【单元考点培优】Module 7 Great books 专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版

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Module 7 Great books
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假设你是李华，你校正在筹备举办一次“名著助我成长 (Classic Books Help Me Grow)”的演讲活动，请就你深度阅读的某部名著以及在哪些方面帮助了你的成长写一篇演讲稿，为活动做好准备。
提示词语：characters, improve, encourage, inspiring
提示问题：
●What classic book you’ve read impresses you most
●How does the classic book influence you
Dear teachers and students,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9.
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2．众所周知，阅读是获取知识的途径，也是学好英语的关键。假如你是李华，请你根据下面的提示，写一篇有关阅读帮助改善英语的短文。
阅读 阅读使学习新单词容易
阅读使写作更容易
阅读能提升人的思维能力
……
注意：1．短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．词数不少于100。
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3．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出的内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。
假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号计划制作以“My Favorite Book”为主题的系列推送。请你用英语给社团公众号留言，推荐你最喜欢的一本书，谈谈你喜欢的理由及从这本书里得到的收获。
提示词语：writer, interesting, encourage
提示问题：1. What is your favorite book
2. Why do you like it
3. What benefits have you got from it
Reading can make our life colorful.
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4．学校英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请你围绕下图所示的三个问题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Enjoy Reading
Why do you read What kind of books do you read How do you improve your reading
for pleasure for knowledge … storybooks science fiction … take notes draw mind maps …
要求：1. 根据上图表格所示，适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
3. 词数80左右。
Enjoy reading
Reading opens up a wonderful world for me.
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5．随着网络的不断发展，越来越多的人通过网络进行阅读。同时也有人认为网络阅读存在很多弊病，人们应该多阅读经典纸质书籍。针对这个话题你的学校正在开展征文活动。假设你是李华，请你写一篇英文短文进行投稿，发表自己的想法。
要点如下：
1. 你对于网络阅读的看法；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你的希望。
注意：
1. 内容必须包含所有内容要点；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 字迹工整，书写规范、正确；语句通顺；
4. 文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和所在学校的名称；
5. 词数80左右 (短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
As the internet develops,
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6．阅读是英语学习的重要途径。请结合下图信息，以“How reading improves my English”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。
要求：
1）文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How reading improves my English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning.
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7．假如你是李斌，你校英文网站正在开展以“My favourite book”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下表格提示内容，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的一本书——《老人与海》！
Name The Old Man and the Sea
Writer Ernest Hemingway (an American writer)
Main characters an old fisherman and a huge fish
Stories the book tells the fisherman fought against fish and nature
Theme human nature and beliefs
The reason why I like the book meaningful, never give up, well-known sentence: “Man is not made for defeat (失败)”, …
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词。 (开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Hello, I’m Li Bin. I would like to share my favourite book today.
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8．假设你是李辉，你们学校拟建一个英语阅览室，由外教Mr. White负责管理。他就阅览室的建设征询同学们的建议。请你给他写一封邮件，从阅览室的藏书、环境、活动等方面给出你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 邮件的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. White,
I’m delighted to know that an English reading room is about to be established in our school.
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I hope the English reading room can be built as soon as possible to serve the students.
Yours,
Li Hui
9．假如你是李平，近期班级召开了主题班会，大家谈论了自己在课余时间的活动内容。请你根据提示内容给好朋友刘军一封信，跟他谈谈班会情况，并说说作为中学生，读书能带来哪些好处。
写作要点：1.班会主题：如何利用好课余时间。
2.同学们的课余活动：
（1）李华：锻炼身体
（2）王红：听音乐
（3）你：读书
3.读书能给中学生带来哪些好处。
写作要求：1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，条理清晰。
4.至少80词。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Liu Jun:
How are you _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
10．2024年世界读书日的主题是“阅读推动未来”。本学期，我校开展了“Our favorite book-reading ways”为主题的调查，请根据调查结果写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简单阐述调查结果。
2. 陈述你选择的最喜欢的阅读方式，并说明理由。
3. 针对中学生如何更好地读书提出合理化建议（至少两条）。
要求：
1. 字数80﹣100字。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
Our favorite book-reading ways
We did a survey on the topic of “Our favorite book﹣reading ways”. Here are the results.
