【单元考点培优】Unit 4 I have a pen pal 考点25：书面表达-2025-2026学年人教PEP版六年级英语上册核心考点培优精练 (含答案解析)

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2025-2026学年人教PEP版六年级英语上册核心考点精练
Unit 4 I have a pen pal
考点25：书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．书面表达。
假设Tom是你的好朋友，请根据所给信息至少写出5个句子，来介绍一下Tom，可适当发挥。
Name: Tom Ways to go to school: by bus From: the USA Hobbies: play football, read books Age: 11 Wants to be: a coach
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2．书面表达。
Everyone has friends. Who is your best friend What’s he/she like What’s his/her hobby What does he/she often do 同学们，请用“My Best Friend” 为题描述一下你最好的朋友。
短文要点和参考词汇： (1) Name: Lucy, Li Ming.
(2) Appearance (外貌)：tall, thin, have big eyes...
(3) Personality (性格)：kind, active, helpful...
(4) Hobby (爱好)：like reading books...
(5) Activity (活动)：play football, draw pictures...
注意事项：(1) 书写规范，注意大小写和标点符号。
(2) 文章内容包含上述五个要点，字数不少于30词。参考词汇供选用，可适当扩展。
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3．假如你有一个笔友，他的名字叫Tm, 请根据思维导图所给信息介绍一下你的这位笔友。
Harbin city Tom age 11 years old
reading books hobby favourite sport go skating
要求：（1）. 文中必须包含思维导图中的全部要点，可以适当发挥。
（2）. 条理清晰，语义连贯，语句通顺，书写规范，参考句型仅供选择使用。
（3）. 不少于5句话。开头已经给出，不计入句子总数。
句型：He’s… / He lives in… / He likes…. His favourite sport is…
My pen pal
I have a pen pal.
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4．书面表达。
寒假即将来临，假如你是Helen，你的笔友Eric将于1月14号来拜访你。请你介绍Eric的爱好并且描述你们的计划。（要求：1.须包括思维导图里的四要点；2.其他内容可适当发挥。）
Hello, my name is Helen. I have a pen pal. His name is Eric. We have the same hobbies.
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5．作文。
以“ I have a pen pal”为题，介绍一下你的笔友。可以从名字、年龄、外貌、爱好等方面进行书面表达。
I have a pen pal
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6．书面表达。
请根据下表所提供的信息，用英语介绍你的好朋友Jack。
姓名：Jack 年龄：11
职业：学生 上学：乘公共汽车
爱好：踢足球， 打篮球，看漫画书，看电视
要求：（1）. 书写整洁、规范；（2）. 包含表格中的要点，至少5句话。
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7．书面表达。
请根据表格内容介绍你的笔友May。
要求: （1）.条理清楚，意思连贯，表达正确；（2）.书写规范，不少于6句话。
姓名 May 年龄 11
住址 Guangzhou 上学方式 步行
爱好 唱歌；跳舞；阅读 周末计划 去看电影；看望祖父母
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8．书面表达。
请以“Hobbies”为题写一篇英语小短文，描述你和你朋友的兴趣爱好，不少于5句话。
hobbies
I singing and dancing reading books
John doing kungfu playing football
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9．书面表达。
同学们，我们一起向身边的好榜样学习吧！请你根据光荣榜上的信息，用英文介绍一下这位棒棒的小伙伴。
要求：
（1）. 不低于40个单词（不含开头句）；
（2）. 语句通顺，书写规范，正确使用标点符号。
Come and meet a good boy.
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10．书面表达。
Binbin打算给朋友们写一封信介绍他的新笔友Mike。请根据图表中的信息，帮助他完成邮件。
要求：（1）. 包含所有信息，语句通畅，书写工整规范；
（2）. 不少于5句话。
Address Way to go to school Hobbies Weekend Activities Want to be Winter holiday plan
Mike The USA walk read stories play basketball 做中国菜、 练武术 coach 和家人去旅行
Dear friends,
Do you want a pen pal Try my new pen pal, Mike!
