读后续写2:泰迪熊代替生病女孩环游美国
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After seeing a program on television about a reporter who had hitchhiked (搭顺风车)across America, my ten-year-old daughter, Ashley said,“I wish I could do that!” Ashley was diagnosed with cancer three years earlier. Although she is cancer-free now after a surgery, numerous tests and the scary procedure of treatments had made her unwilling to risk outside her known world. So I wanted to encourage that spirit of adventure in her.
I began trying to think of a way for her to“hitchhike”across the country without leaving home. That’s how Carmen was born. Carmen is a teddy bear Ashley had received while she was in the hospital. We decided to send Carmen in Ashley’s place. So we purchased a notebook as a travel journal and a bag for Carmen to travel in, together with a letter written by Ashley:
My name is Ashley and I am ten years old. This is my bear, Carmen. I got her when I was in the hospital. She wants to go to all fifty states just like the reporter guy on TV who hitchhiked across America. But she can’t walk, so will you please help her Could you let her ride with you and keep her safe, as well as tell her about yourself so she won’t be lonely
Please write a little about yourself in the journal and then introduce her to someone new. She wants to meet as many new people as she can. I think by about September she will be ready to come home. In her coin purse is $5. 00. Please put her in a box with her journal and send her to Sac City State Bank. Attention: Caretaker of Carmen Bear. If you would like to hear from Carmen after she gets home, please leave your address in her notebook and we will send you a note and let you know when she gets home safely.
Thank you for taking care of Carmen, and thank you for taking the time to write in her notebook.
Your new friends,
Carmen and Ashley
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。
We then took Carmen to our family friend Phil,a highway patrol officer(巡警).
Then one day in September the long-expected package with Carmen inside finally arrived.
读后续写:泰迪熊代替生病女孩环游美国
检测版
Paragraph 1:We then took Carmen to our family friend Phil,a highway patrol officer(巡警).然后我们带着卡门去找我们家的朋友菲尔,他是一名高速公路巡警(巡警)。
当他看见我们,尤其是那只熊时,他的脸上掠过一种怀疑的表情。
When he saw us,especially the bear, .
我向他解释了我们来找他的原因。
we came to him.
他被阿什利所感动,眼睛里立刻涌出了泪水。
Ashley .
读完阿什利写的信后,他向我们承诺,他将帮助阿什利实现她的想法。
After reading the letter written by Ashley,he Ashley
.
在接下来的几天里,他在日记中写了一些关于自己的东西,并在工作时把熊介绍给另一个人。
,he wrote a little about himself in the journal and bear
when working.
随着时间的推移,越来越多的人知道了阿什利的故事,并且和高速公路巡警一样做了同样的事情。
,more and more people knew Ashley’s story and the highway patrol officer.
与此同时,阿什利也期待着她将在9月份收到的包裹。
,Ashley was the package she would receive in September.
Paragraph 2:Then one day in September the long-expected package with Carmen inside finally arrived.9月的一天,期待已久的卡门的包裹终于到了。
一看到包裹,阿什莉高兴得跳了起来,眼睛里闪着兴奋和喜悦。
, Ashley .
我们迫不及待地打开这个包裹。
We open the package.
正如阿什利(Ashley)所期待的那样,日记里有很多内容是由陌生人写的,包括司机、工人和清洁工。
,there were a number of contents in the journal written by strangers,
driver,workers and cleaners.
此外,让我们兴奋不已的是这些明信片和一些关于美国不同地方的照片。
, the postcards and some photos of different places in America.
也就是说,卡门代替了阿什利,在一些陌生人的帮助下完成了她的冒险。
,Carmen Ashley really .
看到阿什莉脸上那灿烂而灿烂的笑容,我相信冒险的精神又回到了她的身上。
on Ashley’s face, the spirit of adventure came back to her again.
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校对版
Paragraph 1:We then took Carmen to our family friend Phil,a highway patrol officer(巡警).然后我们带着卡门去找我们家的朋友菲尔,他是一名高速公路巡警(巡警)。
当他看见我们,尤其是那只熊时,他的脸上掠过一种怀疑的表情。
When he saw us,especially the bear,a look of doubt crossed his face.
我向他解释了我们来找他的原因。
I explained him the reason why we came to him.
他被阿什利所感动,眼睛里立刻涌出了泪水。
He was touched by Ashley with tears welling up in his eyes in a flash.
