapy 色彩疗法
⑤ask...for help 向……寻求帮助
［高分句型］
①I suggest you manage your time better.（宾语从句）
②It can make you happier.（“make + sb. + 形容词比较级”结构，表达使某人更……）
12．例文
We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. Many factors can cause pressure.
Last term, before the final exam, I was under great pressure. Anxious and worried, I couldn’t sleep well at night. Luckily, my parents helped me get rid of the stress. They made me take an active part in all kinds of after-school activities to relax myself. And we have more communication than before.
It’s common for students to have pressure in study. The most important thing is how to get it over bravely. Firstly, we can talk with our parents, teachers or friends and ask them for help. Secondly, we can do sports or listen to some light music to relax ourselves. Lastly, we can go for a walk in the park to calm down. In short, we should face the pressure bravely and deal with it properly.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，需包含自身压力经历、应对方式及给青少年的建议，注意语句连贯和词汇准确。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点明青少年成长中压力增多的现象；
第二步：叙述自己上次的压力来源及应对过程；
第三步：给出青少年应对压力的建议并总结。
[亮点词汇]
①under great pressure承受巨大压力
②get rid of摆脱
③take an active part in积极参与
④communicate with与……交流
⑤calm down冷静下来
[高分句型]
①Anxious and worried, I couldn’t sleep well at night.(形容词作状语，简洁描述状态)
②Firstly, we can talk with our parents, teachers or friends and ask them for help.(列举建议，逻辑清晰)
③In short, we should face the pressure bravely and deal with it properly.(总结观点，升华主题)
13．例文
The school newspaper has carried out a survey on the study and life of Junior 3 students recently. As the result shows, the students have some problems in common.
First of all, stress from studies makes them sleep late. Besides, recently, their parents have made too many rules of study and life, which also make them feel stressed. What’s more, before a test, it is very stressful for them because they are afraid of getting bad grades.
In fact, there are some suggestions to help them solve these problems. On the one hand, students should make a good plan to make full use of time. On the other hand, they can communicate with their parents and friends when they feel unhappy. It is helpful for them to solve the problems. Only in these ways can they study better and live more happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：需包含初三学生的共同烦恼及对应的建议和理由等信息，可适当发挥，使文章通顺、完整，词数80~120词，开头已给出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，说明校报对初三学生学习和生活的调查结果；
第二步，阐述学生的共同烦恼（学习压力大晚睡、觉得父母规则多、考试前紧张）；
第三步，给出解决这些烦恼的建议及理由；
[亮点词汇]
①in common共同的
②make full use of充分利用
③communicate with与……交流
[高分句型]
①First of all, stress from studies makes them sleep late.（make sb. do sth.结构，说明学习压力的影响）
②Besides, recently, their parents have made too many rules of study and life, which also make them feel stressed.（which引导非限制性定语从句，说明父母规则多的影响）
③On the one hand,students should make a good plan to make full use of time.（on the one hand用于分点阐述，使建议更有条理）
④Only in these ways can they study better and live more happily.（倒装句，强调解决问题的方法的重要性）
14．例文：
Dear Aunt Judy,
Since entering Junior Three, my classmates and I have problems. I’m writing to ask for your advice.
Amy has trouble communicating with her parents. Her parents make many rules she can’t stand, like not letting her hang out with friends at night. Peter is very stressed. He often fails exams and feels upset. He’s not interested in sports, so he seldom exercises. I have too much homework, so I can’t develop my hobbies. I feel anxious.
Could you give us some suggestions Thank you. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称和第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍写信目的；
第二步，陈述艾米、彼得和自己的问题；
第三步，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble doing做某事有麻烦
②hang out闲逛
③develop my hobbies发展我的爱好
[高分句型]
①Her parents make many rules she can’t stand, like not letting her hang out with friends at night. (定语从句)
②He’s not interested in sports, so he seldom exercises. (so并列句)
15．例文
Dear Li Hua,
I am sorry to hear that you had a fight with your parents. Don’t be too upset, because they just care about you but use the wrong way. First, calm down and talk to them gently. Tell them how bored you feel with the lessons and how much you want to spend time with friends. Second, try to reach an agreement: keep the lessons you’re interested in. Third, promise them you’ll return home on time if they let you go out, so they can trust you. Your parents love you. I believe they’ll understand you.
Hope that my advice can help you.
Aunt Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时态”，“一般过去时态”和“一般将来时态”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，注意字母大小写及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表达安慰；
第二步：详细阐述自己的建议；
第三步：书写结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①care about关心
②calm down冷静
③reach an agreement达成协议
④are interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①Don’t be too upset, because they just care about you but use the wrong way.（原因状语从句）
②I believe they’ll understand you.（宾语从句）
16．例文
Dear Amy,
I’m sorry to hear you’re having trouble in Grade 9. I understand feeling lonely when parents don’t understand you. Try talking to them calmly. After all, they care about you! For the new subject Chemistry, review notes daily and do experiments actively, and it’ll get easier. Also, many of us feel stressed with more homework. Make a study plan to manage time.
