期末培优 写作（专项练习.含解析）2025-2026学年九年级上册英语人教版
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末培优 写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 榆社县期末）作为一名初中生，我们面临着多方面的人际关系，包括与父母的关系、与兄弟姐妹的关系、与老师的关系、与朋友的关系、与同学的关系等。良好的人际关系可以使我们精神愉悦，情绪饱满，充满信心，保持乐观的人生态度。学会与人相处，不仅要尊重他人，还要善于沟通，及时化解误会或矛盾……请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
the importance of getting on well with others
one of your experiences about it
what you have learned from this experience
要求：
词数不少于80；
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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2．（2024秋 祁县期末）勇气是一种力量，激励我们突破困境；勇气是一种精神，指引我们突破自我；勇气更是一种品质，帮助我们保持坚定。作为中学生的我们应该努力提升克服困难的勇气，以 "The Moment I Showed courage" 为主题展开交流，你作为一名中学生代表将进行发言。请用英语写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
● your idea about what courage is
● one of your stories about showing courage
● your understanding of showing courage
要求：
（1）词数不少于80；
（2）文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
The Moment I Showed Courage
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3．（2024秋 平定县期末）假如你是李华。你的英国笔友Chris即将来中国过春节，可他对中国文化了解不多。他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等，以及中国春节的传统风俗。请你用英语回复一封邮件，向他介绍你所知道的相关知识。
内容须包括：
（1）Chinese basic social manners；
（2）The traditional customs of Chinese Spring festival；
（3）The importance of Chinese Spring festival
要求：
（1）词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不能出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
（3）参考词汇仅供参考。
Word Bank：
table manners，shake hands，chopsticks，gift，polite，hang couplets，red packet，enjoy lion and dragon dance
Dear Chris，
I'm glad to know that you are going to China soon.I expect we can spend Spring Festival together.Now I'll tell you some basic Chinese social manners and the customs of Spring Festival.
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4．（2024秋 阳泉期末）日月其迈，岁律更新。回望2024年，我们取得了沉甸甸的收获。从广泛阅读、坚持运动中收获了知识和健康；从面对困难、迎难而上中收获了坚持和勇气；从志愿服务、社会实践中收获了温暖和真情……请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1 What do you think of your 2024？
2 Tell us one of the most meaningful experiences you had in 2024.
3 What have you learned from it？
要求：
1词数不少于80词，不计入总词数；
2文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
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5．（2024秋 斗门区期末）在中国传统文化中，书信不仅仅是信息的载体，更是情感与文化传承的重要桥梁。假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Jack非常喜欢中国并对中国传统节日很感兴趣。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一封信介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日（如：the Spring Festival，the Dragon Boat Festival，the Double Ninth Day，the Mid﹣Autumn Festival 等），并邀请他来中国体验这个节日。
作文要求：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack，
I hope this letter finds you well.I am glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.______
Best Wishes!
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Yours，
Li Hua
6．（2024秋 石家庄期末）假定英语课上你们正在就"自豪中国（Proud China）"开展调查活动，下面是你的同伴张军的填写记录，请你根据记录内容写一篇短文，总结他对五个方面的关注（focus on）并进行简单的评价，然后就他需要注意的一个方面提出建议。
Proud China Name：Zhang Jun
Questions Yes No
Do you like using "Made in China"？ √
Do you often listen to the news？ √
Do you focus on China's great development？ √
Do you have dreams to serve our country？ √
Are you interested in Chinese traditional culture？ √
注意：
（1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（2）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Well done，Zhang Jun!I looked at your answers carefully.________
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7．（2024秋 南昌期末）俗话说："国有国法，家有家规"，"没有规矩，不成方圆"。你有哪些家规呢？哪些你不赞同又应该如何改变呢？请根据下面提示，谈谈你的看法。
写作要点： Useful expressions：
1.What rule（s） do you have at home？ 2.Which rule（s） do you disagree with？ 3.How to make the rule（s） better？ I do not agree with… I think I should be allowed to... I would like to... I could…if I…
写作要求：
（1）短文应包含所有的写作要点，语句通顺，字迹工整，意思连贯；
（2）文中不能出现真实学校和人名；
（3）不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
In my family，there are several rules.
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8．（2024秋 阳西县期末）在刚刚过去的几年，中国航天领域取得了举世瞩目的成就。为了激发同学们对航天事业的关注和自豪感，假设你校英语报打算举办主题为"My Space Dream"的征文大赛，请你根据下面的思维导图内容提示，用英语写一篇短文参赛。
注意：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。
My Space Dream
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9．（2024秋 江汉区期末）假如你是李华，你做志愿活动的国际社区邀请你写一封英文倡议书，倡导大家"祥和过春节"。请你从春节的意义、庆祝方式、安全注意事项等内容方面完成倡议书。
内容提示：
What does Spring Festival mean to Chinese？
How do people usually celebrate Spring Festival？
Can you give some suggestions about a joyful and safe festival？
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；
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10．（2024秋 武昌区期末）在当今这个科技日新月异的时代，各种各样的发明不断涌现，像智能手机（the smartphone） 、计算机（the computer） 、机器人（the robot） 、互联网（the Internet） 、人工智能（AI）等，它们正深刻地改变着我们生活的方方面面，如学习方式、社交生活、休闲活动以及日常生活便利性等。请你以" Has Changed My Life a Lot"为题写一篇英语短文，探讨这一发明是如何改变你的生活的。
内容提示：
（1）What invention has changed your life a lot？
（2）What do you think of the invention？
（3）How does it change your life？
（4）Something more about this topic.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息：词数100词左右：部分标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
____ Has Changed My Life a Lot
The invention that has changed my life a lot is .
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11．（2024秋 新乐市期末）根据《中国学生发展核心素养》的要求，一名真正优秀的中学生并不仅仅是考试取得高分，而应该是身心健康，德智体美劳全面发展，能通过所学知识去发现问题并解决问题。请你以" How to Be a Better Student"为题，写一篇短文。
How to Be a Better Student？
保持健康 1.坚持锻炼 2.帮助做家务 3.少玩游戏和手机
学会放松 1.多和父母交谈 2.不把自己逼得太紧 3.和他人友好相处
要求：
（1）所写内容包含所有要点，必须适当发挥。
（2）词数80 左右，短文开头已给出，不计总词数。
（3）文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。
How to Be a Better Student
It's necessary for teenagers to develop in an all﹣round way.Here are some ways to be a better student.
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12．（2024秋 官渡区期末）提示：美其实无处不在，它不仅体现在自然山川之美、艺术创造之美，还蕴藏于日常生活、学习过程或个人成长之中。请以"The Beauty Around Us"为题，写一篇英语短文，叙述你感受到的美。
要求：
（1）紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；
（2）文中不得使用考生的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
The Beauty Around Us
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13．（2024秋 南昌期末）时间管理是一门学问。作为初三毕业班的学生，很多学生觉得自己的时间不够用，或者无法合理地分配时间。你可能也遇到过同样的问题。请你根据以下要点和要求，以"My ideas about managing time"为题，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊英语专栏投稿。
写作要点：
（1）What is your opinion on time management？
（2）How do you manage your time？
（3）What improvements do you think you still need to make？
要求：
（1）短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）短文中不得出现真实人名和地名；
（3）词数80～120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My ideas about managing time
It is pretty important for us to manage our time well
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14．（2024秋 红古区期末）为推动爱国主义教育"进课堂、进教材、进头脑"，近日，兰州市教科所组织了全市中小学师生"用英语讲好中国故事"活动。英语学习已经伴我们走过了很多年，请以"My English Study"为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的英文学习经历。
写作要求：（1）文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My English Study
I've learnt English for many years.
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15．（2025 硚口区模拟）"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy."这句话表达了劳逸结合、张弛有度才能提升工作或学习的效率。请根据以下内容提示，用英文谈谈你如何在学习之余放松身心，做到劳逸结合，你还希望得到父母或老师怎样的理解与支持。
内容提示：
What do you do to relax when you finish your homework？
Do you think you have a balanced lifestyle between study and play？
What do you think you should be allowed to do to have a meaningful relaxation？
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；篇幅 100 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As I entered the third year of junior high，I realized it's important to have a balanced lifestyle.
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期末培优 写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 榆社县期末）作为一名初中生，我们面临着多方面的人际关系，包括与父母的关系、与兄弟姐妹的关系、与老师的关系、与朋友的关系、与同学的关系等。良好的人际关系可以使我们精神愉悦，情绪饱满，充满信心，保持乐观的人生态度。学会与人相处，不仅要尊重他人，还要善于沟通，及时化解误会或矛盾……请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
the importance of getting on well with others
one of your experiences about it
what you have learned from this experience
要求：
词数不少于80；
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【考点】人际关系；说明文．
【答案】 As a middle school student，we have various interpersonal relationships，like those with parents，teachers，and friends.Getting on well with others is really important.It can make us feel happy，confident，and optimistic.Good relationships bring us comfort and joy.I remember once I had a fight with my best friend because of a a tough challenge.We both yelled at each other and stopped talking.Later，I realized it was my fault.I apologized to her sincerely.We talked and cleared up the misunderstanding.Our friendship became even stronger.
From this experience，I learned that communication is key.We should respect others and be brave to admit our mistakes.Only in this way can we build and keep good interpersonal relationships.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Getting on well with others is really important.
翻译：与他人和睦相处真的很重要。
分析：句子中应用了以动名词作主语的用法。
【高分句型二】
From this experience，I learned that communication is key.
