【单元考点培优】Unit 7 Films 专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优牛津译林版

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优牛津译林版
Unit 7 Films专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是校英语俱乐部的成员之一，上周末你和朋友观看了电影《狮子王》。请你根据以下要点提示，将这部电影推荐给俱乐部其他成员。
Director: Jon Favreau
Reviews:
★Compared with the cartoon with the same name, it was not that satisfying.
★The cinema was full of 30-year-old “children” for the cartoon. The Lion King (1994) was once their childhood dream.
要求：
1.包含要点提示中所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.80词左右；
3.文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等信息。
Last weekend, I watched the movie The Lion King with friends. Now I’d like to recommend it to you.
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2．假如你是某英语写作俱乐部的成员李华，本周任务是请根据下图提示以“My Favorite Free Time Activity”为题写一篇短文。
要求：不少于80词，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favorite Free Time Activity
Everyone loves to do something for fun when he has free time, and so do I. What’s my favorite activity
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3．假如你是小明，你的美国笔友Helen给你发来邮件，询问你喜欢的电影。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你喜欢的一部中国电影或者外国电影，并简要介绍这部电影的内容以及你喜欢它的原因。
提示词语：
（1）favorite, about, character, interesting, meaningful
提示问题：
（2）What is your favorite movie
（3）What is the movie about
（4）Why is it your favorite
要求：（1）短文中需包括提示问题的所有信息，可适当发挥。
（2）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）书写工整，字迹清晰，词数80左右。
Dear Helen,
How is it going I’m glad to hear from you.
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4．假如你是2班班长李华，你班准备观看电影《1921》。外教Tom对中国历史感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：
1．邀请理由；
2．观影时间和地点；
3．交流观后感；
4．请回复。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假如你是红星中学八年级一班学生李华，你的英国笔友Chris写信询问你的电影爱好。请你用英语给Chris回信，谈谈你最喜欢的一部电影，电影的主要内容以及你喜欢它的原因。
提示词语：cartoon, educational, encourage, change, dream
提示问题：●What is your favorite movie
●What is the movie mainly about
●Why do you like it most
Dear Chris,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．2025年贺岁电影《哪吒2》热播，哪吒精神“若前方无路，我便踏出一条路 (If there is no path ahead, I will create one! )”极大鼓舞了很多人。假如你是李雷，观看完这部影片后，感触颇深，立志好好学习，健康生活，完善自我，请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的理想和打算。
What do you think of the movie Ne Zha 2
What can you learn from it
What’s your dream in the future
How are you going to do that
要求：
1. 词数不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，书写认真规范；
2. 短文应包括表格内容，不要逐字翻译，语句通顺，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。
My Dream
I watched the exciting movie Ne Zha 2. Among all the things in it, the line “If there is no path ahead, I will create one!” deeply touched me.
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7．2025年初，贺岁片《哪吒2》热播。哪吒精神“若前方无路，我便踏出一条路 (If there is no path ahead, I will create one.)”极大地鼓舞了许多人。假如你是大明，你的笔友Tom给你写了一封关于哪吒的email，请阅读这封email，并根据相关信息给他回信。
Dear Daming, The movie Nezha 2 is so popular around the world that I can’t even get a ticket for it. I really want to know about Nezha: what’s Nezha like Why does everyone love Nezha What have you learned from Nezha I’m looking forward to your email! Yours, Tom
提示词：two buns (两个发髻), bracelets (手镯), Wind Fire Wheels (风火轮), the Universe Ring (乾坤圈), Red Armillary Sash (混天绫), strong-willed (意志力强), naughty (淘气的), evil (邪恶), never give up (永不放弃), find a way out (找到出路)
注意：
1. 回信需包含相关要点，可适当发挥；
2. 邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数：80-100。邮件收尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Daming
8．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Steve喜欢中国的神话故事，也是一个卡通迷，请你根据以下信息要点，写一封英语邮件向他推荐其中一部动画电影。
Film Nezha Conquers The Dragon King (哪吒闹海) 1979 Lotus Lantern (宝莲灯) 1999
Hero Nezha Chen Xiang
Story born with great power fight against dragons protect his village find his mother under Mount Hua fight against his uncle save his mother
Lesson trust myself … depend on myself …
注意：1. 邮件需包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
3. 词数80左右；邮件的开头和结尾已提供，不计入总词数。
Dear Steve,
Now, I would like to recommend a Chinese cartoon film to you.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
9．古代花木兰替父从军的故事感动了很多人。假如你是李华，最近观看了根据这个故事改编的动作片《花木兰》。请根据以下提示，用英语在网上发帖子，向国外网友推荐这部电影。
1.内容简介；
2.推荐的原因：1）演员们表演出色；2）花木兰爱国爱家、坚强勇敢的精神值得学习；
3.建议大家周末观看这部影片。
要求：
1.不少于80词；包含所有内容，可适当发挥。
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：brave勇敢
Hi, I’m Li Hua from China. I would like to recommend (推荐) the movie Mulan to you.
