【单元考点培优】Unit 6 How do you feel？考点24：书面表达-2025-2026学年人教PEP版六年级英语上册核心考点培优精练 (含答案解析)

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一、书面表达
1．写一写。
Oliver总是容易生气但不知道如何调节自己的情绪，为此他感到非常苦恼，请你根据下列提示给他一些建议吧。（首段已给出，不计入总词数）
（1）. 深呼吸并数到十；（2）. 与家人或者好朋友交谈；（3）. 听听音乐。
参考词汇：suggestions 建议，calm down平静下来，feel better感觉好一些
要求：（1）. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写工整、规范。
（2）. 不能出现自己的真实姓名及学校名称；不少于50个单词。
Oliver, don’t worry. I have some suggestions for you. _______________________________
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2．书面表达。
每个人都有情绪波动的时候。当我们生病时，我们的心理会特别脆弱，这时应该怎么办呢？联系自己生病时的感受，写一篇短文。
要求:
（1）. 书写规范，语句通顺，条理清楚；
（2）. 不少于5句话。
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3．同学们，在我们的生活中，生病是难免的。假如你今天感冒了，感觉不舒服，你的感受是怎样的呢？请以“A bad cold”为题写一篇作文，描述你感冒时的感受，50个词左右。
A bad cold
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4．回想一下你做过什么难忘的事情，这些事情让你感受如何。可以挑选其中的一两件事叙述一下，并描述一下自己当时的感受。
要求：（1）. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范；
（2）. 不少于30个单词。
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5．假如你是图片中的孩子张梅，请根据图片和文字提示写一篇50词左右的短文，可以适当发挥。
ill, worried see a doctor feel well, happy
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6．在生活中，生病是难免的。假如你今天感冒了，感觉不舒服，你的感受是怎样呢 请以“A bad cold”为题写一篇作文来描述感冒时的感受，50个词左右。
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7．你生过病吗？生病时你是怎么做的？你的感觉如何？请你写一篇作文描述一次你生病的经历。
要求不少于五句话。
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8．看图片，根据提示写一篇小作文。
提示：Clara生病了，今天没有去上学。她很难过。她必须去看医生，需要多喝水，多穿厚衣服，多运动，争取早日康复去上学。
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9．请从下面两幅图中选择一幅图进行描写。
要求：（1）. 认真观察图片，展开想象，写出通顺的语篇。可以给图中人物命名，有总起句，有细节描写。
（2）. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。
（3）. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。

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10．书面表达。
你的好朋友Cathy生病了，请你简要介绍她的病情，并根据病历卡提示适当地给出建议。
要求：（1）.包含图表中的要点，也可适当展开想象，至少给出3点建议；（2）.书写规范，语句通顺，条理清晰；3.不少于50个词。
Medical Record(病历卡)Name: Cathy Age: 11 Sex: girl condition: A headache A high fever (病情) advice： …(建议) forbiddance：…(禁止)
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11．书面表达。
Anne 今天生病了，不能去学校，在家卧床休息。假设你是她的好朋友Lingling，请写一封信告诉李老师她生病的事。(首句已经给出，不计入总词数。)
要求：(1) 条理清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、标点正确、书写规范；(2) 不得少于20词；(3) 可自由发挥，也可选用词汇库里的提示词。
Word Bank: not well, feel, cold, cough, bad, fever, doctor, need, take some medicine, have, rest.
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12．病毒肆虐，你有好的建议帮大家对抗病毒吗？请以“Don’t be worried!”为题，给大家提出一些建议吧!。要求：条理清楚，意思连贯，标点正确，书写规范，不少于5句话，已给出的前两句不包含在内。
Words bank: see a doctor, eat healthy/good/fresh food, wash hands, open the window, on foot, sad, worried, angry ……
71. Don’t be worried!
If you feel ill, don’t be worried! Let me give you some advice.
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13．写话练习。请写一段话介绍苏姗的病情及你的建议(应该……，不应该……)
情景：苏姗今天很难过，因为她下午吃太多冰淇淋，得了胃痛(stomachache)。
要求：表达合情合理；条理清晰；语言正确；书写规范。不少于5句。
Susan is very sad today.
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I hope she will get better soon.
14．书面表达。
Helen生病了，请根据Helen的病历卡，写出Helen的病情，并结合自己的想法给出一些适当的建议，不少于5句话。
Medical Record(病历卡)
Name Helen Age 12
Disease(症状) feel cold have a headache
Cause(原因) have a cold
Suggestion(建议) drink warm water take some medicine not run...
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15．书面表达。
Tim生病了，请你根据他的病历卡，描述他的病情并给出一些合理的建议。
要求：（1）. 所写内容可用提示上的要点，也可适当展开，至少给出3点建议；
（2）. 语句通顺，条理清晰，书写规范；
（3）. 不少于50词。
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16．写作。
你的好朋友 Lucy生病了，请你简要介绍她的病情，并根据思维导图的提示适当地给出建议。
要求：（1）. 必须介绍病情，并根据提示给出建议，至少给出4点建议；
（2）. 书写规范，语句通顺，条理清晰；
（3）. 不少于5句话。
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参考答案及试题解析
1．范文：
Oliver, don’t worry. I have some suggestions for you.
