高考英语二轮复习应用文写作课时教学课件(共25张)

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(共21张PPT)
题型一 应用文写作
类型4投稿和报道
 (2024·浙江1月卷)请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。内容包括:
高考真题
1. 介绍这项运动;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Nowadays, we students face mounting academic pressure, leading to longer periods of sitting and less time for physical activity.     
   现在分词短语作结果状语
It’s high time we should rise from our seats during class breaks      
It’s high time that...句型 +虚拟语气
and embrace the simple exercise of rope skipping.
Rope skipping is a fairly approachable sport that requires minimal equipment-a rope-and can be practiced anywhere. It not only relieves the tiredness from our previous     
    缓解疲劳
session, but also recharges our bodies and minds.
           恢复体力和精力
This prepares us for enhanced concentration and boosted learning efficiency in the classes     
     提高学习效率
that follow.
Therefore, stand up and grab a rope. Let’s embrace the joy of this simple sport and the profound impact it can have on our health.
       定语从句
一、投稿满分作文3大技巧
1. 投稿的写作框架
短文投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行写作,所投稿件应紧贴主题,内容应新颖、独特、实用,符合词数要求等。其写作思路框架如下:
2. 投稿必背高分句式
[首段]说明投稿原因:
(1)An article in the newspaper caught my attention.报纸上的一篇文章吸引了我的注意。
(2)I want to talk about “How Social Media Affect People’s Life” in your column.我想谈一谈你栏目中的“社会媒体是如何影响人们的生活的”。
[中段]论述观点:
(1)As far as I am concerned, students should do more listening and speaking so that they can develop their communication skills.就我而言,学生应该多练习听和说以便他们能提高他们的交际能力。
(2)Not only does playing table tennis build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes friendship with others.打乒乓球不仅可以增强我的体质、缓解学习压力,而且还增进与他人的友谊。
[末段]表达感谢和期待:
(1)I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.如果你能尽快回复,我将不胜感激。
(2)I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.我真的期望《青年》能出版更多的经典作品,并且有一个美好的未来。
3. 投稿写作模板
Dear ××(收稿人),
I know     (活动内容) on your school English newspaper. The protection of national and folk cultures     (观点总括). I have a strong desire to share my personal viewpoints on it.
In my opinion,     (看法一). To begin with,     (看法二). What’s more,     (看法三).
In a word, it is high time for us to     (表达期待).
Yours sincerely,
××(投稿人)
二、报道满分作文3大技巧
1. 报道的写作框架
新闻报道是用概括性的叙述方式、简明扼要的文字,迅速报道新近发生的新闻事实的一种应用文体。新闻报道一般由标题、导语、主体及结束语四个部分组成。
2. 报道必背高分句式
[首段]简要概括事件:
(1)To help... build..., the Students’ Union of our school organized a volunteer activity last weekend.为了帮助……建设……,我们学校的学生会上周末组织了一次志愿者活动。
(2)In order to provide the students with a colorful school life, our school held... last week.为了给学生们提供丰富多彩的校园生活,我们学校上周举办了……
(3)In an attempt to mourn sb./mark sth., our school held an activity on..., which received great attention.为了悼念某人/纪念某事,我们学校在……(时间)举行了一次活动,受到了极大的关注。
(4)Recently the issue/problem of... has been brought into focus/brought to public attention.最近……的问题成为焦点/引起公众注意。
[中段]事件过程:
(1)At the beginning, a lecture related to... was arranged, after which the teachers in our school showed us how to...开始时,我们安排了一场关于……的讲座,之后我们学校的老师向我们展示了如何……
(2)It was a nice day. At 8:00 a.m., we gathered at... and set out for... in high spirits.天气很好。早上8点,我们在……集合,兴高采烈地动身去……
(3)At the beginning of the activity, a short film was shown, helping us students know...活动开始时,放映了一部短片,帮助我们学生了解……
(4)The opening ceremony started at 9:00 a.m., and the schoolmaster delivered a speech about...开幕式上午9点开始,校长发表了关于……的演讲。
(5)The activity was so fascinating that more than 500 students signed up for it.活动如此具有吸引力以至于有500多名学生报名参加。
(6)All the volunteers were divided into several groups and then they went to the nearby communities, where they helped the residents do...所有志愿者被分成几个小组,然后他们去附近的社区,在那里帮助居民做……
(7)About 2 hours later, we all reached... Bathed in sunshine, we cheered with joy.大约两小时后,我们都到了……沐浴在阳光下,我们高兴地欢呼起来。
[末段]对事件的评价和感受:
(1)Through the activity, not only did we master some basic and practical skills, but also our awareness of safety was raised.通过这次活动,我们不仅掌握了一些基本的实用技能,还增强了我们的安全意识。
(2)There is no denying that the activity benefits us a lot. It not only provides us with a chance to..., but allows us to... as well.不可否认,这次活动使我们受益匪浅。它不仅给我们提供了……的机会,而且让我们可以……
(3)The activity was thought highly of. Not only can... be passed down continuously, but also more importance was attached to...此次活动受到高度评价。不仅……可以一直流传下去,而且……受到了更多的重视。
3. 报道写作模板
In order to     (活动目的), our school organized an activity on     (事件日期). Hundreds of us took part in it.
The activity covered a wide range of topics including     (描述活动内容). The competitors took an active in answering questions, which     (描述活动气氛).
Through this activity,     (总结活动感受/意义). What a wonderful time!
名题抢分练
Test 1
你校英语报举办了一次征文活动,主题是“是否需要延长高三学生晚自习时间”。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 你的观点;
2. 说明理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Should Senior 3 Students’
Evening Study Hours Be Extended?
[参考范文]
Should Senior 3 Students’
Evening Study Hours Be Extended?
As for whether Senior 3 students’ evening study hours should be extended, I hold the view that such a decision should be made with caution.
As far as I am concerned, extending study hours beyond a reasonable limit might not necessarily guarantee students’ improved results. Instead, it can potentially lead to tiredness and stress, damaging their learning efficiency and health. Effective learning relies more on quality rather than quantity. Therefore, schools should focus on improving teaching methods and ensuring concentrated periods of study during regular class hours.