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10．为响应国家“传承中华优秀传统文化”的号召，你决定以短视频的形式让更多的人了解并传承中国传统文化艺术形式，比如书法 (calligraphy)、京剧 (Peking Opera)、皮影戏 (shadow play)等，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文。
提示：(1) What kind of traditional art form will you decide to introduce
(2) Why do you want to introduce it
(3) How do you make your videos popular among people
注意：(1) 短文须包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
(2) 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
(3) 词数80个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
In my short videos, I decide to introduce
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11．假设你是李华，你的外国朋友 Peter 对中国文化很感兴趣，希望你能推荐一部中国电影给他，你决定推荐《哪吒2》(Ne ZhA: Demon Child Conquers the Sea)。请根据以下提示，用英语写一封电子邮件，向你的朋友介绍这部电影，说明你的推荐理由，以及你可以从这部电影中学到什么。词数80左右。
内容要点：
What is the movie about 1.character: Ne Zha 2. story: try one’s best; protect friends and family
Why do you I recommend (推荐) it 1. beautiful scenes and funny moments 2. traditional culture 3. modern technology
What can you learn from it Ne Zha’s spirits: never give up
注意事项：
(1)必须包含以上要点，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
(3)文中不得出现考生自己的真实姓名和校名；
Dear Peter,
I’d like to recommend a Chinese movie called “Ne Zha: Demon Child Conquers the Sea” to you.
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I hope you will be interested in it! If you have any question, feel free to ask. I’d love to hear more about your thoughts on the movie.
Yours,
Li Hua
12．电影《哪吒之魔童闹海》上映以后，一举打破多项影史记录，在国外也非常火爆。假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Cindy想了解中国动漫，请你根据以下信息给她写一封邮件，介绍哪吒、木兰或其他一个卡通形象及理由。
Name: Ne Zha Appearance: big eyes, round face, magical wheels (风火轮) Reasons: naughty (淘气的), fight against bad people, protect... Name: Mulan Appearance: tall, long face, dress up... Reasons: smart, fight in the army, protect...
注意：（1）邮件必须包括表格中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数100词左右，邮件中已给的句子不计入总词数。
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you like Chinese cartoons. Now let me tell you something about
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Yours,
Li Hua
13．电影，是光影的魔术，有的电影让人轻松快乐，有的电影给人内心触动，有的电影带领我们走过大千世界。学校举办中外电影周活动，请你以“My favourite movie”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一部你喜欢的电影。
1. 要点：
1）你喜欢的电影是什么；
2）这部电影讲述了什么；
3）你喜欢它的原因是什么。
2. 要求：
1）电影名可用拼音表述；
2）词数100左右；
3）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名。
My favourite movie
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14．假设你是李华，请你在周一的晨会上，向你校的英国交换生介绍苏州昆曲。
要点：
1. 昆曲是一种古老而动人的中国戏剧。它来自苏州，一座拥有许多美丽园林和悠久历史的城市。
2. 昆曲演员穿着鲜艳的衣服，唱歌、跳舞并讲述中国古代的故事。昆曲的音乐很特别，需要花费数小时来练习。
3. 昆曲是中国传统艺术的重要组成部分。许多昆曲大师已经研究昆曲很多年。
4. 苏州的很多孩子也喜欢观看和学习昆曲。他们仔细观察演员和服装，感受昆曲的美丽。昆曲本身就是一件艺术品，是了解中国传统和表达美好愿望的一种有趣方式。
Have you heard about Kunqu Opera
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15．《哪吒2》2025年春节期间上映，迄今全球总票房 (含预售) 突破155亿。该片打破了迪士尼、环球对动画榜的垄断。
要点如下：
(1) 寒假期间，你和爸爸妈妈一起去电影院看了《哪吒2》；
(2) 哪吒有明亮的红色的头发，穿着红色的衣服，他很勇敢，但有时很淘气；
(3) 他和好朋友敖丙相互帮助，一起抗争，他们教会我们坚强与善良；
(4) 这部电影受到各个年龄段人们的喜爱。迄今为止，3亿多人已经看过它；
(5) 你认为，中国电影的未来……
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：《哪吒2》 Ne Zha 2
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16．看电影已成为一项非常受欢迎的娱乐方式。2024年春节你看了哪些类型的电影呢？你班对你们喜欢的电影类型及其原因开展了一次问卷调查。请你根据下面图表中的调查结果，写一篇调查报告，并谈谈你喜欢什么类型的电影，可简单举例，并说明原因。
Favorite movies Reasons
Most boys science fiction movies, action movies exciting
Most girls dramas, comedies relaxing
You ... ...