First, you should take a deep breath and count to ten. It can help you calm down. Then, you should try to talk to your family or your good friends. After that, I think you will feel better. Next, you can listen to music. Beautiful music can make you calm and happy.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求给Oliver一些建议，让他学会调节自己的情绪。可以从几方面建议：1. 深呼吸并数到十；2. 与家人或者好朋友交谈；3. 听听音乐。注意文章为一般现在时态并且满足字数要求。
2.参考词汇和句型
参考单词：suggestions 建议，take a deep breath深呼吸，count数，talk谈话，listen to music听音乐，calm down平静下来，feel better感觉好一些，happy开心的
参考句型：you should...；It can help you...； I think you will...；you can...；
2．范文：
I have a fever today. I am not feeling well. I can’t go to school. I should see a doctor. My mum takes me to the hospital. The doctor gives me some medicine. And he tells me to wear warm clothes and do more exercise. I hope I can be better soon. I want to go to school earlier.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称联系自己生病时的感受，写一篇短文。然后再阐述感受，应该做什么。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：have a fever发烧，see a doctor看医生，hospital医院，medicine药，wear warm clothes穿暖和的衣服，do more exercise多做锻炼
参考句型：I …； My mum …；The doctor …； And he …；I hope I can ...
3．参考例文：
A bad cold
I don’t feel well today. I think I have a bad cold. I am sad and my mother is worried about me. She takes me to see a doctor. The doctor asks me to wear warm clothes and take some medicine. I’m fine now. My mother doesn’t need to worry about me. I think I should do more exercise to keep healthy.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“A bad cold”为题写一篇作文，描述自己感冒时的感受。然后再阐述感冒时做了什么，和谁一起。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：sad伤心的，be worried about担心，see a doctor看医生，wear warm clothes穿暖和的衣服，take some medicine吃些药，do more exercise多做锻炼，healthy健康的
参考句型：I don’t feel …；I think I …； I am …； She takes me to …；The doctor asks me to ...；My mother doesn’t need to ...；
4．范文：
Last Sunday was a sunny day. When I got up in the morning, I decided to visit my grandparents. I got there by bus at noon. They were happy to see me, and I was also very excited. In the afternoon, my farther asked me to help him water the flowers, and I was glad to see the flowers smiling in the wind.
In a word, what an unforgettable day!
【详解】1. 题目解读：该题要求用第一人称写一写自己做过的难忘的事情，自己当时的感受如何。注意时态以一般过去时为主，要求条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范，不少于30词。
2. 参考词汇和参考句型：
参考词汇：sunny晴朗的，get up起床，visit拜访，by bus乘公交车，happy开心的，excited激动的，water the flowers浇花，unforgettable难忘的
参考句型：When I…, I decided to…；I got there…；I was…；My father…；
5．范文：
I’m Zhang Mei. I was ill yesterday morning. So I didn’t go to school. My mother was very worried about me. Then we went to see a doctor together. I took some medicine. I should drink more water and have a good rest. Today I feel well. We are very happy now.
【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求作为图片中的孩子张梅，根据图片和文字提示写一篇短文。根据所给图片和文字提示，可知文章大意为张梅生病了，妈妈很担心，去看医生后，感觉很好，张梅和妈妈很开心。时态用一般过去时和一般现在时，注意单词数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型
参考词汇：ill生病的；be worried about sb担心某人；see a doctor看医生；drink more water多喝水；have a good rest好好休息；feel well感觉良好；happy开心的
参考句型：I was ill...；My mother was...；We went to...；I should...；I feel...；
6．例文：
A Bad Cold
I don't feel well today. I think I have bad cold. I am sad and my mother worries about me. She takes me to see a doctor. The doctor asks me to wear warm clothes and take some medicine. I’m fine now. My mother doesn't need to worry about me. I think I should do more exercise to keep healthy.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称描述自己的身体状况。然后再阐述怎么了，怎么做的以及感受等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：worry about担心，take some medicine吃药，do more exercise多锻炼，keep healthy保持健康
参考句型：I don't...； I think I...；She takes...；The doctor asks...；I’m...
7．范文：
I’m not feeling well today. I think l have a fever. And my nose hurts. I should see a doctor. The doctor asks me to have more hot water. I 'm so sad. I hope I can be better soon. After that I should do more exercise.
【详解】1. 题干解读：
该题目要求描述一次你生病的经历。可以写生病时做的事情和感觉，以后要怎么办。注意满足句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：have a fever发烧，hurt受伤，see a doctor看医生，sad悲伤的。better更好的，do more exercise做更多运动
参考句型：I'm not feeling...；I think I have...；I should...；I hope I can...；The doctor asks me...
