Period Four Writing
【单元主题表达】
【常用词汇和短语】
1.aboard 4.destination 5.direction 9.view 10.equip
11.guide 12.impress 14.satisfy 15.attractive
16.crowded 17.a tourist attraction 18.a place of interest 21.be struck by 22.book 24.get close to nature 27.view
28.on holiday/vacation 29.set off/out 30.put up
31.take a picture 32.enjoy/admire the scenery
【高级句式】
1.What a beautiful scene/What beautiful scenery
3.were in a different world
6.recommend
【句式升级】
1.bathing ourselves in;bathed in
2.what impresses me most
【活学活用】
One possible version:
Dear Alice,
I hope everything is fine with you! I’m currently on vacation in Zhangjiajie, a magical place in China known as the “fairyland on earth”.The scenery here is breathtaking, with towering mountains and thick forests.My mum and I have been hiking and exploring the great outdoors, as well as experiencing the local culture.The food here is delicious, and the local people are friendly.I’m enjoying every moment I spend here and feeling completely at peace.
Wishing you all the best!
Yours,
Li HuaPeriod Four Writing
Ⅰ.1.travelling abroad is very meaningful
2.broaden my mind/horizons
3.learn more about the customs; making lots of friends
4.communicating with; a chance/opportunity to learn a foreign language
5.I can relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery
6.I’ve been in Beijing for two days
7.At the moment; where some young students in the local university help us take a lot of pictures
8.I’m going to take a walk; have a taste of
Ⅱ.【文章大意】 本文是一篇说明文。本文作者介绍了伦敦之旅如果没有去伦敦的艺术现场将会变得不完整,并且对伦敦博物馆进行了介绍。
1.have been 考查固定句型。“This/That/It is/was+the+序数词+time+that+从句.”为固定句型,表示“这/那是某人第几次做某事。”从句中的时态要用完成时态;如前为is,则用现在完成时,如为was,则用过去完成时,此处应用现在完成时,主语是you,故填have been。
2.checking 考查非谓语动词。作介词without的宾语,应用动名词形式,故填checking。
3.the 考查冠词。此处特指“这座城市”,所以用定冠词the。故填the。
4.visited 考查非谓语动词。空处在句中作定语,修饰名词attractions,且attractions和visit之间是被动关系,所以用过去分词,故填visited。
5.which 考查非限制性定语从句。 “…celebrated its 270th anniversary this year…”是非限制性定语从句,修饰the British Museum,且关系词在从句中作主语,指物,故填which。
6.popularity 考查名词。作句子主语,用名词形式,所以用名词popularity,为不可数名词,故填popularity。
7.particularly 考查副词。分析句子可知,空格处应用副词作状语,particular的副词形式为particularly,意为“尤其,特别”,故填particularly。
8.on 考查介词。on display为固定短语,意为“展出,陈列”,故填on。
9.whether 考查固定用法。whether…or…意为“不管是……还是……”,是固定用法,故填whether。
10.to find 考查非谓语动词。be sure to do意为“一定做, 确定做”,是固定搭配,故填to find。
Ⅲ.One possible version:
A pleasant outing
Last weekend, our class organized an outing in the People’s Park in order to help us get relaxed after the mid-term examination.
Everyone spent a pleasant time together. On the way to the destination, we were so excited that we sang in a loud voice. Upon the arrival of the park, we enjoyed a delicious picnic first and then played interesting games. Later, some girls danced under the trees and some boys even played the guitar, which drew thunderous applause.
The outing not only brought us great pleasure but also relieved us of the pressure caused by study. Most importantly, it helped to strengthen the relationship among us.
