第四周读后续写遇险脱困学案（含答案）2026届高三英语一轮复习
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第 4 周 读后续写主题练 遇险脱困
遇险脱困是读后续写的高频主题，核心围绕 “突发危机 — 紧急应对 — 成功脱险 — 成长感悟” 展开，场景覆盖 “人与自然”（野外迷路、动物袭击、自然灾害）与 “人与社会”（火灾、电梯故障、交通事故、突发疾病）两大主题语境。此类语篇通过刻画人物在险境中心理变化与行动抉择，传递冷静应对、勇敢抗争、互助协作的正能量，是高考真题中的经典命题方向。
近年高考真题典型案例：2020 年浙江卷讲述摄影师在北极给北极熊拍照时突发遇险（续写重点：躲避北极熊的紧急措施、救援人员的到来及脱险后的感悟）；2018 年浙江卷围绕主人公农场度假时骑马迷路的经历（续写重点：迷路后的困境应对、寻找出路的过程及最终获救的场景）；2017 年浙江卷呈现骑行旅行中遭遇野狼袭击的惊险故事（续写重点：对抗野狼的智慧行动、同伴的互助及脱险后的成长）。
核心解题技巧
结局原则：无论困境多么危急，最终必须实现安全脱险，符合积极向上的价值导向；
三段式叙事：
第一阶段：强化险境刻画（环境烘托 + 心理描写 + 动作细节，突出紧张绝望）；
第二阶段：设计合理转机（自我救赎、他人救援、外界助力等，体现智慧与勇气）；
第三阶段：完成脱险与升华（获救后的情感释放 + 对生命 / 勇气 / 协作的深刻感悟）。
高分句式
1. 险境刻画（恐惧、绝望、无助）
心理 + 动作：My heart skipped a beat and I froze with terror, my legs trembling so violently that I couldn’t move an inch.（我的心一沉，吓得僵在原地，双腿剧烈颤抖，寸步难移。）
环境烘托：Darkness crept over the forest, and the howling of wolves in the distance made my hair stand on end.（黑暗笼罩了森林，远处狼的嚎叫让我毛骨悚然。）
绝望呐喊：I shouted for help at the top of my voice, but my cries were swallowed up by the roaring wind, leaving me utterly helpless.（我声嘶力竭地呼救，但喊声被呼啸的狂风吞噬，只留下无尽的无助。）
突发危机：Suddenly, the ground shook violently, and rocks came crashing down from the mountain, cutting off our way back.（突然，地面剧烈摇晃，岩石从山上滚落，阻断了我们的退路。）
2. 转机与应对（冷静、勇敢、协作）
自我镇定：Taking a deep breath, I forced myself to calm down, knowing that panic would only make things worse.（深吸一口气，我强迫自己冷静下来，明白恐慌只会让事情更糟。）
智慧应对：He rummaged through his backpack and pulled out a flashlight and a whistle, deciding to use the whistle to attract rescuers’ attention.（他翻遍背包，掏出一把手电筒和一个哨子，决定用哨声吸引救援人员的注意。）
互助协作：She helped the injured boy lean against a tree and tore her shirt to bandage his wound, her hands steady despite her fear.（她扶受伤的男孩靠在树上，撕下衬衫为他包扎伤口，尽管内心恐惧，双手却很沉稳。）
外界转机：Just as we were on the verge of despair, a beam of light appeared in the distance, followed by the sound of a helicopter.（就在我们濒临绝望时，远处出现了一束光，紧接着是直升机的声音。）
3. 脱险与升华（感激、感悟、成长）
获救狂喜：Tears of joy streamed down my cheeks as I saw the rescuers approaching, and I rushed toward them with all my strength.（看到救援人员走近，喜悦的泪水顺着脸颊流下，我用尽全身力气朝他们跑去。）
深刻感悟：It was at that moment that I realized that courage is not the absence of fear, but the determination to keep going despite it.（就在那一刻，我意识到勇气不是没有恐惧，而是纵然恐惧仍选择前行的决心。）
成长蜕变：This thrilling experience taught me to cherish every moment of life and to face difficulties with a calm and strong heart.（这次惊心动魄的经历教会我珍惜生命的每一刻，用冷静而坚强的心面对困难。）
强调句型：Only through teamwork and unwavering perseverance were we able to escape the dangerous situation successfully.（正是通过团队协作和坚定的毅力，我们才成功脱离了险境。）
典例展示（2020 年浙江卷）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was a photographer on an expedition to the Arctic. One morning, I set out alone to take photos of polar bears. The Arctic landscape was breathtaking, with snow-covered plains stretching as far as the eye could see. I walked carefully, keeping my eyes peeled for any sign of the bears.
