课件22张PPT。 观点对比类作文 写作技巧 By Spring 英语写作-----How to write
an argumentation(议论文) 最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。
注意:
1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数:100左右。
3、参考词汇:门票:entrance fee
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Dear Editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
Opinions are divided on the question. 60%of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Changing entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What’s more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.
Yours truly
Li Hua词汇,句型 , 语法多样化 1.覆盖了所有的要点
2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章? 克隆的使用受到人们关注,人们观点不一。
支持的人认为,克隆能够帮助克隆器官治病;…
反对的认为,克隆可能会被滥用。…
我认为… The structure of the article topic sentence for the opinion against the opinionending sentence 介绍讨论的主题(开头句)一、介绍讨论的主题(开头句): 克隆的使用受到人们关注,人们观点不一。
我们举行了一场讨论,讨论内容是……
We had a discussion about whether it is necessary to develop cloning.
我们已经作了一个调查,调查内容是是否使用克隆
We’ve had a survey about whether …
There is a wide spread concern over the use of clone.…have different views on sth /
…react to sth in different ways.
…differ in their attitudes towards sth.
The idea about the use of clone vary from person to person.
Opinions are divided on this issue.二、介绍正方观点: 支持的人认为,克隆能够帮助克隆器官治病;…
①….of them hold the opinion that…
②….of them are in favor of the idea that…
③.People who are for / against the idea that…
④.Some people believe that…, others argue that…
三、介绍反方观点 反对的认为,克隆可能会被滥用。…
①.However, each coin has two sides.
②.However,…of them hold the view that…
③.People who are against it hold the idea that...
④.On the other hand,…people object that…
Others argue that …In their opinion,…四、总结陈词
__________(总之), we should make good use of clone.
In general
To sum up
In a word/all in all总结In short/briefGenerally speaking______________(我认为) , we should use clone…As far as I’m concernedIn my opinion/it’s my opinion that个人观点I think/believe1.(因为)_____ his help, I finished the work at last.Thanks toAs a result ofOwing to Due to 因为Because of /with过渡词的使用2. Cloning helps us a lot, __________(所以)we’ll make good use of it.
thereforeSo as a result/consequence thus 结果3. Cloning is beneficial in treatment, __________此外, it helps in… .
what’s moremoreover/furthermorein addition/ besides besides 另外(递进)4. The young man didn’t enjoy his old job. _________(相反 ) he finds the new job very interesting.
On the contrary,However,转折But/yet/while对比类写作 实战模版 There is a widespread concern over the issue that… But the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.
A majority of people hold the view that... There are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place,....in the second place, ....
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that... In their point of view, for one thing,... For another,...
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that... It is not only because ____, but also because ____...Cloning or not?克隆简介
支持的观点
反对的观点
你的观点书面表达(满分30分)
暑假即将来临,你班同学讨论了假期计划,提出了不同看法,请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文,并谈谈你的看法。(2006年陕西卷)注意:1.词数100-120 2.短文必须包括表中所列要点。
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Students react to this problem in different ways.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They say it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more, they can set aside money for other purposes. But They will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out traveling as it can enrich their knowledge and broaden their views. But they will spend more money and go through some trouble while traveling.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. Actually I have more reasons for it. When staying at home, I get to do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework. In a word, to stay at home is better than to travel.