Ⅳ.【思路点拨】 本文以故事情节发展为线索,讲述了作者和女朋友杰西卡一起去犹他州锡安国度公园远足。途中天气由晴转小雪,他们还遇到了一个小池塘,因为看起来很浅,他们涉水穿过,杰西卡走在前面。但很不幸,池塘里有流沙,杰西卡陷了进去,作者救出了杰西卡,但自己却陷了进去,杰西卡奋力救他,但是没有成功。作者认为自己可能熬不过去了,但还是抱着一线希望,让杰西卡去路程几个小时外的起点求助救援队,在作者快撑不住的时候,救援队终于来了,把作者救了上来。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“她离开30分钟后,开始下起了大雪。”可知,第一段可描写杰西卡去寻找救援之后,天气越发糟糕,作者一个人的处境越来越难。
②由第二段首句内容“正当我打算放弃的时候,一束手电筒光在我眼前闪过。”可知,第二段可描写救援队把作者救上来之后的场景。
2.续写线索:杰西卡去寻找救援队—作者处境艰难—救援队赶到—作者成功获救。
One possible version:
Thirty minutes after she left, it started to snow heavily. It was freezing cold. I zipped up my jacket and pulled my head inside. At some point I nodded off to sleep. I didn’t know how long I had slept, but I woke up with my upper body slipping backward into the quicksand. I quickly planted my stick into the dry ground to stop my fall. Wet and exhausted, I couldn’t even feel my right leg. It had been hours since Jessika left, and it was getting dark. Maybe this time I wasn’t going to make it, I thought desperately to myself.
Just as I was going to give up, a flashlight shone across my eyes. It must be the rescuers! I yelled for help at once. Jessika appeared in the darkness and rushed to me in a great hurry, followed by the rescue team. They gathered around me very soon and started working. The team held me under each shoulder and tried to pull me out with the help of some tools. When they pulled, it felt as if my legs were being ripped off. Finally, I was saved out of the quicksand. Tears welling up in our eyes, Jessika and I thanked the team with all our hearts gratefully.Period Four Writing
写明信片 (Writing a postcard)
以旅行为题材的明信片主要是为了告知对方自己的旅行状况。我们可以通过明信片将自己的所见所闻和所想传达给对方。在写作过程中需要注意以下几点:
1.明信片的格式
Postcard
Greeting Hi Emma,
Main body I’m having a really great time in Yunnan, China! At the moment, we’re at the foot of Yulong Snow Mountain…Tomorrow we’re going to visit the famous old town of Lijiang…It’s going to be a lot of fun!
Close I’ve got to go, but miss you a lot.
Signature Alice
2.明信片属于简单的书信,多是用于节日到来前或者特殊活动时互相赠送的礼品,可以作为书信的替代品。旅行明信片主要侧重介绍旅行状况、旅途见闻和自己的想法。
3.内容简洁明了,言简意赅,由于篇幅有限,不宜过多,常用一般现在时。
【常用词汇和短语】
1. prep. & adv. 在(船、飞机、火车等)上
2.accommodations n. 住宿,膳宿
3.departure n. 离开,起程
4. n. 目的地,终点
5. n. 方向,方位
6.sightseeing n. 游览,观光
7.souvenir n. 纪念品,纪念物
8.tourism n. 旅游业,观光业
9. n. 看法,见解;风景,景色
10. vt. 装备,配备
11. vt.指引,给……领路 n. 向导,导游
12. vt. 给……留下深刻印象
13.pack v. 包装 n. 纸包,纸袋
14. vt. 使满足;使满意
15. adj. 有吸引力的
16. adj.拥挤的
17. 旅游胜地
18. 名胜
19.a must-see place 必游之地
20.be greatly surprised 惊奇不已
21. 被……迷住
22. a room 预订一个房间
23.go camping 去露营
24. 接近大自然
25.leave for 动身去
26.make a reservation 预订
27.have a good of 一览无余
28. (在)度假
29. 出发
30. 提供住宿
31. 拍照
32. 欣赏风景
【常用句式】
一、介绍目前情况
1.I have been…for… 我到……已经……
2.We have a good time/enjoy every moment staying here.
