第 1 周 读后续写主题练 个人成长
个人成长类读后续写语篇核心主题语境为 “人与自我”,涵盖生活与学习、做人与做事两大主题群,场景多设定于学校、家庭及社会实践场景。续写结尾需聚焦个人成长维度,如突破自我局限、培养坚毅品格、树立积极心态、明晰人生方向等,凸显成长中的蜕变与感悟。
近年高考真题中此类经典篇目包括:2021 年新高考 I 卷讲述 “我” 与爷爷捕鸟后放生的经历(续写重点:放生过程中的心理变化及对生命尊重的认知升华);2020 年新高考 I 卷围绕 “我” 和弟弟在森林中迷路后获救故事(续写重点:迷路后的困境应对、姐弟互助过程及获救后的成长感悟)。
考生设计续写情节时,需着重刻画主人公的动作细节与心理转变。突破困境型故事模型通常为:遭遇挫折 / 陷入困境→产生消极情绪(迷茫、退缩、恐惧)→获得启发 / 寻求改变→主动应对 / 直面挑战→突破自我 / 收获成长→感悟升华。
高分句式
1. 成长前的困境(迷茫、退缩、焦虑)
迷茫:Lost and confused, she wandered aimlessly in the crowded street, not knowing where to go.(她迷失又困惑,在拥挤的街道上漫无目的地游荡,不知去向何方。)
退缩:The difficult task seemed so intimidating that he hesitated to take the first step.(这项艰巨的任务看起来如此令人却步,他迟迟不敢迈出第一步。)
焦虑:Anxiety welled up in her chest as the deadline approached, making it hard to breathe.(截止日期临近,焦虑在她胸口蔓延,让她难以呼吸。)
自我怀疑:He couldn’t help questioning his ability, wondering if he would ever live up to others’ expectations.(他不禁怀疑自己的能力,不知道自己是否能达到别人的期望。)
挫败:Each failure made him feel more frustrated, and he almost gave up on his dream.(一次次失败让他愈发挫败,几乎放弃了梦想。)
2. 成长中的转变(觉醒、坚持、突破)
觉醒:A sudden realization hit her—she shouldn’t let fear hold her back from chasing what she wanted.(她突然意识到,不该让恐惧阻碍自己追求想要的东西。)
坚持:Despite the exhaustion, she gritted her teeth and kept going, determined to finish the task.(尽管疲惫不堪,她还是咬紧牙关坚持下去,决心完成任务。)
勇敢尝试:Taking a deep breath, she summoned up her courage and stepped onto the stage, ready to face the audience.(深吸一口气,她鼓起勇气走上舞台,准备面对观众。)
微小进步:Every small progress filled her with joy and gave her the strength to keep moving forward.(每一点微小的进步都让她充满喜悦,给予她继续前进的力量。)
他人鼓励:His encouraging words echoed in her ears, giving her the confidence to overcome the difficulty.(他鼓励的话语在她耳边回响,让她有信心克服困难。)
3. 成长后的升华(感悟、感恩、蜕变)
感悟:It was through this experience that she learned that perseverance is the key to success.(正是通过这次经历,她明白了坚持是成功的关键。)
感恩:Tears of gratitude streamed down her face as she hugged her teacher tightly, thanking him for his guidance.(她紧紧抱着老师,感激的泪水顺着脸颊流下,感谢他的指导。)
蜕变:From then on, she became a more confident and resilient person, ready to take on any challenges in life.(从那以后,她变得更加自信和坚韧,准备好迎接生活中的任何挑战。)
升华句型:
It dawned on me that nothing is impossible as long as we stick to our goals and never give up.(我明白了,只要我们坚持目标永不放弃,没有什么是不可能的。)
Only when we step out of our comfort zone can we discover our true potential.(只有当我们走出舒适区,才能发现自己真正的潜力。)
It was the difficult days that shaped her into a stronger person and changed her attitude towards life.(正是那些艰难的日子,把她塑造成了一个更坚强的人,改变了她对生活的态度。)
典例展示(2021 年新高考 I 卷)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was early in the morning, and I was hiking in the forest with my grandfather. We were looking for birds to take photos of, as that was our shared hobby. The forest was quiet, with only the sound of leaves rustling in the breeze. Suddenly, grandfather stopped and pointed ahead. There, on a branch, stood a beautiful red-tailed hawk. I got excited, grabbed my camera, and started to approach quietly.
