【单元考点培优】Module 8 Sports life 专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版
Module 8 Sports life
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出的内容不计入总词数。
世界上有许多体育明星，他们的成绩令世人瞩目，他们的精神值得我们学习。在众多体育明星中，你最喜欢谁 为什么 请你以“My Favourite Sports Star” 为题写一篇短文，谈谈你最喜欢的体育明星。
提示问题：
1. Who is your favourite sports star
2. Why do you like him/her
3. What do you learn from him/her
My Favourite Sports Star
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2．假如你是李华，在今年的中秋节你陪同来自美国结对学校的中学生Peter一起前往杭州观看亚运赛事、体验中国文化。请根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文向报刊English Journey投稿，介绍这一天的活动内容并分享感受。
内容要点 写作要点
Activities 1．watch women’s 800m freestyle final (女子800米自由泳决赛) in Hangzhou Olympic Sports Center 2．go to visit Hangzhou National Tea Museum and watched an enjoyable tea art performance. 3．…
Feelings …
注意：1．文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3．词数：80～100；
4．正文首句已给出，不计入总词数。
On Mid-Autumn Day, I took Peter, a student from America, to Hangzhou.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．2024年巴黎奥运会恰好在暑期举行，相信大家或多或少收看了一些转播的比赛项目。请根据问题提示，结合你所了解的比赛情况，写篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍一下。
1. Which event do you like best
2. Who is your favorite athlete /Which is your favorite team
3. What do you think of the game results
4. What have you learned from him/her/the team
I watched the Paris 2024 Olympic Games this summer vacation.
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4．假设你是李平，你的英国笔友 Mary来信说她打算在明年冬天来哈尔滨观看第九届亚冬会 (the 9th Asian Winter Games)，并表示她新学期要报名参加学校开设的汉语课程，开始学习汉语。请你结合以下信息给她写一封回信。
写作要点：
1.欢迎她来哈尔滨。
2.介绍亚冬会
（1）时间：2月7日--14日
（2）你感兴趣的比赛项目：滑冰、滑雪
3.给她即将开始的汉语学习提一些建议。
写作要求：
1、不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2、可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3、字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4、至少80词。
Dear Mary,
How is everything going
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
5．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友卡塔尔小王子 (Prince Muhammad) 来信邀请你去卡塔尔一起看世界杯，为表歉意，请你给他回一封拒绝信，希望对方谅解，并邀请他来中国游玩，好玩的地方以及中华文化。
要求：
（1）词数：100词左右；
（2）内容：根据要点提示适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
（3）格式：格式规范，书写工整。
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6．2022年4月8日，习近平总书记在北京冬奥会、冬残奥会总结表彰大会上提出了“胸怀大志、自信开放、迎难而上、追求卓越、共创未来”的冬奥精神。本卷完形填空B部分也提到了新一代年轻人在冬奥会上展现的精神面貌。某英文报纸正在以“My Understanding of Winter Olympics Spirits”为题征集稿件。请你根据以下要点，写一篇征文，谈谈你对冬奥精神的看法。
写作要点:
1. 冬奥精神教会我们要不怕困难，迎难而上，通过与人合作追求成功……
2. 在日常的生活中我们可以践行冬奥精神，如……
3. ……
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80参考词汇： 践行put sth into practice
My Understanding of Winter Olympics Spirits
On April 8th, 2022, President Xi Jinping came up with the idea of Winter Olympics Spirits.