翻译：从这次经历中，我学到了沟通是关键。
分析：句子中应用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】 As a middle school student，we have various interpersonal relationships，like those with parents，teachers，and friends.Getting on well with others is really important.【高分句型一】It can make us feel happy，confident，and optimistic.Good relationships bring us comfort and joy.（说明重要性）I remember once I had a fight with my best friend because of a tough challenge.We both yelled at each other and stopped talking.Later，I realized it was my fault.I apologized to her sincerely.We talked and cleared up the misunderstanding.Our friendship became even stronger.（描述经历）
From this experience，I learned that communication is key.【高分句型二】We should respect others and be brave to admit our mistakes.Only in this way can we build and keep good interpersonal relationships.（介绍学到了什么）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
2．（2024秋 祁县期末）勇气是一种力量，激励我们突破困境；勇气是一种精神，指引我们突破自我；勇气更是一种品质，帮助我们保持坚定。作为中学生的我们应该努力提升克服困难的勇气，以 "The Moment I Showed courage" 为主题展开交流，你作为一名中学生代表将进行发言。请用英语写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
● your idea about what courage is
● one of your stories about showing courage
● your understanding of showing courage
要求：
（1）词数不少于80；
（2）文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
The Moment I Showed Courage
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【考点】日常生活；演讲稿．
【答案】
The Moment I Showed courage
Dear teachers and fellow students，
Hello everyone!I'm honored to stand here and share my thoughts on "The Moment I Showed Courage".In my view，courage is like a shining light.It gives us the strength to break through difficulties and the spirit to go beyond ourselves.It's also a great quality that helps us stay firm.I remember once when I was in a math competition.I came across a really tough problem.Many students around me gave up.But I took a deep breath and told myself to be brave.I kept trying different methods.Finally，I solved it!That moment，I showed great courage.
Showing courage doesn't mean we're not afraid.It means facing fears and not giving up.Let's all try to be braver in our daily lives!
Thank you!
【分析】【高分句型一】
It's also a great quality that helps us stay firm.
翻译：这也是一种很好的品质，可以帮助我们保持坚定。
分析：句子中应用了that引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
Showing courage doesn't mean we're not afraid.
翻译：展现勇气并不代表我们无所畏惧。
分析：句子中应用了以动名词作主语的用法。
【解答】
The Moment I Showed courage
Dear teachers and fellow students，
Hello everyone!I'm honored to stand here and share my thoughts on "The Moment I Showed Courage".In my view，courage is like a shining light.It gives us the strength to break through difficulties and the spirit to go beyond ourselves.It's also a great quality that helps us stay firm.【高分句型一】（表达对勇气的想法）I remember once when I was in a math competition.I came across a really tough problem.Many students around me gave up.But I took a deep breath and told myself to be brave.I kept trying different methods.Finally，I solved it!That moment，I showed great courage.（介绍故事）
Showing courage doesn't mean we're not afraid.【高分句型二】It means facing fears and not giving up.Let's all try to be braver in our daily lives!（表达理解）
Thank you!
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
3．（2024秋 平定县期末）假如你是李华。你的英国笔友Chris即将来中国过春节，可他对中国文化了解不多。他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等，以及中国春节的传统风俗。请你用英语回复一封邮件，向他介绍你所知道的相关知识。
内容须包括：
（1）Chinese basic social manners；
（2）The traditional customs of Chinese Spring festival；
（3）The importance of Chinese Spring festival
要求：
（1）词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不能出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
（3）参考词汇仅供参考。
Word Bank：
table manners，shake hands，chopsticks，gift，polite，hang couplets，red packet，enjoy lion and dragon dance
Dear Chris，
I'm glad to know that you are going to China soon.I expect we can spend Spring Festival together.Now I'll tell you some basic Chinese social manners and the customs of Spring Festival.
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【考点】中华文化与传统；书信类．
【答案】Dear Chris，
I'm glad to know that you are going to China soon.I expect we can spend Spring Festival together.Now I'll tell you some basic Chinese social manners and the customs of Spring Festival.
In China，being polite is important.When meeting people，we often shake hands.If someone gives you a gift，you should say "thank you" and open it later.At table，we use chopsticks.Don't point at others with them.During Spring Festival，we hang couplets on doors.Children get red packets with money inside.We also enjoy lion and dragon dances.Spring Festival is a time for family to get together.It shows the importance of family in Chinese culture.
See you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
If someone gives you a gift，you should say "thank you" and open it later.
翻译：如果有人送你礼物，你应该说"谢谢"，然后再打开。
分析：句子中应用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Don't point at others with them.
翻译：不要用它们着别人。
分析：句子中应用了以don't+动词原形开头的祈使句。
【解答】Dear Chris，
I'm glad to know that you are going to China soon.I expect we can spend Spring Festival together.Now I'll tell you some basic Chinese social manners and the customs of Spring Festival.
In China，being polite is important.When meeting people，we often shake hands.If someone gives you a gift，you should say "thank you" and open it later.【高分句型一】At table，we use chopsticks.Don't point at others with them.【高分句型二】（介绍基本社交礼仪）During Spring Festival，we hang couplets on doors.Children get red packets with money inside.We also enjoy lion and dragon dances.（介绍传统习俗）Spring Festival is a time for family to get together.It shows the importance of family in Chinese culture.（说明重要性）
See you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
4．（2024秋 阳泉期末）日月其迈，岁律更新。回望2024年，我们取得了沉甸甸的收获。从广泛阅读、坚持运动中收获了知识和健康；从面对困难、迎难而上中收获了坚持和勇气；从志愿服务、社会实践中收获了温暖和真情……请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1 What do you think of your 2024？
2 Tell us one of the most meaningful experiences you had in 2024.
3 What have you learned from it？
要求：
1词数不少于80词，不计入总词数；
2文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
.
【考点】日常生活；说明文．
【答案】 My 2024 has been a year full of growth and meaningful experiences.The most valuable thing I have achieved is persistence.
Never will I forget the first time when I took part in the 3﹣kilometer running race last year.Although it was difficult for me to make it，I still decided to sign up because of all my friends' encouragement.In the beginning，I regarded it as a challenge，which also helped put me one step closer to my goal.So I made an effort to practice running every morning.No matter how hard the training was，I never thought of giving up halfway.In the end，I got a satisfactory result in the race and I also won my friends' praise at the same time.I knew it was my persistence that helped make a big difference.
From this experience，I've learned that persistence is the key to success.We can achieve our goal if we work persistently.I'm sure with the persistence I can achieve more in the year of 2025.
【分析】【高分句型一】
The most valuable thing I have achieved is persistence.
我所获得的最有价值的东西是坚持。省略that的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
We can achieve our goal if we work persistently.
如果我们坚持不懈地工作，我们就能实现我们的目标。If引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】 My 2024 has been a year full of growth and meaningful experiences.（2024年看法）The most valuable thing I have achieved is persistence.【高分句型一】
Never will I forget the first time when I took part in the 3﹣kilometer running race last year.Although it was difficult for me to make it，I still decided to sign up because of all my friends' encouragement.In the beginning，I regarded it as a challenge，which also helped put me one step closer to my goal.So I made an effort to practice running every morning.No matter how hard the training was，I never thought of giving up halfway.In the end，I got a satisfactory result in the race and I also won my friends' praise at the same time.I knew it was my persistence that helped make a big difference.（经历）
From this experience，I've learned that persistence is the key to success.We can achieve our goal if we work persistently.【高分句型二】I'm sure with the persistence I can achieve more in the year of 2025.（收获）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
5．（2024秋 斗门区期末）在中国传统文化中，书信不仅仅是信息的载体，更是情感与文化传承的重要桥梁。假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Jack非常喜欢中国并对中国传统节日很感兴趣。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一封信介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日（如：the Spring Festival，the Dragon Boat Festival，the Double Ninth Day，the Mid﹣Autumn Festival 等），并邀请他来中国体验这个节日。
作文要求：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack，
I hope this letter finds you well.I am glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.______
Best Wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；中华文化与传统．
【答案】Dear Jack，
I hope this letter finds you well.I am glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.Among all the festivals，I like the Dragon Boat Festival best because it is a good chance for families to get together.I always like family dinners.The festival falls on 5th day of the fifth month in the Chinese lunar calendar.People celebrate this festival in memory of Qu Yuan.On this day，we usually eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races by the river.The races are so exciting that I love them so much.By celebrating traditional festivals，we can pass on traditional culture.Why not join us in celebrating this important festival？
Best Wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
Among all the festivals，I like the Dragon Boat Festival best because it is a good chance for families to get together.在所有的节日中，我最喜欢端午节，因为这是家人团聚的好机会。
because引导原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
By celebrating traditional festivals，we can pass on traditional culture.通过庆祝传统节日，我们可以传承传统文化。
by doing sth通过做某事。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I hope this letter finds you well.I am glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.Among all the festivals，I like the Dragon Boat Festival best because it is a good chance for families to get together.【高分句型一】I always like family dinners.（节日名称及喜欢的原因）The festival falls on 5th day of the fifth month in the Chinese lunar calendar.People celebrate this festival in memory of Qu Yuan.On this day，we usually eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races by the river.The races are so exciting that I love them so much.（日期和活动）By celebrating traditional festivals，we can pass on traditional culture.【高分句型二】Why not join us in celebrating this important festival？（发出邀请）
Best Wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
6．（2024秋 石家庄期末）假定英语课上你们正在就"自豪中国（Proud China）"开展调查活动，下面是你的同伴张军的填写记录，请你根据记录内容写一篇短文，总结他对五个方面的关注（focus on）并进行简单的评价，然后就他需要注意的一个方面提出建议。
Proud China Name：Zhang Jun
Questions Yes No
Do you like using "Made in China"？ √
Do you often listen to the news？ √
Do you focus on China's great development？ √
Do you have dreams to serve our country？ √
Are you interested in Chinese traditional culture？ √
注意：
（1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（2）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Well done，Zhang Jun!I looked at your answers carefully.________
【考点】其他应用文写作；中华文化与传统．
【答案】 Well done，Zhang Jun!I looked at your answers carefully.I'm happy that you use four "Yes".You like using "Made in China".You always focus on our country's development.What's more，you have dreams to serve our country.Besides，you are also interested in Chinese traditional culture.These all show you are proud to be Chinese.But you don't often listen to the news.I think you should do it.From the news，we can get some important things happening in China and around the world.You could start by listening to a short news report every day.It will help you know more about different things and what's going on.You can also ask your parents or teachers to tell you some good ways to get news.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think you should do it.我觉得你应该去做。I think+宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
It will help you know more about different things and what's going on.它会帮助你更多地了解不同的事物和正在发生的事情。and表并列。
【解答】 Well done，Zhang Jun!I looked at your answers carefully.I'm happy that you use four "Yes".You like using "Made in China".You always focus on our country's development.What's more，you have dreams to serve our country.Besides，you are also interested in Chinese traditional culture.These all show you are proud to be Chinese.（评价）But you don't often listen to the news.I think you should do it.【高分句型一】From the news，we can get some important things happening in China and around the world.You could start by listening to a short news report every day.It will help you know more about different things and what's going on.【高分句型二】You can also ask your parents or teachers to tell you some good ways to get news.（建议）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
7．（2024秋 南昌期末）俗话说："国有国法，家有家规"，"没有规矩，不成方圆"。你有哪些家规呢？哪些你不赞同又应该如何改变呢？请根据下面提示，谈谈你的看法。
写作要点： Useful expressions：
1.What rule（s） do you have at home？ 2.Which rule（s） do you disagree with？ 3.How to make the rule（s） better？ I do not agree with… I think I should be allowed to... I would like to... I could…if I…
写作要求：
（1）短文应包含所有的写作要点，语句通顺，字迹工整，意思连贯；
（2）文中不能出现真实学校和人名；
（3）不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
In my family，there are several rules.________
【考点】说明文；家庭生活．
【答案】 In my family，there are several rules.For example，I can't go out with friends on school nights.I have to clean my room.I must finish homework first.