So I think it is not wise to extend Senior 3 students’ evening study hours.
Test 2
上周你校开展了为期两天的运动会。请你以“A Memorable Sports Meeting”为题,给校英文报写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动流程;
3. 活动感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Memorable Sports Meeting
[参考范文]
A Memorable Sports Meeting
To build up our body and increase our enthusiasm for sports, a school sports meeting was held in our playground last week.
More than 200 participants were involved. They took an active part in every event. Zhang Qiang, a boy in Senior One, jumped highest of all. A team of Senior Three who were very strong ran very fast and won the boy’s 400-metre relay. Besides, all the other students cheered for the athletes in their class.
It turned out to be a great success. Not only was this school sports meeting of great benefit to our health but it also enriched our school life.(共39张PPT)
题型一 应用文写作
类型2慰问信、邀请信、推荐信和祝贺信
 (2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
高考真题
1. 节目介绍;
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
I am Li Hua in charge of the English program “Talk and Talk” at our  
       负责
school broadcasting station. I am writing to invite you to attend our program.
“Talk and Talk” is a program which is designed to(为做……而设计) interview some     
people to talk about everything positive,     
运用定语从句,让表达更丰满
covering life, work, study and so on. The interview with you is scheduled at 9 on Sunday morning and you are expected to talk about how to improve     
以事物开头,使表达更地道
the Chinese students’ communication skills in English. Would you like to tell me if you are available then?     
有空的
If not, we can arrange another time.
运用省略形式,
避免累赘 安排
  Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
一、慰问信满分作文3大技巧
1. 慰问信的写作框架
慰问信是在重大节日或某种特殊情况,对有关人员表示安慰、关切、鼓励的书信。其写作思路框架如下:
2. 慰问信必背高分句式
[首段]得知情况:
(1)I am awfully/extremely sorry to hear/learn that you are trapped in a bad mood because...得知你因……而心情不好,我很难过。
(2)Having known that you are in a painful state and under great pressure now, I’m writing to offer my great comfort to you.得知你现在很痛苦,处在巨大的压力下,我写信安慰你。
(3)Words failed me to convey my worry when I heard that...得知……时,我无法用语言来表达我的担忧。
[中段]给予关心和鼓励:
(1)Still, you have many more chances to try.你依然有更多的机会可以尝试。
(2)So I hope that you will not take this to heart, and will get ready to have a try again.所以我希望你不要把这事记在心上,做好准备再尝试一次。
(3)I quite understand how you feel now.我非常理解你现在的感受。
[末段]表示支持:
(1)Please don’t hesitate to tell me if there is anything I can do.如果我能做什么,请尽管告诉我。
(2)Remember we won’t be far away when you need help!记住,你需要帮助时,我们就在不远处!
3. 慰问信写作模板
Dear ××(收信人),
I’m shocked/sorry to hear that you     (写信目的). I quite understand how you feel now. It’s understandable that you sink into sadness.
My suggestions are as follows: First and foremost, we should     (安慰一). I firmly believe a positive attitude will lead us to a world full of success. In addition,     (安慰二). Only in this way can we     (表达鼓励). Therefore, if your dream endeavors to rise above the disadvantages, you will win sooner or later.
I hope that     (愿望). Let’s go all out together to turn our dreams into reality. If you need any help, please don’t hesitate to contact me. We shall be happy when you are back.
Yours,
××(写信人)
2. 邀请信必背高分句式
[首段]开篇表意:
(1)I’m very pleased/more than delighted to invite you to join in... to be held from... to... in... 我很高兴邀请你参加从……到……(时间)在……(地点)举行的……(活动)。
(2)I am sincerely inviting you to participate in... on behalf of... 我代表……真挚地邀请您参加……
(3)It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to participate in/attend... 能邀请您参加……是我莫大的荣幸。
[中段]活动安排:
(1)Here are arrangements for this activity./The following are arrangements for this activity./Arrangements for this activity are as follows.活动安排如下。
(2)To begin with, we will... Besides, there will be varieties of activities such as..., which will... 首先,我们将……此外,将会有很多活动,例如……,这将……
(3)This will be followed by... At around ten, we will hold a small party, at which... 随后会有……,十点左右我们会举行一个小型派对,派对上……
(4)The activity is scheduled to last approximately..., from... to... 活动预计持续约……,从……到……(时间)
[末段]望应邀,盼回复:
(1)Would you please drop me a line to let me know whether you can come to...?请写信告诉我你是否能来……,好吗?
(2)An early/favorable/timely reply will be highly appreciated.我会非常感激你的早日/肯定/及时答复。
(3)If you are interested, please let me know and I’ll send you more relevant/detailed information.如果你感兴趣,请告诉我,我将给你发送更多的相关/细节信息。
(4)Hopefully, you will accept our invitation. My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.希望你能接受我们的邀请。如果你能来,我和我的家人将会感到非常荣幸。
(5)We would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.如果你能在你方便时尽早确认参加,我们将不胜感激。
(6)I sincerely hope you can accept our invitation/join us and I have the confidence that...我真诚地希望你能接受我们的邀请/加入我们,我有信心……
3. 邀请信写作模板
Dear ××(收信人),
I’m     (自我介绍). A     (活动名称) will be held at/in     (地点) on     (时间) in order to     (目的或原因). As you are     (表明身份), we would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at     (具体时间),     (活动具体内容). This will be followed by a     (进一步的安排). At around     (时间),     (另一个安排).