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7．2022年女子亚洲杯决赛，中国女足“逆境中的坚持”和“最后时刻的逆转”是一个非常励志的故事，请根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英文短文。
要点：
1. 2022年女足亚洲杯决赛（the 2022 Women’s Asian Cup final）是一场艰难的比赛。该队最好的运动员的脚受了重伤。但她没有注意疼痛，继续比赛。她的勇敢行为鼓舞了全队。在人们的欢呼声中，她们终于在最后25分钟进了3个球。
2. 多年来，球队努力训练。这个团队创造了许多“第一”。她们热爱足球，从不放弃。
3. 她们将会抓住每一个学习和提高的机会，迎接每一个挑战。
要求：
1. 可根据提示适当发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数不少于70词。
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8．2024年夏季奥林匹克运动会将在法国巴黎举行，现在组委会在全世界选拔志愿者。假如你叫李华，想成为本届奥运会的一名志愿者，请根据以下内容提示，用英语给组委会写一封申请信。
内容提示：
1. 热爱英语，口语很棒；
2. 善于交际，乐于助人；
3. 爱好体育，熟悉项目。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息。
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9．2025 年哈尔滨亚洲冬季运动会（Harbin 2025 Asian Winter Games） 将于明年2月在哈尔滨举行。这是继北京冬奥会后中国举办的又一重大国际综合性冰雪盛会。届时， 越来越多的国内外友人会来到哈尔滨，为更好地助力赛事，宣传哈尔滨，作为初中生的我们可以做些什么呢？请根据下列提示用英语写一份倡议书，并号召同学们积极推广冰雪文化和冰雪运动。
写作要点：
1. 冬运会的口号（slogan）：冰雪同梦，亚洲同心。（Dream of Winter, Love among Asia）
2. 倡议同学们努力做到：
①学习知识，尤其是学好英语；
②遵守公共秩序，爱护家乡环境；
③热情好客，礼貌待人。
3. 具体介绍一下哈尔滨的冰雪文化和冰雪运动。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80 词。
Dear classmates,
Harbin 2025 Asian Winter Games will be held in February, 2025
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We hope Harbin 2025 Asian Winter Games will be a great success.
10．2024年巴黎奥运会恰好在暑期举行，相信大家或多或少收看了一些转播的比赛项目。请根据下面的问题提示，结合你所了解的比赛情况，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍一下巴黎奥运会。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
1.Which event do you like best
2.Who is your favourite athlete /Which is your favourite team
3.What do you think of the game results
4.What have you learned from him/her/the team
I watched the 2024 Paris Olympic Games this summer vacation.
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11．假设你是李阳（Li Yang），世界大学生运动会（the World University Games）将在成都举办，现组委会招募志愿者，请你根据以下内容写一封自荐邮件。
From: World University Games Organizing Committee
Dear students, We are looking for volunteers for the upcoming World University Games. Please tell us your name, age, hobbies, and your advantages for being a volunteer. Also, what languages can you speak and what kind of help can you offer to the athletes and visitors We hope to receive your applications. Looking forward to your joining us! Best regards! World University Games Organizing Committee
要求：1.回复邮件需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯流畅；
2.不得使用真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数 80 左右。
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12．为了让人们更多地了解冬奥会，请根据下列表格里的内容对花样滑冰 (figure skating) 这一冬季运动项目作简单的介绍。
起源时间和起源地 19世纪中期 (in the mid-19th century)，奥地利维也纳 (Vienna, Austria)
创始人 杰克逊·海因斯 (Jackson Haines)，美国人
特点 把舞蹈和滑冰相结合 (combine)
发展 50年后，美国人才改变了看法，花样滑冰在美国开始流行
提示词：start, like… best, get great success, would like, popular
要求：1. 短文须包含表格所有内容，可以适当发挥；
2. 80词左右。
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13．假如你叫李华，国际奥委会(the International Olympic Committee)在其官网上发布了招募2024年巴黎奥运会志愿者的海报。请你根据下列提示问题，用英文给相关负责人Sam写一封自荐信。
提示问题： 1. What’s your personal information
2. Why do you want to be a volunteer
3. What can you do for the games
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词 (开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)。
Dear Sam,
I’m writing to express my interest in volunteering for the 2024 Paris Olympic Games.
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．2025 年哈尔滨亚洲冬季运动会 ( Harbin 2025 Asian Winter Games) 将于明年2月在哈尔滨举行。届时，越来越多的外国朋友将会来到哈尔滨，因此学生会决定招募志愿者在明年寒假期间为外国朋友提供帮助。假如你是王刚，请根据以下提示给学生会老师写一封自荐信，并说说你想成为志愿者的原因。
写作要点：
1. 很希望能成为志愿者中的一员；
2. 介绍你自己：
（1）15岁，来自八年一班；
（2）友善，乐于助人；
（3）擅长英语，能很好地与外国人交流 (communicate) 。
3. 说说你想成为志愿者的原因。
写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
（3）字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
（4）至少80词。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Harbin 2025 Asian Winter Games will be held in February, 2025.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Gang
15．杭州2022年亚运会(Asian Games Hangzhou 2022)即将开幕，组委会正在招募英语志愿者。假如你是Li Hua，希望成为一名志愿者，请根据表格内容，写一篇自我介绍，并说明想要成为志愿者的理由。
Name: Li Hua School: No.1 Middle School
Age: 13 Birthday: ...