I do not agree with finishing homework first.I have studied all day at school and I feel bored and tired.I think I should be allowed to relax first.I would like to eat some snacks，listen to music or watch TV for a while，I think these can make me feel better and happier.
So，I think I should be allowed to relax before dinner.After that，I will go to do my homework.I could concentrate my mind on schoolwork if I get enough rest.
【分析】【高分句型一】
So，I think I should be allowed to relax before dinner.所以，我觉得应该允许我在晚饭前放松一下。I think+宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
I could concentrate my mind on schoolwork if I get enough rest.如果我得到足够的休息，我就能集中精力做功课。if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】 In my family，there are several rules.For example，I can't go out with friends on school nights.I have to clean my room.I must finish homework first.（家规）
I do not agree with finishing homework first.I have studied all day at school and I feel bored and tired.I think I should be allowed to relax first.I would like to eat some snacks，listen to music or watch TV for a while，I think these can make me feel better and happier.（不同意的）
So，I think I should be allowed to relax before dinner.【高分句型一】After that，I will go to do my homework.I could concentrate my mind on schoolwork if I get enough rest.【高分句型二】（建议）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
8．（2024秋 阳西县期末）在刚刚过去的几年，中国航天领域取得了举世瞩目的成就。为了激发同学们对航天事业的关注和自豪感，假设你校英语报打算举办主题为"My Space Dream"的征文大赛，请你根据下面的思维导图内容提示，用英语写一篇短文参赛。
注意：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。
My Space Dream
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【考点】其他应用文写作；计划与愿望．
【答案】
My Space Dream
I've been interested in space since I was a child.Whenever I look up at the stars，I'm filled with curiosity and longing.
In the past few years，China has made remarkable achievements in space.From the Chang'e lunar exploration project to the construction of the Tiangong space station，these great feats have shown China's strength in space exploration.
To realize my space dream，I will study hard，especially science and technology subjects.I'll also exercise regularly to keep fit.I believe that as long as I keep working hard，I can one day fly into space and explore the unknown.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I've been interested in space since I was a child.我从小就对太空很感兴趣。since 引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I believe that as long as I keep working hard，I can one day fly into space and explore the unknown.我相信，只要我继续努力，总有一天我能飞上太空，探索未知。I believe that+宾语从句。
【解答】
My Space Dream
I've been interested in space since I was a child. 【高分句型一】Whenever I look up at the stars，I'm filled with curiosity and longing.（从小就对太空很感兴趣）
In the past few years，China has made remarkable achievements in space.From the Chang'e lunar exploration project to the construction of the Tiangong space station，these great feats have shown China's strength in space exploration.（中国航天的成就）
To realize my space dream，I will study hard，especially science and technology subjects.I'll also exercise regularly to keep fit.I believe that as long as I keep working hard，I can one day fly into space and explore the unknown.【高分句型二】（如何实现）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
9．（2024秋 江汉区期末）假如你是李华，你做志愿活动的国际社区邀请你写一封英文倡议书，倡导大家"祥和过春节"。请你从春节的意义、庆祝方式、安全注意事项等内容方面完成倡议书。
内容提示：
What does Spring Festival mean to Chinese？
How do people usually celebrate Spring Festival？
Can you give some suggestions about a joyful and safe festival？
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【考点】倡议书；中华文化与传统．
【答案】
A Letter for a Joyful and Safe Spring Festival
Dear friends，
Spring Festival is a time for family reunion.It's also a time to be grateful for what we have and to look forward to the new year with hope.To celebrate it，there are a few things we can do.
We usually sweep out dust from our houses，prepare enough food and drinks and set off fireworks.We'll also get together to have delicious food and enjoy lion or dragon dances for good luck.
To have a joyful Spring Festival，it's important for us to keep safety in mind.Be careful to prevent accidents when setting off fireworks or cooking.Besides，when visiting friends and relatives，we should pay attention to traffic safety.We'd better store foods at the correct temperature to keep them fresh.Cook food properly to avoid illnesses.Don't let personal information out while sending red pockets.
Wish you a happy and safe Spring Festival.
Yours，
Chinese friends
【分析】【高分句型一】
We usually sweep out dust from our houses，prepare enough food and drinks and set off fireworks.我们通常打扫房子里的灰尘，准备足够的食物和饮料，放烟花。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
Besides，when visiting friends and relatives，we should pay attention to traffic safety.此外，在走亲访友时，我们应该注意交通安全。when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】
A Letter for a Joyful and Safe Spring Festival
Dear friends，
Spring Festival is a time for family reunion.It's also a time to be grateful for what we have and to look forward to the new year with hope.（春节的意义：春节是家人团聚的日子。这也是一个感激我们所拥有的，满怀希望地期待新的一年的时刻。）To celebrate it，there are a few things we can do.
We usually sweep out dust from our houses，prepare enough food and drinks and set off fireworks.【高分句型一】We'll also get together to have delicious food and enjoy lion or dragon dances for good luck. （春节的活动：我们通常打扫房子里的灰尘，准备足够的食物和饮料，放烟花。我们还会聚在一起吃美味的食物，欣赏舞狮或舞龙，以求好运。）
To have a joyful Spring Festival，it's important for us to keep safety in mind.Be careful to prevent accidents when setting off fireworks or cooking.Besides，when visiting friends and relatives，we should pay attention to traffic safety.【高分句型二】We'd better store foods at the correct temperature to keep them fresh.Cook food properly to avoid illnesses.Don't let personal information out while sending red pockets. （春节期间安全注意事项：要过一个愉快的春节，安全是很重要的。放烟花或做饭时要小心，以防意外。此外，在走亲访友时，我们应该注意交通安全。我们最好把食物储存在合适的温度下以保持新鲜。适当烹调食物以避免生病。发红包时不要泄露个人信息。）
Wish you a happy and safe Spring Festival. （表达美好祝愿作为结束语）
Yours，
Chinese friends
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
10．（2024秋 武昌区期末）在当今这个科技日新月异的时代，各种各样的发明不断涌现，像智能手机（the smartphone） 、计算机（the computer） 、机器人（the robot） 、互联网（the Internet） 、人工智能（AI）等，它们正深刻地改变着我们生活的方方面面，如学习方式、社交生活、休闲活动以及日常生活便利性等。请你以" Has Changed My Life a Lot"为题写一篇英语短文，探讨这一发明是如何改变你的生活的。
内容提示：
（1）What invention has changed your life a lot？
（2）What do you think of the invention？
（3）How does it change your life？
（4）Something more about this topic.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息：词数100词左右：部分标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
____ Has Changed My Life a Lot
The invention that has changed my life a lot is____
【考点】说明文；科普知识与现代技术．
【答案】
The Smartphone Has Changed My Life a Lot
The invention that has changed my life a lot is the smartphone.I think that it's amazing and very useful.It has made my life much easier and more convenient.
With a smartphone，I can study online anytime and anywhere.It helps me with my homework and lets me learn new things quickly.I can also chat with my friends and family through social media.We stay in touch more often now.In my free time，I enjoy playing games or watching videos on my smartphone.It's great for entertainment.Moreover，the smartphone helps me with navigation and finding information.It's like having a small computer in my pocket.I really can't imagine living without it now.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think that it's amazing and very useful.
翻译：我认为这是惊人的，非常有用的。
分析：句子中应用了that引导的宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
We stay in touch more often now.
翻译：我们现在更经常联系了。
分析：句子中应用了动词短语stay in touch，表示"保持联系"。
【解答】
The Smartphone Has Changed My Life a Lot
The invention that has changed my life a lot is the smartphone.（介绍发明物）I think that it's amazing and very useful.【高分句型一】It has made my life much easier and more convenient.（表达看法）
With a smartphone，I can study online anytime and anywhere.It helps me with my homework and lets me learn new things quickly.I can also chat with my friends and family through social media.We stay in touch more often now.【高分句型二】In my free time，I enjoy playing games or watching videos on my smartphone.It's great for entertainment.Moreover，the smartphone helps me with navigation and finding information.It's like having a small computer in my pocket.（介绍如何改变生活的）I really can't imagine living without it now.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
11．（2024秋 新乐市期末）根据《中国学生发展核心素养》的要求，一名真正优秀的中学生并不仅仅是考试取得高分，而应该是身心健康，德智体美劳全面发展，能通过所学知识去发现问题并解决问题。请你以" How to Be a Better Student"为题，写一篇短文。
How to Be a Better Student？
保持健康 1.坚持锻炼 2.帮助做家务 3.少玩游戏和手机
学会放松 1.多和父母交谈 2.不把自己逼得太紧 3.和他人友好相处
要求：
（1）所写内容包含所有要点，必须适当发挥。
（2）词数80 左右，短文开头已给出，不计总词数。
（3）文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。
How to Be a Better Student
It's necessary for teenagers to develop in an all﹣round way.Here are some ways to be a better student.
