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Unit9 I like music that I can dance to.
人教新目标版 九年级上
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
1. 能够精准识别并掌握描述音乐/电影喜好相关表达（如“My favorite... is...”“I like... because...” ）；清晰梳理个人对喜爱音乐类型、具体作品的偏好及原因，构建写作内容框架。
2.能运用所学表达，结合3a梳理的笔记，完成介绍喜爱音乐/电影类型与具体作品的英文短文写作；通过小组互评、教师点评，优化语言表达，提升写作准确性与流畅性。
3.可迁移写作思路与表达，介绍其他艺术形式（绘画、文学作品等）的喜好；能在跨文化交流场景中，用英文分享个人艺术偏好，深化对“艺术审美个性化”的理解。
Warming-up
Let's enjoy a video.
What kind of music do you like
pop music
I like music that I can dance to it.
I like music that can make me relax.
Brainstorm
What kind of music do you like
light music
I like music that is quiet.
I like music that can make me comfortable.
What kind of music do you like
rock music
I like music that is loud and energetic.
I like music that can make me excited.
What kind of music do you like
Children's songs
I like music that is lively.
I like music that can make me happy.
What kind of music do you like
Chinese folk music
I like music that I can sense both beauty and the sadness.
I like music that can make me think about the pain and wounds.
What kind of movie do you like
action movies
I like movies that make me excited.
I like movies that teach me to face difficulties bravely .
What kind of movie do you like
comedies
I like movies that make me relaxed.
I like movies that help me to keep the good mood.
What kind of movie do you like
cartoons
I like movies that is interesting.
I like movies that give me something to think about.
What kind of movie do you know
scary movies
I like movies that make me scared but excited.
I like movies that can help me replease my presssure.
What kind of movie do you know
documentaries
I like movies that provide plenty of information.
I like movies that I can learn more about history.
Favorite kind of music/movie
Why I like this kind of music/movie
Favorite song/movie
Why I like this song/movie
How this song/movie makes me feel
Why I think others should listen to/watch this song/movie
What kind of music or movies do you like best What is your favourite song/movie Make notes in the chart below.
Favorite kind of music/movie
Why I like this kind of music/movie
Favorite song/movie
Why I like this song/movie
How this song/movie makes me feel
Why I think others should listen to/watch this song/movie
Days of my Past
beautiful, great lyrics
recall you the unusual experiences and bring you hope and beautiful vision
think of my old school, recall the happy
time of my childhood,reminds me to cherish
time and people around me
pop music
beautiful
Favorite kind of music/movie Why I like this song/movie
Why I like this kind of music/movie How this song/movie makes me feel
Favorite song/movie Why I think others should listen to/watch this song/movie
Historical drama
Makes me aware of some important historical events and how they affected people’s lives
Gone with the Wind
It has a very interesting storyline and an excellent cast.
Deeply moved-sad about the effects of war, but I'm hopeful for the human spirit.
It’s one of the best movies of all time.
本单元以“Music and Movies”为话题，通过对音乐和电影等相关材料的学习，学生能够学会谈论自己的兴趣、爱好，准确地表达自己对某事物的好恶，感悟生活的愉悦与精彩。
话题分析
Use your notes to write an article for a newspaper or magazine to tell people about your favorite kind of music/movie and your favorite song/movie.
Useful expressions：
My favorite kind of music/movie is…
I like… because …
It was…by…
When I listen to /watch it, I feel…
I think you should listen to/watch it too because …
Explore the topic.
定体裁
定人称
定时态
说明文
第一人称
第三人称
一般现在时为主
Let’s outline.
Beginning
Body
Ending
引入话题，介绍自己喜欢的音乐或电影类型。
详细介绍自己喜欢的某首音乐或某部电影。
推荐听这首歌或看这部电影，并交代推荐的原因。
Topic1:My Favorite Kind of Music
Let’s learn some useful sentences.
Beginning
My favorite kind of music / movie is …
I like … best because …
I like music / movies that …
Body
It was … by …
When I listen to / watch it, I feel …
What’s more, this song / movie …
Ending
I think you should listen to / watch it too because …
Tip 1: try to use some conjunctions.
表示结果的连词有: so
表示原因的连词有: because, since, as
表示转折的连词有: but, however, though
表示递进的连词有：not only ... but also ...“不仅……而且……”
表示选择关系的连词有: or
表示两件事情同时发生的连词有: when, while, as
连词是一种连接词与词、短语与短语以及句与句的虚词，它不能独立担任句子成分而只起连接作用。
Tip 2: try to use some attributive clauses.
I like music that can make me feel comfortable and relaxed.
I prefer music which has a soft melody (旋律) and wonderful lyrics.
I enjoy songs that are cheerful and full of emotions.
I like movies that can give me something to think about.
I prefer movies which are educational and meaningful.
I enjoy movies that have a happy ending and can cheer me up.
Tip 3: try to use some beautiful sentences.