要求：
1.短文必须包括所有要点，可适当补充；
2.80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Our class has made a survey on what kinds of movies teenagers like and the reasons why they like them.
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17．假设你是李辉，你的美国笔友Tom最近刚刚观看一部名为《哪吒2》的中国电影，他写信给你，想和你交流观后感。请你结合下列要点给他回信。
（1）电影改编于中国神话故事；
（2）哪吒聪明、勇敢、有担当、不放弃；
（3）动画制作精美。
参考词汇：myth（n.神话）；responsibility（n.责任）；animation（n.动画）
注意：
（1）邮件须包含以上要点, 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（2）文中不得出现考生自己的真实姓名和校名；
（3）词数80～100（邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tom,
I’m so glad you watched “Nezha Ⅱ” and enjoyed it!
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I’m happy you’re interested in it! If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I’d love to hear more about your thoughts on the movie.
Yours,
Li Hui
18．电影《哪吒 2》 (Ne Zha 2) 讲述了哪吒善良勇敢的故事。假定你是李辉，你想邀请你班英国交换生 Tom 一起去看《哪吒 2》。请你用英文给他发一封电子邮件。
内容包括：
(1) 看这部电影的原因；
(2) 看电影的具体安排；
(3) 希望得到答复。
注意：
(1) 词数为80-100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Tom,
I have learnt that you are interested in films.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
19．假设你叫李华，学校将在下周五举办一场主题为“我最喜欢的电影”的英语角活动，请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇演讲稿，分享你最喜欢的一部电影。
要点：
1. 喜欢的电影类型及原因；
2. 介绍最喜欢的一部电影及其主要内容；
3. 看电影的好处。
注意：1. 可在要点提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名；
3. 语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Favorite Movie
Dear friends, what kind of movies do you like
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20．根据要求，完成写作。
音乐、电影、绘画、摄影，在众多的艺术形式中，电影广受人们的喜爱。假如你最喜欢的艺术形式是英语电影，请根据以下提示写一篇短文。
内容提示：1. 艺术形式：英语电影；
2. 喜欢的理由：学到英语单词，训练听说技能；有教育意义；认识一些著名的演员；……（自拟）；
3. 存在问题：有作业要做，没时间看电影；
4. 建议大家每周至少看一次电影来放松一下。
要求：1. 必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 词数 90 左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I like films best, especially English films. I can learn a lot from them.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．范文：
Last weekend, I watched the movie The Lion King with friends. Now I’d like to recommend it to you.
The movie was directed by Jon Favreau. It tells the touching story of a young lion named Simba growing up and becoming king.
Some reviews say that compared with the 1994 cartoon, this film is not that satisfying. However, when we watched it, the cinema was full of 30-year-old “children” who loved the cartoon. The Lion King was once their childhood dream, and now it brings back sweet memories.
