课 题：B1U1 Back to school
单元话题应用文写作——校园生活
一、写作题目
为了丰富同学们的学校生活，校学生会决定成立一个阅读俱乐部，现向全体学生征求建议。假如你是李华, 请根据以下提示, 用英语写一份关于阅读俱乐部的建议。
1. 俱乐部活动：每周读一些名家文学作品，在俱乐部会议上交流。
2. 俱乐部的目的：提高阅读能力，交际能力……
3. 注意事项：带好纸和笔
4. 如何加入俱乐部：9月 20 号前到 602室填好申请表。
注意:
1.通知应包括以上所有信息,适当增加内容,以使行文连贯;
2.词数 100 左右。
二、思路点拨
文体
人称
时态
主题
布局 1: 介绍成立阅读俱乐部的原因和参加阅读俱乐部的好处 2: 如何加入阅读俱乐部以及注意事项 3: 呼吁同学们加入阅读俱乐部
三、话题语料积累
词汇 (Vocabulary):
1.建议: 动词propose/suggest/advise/recommend 名词proposal（提案）/ suggestion/advice
2.建议做某事: advise doing sth /advise sb to do/suggest doing；advise/suggest/ propose that … should do
3. 建立、创立、设立、成立: set up, start, establish, found；organize
4. 报名参加： sign up for / enter for / register for /join in /participate in the contest / take part in / be involved in
5. 俱乐部: club, community, group
6. 丰富的: enriching, colorful, fruitful；丰富：动词enrich
7. 文学作品: literary works, famous books, classics
8. 交流: share ideas, exchange thoughts, discuss, communicate
9. 好处: benefit, advantage, be good for, help to improve；be of benefit/help to
10. 申请: apply, fill out an application form
句型 (Sentence Patterns):
开头:
Having learned with delight that...is going to organize/set up a... club, I am writing to suggest/share my ideas about.../ offer my proposal/suggestions/advice that…
阐述目的：
1) Aimed at enriching our school life and relieve our pressure, 为了丰富校园生活和缓解压力
In order to/In a bid to improve our… /develop our ability in为了提高…/培养……的能力
arouse our interest in 激发我们兴趣
2) Aimed at improving our spoken English, an English corner club is going to be set up.
3) To make more students learn more about…/ increase our knowledge about 增加对……的了解
To provide a good chance/opportunity for students to
To satisfy the students’ needs of….
4) In order to enable students to have a better understanding of……
5) With the purpose/ aim/intention（目的）of promoting the campus culture 为了弘扬校园文化
阐述好处:
It will help us not only improve our reading skills, but also enhance our social abilities.
Taking part in this activity is a good way to broaden our horizons and make new friends .
提出建议:
I suggest that we (should)...
It would be a good idea to...
Remember to/Bring...
结尾:
We sincerely look forward to your active participation./call on sb to do sth 号召某人干某事
Thank you for considering my suggestions.
衔接词：
顺序/递进: first of all, besides, moreover, furthermore, what's more
转折: but, however
因果: so, therefore, thus, as a result
总结: in conclusion, in a word
四、遣词造句
I have gladly learned that the Students’ Union is going to set up a Reading Club to enrich our school life.
我很高兴得知学生会即将创办阅读俱乐部以丰富我们的校园生活
I am writing to offer my proposals. 我写信提出建议。
句式升级：将1、2两句用非谓语动词合并成一句
Having learned with delight that the Students’ Union is going to to set up a Reading Club to enrich our school life, I am writing to offer my proposals
很高兴得知学生会即将创办阅读俱乐部以丰富我们的校园生活，特此致信提出建议。
First of all, I believe it would be a good idea for members to read famous literary works each week and exchange thoughts during club meetings.
首先，我认为可让成员每周阅读名家文学作品，并在俱乐部会议上交流心得。
Besides, as for its aim, I propose that this club should improve students’ reading and communication skills.
其次，源于俱乐部的目的，我建议这个俱乐部应该要能提升学生的阅读与沟通能力。
This club should help broaden their horizons and make new friends.
这个俱乐部英语应该要有助于开阔学生视野和交朋友。
句式升级：用not only…but also 连接5、6句
Besides, as for its aim, I propose that this club should not only improve students’ reading and communication skills but also help expand their horizons and make new friends.
此外，关于俱乐部宗旨，我建议不仅应提升学生的阅读与沟通能力，还应有助于开阔视野、增进友谊。
Last but not least, I suggest reminding members to bring a notebook and pen to each meeting for recording reflections or key points during discussions.
