读后续写1:商店选礼物等待儿子做检查
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It all started when my four-year-old son's bloodwork(血样)showed something terrible.We had to do an MRI(核磁共振),and it was a truly worrying experience.The doctors explained that they would have to intubate(插管) my son to get the medical pictures they needed.When the day came,my little boy held me as nurses told me to lay my baby down on the bed.It was a hard day for a mother.
I could hardly see through my tears as the nurse sent my mother and me to the waiting room.The nurse explained it would take two hours.I was worried.I didn't want to sit in that waiting room.But how could I get through those next two hours “I want to go shopping,”I told my mom.
“Do you really need to buy something,honey ”my mother asked,and I just nodded as I walked toward the hospital gift shop.I just wanted to do something meaningful instead of sitting there worrying.
I walked up to the saleswoman,and explained my plan to the young lady,“My little boy is getting an MRI today.So I'm just waiting here for the next two hours.Would it be okay if
I bought a lot of gifts and sent them upstairs to some children in the hospital ”
“Of course,we can send gifts upstairs,”she said.“Who would you like to send them to ”
“Can you just give them to the nurses and let them give the gifts to the children who need them the most ”I replied.And she smiled and gave me a thumbs-up(赞赏).
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Over the next hour and a half,I chose each gift carefully.
After I paid for the gifts,my phone started ringing.
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Paragraph 1:Over the next hour and a half,I chose each gift carefully.在接下来的一个半小时里,我仔细地挑选了每一份礼物。
看到货架上各种各样的礼物,包括漂亮的娃娃和飞机模型,我几乎忍不住眼泪,眼泪无法控制地流下我的脸颊,因为这些礼物让我想起了我的儿子,也许他也喜欢它们。
a variety of gifts on the shelves, beautiful dolls and plane models,I hardly
and because these gifts .Maybe he liked them too.
虽然我在店里待了将近两个小时,但是女售货员很耐心直到我完成选择。
I had stayed in the shop and chosen gifts for nearly two hours,the saleswoman was too patient until I .
我深吸了一口气,擦去了眼泪,带着这些礼物去付款。
I , and took these gifts to pay for.
Paragraph 2:After I paid for the gifts,my phone started ringing.在我付了礼物的钱后,我的电话开始响了起来。
在那一刻,我似乎有些不安。(胃里有蝴蝶)
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我感到焦虑和害怕,我拿出手机,放在耳朵上,低声接电话。
,I , and .
那是我儿子的护士打来的电话。她告诉我一切似乎都顺利得令人难以置信。
It was from my son's nurse. She told me .
我立刻跑到等候室,脸上露出兴奋的表情。
I ran to the waiting room .
后来,我买的礼物被护士们送给了孩子们,我看到他们脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
,the gifts I bought were given out to the children by nurses.I
.
每当我在生活中遇到困难时,做一些有意义的事情总是会对我起作用。
I meet difficulties in my life, always
to me.
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Paragraph 1:Over the next hour and a half,I chose each gift carefully.在接下来的一个半小时里,我仔细地挑选了每一份礼物。
看到货架上各种各样的礼物,包括漂亮的娃娃和飞机模型,我几乎忍不住眼泪,眼泪无法控制地流下我的脸颊,因为这些礼物让我想起了我的儿子,也许他也喜欢它们。
Seeing a variety of gifts on the shelves, including beautiful dolls and plane models,I hardly hold my tears back and the tears flowed down my cheek uncontrollably because these gifts reminded me of my son. Maybe he liked them too.
虽然我在店里待了将近两个小时,但是女售货员很耐心直到我完成选择。
Although I had stayed in the shop and chosen gifts for nearly two hours,the saleswoman was too patient until I completed my choice.
我深吸了一口气,擦去了眼泪,带着这些礼物去付款。
I took a deep breath, wiped away my tears and took these gifts to pay for.
Paragraph 2:After I paid for the gifts,my phone started ringing.在我付了礼物的钱后,我的电话开始响了起来。
在那一刻,我似乎有些不安。(胃里有蝴蝶)
At that moment, it seemed that I had butterflies in my stomach.
感到焦虑和害怕,我拿出手机,放在耳朵上,低声接电话。
Feeling anxious and frightened,I took out my phone,put it on my ears and answered the phone in a low voice.
那是我儿子的护士打来的电话。她告诉我一切似乎都顺利得令人难以置信。
It was from my son's nurse. She told me everything had seemed unbelievably smooth.
我立刻跑到等候室,脸上露出兴奋的表情。
I ran to the waiting room immediately with a look of excitement crossing my face.
随后,我买的礼物被护士们送给了孩子们,我看到他们脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
Later, the gifts I bought were given out to the children by nurses.I saw some bright and wide smiles appearing on their faces.
每当我在生活中遇到困难时,做一些有意义的事情总是会对我起作用。
Whenever I meet difficulties in my life,doing something meaningful always makes a big difference to me.
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参考范文
Paragraph 1:在接下来的一个半小时里,我仔细地挑选了每一份礼物。看到货架上各种各样的礼物,包括漂亮的娃娃和飞机模型,我几乎忍不住眼泪,眼泪无法控制地流下我的脸颊,因为这些礼物让我想起了我的儿子,也许他也喜欢它们。虽然我在店里待了将近两个小时,但在我完成选择之前,女售货员很耐心了。我深吸了一口气,擦去了眼泪,带着这些礼物去付款。
Over the next hour and a half,I chose each gift carefully.Seeing a variety of gifts on the shelves, including beautiful dolls and plane models,I hardly hold my tears back and the tears flowed down my cheek uncontrollably because these gifts reminded me of my son. Maybe he liked them too.Although I had stayed in the shop and chosen gifts for nearly two hours,the saleswoman was too patient until I completed my choice.I took a deep breath, wiped away my tears and took these gifts to pay for.(77)
Paragraph2:在我付了礼物的钱后,我的电话开始响了起来。在那一刻,我似乎有些不安。感到焦虑和害怕,我拿出手机,放在耳朵上,低声接电话。那是我儿子的护士打来的电话。她告诉我一切似乎都顺利得令人难以置信。我立刻跑到等候室,脸上露出兴奋的表情。随后,我买的礼物被护士们送给了孩子们,我看到他们脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。每当我在生活中遇到困难时,做一些有意义的事情总是会对我起作用。
After I paid for the gifts,my phone started ringing.At that moment, it seemed that I had butterflies in my stomach.Feeling anxious and frightened,I took out my phone,put it on my ears and answered the phone in a low voice. It was from my son's nurse. She told me everything had seemed unbelievably smooth.I ran to the waiting room immediately with a look of excitement crossing my face. Later, the gifts I bought were given out to the children by nurses. I saw some bright and wide smiles appearing on their faces..Whenever I meet difficulties in my life,doing something meaningful always makes a big difference to me.(98)