I think this movie is worth watching. It not only has beautiful scenes but also teaches us about responsibility.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据要点提示完成写作，注意包含所有信息并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出推荐主题；
第二步，介绍电影基本信息；
第三步，描述影评和观影现象；
第四步，表达个人推荐理由。
[亮点词汇]
①directed by由……执导
②touching story感人的故事
③bring back唤回
④sweet memories甜蜜的回忆
⑤be worth watching值得观看
[高分句型]
①Some reviews say that compared with the 1994 cartoon, this film is not that satisfying. (宾语从句中含过去分词作状语)
②...the cinema was full of 30-year-old “children” who loved the cartoon. (who引导定语从句)
2．例文：
My Favorite Free Time Activity
Everyone loves to do something for fun when he has free time, and so do I. What’s my favorite activity It’s watching movies! I usually go to the cinema once or twice a week. My favorite cinema is Sunshine Cinema because it has the best sound, the biggest screen, and the most comfortable seats. Among all the movie characters, I like Pleasant Goat best. He is very clever and always brave enough to face dangers. His stories make me laugh and teach me how to be brave. Watching movies is a great way for me to relax and enjoy myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，介绍自己最喜欢的业余活动；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括最喜欢的活动、频率、去的电影院及原因、最喜欢的电影角色及原因，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“Everyone loves to do something for fun when he has free time, and so do I. What’s my favorite activity ”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“频率、去哪个电影院及原因、最喜欢哪个电影角色及原因”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达“看电影是放松和享受的好方式”的总结。
[亮点词汇]
①favorite 最喜欢的
②once or twice 一两次
③among 在……之中
④brave enough to do 足够勇敢去做某事
⑤make sb do 使某人做某事
[高分句型]
①My favorite cinema is Sunshine Cinema because it has the best sound, the biggest screen, and the most comfortable seats.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②He is very clever and always brave enough to face dangers.（and连接的并列句）
3．例文
Dear Helen,
How is it going I’m glad to hear from you. My favorite movie is “My People, My Country”.
It is a Chinese movie made up of seven stories. Each story is about ordinary people and their connections with important historical moments in China. The characters are very real and touching.
I like it because it’s both interesting and meaningful. It makes me feel proud of my country. I think you will love it if you watch it.
Yours,
Xiao Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章围绕“喜欢的电影”展开，需介绍喜欢的一部电影，包括电影内容和喜欢的原因，需涵盖提示问题，运用提示词语，符合书信格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头问候并点明主题，说明自己最喜欢的电影名称；
第二步：介绍电影的内容，包括主题、主要角色等；
第三步：阐述喜欢这部电影的原因，总结对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
① made up of由……组成
② ordinary普通的
③ historical moments历史时刻
[高分句型]
① I think you will love it if you watch it. (if引导的条件状语从句)
4．例文
Dear Tom,
How is everything going I am writing to invite you to see the film “1921”, which is about Chinese history. The film will be shown at Sunshine Cinema this Saturday.
For one thing, the beautiful language in this movie may contribute to your study of Chinese. For another thing, the cultural elements in the scene will help you know more about Chinese history.
Would you like to see this movie Afterwards, we’d love to hear your thoughts and share our reflections. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括邀请对方看电影、电影的内容和上映时间、看电影的好处以及询问对方意见等，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候对方并表明写信目的，即邀请对方看电影；
第二步，具体介绍电影的内容和上映时间，以及看电影的好处；
第三步，询问对方是否愿意观看，并期待对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①contribute to有助于，对……做出贡献
②know more about了解更多关于……
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
I am writing to invite you to see the film “1921”, which is about Chinese history.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．例文
Dear Chris,
How is everything going My favorite movie is Zootopia, a fantastic cartoon. It’s mainly about a brave rabbit named Judy who becomes a police officer in a city full of animals. She works with a fox to solve a mystery and proves that anyone can make a change if they follow their dreams. I like it most because it’s very educational. The movie teaches me that we shouldn’t judge others by their looks. It also encourages me to never give up when facing difficulties. Judy’s story shows that hard work and kindness can help us achieve big things!
What about your favorite movie Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最喜欢的一部电影；
第二步，介绍你喜欢它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①full of充满
②educational有教育意义的
③encourages me to鼓励我去
[高分句型]
①It’s mainly about a brave rabbit named Judy who becomes a police officer in a city full of animals.（定语从句）
②She works with a fox to solve a mystery and proves that anyone can make a change if they follow their dream.（宾语从句，条件状语从句）
6．例文
My Dream
I watched the exciting movie Ne Zha 2. Among all the things in it, the line “If there is no path ahead, I will create one!” deeply touched me. I like it very much because in the movie when Ne Zha faces difficulties, he always tries his best. He tries to save his parents even if they disagree. From the movie, I can learn that we should try our best to face any difficulties.
As for me, I want to be a doctor in the future. When I become a doctor, I will try my best to help the sick people.