Suddenly, I spotted a mother polar bear with her cubs in the distance. Excited, I crept closer, trying to get the perfect shot. I was so focused on taking photos that I didn’t notice the mother bear had spotted me. She let out a loud roar and started running toward me. Panic surged through me, and I turned around and ran as fast as I could.
I ran for what seemed like hours, my legs burning with exhaustion. Glancing back, I saw the mother bear was still chasing me. I knew I couldn’t keep running forever. Just as I was about to give up, I noticed a small ice cave ahead. Without hesitation, I rushed into the cave and hid behind a large block of ice.
注意：续写词数应为 150 个左右。
The mother bear stopped at the entrance of the cave, roaring angrily.
After what seemed like a long time, I heard a familiar voice calling my name.
范文佳作
The mother bear stopped at the entrance of the cave, roaring angrily. Her loud roars shook the ice around me, and I held my breath, afraid to make the slightest sound. I could see her sharp claws scraping the ice at the cave mouth, and my heart beat wildly with terror. Suddenly, I remembered the flare gun in my backpack. Quietly, I fumbled for it, pulled the trigger, and a bright red flare shot into the sky. The mother bear was startled by the sudden light and stepped back a few steps, giving me a moment of relief. I knew the flare would attract the attention of the expedition team, so I kept firing flares at regular intervals, hoping they would find me soon.
After what seemed like a long time, I heard a familiar voice calling my name. It was my teammate, Alex! I shouted back at the top of my voice, “I’m here! In the ice cave!” Soon, Alex and the other team members appeared at the cave entrance, armed with tranquilizer guns. The mother bear, seeing the group of people, roared once more and retreated into the snow. Alex rushed over and helped me out of the cave, his face filled with concern. “Are you okay We saw your flares and rushed over immediately,” he said. I nodded, tears of gratitude rolling down my cheeks. This experience made me realize that in the face of danger, calmness and quick thinking can save lives. From then on, I always made sure to be fully prepared before any expedition, respecting the power of nature at all times.
亮词美句：[1] keep one’s eyes peeled（密切留意）[2] panic surged through sb（某人突然感到恐慌）[3] fumble for（摸索）[4] trigger（扳机）[5] tranquilizer gun（麻醉枪）[6] tears of gratitude（感激的泪水）[7] quick thinking（敏捷的思维）[8] respect the power of nature（敬畏自然的力量）
即时演练（2018 年浙江卷改编）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During my summer vacation, I went to a farm stay with my cousin, Tom. The farm was surrounded by lush green fields and dense forests. One afternoon, the farmer’s son, Jack, invited us to go horse riding. I was excited because I had never ridden a horse before. Jack helped me mount a gentle-looking horse named Daisy, and we set off along the forest path.
At first, everything went smoothly. Daisy walked slowly, and I enjoyed the beautiful scenery around me. However, when we passed a small stream, Daisy suddenly got scared by a flying bird and started running wildly. I tried to pull the reins to stop her, but she didn’t listen. Tom and Jack shouted at me to hold on tight, but I was so frightened that I could barely grip the reins. Before I knew it, I was thrown off Daisy’s back and landed heavily on the ground.
When I opened my eyes, I found myself alone in the forest. Daisy was nowhere to be seen, and I couldn’t hear Tom or Jack’s voices. The sun was beginning to set, and the forest was getting darker. I stood up, feeling a sharp pain in my leg, and realized I was lost.
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I limped along the path, calling out Tom and Jack’s names desperately.
Just as I was about to collapse, I saw a figure approaching in the distance.
参考范文
I limped along the path, calling out Tom and Jack’s names desperately. My leg hurt so much that I could barely walk, and each step felt like torture. The forest was getting darker and quieter, except for the sound of my own heavy breathing. I was so scared that tears blurred my eyes, but I forced myself to keep going, knowing that staying in one place would mean danger. Suddenly, I tripped over a tree root and fell to the ground. I wanted to give up, but then I remembered my parents’ words: “Never lose hope no matter how difficult things get.” I took out a small mirror from my pocket and used the last of the sunlight to reflect it, hoping someone would see the flash.
Just as I was about to collapse, I saw a figure approaching in the distance. It was Jack! He was riding Daisy and calling my name loudly. I waved my hands excitedly and shouted, “I’m here!” Jack rushed over and helped me up, checking my leg anxiously. “We’ve been looking for you everywhere! We were so worried,” he said. Soon, Tom arrived with the farmer, who carried me on his back. When we got back to the farm, the farmer treated my wound carefully. That night, as I lay in bed, I felt grateful for Jack and Tom’s help. This experience taught me that in times of danger, perseverance and hope are the most powerful weapons. I also learned to be more careful and respectful of animals in the future.