Mike is a nice boy. He lives in the UK. ___________________________________________
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11．书面表达。
在童年生活中，朋友陪我们笑与哭，分担忧愁，快来描述一下你心目中朋友的样子。
以“My friend”为题，介绍一下你的好朋友的信息点。从性格外貌，上学方式，兴趣爱好、生活习惯、周末计划，梦想等方面去描述。
要求：（1）.如果涉及到名字，请用Amy或Mike代替。
（2）.条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。
（3）.不少于6句话。
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12．写作。根据表格信息，请以“My pen pal”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下你的笔友，比如姓名、年龄、爱好等。要求语句通顺，不少于5句话。
Name: Jason
Age: 12
Nationality: America
Hobbies: playing basketball, going hiking, reading
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13．请以“My pen pal”为题，介绍一下你的笔友，他（她）的姓名，年龄，外貌，住在哪里，有什么爱好等。
要求：
（1）. 句子通顺，标点正确，书写规范。
（2）. 不少于5句话，开头已给出。
My pen pal
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14．Amy是你的pen pal，请以My pen pal为题目，根据所给信息及下面的提示句型，写一篇至少五句话的小短文。
提示句型：(1) Amy is ... (我的笔友) 。
(2) She, tall, thin (又高又瘦) 。
(3) She, likes... (读书和唱歌，我也喜欢) 。
(4) We both... (喜欢数学和体育)
(5) She teaches me (英语) ，I teach her (汉语) 。
(6) 我们互相帮助。 (help each other)
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15．Mike是你认识的新笔友，请根据下面的信息介绍一下他吧。
要求：语句通顺，条理清楚。不少于50个单词。不出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Age 13
Country the USA
Way To Go To School by bike
Hobby play ping—pong, dance
Weekend Plan climb mountains
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16．假如你是Oliver，请根据下表信息，用英语介绍你的新笔友Dave。不少于五句话。
Name (姓名) Dave
Age (年龄) 11
Job (职业) student
Ways to school (上学的方式) usually by bus, sometimes on foot
Hobbies (爱好) reading stories, going hiking, doing word puzzles
My new pen pal
Hello everyone! My name is Oliver.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．范文：
My friend
I have a good friend. His name is Tom. He is 11 years old. He is from the USA. Tom’s school is far from his home. So he goes to school by bus. He likes reading books. Sometimes he reads books in the evening. He also likes playing football. He wants to be a coach one day.
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求根据所给信息介绍一下Tom，然后再阐述他的年龄，交通方式，喜好等。人称用第三人称，时态用一般现在时，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：friend朋友，far from离……远，by bus乘公交车，playing football踢足球，reading books读书，coach教练，one day有一天。
参考句型：I …；He is…；Tom’s school is…；He…；Sometimes he…
2．范文：
My Best Friend
Lucy is my best friend. She is tall and has big eyes. She is kind and active. She is also very helpful. She likes reading books. She often plays football and draws pictures on the weekend.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求“My Best Friend” 为题描述一下自己最好的朋友。然后再阐述名字，外貌，性格，爱好和活动。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：tall高的，kind友善的，active活跃的，helpful有帮助的，read books看书，play football踢足球，draw pictures画画
参考句型：...is my best friend.； She is …；She likes …；She often …
3．例文：
My pen pal I have a pen pal. His name is Tom. He lives in Harbin. He is a student. He is eleven years old. He goes to school by bike. He likes reading books. His favourite sport is go skating. He wants to be a skater.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要去用第三人称介绍自己的笔友，阐述他的姓名、年龄、爱好、居住地以及最喜欢的运动。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：reading books读书，favourite sport最喜欢的运动，go skating滑冰
参考句型：He lives in…；He likes…；His favourite sport is…
4．例文：
Hello, my name is Helen. I have a pen pal. His name is Eric. We have the same hobbies. We like reading books and visiting museums. He is coming to visit me on January 14th. We are going to visit the museum in the morning. We are going there by bus. In the afternoon, we are going to the library and read books there. We’re going on foot. We’ll have a good time.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据提示和思维导图完成写作，文章为一般现在时和一般将来时，要点内容不能少，逻辑清晰。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：visit拜访，library图书馆，museum博物馆，by bus乘坐公交车，on foot步行
参考句型：We are going…；We like…；We’ll have…
5．例文：
I have a pen pal
I have a new pen pal. Her name is Ann. She is 12 years old. She is tall and thin. She is a kind girl. She likes playing ping-pong. She usually plays ping-pong with her classmates after school. Her home is near the school. So she often goes to school on foot. This is my pen pal. She is also my good friend.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己的笔友。然后阐述笔友的名字、年龄、外貌以及爱好等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合题目要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：pen pal 笔友， kind 友善的， play ping-pong 打乒乓球，on foot 步行
参考句型： I have…；She is…；She likes…
6．范文：
Jack is my good friend. He is 11 years old. He is a student. He goes to school by bus. He likes playing football, playing basketball, reading comic books and watching TV.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求介绍你的好朋友Jack，包括姓名，年龄、职业、交通方式和爱好。注意人称是第三人称，时态是一般现在时，并满足句数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：years old岁，student学生，by bus乘公共汽车，playing football踢足球，playing basketball打篮球，reading comic books看漫画书，watching TV看电视
参考句型：Jack is…；He is…；He goes…；He likes…
7．范文：
I have a pen pal. Her name is Mary. She is eleven. She lives in Guangzhou. She goes to school on foot. She likes singing, dancing and reading. She is going to see a film and visit her grandparents on the weekend.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据表格内容介绍自己的笔友Mary。然后再阐述姓名，年龄，住址，上学方式，爱好和周末计划。注意文章为一般现在时态和一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：pen pal笔友，eleven11，live in住在(某地)，on foot步行，sing唱歌，dance跳舞，read于都，see a film看电影，visit her grandparents看望祖父母
参考句型：I have …； Her name is …；She is …； She lives in …； She likes ...；She is going to ...