We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at     (电话号码) if you have any questions.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
××(写信人)
2. 推荐信必背高分句式
[首段]指明推荐的对象:
(1)Knowing that you are interested in/crazy about/an enthusiast of..., I’m writing to recommend... to you.知道你对……感兴趣/痴迷于……/是……爱好者,我写信是想向你推荐……
(2)I’m very pleased to learn that you are going to... I’m writing to offer my recommendation.得知你将……我很高兴。我写信是为了提供建议。
(3)With reference to your demands, I shall recommend... to you.关于你的要求,我将向你推荐……
[中段]简述推荐理由:
(1)The reasons why I recommend... to you are as follows. First of all, ...Besides, ...Last but not least, ...我向你推荐……的原因如下。首先,……另外,……最后但同样重要的是,……
(2)There are several reasons why I think... is a good choice. Firstly, he possesses a/an... attitude. Additionally, he is equipped with extraordinary ability to... Plus, relevant experience of... makes him... 我认为……是个不错的选择有几个原因。首先,他具有……的态度。另外,他……能力超强。而且,他有……的相关经验,使他能够……
[末段]表达期望与祝愿:
(1)I do hope that you can find my recommendation beneficial. Looking forward to your early/prompt reply.我真希望我的建议对你有所帮助。期待你的早日/及时回复。
(2)Hope my recommendation will be of help. Wish you a good time/journey.希望我的推荐有用。祝你过得/旅途愉快。
(3)Whenever you need help, please don’t hesitate to let me know.无论你何时需要帮助,请尽管告诉我。
(4)I’m confident/convinced that it will meet your requirements.我确信它能满足你的要求。
3. 推荐信写作模板
Dear ××(收信人),
I’m glad to hear from you, knowing that you are interested in     (推荐事项). Now, I’m more than willing to recommend     (推荐对象) to you.
The reasons why I recommend     (推荐对象) are as follows. First,     (理由一). In addition,     (理由二). Last but not least,     (理由三).
What do you think of it? Hopefully, my recommendation will satisfy your requirement.
Yours,
××(写信人)
2. 祝贺信必背高分句式
[首段]说明祝贺事由:
(1)I want to congratulate you with all my heart/from the bottom of my heart.我想向你致以诚挚的/衷心的祝贺。
(2)I’m much delighted to learn/hear of your success/achievements in... I would like to extend my warmest congratulations to you.得知你在……方面的成功/成就,我非常高兴。我想向你致以最热烈的祝贺。
[中段]陈述对方获得成功的原因:
(1)I know how talented you are and how hard you’ve worked to attain the goal. You are bound to be successful sooner or later in my eyes.我知道你多么有才华以及你为达到这个目标工作有多努力。在我看来,你迟早会成功的。
(2)You would not have achieved this without diligence and perseverance.没有勤奋和毅力,你是不可能做到这一点的。
(3)As far as I am concerned/Personally, it is your utmost efforts to... that lead to your brilliant achievements.就我个人而言,正是你对……付出的最大努力给你带来巨大的成就。
[末段]再次表示祝贺:
(1)All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!祝你前程似锦/事业有成!
(2)I’m sure a talented person like you will make greater achievements and live a more fulfilling life.我相信像你这样有才华的人将会取得更大的成就,过上更令人满意的生活。
3. 祝贺信写作模板
Dear ××(收信人),
Congratulations, we are proud of your excellent performance! I am writing to congratulate you upon     (事由).
    (展开事件评论,赞扬收信人).
Your success shows that     (提示的道理). Please accept our sincerest congratulations and very best wishes for all the good future.
Yours,
××(写信人)
名题抢分练
Test 1
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信,得知他和朋友们骑车旅行一周的计划没有得到父母的许可,他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 表示安慰;
2. 给出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
 Dear Jim, 
I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t get your parents’ permission to go on a week-long bike trip with your friends. Knowing that you’re upset, I’d like to give you some comfort and advice.
As far as I’m concerned, the most important thing that you need to do now is have a good conversation with your parents, which is beneficial to your relationship. Besides, there is no need for you to be disappointed about this because your parents just want to protect you from potentially dangerous situations.
In a word, I hope you will get better in no time. Looking forward to your reply.
 Yours, 
 Li Hua 
Test 2
假定你是李华,你校拟近期组织一次踏青活动。请给外教Michael写一封邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 具体安排。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Michael,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
 Dear Michael, 
I hope this email finds you well. I am delighted to invite you to participate in our upcoming spring outing, which aims to promote community spirit and appreciation for nature.
The event is scheduled for 9 a.m. this Saturday at the school gate. From there, we’ll take a bus to our destination, Daming Lake. We’ll enjoy a brief walk along the lakeshore, taking in fresh air and admiring breathtaking views. This will be followed by some fun team-building activities for relaxation.
Your presence would mean a lot to us. Looking forward to your participation!
 Yours sincerely, 
 Li Hua 
Test 3
假定你是李华,外教Brian向学生征集口语课上大家喜欢讨论的话题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐话题;
2. 说明理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Brian,
I’m Li Hua, from Class 1.       
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
 Dear Brian, 
 I’m Li Hua, from Class 1.  There are some topics popping up in my mind and I am glad to share them with you, hoping they can give you some inspiration.
To begin with, I’d like to recommend travel and adventure. Talking in English about travel and adventure enables us to share exciting experiences, explore new places, and have conversations that spark our curiosity and desire for cultural discovery.
What’s more, my best friend might be a good option, for it bridges distance and builds a stronger bond with our friends. So, targeted at refining English fluency, these topics will provide us with the necessary resources to take our English-speaking abilities to new heights.
Hope my recommendations can be of some help.
 Yours sincerely, 
 Li Hua 
Test 4
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter坚持学习汉语10年,最近顺利通过汉语水平考试(HSK)四级。请你写信向他表示祝贺。内容要点包括:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 肯定Peter平时为之做出的努力;
3. 鼓励和期望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
 Dear Peter, 
I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your passing the HSK 4 test. I feel incredibly proud of your remarkable academic achievement.
From my perspective, you are one of the most diligent students I’ve ever known. You are active in class and you spend most of your spare time in the library. The past 10 years have seen your devotion, persistence, strenuous efforts, and eventually your rapid progress in Chinese learning. Therefore, I firmly believe this fulfillment is a reward that you richly deserve.
I am sure that the certificate you have won is the first of many honors that you will attain in the years to come. I genuinely wish you could make still further achievements in the future and I am looking forward to good news from you soon.