Remember, you’re not alone. I faced similar challenges but improved step by step. Believe in yourself!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格提示内容进行写作，可适当拓展，注意行文连贯，表述完整并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，介绍Amy的问题并给出自己的建议；
第三步，书写结语，鼓励Amy。
[亮点词汇]
①care about关心
②after all毕竟
③step by step逐步地
[高分句型]
I understand feeling lonely when parents don’t understand you. (when引导的时间状语从句)
17．One possible version:
Dear Lingling,
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble with your life and study. I would like to give you some advice.
First, you can get into the good habit of previewing new lessons before class, so that you can understand the teachers better. Second, you should manage your time properly. Going to bed early and getting up early can help you keep energetic. Don’t leave your homework until the last minute. Try to finish it earlier. Finally, you had better learn to relax yourself on weekends. You can have a walk or listen to music in your free time. In this way, you can learn well and get used to the life and study in Grade 9.
Believe yourself and everything will get better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，需针对九年级学习压力大、作业多、睡眠不足的问题提出具体建议，语言需简洁连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接信件开头，表达对Lingling现状的关心；
第二步，针对学习压力大、作业多、睡眠不足的问题提出具体建议；
第三步，重申信心，呼应题干结尾句。
[亮点词汇]
①get into进入
②properly正确地
③keep energetic保持精力充沛
④get used to习惯
[高分句型]
①First, you can get into the good habit of previewing new lessons before class, so that you can understand the teachers better.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
②Don’t leave your homework until the last minute.（否定祈使句）
18．例文
Dear Agony Aunt,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Grade 9. I have a problem and need your advice. I really want to join our school basketball team. It’s fun and keeps me healthy. But my parents disagree. They think the training and competitions will take too much study time. I feel upset because basketball is important to me. I tried talking to them. I made a plan showing I will finish homework first. But they are still worried. What can I do to make them understand I need your help.
I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己的信息，引入主题；
第二步，介绍自己的烦恼和做过的尝试；
第三步，请求对方给予建议。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②make a plan制定计划
[高分句型]
I feel upset because basketball is important to me.（because引导的原因状语从句）
19．例文
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the exchange life in the middle school.
You mentioned feeling lonely because of having few friends and difficulties with classmates. Joining school clubs can be a great way to meet more people. Moreover, try to take an active part in class discussions and group activities. This will help you bond with your classmates. You also find it challenging to learn Chinese and you are unfamiliar with Chinese culture. Besides reading Chinese stories and news, watching Chinese movies and TV shows can help you improve your language skills and understand the culture better.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章需涵盖所有要点，即Ben面临的问题、针对问题的建议及理由，同时需适当补充内容，使文章更加充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，文章开头已给出，直接进入主题，即描述Ben提到的问题。
第二步，针对Ben提到的“朋友少，跟同学相处不好，感觉孤单”的问题，提出参加学校社团和积极参与课堂讨论及小组活动的建议；针对“中文难学，不了解中国文化”的问题，提出多阅读中文故事、新闻以及观看中文电影和电视节目的建议。
第三步，最后表达希望自己的建议能够对Ben有所帮助的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble doing sth 做某事有困难
②get used to 习惯于
③take an active part in 积极参加
④help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
⑤be unfamiliar with 对……不熟悉
[高分句型]
①You mentioned feeling lonely because of having few friends and difficulties with classmates.（because of 后接动名词短语作原因状语）
②Besides reading Chinese stories and news, watching Chinese movies and TV shows can help you improve your language skills and understand the culture better.（动名词短语作介词besides的宾语）
20．例文
I think we can read on mobile phones. We can carry mobile phones in our pockets. It is really convenient. Anywhere and anytime we can read the electronic books. For example, I can read them when I take a bus to school or home even before I go to bed.
I like to read on mobile phones. There are different kinds of books online which we can read. Last month, I bought an electronic book about Chinese history. It only cost me five yuan. The electronic books are cheap. By reading different books, I can learn a lot and open my eyes to the outside world.
But we need to control our time reasonably and have proper rest. At the same time, we should read healthy content.
In a word, I think reading on mobile phones is convenient and good for me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为校刊英语专栏投稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括对是否应该使用手机进行阅读的看法、原因、给同学们的建议以及更多个人观点，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我认为我们可以在手机上阅读”引出下文，并阐述其便利性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“手机阅读的便利性、在线书籍的多样性及价格优势”两个方面阐述原因，同时给出“控制时间、合理休息以及阅读健康内容”的建议；
第三步，书写结语。总结全文，再次强调手机阅读的便利性及其带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①convenient 方便的
②different kinds of 不同种类的
③open one’s eyes to... 使某人开阔眼界
④at the same time 同时
⑤in a word 总之
[高分句型]
①For example, I can read them when I take a bus to school or home even before I go to bed.（when引导时间状语从句）
②There are different kinds of books online which we can read.（which引导定语从句）
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