我们在这里度过了一段快乐的时光。
3.At the moment, I’m at…
此时,我正在……
4.On the way to…, we…
在去……的路上,我们……
二、介绍旅游景点
1.have a long history of…years
有……年的悠久历史
2.be covered with… 被……所覆盖
3.be made up of/consist of… 由……组成
4.There are many places of interest, such as…
那里有许多名胜,比如……
5.be famous/well-known for… 因……而闻名
6.be located/situated in/on/at… 坐落于/位于……
【范例】
假定你是李华,请给你的笔友Alice写一张明信片,告诉她你在青岛海滨度假的情况。
【高级句式】
1. it was!
多美的景色啊!
2.The scenery is absolutely breathtaking.
景色真是太壮丽了。
3.I felt as if I .
我感到自己仿佛置身于世外桃源。
4.I actually had a fairly restful time.
我实际上度过了一段相当悠闲的时光。
5.The combination of wind, sand and sea is really romantic.
风、沙滩和大海的组合的确很浪漫。
6.I would Qingdao for a family vacation or a nice romantic getaway for two.
我会推荐来青岛进行家庭旅行或者两个人的浪漫之旅。
【句式升级】
1.At the moment, we are sitting on the beach and bathing ourselves in the sunshine.
→At the moment, we are sitting on the beach, the sunshine. (现在分词)
→At the moment, we are sitting on the beach, the sunshine. (过去分词)
2.Besides the beautiful scenery, the local people’s kindness and hospitality impresses me most.
→Besides the beautiful scenery, is the local people’s kindness and hospitality. (主语从句)
【连贯成文】
Dear Alice,
We have been in Qingdao for a week and I enjoy every moment staying here.
At the moment, we are sitting on the beach, bathing ourselves in the sunshine. The combination of wind, sand and sea makes me feel as if I were in a different world. I also picked up a lot of colourful shells with my little sister. It’s great fun and I am going to send some of them to you tomorrow.
Besides the beautiful scenery, what impresses me most is the local people’s kindness and hospitality. I even made some new friends here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【活学活用】
假定你是李华,请给你的笔友Alice写一张明信片,告诉她你在张家界度假的情况。
注意: 1. 词数80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Period Four Writing
●Ⅰ 补全句子
1.I think .
我认为出国旅行很有意义。
2.First,it can .
首先,它可以开阔我的视野。
3.When I visit a foreign country,I can and history of the country as well as . 当我游览外国时,我除了可以交到很多朋友,还可以更多地了解这个国家的习俗和历史。
4.Besides, the local people will give me .
除此之外,与当地人交流让我有机会学习一门外语。
5.The most important thing is that .
最重要的是我可以放松,享受美丽的风景。
6. and I’m having a great time.
我在北京已经两天了,我玩得很开心。
7. , I’m in the Forbidden City
. (定语从句)
此时此刻,我在故宫,一些当地大学的年轻学生帮我们拍了很多照片。
8.Tomorrow in the Summer Palace and
the famous Beijing Roast Duck.
明天我打算去颐和园散步,并品尝著名的北京烤鸭。
●Ⅱ 语法填空
Have you ever been to London Which famous sites did you visit Or, if it is the first time that you 1. (be) there, which one will you check out
Some world-famous cultural sites may already be on your list: Buckingham Palace, Big Ben and London Tower. However, a tour of London would be incomplete without 2. (check) out the London art scene. As a guidebook London’s Secrets: Museums & Galleries puts it, London’s art is a lot like 3. city itself—diverse, vast and in a constant state of changes. From old masters to street art and everything in between, London has it all.
In fact, according to The Telegraph, museums and galleries were the most 4. (visit) attractions in Britain last year. The British Museum, 5. celebrated its 270th anniversary this year, had the most visitors.
According to The Art Newspaper, the British Museum’s increased 6. (popular) is down to its exhibitions, 7. (particular) its Life and Death in Pompeii and Herculaneum show (March—September 2017).
There are more than 7 million artefacts(文物) in the British Museum. Not all of them are 8. display, but much of the collection constantly rotates(轮换), so you’ll see something new with each visit. So, 9. you’re an art lover or just looking for a fun time, you’re sure 10. (find) inspiration in London.
