2025-2026浙江省杭州一模质量检测
应用文和读后续写讲义(11.17)
“你的经历”
高级短语
1.dive deep into(深入探究)
2.tackle complex topics(处理复杂话题)
3.polish public speaking skills(打磨公众演讲技巧)
4.seek feedback proactively(主动寻求反馈)
5.overcome linguistic hurdles(克服语言障碍)
6.seize every learning opportunity(抓住每一个学习机会)
高级句子
1.A year ago, I joined the English Debate Club and soon dived deep into diverse topics, from global issues to cultural differences, forcing me to express complex ideas fluently in English.(一年前,我加入英语辩论社,很快就深入探究从全球议题到文化差异的各类话题,这迫使我用英语流利表达复杂观点。)
2.To prepare for debates, I not only read extensively to expand my knowledge reservoir but also polished my public speaking skills by delivering speeches repeatedly in front of the club members.(为准备辩论,我不仅广泛阅读以扩充知识储备,还通过在社团成员面前反复发表演讲来打磨公众演讲技巧。)
3.I also sought guidance from our advisor and peers proactively, which enabled me to identify and overcome my linguistic weaknesses, such as inaccurate word choices and disjointed sentence structures.(我还主动向指导老师和同学们寻求指导,这让我能够发现并克服语言上的不足,比如词汇选择不准确和句式结构不连贯等问题。)
二、“你的收获和启发”
高级短语
1.reap remarkable benefits 收获显著益处
2.enhance one's language proficiency 提升语言能力
3.boost one's confidence 增强自信
4.foster critical thinking skills 培养批判性思维能力
5.gain insights into 深入了解
6.be of great significance 具有重要意义
高级句子
1.From this experience, I have reaped remarkable benefits that have enhanced my English proficiency substantially.从这段经历中,我收获了显著的益处,大幅提升了我的英语能力。
2.It not only boosted my confidence in using English but also fostered my critical
thinking skills, which are crucial for effective communication.它不仅增强了我使用英语的自信,还培养了我的批判性思维能力,这对有效沟通至关重要。
3.What's more, I gained insights into different cultures and perspectives through the topics we debated, which is of great significance for my overall growth.此外,通过我们辩论的话题,我深入了解了不同的文化和观点,这对我的全面成长具有重要意义。
4.This journey has inspired me to realize that active participation and immersive learning are key to mastering a language.这段旅程让我领悟到,积极参与和沉浸式学习是掌握一门语言的关键。
读后续写
一、情感表达类
高级短语
1.a surge of warmth in the heart 心中涌起一股暖意
2.emotions well up inside 情绪在内心涌动
3.a glimmer of hope and kindness 希望与善意的微光
4.a profound sense of fulfillment 深切的满足感
5.a touch of humanity 一丝人情味
高级句子
1.As our voices intertwined, a surge of warmth welled up in my heart, erasing all the weariness of the day. 当我们的声音交织在一起时,一股暖意涌上我的心头,驱散了一天的疲惫。
2.When he nodded gratefully, I could feel emotions welling up inside, realizing how a small act could bridge distances. 当他感激地点头时,我能感觉到情绪在内心涌动,意识到一个小小的举动可以拉近人与人之间的距离。
3.There was a glimmer of hope and kindness in his eyes that made the stuffy train car feel alive. 他的眼中闪烁着希望与善意的微光,让闷热的车厢变得有了生气。
4.Witnessing the passengers’ change, I experienced a profound sense of fulfillment, knowing music had worked its magic. 目睹乘客们的变化,我感受到了深切的满足感,因为我知道音乐发挥了它的魔力。
二、动作描写类
高级短语
1.clap enthusiastically in time(跟着节拍热情鼓掌)
2.sing aloud with beaming eyes(眼里闪着光放声歌唱)
3.set the phone aside deliberately(特意放下手机)
4.lean closer with concentrated attention(专注地凑近聆听)
5.rummage through wallets spontaneously(自发地翻找钱包)
6.exchange warm smiles with others(与他人相视而笑)
高级句子
1.The little boy’s gentle sway turned into enthusiastic clapping—he stamped his feet lightly to the beat, sang aloud with beaming eyes, and his face flushed with excitement from being fully immersed.小男孩的轻轻摇摆变成了热情的鼓掌 —— 他跟着节拍轻轻跺脚,眼里闪着光放声歌唱,沉浸其中的脸庞因兴奋泛起红晕。
2.His mother deliberately set her phone aside, her eyes softening as she watched her son. She leaned closer to listen attentively, occasionally nodding in time and even humming the chorus softly along with him.他的妈妈特意放下手机,看着儿子的眼神渐渐柔和;她专注地凑近聆听,时不时跟着节拍点头,甚至轻声和他一起哼唱副歌。
3.The once cold-faced passengers melted into warmth. Some leaned forward with their elbows on their knees, listening intently. Others rummaged through their wallets spontaneously, pulling out coins or bills. A few even exchanged warm smiles, as the music bridged the indifference between strangers.曾经面露冷漠的乘客们渐渐被暖意取代:有人肘部撑在膝盖上前倾身体,专注聆听;有人自发地翻找钱包,掏出硬币或纸币;还有人彼此相视而笑,音乐彻底打破了陌生人之间的隔阂。
三、场景描写类
高级短语
1.stifling/suffocative atmosphere 令人窒息的氛围
2.a haven of harmony 和谐的港湾
3.a transformation unfolds 转变悄然发生
4.mundane/ordinary surroundings 平凡的环境
5.a ripple of change 变化的涟漪
高级句子
1.Despite the stifling atmosphere in the train, the moment our voices met, it became a haven of harmony. 尽管火车里的氛围令人窒息,但当我们的声音交汇时,这里就变成了和谐的港湾。
2.In the once indifferent space, a transformation unfolded as music broke through the barriers. 在这个曾经冷漠的空间里,随着音乐冲破壁垒,转变悄然发生。
3.Even in such ordinary surroundings, the power of music turned every corner into a stage of warmth. 即使在如此平凡的环境中,音乐的力量也把每个角落都变成了温暖的舞台。
4.A ripple of change spread through the car, with each passenger’s reaction adding to the beautiful scene. 变化的涟漪在车厢中蔓延,每位乘客的反应都为这美好的场景增添了色彩。
四、主旨升华类
高级短语
1.transcend boundaries 跨越界限
2.the universal language 通用语言
3.a testament to humanity 人性的证明
4.bridge the gap 弥合鸿沟
5.ignite a spark of connection 点燃联结的火花
高级句子
1.Music, as the universal language, has the power to transcend boundaries and bring people from all walks of life together. 音乐作为通用语言,具有跨越界限的力量,能将各行各业的人凝聚在一起。
2.This incident is a testament to humanity, showing that even in the busiest city, kindness and art can ignite a spark of connection. 这件事是人性的证明,表明即使在最繁忙的城市,善意和艺术也能点燃联结的火花。
3.It proves that music can bridge the gap between strangers, turning indifference into empathy in an instant. 它证明了音乐可以弥合陌生人之间的鸿沟,在瞬间将冷漠转化为共情。
4.The true beauty lies in how a simple act can reveal the best in people, making us realize we are all part of a larger symphony of life. 真正的美在于一个简单的举动如何展现出人们最好的一面,让我们意识到我们都是生命这一宏大交响曲的一部分。