最后但同样重要的是，我提议提醒成员每次会议携带笔记本和笔，以便记录讨论中的思考要点或关键内容。
To join the club, interested students could fill out an application form in Room 602 before September 20.
有意加入俱乐部的同学可于9月20日前至602室填写申请表。
Thank you for considering my ideas.
感谢您考虑我的想法。
五、连句成篇
Dear Student Union,
Having learned with delight that the Students’ Union is going to set up a Reading Club to enrich our school life, I am writing to offer my proposals.
First of all, I believe it would be a good idea for members to read famous literary works each week and exchange thoughts during club meetings. Besides, as for its aim, I propose that this club should not only improve students’ reading and communication skills but also help expand their horizons and foster friendships. Last but not least, I suggest reminding members to bring a notebook and pen to each meeting for recording reflections or key points during discussions. To join the club, interested students could fill out an application form in Room 602 before September 20.
Thank you for considering my ideas.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
很高兴得知学生会即将创办阅读俱乐部以丰富我们的校园生活，特此致信提出建议。
首先，我认为可让成员每周阅读名家文学作品，并在俱乐部会议上交流心得。此外，关于俱乐部宗旨，我建议不仅应提升学生的阅读与沟通能力，还应有助于开阔视野、交朋友。最后但同样重要的是，我提议提醒成员每次会议携带笔记本和笔，以便记录讨论中的思考要点或关键内容。有意加入俱乐部的同学可于9月20日前至602室填写申请表。
感谢您考虑我的想法。
六、实战演练1
假定你是李华，准备加入学校的中国书法社团。 听说你班级的交换生Tim 对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信给他介绍这个社团，并询问他是否愿意一起报名参加。
内容包括：
1. 社团活动时间，地点和内容；
2. 参加该社团的好处；
3. 报名的时间。
写作要求：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Tim,
I’m considerably delighted to learn you are interested in traditional Chinese culture. I’m writing to tell you I’ll join the Chinese Calligraphy Club in our school. Would you like to join me in signing up for this club
Every Friday afternoon in the Art Room, we can appreciate professional writing of several main styles of Chinese traditional calligraphy from 13:00 to14:00, followed by an hour’s calligraphy practice.
By joining the club, not only can you discover the charm of traditional Chinese culture as well as broaden your mind, but you can build your character and relax yourself.
What do you think of the club I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练2
2. 假设你是李华，最近你的英国笔友杰克刚刚转入一所新学校。由于他性格内向，不擅长交朋友，所以他感到非常孤独，写信向你求助。请你给他回一封电子邮件。
1）很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble/difficulty (in) fitting in/adapting to your new school. Such problems are quite common. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
2）无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
Anyway, I do hope that my suggestions are helpful to you. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
3） 我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。
I would be ready to discuss about this matter further with you.
Dear Jack,
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_______________________________________________________________________________【背景】（我很难过的听说由于你的内向，你在新的学校感觉很孤独，很难交朋友。)
_______________________________________________________________________________ 【目的】(因此我写这封信，想要给你一些建议)
_______________________________________________________________________________ 【表达对其问题的理解】(实际上，因为你在一个新的环境中，感到孤独是很正常的) Here are some suggestions for you to adapt to the new environment. _______________________(首先), 【建议1】if you would like to make friends soon, you should show your friendliness to others. _______________________________________________________________________________ (此外), 【建议2】it will be a good idea to greet teachers and classmates when meeting them on campus.________________________________________________________________________(我认为), 【建议3】it will be wise of you to express your ideas in class and take an active part in class activities. __________________________________________________________________
【段落总结】 (总之，我希望我的建议对你有帮助)
I have the confidence that you can deal with these problems soon and everything will be fine with you in the future.【表信心】 ____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【再表态】(如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请让我尽快知道)
Yours, Li Hua
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear that you are lonely in a new school because you find it quite hard to make friends owing to your shyness. Therefore/Hence,I write this letter,hoping to offer you some advice.Frankly speaking, it is quite normal for you to feel lonely because you are living in a new environment now. Here are some suggestions for you to adapt to the new environment.First of all,if you would like to make friends soon, you should show your friendliness to others. Besides/What’s more, it will be a good idea to greet teachers and classmates when meeting them on campus. As far as I’m concerned/From my point of view,it will be wise of you to express your ideas in class and take an active part in class activities. In conclusion, I hope that my suggestions are of great help to you.I have the confidence that you can deal with these problems soon and everything will be fine with you in the future.If there is more I can do to help, please let me know as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练3
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Setting Goals为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1. 目标设定的重要性；2. 设定目标时的注意事项。
写作要求：
1. 词数80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Setting Goals
Albert Einstein said, “If you want to live a happy life, tie it to a goal.” I quite agree with it.