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11．你校英语社团正在开展以“My Favourite Chinese Great Book”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语短文，向社团投稿。
要求: 1. 词数100左右；书名与人名拼写可用拼音代替。
2. 文中须包含所有要点。所给视角与词汇仅供参考选择使用。
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点 参考视角 参考词汇
Who wrote it …
What is it about character (人物)/favourite part/main plot (情节)/theme... describe/spirit/introduce/encourage/explore/action…
Why do you like it creative/wonderful/meaningful/valuable/adventurous/…
My Favourite Chinese Great Book
Speaking of Chinese great books, I really like the book named
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12．假如你是李华，你校英语校刊将举行以“Happy Reading”为题的征文活动，请你根据以下表格的提示内容，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Reading habits what you read newspapers, novels, magazines...
when you read every night
how long you read about an hour
why you read valuable knowledge, relax…
要求:
1. 文章必须包含提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Happy Reading
Reading has become an important part of our lives.
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13．本月是学校的阅读月，学校将举办一场以“Reading—A Good Habit”为趣的演讲比赛，请根据以下内容写一篇演讲稿，呼吁大家积极阅读。
注意：
1.词数80词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不请入词数)。
2.不得透露学校，姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Reading—A Good Habit
Hello, everyone. I’m going to talk about reading a useful habit that I’ve picked up.
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Let’s dive into the world of books and enjoy reading now!
14．英语老师布置了一项体验式作业，希望你和家人假期时去一次附近的图书馆，然后写一篇英语短文，向同学们介绍图书馆离你家有多远，在图书馆内能够体验的有趣项目 (如：reading salon 阅读沙龙) 以及图书馆周边的公共设施。请你根据以下内容提示完成短文。 How far is it from your home to the library
What interesting activities can you do in the library
Are there any bus stops, cafes or anything else near the library How are they
Something more about the library.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数 100 词左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Visit to the Library
Last weekend, I went to the library near my home with my family.
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15．阅读令人受益良多，然而，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据以下表格内容写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。
要点:
不重视阅读的原因： 1.没有读书习惯；2.
阅读的好处： 1.更多地了解世界；2.学会如何思考；3.……
建议： ……（至少一点）
注意:
1. 内容须包括表格中的全部要点, 适当发挥；
2. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
3. 开头已给出, 不计入词数；
4. 文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
Reading is important to everyone. But quite a few students don’t do the reading or do less reading. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16．Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站。近日有人在网站上发了一个帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，用英语回帖。
注意：
1.80词左右；
2.不要出现考生本人信息；
3.禁止抄袭试卷中的语篇内容。
Teens Around the World
Subject: My favourite book
Hey, guys! I’ve been a reader since I was little, and there’s one book that truly touched my heart—The Little Prince. What’s your favourite book What does the book mainly talk about What do you learn from it Please share it with us. Eric England
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17．“读万卷书，行万里路”，阅读不仅可以开拓我们的视野，还能丰富我们的生活。假设你们学校正在开展以“Reading in My Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你围绕以下内容提示完成演讲稿。
要点：1. Do you like reading
2. Why do you read (for fun, for knowledge, ...)
3. How often do you read
4. What kind of books do you read (story books, science books, ...)
5. What are your reading habits (take notes, draw mind maps, ...)
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Reading in My Life
Hi, everyone!
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18．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
书籍是一种无形的财富，读书不仅能够让我们获取知识，启迪我们的心灵，还能有助于结交到志趣相投的朋友。
假如你是李华，你们学校将开展以“Reading Habit”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英文演讲稿，介绍你的阅读习惯以及阅读给你带来的好处。提示词语：different, take notes, knowledge, make friends
提示问题：
● What is your reading habit
● What benefits have you got from reading
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19．假如你是李华，你的朋友小明给你发了一个邮件，提到他们学校的课外阅读计划，并询问你对课外阅读的看法。请你给他写一封电子邮件，谈谈你对课外阅读的看法及你的计划等。
内容包括：
(1) 多数学生不重视课外阅读的原因；
(2) 课外阅读的好处；
(3) 你的课外阅读计划。
要求：
(1) 词数：80-100词；(开头结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。)
(2) 必须包含以上内容，可适当发挥；
(3) 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
Hi Xiaoming,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail and I’m happy to know that your school has carried out the Reading Project
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
20．假定你是李华，你校交换生 Ethan 在阅读中国古诗词的过程中遇到了困难，因此他正通过学校广播节目寻找共读伙伴(reading buddy)，请你根据以下内容提示，用英文写一封自荐信，表示愿意成为他的共读伙伴，并为他提出相关建议。词数 80 左右。
Able to do recite lots of ancient Chinese poems
Advise to do ①watch Chinese TV programs ②learn Chinese songs ③read… ④…
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
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参考答案及试题解析
1．
例文：
Dear teachers and students,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. The classic book that impresses me most is The Little Prince.