●Ⅲ 应用文写作
假定你是李华,上周末你班在人民公园组织了一次郊游活动。请你以“A pleasant outing”为题给校园英语报撰写一篇短文,介绍此次活动,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容;
3.活动意义。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A pleasant outing
●Ⅳ 读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was February 16, 2019, at 8 am when my girlfriend Jessika, and I arrived at Utah’s Zion National Park. We’d travelled from our home in Mesa, Arizona, to hike the nine-mile-long Subway Trail, so named because of its amazing tunnel-shaped canyon (峡谷). Halfway through our hike, which included climbing over rocks and walking across streams, the sunshine gave way to light snow. Soon after, we reached the red-coloured walls of the Subway Trail. A small pond stood in our way, with the trail (路线) continuing on the other side. Because the pond looked shallow, we began to wade (蹚) through, with Jessika leading the way.
About five feet from the edge, her front foot sank into the sandy bottom. Then she fell forward and both legs started to sink. I dashed to her, grabbed her under the shoulders and pulled her out. She climbed back to shore. But now I was sinking. The mud came all the way up to my right thigh and my left calf (小腿肚). I freed my left leg but couldn’t move my right.
Jessika handed me a long stick we’d picked up earlier in the hike. I put it down the side of my leg and tried to move and pull it out. Nothing. I was trapped in quicksand (流沙).
Jessika started scooping (舀) sand with both hands, but it was refilling faster than she could pull it out. “Don’t bother,” I told her. “You’re just wasting your energy.” While I was no longer sinking, I wasn’t getting out, either.
We couldn’t call for help because the closest rescue team was back at the trailhead, five hours away from us. I told Jessika she had to hike back and call for help. She was scared—she had only ever hiked with me and was fearful of hiking alone on a trail the National Park Service calls “very tough”. But we were out of options.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
Paragraph 1:
Thirty minutes after she left, it started to snow heavily.
Paragraph 2:
Just as I was going to give up, a flashlight shone across my eyes.
(共46张PPT)
Period Four
Writing
单元主题表达
练习册
写明信片(Writing a postcard)
以旅行为题材的明信片主要是为了告知对方自己的旅行状况。我们可以通
过明信片将自己的所见所闻和所想传达给对方。在写作过程中需要注意以下几
点:
1.明信片的格式
Postcard
Greeting Hi Emma，
Main body I'm having a really great time in Yunnan, China! At
the moment, we're at the foot of Yulong Snow
Mountain…Tomorrow we're going to visit the famous
old town of Lijiang…It's going to be a lot of fun!
Close I've got to go, but miss you a lot.
Signature Alice
2.明信片属于简单的书信,多是用于节日到来前或者特殊活动时互相赠送的礼品,
可以作为书信的替代品。旅行明信片主要侧重介绍旅行状况、旅途见闻和自己
的想法。
3.内容简洁明了,言简意赅,由于篇幅有限,不宜过多,常用一般现在时。
【常用词汇和短语】
1.__________ prep. & adv. 在(船、飞机、火车等)上
aboard
2.accommodations n. 住宿,膳宿
3.departure n. 离开,起程
4._______________ n. 目的地,终点
5.____________ n. 方向,方位
destination
direction
6.sightseeing n. 游览,观光
7.souvenir n. 纪念品,纪念物
8.tourism n. 旅游业,观光业
9._______ n. 看法,见解;风景,景色
10.________ vt. 装备,配备
11.________ vt.指引,给……领路 n. 向导,导游
12.___________ vt. 给……留下深刻印象
view
equip
guide
impress
13.pack v. 包装 n. 纸包,纸袋
14._________ vt. 使满足;使满意
15.____________ adj. 有吸引力的
16.____________ adj.拥挤的
satisfy
attractive
crowded
17.________________________旅游胜地
18.________________________名胜
a tourist attraction
a place of interest
19.a must-see place 必游之地
20.be greatly surprised 惊奇不已
21._________________被……迷住
22.________a room 预订一个房间
be struck by
book
23.go camping 去露营
24._________________________接近大自然
get close to nature
25.leave for 动身去
26.make a reservation 预订
27.have a good _______of 一览无余
28._________________________(在)度假
29.______________出发
30.__________提供住宿
31.__________________拍照
32.________________________________欣赏风景
view
on holiday/vacation
set off/out
put up
take a picture
enjoy/admire the scenery
【常用句式】
一、介绍目前情况
1.I have been…for… 我到……已经……
2.We have a good time/enjoy every moment staying here.