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Setting Goals
Albert Einstein said, “If you want to live a happy life, tie it to a goal.” I quite agree with it. Setting goals is important because it gives you a focus in life. By setting goals, you know where you are going in life so that you will try your best to get there.
Moreover, it is advisable to set goals based on your abilities and skills so that you can manage to achieve them. After you set a goal, it is important to stick to it and work towards it.
In conclusion, if you set practical goals and spare no effort to attain them, you will enjoy a successful life.
阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦曾说："如果你想要幸福生活，将其与目标结合。"我对此非常认同。设定目标之所以重要，是因为它能赋予人生方向。通过确立目标，你会明白自己的人生走向，因此将竭尽全力抵达彼岸。
此外，建议根据自身能力与技能来设定目标，这样才能成功实现它们。设定目标后，重要的是坚持并为之努力。
总而言之，若你设定了切合实际的目标并不遗余力去实现，终将享有成功的人生。课 题：单元话题应用文写作——校园生活
一、写作题目
为了丰富同学们学校生活，校学生会决定成立一个阅读俱乐部，现向全体学生征求建议。假如你是李华, 请根据以下提示, 用英语写一份关于阅读俱乐部的建议。
1. 俱乐部活动：每周读一些名家文学作品，在俱乐部会议上交流。
2. 俱乐部的目的：提高阅读能力，交际能力……
3. 注意事项：带好纸和笔
4. 如何加入俱乐部：9月 20 号前到 602室填好申请表。
注意:
1.通知应包括以上所有信息,可适当增加内容,以使行文连贯;
2.词数 80 左右。
二、思路点拨
文体
人称
时态
主题
布局
三、话题语料积累
词汇 (Vocabulary):
1.建议: 动词__________/__________/advise/_____________ 名词__________（提案）/ suggestion/advice
2.建议做某事: advise _______ sth /advise sb to do/suggest ______；advise/suggest/ propose that … ________
3. 建立、创立、设立、成立: set up, start, ___________, __________；organize
4. 报名参加；_______________ /enter for / register for /join in /________________ the contest / take part in / _____________________
5. 俱乐部: club, community, group
6. 丰富的: enriching, colorful, _____________；使丰富：动词____________
7. 文学作品: literary works, famous books, classics
8. 交流: share ideas, ____________________, discuss, communicate
9. 好处: ____________, advantage, be good for, help to improve；be of benefit/help to
10. 申请: ___________, fill out an __________________ form
句型 (Sentence Patterns):
开头:
Having learned with delight that...is going to organize/set up a... club, I am writing to suggest/share my ideas about.../ offer my proposal/suggestions/advice that…
2. 阐述目的：
1) _________________ enriching our school life and relieve our pressure, 为了丰富校园生活和缓解压力
In order to/In a bid to improve our… /develop our ability in为了提高…/培养……的能力
arouse our _____________ in … 激发我们对…的兴趣
2) Aimed at improving our spoken English, an English corner club is going to be set up.
3) To make more students learn more about…/ increase our _______________ about 增加对……的了解
To provide a good chance/opportunity for students to
To satisfy the students’ needs of…. 满足学生…的需求
4) In order to enable students to have a better understanding of……
5) _________ the purpose/ aim/intention（目的）of promoting the campus culture 为了弘扬校园文化
3. 阐述好处:
It will help us ___________ improve our reading skills, ___________ enhance our social abilities.不仅…而且
Taking part in this activity is a good way to ________________________ and make new friends . 拓展视野
4. 提出建议:
I suggest that we (should)...
It would be a good idea to...
Remember to/Bring...
5. 结尾:
We sincerely look forward to your active participation./call on sb to do sth 号召某人干某事
Thank you for considering my suggestions.
6. 衔接词：
顺序/递进: 首先______________; 其次 ______________;______________;______________;____________
转折: ______________;______________;
因果: ______________;______________;______________;______________;
总结: ___________________;_________________;
四、遣词造句
I _________________________ that the Students’ Union is going to ___________ a Reading Club to _____________________________________.
我很高兴得知学生会即将创办阅读俱乐部以丰富我们的校园生活
I am writing to _________________________. 我写信提出建议。
句式升级：将1、2两句用非谓语动词合并成一句
______________________________that the Students’ Union is going to to ____________ a Reading Club to _____________________________, I am writing to _________________________.
很高兴得知学生会即将创办阅读俱乐部以丰富我们的校园生活，特此致信提出建议。
First of all, I believe it _________________________ for members to _________________________ each week and _________________________ during club meetings.