The story and its characters are very inspiring. What’s more, the little prince’s journey teaches me to understand love and responsibility. This book helps me improve my ability to think deeply. It also encourages me to see the world with a kind heart. I believe classic books can guide us to grow better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给提示需完整表达，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，写出印象最深的书名；
第二步，具体阐述该书对自己的影响；
第三步，总结名著对成长的意义，升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①what’s more此外；更多的是
②think deeply深入思考
③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①The classic book that impresses me most is The Little Prince.（定语从句）
②I believe classic books can guide us to grow better.（宾语从句）
2．例文：
As we all know, reading is a vital way to acquire knowledge and a key to mastering English. Reading offers numerous benefits in improving our English. Not only does reading facilitate the acquisition of new vocabulary, making it easier for us to learn and remember new words, but it also significantly enhances our writing skills. Through exposure to various writing styles and structures, we can improve our own writing expressions. Moreover, reading broadens our minds and fosters critical thinking abilities, which are essential for effective communication in English. Therefore, let’s embrace reading and reap its countless rewards in our English learning journey.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，旨在阐述阅读对改善英语的积极作用；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括阅读使学习新单词容易、使写作更容易以及能提升人的思维能力等，考生需围绕这些要点展开，并适当添加细节，使文章内容丰富、连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。简要介绍阅读的重要性，引出阅读对英语学习的积极作用，为后文详细阐述做铺垫；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从学习新单词、提升写作能力、增强思维能力三个方面，详细阐述阅读如何帮助改善英语；
第三步，书写结语。总结阅读的好处，鼓励读者多进行阅读。
[亮点词汇]
①benefit from从……中获益
②broaden one’s horizons拓宽某人的视野
③critical thinking批判性思维
[高分句型]
①Not only does reading facilitate the acquisition of new vocabulary, but it also significantly enhances our writing skills.（not only...but also...句型）
②By engaging in regular reading, we can broaden our horizons and cultivate critical thinking abilities.（介词短语作方式状语）
3．例文：
Reading can make our life colorful. My favorite book is The Old Man and the Sea written by Ernest Hemingway. I like it because of Hemingway’s unique writing style and the interesting story it tells. The book describes an old fisherman’s struggle with a giant marlin in the sea.
The story is not only interesting but also encourages me to face challenges bravely. Whenever I encounter difficulties, I think of the old man’s perseverance and courage, which inspires me to keep going. I have gained a lot from this book, and I highly recommend it to everyone.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，具体为公众号留言；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，包括最喜欢的书、喜欢的理由以及从书中得到的收获。考生需确保不遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节，突出个人对书籍的独特感受和收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过“Reading can make our life colorful.”这句话来引出下文对最喜欢书籍的介绍。
第二步，简要说明书的内容及喜欢的理由；
第三步，表达自己对书的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① recommend推荐
② writing style写作风格
③ face challenges面对挑战
[高分句型]
① My favorite book is “The Old Man and the Sea” written by Ernest Hemingway.（过去分词作定语）
② Whenever I encounter difficulties, I think of the old man’s perseverance and courage, which inspires me to keep going.（让步状语从句+非限制性定语从句）
4．例文
Enjoy reading Reading opens up a wonderful world for me. I read for pleasure and knowledge. Reading exciting stories makes me happy and relaxed.
I enjoy reading storybooks and science fiction the most. Storybooks let me experience different lives, while science fiction takes me to amazing future worlds.
To improve my reading, I use some good ways. I take notes about new words and interesting ideas. I also draw mind maps to understand the stories better. Discussing books with friends helps me a lot too.
Reading is truly a great enjoyment!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍自己阅读的原因；
第二步、介绍自己读什么书，如故事书和科幻小说；
第三步、介绍自己提升阅读的方法，如记笔记、绘制思维导图以及和朋友讨论书，最后书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①open up打开
②take notes记笔记
③discuss sth. with sb.与某人讨论某事
[高分句型]
Reading exciting stories makes me happy and relaxed.(动名词作主语)
5．例文：
As the internet develops, more and more people choose to read online. In my opinion, while online reading is convenient, it can’t replace reading classic paper books.