我们在这里度过了一段快乐的时光。
3.At the moment, I'm at…
此时,我正在……
4.On the way to…, we…
在去……的路上,我们……
二、介绍旅游景点
1.have a long history of…years
有……年的悠久历史
2.be covered with… 被……所覆盖
3.be made up of/consist of… 由……组成
4.There are many places of interest, such as…
那里有许多名胜,比如……
5.be famous/well-known for… 因……而闻名
6.be located/situated in/on/at… 坐落于/位于……
【范例】
假定你是李华,请给你的笔友Alice写一张明信片,告诉她你在青岛海滨度假
的情况。
【高级句式】
1.__________________________________________________________ it was!
多美的景色啊!
What a beautiful scene/What beautiful scenery
2.The scenery is absolutely breathtaking.
景色真是太壮丽了。
3.I felt as if I ________________________________.
我感到自己仿佛置身于世外桃源。
were in a different world
4.I actually had a fairly restful time.
我实际上度过了一段相当悠闲的时光。
5.The combination of wind, sand and sea is really romantic.
风、沙滩和大海的组合的确很浪漫。
6.I would ________________ Qingdao for a family vacation or a nice
romantic getaway for two.
我会推荐来青岛进行家庭旅行或者两个人的浪漫之旅。
recommend
【句式升级】
1.At the moment, we are sitting on the beach and bathing
ourselves in the sunshine.
→At the moment, we are sitting on the beach,
__________________________ the sunshine. (现在分词)
→At the moment, we are sitting on the beach,_____________ the
sunshine. (过去分词)
bathing ourselves in
bathed in
2.Besides the beautiful scenery, the local people's kindness and
hospitality impresses me most.
→Besides the beautiful scenery,________________________________ is
the local people's kindness and hospitality. (主语从句)
what impresses me most
【连贯成文】
Dear Alice,
We have been in Qingdao for a week and I enjoy every
moment staying here.
At the moment, we are sitting on the beach, bathing
ourselves in the sunshine. The combination of wind, sand and sea
makes me feel as if I were in a different world. I also picked up
a lot of colourful shells with my little sister. It's great fun and I am
going to send some of them to you tomorrow.
Besides the beautiful scenery, what impresses me most is the
local people's kindness and hospitality. I even made some new
friends here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【活学活用】
假定你是李华,请给你的笔友Alice写一张明信片,告诉她你在张家界度假的
情况。
注意： 1. 词数80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Dear Alice,
I hope everything is fine with you! I'm currently on vacation in
Zhangjiajie, a magical place in China known as the “fairyland on
earth”.The scenery here is breathtaking, with towering mountains
and thick forests. My mum and I have been hiking and exploring
the great outdoors, as well as experiencing the local culture.
The food here is delicious, and the local people are friendly. I'm
enjoying every moment I spend here and feeling completely at
peace.
Wishing you all the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
练 习 册
Ⅰ 补全句子
1.I think _____________________________________________.
我认为出国旅行很有意义。
travelling abroad is very meaningful
2.First,it can __________________________________.
首先,它可以开阔我的视野。
broaden my mind/horizons
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
3.When I visit a foreign country,I can ______________________________
__________ and history of the country as well as
____________________________. 当我游览外国时,我除了可以交到很多朋友,还
可以更多地了解这个国家的习俗和历史。
learn more about the customs
making lots of friends
4.Besides, __________________________ the local people will give me
______________________________________________________________.
除此之外,与当地人交流让我有机会学习一门外语。
communicating with
a chance/opportunity to learn a foreign language
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
5.The most important thing is that ________________________________
______________________.
最重要的是我可以放松,享受美丽的风景。
I can relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery
6._________________________________________ and I'm having a great
time.