首先，我认为可让成员每周阅读名家文学作品，并在俱乐部会议上交流心得。
Besides, ___________ its aim, I propose that this club _________________________ and _________________________.
其次，源于俱乐部的目的，我建议这个俱乐部应该要能提升学生的阅读与沟通能力。
This club should help _________________________ and make new friends.
这个俱乐部英语应该要有助于开阔学生视野和交朋友。
句式升级：用not only…but also 连接5、6句
Besides, ___________ its aim, I propose that this club should _________________________ and _________________________ but also _________________________ and make new friends.
此外，关于俱乐部宗旨，我建议不仅应提升学生的阅读与沟通能力，还应有助于开阔视野、交朋友。
Last but not least, I suggest ____________ members to bring a notebook and pen to each meeting for _________________________ or _________________ during discussions.
最后但同样重要的是，我提议提醒成员每次会议携带笔记本和笔，以便记录讨论中的思考要点或关键内容。
To join the club, interested students could _________________________ in Room 602 before September 20.
有意加入俱乐部的同学可于9月20日前至602室填写申请表。
Thank you for _________________ my ideas.
感谢您考虑我的想法。
五、连句成篇
Dear Student Union,
______________________________that the Students’ Union is going to to ____________ a Reading Club to _____________________________, I am writing to _________________________.
First of all, I believe it _________________________ for members to _________________________ each week and _________________________ during club meetings. Besides, ___________ its aim, I propose that this club should _________________________ and _________________________ but also _________________________ and make new friends. Last but not least, I suggest ____________ members to bring a notebook and pen to each meeting for _________________________ or _________________ during discussions. To join the club, interested students could _________________________ in Room 602 before September 20.
Thank you for _________________ my ideas.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
很高兴得知学生会即将创办阅读俱乐部以丰富我们的校园生活，特此致信提出建议。
首先，我认为可让成员每周阅读名家文学作品，并在俱乐部会议上交流心得。此外，关于俱乐部宗旨，我建议不仅应提升学生的阅读与沟通能力，还应有助于开阔视野、交朋友。最后但同样重要的是，我提议提醒成员每次会议携带笔记本和笔，以便记录讨论中的思考要点或关键内容。有意加入俱乐部的同学可于9月20日前至602室填写申请表。
感谢您考虑我的想法。
六、实战演练1 (社团)
假定你是李华，准备加入学校的中国书法社团。 听说你班级的交换生Tim 对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信给他介绍这个社团，并询问他是否愿意一起报名参加。
内容包括：
1. 社团活动时间，地点和内容；
2. 参加该社团的好处；
3. 报名的时间。
写作要求：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练2 （新生烦恼）
2. 假设你是李华，最近你的英国笔友杰克刚刚转入一所新学校。由于他性格内向，不擅长交朋友，所以他感到非常孤独，写信向你求助。请你给他回一封电子邮件。
Dear Jack,
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_______________________________________________________________________________【背景】（我很难过的听说由于你的内向，你在新的学校感觉很孤独，很难交朋友。)
_______________________________________________________________________________ 【目的】(因此我写这封信，想要给你一些建议)
_______________________________________________________________________________ 【表达对其问题的理解】(实际上，因为你在一个新的环境中，感到孤独是很正常的) Here are some suggestions for you to adapt to the new environment. _______________________(首先), 【建议1】if you would like to make friends soon, you should show your friendliness to others. _____________________ (此外), 【建议2】it will be a good idea to greet teachers and classmates when meeting them on campus.______________________________(我认为), 【建议3】it will be wise of you to express your ideas in class and take an active part in class activities. 【段落总结】___________________________________________________________________________
(总之，我希望我的建议对你有帮助)
【表信心】 I have the confidence that you can deal with these problems soon and everything will be fine with you in the future. 【再表态】_________________________________________________________________ (如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请让我尽快知道)
Yours, Li Hua
实战演练3 (设定目标)
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Setting Goals为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1. 目标设定的重要性；2. 设定目标时的注意事项。
写作要求：
1. 词数80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Setting Goals
Albert Einstein said, “If you want to live a happy life, tie it to a goal.” I quite agree with it.
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阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦曾说："如果你想要幸福生活，将其与目标结合。"我对此非常认同。
设定目标重要，是因为它能赋予人生方向。通过确立目标，你会明白自己的人生走向，因此将竭尽全力抵达彼岸。
此外，建议根据自身能力与技能来设定目标，这样才能成功实现它们。设定目标后，重要的是坚持并为之努力。
总而言之，若你设定了切合实际的目标并不遗余力去实现，终将享有成功的人生。
