读后续写微技能20---巧用修辞（一）（原卷版）
【背一背】[语言素材]------输入必备知识
在读后续写中可以适当采用明喻和拟人的修辞手法，让故事更加生动传神。明喻主要采用比喻词汇like，as...as或者as if，指出两个不同的人或事物的相似之处。拟人指的是把事物或动物人格化，使语言形象、生动且有感染力。
1.dance v. 跳舞
2．wake up 苏醒
3．sleepy adj. 困倦的
4．whisper to sb. 对某人私语
5．tiptoe through the grass 踮着脚穿过草地
6．dance in the night air 在夜空中飞舞
7．as sick as a dog 病得很厉害
8．shine like... 如……闪闪发光
9．whisper secrets to one another 低语着彼此的秘密
10．as clear as... 清澈如……
11．be bathed in... 沐浴在……
12．say goodnight to the world 向世界道晚安
13. be crooked like... 弯得像……
14．as fast as... 快如……
【练一练】[跟踪演练]------提升关键能力
任务1 单句表达
1．天边乌云密布。
______________ massed on the horizon．
2．可怕的雨猛烈地拍打着窗户。
______________ was beating wildly against the windows.
3．洁白如羽毛的雪花在空中翩翩起舞。
The pure feathery snowflakes ______________ in the air.
4．寒风开始呼啸，像一把锋利的刀划破我的脸。
______________ started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife．
5．雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在老树枝上。
Snow ______________ and weighed on the branches of old trees．
1．明喻
①他游得快如闪电，就像一只海豹！
He swam ______________, just ______________! (人教版选必四U3)
②它在温柔低语，就像一个小女孩对她的母亲私语一样。
It murmured in a soft voice ______________．
③我妈妈说我的背弯得像个问号。它们会让我像箭一样直。
My momma said ______________. These are going to make me ______________． (译林版必修二U1)
2．拟人
①第一缕晨光踮着脚穿过草地。
The first rays of morning sunshine ______________．
②看到这绝美的景色，我想我身体里的每一个细胞都苏醒了。
Seeing such extraordinary beauty, I think ______________．
③羽毛般的雪花在夜空中飞舞，构成一幅美丽图画。
The feathery snowflakes ______________, making a beautiful picture．
任务2 语段表达
The sun rose in the east, casting its warm light over 1.________________ (沉睡的小镇). 2.________________ (树木起舞) in the gentle breeze, 3.________________ (树叶低语着彼此的秘密)． The river, 4.________________ (清澈如水晶), sang a soft melody as it flowed through the valley. The flowers in the garden smiled up at the sun, their petals glowing with happiness. Even the stones seemed to be alive, 5.________________ (沐浴在温暖中). As the sun began to set, the sky blushed with shades of pink and orange, 6.________________ (仿佛在向世界道晚安)．读后续写微技能20---巧用修辞（一）（解析版）
【背一背】[语言素材]------输入必备知识
在读后续写中可以适当采用明喻和拟人的修辞手法，让故事更加生动传神。明喻主要采用比喻词汇like，as...as或者as if，指出两个不同的人或事物的相似之处。拟人指的是把事物或动物人格化，使语言形象、生动且有感染力。
1.dance v. 跳舞
2．wake up 苏醒
3．sleepy adj. 困倦的
4．whisper to sb. 对某人私语
5．tiptoe through the grass 踮着脚穿过草地
6．dance in the night air 在夜空中飞舞
7．as sick as a dog 病得很厉害
8．shine like... 如……闪闪发光
9．whisper secrets to one another 低语着彼此的秘密
10．as clear as... 清澈如……
11．be bathed in... 沐浴在……
12．say goodnight to the world 向世界道晚安
13. be crooked like... 弯得像……
14．as fast as... 快如……
【练一练】[跟踪演练]------提升关键能力
任务1 单句表达
1．明喻
①他游得快如闪电，就像一只海豹！
He swam as fast as lightning, just like a seal! (人教版选必四U3)
②它在温柔低语，就像一个小女孩对她的母亲私语一样。
It murmured in a soft voice like a little girl whispering to her mother．
③我妈妈说我的背弯得像个问号。它们会让我像箭一样直。
My momma said my back's crooked like a question mark. These are going to make me as straight as an arrow． (译林版必修二U1)
2．拟人
①第一缕晨光踮着脚穿过草地。
The first rays of morning sunshine tiptoed through the grass．
②看到这绝美的景色，我想我身体里的每一个细胞都苏醒了。
Seeing such extraordinary beauty, I think every cell in my body has woken up．
③羽毛般的雪花在夜空中飞舞，构成一幅美丽图画。
The feathery snowflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture．
任务2 语段表达
The sun rose in the east, casting its warm light over 1.the sleepy town (沉睡的小镇). 2.The trees danced (树木起舞) in the gentle breeze, 3.their leaves whispering secrets to one another (树叶低语着彼此的秘密)． The river, 4.as clear as crystal (清澈如水晶), sang a soft melody as it flowed through the valley. The flowers in the garden smiled up at the sun, their petals glowing with happiness. Even the stones seemed to be alive, 5.bathed in the warmth (沐浴在温暖中). As the sun began to set, the sky blushed with shades of pink and orange, 6.as if saying goodnight to the world (仿佛在向世界道晚安)．