To make my dream come true, I’m going to make three resolutions. Firstly, I’m going to study hard to get good grades so that I can go to a medical university. Secondly, I’m going to improve myself. For example, I will read more books on medicine in my free time to learn more about medicine. Finally, I’m going to play sports to keep healthy. It’s a good way to start an exercise program and eat less fast food.
I hope my dream can come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章应该包括四个方面的提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由电影《哪吒 2》中的台词及哪吒面对困难的态度，引出应尽力面对挑战的感悟；
第二步，表明自己未来想成为医生，帮助病人的梦想；
第三步，列出实现医生梦想的三个计划——努力学习、提升医学知识、保持健康；
第四步，表达对梦想成真的期盼。
[亮点词汇]
①come true 实现
②in one’s free time 在某人空闲时间
[高分句型]
①He tries to save his parents even if they disagree. (even if引导的让步状语从句)
②When I become a doctor, I will try my best to help the sick people. (when引导的时间状语从句)
7．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad you’re interested in Nezha.
Nezha has two buns, and he wears bracelets, Wind Fire Wheels, the Universe Ring, and Red Armillary Sash. He is naughty but strong-willed. People love Nezha because he never fears evil. No matter how hard the situation is, he tries to find a way out and never gives up. His spirit, which is embodied in the saying “If there is no path ahead, I will create one”, encourages us a lot.
From Nezha, I’ve learned that we should be brave to face difficulties and keep fighting.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Daming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一封电子邮件；
②时态：本文用一般现在时；
③提示：回复Tom的来信，回答他关于哪吒的问题，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己很开心对方对哪吒感兴趣，引出下文；
第二步，介绍哪吒的外形和性格，阐述人们喜欢哪吒的原因，注意用词准确，行文流畅；
第三步，分享自己从哪吒身上学到的东西，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第四步，表达期待对方回信。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in… 对……有兴趣
②no matter 不论
③be brave to do sth. 勇敢做某事
[高分句型]
①People love Nezha because he never fears evil.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②No matter how hard the situation is, he tries to find a way out and never gives up.（No matter how引导的让步状语从句）
8．例文A
Dear Steve,
Now, I would like to recommend a Chinese cartoon film to you. It’s called Nezha Conquers The Dragon King 1979, and it has been popular for over forty-five years. The story is about a boy named Nezha, born with great power. He fights against bad dragons to protect the people in his village.
The movie is exciting and inspiring. Nezha has to face many problems, but he never gives up. The most important lesson from the film is to trust yourself, even when others don’t.
I think you’ll love it because of its beautiful pictures and touching story.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
例文B
Dear Steve,
Now, I would like to recommend a Chinese cartoon film to you. The film Lotus Lantern came out in 1999. The main character is a boy named Chen Xiang. His mother is taken away by his uncle under Mount Hua, so he starts a dangerous journey to save his mother.
Chen Xiang faces many difficulties, but he never depends on others. He learns to be brave and strong on his own. The movie teaches us to depend on ourselves when facing problems, which is very meaningful.
I believe you’ll enjoy this movie because of its touching story and beautiful music.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，按题目要求选择要推荐的电影。
第二步，根据提示内容描述电影的英雄角色，故事情节及吸取的经验。
[亮点词汇]
①born with 与生俱来
②give up 放弃
③depends on 依赖
[高分句型]
①The story is about a boy named Nezha, born with great power.（动词过去分词作定语）
②The movie teaches us to depend on ourselves when facing problems, which is very meaningful.（which引导的定语从句）
9．例文
Hi, I’m Li Hua from China. I would like to recommend (推荐) the movie Mulan to you.
Mulan is an exciting action movie. It comes from an old Chinese story. The movie is about a village girl, Mulan. She dresses up like a boy and takes her father’s place to fight in the army.
I think the actress plays Mulan’s role well. The other actors are also fantastic and do a good job in the movie. They bring the characters to life.
I like Mulan very much. Her love for her family and country is moving. As a brave girl, she never gives up when she is faced with difficulty.
If you plan to watch a movie this weekend and you want to see something enjoyable, choose Mulan.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主体使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍剧情；
第二步，给出自己的推荐原因；
第三步，总结建议。
[亮点词汇]
① dress up as 装扮成
② take one’s place 代替某人
③ bring…to life 生动呈现
④ be faced with 面对
[高分句型]
If you plan to watch a movie this weekend and you want to see something enjoyable, choose Mulan.（条件状语从句）
10．One possible version:
In my short videos, I decide to introduce Peking Opera. It’s a special art form that includes singing, dancing, and acting. It also shows Chinese history and values. Many young people know little about it nowadays, so I hope to bring this amazing art back to life.