 Yours sincerely, 
 Li Hua (共39张PPT)
题型一 应用文写作
类型3发言稿、演讲稿、倡议书和通知
 (2024·全国甲卷)英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
高考真题
   
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
As we all know, the shared bicycle is an eco-friendly and convenient
  使用高级句式
option for short-distance travel, reducing traffic jams and improving mobility. When it comes to long- distance travel, the high-speed train     
 提高流动性
is the best choice. Our country boasts one of the world’s most extensive      
        有值得自豪的东西
high-speed rail networks, reducing travel time significantly and making travel more accessible. Besides, the rise of new energy vehicles, including electric cars and buses, demonstrates China’s commitment to environmental protection.
In conclusion, all these advancements  highlight China’s innovative
总结过渡,结构清晰,意为“总之”
approach to developing a modern, energy-efficient and environmentally friendly transportation system.
 环保的
Let’s look forward to more progress in the future.
使用高级表达,短语优先
一、发言稿满分作文3大技巧
1. 发言稿的写作框架
发言稿是参加者为了在会议上或活动上发表自己的观点、看法事先准备的文稿,发言稿要观点鲜明,条理清楚。其写作思路框架如下:
2. 发言稿必背高分句式
[首段]明确主题:
(1)Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation.今天我很高兴有机会发言。
(2)It’s my honor to stand here and say something about friendship.很荣幸站在这儿说一些关于友谊的事情。
(3)Good morning, everyone! It is my great honor to share with you my opinions on...大家早上好!很荣幸和你们分享我关于……的观点。
(4)Today I want to talk to you about a very important subject.今天我想和你们谈论一个很重要的话题。
[中段]具体内容:
(1)I suggest that we should...我建议我们应该……
(2)It is known to all that...众所周知……
(3)As far as I am concerned...就我而言……
(4)What impresses me most is that...让我印象最深的是……
(5)I believe that...我认为……
(6)On behalf of..., I wish...代表……,我希望……
[末段]表示感谢:
(1)Thanks for your listening.感谢你们的聆听。
(2)That’s all I want to say about this point.关于这一点这就是我想说的。
3. 发言稿写作模板
Dear     (听众),
How time flies!     (明确主题). It has been two weeks since you came to our school for the exchange program, which has benefited all of us.
During the past two weeks,     (内容一). Doing the same sports on the playground offers us the opportunity to promote our friendship.     (内容二), in which you showed outstanding talent. We believe that the students in our school have learned a lot from the exchange program.
At last,     (期望和祝愿).
Thanks for your listening.
2. 演讲稿必背高分句式
[首段]引出主题:
(1)Good morning,everyone! I’m Li Hua. I’m honored to have the opportunity to make a speech on...大家上午好!我是李华。很荣幸有机会做有关……的演讲。
(2)It’s my great honor to be here/to have the opportunity to say something about...我很荣幸能在这里/能有机会谈论一下……
(3)I’m very glad and feel it my honor to run for/be a candidate for...我很高兴,也是我的荣幸能参加……的竞选/成为……的候选人。
(4)I really appreciate your making time in your tight schedule to attend the meeting. We are here to talk about...我非常感谢你们在百忙之中抽出时间来参加会议。我们在这儿要谈论……
[中段]陈述内容:
(1)Many people believe/hold the view/think that...许多人认为……
(2)What I want to stress is that... For one thing, ... For another, ... Besides, ... In a word, ... 我想强调的是……一方面,……另一方面,……此外,……总之,……
(3)The first thing we can do is... As we all know, ... What we can do next is... For example, ... What’s more, ...我们能做的第一件事是……众所周知,……我们下一步能做的是……例如,……而且,……
[末段]提出希望并表示感谢或进行总结:
(1)Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.我从心底感谢你们今天给了我这个机会与你们讲话。
(2)I’d like to wish... a success and I hope you can perform at your best!我祝愿……获得成功,希望你们能表现出自己最好的状态!
(3)I sincerely hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful to you. Thanks for your listening/attention!我真诚地希望以上所说的对你们有帮助。感谢你们的倾听/关注!
3. 演讲稿写作模板
Good morning,     (听众). My name is     (自我介绍). Today I want to talk about     (演讲主题).
As we all know,     (情况). However, there are still     (问题). Personally, it is a problem about     (分析问题).
How can we address it then? As far as I’m concerned, the following solutions are useful. That is     (方法一). For another     (方法二). What’s more, we have to     (方法三).
I hope all of you will     (号召行动). Thank you for your listening.
2. 倡议书必背高分句式
[首段]说明倡议的原因:
(1)With the approaching of..., I’d like to call on everyone to...随着……的临近,我想号召大家……
(2)It goes without saying that... is of great benefit to... However, in my opinion, the present situation is... 不用说,……对……有很大好处。然而,在我看来,目前的情况是……
[中段]陈述倡议内容或实施方案:
(1)With the aim of..., we are supposed to carry out a series of measures. For one thing, ...For another, ...为了……,我们应该采取一系列措施。一方面,……另一方面,……
(2)I think it necessary to lay stress on.../we should follow the advice below. First of all/To begin with, ...Besides, ... What’s more, ...我认为有必要强调的是……/我们应该遵循以下建议。首先,……其次,……更重要的是,……
(3)Effective measures should be adopted before things get worse.在事态恶化之前,应该采取有效措施。
(4)Only if we take effective measures to deal with this problem now can we...只有我们现在采取有效措施来解决这个问题,我们才能……
[末段]呼吁/号召行动:
(1)Let’s join our hands and take action immediately.让我们携起手来,立即采取行动。
(2)All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to...总之,是时候我们致力于……
3. 倡议书写作模板
Dear     (听众),
I’m     (介绍自己). I am writing to     (倡议内容).
We can see that     (阐述内容). To solve such problem, we should     (方式一). Besides,     (方式二). Most importantly,     (方式三).
Let’s make joint efforts to     (发出呼吁). Your cooperation would be much appreciated.