Online reading often leads to distractions, like ads or pop-up messages. Also, the quality of online content varies. However, paper books offer a quiet and focused reading experience. They help us develop deep thinking and imagination.
I hope everyone can spend more time reading classic paper books. Let’s enjoy the charm of real books and gain wisdom from them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇征文投稿短文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括对网络阅读的看法、理由及希望，考生需确保涵盖所有要点，并适当添加细节使内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过提及网络的发展，引出网络阅读的话题，并表明自己的看法；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从网络阅读的便捷性、信息量以及可能存在的信息不准确、分散注意力等弊端出发，阐述自己对于网络阅读的看法及理由；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己希望人们能够多阅读经典纸质书籍的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more 越来越多的
②choose to do 选择做某事
③in my opinion 在我看来
④lead to 导致
⑤vary 变化
⑥offer 提供
⑦develop 培养
[高分句型]
①As the internet develops, more and more people choose to read online.（as引导的时间状语从句）
②In my opinion, while online reading is convenient, it can’t replace reading classic paper books.（while引导的让步状语从句）
6．例文
How reading improves my English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning.
First, reading helps improve my spoken English. By reading aloud, I can practice my pronunciation. Second, reading develops my thinking ability. I often predict what will happen next in a story, which makes me think actively. Moreover, reading makes my writing easier. I learn new words and sentence structures from the passages I read, which I can then use in my own writing.
In a word, reading is a great way to enhance my overall English skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求，均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：直接点明阅读在我的英语学习中扮演着重要的角色。
第二步：根据提示信息中的要点，从阅读对口语、思维能力和写作的帮助三个方面展开，详细阐述阅读如何提升英语能力。
第三步：总结全文，强调阅读是提升英语整体技能的好方法。
[亮点词汇]
①develop one’s thinking ability培养某人的思维能力
②make sb. do sth.使某人做某事
③in a word总之
[高分句型]
①I often predict what will happen next in a story, which makes me think actively. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②In a word, reading is a great way to enhance my overall English skills. (动词不定式作后置定语)
7．例文：
Hello, I’m Li Bin. I would like to share my favourite book today. It is The Old Man and the Sea written by Ernest Hemingway, an American writer. The story is about an old fisherman who struggles to catch a huge fish. During the fight, he faces not only the fish but also the power of nature.
This book explores human nature and beliefs. I love it because it is meaningful and teaches us never to give up. My favorite sentence is, “Man is not made for defeat.” It always inspires me when I face difficulties. I think everyone should read this wonderful book!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于《老人与海》的介绍要点，包括作者、主角、故事内容、主题以及喜欢这本书的原因，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我想分享我最喜欢的一本书”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“作者、主角、故事情节、主题以及喜欢这本书的原因”几个方面重点介绍《老人与海》这本书的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。总结对这本书的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物
③struggle to do sth.努力做某事
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①It is The Old Man and the Sea written by Ernest Hemingway, an American writer.（过去分词短语written by...作后置定语）
②The story is about an old fisherman who struggles to catch a huge fish.（who引导的定语从句）
8．例文
Dear Mr. White,
I’m delighted to know that an English reading room is about to be established in our school. Here are some suggestions for it.
First, for books, please include different levels—from easy picture books to advanced works. English learning materials like grammar guides and magazines are also needed, as magazines can keep us updated on English-speaking countries’ affairs. Second, the room should be quiet and cozy. Decorating walls with English quotes can also build a good learning atmosphere. Finally, hold small activities, such as reading competitions or book review sharing. They will make the room lively and improve our English.
I hope the English reading room can be built as soon as possible to serve the students.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一、三人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达得知学校拟建英语阅览室的喜悦，点明邮件核心是提供建设建议，总领全文；
第二步，分三方面提具体建议：藏书需覆盖不同难度并包含语法指南、杂志；环境要安静舒适，可贴英语名言营造氛围；可举办阅读比赛、书评分享等活动以活跃氛围、提升英语；
第三步，表达对阅览室早日建成的期待，收束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①from easy picture books to advanced works 从简易图画书到高阶读物
②build a good learning atmosphere 营造良好的学习氛围
[高分句型]
①English learning materials like grammar guides and magazines are also needed, as magazines can keep us updated on English-speaking countries’ affairs. (被动语态、as引导的原因状语从句)
②Decorating walls with English quotes can also build a good learning atmosphere. (动名词短语作主语)
9．范文：
Dear Liu Jun,
How are you I’m writing to tell you about a class meeting we held recently. The theme of the meeting was “How to make good use of our spare time”.