To make the videos popular, I’ll start with some short, exciting parts of famous performances. I’ll also explain the colorful face paintings and beautiful dressing in simple words. By using funny words and sharing them on social media, I believe more young people will become interested in Peking Opera.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“在短视频里，我决定介绍京剧”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——介绍京剧的原因、如何使视频受欢迎等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②start with开始
③become interested in在某方面感兴趣
[高分句型]
①To make the videos popular, I’ll start with some short, exciting parts of famous performances. (动词不定式表目的）
②By using funny words and sharing them on social media, I believe more young people will become interested in Peking Opera. (by表方式，宾语从句)
11．例文：
Dear Peter,
I’d like to recommend a Chinese movie called “Ne Zha: Demon Child Conquers the Sea” to you.
The movie is about Ne Zha, who tries his best to protect his friends and family. It has beautiful scenes and funny moments. Also, it shows traditional Chinese culture with modern technology.
From it, we can learn Ne Zha’s spirit of never giving up. No matter how hard things are, we should keep fighting.
I hope you will be interested in it! If you have any question, feel free to ask. I’d love to hear more about your thoughts on the movie.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：属于应用文里的电子邮件，用于向外国朋友推荐中国电影。
②时态：以一般现在时为主，介绍电影内容、推荐理由、学习收获等客观信息。
③提示：要涵盖电影角色、故事内容，推荐的多方面理由（场景、文化、技术），以及从电影中学到的精神，不能遗漏要点，可适当拓展细节让内容更丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图：开头已给出，直接点明要推荐《哪吒之魔童闹海》这部电影。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容先介绍电影内容、说明推荐理由、讲述从电影中学到的东西。
第三步，书写结语：结尾已给出，表达希望对方感兴趣、欢迎提问并想了解对方看法的意愿。
[亮点词汇]
①recommend推荐
②protect保护
③traditional culture传统文化
④modern technology现代技术
⑤never giving up永不放弃
[高分句型]
①The movie is about Ne Zha, who tries his best to protect his friends and family. (who引导的非限制性定语从句)
②No matter how hard things are, we should keep fighting. (“no matter+疑问词”引导的让步状语从句)
12．范文：
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you like Chinese cartoons. Now let me tell you something about Ne Zha.
Ne Zha is a cute boy with a round face and two big eyes. The coolest thing about Ne Zha is that he has a pair of magical wheels, so he can move very fast.
Ne Zha is sometimes naughty and makes his parents angry. I still like him because I think he is just like us. Another reason I like him is that he is really brave. He is always ready to fight against bad people and tries his best to protect his family and friends. I am often deeply moved by his spirits.
What about your favorite cartoon characters Please write soon.
Yours,
Li Hua (105 words)
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you like Chinese cartoons. Now let me tell you something about Mulan.
Mulan is a beautiful girl who is tall and has a long face. Mulan takes her father’s place to fight in the army. The coolest thing is that she dresses up as a boy in the army for over ten years and nobody knows that Mulan is actually a girl.
The main reason I like Mulan is that she is really smart and brave. She is never afraid when she fights against the bad people. She just tries her best to protect her country and her people. Mulan is really a hero in my heart.
What about your favorite cartoon characters Please write soon.
Yours,
Li Hua (104 words)
【详解】例文1为例作解析：
《关于哪吒的信件范文解析》
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件。
② 时态：全文采用 “一般现在时”。
③ 提示：文章紧扣交流需求，先回应朋友对中国卡通的喜爱，接着按顺序介绍哪吒外貌、性格特点和优秀品质，逻辑连贯，语言自然流畅，无语法错误，且通过提问引导朋友回信，增强互动性。
[写作步骤落实]
第一步：引入主题。 以回应朋友对中国卡通的喜爱为切入点，自然引出要介绍的卡通人物哪吒，明确写作主题。
第二步：介绍人物。
第三步：总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a pair of一双
②be always ready to时刻准备着
③try one’s best to尽某人最大的努力去
[高分句型]
①The coolest thing about Ne Zha is that he has a pair of magical wheels, so he can move very fast.” （表语从句）
②I still like him because I think he is just like us.（because引导的原因状语从句）
13．例文
My favourite movie I like watching movies very much. My favourite movie is Zootopia. It is such a popular cartoon and it has won the hearts of many people, including me. The movie is about a rabbit that joins the police force and solves a difficult case with a fox. I like the movie because it teaches me to stick to my dream and then try to achieve it. “If you don’t try anything new, you’ll never fail.” These words from the movie influenced me a lot. What’s more, the theme song of the movie Try Everything is a great song. I really like listening to it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢的电影是什么；
第二步，介绍电影的内容；
第三步，介绍自己喜欢它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①win the hearts赢得人心
②police force警察机构
③stick to坚持
[高分句型]
The movie is about a rabbit that joins the police force and solves a difficult case with a fox.(that引导定语从句)
14．例文
Have you heard about Kunqu Opera
Kunqu Opera is an old and a pretty Chinese play. It comes from Suzhou, a city with many beautiful gardens and a very long history.