_______
【考点】说明文；人物介绍．
【答案】
How to Be a Better Student
It's necessary for teenagers to develop in an all﹣round way.Here are some ways to be a better student.
You need to keep doing exercise to keep fit.You should help your parents do chores at home.In your spare time，you can also do volunteer activities to help people in need instead of playing games and mobile phones.At the same time，you have to learn to relax.You have to talk to your parents often.And don't push yourself too hard.You should take up some hobbies.You also need to get along well with others.There are other ways that might help you with your studying.
I think if you can keep doing these，you'll be a better student.
【分析】【高分句型一】
You need to keep doing exercise to keep fit.你需要继续锻炼以保持健康。
need to do sth.需要干某事，固定用法。
【高分句型二】
I think if you can keep doing these，you'll be a better student.我认为如果你能继续这样做，你会成为一个更好的学生。
if如果，引导条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"的原则。
【解答】
How to Be a Better Student
It's necessary for teenagers to develop in an all﹣round way.Here are some ways to be a better student.（点题）
You need to keep doing exercise to keep fit.【高分句型一】You should help your parents do chores at home.In your spare time，you can also do volunteer activities to help people in need instead of playing games and mobile phones.（保持健康）At the same time，you have to learn to relax.You have to talk to your parents often.And don't push yourself too hard.You should take up some hobbies.You also need to get along well with others.（学会放松）There are other ways that might help you with your studying.
I think if you can keep doing these，you'll be a better student.【高分句型二】（总结）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
12．（2024秋 官渡区期末）提示：美其实无处不在，它不仅体现在自然山川之美、艺术创造之美，还蕴藏于日常生活、学习过程或个人成长之中。请以"The Beauty Around Us"为题，写一篇英语短文，叙述你感受到的美。
要求：
（1）紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；
（2）文中不得使用考生的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
（3）请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
The Beauty Around Us
______
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】 The Beauty Around Us
Beauty is everywhere around us.In our life，we can find a lot of beauty.And there are many beautiful people and things around us.
Two years ago，I experienced one thing.One day，on my way to school，I fell off my bike and hurt my leg.Just then a kind man came over to help me and called my parents.Thanks to his help，my parents came soon.I was sent to the hospital at once.In the hospital，the patient doctors and nurses helped me with my injured leg.
I think they are the beauty of my life.All of us should learn to be kind like them.When we see others in trouble，we should give them a hand and help them out.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
I think they are the beauty of my life.我认为它们是我生命中的美。
think后面跟一个宾语从句。
【高分句型二】：
When we see others in trouble，we should give them a hand and help them out.当我们看到别人有困难时，我们应该帮助他们。
when引导一个时间状语从句。
【解答】
The Beauty Around Us
Beauty is everywhere around us.In our life，we can find a lot of beauty.And there are many beautiful people and things around us.（阐述对于生活中的美的看法，为文章确定基调）
Two years ago，I experienced one thing.One day，on my way to school，I fell off my bike and hurt my leg.Just then a kind man came over to help me and called my parents.Thanks to his help，my parents came soon.I was sent to the hospital at once.In the hospital，the patient doctors and nurses helped me with my injured leg.（叙述在生活中发现美的故事）
I think they are the beauty of my life.【高分句型一】All of us should learn to be kind like them.When we see others in trouble，we should give them a hand and help them out.【高分句型二】（总结故事，升华立意）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
13．（2024秋 南昌期末）时间管理是一门学问。作为初三毕业班的学生，很多学生觉得自己的时间不够用，或者无法合理地分配时间。你可能也遇到过同样的问题。请你根据以下要点和要求，以"My ideas about managing time"为题，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊英语专栏投稿。
写作要点：
（1）What is your opinion on time management？
（2）How do you manage your time？
（3）What improvements do you think you still need to make？
要求：
（1）短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）短文中不得出现真实人名和地名；
（3）词数80～120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My ideas about managing time
It is pretty important for us to manage our time well.________
【考点】其他应用文写作；日常生活．
【答案】
My ideas about managing time
It is pretty important for us to manage our time well.Effective time management can help us make the most out of each day and lead to a more balanced life.
Personally，I believe planning ahead and setting priorities are essential.I usually start my day by making a to﹣do list，which helps me organize tasks and decide what needs immediate attention.Managing distractions is also key，so I often turn off my phone while studying.However，I realize that I still need to improve my time management skills by learning to say no to unnecessary commitments and overcoming procrastination.
With continuous practice and dedication，I hope to better manage my time in the future.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
Effective time management can help us make the most out of each day and lead to a more balanced life.有效的时间管理可以帮助我们充分利用每一天，过上更平衡的生活。
make sb do sth表示让某人做某事。
【高分句型二】：
However，I realize that I still need to improve my time management skills by learning to say no to unnecessary commitments and overcoming procrastination.然而，我意识到我仍然需要通过学会对不必要的承诺说不和克服拖延来提高我的时间管理技能。
need to do sth表示需要做某事。
【解答】
My ideas about managing time
It is pretty important for us to manage our time well.Effective time management can help us make the most out of each day and lead to a more balanced life.【高分句型一】（指出时间管理的重要性，引出个人观点）
Personally，I believe planning ahead and setting priorities are essential.I usually start my day by making a to﹣do list，which helps me organize tasks and decide what needs immediate attention.Managing distractions is also key，so I often turn off my phone while studying.However，I realize that I still need to improve my time management skills by learning to say no to unnecessary commitments and overcoming procrastination.【高分句型二】（介绍管理时间的方法，包括制定待办事项清单和管理干扰，以及不足之处）
With continuous practice and dedication，I hope to better manage my time in the future.（介绍自己管理时间的方法，包括制定待办事项清单和管理干扰，以及不足之处）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
14．（2024秋 红古区期末）为推动爱国主义教育"进课堂、进教材、进头脑"，近日，兰州市教科所组织了全市中小学师生"用英语讲好中国故事"活动。英语学习已经伴我们走过了很多年，请以"My English Study"为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的英文学习经历。
写作要求：（1）文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My English Study
I've learnt English for many years.________
【考点】说明文；学习．
【答案】
My English Study
I've learnt English for many years.I have been interested in learning English since I was a little child.It's my favorite subject.
However，I still have many problems in learning English.For example，I find it difficult for me to remember new words and I have trouble in listening and writing.
In order to improve my English，I asked my English teacher for help and she gave me some advice.First，write down the new words on the small notebook and read them as often as possible.In this way，I can remember more and more words.What's more，listening to more English songs is a good way to improve listening ability.Last but not least，reading more English articles can increase writing materials and keeping a diary a day is also necessary.
English is important to me.I will go on trying my best to learn it.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I have been interested in learning English since I was a little child.我从小就对学习英语很感兴趣。
since引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Last but not least，reading more English articles can increase writing materials and keeping a diary a day is also necessary.最后，阅读更多的英语文章可以增加写作材料，每天写日记也是必要的。
动名词作主语；并列句。
【解答】
My English Study
I've learnt English for many years.I have been interested in learning English since I was a little child.【高分句型一】It's my favorite subject.（态度）
However，I still have many problems in learning English.For example，I find it difficult for me to remember new words and I have trouble in listening and writing.（问题）
In order to improve my English，I asked my English teacher for help and she gave me some advice.First，write down the new words on the small notebook and read them as often as possible.In this way，I can remember more and more words.What's more，listening to more English songs is a good way to improve listening ability.Last but not least，reading more English articles can increase writing materials and keeping a diary a day is also necessary.【高分句型二】（提高英语的方式）
English is important to me.I will go on trying my best to learn it.（总结全文）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
15．（2025 硚口区模拟）"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy."这句话表达了劳逸结合、张弛有度才能提升工作或学习的效率。请根据以下内容提示，用英文谈谈你如何在学习之余放松身心，做到劳逸结合，你还希望得到父母或老师怎样的理解与支持。
内容提示：
What do you do to relax when you finish your homework？
Do you think you have a balanced lifestyle between study and play？
What do you think you should be allowed to do to have a meaningful relaxation？
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；篇幅 100 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As I entered the third year of junior high，I realized it's important to have a balanced lifestyle.
【考点】说明文；人际关系．
【答案】 As I entered the third year of junior high，I realized it's important to have a balanced lifestyle.Although I have to spend more time on schoolwork as the subjects get harder，I still need to play and relax to keep active and energetic after I finish my homework.I love listening to music that I can sing along with.Also，doing sports like playing basketball can make me happier and healthier.On weekends I prefer to watch a comedy with my friends when I'm tired from hard work or sad for dropping scores.
After meaningful relaxation，I can always feel less tired and focus more attention on my studies.So I try to balance my study and play，but sometimes I need to be understood by my parents and teachers.I think I should be allowed to manage my own life—I'm not a child after all.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Although I have to spend more time on schoolwork as the subjects get harder，I still need to play and relax to keep active and energetic after I finish my homework.
Although引导的让步状语从句：短语"need to do sth（需要做某事）"。
句意：虽然我不得不花更多的时间在功课上，因为科目越来越难，我仍然需要玩和放松，以保持活跃和精力充沛后，我完成了我的作业。
【高分句型二】
I love listening to music that I can sing along with.