Music is the spice of life. 音乐是生活的调味剂。
The world needs music to amuse people’s life. 这个世界需要音乐来娱乐人们的生活。
Without music, life would lack the enchantment that melody brings. 没有音乐，生活将缺少旋律带来的魅力。
We can see our own lives through movies.我们可以通过电影看到自己的生活。
Movies are windows to the world.电影是通往世界的窗户。
Sample writing
Music is the spice of life. I’m a music lover and my favorite kind of music is pop music because it’s easy for me to sing along with it. When I listen to these songs, I feel really relaxed.
Among all the pop songs, I like See You Again best. It’s a song about friendship, and it was released in 2015. The song has a great melody and wonderful lyrics. Every time when I listen to it, I will be moved by the sincere emotions in it. What’s more, it makes me remind of my best friend who isn’t by my side now and those good old days with her.
I think you should listen to this song too because it’s full of sincere emotions and will make you recall your old friends.
某英语报社正在向学生征稿，题目是“my favorite movies”。
假如你是张子涵，请你写一篇英语短文向该报社投稿，谈谈你最喜欢的电影《哪吒之魔童降世》（NeZha）并说明理由。
要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，不少于80字。
参考词汇demon魔；fate命运；fight out以斗争的方式解决，辩论出结果
审题立意
人称：第一人称
体裁：应用文
时态：一般现在时
Topic2:My Favorite Kind of Movies
总述
具体介绍
表达感情
My name is...
In my spare time, I like movies which...
My favorite movie is...
The story is about...
He is born to...
However, his tries his best to...
It makes me...
... influence me a lot.
What's more, the songs...
In our world ,the movie...
It is well worth watching.
谋篇布局
sing along with跟着……—起唱
in spare time在空闲时间
cheer up（使)变得更高兴;振奋起来
plenty of大量;充足
depend on视……而定;取决于
be born in/on出生于
try one 's best to do sth.尽全力做某事
stick to坚持;固守
not only ... but also...不但……而且……
in this way这样;通过这种方法
remind... of .../ make... recall...提醒……;使……想起……
be full of/ be filled with充满;装满
短语储备
范文欣赏
My Favorite Movie
I'm Li Hua. My favorite movie is Transformers. This film was made by a famous director who is named Michael Bay in America. I am shocked by the high-techs and computer special effects that it uses. I like it very much because it has plenty of huge scenes and famous movie stars.
Besides, when I see it I feel very happy for its wonderful story, and it teaches me to respect anybody who protects us. This film tells us that we should be brave to fight the enemies and have the courage to live in the danger. It also has a lot of robot toys that I like. I think you should watch it because it not only can cheer you up but also gives you a strong heart and confidence.
In a word, the movie is really fantastic. It is well worth watching.
Key points Check
Good Structure 3’
Good sentences 3’
Correct grammar/spelling 5’
Good logic 2’
Tidy writing 2’
互评
Check List
中考
第一档（13-15分）
信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。
第二档（10-12分）
信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思达。
第三档（7-9分）
能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本读。
第四档（4-6分）
只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子读。
第五档（1-3分）
只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。
Peer-editing
1. Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.
plenty of, suppose, war, electronic, actor, spare
1. The comedy has ________ dialogs which are very humorous.
2. Since you prefer music that is relaxing, I don’t ________ you
would want to buy this __________ music CD.
3. Christmas is a time for spreading joy, so you should find some
_______ time to spend with your loved ones.
4. Although he is an _____ who does not have much experience, he
did an excellent job in the new ____ film.
plenty of
suppose
electronic
Self Check
actor
war
spare
2. Fill in the blanks with who, that or which. More than one answer may be possible.
A: Hi, Cindy! Would you like to see Sky High in 2050 this weekend
B: Hmm…no, I don’t think movies __________ try to describe the future are very interesting. Could we see City Danger instead
A: You mean, the new police story _________ was filmed in five countries
B: Yes, that’s the one. The actor ________ plays the hero used to be a schoolteacher!
A: OK, sure. It sounds like something _______ we both will enjoy!
that/which
that/which
who/that
that
1. I don’t like music
_______________________.
2. I enjoy spending time in places
___________________________.
3. I have friends
______________________________.
4. I like movie stars
__________________________________.
3. Complete the sentences about yourself.
that/which is too loud
that/which are relaxing
who/that are friendly and helpful
who/that are beautiful or handsome
假如你叫Li Ming, 是一名中学生，经常收听由英国主持人Philip主持的音乐节目。请根据内容要点提示：给主持人写一封信。
要点：
1.你很喜欢这个节目， 特别是节目播放的歌词很棒的英文歌曲。
2.你学习很忙或疲劳时，会打开收音机听这个节目。
3.从节目中你学到了很多新单词……
4.告诉你喜欢什么类型的音乐，请他帮你介绍一些相关的歌手和CD。
Homework
Dear Philip,
My name is Li Ming.________________________________
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Thank you very much!
Yours,
Li Ming
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