25年秋人教新目标九年级Unit8作文指导+高分范文
一、写作任务
不久前,四川成都多名网友发现天空中出现一个发光的不明飞行物,并拍摄了照片及视频。这究竟是什么物体呢?人们对此展开了激烈的讨论。请你结合以下某网友拍摄到的照片及文字提示,写一篇英文短文,在下周的英语课上和大家分享该“神秘事件”。
人们的猜想:
*肯定不是飞机 (速度太快且没有声音)
* 有人认为是外星人的飞船
* 有人认为是火流星划过天空(火流星特征:明亮,划过夜空时像一条火龙)
* 我认为可能是……
二、写作要求:
1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
3. 词数80~100 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:
fireball 火流星
Recently, many people in Chengdu, Sichuan saw a flying object crossing the sky. It was so strange that it has caused a heated discussion among people. ...
三、写作指导
本篇写作要求写一篇英文短文,描述一个“神秘事件”,并提出猜想。写作时应先简单介绍这一事件,然后按提示分别陈述“人们”的猜想,并给出自己的观点。
◎ 主题:人与自然之宇宙探索
◎ 子主题:地球与宇宙探秘
◎ 时态:一般过去时,一般现在时
◎ 人称:第一人称,第三人称
◎ 行文布局:
① 引出主题(介绍事件)
Recently, many people in Chengdu, Sichuan saw a flying object crossing the sky. It was so strange that it has caused a heated discussion among people.
② 展开陈述
Some ideas...
* Most people don’t think it is a plane.
* Some people believe it belongs to the aliens.
* Another popular idea is that it could be a fireball crossing the sky.
③ 提出观点
I also guess it might be a fireball, but I can’t be sure. ...
◎ 必背句型:
* It has caused a heated discussion among people.
* Most people don’t think that it is …, because …
* Some people hold the view that …
* That sounds too strange to be true.
* Another popular idea is that …
* A fireball usually looks like …
* As far as I am concerned, I ...
高分范文
基础篇
Recently, many people in Chengdu, Sichuan saw a flying object crossing the sky. It was so strange that it has caused a heated discussion among people.
Most people don’t think that it is a plane because it was moving so fast without making any sound. Then what could it be Some people hold the view that it belongs to the aliens who are trying to reach the Earth and study our planet. However, that sounds too strange to be true. Another popular idea is that the object could be a fireball crossing the sky. A fireball is usually very bright and it looks like a fire dragon as it flies across the sky.
As far as I am concerned, I also guess it might be a fireball, but I can’t be sure. I’ll ask my science teacher for help or find more information about it on the Internet.
高阶篇
Recently, many people in Chengdu, Sichuan saw a glowing flying object streaking(疾驰)across the sky. It emitted(发出)a soft yet bright light, which was so strange that it has sparked a fierce debate among the public.
Most people don’t think it is a plane. That’s because it moved much faster than a regular plane—even faster than a jet fighter(喷气式战斗机)—and made no sound at all. Some curious people even say it might be a spaceship from aliens who are exploring our planet. But this guess seems too hard to believe, as there is no reliable(可靠的)evidence to prove the existence of alien spaceships so far. Another more reasonable idea is that it could be a fireball—a kind of natural phenomenon(现象)made of rock or metal from space. When it enters the Earth’s atmosphere, it burns up, producing bright light and looking like a fiery dragon as it slides through the night sky.
As for me, I tend to agree with the fireball idea, though I don’t have strong evidence. I plan to look for related scientific explanations online to solve this mystery. This event also reminds me that the universe is full of unknowns, and only through scientific exploration can we uncover(揭开)its secrets step by step.