Favorite subject: English and... Specialty（特长）: I am good at.../I can...
Hobbies: I like... Reasons: ...
参考词汇：volunteer 志愿者 volunteering work 志愿者活动
要求:（1）首句已给出（不计入总词数），参考词汇可选择使用；
（2）必须包括所给信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
（3）词数：60—80。
I’m Li Hua and I want to be a volunteer in Asian Games Hangzhou 2022.
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16．2022年足球世界杯在卡塔尔举行，结合我市开展的“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。
常识 历史悠久，深受喜爱 世界杯4年举行一次
好处 男生女生皆可参加 利于培养团队精神 考生自拟（至少1点）
偶像 梅西，有足球天赋
梦想 考生自拟（至少1点）
注意：1. 词数80左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：卡塔尔：Qatar 世界杯：the World Cup 梅西：Messi
Dear classmates,
I’m very excited to hear that our school will carry out football into the campus.
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Thank you for your attention.
17．假设你是李华，是一个善良、有礼貌的中学生。请根据提示，以“I am a good volunteer”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你自己参加2022北京冬季奥林匹克运动会志愿者服务的表现和感受。
提示：1. 英语口语流利，与外国人交流毫无困难，很高兴为外国运动员和游客提供最好的服务；
2. 可以把运动员带到不同地方，也可以发物品给他们；
3. 对中国历史有丰富的了解，是中国文化的倡导者；
4. 谈你学到了什么，以及感受（两者分别至少各谈一点）。
要求：
1. 词数80左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯；
4. 文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
I am a good volunteer
My name is Li Hua. I am a kind middle school student. I am always ready to help others.
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18．2022 年杭州亚运会志愿者正在招募中。假如你是学生李华，希望能成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会陈女士写一封申请信，内容包括：1. 个人情况；2. 自身优势；3. 服务承诺
Name 李华，13 岁，中学学生
Abilities 擅长英语，口语很棒；爱好运动，了解亚运会；性格外向，善于与人交流，且乐于助人；会为人们提供最好的服务。
参考词汇：the Asian Games 亚运会 spoken English 英语口语 service 服务
注意：1. 内容必须包括提示的信息；可适当发挥，字数80左右。
2. 逻辑通顺，表达得体，书写工整。
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19．假设你是李华。你的网友Simon观看了北京的冬奥会开幕式，感到特别的震撼。尤其喜爱冬奥会的吉祥物冰墩墩和雪容融。他想多了解一些关于冰墩墩的寓意，请你给他写一封回信。要点如下：
1. 冰墩墩是一个穿着宇航服的大熊猫的卡通形象。它是一位来自未来的冰雪运动员。
2. “冰”的意思是汉字的冰，代表了纯洁和力量，是冬季运动会的象征。
3. “墩墩”象征着大熊猫憨态可掬的形象，意味着强壮和活泼的，也代表孩子。
4. 冰墩墩整体则体现了运动员强壮有力的身体、坚忍不拔的意志和鼓舞人心的奥林匹克精神，
5. 现在是一墩难求。
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
4. 提示词汇：a cartoon image 卡通形象 purity and strength 纯洁和力量
a winter sports athlete 冰雪运动员 robust and lively 强壮和活泼的
top selling product 热销产品
Dear Simon,
Thanks for your letter. I’m glad that you like Bing DwenDwen and Shuey RhonRhon, the official mascot of Olympic Winter Games Beijing 2022.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
20．假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，你正参加与法国巴黎友好校以“畅想奥运盛事”为主题的线上英语交流活动。友好校的学生Chris得知2022年北京冬奥会的主题口号(official motto) 是“一起向未来”，认为这个口号非常棒。他请你进一步谈谈看法。
内容包括：
1. 向Chris表示感谢并认同他的看法；
2. 你对口号的理解(体现奥运精神、构建人类命运共同体)；
3. 对巴黎2024年奥运会筹备工作表达祝愿。
要求：1．内容完整，语法正确，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2．100词左右；
3．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
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参考答案及试题解析
1．Possible version:
My Favourite Sports Star
My favourite sports star is Michael Jordan. He is a famous American professional basketball player.
Born in 1963, Michael Jordan joined the NBA’s Chicago Bulls in 1984. He performed so well that he won a number of awards and honours during his professional career. Michael Jordan has been regarded as one of the greatest basketball players of all time and named as one of the best players in the 20th century.