读完阿什利写的信后,他向我们承诺,他将帮助阿什利实现她的想法。
After reading the letter written by Ashley,he made a promised to us that he would help Ashley achieve his idea.
在接下来的几天里,他在日记中写了一些关于自己的东西,并在工作时把熊介绍给另一个人。
In the following days,he wrote a little about himself in the journal and introduced bear to another person when working.
随着时间的推移,越来越多的人知道了阿什利的故事,并且和高速公路巡警一样做了同样的事情。
As time went by,more and more people knew Ashley’s story and did the same thing as the highway patrol officer.
与此同时,阿什利也期待着她将在9月份收到的包裹。
Meanwhile,Ashley was looking forward to the package she would receive in September.
Paragraph 2:Then one day in September the long-expected package with Carmen inside finally arrived.9月的一天,期待已久的卡门的包裹终于到了。
一看到包裹,阿什莉高兴得跳了起来,眼睛里闪着兴奋和喜悦。
On seeing the package, Ashley jumped with joy with excitement and delight shining in her eyes.
我们迫不及待地打开这个包裹。
We couldn’t wait to open the package.
正如阿什利(Ashley)所期待的那样,日记里有很多内容是由陌生人写的,包括司机、工人和清洁工。
As Ashley had expected,there were a number of contents in the journal written by strangers,consisting of driver,workers and cleaners.
此外,让我们兴奋不已的是这些明信片和一些关于美国不同地方的照片。
In addition,what made us excited/thrilled was the postcards and some photos of different places in America.
也就是说,卡门代替了阿什利,在一些陌生人的帮助下完成了她的冒险。
That was to say,Carmen took the place of Ashley really completed her adventure with the help of some strangers.
看到阿什莉脸上那灿烂而灿烂的笑容,我相信冒险的精神又回到了她的身上。
Seeing the bright and wide smile on Ashley’s face,I believed that the spirit of adventure came back to her again.
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参考范文
Paragraph 1:然后我们带着卡门去找我们家的朋友菲尔,他是一名高速公路巡警(巡警)。当他看见我们,尤其是那只熊时,他的脸上掠过一种怀疑的表情。我向他解释了我们来找他的原因。被阿什利所感动,他眼睛里立刻涌出了泪水。读完阿什利写的信后,他向我们承诺,他将帮助阿什利实现她的想法。在接下来的几天里,他在日记中写了一些关于自己的东西,并在工作时把熊介绍给另一个人。随着时间的推移,越来越多的人知道了阿什利的故事,并且和高速公路巡警一样做了同样的事情。与此同时,阿什利也期待着她将在9月份收到的包裹。
We then took Carmen to our family friend Phil,a highway patrol officer(巡警).When he saw us,especially the bear,a look of doubt crossed his face.I explained him the reason why we came to him.He was touched by Ashley with tears welling up in his eyes in a flash.After reading the letter written by Ashley,he made a promised to us that he would help Ashley achieve his idea.In the following days,he wrote a little about himself in the journal and introduced bear to another person when working.As time went by,more and more people knew Ashley’s story and did the same thing as the highway patrol officer. Meanwhile,Ashley was looking forward to the package she would receive in September.
Paragraph 2:9月的一天,期待已久的卡门的包裹终于到了。一看到包裹,阿什莉高兴得跳了起来,眼睛里闪着兴奋和喜悦。我们迫不及待地打开这个包裹。正如阿什利(Ashley)所期待的那样,日记里有很多内容是由陌生人写的,包括司机、工人和清洁工。此外,让我们兴奋不已的是这些明信片和一些关于美国不同地方的照片。也就是说,卡门代替了阿什利,在一些陌生人的帮助下真正完成了她的冒险。看到阿什莉脸上那灿烂而灿烂的笑容,我相信冒险的精神又回到了她的身上。
Then one day in September the long-expected package with Carmen inside finally arrived.On seeing the package, Ashley jumped with joy with excitement and delight shining in her eyes.We couldn’t wait to open the package.As Ashley had expected,there were a number of contents in the journal written by strangers,consisting of driver,workers and cleaners.In addition,what made us excited/thrilled was the postcards and some photos of different places in America.That was to say,Carmen taking the place of Ashley really completed her adventure with the help of some strangers.Seeing the bright and wide smile on Ashley’s face,I believed that the spirit of adventure came back to her again.