2. 通知必背高分句式
[首段]介绍缘由:
(1)In celebration of..., a meeting/party is to be held at... (time) on... (date) in/at... (place).为了庆祝……,在……(时间、地点)将举行一次会议/聚会。
(2)In order to enrich our after-school life, we are going to hold...为了丰富我们的课余生活,我们将举办……
(3)With the intention of fostering/cultivating/promoting/raising people’s awareness of.../interest in..., a campaign called/named/entitled... is scheduled to be held on...(time) at/in...(place).为了培养/提高人们……的意识/对……的兴趣,一个名为……的活动计划于……(时间)在……(地方)举办。
[中段]具体事项:
(1)As scheduled, it is supposed to be launched at 2:30 this Wednesday afternoon in the school lecture hall.按计划,它将在本周三下午2:30在学校讲堂举行。
(2)The meeting will be held in the library/stadium/auditorium at...(time).会议将于……(时间)在图书馆/体育场/礼堂举行。
(3)The... will begin at...(time)/on...(date), lasting 3 hours/15 days.……将于……(时间)/……(日期)开始,持续3小时/15天。
(4)Students from... are expected to take part.来自……的学生预计会参加。
(5)Those who have interest in... are welcome to participate.欢迎对……感兴趣的人参加。
(6)During..., a variety of activities will be presented, ranging from... to... I bet there is bound to be one that can appeal to/strike you.在……期间,多种活动将会呈现,包括……到……我相信一定会有一个能够吸引你。
(7)By then, there will be many activities you are surely to be interested in, including...到那时,会有很多你一定会感兴趣的活动,包括……
(8)Come here on time and bring a pen and a notebook with you.请准时到这儿,并随身携带笔和本。
(9)Additionally, it is recommended that you should prepare...另外,建议你准备……
(10)All the participants are required/expected to carry... in view of... 考虑到……,所有的参与者需要/应该携带……
(11)No asking for leave without special reasons.没有特殊原因不准请假。
(12)Please be there on time and don’t be late.请按时到达,不要迟到。
(13)Those who want to involve themselves in the activity please sign up at... before October 10th.想参加该活动的人请于10月10日前到……报名。
[末段]表示欢迎或期待:
(1)Your participation/contribution will surely/certainly make much difference/make the event a huge success.你的参与/贡献一定会有很大的影响/使这次活动取得巨大成功。
(2)We are expecting your attendance/participation.我们期待您的出席/参与。
(3)Your presence will be requested.敬请出席。
3. 通知写作模板
Notice
In order to     (活动主题), we are going to organize     (活动名称) on     (具体日期或活动地点).
The event will last     (持续时间), regarding     (活动内容). In the     (活动名称), you will learn     (活动意义).
If you are interested in the events and want to join in any of them, please come to Student Union to sign up before     (具体时间). Looking forward to your participation.
名题抢分练
Test 1
学校英语俱乐部正在开展以“Ways to Relieve Stress”为题的讨论。请根据图表中的调查结果写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1. 简述调查结果;
2. 评价并提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Ways to Relieve Stress
Recently a survey was carried out about ways to relieve stress.       
[参考范文]
Ways to Relieve Stress
 Recently a survey was carried out about ways to relieve stress.  The majority of the respondents watched videos or listened to music to paratively, only a small number of students chose exercise or chatting with others.
While videos and music are fun, spending too much time on them may cause us to ignore more important things. There are actually better options available. For example, doing exercise or chatting with friends not only relieves stress but also brings us closer.
So, if we feel stressed, it’s useful to try different ways to relax which can help both our body and mind.That’s all. Thank you!
Test 2
假定你是李华,英语老师安排你今天做课前演讲,你打算谈谈上周班内的英语辩论赛,内容包括:
1. 你的观感;
2. 你的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Hello, everyone,
As we know, we had a wonderful English debate competition last week. I am thrilled to share my ideas about it.
It was quite an enlightening experience for me. I was impressed by the fluent English of the speakers and their depth of knowledge. Each side presented strong arguments and counterarguments that were both logical and well-structured. However, I noticed that some debaters could improve their public speaking skills, such as maintaining eye contact and using body language effectively. I suggest that we have more workshops on presentation skills and perhaps practice debating in English regularly to enhance our abilities further.
Let’s keep improving our skills and making each debate a platform for growth and learning. Thank you!
Test 3
为了迎接世界读书日,学校英语社计划以“Reading For Fun”为主题组织一场读书活动,请你写一份英文倡议书。内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容;
3. 发出倡议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:世界读书日World Book Day
Dear fellows,
English Club
April 20
[参考范文]
 Dear fellows, 
In order to celebrate the upcoming World Book Day, an interesting reading campaign will be launched. Not only does the activity stimulate readers’ creativity and shape their character, but it can also enrich their lives in a unique way.
The following are activities involved in this reading campaign. As scheduled, reading clubs are organized in groups for a shared topic in the library every Wednesday afternoon. Participants are welcome to discuss figures in the book, who are the source of motivation to help them beat the difficulties and create miracles. In addition, every participant is required to submit a reading report within given time to enhance their critical thinking ability and writing capability.
All in all, by immersing ourselves in the charm of books, this activity definitely offers endless fun to us. My dear fellows, please join us as soon as possible!
 English Club 
 April 20 
Test 4
4月1日是“国际爱鸟日”,你校学生会本周将组织学生进行户外观鸟活动。请写一则英文通知,通知你校外国交换生参加。内容包括:
1. 活动简介;
2. 注意事项。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
Student Union
[参考范文]
Notice
With the approaching of International Bird Day, our school will hold an outdoor bird-watching activity this Sunday.
As scheduled, the activity will begin at 8:00 a.m. in the school lecture hall where the biology teacher will explain basic principles of scientific observation. Then, we’ll walk to the forest park near our school where an experienced guide will teach us some dos and don’ts for bird-watching. Please wear comfortable shoes and take sun cream with you in case of getting sunburnt. Being punctual is also of vital importance.
All exchange students are welcome to join us.
Student Union(共40张PPT)
题型一 应用文写作
类型1感谢信、道歉信、申请信和建议信
 (2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
高考真题
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up[(使)成对] students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
运用名词性从句,让表述更具体
  运用非谓语动词(短语)简化复合句,精练语言
or have difficulty     
与……相处

communicating with.