I like Michael Jordan not only for his excellent basketball skills but also for his great sports spirit. In the face of repeated failures, he never gave up. Instead, he worked harder until he achieved great success in the end. His positive attitude, fighting spirit and determination have always been inspiring me.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是记叙文写作。
时态：一般现在时和一般过去时。
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，简单介绍“我”最喜欢的体育明星。
第二步，具体介绍体育明星的基本信息以及他有哪些成就。
第三步，书写结语，“我”喜欢的体育明星的原因以及向他学到的优良品质。
[亮点词汇]
①not only… but also…不但……而且……
②in the face of 面对
[高分句型]
He performed so well that he won a number of awards and honours during his professional career.（so…that…引导结果状语从句）
2．例文
On Mid-Autumn Day, I took Peter, a student from America, to Hangzhou.
Our day began with the women’s 800m freestyle final in Hangzhou Olympic Sports Center. It was a thrilling race, and we were both impressed by the athletes’ determination and speed. After the swim meet, we went to visit Hangzhou National Tea Museum and watched an enjoyable tea art performance. It was a fascinating experience.
As the day came to a close, we reflected on our experiences. It was a privilege to be able to share this special day with Peter and to introduce him to some of the highlights of Chinese culture.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据文章已给出的开头，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述观看杭州亚运赛事和体验中国茶文化的一天；
第三步，表达参观后的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①thrilling race惊心动魄的比赛
②impressed by对……印象深刻
③reflect on反思
④be able to能够
[高分句型]
It was a privilege to be able to share this special day with Peter and to introduce him to some of the highlights of Chinese culture. (it作形式主语)
3．例文
I watched the Paris 2024 Olympic Games this summer vacation. Here I’d like to share my thoughts of watching the games with you.
All the athletes and sports teams impressed me a lot. Especially our Chinese Delegation achieved a total of 40 gold medals, tying with the US for the first place.
To tell you the truth, I like volleyball best. So what I admire most is our Chinese Women’s Volleyball Team. This newly-formed team beat against the strong Turkey Team in the quarter-finals. Our players overcame difficulties and fought very bravely. But I was not surprised that they failed to reach the podium (领奖台), due to the lack of strength.
Anyway, their fighting spirit has always inspired me to work hard. Never give up and keep fighting, you’ll make it one day!
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括4个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山，与大家分享观看比赛的想法，从而引出话题；
第二步，表达对巴黎奥运会中国代表团的总体评价；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的队伍情况，包括比赛结果等；
第四步，表达感受。
[亮点词汇］
① never give up 永不言弃
② to tell you the truth 说实话
[高分句型］
① But I was not surprised that they failed to reach the podium, due to the lack of strength. (宾语从句)
② So what I admire most is our Chinese Women’s Volleyball Team. (主语从句)
4．例文：
Dear Mary,
How is everything going I’m delighted to hear that you plan to come to Harbin next winter to watch the 9th Asian Winter Games. Welcome to Harbin! The event will be held from February 7th to 14th. There will be many exciting competitions, and I am particularly interested in ice skating and skiing. They are thrilling and showcase the athletes’ incredible skills.
I am glad to know that you will start learning Chinese in the new semester. Here are some suggestions for your Chinese study: First, try to practice speaking as much as possible. Speaking with native speakers will greatly improve your pronunciation and fluency. Second, make use of online resources and apps to enhance your vocabulary and grammar. Third, watching Chinese movies or listening to Chinese songs can be both fun and helpful.
I hope you enjoy your time in Harbin and have a great experience learning Chinese. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题属于书信作文；
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的每一项提示，并适当添加细节，使内容连贯充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达对 Mary 来哈尔滨的欢迎；
第二步，介绍亚冬会的具体时间，并指出自己感兴趣的比赛项目；
第三步，针对 Mary 即将开始的汉语学习给出具体建议；
第四步，表达期待与对方见面的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be delighted to hear很高兴听到
②exciting competitions激动人心的比赛
③suggestions for your Chinese study对学习汉语的建议
④practice speaking练习口语
⑤enhance your vocabulary and grammar提高词汇量和语法
[高分句型]
①The event will be held from February 7th to 14th. (被动语态)
②Watching Chinese movies or listening to Chinese songs can be both fun and helpful. (动名词短语作主语)
5．例文
Dear Prince Muhammad,
Thank you very much for inviting me to Qatar to watch the World Cup. I am a super fan of the World Cup, which is the most popular single sport event on the planet. But unfortunately, I’m afraid I have to refuse your kindness. It was a difficult decision for me, but I had no choice. In the next few days, I will be occupied by my lessons, because I have to review for the exam. If I don’t do well in the exam, my parents will go crazy.