That引导的定语从句：短语"love doing sth（喜欢做某事）"。
句意：我喜欢听我能跟着唱的音乐。
【解答】 As I entered the third year of junior high，I realized it's important to have a balanced lifestyle.Although I have to spend more time on schoolwork as the subjects get harder，I still need to play and relax to keep active and energetic after I finish my homework.【高分句型一】I love listening to music that I can sing along with.【高分句型二】Also，doing sports like playing basketball can make me happier and healthier.On weekends I prefer to watch a comedy with my friends when I'm tired from hard work or sad for dropping scores.（放松方式）
After meaningful relaxation，I can always feel less tired and focus more attention on my studies.So I try to balance my study and play，but sometimes I need to be understood by my parents and teachers.I think I should be allowed to manage my own life—I'm not a child after all.（观点）
【点评】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为"一般现在时"；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍完成作业后自己的放松方式是什么；
第二步，谈谈自己在学习和娱乐之间是否有一个平衡的生活方式；
第三步，谈谈是否需要得到父母或老师的理解，并说明原因。
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一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 榆社县期末）作为一名初中生，我们面临着多方面的人际关系，包括与父母的关系、与兄弟姐妹的关系、与老师的关系、与朋友的关系、与同学的关系等。良好的人际关系可以使我们精神愉悦，情绪饱满，充满信心，保持乐观的人生态度。学会与人相处，不仅要尊重他人，还要善于沟通，及时化解误会或矛盾……请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
the importance of getting on well with others
one of your experiences about it
what you have learned from this experience
要求：
词数不少于80；
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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2．（2024秋 祁县期末）勇气是一种力量，激励我们突破困境；勇气是一种精神，指引我们突破自我；勇气更是一种品质，帮助我们保持坚定。作为中学生的我们应该努力提升克服困难的勇气，以 "The Moment I Showed courage" 为主题展开交流，你作为一名中学生代表将进行发言。请用英语写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
● your idea about what courage is
● one of your stories about showing courage
● your understanding of showing courage
要求：
（1）词数不少于80；
（2）文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
The Moment I Showed Courage
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3．（2024秋 平定县期末）假如你是李华。你的英国笔友Chris即将来中国过春节，可他对中国文化了解不多。他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等，以及中国春节的传统风俗。请你用英语回复一封邮件，向他介绍你所知道的相关知识。
内容须包括：
（1）Chinese basic social manners；
（2）The traditional customs of Chinese Spring festival；
（3）The importance of Chinese Spring festival
要求：
（1）词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不能出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
（3）参考词汇仅供参考。
Word Bank：
table manners，shake hands，chopsticks，gift，polite，hang couplets，red packet，enjoy lion and dragon dance
Dear Chris，
I'm glad to know that you are going to China soon.I expect we can spend Spring Festival together.Now I'll tell you some basic Chinese social manners and the customs of Spring Festival.
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4．（2024秋 阳泉期末）日月其迈，岁律更新。回望2024年，我们取得了沉甸甸的收获。从广泛阅读、坚持运动中收获了知识和健康；从面对困难、迎难而上中收获了坚持和勇气；从志愿服务、社会实践中收获了温暖和真情……请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1 What do you think of your 2024？
2 Tell us one of the most meaningful experiences you had in 2024.
3 What have you learned from it？
要求：
1词数不少于80词，不计入总词数；
2文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
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5．（2024秋 斗门区期末）在中国传统文化中，书信不仅仅是信息的载体，更是情感与文化传承的重要桥梁。假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Jack非常喜欢中国并对中国传统节日很感兴趣。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一封信介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日（如：the Spring Festival，the Dragon Boat Festival，the Double Ninth Day，the Mid﹣Autumn Festival 等），并邀请他来中国体验这个节日。
作文要求：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack，
I hope this letter finds you well.I am glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.______
Best Wishes!
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Yours，
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6．（2024秋 石家庄期末）假定英语课上你们正在就"自豪中国（Proud China）"开展调查活动，下面是你的同伴张军的填写记录，请你根据记录内容写一篇短文，总结他对五个方面的关注（focus on）并进行简单的评价，然后就他需要注意的一个方面提出建议。
Proud China Name：Zhang Jun
Questions Yes No
Do you like using "Made in China"？ √
Do you often listen to the news？ √
Do you focus on China's great development？ √
Do you have dreams to serve our country？ √
Are you interested in Chinese traditional culture？ √
注意：
（1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（2）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Well done，Zhang Jun!I looked at your answers carefully.________
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7．（2024秋 南昌期末）俗话说："国有国法，家有家规"，"没有规矩，不成方圆"。你有哪些家规呢？哪些你不赞同又应该如何改变呢？请根据下面提示，谈谈你的看法。
写作要点： Useful expressions：
1.What rule（s） do you have at home？ 2.Which rule（s） do you disagree with？ 3.How to make the rule（s） better？ I do not agree with… I think I should be allowed to... I would like to... I could…if I…
写作要求：
（1）短文应包含所有的写作要点，语句通顺，字迹工整，意思连贯；
（2）文中不能出现真实学校和人名；
（3）不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
In my family，there are several rules.
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8．（2024秋 阳西县期末）在刚刚过去的几年，中国航天领域取得了举世瞩目的成就。为了激发同学们对航天事业的关注和自豪感，假设你校英语报打算举办主题为"My Space Dream"的征文大赛，请你根据下面的思维导图内容提示，用英语写一篇短文参赛。
注意：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。
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9．（2024秋 江汉区期末）假如你是李华，你做志愿活动的国际社区邀请你写一封英文倡议书，倡导大家"祥和过春节"。请你从春节的意义、庆祝方式、安全注意事项等内容方面完成倡议书。
内容提示：
What does Spring Festival mean to Chinese？
How do people usually celebrate Spring Festival？
Can you give some suggestions about a joyful and safe festival？
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；
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10．（2024秋 武昌区期末）在当今这个科技日新月异的时代，各种各样的发明不断涌现，像智能手机（the smartphone） 、计算机（the computer） 、机器人（the robot） 、互联网（the Internet） 、人工智能（AI）等，它们正深刻地改变着我们生活的方方面面，如学习方式、社交生活、休闲活动以及日常生活便利性等。请你以" Has Changed My Life a Lot"为题写一篇英语短文，探讨这一发明是如何改变你的生活的。
内容提示：
（1）What invention has changed your life a lot？
（2）What do you think of the invention？
（3）How does it change your life？
（4）Something more about this topic.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息：词数100词左右：部分标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
____ Has Changed My Life a Lot
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11．（2024秋 新乐市期末）根据《中国学生发展核心素养》的要求，一名真正优秀的中学生并不仅仅是考试取得高分，而应该是身心健康，德智体美劳全面发展，能通过所学知识去发现问题并解决问题。请你以" How to Be a Better Student"为题，写一篇短文。
How to Be a Better Student？
保持健康 1.坚持锻炼 2.帮助做家务 3.少玩游戏和手机
学会放松 1.多和父母交谈 2.不把自己逼得太紧 3.和他人友好相处
要求：
（1）所写内容包含所有要点，必须适当发挥。
（2）词数80 左右，短文开头已给出，不计总词数。
（3）文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。
How to Be a Better Student
It's necessary for teenagers to develop in an all﹣round way.Here are some ways to be a better student.
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12．（2024秋 官渡区期末）提示：美其实无处不在，它不仅体现在自然山川之美、艺术创造之美，还蕴藏于日常生活、学习过程或个人成长之中。请以"The Beauty Around Us"为题，写一篇英语短文，叙述你感受到的美。
要求：
（1）紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；
（2）文中不得使用考生的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
The Beauty Around Us
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13．（2024秋 南昌期末）时间管理是一门学问。作为初三毕业班的学生，很多学生觉得自己的时间不够用，或者无法合理地分配时间。你可能也遇到过同样的问题。请你根据以下要点和要求，以"My ideas about managing time"为题，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊英语专栏投稿。
写作要点：
（1）What is your opinion on time management？
（2）How do you manage your time？
（3）What improvements do you think you still need to make？
要求：
（1）短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）短文中不得出现真实人名和地名；
（3）词数80～120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My ideas about managing time
It is pretty important for us to manage our time well
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14．（2024秋 红古区期末）为推动爱国主义教育"进课堂、进教材、进头脑"，近日，兰州市教科所组织了全市中小学师生"用英语讲好中国故事"活动。英语学习已经伴我们走过了很多年，请以"My English Study"为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的英文学习经历。
写作要求：（1）文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My English Study
I've learnt English for many years.
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15．（2025 硚口区模拟）"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy."这句话表达了劳逸结合、张弛有度才能提升工作或学习的效率。请根据以下内容提示，用英文谈谈你如何在学习之余放松身心，做到劳逸结合，你还希望得到父母或老师怎样的理解与支持。
内容提示：
What do you do to relax when you finish your homework？
Do you think you have a balanced lifestyle between study and play？
What do you think you should be allowed to do to have a meaningful relaxation？
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；篇幅 100 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As I entered the third year of junior high，I realized it's important to have a balanced lifestyle.
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期末培优 写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 榆社县期末）作为一名初中生，我们面临着多方面的人际关系，包括与父母的关系、与兄弟姐妹的关系、与老师的关系、与朋友的关系、与同学的关系等。良好的人际关系可以使我们精神愉悦，情绪饱满，充满信心，保持乐观的人生态度。学会与人相处，不仅要尊重他人，还要善于沟通，及时化解误会或矛盾……请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
the importance of getting on well with others
one of your experiences about it
what you have learned from this experience
要求：
词数不少于80；
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【考点】人际关系；说明文．
【答案】 As a middle school student，we have various interpersonal relationships，like those with parents，teachers，and friends.Getting on well with others is really important.It can make us feel happy，confident，and optimistic.Good relationships bring us comfort and joy.I remember once I had a fight with my best friend because of a a tough challenge.We both yelled at each other and stopped talking.Later，I realized it was my fault.I apologized to her sincerely.We talked and cleared up the misunderstanding.Our friendship became even stronger.
From this experience，I learned that communication is key.We should respect others and be brave to admit our mistakes.Only in this way can we build and keep good interpersonal relationships.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Getting on well with others is really important.
翻译：与他人和睦相处真的很重要。
分析：句子中应用了以动名词作主语的用法。
【高分句型二】
From this experience，I learned that communication is key.