Kunqu Opera actors wear bright clothes. They sing, dance, and tell stories about ancient China. The music is special and takes hours to practise. Kunqu Opera is an important part of traditional Chinese art. There are great masters of Kunqu Opera who have studied it for many years.
Many kids in Suzhou also like to watch and learn about it. They have a close look at the actors and costumes, and feel the beauty of it. Kunqu Opera itself is a work of art, and it’s an interesting way to learn about China’s traditions and express wishes for good things to happen.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据要点提示写作，适当使用连接词、重要句型等，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍昆曲的发源地及历史；
第二步，介绍昆曲的表演形式和地位；
第三步，介绍昆曲的受欢迎度。
[亮点词汇]
①comes from来自
②learn about学习，了解
③have a close look at仔细看
[高分句型]
There are great masters of Kunqu Opera who have studied it for many years. (定语从句)
15．例文
During the winter vacation, I watched Ne Zha 2 with my parents, and it left a deep impression on me.
Ne Zha, who has bright red hair and wears red clothes, is a brave yet occasionally naughty hero. What impressed me most was his friendship with Ao Bing. Although they face countless challenges, they help each other and fight side by side, which teaches us to be strong and kind.
The film has won the hearts of people of all ages. So far, more than 300 million people have watched it, making it a huge success.
I believe that the future of Chinese films is bright because they combine traditional culture with modern technology, just like Ne Zha 2 does so that people around the world will know more good Chinese stories.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：根据写作要点完成写作，注意不要遗漏，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己看了《哪吒2》以引出下文；
第二步，描述哪吒的外貌、性格、与敖丙的友谊和带来的启示；
第三步，总结这部电影的成就；
第四步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①leave a deep impression on sb 给某人留下深刻印象
②fight side by side 并肩战斗
③teach sb to do 教会某人做某事
④win the hearts of sb 赢得某人的心
[高分句型]
①Ne Zha, who has bright red hair and wears red clothes, is a brave yet occasionally naughty hero. (who引导非限制性定语从句)
②What impressed me most was his friendship with Ao Bing. (what引导主语从句)
③Although they face countless challenges, they help each other and fight side by side, which teaches us to be strong and kind. (although引导让步状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句)
16．例文：
Our class has made a survey on what kinds of movies teenagers like and the reasons why they like them.
Most boys like science fiction movies and action movies. Because they think they are very exciting and they can also experience experiences that are not in life. They say they go to the cinema when the new action movie is on. Most girls like dramas and comedies. Because they feel very relaxed. Besides, they held the idea that they can make them laugh. I like watching documentary films, because I can learn a lot of knowledge from them. I can also broaden my horizons.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍大多数男孩喜欢的电影类型以及原因；
第二步，介绍大多数女孩喜欢的电影类型以及原因；
第三步，最后说说你喜欢什么电影以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①Besides此外
②make sb. do sth.使某人做某事
③broaden my horizons开阔我的视野
[高分句型]
①They say they go to the cinema when the new action movie is on. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I like watching documentary films, because I can learn a lot of knowledge from them. (because引导的原因状语从句)
17．Dear Tom,
I’m so glad you watched “Nezha Ⅱ”and enjoyed it! The movie is based on an ancient Chinese myth about a young hero named Nezha. Nezha is not only clever and brave but also has a strong sense of responsibility in the story. He faces many challenges. And he never gives up, which makes him a great role model. The animation is also amazing, with bright colors, smooth movements, and exciting action scenes. It’s a perfect mix of traditional culture and modern technology. I think the movie is a great way to learn about Chinese culture and values.