I’m sorry I missed the good opportunity to be with you. I’d like to invite you to China for vacation next year. We have Beijing roast duck, dumplings and so on. Of course, there are many famous attractions here, such as the Forbidden City, the Great Wall and so on. I will teach you to speak Chinese and take you to some famous historical spots.
I wish you all the best. I look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据所给提示完成写作，不要遗漏信息，并适当增加细节，人称为第一人称。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对邀请表示感谢，并说明自己不能去现场看世界杯的理由；
第二步，邀请对方来中国参观，并介绍风景名胜与中华文化；
第三步，书写总结，表达祝愿并期待收到回信。
[亮点词汇]
① a super fan of 一个……的超级粉丝
② a difficult decision 一个艰难的决定
③ had no choice 没有选择
[高分句型]
① I am a super fan of the World Cup, which is the most popular single sport event on the planet.（which引导的非限定性定语从句）
② If I don’t do well in the exam, my parents will go crazy.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．One possible version:
My Understanding of Winter Olympics Spirits
On April 8th, 2022, President Xi Jinping came up with the idea of Winter Olympics Spirits. In my understanding, I think the Winter Olympics Spirits tell us not to be afraid in the face of difficulties. Instead, we should face them bravely and try our best to solve them. It is best for us to work together with others when we have problems. Also, we need to be confident and work hard to be excellent.
In our daily life, we can put Winter Olympics Spirits into practice. For example, we can work with others to deal with our study or life difficulties. Asking for others’ advice is a good way to solve a problem when we don’t have any good ideas. Besides, it’s necessary for us to help those who are in need. Helping others is helping ourselves.
There are a lot of things we can do to realize the Winter Olympics Spirits. If everyone does this way, we will have a more beautiful world, a stronger country and a better self as well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇征文
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“冬奥精神教会我们要不怕困难，迎难而上，通过与人合作追求成功，我们可以在日常的生活中可以践行冬奥精神等信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，谈你对冬奥精神的看法；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，重点讲述冬奥会精神教给我们的东西以及我们应该怎么做；
第三步，书写结语，表达“希望我们国家越来越强大”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①come up with想出
②in the face of difficulties面对困难
③In our daily life在我们生活中
④deal with处理
[高分句型]
①Besides, it’s necessary for us to help those who are in need. (it is+形容词+for sb. to do句式)
② It is best for us to work together with others when we have problems. (“when”引导的时间状语从句)
7．例文
The 2022 Women’s Asian Cup final was a difficult match. The team’s best player hurt her foot badly. But she paid no attention to the pain and continued to play. Her brave actions encouraged the whole team. With people cheering, they finally scored three goals in the last 25 minutes.
For years, the team trained hard. The team created many “firsts”. They love football and never give up. They will take every chance to learn and improve and rise to every challenge.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍2022年女足亚洲杯决赛的一些情况；
第二步，介绍运动员们多年的努力以及今后会怎么做；
[亮点词汇]
① pay no attention to没注意
② give up放弃
[高分句型]
① They love football and never give up. （and连接并列部分）
8．例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a student from China. I am writing to apply for the position of volunteer for the 2024 Summer Olympic Games in Paris.
I love English and have a good command of spoken English, which enables me to communicate with people from different countries. Besides, I am good at social interaction and always ready to help others. I have a sense of teamwork and responsibility. I believe in solving problems together with other volunteers. What’s more, I am a sport-lover and very familiar with various Olympic events, including their rules and details, which will help me serve the athletes and spectators effectively.
Thank you for considering my application. I am looking forward to the opportunity to serve as a volunteer and be part of this wonderful event.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点展开，适当补充，注意条理清晰和语法正确。另外注意申请信的格式，写作内容需完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍写作目的：申请成为奥运会的一名志愿者；
第二步，具体介绍自身优势；
第三步，重申意愿与表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①have a sense of teamwork有团队合作意识
②be familiar with熟悉
③be ready to help others乐于助人
[高分句型]
I love English and have a good command of spoken English, which enables me to communicate with people from different countries. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
9．例文
Dear classmates,
Harbin 2025 Asian Winter Games will be held in February, 2025. The slogan of the Winter Games is “Dream of Winter, Love among Asia”. We students need to learn knowledge, especially English well. We must abide by public order and protect the environment of our hometown. We also need to be hospitable and polite to others.