翻译：从这次经历中，我学到了沟通是关键。
分析：句子中应用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】 As a middle school student，we have various interpersonal relationships，like those with parents，teachers，and friends.Getting on well with others is really important.【高分句型一】It can make us feel happy，confident，and optimistic.Good relationships bring us comfort and joy.（说明重要性）I remember once I had a fight with my best friend because of a tough challenge.We both yelled at each other and stopped talking.Later，I realized it was my fault.I apologized to her sincerely.We talked and cleared up the misunderstanding.Our friendship became even stronger.（描述经历）
From this experience，I learned that communication is key.【高分句型二】We should respect others and be brave to admit our mistakes.Only in this way can we build and keep good interpersonal relationships.（介绍学到了什么）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
2．（2024秋 祁县期末）勇气是一种力量，激励我们突破困境；勇气是一种精神，指引我们突破自我；勇气更是一种品质，帮助我们保持坚定。作为中学生的我们应该努力提升克服困难的勇气，以 "The Moment I Showed courage" 为主题展开交流，你作为一名中学生代表将进行发言。请用英语写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
● your idea about what courage is
● one of your stories about showing courage
● your understanding of showing courage
要求：
（1）词数不少于80；
（2）文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
The Moment I Showed Courage
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【考点】日常生活；演讲稿．
【答案】
The Moment I Showed courage
Dear teachers and fellow students，
Hello everyone!I'm honored to stand here and share my thoughts on "The Moment I Showed Courage".In my view，courage is like a shining light.It gives us the strength to break through difficulties and the spirit to go beyond ourselves.It's also a great quality that helps us stay firm.I remember once when I was in a math competition.I came across a really tough problem.Many students around me gave up.But I took a deep breath and told myself to be brave.I kept trying different methods.Finally，I solved it!That moment，I showed great courage.
Showing courage doesn't mean we're not afraid.It means facing fears and not giving up.Let's all try to be braver in our daily lives!
Thank you!
【分析】【高分句型一】
It's also a great quality that helps us stay firm.
翻译：这也是一种很好的品质，可以帮助我们保持坚定。
分析：句子中应用了that引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
Showing courage doesn't mean we're not afraid.
翻译：展现勇气并不代表我们无所畏惧。
分析：句子中应用了以动名词作主语的用法。
【解答】
The Moment I Showed courage
Dear teachers and fellow students，
Hello everyone!I'm honored to stand here and share my thoughts on "The Moment I Showed Courage".In my view，courage is like a shining light.It gives us the strength to break through difficulties and the spirit to go beyond ourselves.It's also a great quality that helps us stay firm.【高分句型一】（表达对勇气的想法）I remember once when I was in a math competition.I came across a really tough problem.Many students around me gave up.But I took a deep breath and told myself to be brave.I kept trying different methods.Finally，I solved it!That moment，I showed great courage.（介绍故事）
Showing courage doesn't mean we're not afraid.【高分句型二】It means facing fears and not giving up.Let's all try to be braver in our daily lives!（表达理解）
Thank you!
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
3．（2024秋 平定县期末）假如你是李华。你的英国笔友Chris即将来中国过春节，可他对中国文化了解不多。他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等，以及中国春节的传统风俗。请你用英语回复一封邮件，向他介绍你所知道的相关知识。
内容须包括：
（1）Chinese basic social manners；
（2）The traditional customs of Chinese Spring festival；
（3）The importance of Chinese Spring festival
要求：
（1）词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不能出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
（3）参考词汇仅供参考。
Word Bank：
table manners，shake hands，chopsticks，gift，polite，hang couplets，red packet，enjoy lion and dragon dance
Dear Chris，
I'm glad to know that you are going to China soon.I expect we can spend Spring Festival together.Now I'll tell you some basic Chinese social manners and the customs of Spring Festival.
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【考点】中华文化与传统；书信类．
【答案】Dear Chris，
I'm glad to know that you are going to China soon.I expect we can spend Spring Festival together.Now I'll tell you some basic Chinese social manners and the customs of Spring Festival.
In China，being polite is important.When meeting people，we often shake hands.If someone gives you a gift，you should say "thank you" and open it later.At table，we use chopsticks.Don't point at others with them.During Spring Festival，we hang couplets on doors.Children get red packets with money inside.We also enjoy lion and dragon dances.Spring Festival is a time for family to get together.It shows the importance of family in Chinese culture.
See you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
If someone gives you a gift，you should say "thank you" and open it later.
翻译：如果有人送你礼物，你应该说"谢谢"，然后再打开。
分析：句子中应用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Don't point at others with them.
翻译：不要用它们着别人。
分析：句子中应用了以don't+动词原形开头的祈使句。
【解答】Dear Chris，
I'm glad to know that you are going to China soon.I expect we can spend Spring Festival together.Now I'll tell you some basic Chinese social manners and the customs of Spring Festival.
In China，being polite is important.When meeting people，we often shake hands.If someone gives you a gift，you should say "thank you" and open it later.【高分句型一】At table，we use chopsticks.Don't point at others with them.【高分句型二】（介绍基本社交礼仪）During Spring Festival，we hang couplets on doors.Children get red packets with money inside.We also enjoy lion and dragon dances.（介绍传统习俗）Spring Festival is a time for family to get together.It shows the importance of family in Chinese culture.（说明重要性）
See you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
4．（2024秋 阳泉期末）日月其迈，岁律更新。回望2024年，我们取得了沉甸甸的收获。从广泛阅读、坚持运动中收获了知识和健康；从面对困难、迎难而上中收获了坚持和勇气；从志愿服务、社会实践中收获了温暖和真情……请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1 What do you think of your 2024？
2 Tell us one of the most meaningful experiences you had in 2024.
3 What have you learned from it？
要求：
1词数不少于80词，不计入总词数；
2文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
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【考点】日常生活；说明文．
【答案】 My 2024 has been a year full of growth and meaningful experiences.The most valuable thing I have achieved is persistence.
Never will I forget the first time when I took part in the 3﹣kilometer running race last year.Although it was difficult for me to make it，I still decided to sign up because of all my friends' encouragement.In the beginning，I regarded it as a challenge，which also helped put me one step closer to my goal.So I made an effort to practice running every morning.No matter how hard the training was，I never thought of giving up halfway.In the end，I got a satisfactory result in the race and I also won my friends' praise at the same time.I knew it was my persistence that helped make a big difference.
From this experience，I've learned that persistence is the key to success.We can achieve our goal if we work persistently.I'm sure with the persistence I can achieve more in the year of 2025.
【分析】【高分句型一】
The most valuable thing I have achieved is persistence.
我所获得的最有价值的东西是坚持。省略that的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
We can achieve our goal if we work persistently.
如果我们坚持不懈地工作，我们就能实现我们的目标。If引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】 My 2024 has been a year full of growth and meaningful experiences.（2024年看法）The most valuable thing I have achieved is persistence.【高分句型一】
Never will I forget the first time when I took part in the 3﹣kilometer running race last year.Although it was difficult for me to make it，I still decided to sign up because of all my friends' encouragement.In the beginning，I regarded it as a challenge，which also helped put me one step closer to my goal.So I made an effort to practice running every morning.No matter how hard the training was，I never thought of giving up halfway.In the end，I got a satisfactory result in the race and I also won my friends' praise at the same time.I knew it was my persistence that helped make a big difference.（经历）
From this experience，I've learned that persistence is the key to success.We can achieve our goal if we work persistently.【高分句型二】I'm sure with the persistence I can achieve more in the year of 2025.（收获）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
5．（2024秋 斗门区期末）在中国传统文化中，书信不仅仅是信息的载体，更是情感与文化传承的重要桥梁。假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Jack非常喜欢中国并对中国传统节日很感兴趣。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一封信介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日（如：the Spring Festival，the Dragon Boat Festival，the Double Ninth Day，the Mid﹣Autumn Festival 等），并邀请他来中国体验这个节日。
作文要求：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack，
I hope this letter finds you well.I am glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.______
Best Wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；中华文化与传统．
【答案】Dear Jack，
I hope this letter finds you well.I am glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.Among all the festivals，I like the Dragon Boat Festival best because it is a good chance for families to get together.I always like family dinners.The festival falls on 5th day of the fifth month in the Chinese lunar calendar.People celebrate this festival in memory of Qu Yuan.On this day，we usually eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races by the river.The races are so exciting that I love them so much.By celebrating traditional festivals，we can pass on traditional culture.Why not join us in celebrating this important festival？
Best Wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
Among all the festivals，I like the Dragon Boat Festival best because it is a good chance for families to get together.在所有的节日中，我最喜欢端午节，因为这是家人团聚的好机会。
because引导原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
By celebrating traditional festivals，we can pass on traditional culture.通过庆祝传统节日，我们可以传承传统文化。
by doing sth通过做某事。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I hope this letter finds you well.I am glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.Among all the festivals，I like the Dragon Boat Festival best because it is a good chance for families to get together.【高分句型一】I always like family dinners.（节日名称及喜欢的原因）The festival falls on 5th day of the fifth month in the Chinese lunar calendar.People celebrate this festival in memory of Qu Yuan.On this day，we usually eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races by the river.The races are so exciting that I love them so much.（日期和活动）By celebrating traditional festivals，we can pass on traditional culture.【高分句型二】Why not join us in celebrating this important festival？（发出邀请）
Best Wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
6．（2024秋 石家庄期末）假定英语课上你们正在就"自豪中国（Proud China）"开展调查活动，下面是你的同伴张军的填写记录，请你根据记录内容写一篇短文，总结他对五个方面的关注（focus on）并进行简单的评价，然后就他需要注意的一个方面提出建议。
Proud China Name：Zhang Jun
Questions Yes No
Do you like using "Made in China"？ √
Do you often listen to the news？ √
Do you focus on China's great development？ √
Do you have dreams to serve our country？ √
Are you interested in Chinese traditional culture？ √
注意：
（1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（2）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Well done，Zhang Jun!I looked at your answers carefully.________
【考点】其他应用文写作；中华文化与传统．
【答案】 Well done，Zhang Jun!I looked at your answers carefully.I'm happy that you use four "Yes".You like using "Made in China".You always focus on our country's development.What's more，you have dreams to serve our country.Besides，you are also interested in Chinese traditional culture.These all show you are proud to be Chinese.But you don't often listen to the news.I think you should do it.From the news，we can get some important things happening in China and around the world.You could start by listening to a short news report every day.It will help you know more about different things and what's going on.You can also ask your parents or teachers to tell you some good ways to get news.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think you should do it.我觉得你应该去做。I think+宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
It will help you know more about different things and what's going on.它会帮助你更多地了解不同的事物和正在发生的事情。and表并列。
【解答】 Well done，Zhang Jun!I looked at your answers carefully.I'm happy that you use four "Yes".You like using "Made in China".You always focus on our country's development.What's more，you have dreams to serve our country.Besides，you are also interested in Chinese traditional culture.These all show you are proud to be Chinese.（评价）But you don't often listen to the news.I think you should do it.【高分句型一】From the news，we can get some important things happening in China and around the world.You could start by listening to a short news report every day.It will help you know more about different things and what's going on.【高分句型二】You can also ask your parents or teachers to tell you some good ways to get news.（建议）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
7．（2024秋 南昌期末）俗话说："国有国法，家有家规"，"没有规矩，不成方圆"。你有哪些家规呢？哪些你不赞同又应该如何改变呢？请根据下面提示，谈谈你的看法。
写作要点： Useful expressions：
1.What rule（s） do you have at home？ 2.Which rule（s） do you disagree with？ 3.How to make the rule（s） better？ I do not agree with… I think I should be allowed to... I would like to... I could…if I…
写作要求：
（1）短文应包含所有的写作要点，语句通顺，字迹工整，意思连贯；
（2）文中不能出现真实学校和人名；
（3）不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
In my family，there are several rules.________
【考点】说明文；家庭生活．
【答案】 In my family，there are several rules.For example，I can't go out with friends on school nights.I have to clean my room.I must finish homework first.