During the meeting, we shared our after - class activities. Li Hua likes to do exercise to keep fit. He believes a strong body is the key to a good life. Wang Hong enjoys listening to music. She says it helps her relax after a busy day. As for me, I love reading books.
Reading is really beneficial for middle school students. Firstly, it can expand our knowledge. We can learn about different cultures, historical events and scientific facts through books. Secondly, reading improves our language skills. We can pick up new words and expressions, which is helpful for our writing and speaking. What’s more, it enriches our imagination. We can enter different worlds created by the authors.
In a word, reading is a wonderful way to spend our spare time. What about your after - class activities I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一封信；
②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时；
③提示：本文要点已给出，主要介绍同学们的课余活动，以及读书能给中学生带来哪些好处。注意叙述的自然流畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，问候语；
第二步，详细介绍同学的课余活动和读书给中学生带来的好处；
第三步，总结全文，阅读是一种很棒的度过课余时间的方式，并表达自己的意愿。
［亮点词汇］
①keep fit保持健康
②beneficial益处
③pick up学到
［高分句型］
In a word, reading is a wonderful way to spend our spare time.（动词不定式作后置定语）
10．例文：
Our favorite book-reading ways
We did a survey on the topic of “Our favorite book-reading ways”. Here are the results. According to the survey results, reading on the phones is the most popular way, accounting for 51% of the total. Listening to an e-book takes up 18%, while reading on the Internet is 21%. Surprisingly, only 10% of students prefer reading a physical book.
For me, my favorite reading way is reading physical books. I think that there’s nothing like the feeling of turning pages and smelling the ink. It’s more relaxing and helps me focus better. To help middle school students read better, I have two suggestions. First, we should find a quiet place to read without any distractions. Second, we should set aside some time every day for reading, even if it’s just for a short period. By doing so, we can improve our reading skills and broaden our horizons.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：应用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述并评价调查结果；
第二步，陈述你的选择并说明理由；
第三步，针对中学生如何更好地读书提出合理化建议。
[亮点词汇]
①according to根据
②take up占据
③prefer doing sth.更喜欢做
[高分句型]
①I think that there’s nothing like the feeling of turning pages and smelling the ink.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Second, we should set aside some time every day for reading, even if it’s just for a short period.（even if引导让步状语从句）
11．例文
My Favourite Chinese Great Book
Speaking of Chinese great books, I really like the book named Journey to the West. It is written by Wu Cheng’en and it is a traditional Chinese book. I like it because I like the Monkey King very much. He is clever and brave. He can make 72 changes. He is good at kung fu. He uses his kung fu to keep fighting against the bad people and help the weak. He has a magic stick. He can make it big and long at any time.
I can learn a lot from the book. Reading makes me clever and brave. I will never give up when I am in trouble.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，介绍最喜欢的书；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，介绍这本书的作者，内容以及喜欢这本书的原因；
第三步，点评这本书以及阅读的好处，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长……
②give up放弃
[高分句型]
①I like it because I like the Monkey King very much.（原因状语从句）
②Reading makes me clever and brave.（动名词作主语）
12．例文
Happy Reading
Reading has become an important part of our lives. I read newspapers, novels, magazines, poems and so on for an hour every night. Reading plays an important part in our life. We can get knowledge by reading. Reading can open up our eyes. The more we read, the more we know about the outside world. Reading can not only improve yourself, but also make you more confident .What’s more, we can gain happiness through reading.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为征文投稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，描述个人的阅读习惯；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括阅读的内容、时间、时长及原因。考生应围绕这些要点展开，适当添加细节，使文章内容丰富且连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇即点明“Reading has become an important part of our lives.”，直接引出文章主题——阅读习惯；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。阅读内容；阅读时间；阅读时长；阅读原因；
第三步，书写结语。可以简单总结阅读习惯对自己生活的积极影响，或者鼓励读者也养成良好的阅读习惯，享受阅读的乐趣。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important part in在……中起重要作用
②get knowledge获得知识
③open up打开，开阔（眼界）
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
⑤gain happiness获得快乐
[高分句型]
①Reading plays an important part in our life.（动名词短语作主语）
②The more we read, the more we know about the outside world.（“the+比较级…….，the+比较级……”句型，表示“越……，越……”）
③Reading can not only improve yourself, but also make you more confident. （not only...but also...连接两个并列的谓语）
13．例文
Reading—A Good Habit
Hello, everyone. I’m going to talk about reading, a useful habit that I’ve picked up.