与……交流有困难
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more    
以……为基础
comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
一、感谢信满分作文3大技巧
1. 感谢信的写作框架
感谢信是用来向帮助、关心和支持自己的人表示感谢的一种方式,最主要的特点是真诚。其写作思路框架如下:
2. 感谢信必背高分句式
[首段]表达感谢之情并说明原因:
(1)With the deepest gratitude, I’m writing to you to express my sincere thanks for your timely assistance and support when I was traveling in... 我怀着最深的感激给您写信,真诚感谢我在……旅行时您对我的及时帮助和支持。
(2)Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to...非常感谢你为帮助我们……所做的一切。
[中段]具体描述对方对自己的帮助:
(1)There’s no denying that it is difficult for me to... without your help.不可否认,对我来说,没有你的帮助,……是非常困难的。
(2)Thanks for your generous/selfless help, without which I wouldn’t have made such unbelievable progress and ranked first in the recent English speaking contest.感谢您慷慨/无私的帮助,没有您的帮助,我不会取得如此惊人的进步,并在最近的英语演讲比赛中获得第一名。
(3)During my travel in..., you showed me around... and I had a great time there. Thanks for your considerate and enthusiastic treatment.在我去……旅行的时候,你带我参观了……,我在那里玩得很开心。谢谢你周到、热情的招待。
[末段]再次致谢:
(1)My gratitude is beyond description/words.感激之情,无以言表。
(2)It is very kind of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say.你为我做这件事真是太好了,我无法用言语来表达我的感激。
3. 感谢信写作模板
Dear ××(收信人),
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for     (感谢的原因).
If it had not been for your assistance in     (对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been     (没有对方帮助时的后果). Everyone agrees that it was you who     (给出细节).
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
××(写信人)
2. 道歉信必背高分句式
[首段]开篇表示歉意:
(1)I’m honored to be invited to your celebration party. However, much to my regret, I have to decline your invitation. Here I express/convey/extend my sincere apologies for my absence.我很荣幸被邀请参加你们的庆祝聚会。然而,令我非常遗憾的是,我不得不拒绝你的邀请。在此我对我的缺席表示诚挚的歉意。
(2)I’m writing to make an apology to you for.../express my deep regret and sincerely expect your forgiveness.我因……写信向你道歉/我写信表达我深深的歉意并真诚期待你的原谅。
[中段]说明具体原因:
(1)I can’t make it for the reason that I am occupied in... 我不能赴约是因为我忙于……
(2)The reason why I failed to... was that...我未能……的原因是……
(3)The... you lent me is really impressive/lovable. Unfortunately, yesterday when I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found.你借给我的……真的令人印象深刻/非常讨人喜欢。不幸的是,昨天当我回到屋里,却到处都找不到它。
提出补救措施:
(1)You know I have no intention to break our appointment, so shall we make it next Sunday if you’re available?您知道我并非有意爽约,如果您有空的话,我们下周日再约如何?
(2)Considering that you need someone to act as..., I strongly recommend my friend Li Ming, who has been... since he was a child and has a good knowledge of...考虑到你需要某人来担当……,我强烈推荐我的朋友李明,他从孩提时起就一直……并且他精通……
[末段]再次抱歉并祝福:
(1)Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence and all the best wishes to you.再次为我的缺席给您带来的任何不便表示歉意,并向您致以最美好的祝愿。
(2)I’m in the sincere hope that you can think in my situation and accept my apology.我真诚地希望你能理解我的处境并且接受我的道歉。
3. 道歉信写作模板
Dear ××(收信人),
I’m writing to convey my sincere apology to you. I’m sorry that     (道歉原因).
The reason why     was that     (事件原因). Therefore, it’s my fault not to     (事件结果). I will try to make up for my fault by     (说明补救措施).
Once again, I do apologize for any inconvenience caused. Would you please accept my apology and understand my situation?
Yours sincerely,
××(写信人)
2. 申请信必背高分句式
[首段]提出申请:
(1)I’m writing to apply for your recently advertised position of... 我写信是想申请贵公司最近刊登的……职位。
(2)Having learnt from the newspaper that you are in need of..., I’m writing to express my interest in it.从报纸上得知你们需要……,我写信是想表达我对此非常感兴趣。
(3)Perfectly fit/suitable/qualified for..., I’m writing in reply to your notice for... 完全符合……,我写信回复你……的启事。
[中段]阐述优势:
(1)I am competent to meet the requirements you’ve listed.我有能力满足你列出的要求。
(2)I am confident that I’m suitable for.../qualified to do.../equal to doing...我确信我适合……/有资格做……/能胜任做……
(3)I once worked as..., which makes me experienced in...我曾经做过……,这使我在……方面有经验。
(4)Meanwhile, it is my independence that makes it easy for me to adapt to a new environment.同时,正是我的独立使我很容易适应新环境。
(5)For my being outgoing and enthusiastic, it’s relatively easy to get along with me.由于我外向热情,和我相处相对容易。
(6)As a graduate majoring in English, I have no difficulty in communicating with others in English.作为英语专业的毕业生,我用英语和别人交流起来毫不费力。
(7)To be honest, I have a gift for communicating with others.说实话,我有与别人沟通的天赋。
(8)Furthermore, I have participated in community activities for years on end, which makes me cope with various emergencies promptly and efficiently/more qualified for the position.此外,我已经连续多年参加社区活动,这使我能够迅速有效地应对各种紧急情况/更加胜任这个职位。
[末段]表达感谢、期望或决心:
(1)Should you favor me with the position, I am convinced that I would live up to your expectations.如果你选择我任职,我坚信我一定不会辜负你的期望。
(2)I would appreciate it if I’m offered the chance. I will spare no effort to offer my best service.如果你能给我这个机会,我将不胜感激。我将会不遗余力提供我的最佳服务。
3. 申请信写作模板
Dear ××(收信人),
I’m     (自我介绍). I’m writing to you hoping that I may have an opportunity to     (申请事由).