8．范文：
Hobbies
My friend John and I have some hobbies. Our hobbies are different. I likes singing and dancing. I also like reading books. But John likes doing kung fu and playing football.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“Hobbies”为题写一篇英语小短文。然后再阐述自己和朋友的兴趣爱好。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：different不同的，singing唱歌，dancing跳舞，reading books看书，doing kung fu练武术，playing football踢足球
参考句型：My friend John and I …； Our hobbies are …；I like …； But John likes …；
9．范文：
Come and meet a good boy. His name is Li Lei. He is 12 years old. He likes playing football and reading books. He is very clever and polite. He studies hard. He can speak English well. He often helps friends. His friends all like him very much. Do you like him
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据提示介绍一下你的小伙伴李磊。然后，介绍他的性格特点和能力。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型
参考单词：boy男孩，play football踢足球，read books读书，clever聪明的，polite有礼貌的，speak English说英语，like喜欢
参考句型：His name is...；He is...；He likes...；He can...
10．例文：
Dear friends,
Do you want a pen pal Try my new pen pal, Mike! Mike is a nice boy. He lives in the UK. He goes to school on foot. His hobbies are reading stories and playing basketball. He often makes Chinese food and does kungfu at the weekend. He wants to be a coach. He will go to travel in winter holiday.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称介绍自己的新笔友。然后再阐述他的地址，上学的方式，爱好，周末活动，未来的职业以及寒假计划。注意文章为一般现在时态和一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：pen pal笔友，hobbies爱好，read stories读故事，play basketball打篮球，do kungfu练武术，weekend周末，coach教练，winter holiday寒假
参考句型：He lives in...；He goes to...；His hobbies are...；He often...；He wants to...；He will...
11．范文：
My friend
My friend is Amy. She comes from France. She has golden hair. She goes to school by bus. She likes dancing very much. She often goes to the dancing class on the weekend. She wants to be a dancer. She will give her first performance next week．
【解析】1.题目解读：该题要求以“My friend”为题，以第三人称写一篇小短文，包括朋友的性格外貌，上学方式，兴趣爱好、生活习惯、周末计划，梦想等，时态是一般现在时态，同时注意单词数量的要求。
2.参考词汇和句型
参考词汇：France法国，golden金色的，by bus乘公交车，dancing跳舞，weekend周末，dancer舞蹈家，performance表演
参考句型： My friend is...；She comes from...；She has...；She likes...；She wants to be...；She will...；
12．范文：
My pen pal
I have a pen pal. His name is Jason. He is 12 years old. He is from America. He likes playing basketball and going hiking. He also likes reading.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My pen pal”为题写一篇短文。然后再阐述姓名、年龄、爱好等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：pen pal笔友，America美国，play basketball打篮球，go hiking去远足
参考句型：I have …； His name is …；He is …； He likes …；
13．范文：
My pen pal
I have a pen pal. She is an English girl. Her name is Amy. She is a student. She is thirteen years old. She is tall and thin. She goes to school on foot. Her favourite food is beef. She likes reading. She often reads books on weekends. Her e-mail address is Amy @.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称介绍自己的笔友。包括姓名、性别、年龄、爱好、电子邮件地址等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：English英国的，student学生，tall and thin又高又瘦，favourite最喜欢的，weekends周末，e-mail address电子邮件
参考句型：She is…；She goes to…；Her favourite…；She often…
14．范文：
My pen pal
I have a pen pal and her name is Amy. (Amy is my pen pal. ) She is tall and thin. She likes reading and singing. I like reading and singing, too. We both like maths and PE. She teaches me English and I teach her Chinese. We help each other.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以My pen pal为题目，根据信息及提示句型写一篇短文。然后再阐述外貌特征，兴趣爱好，喜欢的科目等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：tall高的，thin瘦的，read阅读，sing唱歌，maths数学，PE体育，English英语，Chinese汉语
参考句型：I have …； She is …；She likes …； I like …；We both like …；We …；
15．范文：
I have a new pen pal. His name is Mike. He is thirteen years old. He comes from the USA. He goes to school by bike. He likes playing ping-pong and dancing. He is going to climb mountains this weekend.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己的新笔友。然后再阐述他的年龄，国籍，出行方式，爱好以及周末计划。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：the USA美国，dance跳舞，climb mountains爬山
参考句型： His name is...；He goes...；He likes...；He is going to...
16．范文：
My new pen pal
Hello everyone! My name is Oliver. I have a new pen pal. His name is Dave. He is eleven years old. He is a student. He usually goes to school by bus, but sometimes on foot. He likes reading stories, going hiking and doing word puzzles.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据表格信息，介绍新笔友Dave。然后再阐述姓名、年龄、职业、上学的方式及爱好。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：eleven11，by bus乘公共汽车，on foot步行，go hiking去远足
参考句型：I have …； His name is …；He is …； He usually …；He likes ...；
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