Ever since I started reading regularly, I’ve noticed how it broadens my horizons and enriches my mind. Reading not only improves my vocabulary but also enhances my imagination and critical thinking. There are many advantages of reading, such as expanding our vocabulary and improving our concentration.
One book that I highly recommend is Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone, which captivates readers with its enchanting world and explores themes of friendship and bravery. It has inspired me to dream big and be courageous in the face of challenges.
Let’s dive into the world of books and enjoy reading now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示完成写作，注意语法正确，语言通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头；
第二步，介绍自己的阅读习惯，说明阅读的好处，推荐一本说明喜欢它的理由。
第三步，书写结语（已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①regularly定期的
②broaden one’s horizons拓宽某人视野
③enhance提升
④recommend推荐
⑤captivate sb with用某事物吸引某人
⑥in the face of面对……
[高分句型]
One book that I highly recommend is Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone, which captivates readers with its enchanting world and explores themes of friendship and bravery. (that引导定语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句)
14．例文
My Visit to the Library
Last weekend, I went to the library near my home with my family. It is about five kilometers away from my home. So we decided to go there by bus.
In the library, there are a lot of interesting things to do. We can read different kinds of books, such as novels, science books and history books. There are also some e-reading areas where we can enks. What’s more, the library often holds some reading salons. It’s really exciting to communicate with other book-lovers there.
Near the library, there are several bus stops, which makes it very convenient for people to get there. And there are some cafes. The coffee there is delicious and the environment is very comfortable.
The library is not only a place for reading, but also a great place to gain knowledge and make friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括中文和英文提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题：介绍去图书馆的时间、人物、以及去图书馆的交通方式；
第二步，列举图书馆活动、介绍特色区域以及讲述文化活动；
第三步，介绍交通情况以及周边休闲设施；
第四步，总结升华：强调图书馆不仅是阅读的地方，更是获取知识和结交朋友的绝佳场所。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth. 决定做某事
②not only … but also … 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①There are also some e-reading areas where we can enks. (where引导的限制性定语从句)
②It’s really exciting to communicate with other book-lovers there. (it固定句型)
15．
Reading is important to everyone. But quite a few students don’t do the reading or do less reading. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful.
Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，要求介绍中学生不重视课外阅读的原因，介绍阅读的好处及自己对同学们的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，并阐述不重视阅读的原因。
第二步，阐述阅读的好处。
第三步，阐述如何阅读，提出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①quite a few 相当多；不少
②form a habit of reading 养成阅读习惯
③spare time 空闲时间
④learn about 了解
⑤Last but not least 最后但同样重要
⑥be supposed to 应该
[高分句型]
①For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. (so that引导目的状语从句)
②For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other. (It’s a good idea to do sth.是表达建议的常用句型)
16．例文
Eric, my favorite book is Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone. It tells the story of a young wizard, Harry, who discovers his magical identity and attends Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The book is full of adventure, friendship, and courage. From this story, I learned the importance of bravery, loyalty, and standing up for what is right even in the face of challenges. It inspires me to believe in myself and embrace the magic of life.
Li Hua China
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢的书的内容；
第二步，介绍自己从书中收获到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①is full of充满
②in the face of challenges面对挑战
③inspire鼓舞
[高分句型]
①It tells the story of a young wizard, Harry, who discovers his magical identity and attends Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.（定语从句）
②It inspires me to believe in myself and embrace the magic of life.（并列结构）
17．例文
Reading in My Life
Hi, everyone!
I’m so crazy about reading that I read almost every day. Reading is like a magical key that opens many amazing worlds for me. I read not only for fun, but also to gain knowledge. Among all kinds of books, science books are my favorite. These books can broaden my horizons and explain many questions I meet in daily life.
As for my reading habits, I think drawing mind maps is worth developing. It’s a great way to help me sort out the knowledge and deepen my understanding.