I do not agree with finishing homework first.I have studied all day at school and I feel bored and tired.I think I should be allowed to relax first.I would like to eat some snacks，listen to music or watch TV for a while，I think these can make me feel better and happier.
So，I think I should be allowed to relax before dinner.After that，I will go to do my homework.I could concentrate my mind on schoolwork if I get enough rest.
【分析】【高分句型一】
So，I think I should be allowed to relax before dinner.所以，我觉得应该允许我在晚饭前放松一下。I think+宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
I could concentrate my mind on schoolwork if I get enough rest.如果我得到足够的休息，我就能集中精力做功课。if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】 In my family，there are several rules.For example，I can't go out with friends on school nights.I have to clean my room.I must finish homework first.（家规）
I do not agree with finishing homework first.I have studied all day at school and I feel bored and tired.I think I should be allowed to relax first.I would like to eat some snacks，listen to music or watch TV for a while，I think these can make me feel better and happier.（不同意的）
So，I think I should be allowed to relax before dinner.【高分句型一】After that，I will go to do my homework.I could concentrate my mind on schoolwork if I get enough rest.【高分句型二】（建议）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
8．（2024秋 阳西县期末）在刚刚过去的几年，中国航天领域取得了举世瞩目的成就。为了激发同学们对航天事业的关注和自豪感，假设你校英语报打算举办主题为"My Space Dream"的征文大赛，请你根据下面的思维导图内容提示，用英语写一篇短文参赛。
注意：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。
My Space Dream
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【考点】其他应用文写作；计划与愿望．
【答案】
My Space Dream
I've been interested in space since I was a child.Whenever I look up at the stars，I'm filled with curiosity and longing.
In the past few years，China has made remarkable achievements in space.From the Chang'e lunar exploration project to the construction of the Tiangong space station，these great feats have shown China's strength in space exploration.
To realize my space dream，I will study hard，especially science and technology subjects.I'll also exercise regularly to keep fit.I believe that as long as I keep working hard，I can one day fly into space and explore the unknown.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I've been interested in space since I was a child.我从小就对太空很感兴趣。since 引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I believe that as long as I keep working hard，I can one day fly into space and explore the unknown.我相信，只要我继续努力，总有一天我能飞上太空，探索未知。I believe that+宾语从句。
【解答】
My Space Dream
I've been interested in space since I was a child. 【高分句型一】Whenever I look up at the stars，I'm filled with curiosity and longing.（从小就对太空很感兴趣）
In the past few years，China has made remarkable achievements in space.From the Chang'e lunar exploration project to the construction of the Tiangong space station，these great feats have shown China's strength in space exploration.（中国航天的成就）
To realize my space dream，I will study hard，especially science and technology subjects.I'll also exercise regularly to keep fit.I believe that as long as I keep working hard，I can one day fly into space and explore the unknown.【高分句型二】（如何实现）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
9．（2024秋 江汉区期末）假如你是李华，你做志愿活动的国际社区邀请你写一封英文倡议书，倡导大家"祥和过春节"。请你从春节的意义、庆祝方式、安全注意事项等内容方面完成倡议书。
内容提示：
What does Spring Festival mean to Chinese？
How do people usually celebrate Spring Festival？
Can you give some suggestions about a joyful and safe festival？
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【考点】倡议书；中华文化与传统．
【答案】
A Letter for a Joyful and Safe Spring Festival
Dear friends，
Spring Festival is a time for family reunion.It's also a time to be grateful for what we have and to look forward to the new year with hope.To celebrate it，there are a few things we can do.
We usually sweep out dust from our houses，prepare enough food and drinks and set off fireworks.We'll also get together to have delicious food and enjoy lion or dragon dances for good luck.
To have a joyful Spring Festival，it's important for us to keep safety in mind.Be careful to prevent accidents when setting off fireworks or cooking.Besides，when visiting friends and relatives，we should pay attention to traffic safety.We'd better store foods at the correct temperature to keep them fresh.Cook food properly to avoid illnesses.Don't let personal information out while sending red pockets.
Wish you a happy and safe Spring Festival.
Yours，
Chinese friends
【分析】【高分句型一】
We usually sweep out dust from our houses，prepare enough food and drinks and set off fireworks.我们通常打扫房子里的灰尘，准备足够的食物和饮料，放烟花。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
Besides，when visiting friends and relatives，we should pay attention to traffic safety.此外，在走亲访友时，我们应该注意交通安全。when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】
A Letter for a Joyful and Safe Spring Festival
Dear friends，
Spring Festival is a time for family reunion.It's also a time to be grateful for what we have and to look forward to the new year with hope.（春节的意义：春节是家人团聚的日子。这也是一个感激我们所拥有的，满怀希望地期待新的一年的时刻。）To celebrate it，there are a few things we can do.
We usually sweep out dust from our houses，prepare enough food and drinks and set off fireworks.【高分句型一】We'll also get together to have delicious food and enjoy lion or dragon dances for good luck. （春节的活动：我们通常打扫房子里的灰尘，准备足够的食物和饮料，放烟花。我们还会聚在一起吃美味的食物，欣赏舞狮或舞龙，以求好运。）
To have a joyful Spring Festival，it's important for us to keep safety in mind.Be careful to prevent accidents when setting off fireworks or cooking.Besides，when visiting friends and relatives，we should pay attention to traffic safety.【高分句型二】We'd better store foods at the correct temperature to keep them fresh.Cook food properly to avoid illnesses.Don't let personal information out while sending red pockets. （春节期间安全注意事项：要过一个愉快的春节，安全是很重要的。放烟花或做饭时要小心，以防意外。此外，在走亲访友时，我们应该注意交通安全。我们最好把食物储存在合适的温度下以保持新鲜。适当烹调食物以避免生病。发红包时不要泄露个人信息。）
Wish you a happy and safe Spring Festival. （表达美好祝愿作为结束语）
Yours，
Chinese friends
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
10．（2024秋 武昌区期末）在当今这个科技日新月异的时代，各种各样的发明不断涌现，像智能手机（the smartphone） 、计算机（the computer） 、机器人（the robot） 、互联网（the Internet） 、人工智能（AI）等，它们正深刻地改变着我们生活的方方面面，如学习方式、社交生活、休闲活动以及日常生活便利性等。请你以" Has Changed My Life a Lot"为题写一篇英语短文，探讨这一发明是如何改变你的生活的。
内容提示：
（1）What invention has changed your life a lot？
（2）What do you think of the invention？
（3）How does it change your life？
（4）Something more about this topic.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息：词数100词左右：部分标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
____ Has Changed My Life a Lot
The invention that has changed my life a lot is____
【考点】说明文；科普知识与现代技术．
【答案】
The Smartphone Has Changed My Life a Lot
The invention that has changed my life a lot is the smartphone.I think that it's amazing and very useful.It has made my life much easier and more convenient.
With a smartphone，I can study online anytime and anywhere.It helps me with my homework and lets me learn new things quickly.I can also chat with my friends and family through social media.We stay in touch more often now.In my free time，I enjoy playing games or watching videos on my smartphone.It's great for entertainment.Moreover，the smartphone helps me with navigation and finding information.It's like having a small computer in my pocket.I really can't imagine living without it now.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think that it's amazing and very useful.
翻译：我认为这是惊人的，非常有用的。
分析：句子中应用了that引导的宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
We stay in touch more often now.
翻译：我们现在更经常联系了。
分析：句子中应用了动词短语stay in touch，表示"保持联系"。
【解答】
The Smartphone Has Changed My Life a Lot
The invention that has changed my life a lot is the smartphone.（介绍发明物）I think that it's amazing and very useful.【高分句型一】It has made my life much easier and more convenient.（表达看法）
With a smartphone，I can study online anytime and anywhere.It helps me with my homework and lets me learn new things quickly.I can also chat with my friends and family through social media.We stay in touch more often now.【高分句型二】In my free time，I enjoy playing games or watching videos on my smartphone.It's great for entertainment.Moreover，the smartphone helps me with navigation and finding information.It's like having a small computer in my pocket.（介绍如何改变生活的）I really can't imagine living without it now.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
11．（2024秋 新乐市期末）根据《中国学生发展核心素养》的要求，一名真正优秀的中学生并不仅仅是考试取得高分，而应该是身心健康，德智体美劳全面发展，能通过所学知识去发现问题并解决问题。请你以" How to Be a Better Student"为题，写一篇短文。
How to Be a Better Student？
保持健康 1.坚持锻炼 2.帮助做家务 3.少玩游戏和手机
学会放松 1.多和父母交谈 2.不把自己逼得太紧 3.和他人友好相处
要求：
（1）所写内容包含所有要点，必须适当发挥。
（2）词数80 左右，短文开头已给出，不计总词数。
（3）文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。
How to Be a Better Student
It's necessary for teenagers to develop in an all﹣round way.Here are some ways to be a better student.