我在北京已经两天了,我玩得很开心。
I've been in Beijing for two days
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
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7.____________________, I'm in the Forbidden City
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此时此刻,我在故宫,一些当地大学的年轻学生帮我们拍了很多照片。
At the moment
where some young students in the local university help us take a lot of pictures
8.Tomorrow ________________________________ in the Summer Palace
and ____________________the famous Beijing Roast Duck.
明天我打算去颐和园散步,并品尝著名的北京烤鸭。
I'm going to take a walk
have a taste of
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Ⅱ 语法填空
Have you ever been to London Which famous sites did you
visit Or, if it is the first time that you 1.______________(be) there,
which one will you check out
Some world-famous cultural sites may already be on your list:
Buckingham Palace, Big Ben and London Tower. However, a tour of
London would be incomplete without 2.____________(check) out the
London art scene. As a guidebook London's Secrets: Museums &
Galleries puts it, London's art is a lot like 3.______ city itself—
have been
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diverse, vast and in a constant state of changes. From old masters
to street art and everything in between, London has it all.
In fact, according to The Telegraph, museums and galleries
were the most 4._________(visit) attractions in Britain last year. The
British Museum, 5.________ celebrated its 270th anniversary this
year, had the most visitors.
According to The Art Newspaper, the British Museum's
increased 6.______________(popular) is down to its exhibitions,
7._______________ (particular) its Life and Death in Pompeii and
Herculaneum show (March—September 2017).
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There are more than 7 million artefacts(文物) in the British
Museum. Not all of them are 8._____ display, but much of the
collection constantly rotates(轮换), so you'll see something new with
each visit. So, 9.___________ you're an art lover or just looking for a
fun time, you're sure 10.__________(find) inspiration in London.
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【文章大意】 本文是一篇说明文。本文作者介绍了伦敦之旅如果没有去伦敦
的艺术现场将会变得不完整,并且对伦敦博物馆进行了介绍。
1.______________
have been
[解析] 考查固定句型。“This/That/It is/was+the+序数词+time+that+从
句.”为固定句型,表示“这/那是某人第几次做某事。”从句中的时态要用完成
时态;如前为is,则用现在完成时,如为was，则用过去完成时,此处应用现在完成
时,主语是you,故填have been。
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checking
[解析] 考查非谓语动词。作介词without的宾语，应用动名词形式,故填
checking。
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[解析] 考查冠词。此处特指“这座城市”,所以用定冠词the。故填the。
4._________
visited
[解析] 考查非谓语动词。空处在句中作定语,修饰名词attractions,且
attractions和visit之间是被动关系,所以用过去分词,故填visited。
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[解析] 考查非限制性定语从句。 “…celebrated its 270th anniversary
this year…”是非限制性定语从句,修饰the British Museum,且关系词在从句
中作主语,指物,故填which。
6.______________
popularity
[解析] 考查名词。作句子主语,用名词形式,所以用名词popularity,为不可数名
词,故填popularity。
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[解析] 考查副词。分析句子可知,空格处应用副词作状语,particular的副词形
式为particularly,意为“尤其,特别”,故填particularly。
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on
[解析] 考查介词。on display为固定短语,意为“展出,陈列”,故填on。
9.___________
whether
[解析] 考查固定用法。whether…or…意为“不管是……还是……”,是固定用
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[解析] 考查非谓语动词。be sure to do意为“一定做, 确定做”,是固定搭配,
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Ⅲ 应用文写作
假定你是李华,上周末你班在人民公园组织了一次郊游活动。请你以“A
pleasant outing”为题给校园英语报撰写一篇短文,介绍此次活动,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容;
3.活动意义。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A pleasant outing
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One possible version:
A pleasant outing
Last weekend, our class organized an outing in the People's
Park in order to help us get relaxed after the mid-term
examination.
Everyone spent a pleasant time together. On the way to the
destination, we were so excited that we sang in a loud voice.
Upon the arrival of the park, we enjoyed a delicious picnic first
and then played interesting games.
Later, some girls danced under the trees and some boys even
played the guitar, which drew thunderous applause.