遇险脱困是读后续写的高频主题，核心围绕 “突发危机 — 紧急应对 — 成功脱险 — 成长感悟” 展开，场景覆盖 “人与自然”（野外迷路、动物袭击、自然灾害）与 “人与社会”（火灾、电梯故障、交通事故、突发疾病）两大主题语境。此类语篇通过刻画人物在险境中心理变化与行动抉择，传递冷静应对、勇敢抗争、互助协作的正能量，是高考真题中的经典命题方向。
近年高考真题典型案例：2020 年浙江卷讲述摄影师在北极给北极熊拍照时突发遇险（续写重点：躲避北极熊的紧急措施、救援人员的到来及脱险后的感悟）；2018 年浙江卷围绕主人公农场度假时骑马迷路的经历（续写重点：迷路后的困境应对、寻找出路的过程及最终获救的场景）；2017 年浙江卷呈现骑行旅行中遭遇野狼袭击的惊险故事（续写重点：对抗野狼的智慧行动、同伴的互助及脱险后的成长）。
核心解题技巧
结局原则：无论困境多么危急，最终必须实现安全脱险，符合积极向上的价值导向；
三段式叙事：
第一阶段：强化险境刻画（环境烘托 + 心理描写 + 动作细节，突出紧张绝望）；
第二阶段：设计合理转机（自我救赎、他人救援、外界助力等，体现智慧与勇气）；
第三阶段：完成脱险与升华（获救后的情感释放 + 对生命 / 勇气 / 协作的深刻感悟）。
高分句式
1. 险境刻画（恐惧、绝望、无助）
心理 + 动作：My heart skipped a beat and I froze with terror, my legs trembling so violently that I couldn’t move an inch.（我的心一沉，吓得僵在原地，双腿剧烈颤抖，寸步难移。）
环境烘托：Darkness crept over the forest, and the howling of wolves in the distance made my hair stand on end.（黑暗笼罩了森林，远处狼的嚎叫让我毛骨悚然。）
绝望呐喊：I shouted for help at the top of my voice, but my cries were swallowed up by the roaring wind, leaving me utterly helpless.（我声嘶力竭地呼救，但喊声被呼啸的狂风吞噬，只留下无尽的无助。）
突发危机：Suddenly, the ground shook violently, and rocks came crashing down from the mountain, cutting off our way back.（突然，地面剧烈摇晃，岩石从山上滚落，阻断了我们的退路。）
2. 转机与应对（冷静、勇敢、协作）
自我镇定：Taking a deep breath, I forced myself to calm down, knowing that panic would only make things worse.（深吸一口气，我强迫自己冷静下来，明白恐慌只会让事情更糟。）
智慧应对：He rummaged through his backpack and pulled out a flashlight and a whistle, deciding to use the whistle to attract rescuers’ attention.（他翻遍背包，掏出一把手电筒和一个哨子，决定用哨声吸引救援人员的注意。）
互助协作：She helped the injured boy lean against a tree and tore her shirt to bandage his wound, her hands steady despite her fear.（她扶受伤的男孩靠在树上，撕下衬衫为他包扎伤口，尽管内心恐惧，双手却很沉稳。）
外界转机：Just as we were on the verge of despair, a beam of light appeared in the distance, followed by the sound of a helicopter.（就在我们濒临绝望时，远处出现了一束光，紧接着是直升机的声音。）
3. 脱险与升华（感激、感悟、成长）
获救狂喜：Tears of joy streamed down my cheeks as I saw the rescuers approaching, and I rushed toward them with all my strength.（看到救援人员走近，喜悦的泪水顺着脸颊流下，我用尽全身力气朝他们跑去。）
深刻感悟：It was at that moment that I realized that courage is not the absence of fear, but the determination to keep going despite it.（就在那一刻，我意识到勇气不是没有恐惧，而是纵然恐惧仍选择前行的决心。）
成长蜕变：This thrilling experience taught me to cherish every moment of life and to face difficulties with a calm and strong heart.（这次惊心动魄的经历教会我珍惜生命的每一刻，用冷静而坚强的心面对困难。）
强调句型：Only through teamwork and unwavering perseverance were we able to escape the dangerous situation successfully.（正是通过团队协作和坚定的毅力，我们才成功脱离了险境。）
典例展示（2020 年浙江卷）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was a photographer on an expedition to the Arctic. One morning, I set out alone to take photos of polar bears. The Arctic landscape was breathtaking, with snow-covered plains stretching as far as the eye could see. I walked carefully, keeping my eyes peeled for any sign of the bears.