Harbin, China, is renowned for its ice and snow culture. Each winter, the city transforms into a winter wonderland, with ice sculptures, snow festivals, and winter sports. Ice skating, snowboarding, and sledding are popular activities. This culture attracts tourists from around the world, who come to experience the unique charm of Harbin’s winter.
We hope Harbin 2025 Asian Winter Games will be a great success.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，写的是一封倡议书，呼吁同学们为哈尔滨2025年亚洲冬季运动会贡献自己的力量；
② 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主；
③ 提示：写作中应包含三方面倡议内容，并简要介绍哈尔滨的冰雪文化和运动，可适当扩展细节，保持语言连贯、表达清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引入话题，简要介绍哈尔滨冬运会及其口号；
第二步：发出倡议，分别从学习、文明礼仪、环境保护等方面鼓励同学们行动起来；
第三步：具体介绍哈尔滨的冰雪文化及相关活动；
第四步：表达对冬运会圆满成功的祝愿，呼吁大家积极参与推广冰雪文化。
[亮点词汇]
① abide by 遵守
② be renowned for 因……而闻名
[高分句型]
① Each winter, the city transforms into a winter wonderland, with ice sculptures, snow festivals, and winter sports.（with伴随状语）
②This culture attracts tourists from around the world, who come to experience the unique charm of Harbin’s winter.（who引导的非限制性定语从句）
10．例文：
I watched the 2024 Paris Olympic Games this summer vacation. Here I’d like to share my thoughts about the games with you.
All the athletes and sports teams impressed me a lot. Our Chinese players achieved a total of 40 gold medals.
To tell you the truth, I like volleyball best. So what I admire most is our Chinese Women’s Volleyball Team. This newly-formed team faced the strong Turkey Team in the quarter-finals. Our players overcame difficulties and fought very bravely. But I was not surprised that they failed to reach the podium, due to the lack of strength.
Anyway, their fighting spirit has always inspired me to work hard. Never give up and keep fighting, you’ll make it one day!
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括4个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山，与大家分享观看比赛的想法，从而引出话题；
第二步，表达对巴黎奥运会中国代表团的总体评价；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的队伍情况，包括比赛结果等；
第四步，表达感受。
[亮点词汇］
① never give up 永不言弃
② to tell you the truth 说实话
[高分句型］
① But I was not surprised that they failed to reach the podium, due to the lack of strength. (宾语从句)
② So what I admire most is our Chinese Women’s Volleyball Team. (主语从句)
11．Dear World University Games Organizing Committee,
My name is Li Yang, a 16-year-old student. I’m excited to apply for the volunteer position. I love sports and helping others. As a responsible and patient person, I can communicate well with people. I speak both Chinese and English fluently, which will help me guide athletes and visitors. I can offer assistance with directions, translate information, and provide support during events. I believe my enthusiasm and language skills will be very helpful and make a positive difference in the success of the Games.
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes, Li Yang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，阐述自己的兴趣爱好、有责任心，能够做翻译等有关志愿者的工作；
第三步，书写结语，表达成为志愿者的愿望，期待对方回复。
[亮点词汇]
①be excited to激动的去做某事
②communicate with sb.与某人交流
③both...and...二者都
④look forward to期待、盼望
[高分句型]
①I speak both Chinese and English fluently, which will help me guide athletes and visitors.（定语从句）
②I believe my enthusiasm and language skills will be very helpful and make a positive difference in the success of the Games.（宾语从句）
12．例文
Figure skating started in the mid-19th century. Jackson Haines, an American, combined dancing and skating for the first time. He liked figure skating very much, but Americans did not accept it. So he moved to Vienna. Austria, and he got great success there.