The outing not only brought us great pleasure but also
relieved us of the pressure caused by study. Most importantly, it
helped to strengthen the relationship among us.
Ⅳ 读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整
的短文。
It was February 16, 2019, at 8 am when my girlfriend Jessika,
and I arrived at Utah's Zion National Park. We'd travelled from our
home in Mesa, Arizona, to hike the nine-mile-long Subway Trail, so
named because of its amazing tunnel-shaped canyon (峡谷).
Halfway through our hike, which included climbing over rocks and
walking across streams, the sunshine gave way to light snow. Soon
after, we reached the red-coloured walls of the Subway Trail.
A small pond stood in our way, with the trail (路线) continuing on
the other side. Because the pond looked shallow, we began to
wade (蹚) through, with Jessika leading the way.
About five feet from the edge, her front foot sank into the
sandy bottom. Then she fell forward and both legs started to sink.
I dashed to her, grabbed her under the shoulders and pulled her
out. She climbed back to shore. But now I was sinking. The mud
came all the way up to my right thigh and my left calf (小腿肚). I
freed my left leg but couldn't move my right.
Jessika handed me a long stick we'd picked up earlier in the
hike. I put it down the side of my leg and tried to move and pull
it out. Nothing. I was trapped in quicksand (流沙).
Jessika started scooping (舀) sand with both hands, but it was
refilling faster than she could pull it out. “Don't bother,” I told
her. “You're just wasting your energy.” While I was no longer
sinking, I wasn't getting out, either.
We couldn't call for help because the closest rescue team was
back at the trailhead, five hours away from us. I told Jessika she
had to hike back and call for help.
She was scared—she had only ever hiked with me and was fearful
of hiking alone on a trail the National Park Service calls “very
tough”. But we were out of options.
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
Paragraph 1:
Thirty minutes after she left, it started to snow heavily.__________
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Paragraph 2:
Just as I was going to give up, a flashlight shone across my
eyes.________________________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】 本文以故事情节发展为线索,讲述了作者和女朋友杰西卡一起去
犹他州锡安国度公园远足。途中天气由晴转小雪,他们还遇到了一个小池塘,因
为看起来很浅,他们涉水穿过,杰西卡走在前面。但很不幸,池塘里有流沙,杰西卡
陷了进去,作者救出了杰西卡,但自己却陷了进去,杰西卡奋力救他,但是没有成功。
作者认为自己可能熬不过去了,但还是抱着一线希望,让杰西卡去路程几个小时
外的起点求助救援队,在作者快撑不住的时候,救援队终于来了,把作者救了上来。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她离开30分钟后,开始下起了大雪。”可知,第一段可描
写杰西卡去寻找救援之后,天气越发糟糕,作者一个人的处境越来越难。
②由第二段首句内容“正当我打算放弃的时候,一束手电筒光在我眼前闪过。”
可知,第二段可描写救援队把作者救上来之后的场景。
2.续写线索:杰西卡去寻找救援队—作者处境艰难—救援队赶到—作者成功获救。
One possible version:
Thirty minutes after she left, it started to snow heavily. It was
freezing cold. I zipped up my jacket and pulled my head inside. At
some point I nodded off to sleep. I didn't know how long I had
slept, but I woke up with my upper body slipping backward into
the quicksand. I quickly planted my stick into the dry ground to
stop my fall. Wet and exhausted, I couldn't even feel my right leg.
It had been hours since Jessika left, and it was getting dark.
Maybe this time I wasn't going to make it, I thought desperately
to myself.
Just as I was going to give up, a flashlight shone across my
eyes. It must be the rescuers! I yelled for help at once. Jessika
appeared in the darkness and rushed to me in a great hurry,
followed by the rescue team. They gathered around me very soon
and started working. The team held me under each shoulder and
tried to pull me out with the help of some tools. When they
pulled, it felt as if my legs were being ripped off. Finally, I was
saved out of the quicksand. Tears welling up in our eyes, Jessika
and I thanked the team with all our hearts gratefully.