I’m happy you’re interested in it! If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I’d love to hear more about your thoughts on the movie.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕这些要点展开，适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先说明Tom对电影感兴趣，然后引出交流观后感的意图；
第二步，阐述看这部电影的原因，可以强调哪吒聪明、勇敢、有担当、不放弃的品质以及电影的视觉效果并向笔友普及中国传统文化；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望Tom能够 和自己交流观后感尽快回复的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be based on 以……为基础
②give up 放弃
③a strong sense of ……的感觉
[高分句型]
①Nezha is not only clever and brave but also has a strong sense of responsibility in the story. ( not only...but also...句型)
②I think the movie is a great way to learn about Chinese culture and values. (I think+省略that的宾语从句）
18．例文
Dear Tom,
I have learnt that you are interested in films. So I’d like to invite you to see a great Chinese film, Ne Zha 2, with me. This film tells the story of a kind and brave kid Ne Zha. It is so interesting that it is popular with people of all ages in China. I think you will really enjoy it!
How about this Friday We won’t have any lessons that afternoon. We can meet at the school gate at 1: 30 p. m. , after lunch at school. The film starts at 2: 10 p. m. , and since the cinema is nearby, we can walk there together.
I’m looking forward to your reply. If you agree, I’ll buy the tickets online. I’m sure we’ll have a great time watching the film!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕这些要点展开，适当添加细节，并突出邀请的诚意。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先确认Tom对电影的兴趣，然后引出邀请他一同观看《哪吒 2》的意图；
第二步，阐述看这部电影的原因，可以强调哪吒的勇敢品质、电影的视觉效果以及了解中国文化的机会；介绍看电影的具体安排，包括时间、地点、电影院的简要情况等；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望Tom能够接受邀请并尽快回复的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事
②be popular with受……欢迎
③look forward to盼望，期待
[高分句型]
①It is so interesting that it is popular with people of all ages in China. (so...that...句型)
②I’m sure we’ll have a great time watching the film! (宾语从句)
19．例文
My Favorite Movie
Dear friends, what kind of movies do you like I’m really into science fiction movies because they can take me to a world full of imagination and advanced technology.
My favorite one is “Interstellar”. In this movie, the Earth is facing a serious environmental crisis. A group of astronauts are sent on a mission to find a new habitable planet for humanity. They travel through a wormhole and experience various adventures in different galaxies. The special effects are extremely stunning, making the space scenes look so real.
Watching movies is a great way to relax. It broadens our horizons and enriches our knowledge. We can also learn different cultures and values from them. That’s why I love movies so much.
Thank you!
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿。
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开头以提问引出自己对电影类型的喜好，为下文介绍最喜欢的电影做铺垫。
第二步，具体阐述。先说明喜欢科幻电影的原因，再详细介绍《星际穿越》的故事背景、主要情节和特效，让听众了解电影内容，随后分析看电影的好处，阐述各好处的具体表现及意义。
第三步，书写结语。
［亮点词汇］
①science fiction movies 科幻电影
②imagination 想象力
③advanced technology 先进技术
④Interstellar《星际穿越》
⑤environmental crisis 环境危机
⑥astronaut 宇航员
⑦habitable planet 可居住星球
⑧wormhole 虫洞
⑨galaxy 星系
⑩stunning 令人惊叹的
［高分句型］
I’m really into science fiction movies because they can take me to a world full of imagination and advanced technology.（because引导原因状语从句）
20．例文
I like films best, especially English films. I can learn a lot from them.
Firstly, I can learn many English words and practice listening and speaking through watching English films. Secondly, most of the English films are educational. Some of them make you more confident. Thirdly, I can know some famous actors, such as Audrey Hepburn. She was considered by many people as a superstar, not only for her acting in the films but also for her efforts in charity work. Finally, I also can learn about the culture of England and America.
However, there is a problem. I have no time to watch films because of too much homework now. But I believe it’s important to take a break and relax. So I suggest that everyone should watch a movie once a week to relax.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式——英语电影，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍喜欢英语电影的理由；
第二步，介绍存在的问题以及建议。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②be considered as被认为是
③because of因为
[高分句型]
①Firstly, I can learn many English words and practice listening and speaking through watching English films. (动名词作宾语)
②So I suggest that everyone should watch a movie once a week to relax. (that引导的宾语从句)
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