About 50 years later, people in America changed their idea about figure skating. They would like to learn the sport. Soon figure skating was popular in America. Now more and more people like figure skating. Today, figure skating is in the Winter Olympic Games.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍花样滑冰的起源时间，起源地等背景信息；
第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，详细描述花样滑冰；
第三步，介绍花样滑冰在当今的发展，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①for the first time第一次
②more and more越来越多
[高分句型]
①He liked figure skating very much, but Americans did not accept it.（but表转折）
②They would like to learn the sport.（不定式作宾语）
13．例文
Dear Sam,
I’m writing to express my interest in volunteering for the 2024 Paris Olympic Games.
I’m Li Hua. I’m from China. I’m 15 years old. I study at Yucai Middle school. I’m good at English, especially spoken English, which will be useful to communicate with the people all over the world. I like sports. I know about the Olympic Games. I hope to take part in the Olympic Games one day. I am an outgoing girl and I am ready to help others. So I can get on well with others.
I’m sure that I’ll be a good volunteer. I hope you give me the chance. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，写一封自荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图（文章已给出）；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍一下个人信息，为什么想当志愿者以及你能为比赛做些什么。
第三步，书信结尾。表达你希望Sam给你这个机会，期待他的答复。
[亮点词汇]
①be from来自……
②be good at擅长
③ take part in参加
④be ready to help others乐于助人
⑤get on well with与……相处融洽，与……相处得好
[高分句型]
①I’m good at English, especially spoken English, which will be useful to communicate with the people all over the world.（定语从句）
② I’m sure that I’ll be a good volunteer.（宾语从句）
14．例文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
Harbin 2025 Asian Winter Games will be held in February, 2025. I’m happy to hear that our school is recruiting volunteers. I’m writing to you to apply for the volunteer work. I strongly hope to become one of the volunteers.
I’m a 15-year-old student from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m friendly and ready to help others in my daily life. What’s more, I’m so good at speaking English that I can communicate with foreigners fluently.
To be a volunteer, I can not only help others but also help myself. I believe I can get much knowledge and working skills from helping others. Besides, it can improve my English and it’s quite helpful for my future life. If I am accepted, I’ll try my best to do it well.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Gang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，注意书信书写格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己想成为志愿者的强烈愿望；
第二步，介绍自己的基本情况；
第三步，写出想成为志愿者的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①apply for申请
②be good at doing sth.擅长做某事
③try one’s best to do尽力做某事
[高分句型]
①What’s more, I’m so good at speaking English that I can communicate with foreigners fluently.（结果状语从句）
②If I am accepted, I’ll try my best to do it well.（条件状语从句）
15．例文
I want to be a volunteer in Asian Games Hangzhou 2022. It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you.
I am Li Hua, a student in No.1 Middle School. I’m a 13-year-old boy. My birthday is on 8th, February. Firstly, I’m good at English, especially spoken English, which will be useful to communicate with foreigners. Besides, I am an outgoing boy and I’m always ready to help others. Therefore, I can cooperate with others well. What’s more, I like sports and I’m always deeply moved by the spirit of good sportsmanship.That’s why I hope to take part in the Asian Games one day. I am eager to learn from great sports stars. Last but not the least, I want to know more about the cultures of the Asian Games.
I would be grateful if you give me the opportunity. I believe I can be an excellent volunteer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：本文为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中省略处需要补充相关内容，注意行为逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直入主题，表达出“我想成为志愿者”以及引出“自我推荐”这个话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从信息提示中“姓名、学校、年龄、生日、喜欢的学科、特长、兴趣爱好以及想成为志愿者的理由等”几个重点方面进行自我介绍，注意行为逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
第三步，书写结语。再次表达“我对成为志愿者的期望与信心”。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to help others乐于助人
②cooperate with与某人合作
③spirit精神
[高分句型]
①It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you. （it做形式主语）
②Firstly, I’m good at English, especially spoken English,which will be useful to communicate with foreigners（Which引导非限制性定语从句）
③I would be grateful if you give me the opportunity.（if 引导条件状语从句）
16．例文：
Dear classmates,
I’m very excited to hear that our school will carry out football into the campus. Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years.
Playing football has lots of advantages. First, both boys and girls can take part in it. Second, it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health.
I’m a football fan. Messi is my hero. He has a gift for playing football. My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi. I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.