8．参考范文：
Clara is not feeling well today. She has a bad cold. She is very sad. She doesn't go to school today. She should go to see a doctor, and she should drink more water, wear warm clothes and do more exercise. She wants to be healthy and go to school early.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据图片和提示写一篇小作文。然后再阐述需要做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：have a bad cold患重感冒，go to school去上学，see a doctor看医生，wear warm clothes穿暖和的衣服，do more exercise多做锻炼，healthy健康的
参考句型：She is …；She doesn't …；She should …；She wants …；
9．范文：
Lingling didn’t go to school yesterday, because she felt very tired. She had a fever and her mother took her to see a doctor. The doctor gave some medicine and told her to have a good rest at home. It was not too serious. Lingling feels much better now. She hopes she can be well soon.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求选择一幅图进行描写，可以给图中人物命名，有总起句，有细节描写。展开想象，作文内容要逻辑合理。句子要符合数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：tired累的，have a fever发烧，see a doctor看医生，medicine药，have a good rest好好休息，serious严重的，be well soon早日康复。
参考句型：Lingling didn't go to school yesterday, because she...；She had a...；The doctor gave her...；The doctor told her...；It was...；She feels...；She hope...
10．范文：
Cathy is my friend. She is 11 years old. She has got a headache and a high fever. She should take some medicine, drink a lot of warm water and have a good rest. She’d better eat some fruit. She shouldn’t eat ice cream. She shouldn’t go swimming or play basketball. She shouldn’t watch too much TV either.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求介绍凯西的病情，并适当地给出建议。阐述其应该做什么和不应该做什么等。注意文章为一般现在时并要符合单词数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：headache头疼，high fever高烧，medicine药，have a good rest好好休息，go swimming去游泳，play basketball打篮球
参考句型：She is…；She has got…；She should…；She shouldn’t…
11．范文：
Dear Miss Li,
Anne is not well. She feels cold and has a cough. She went to see the doctor. The doctor said she needed to take some medicine and have a rest.
Yours,
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【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求假如自己是玲玲，给李老师写一封信，告诉她安妮今天生病不能去学校的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态和一般过去时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：well健康的，have a cough咳嗽，see the doctor看医生，take some medicine吃些药，have a rest休息
参考句型：Anne is …； She …；The doctor said she needed to ...
12．范文：
Don’t be worried!
If you feel ill, don’t be worried! Let me give you some advice.
First, don’t worry too much about the spread of the virus. We need to stay calm and do our daily protective work. Secondly, we should keep a good living habit every day, eat healthy fresh food, wash our hands often, open the windows for ventilation, and take proper exercise. If you feel unwell, go to the hospital and see a doctor in time. Finally, we should keep a happy mood and fight against the virus together.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“Don’t be worried!”为题，给大家提出一些建议。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：see a doctor看医生，eat healthy fresh food吃健康新鲜的食物，wash our hands洗我们的手， open the windows开窗户，worried担心的
参考句型：We need...；we should...；If you...
13．范文：
Susan is very sad today. She has a stomachache. Because she eats too many ice creams in the afternoon. She should see the doctor and take some medicine. She shouldn’t eat a lot of ice creams. She should eat healthily.
I hope she will get better soon.
【详解】题干解读：该题目要求写苏姗的病情以及自己对她的建议，人称用第一人称，时态用一般现在时，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：stomachache胃疼； ice cream冰淇淋；see the doctor看医生；take some medicine吃药；eat healthily吃得健康
参考句型：She has...；Because she...；She should...；She shouldn’t...
14．范文：
Helen is sick. She feels cold and has a headache. She has a cold. She should drink warm water and take some medicine. She shouldn’t run or jump. She needs to rest well. She should see a doctor if she doesn’t feel better.
【详解】题干解读：该题目要求根据Helen的病历卡，写出Helen的病情，并结合自己的想法给出一些适当的建议，时态是一般现在时，人称是第三人称，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：feel cold感觉冷，have a headache头疼，have a cold感冒，drink warm water喝温水，take some medicine吃些药，run跑，rest休息
参考句型：She feels...；She has...；She should...；She shouldn’t...
15．范文：
Tim is 11 years old. He has a bad headache and his temperature is 39°C. He should take some medicine on time and drink lots of warm water. Also, he needs to stay in bed and rest well. He should not eat ice cream or take a bath. Tim must not watch too much TV either. I hope he feels better soon.
【详解】题干解读：该题目要求根据蒂姆的病历卡，描述他的病情并给出一些合理的建议。时态是一般现在时，人称是第三人称，同时注意词数的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：headache头疼，temperature温度，take medicine吃药，drink water喝水，rest休息，shouldn’t不应该
参考句型：He has...；He should...；He should not...
16．范文：
Lucy is sick today. She has a headache and a fever. She should go to bed and rest. She should take some medicine. She should drink warm water. She shouldn’t play basketball or swim. She shouldn’t eat ice cream. I hope she feels better soon.
【详解】题干解读：该题目要求介绍Lucy的病情，人称用第三人称，时态用一般现在时，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：sick生病的；headache头痛；fever发烧；go to bed去睡觉；medicine药；ice cream冰淇淋
参考句型：She has...；She should...；She shouldn’t...
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