In a word, reading enriches my life. Let’s discover the joy of reading together!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。向大家问好，表示自己很喜欢阅读，引出下文。(开头已给出)
第二步，具体阐述。根据提示要点，讲述你喜欢阅读的原因、阅读的频率、喜欢什么类型的书、阅读习惯等。
第三步，书写结语。总结全文，呼吁大家一起阅读。
[亮点词汇]
① be crazy about 对……着迷
② not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
③ broaden one’s horizons 拓展某人的视野
④ as for 关于，至于
⑤ sth. be worth doing 某事值得做
⑥ in a word 总之
[高分句型]
① I’m so crazy about reading that I read almost every day. (so...that...引导结果状语从句)
② As for my reading habits, I think drawing mind maps is worth developing. (省略that的宾语从句)
18．例文
Good morning, everyone! My name is Li Hua, and today I’m honored to share with you my reading habit and the benefits I’ve gained from it.
My reading habit is quite simple yet fulfilling. I enjoy reading different kinds of books, from novels to science fiction, and even self-help books. Whenever I read, I always make sure to take notes of important points and inspiring quotes. This helps me retain the knowledge and reflect on what I’ve learned.
Reading has brought me numerous benefits. It has enriched my knowledge in various fields, making me more informed and curious about the world. Moreover, it has allowed me to make friends with those who have the same interests. Through book discussions and sharing our favorite reads, we’ve built strong bonds and learned from each other’s perspectives.
In conclusion, reading is indeed an invaluable habit that enriches our minds and lives. Let’s all cultivate this habit and explore the wonders of the book world together!
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己，引出话题：愿与大家分享自己的阅读习惯和收获；
第二步，介绍自己的阅读习惯；
第三步，介绍自己的收获；
第四步，书写总结。
[亮点词汇]
①in conclusion总之
②different kinds of不同种类的
[高分句型]
①Moreover, it has allowed me to make friends with those who have the same interests. (who引导的限制性定语从句)
②Reading has brought me numerous benefits. (动名词作主语)
19．例文
Hi Xiaoming,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail and I’m happy to know that your school has carried out the Reading Project. First of all, a lot of students haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on watching TV or surfing the Internet than reading books. Besides, some of them have too much homework and too many after-school classes to attend.
However, reading has many advantages. Through reading, we can learn more about the world. Also, reading can help us think better and make our life more colorful.
For my reading plan, I will read more science and history books. I also want to read famous novels to improve my English. I plan to read at least one book a month and discuss them with my friends.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一封电子邮件；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：围绕学校开展的阅读项目展开，先指出学生阅读存在的问题，接着论述阅读的诸多益处，最后说明自己的阅读计划，可适当拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以书信形式开篇，表明很高兴收到对方邮件并知晓学校开展阅读项目，引出下文关于阅读的讨论；
第二步，详细阐述当前学生在阅读方面存在的两大问题，一是很多学生未养成阅读习惯，宁愿看电视、上网也不读书，二是部分学生作业多、课外辅导班多没时间阅读；之后着重论述阅读的优点，包括能帮助了解世界、更好地思考以及让生活更丰富多彩；最后介绍自己的阅读计划，如阅读更多科学、历史书籍，读名著提升英语，每月至少读一本书并与朋友讨论；
第三步，以期待对方回复结尾，使书信格式完整，同时呼应开头交流的情境。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out开展
②form a habit of…养成……的习惯
③surf the Internet上网
[高分句型]
①They would rather spend their spare time on watching TV or surfing the Internet than reading books.(would rather…than…句型)
20．例文
Dear Ethan,
I’ve learned from the school radio program that you have difficulty in reading ancient Chinese poems and need a reading buddy. I would be delighted to be a partner with you. I have a strong passion for ancient Chinese poetry and have spent considerable time studying their meanings and contexts. Additionally, I am good at both English and Chinese, which can help us communicate with each other well. As for our reading plan, I suggest we meet twice a week in the library to discuss and interpret poems together.
This will not only enhance our understanding but also make the learning process enjoyable.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封自荐信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括自我介绍、表达愿意成为共读伙伴的意愿、提出相关建议等。考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的信息，并适当添加细节以增强信件的连贯性和说服力。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。在开头部分，直接回应Ethan的广播请求，表明自己愿意成为他的共读伙伴；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容；
第三步，书写结语。作者以期待Ethan回复的方式作为结语，表达了对未来共读合作的积极期待。
[亮点词汇]
①have difficulty in 在……方面有困难
②be delighted to 很高兴做某事
③have a strong passion for 对……有强烈的热情
④enhance 提高，增强
[高分句型]
I suggest we meet twice a week in the library to discuss and interpret poems together.（宾语从句，“suggest+宾语从句”结构）
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