_______
【考点】说明文；人物介绍．
【答案】
How to Be a Better Student
It's necessary for teenagers to develop in an all﹣round way.Here are some ways to be a better student.
You need to keep doing exercise to keep fit.You should help your parents do chores at home.In your spare time，you can also do volunteer activities to help people in need instead of playing games and mobile phones.At the same time，you have to learn to relax.You have to talk to your parents often.And don't push yourself too hard.You should take up some hobbies.You also need to get along well with others.There are other ways that might help you with your studying.
I think if you can keep doing these，you'll be a better student.
【分析】【高分句型一】
You need to keep doing exercise to keep fit.你需要继续锻炼以保持健康。
need to do sth.需要干某事，固定用法。
【高分句型二】
I think if you can keep doing these，you'll be a better student.我认为如果你能继续这样做，你会成为一个更好的学生。
if如果，引导条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"的原则。
【解答】
How to Be a Better Student
It's necessary for teenagers to develop in an all﹣round way.Here are some ways to be a better student.（点题）
You need to keep doing exercise to keep fit.【高分句型一】You should help your parents do chores at home.In your spare time，you can also do volunteer activities to help people in need instead of playing games and mobile phones.（保持健康）At the same time，you have to learn to relax.You have to talk to your parents often.And don't push yourself too hard.You should take up some hobbies.You also need to get along well with others.（学会放松）There are other ways that might help you with your studying.
I think if you can keep doing these，you'll be a better student.【高分句型二】（总结）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
12．（2024秋 官渡区期末）提示：美其实无处不在，它不仅体现在自然山川之美、艺术创造之美，还蕴藏于日常生活、学习过程或个人成长之中。请以"The Beauty Around Us"为题，写一篇英语短文，叙述你感受到的美。
要求：
（1）紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；
（2）文中不得使用考生的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
（3）请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
The Beauty Around Us
______
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】 The Beauty Around Us
Beauty is everywhere around us.In our life，we can find a lot of beauty.And there are many beautiful people and things around us.
Two years ago，I experienced one thing.One day，on my way to school，I fell off my bike and hurt my leg.Just then a kind man came over to help me and called my parents.Thanks to his help，my parents came soon.I was sent to the hospital at once.In the hospital，the patient doctors and nurses helped me with my injured leg.
I think they are the beauty of my life.All of us should learn to be kind like them.When we see others in trouble，we should give them a hand and help them out.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
I think they are the beauty of my life.我认为它们是我生命中的美。
think后面跟一个宾语从句。
【高分句型二】：
When we see others in trouble，we should give them a hand and help them out.当我们看到别人有困难时，我们应该帮助他们。
when引导一个时间状语从句。
【解答】
The Beauty Around Us
Beauty is everywhere around us.In our life，we can find a lot of beauty.And there are many beautiful people and things around us.（阐述对于生活中的美的看法，为文章确定基调）
Two years ago，I experienced one thing.One day，on my way to school，I fell off my bike and hurt my leg.Just then a kind man came over to help me and called my parents.Thanks to his help，my parents came soon.I was sent to the hospital at once.In the hospital，the patient doctors and nurses helped me with my injured leg.（叙述在生活中发现美的故事）
I think they are the beauty of my life.【高分句型一】All of us should learn to be kind like them.When we see others in trouble，we should give them a hand and help them out.【高分句型二】（总结故事，升华立意）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
13．（2024秋 南昌期末）时间管理是一门学问。作为初三毕业班的学生，很多学生觉得自己的时间不够用，或者无法合理地分配时间。你可能也遇到过同样的问题。请你根据以下要点和要求，以"My ideas about managing time"为题，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊英语专栏投稿。
写作要点：
（1）What is your opinion on time management？
（2）How do you manage your time？
（3）What improvements do you think you still need to make？
要求：
（1）短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）短文中不得出现真实人名和地名；
（3）词数80～120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My ideas about managing time
It is pretty important for us to manage our time well.________
【考点】其他应用文写作；日常生活．
【答案】
My ideas about managing time
It is pretty important for us to manage our time well.Effective time management can help us make the most out of each day and lead to a more balanced life.
Personally，I believe planning ahead and setting priorities are essential.I usually start my day by making a to﹣do list，which helps me organize tasks and decide what needs immediate attention.Managing distractions is also key，so I often turn off my phone while studying.However，I realize that I still need to improve my time management skills by learning to say no to unnecessary commitments and overcoming procrastination.
With continuous practice and dedication，I hope to better manage my time in the future.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
Effective time management can help us make the most out of each day and lead to a more balanced life.有效的时间管理可以帮助我们充分利用每一天，过上更平衡的生活。
make sb do sth表示让某人做某事。
【高分句型二】：
However，I realize that I still need to improve my time management skills by learning to say no to unnecessary commitments and overcoming procrastination.然而，我意识到我仍然需要通过学会对不必要的承诺说不和克服拖延来提高我的时间管理技能。
need to do sth表示需要做某事。
【解答】
My ideas about managing time
It is pretty important for us to manage our time well.Effective time management can help us make the most out of each day and lead to a more balanced life.【高分句型一】（指出时间管理的重要性，引出个人观点）
Personally，I believe planning ahead and setting priorities are essential.I usually start my day by making a to﹣do list，which helps me organize tasks and decide what needs immediate attention.Managing distractions is also key，so I often turn off my phone while studying.However，I realize that I still need to improve my time management skills by learning to say no to unnecessary commitments and overcoming procrastination.【高分句型二】（介绍管理时间的方法，包括制定待办事项清单和管理干扰，以及不足之处）
With continuous practice and dedication，I hope to better manage my time in the future.（介绍自己管理时间的方法，包括制定待办事项清单和管理干扰，以及不足之处）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
14．（2024秋 红古区期末）为推动爱国主义教育"进课堂、进教材、进头脑"，近日，兰州市教科所组织了全市中小学师生"用英语讲好中国故事"活动。英语学习已经伴我们走过了很多年，请以"My English Study"为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的英文学习经历。
写作要求：（1）文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My English Study
I've learnt English for many years.________
【考点】说明文；学习．
【答案】
My English Study
I've learnt English for many years.I have been interested in learning English since I was a little child.It's my favorite subject.
However，I still have many problems in learning English.For example，I find it difficult for me to remember new words and I have trouble in listening and writing.
In order to improve my English，I asked my English teacher for help and she gave me some advice.First，write down the new words on the small notebook and read them as often as possible.In this way，I can remember more and more words.What's more，listening to more English songs is a good way to improve listening ability.Last but not least，reading more English articles can increase writing materials and keeping a diary a day is also necessary.
English is important to me.I will go on trying my best to learn it.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I have been interested in learning English since I was a little child.我从小就对学习英语很感兴趣。
since引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Last but not least，reading more English articles can increase writing materials and keeping a diary a day is also necessary.最后，阅读更多的英语文章可以增加写作材料，每天写日记也是必要的。
动名词作主语；并列句。
【解答】
My English Study
I've learnt English for many years.I have been interested in learning English since I was a little child.【高分句型一】It's my favorite subject.（态度）
However，I still have many problems in learning English.For example，I find it difficult for me to remember new words and I have trouble in listening and writing.（问题）
In order to improve my English，I asked my English teacher for help and she gave me some advice.First，write down the new words on the small notebook and read them as often as possible.In this way，I can remember more and more words.What's more，listening to more English songs is a good way to improve listening ability.Last but not least，reading more English articles can increase writing materials and keeping a diary a day is also necessary.【高分句型二】（提高英语的方式）
English is important to me.I will go on trying my best to learn it.（总结全文）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
15．（2025 硚口区模拟）"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy."这句话表达了劳逸结合、张弛有度才能提升工作或学习的效率。请根据以下内容提示，用英文谈谈你如何在学习之余放松身心，做到劳逸结合，你还希望得到父母或老师怎样的理解与支持。
内容提示：
What do you do to relax when you finish your homework？
Do you think you have a balanced lifestyle between study and play？
What do you think you should be allowed to do to have a meaningful relaxation？
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；篇幅 100 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As I entered the third year of junior high，I realized it's important to have a balanced lifestyle.
【考点】说明文；人际关系．
【答案】 As I entered the third year of junior high，I realized it's important to have a balanced lifestyle.Although I have to spend more time on schoolwork as the subjects get harder，I still need to play and relax to keep active and energetic after I finish my homework.I love listening to music that I can sing along with.Also，doing sports like playing basketball can make me happier and healthier.On weekends I prefer to watch a comedy with my friends when I'm tired from hard work or sad for dropping scores.
After meaningful relaxation，I can always feel less tired and focus more attention on my studies.So I try to balance my study and play，but sometimes I need to be understood by my parents and teachers.I think I should be allowed to manage my own life—I'm not a child after all.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Although I have to spend more time on schoolwork as the subjects get harder，I still need to play and relax to keep active and energetic after I finish my homework.
Although引导的让步状语从句：短语"need to do sth（需要做某事）"。
句意：虽然我不得不花更多的时间在功课上，因为科目越来越难，我仍然需要玩和放松，以保持活跃和精力充沛后，我完成了我的作业。
【高分句型二】
I love listening to music that I can sing along with.
That引导的定语从句：短语"love doing sth（喜欢做某事）"。
句意：我喜欢听我能跟着唱的音乐。
【解答】 As I entered the third year of junior high，I realized it's important to have a balanced lifestyle.Although I have to spend more time on schoolwork as the subjects get harder，I still need to play and relax to keep active and energetic after I finish my homework.【高分句型一】I love listening to music that I can sing along with.【高分句型二】Also，doing sports like playing basketball can make me happier and healthier.On weekends I prefer to watch a comedy with my friends when I'm tired from hard work or sad for dropping scores.（放松方式）
After meaningful relaxation，I can always feel less tired and focus more attention on my studies.So I try to balance my study and play，but sometimes I need to be understood by my parents and teachers.I think I should be allowed to manage my own life—I'm not a child after all.（观点）
【点评】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为"一般现在时"；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍完成作业后自己的放松方式是什么；
第二步，谈谈自己在学习和娱乐之间是否有一个平衡的生活方式；
第三步，谈谈是否需要得到父母或老师的理解，并说明原因。
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