But as I got closer, the hawk flew away. Disappointed, I turned to grandfather. He smiled and said, “Patience is the key to bird watching. We can try again.” We walked further into the forest and soon spotted another hawk, this time with a chick in its claws. Grandfather whispered, “Don’t move. Let’s wait for the right moment.” I held my breath, afraid to scare them away. Just as I was about to take the photo, the hawk noticed us and flew off, leaving the chick behind.
I felt sorry for the little chick and wanted to help it. Grandfather shook his head and said, “We shouldn’t interfere with nature. But let’s keep an eye on it to make sure it’s safe.” We hid behind a tree and watched the chick hop around, looking lost and hungry. After a while, a fox appeared, eyeing the chick. My heart raced, and I wanted to rush out, but grandfather stopped me. “Trust nature,” he said. Luckily, the mother hawk returned just in time, chasing the fox away.
注意:续写词数应为 150 个左右。
As the mother hawk fed the chick, I watched them closely, feeling a sense of wonder.
When we got home, I sat down and thought about the day’s experience.
范文佳作
As the mother hawk fed the chick, I watched them closely, feeling a sense of wonder. The way the mother cared for her baby, gently tearing the food into small pieces, touched my heart deeply. I realized that nature is full of such precious moments, but they require patience and respect to witness. My initial eagerness to take photos had made me careless, but grandfather’s words about patience echoed in my ears. I put down my camera, choosing to just enjoy the scene quietly instead of disturbing them. It was a peaceful moment that made me forget all about taking the perfect shot.
When we got home, I sat down and thought about the day’s experience. I used to think bird watching was just about capturing beautiful photos, but now I understood its true meaning. It’s about connecting with nature and respecting all living creatures. Grandfather’s guidance not only taught me about patience but also made me realize the importance of letting nature take its course. It dawned on me that in life, just like in bird watching, we need to be patient and respectful to discover the beauty around us. From then on, every time I go hiking with grandfather, I carry not only my camera but also a heart full of respect for nature.
亮词美句:[1] v. 干扰,干涉 [2] n. 奇迹,惊叹 [3] adj. 珍贵的 [4] v. 打扰,妨碍 [5] v. 捕捉,拍摄 [6] n. 意义,含义 [7] 短语:顺其自然 [8] 倒装句结构
即时演练(2020 年新高考 I 卷)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One afternoon in early autumn, I was walking in the forest with my little brother, Tom. We were collecting fallen leaves for a school project. The forest was colorful, with leaves of red, orange, and yellow covering the ground. Tom was excited, running ahead and picking up every beautiful leaf he saw. “Wait for me, Tom!” I called out, but he didn’t stop.
Suddenly, I realized that I couldn’t see Tom anymore. Panic set in as I shouted his name, but there was no response. I ran in the direction he had gone, but the forest looked different from every angle. I tried to remember the path we had taken, but all the trees and bushes looked the same. I felt my heart beating wildly and my hands shaking. It was getting dark, and I was worried that we would be stuck in the forest overnight.
I took a deep breath and tried to calm down. I remembered what my parents had told me: if you get lost, stay in one place. But I couldn’t leave Tom alone. Just as I was about to cry, I heard a faint voice calling my name. “Tom! Where are you ” I shouted back. The voice came from behind a large tree. I ran over and found Tom sitting on the ground, holding a handful of leaves, looking scared.
注意:1. 续写词数应为 150 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I rushed over to Tom and hugged him tightly.
When we finally saw our parents waiting at the forest entrance, tears of joy streamed down our faces.
参考范文
I rushed over to Tom and hugged him tightly. “Don’t be scared, I’m here,” I said softly, patting his back. He buried his face in my chest, sobbing. I wiped his tears and told him to hold my hand tightly. Remembering my parents’ advice, I decided to find our way back by following the sun, which was still slightly visible through the trees. We walked slowly, with Tom staying close to me. Every time he felt scared, I encouraged him, reminding him that we would get home soon. We also left marks with fallen branches along the way to avoid getting lost again.
When we finally saw our parents waiting at the forest entrance, tears of joy streamed down our faces. Our parents ran towards us, looking relieved and worried. “We were so anxious,” my mother said, hugging us tightly. I told them about how I calmed down and guided Tom back. My father praised me, saying, “You did a great job. You stayed calm and took care of your brother.” It was then that I realized I had grown up. I used to rely on my parents for everything, but this experience taught me to be brave and responsible. From then on, I knew I could face difficulties bravely as long as I stayed calm and never gave up.