As far as I am concerned, I believe     (自我优势). I think I am qualified for     (项目名称). First of all,     (理由一). Besides,     (理由二). What’s more,     (理由三). That’s why I apply for the position. I hope I can     (申请通过).
You won’t be disappointed if you offer me the opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
××(写信人)
2. 建议信必背高分句式
[首段]表明写信目的:
(1)I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in doing... at the moment. Here are some tips for you.得知此刻你遇到……麻烦,我深感遗憾。这些是给你的建议。
(2)You have asked me for my advice regarding/with regard to... and I think the following tips can help you.你向我征求关于……的建议,我认为以下建议可能会帮到你。
(3)I’m delighted to learn that you’re particularly keen on... Here are some practical suggestions to help you...我很高兴了解到你特别喜欢……,这里有些实用的建议来帮助你……
[中段]提出建议:
(1)When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that... For one thing, ...For another, ...What’s more, ...说到这种情况,我想建议……一方面,……另一方面,……此外,……
(2)In my opinion/From my point of view, doing sth. is a perfect approach to achieving... Additionally, it’s strongly advisable that... Last but not least, it would also be a wise choice if you could...在我看来,做……是一个实现……的完美方式。此外,我强烈建议……最后但同样重要的是,如果你能……,这也是一个明智的选择。
(3)Only in this way can you.../You may/might as well do...只有这样你才能……/你不妨做……
(4)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……会更有益。
[末段]望采纳建议,表达祝愿或期待:
(1)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions helpful/useful/practical./I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.我希望你会认为这些建议有帮助/有用/可行。/我希望我的建议将对你有益。
(2)I will be happy if you can take my advice/ideas into consideration.如果你能考虑我的建议/想法,我会很开心。
3. 建议信写作模板
Dear ××(收信人),
I was glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on     (别人求助内容).
Here are my suggestions. To get started, you should     (建议一). Besides, it’s a good idea to     (建议二). Last but not least, I think the most efficient way is to     (建议三).
With all the factors taken into consideration, I’m sure you will     (成功解决问题).
  I hope you find my advice useful.
Yours sincerely,
××(写信人)
名题抢分练
Test 1
假定你是李华,正在参加中学生国际交流活动,主办方请你在闭幕式上致辞,内容包括:
1. 表达感谢;
2. 总结收获。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning!        
Thank you.
[参考范文]
 Ladies and gentlemen, 
 Good morning!  As our international exchange program comes to a close, I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude to everyone who has made this experience possible.
Over the past few days, we have had the opportunity to learn from each other, share our cultures, and form lasting friendships. It has been an eye-opening experience that has broadened our horizons and enriched our understanding of the world. We’ll leave this program with a sense of accomplishment and a desire to continue learning and growing.
 Thank you. 
Test 2
假定你是李华,你与爱尔兰交换生Philip原定本周日上午一起修改英文演讲稿,因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达歉意;
2. 说明原因;
3. 另约时间。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Philip,
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
 Dear Philip, 
I’m really sorry for not being able to meet you this Sunday morning as planned to work on the English speech draft.
Recently,I was chosen to report the upcoming marathon, which I believe will be good for my future career. However, the interview is scheduled for the same time as our meeting, and I cannot reschedule it. I would appreciate it if you allow me to rearrange our meeting for next Sunday morning. If you are available that time, please let me know.
I apologize for any inconvenience caused and appreciate your understanding. Looking forward to your reply.
 Yours, 
 Li Hua 
Test 3
假定你是李华,你在网上看到一个帖子:英国青少年Eric正在寻找一名中国高中生作为语言学习伙伴。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 你的优势;
3. 你的期待。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
 Dear Eric, 
I am Li Hua, a Chinese high school student. Learning that you are looking for an English learner whose native language is Chinese, I am writing to express my wish to become your language exchange partner.
Firstly, having studied English for years, I can understand you better culturally and make sure we communicate smoothly. Secondly, I have a wide range of interests and a good knowledge of Chinese. So there are lots of topics which we can talk about, especially those related to Chinese language learning.
I hope we can be helpful to each other. Looking forward to your early reply.
 Yours, 
 Li Hua 
Test 4
假定你是李华,收到外国好友Tom的来信,他们学校将举办外国歌曲欣赏活动,他负责中国板块,想请你提供建议。请回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 提供建议;
2. 表达期待。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
 Dear Tom, 
I’m delighted to receive your letter in which you asked me how to advocate China-style songs. My suggestions are as follows.
First of all, it will be a good choice to introduce some popular Chinese singers, who do well in China-style compositions. In addition, you can extend an invitation to some singers from the music department to perform live. Last but not least, you’d better hold a speech on the features of China-style songs where people can get more insights about the China-style songs.
I’d appreciate it if you could take my proposal into consideration. I do hope your culture festival will go smoothly!
 Yours, 
 Li Hua (共25张PPT)
题型一 应用文写作
第1讲 解题技法指导
技法一 亮化词汇三原则
根据高考应用文写作的评分标准,应用词汇的丰富性和准确性是作文能否取得高分的一条重要的标准。所以,在词汇的亮化上应遵循以下三个原则:
原则1 求新求变
同样意义的词语,要根据语境使用最新学过的而不是小学或初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现,要使用不同的表达方式。如:
1. I asked my parents to allow me to have a piano lesson for beginners.(2023·全国乙卷)
→I asked my parents to allow me to take up a piano lesson for beginners.
2. My suggestion is to group students by their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ卷)
→My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
3. Last weekend, many students who like gardening participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Council.(2023·浙江1月卷)
→Last weekend, various students who are keen on gardening participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Council.
原则2 求准求精
写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式,有时准确使用一个单词就会让整个句子增色。
1. We believe that his teachings will remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.(2023·全国甲卷)
→We hold a strong belief that his teachings do remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.
2. I think that it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ卷)
→I think it not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.
原则3 短语优先
恰当使用短语代替单词,不但可以增加词数,还有助于绕开不会表达的单词,使得行文更加流畅。
1. I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ卷)
→I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into account/consideration.
2. Initially, on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing, I began to love skating.(2023·全国乙卷)
→Initially, on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing, I became enthusiastic about skating.