Thank you for your attention.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍有关足球的常识；
第二步，具体介绍足球运动的好处；
第三步，介绍自己的足球偶像以及自己的梦想；
第四步，结束文章，感谢对方的聆听。（题目已给出）
[亮点词汇]
① carry out执行
② take part in参加
③ be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
① I’m very excited to hear that our school will carry out football into the campus.（that引导的宾语从句）
② playing football is good for our health.（动名词作主语）
17．例文
I am a good volunteer
My name is Li Hua. I am a kind middle school student. I am always ready to help others. I worked as a volunteer for 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games. My spoken English is so good that I could have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. I was glad to provide the best service for foreign athletes and visitors during Winter Olympic Games. I could lead the athletes to the different places and I could give out objects to them, too. Besides, I had a rich knowledge of Chinese history so I was not only a volunteer but also a carrier for our culture.
I’ve learned a lot from this experience. I’m proud of being a volunteer. And I’m proud of our motherland.
I’m lucky to have this chance to be a volunteer. I hope I can play a role in building a beautiful and strong country.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：以“I am a good volunteer”为题写一篇短文，介绍自己参加2022北京冬季奥林匹克运动会志愿者服务的表现和感受。注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：先承接短文开头。
第二步：直入主题，介绍自己的志愿者工作。
第三步：具体谈论自己从这次经历学到了什么以及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do sth.准备做某事
②be glad to do sth.高兴做某事
③lead sb. to引导某人
④give out分发，散发
⑤be proud of为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
①My spoken English is so good that I could have no difficulty communicating with foreigners.（so…that…引导的结果状语从句）
②Besides, I had a rich knowledge of Chinese history so I was not only a volunteer but also a carrier for our culture.（not only…but also…）
③I hope I can play a role in building a beautiful and strong country.（省略that的宾语从句）
18．例文
Dear Ms Chen,
My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old and I am a middle school student. Knowing that you are recruiting volunteers for the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games, I am writing to apply for the position.
First of all, I am good at English and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. Besides, I have other advantages. I am fond of sports. I was born in Hangzhou, so I am familiar with Hangzhou. What’s more, I do well in communication and I am ready to help others. I am willing to provide the best service for every athlete in the Asian Games. Therefore, I think I am suitable for serving the Games.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息以及想申请成为一名志愿者的想法；
第二步，介绍自己的优势；
第三步，希望对方能给予这次机会，并期待回信。
[亮点词汇]
①apply for申请
②be good at擅长
③communicate with与……沟通
④be fond of喜欢
⑤be born in出生于
⑥be familiar with熟悉
[高分句型]
①I think I am suitable for serving the Games（省略that的宾语从句）
②I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer（if引导条件状语从句）
19．例文
Dear Simon,
Thanks for your letter. I’m glad that you like Bing DwenDwen and Shuey RhonRhon, the official mascots of Olympic Winter Games Beijing 2022. I am also crazy about them, especially Bing DwenDwen. It’s a cartoon image of a panda wearing a spacesuit. It looks like a winter sports athlete from the future.
“Bing” means “ice” in Chinese, which is a symbol of winter sports. It also stands for purity and strength. “Dwen” suggests health. “Dwen Dwen” gives the image a more friendly feel. It means robust and lively. Moreover, it also represents children. Altogether, “Bing Dwen Dwen” shows the spirit of the Olympics, including a strong mind and a healthy body.
Bing DwenDwen which is a top selling product is one of the most popular mascots in the world.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示信息，介绍关于冰墩墩的相关内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍冰墩墩”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍冰墩墩的寓意；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be crazy about着迷于
②look like看起来像
③a symbol of……的象征
④stands for代表
[高分句型]
Bing DwenDwen which is a top selling product is one of the most popular mascots in the world.（which引导的定语从句）
20．范文
Hi, Chris, I want to express my most sincere appreciation to you. I totally agree with your opinion.
We hope to tell the world several meanings by the official motto of the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics. First, it is connected with the core values of the Olympics. It also shows China’s promise to overcome global challenges as a community with a shared future for mankind. Second, China is inviting the world to join hands. COVID-19 brings us more global challenges, so only by helping each other can we build a beautiful future.
In the end, I want to send my best wishes to the preparations for the Paris 2024 Olympic Games.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据内容提示，谈谈对北京冬奥会的主题口号的看法，并对巴黎2024年奥运会筹备工作表达祝愿。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文时态是一般现在时，主要采用第一和第三人称书写。写作时，首先向Chris表示感谢并认同他的看法；然后谈谈对口号的理解；最后对巴黎2024年奥运会筹备工作表达祝愿。在写作时，应该注意符合题意，可适当补充细节使文章连贯，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
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