Suddenly, I spotted a mother polar bear with her cubs in the distance. Excited, I crept closer, trying to get the perfect shot. I was so focused on taking photos that I didn’t notice the mother bear had spotted me. She let out a loud roar and started running toward me. Panic surged through me, and I turned around and ran as fast as I could.
I ran for what seemed like hours, my legs burning with exhaustion. Glancing back, I saw the mother bear was still chasing me. I knew I couldn’t keep running forever. Just as I was about to give up, I noticed a small ice cave ahead. Without hesitation, I rushed into the cave and hid behind a large block of ice.
注意：续写词数应为 150 个左右。
The mother bear stopped at the entrance of the cave, roaring angrily.
After what seemed like a long time, I heard a familiar voice calling my name.
范文佳作
The mother bear stopped at the entrance of the cave, roaring angrily. Her loud roars shook the ice around me, and I held my breath, afraid to make the slightest sound. I could see her sharp claws scraping the ice at the cave mouth, and my heart beat wildly with terror. Suddenly, I remembered the flare gun in my backpack. Quietly, I fumbled for it, pulled the trigger, and a bright red flare shot into the sky. The mother bear was startled by the sudden light and stepped back a few steps, giving me a moment of relief. I knew the flare would attract the attention of the expedition team, so I kept firing flares at regular intervals, hoping they would find me soon.
After what seemed like a long time, I heard a familiar voice calling my name. It was my teammate, Alex! I shouted back at the top of my voice, “I’m here! In the ice cave!” Soon, Alex and the other team members appeared at the cave entrance, armed with tranquilizer guns. The mother bear, seeing the group of people, roared once more and retreated into the snow. Alex rushed over and helped me out of the cave, his face filled with concern. “Are you okay We saw your flares and rushed over immediately,” he said. I nodded, tears of gratitude rolling down my cheeks. This experience made me realize that in the face of danger, calmness and quick thinking can save lives. From then on, I always made sure to be fully prepared before any expedition, respecting the power of nature at all times.
亮词美句：[1] keep one’s eyes peeled（密切留意）[2] panic surged through sb（某人突然感到恐慌）[3] fumble for（摸索）[4] trigger（扳机）[5] tranquilizer gun（麻醉枪）[6] tears of gratitude（感激的泪水）[7] quick thinking（敏捷的思维）[8] respect the power of nature（敬畏自然的力量）
即时演练（2018 年浙江卷改编）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During my summer vacation, I went to a farm stay with my cousin, Tom. The farm was surrounded by lush green fields and dense forests. One afternoon, the farmer’s son, Jack, invited us to go horse riding. I was excited because I had never ridden a horse before. Jack helped me mount a gentle-looking horse named Daisy, and we set off along the forest path.
At first, everything went smoothly. Daisy walked slowly, and I enjoyed the beautiful scenery around me. However, when we passed a small stream, Daisy suddenly got scared by a flying bird and started running wildly. I tried to pull the reins to stop her, but she didn’t listen. Tom and Jack shouted at me to hold on tight, but I was so frightened that I could barely grip the reins. Before I knew it, I was thrown off Daisy’s back and landed heavily on the ground.
When I opened my eyes, I found myself alone in the forest. Daisy was nowhere to be seen, and I couldn’t hear Tom or Jack’s voices. The sun was beginning to set, and the forest was getting darker. I stood up, feeling a sharp pain in my leg, and realized I was lost.
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I limped along the path, calling out Tom and Jack’s names desperately.
Just as I was about to collapse, I saw a figure approaching in the distance.
参考范文
I limped along the path, calling out Tom and Jack’s names desperately. My leg hurt so much that I could barely walk, and each step felt like torture. The forest was getting darker and quieter, except for the sound of my own heavy breathing. I was so scared that tears blurred my eyes, but I forced myself to keep going, knowing that staying in one place would mean danger. Suddenly, I tripped over a tree root and fell to the ground. I wanted to give up, but then I remembered my parents’ words: “Never lose hope no matter how difficult things get.” I took out a small mirror from my pocket and used the last of the sunlight to reflect it, hoping someone would see the flash.
Just as I was about to collapse, I saw a figure approaching in the distance. It was Jack! He was riding Daisy and calling my name loudly. I waved my hands excitedly and shouted, “I’m here!” Jack rushed over and helped me up, checking my leg anxiously. “We’ve been looking for you everywhere! We were so worried,” he said. Soon, Tom arrived with the farmer, who carried me on his back. When we got back to the farm, the farmer treated my wound carefully. That night, as I lay in bed, I felt grateful for Jack and Tom’s help. This experience taught me that in times of danger, perseverance and hope are the most powerful weapons. I also learned to be more careful and respectful of animals in the future.