3. Firstly, randomly pairing up students may cause imbalanced language abilities within the groups.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ卷)
→Firstly, randomly pairing up students may lead to/result in imbalanced language abilities within the groups.
技法二 美化句式四诀窍
对复杂结构和含有非谓语动词的高级句式的灵活运用能够彰显考生对英语语言文字的驾驭能力。在使用这些句式时,一定要注意:高级但不造作,多变但不离谱,复杂但不晦涩。巧记以下四个诀窍会对你使用高级句式起到事半功倍的效果。
诀窍1 多种句型巧用
1. 定语从句:I am writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.(2024·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ卷)
2. 状语从句:However, at the very beginning, when I stepped on the ice, I stumbled over myself.(2023·全国乙卷)
3. 名词性从句:I hope that by sharing my personal story, others will be inspired to find joy and growth in their own childhood hobbies and pursuits.(2023·上海卷)
4. with复合句型:During the class, I painted a landscape featuring the towering green trees and the clear blue sky, with a family of ducks swimming in the lake.(2024·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ卷)
5. 感叹句:How thrilled I am to have the opportunity to share my own skills and experiences as part of this effort!(2023·天津卷)
诀窍2 非谓语动词若干
非谓语动词的正确使用能体现出考生的语法功底,相比于从句,非谓语动词更加生动简洁。
1. Creating artwork in the park was a refreshing break from the usual classroom setting.(2024·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ卷)
2. Firstly, the emergence of shared bicycles has greatly transformed urban mobility, providing a green and efficient solution to the “last mile” problem.(2024·全国甲卷)
3. It’s easy to learn and doesn’t take up too much time, making it an ideal workout between classes.(2024·浙江1月卷)
4. My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ卷)
诀窍3 省略倒装强调可出现
特殊句型如省略句、倒装句和强调句等可以使整篇文章句式更加丰富。
1. Not only does it enhance our physical well-being, but it also fosters a sense of teamwork.(2024·浙江1月卷)
2. While listening to the local botanist’s talk, I gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.(2023·浙江1月卷)
3. It is events like the Chinese Workshop that are crucial for promoting cross-cultural understanding and appreciation.(2023·天津卷)
诀窍4 被动适当露露面
如果一篇文章全都是主动句而且主语一致,文章就会显得单调,适当使用被动句能够避免这种情况。
1. In the class, we were asked to create artwork inspired by nature.(2024·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ卷)
2. He is widely considered one of the most important figures in Chinese history and his teachings have had a profound impact on Chinese culture and society.(2023·全国甲卷)
3. The moment I thought of the athletes on the field, I was inspired by their powerful spirits.(2023·全国乙卷)
技法三 衔接过渡“起、承、转、合”
衔接过渡词可以分为“起、承、转、合”四类,考生可根据需要和作用来选取合适的过渡表达,使文章浑然一体。
一、用于“起”的过渡词语
first of all; at first; to start/begin with; recently/lately/currently; at present; in recent years; in general
1. To begin with, I suggest organizing a walking tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing.(2023·北京卷)
2. First of all, what we can do is place importance on our daily actions.(2022·全国甲卷)
二、用于“承”的过渡词语
as well as; in other words; similarly; likewise; that is to say; also; too; what’s more; moreover; furthermore; in addition; besides; additionally; secondly; therefore; so; thus; for this purpose; for instance; for example; in this case; such as
1. Moreover, this activity is fun and exciting for students of all ages.(2024·浙江1月卷)
2. Secondly, high-speed trains, known for their speed and efficiency, have revolutionized long-distance travel, connecting cities and regions across the country like never before and thereby boosting regional economies through increased connectivity and trade.(2024·全国甲卷)
3. There are many influential historic figures in China such as Qu Yuan, Zhuge Liang and Li Bai.(2023·全国甲卷)
三、用于“转”的过渡词语
though/although; in spite of; despite; even if/though; but; however; on the other hand; yet; on the contrary; whereas; nevertheless; in contrast; by contrast; what’s worse; worse still; unfortunately/fortunately; unluckily/luckily; in fact; as a matter of fact; actually
1. Although my fingers were painful after practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.(2023·全国乙卷)
2. Even though I will not pursue it as my life career, I will still continue playing the piano as my hobby.(2023·全国乙卷)
3. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12% respectively.(2022·全国乙卷)
四、用于“合”的过渡词语
overall; in a word; in general; in short; above all; after all; generally speaking; to sum up; finally; in conclusion; at last; in summary; as a result; thus; eventually; hence; on the whole; lastly
1. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed the art class.(2024·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ卷)
2. Lastly, the rise of new energy vehicles reflects China’s pursuit of sustainable development, reducing carbon emissions and promoting a greener future.(2024·全国甲卷)
技法四 规避常见五错误
错误1 句子成分残缺或多余
1. (缺)There are many students support it.
→There are many students who/that support it.
2. (多)Because the planting process can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement, so I really consider it the best way to relax myself.
→The planting process can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement, so I really consider it the best way to relax myself.
错误2 主谓不一致
1. The survey show that most students prefer to text or give gifts to their mothers.
→The survey shows that most students prefer to text or give gifts to their mothers.
2. You can read the books which is on the shelf.
→You can read the books which are on the shelf.
错误3 时态、语态错误
1. The exhibition will hold next weekend.
→The exhibition will be held next weekend.
2. Knowing that you had a preference for flying kites, I sincerely invite you to go to the Kite Festival with me.
→Knowing that you have a preference for flying kites, I sincerely invite you to go to the Kite Festival with me.
错误4 词性不分
1. To raise the aware of caring for the disadvantaged groups, our school is to organize a charity donation.
→To raise the awareness of caring for the disadvantaged groups, our school is to organize a charity donation.
2. Paper-cutting is a tradition Chinese art.
→Paper-cutting is a traditional Chinese art.
错误5 中式英语
1. How are you going these days? I very miss you.
→How are you going these days? I miss you very much.
2. The hotel broke out a big fire last night.
→A big fire broke out in the hotel last night.