【单元考点培优】Module 9 考点18：书面表达-2025-2026学年外研版（三起）六年级英语上册核心考点培优精练 (含答案解析)

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2025-2026学年外研版（三起）六年级英语上册核心考点精练
Module 9 考点18：读写综合
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．下个周末大明一家打算去北京，他们想先去天安门广场，然后去爬长城。假如你是Sam，请你用书信的形式，把这件事告诉你的好朋友Amy。
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2．根据提示，写一写玲玲寒假想去的地方及其活动。要求：语句通顺，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，不少于6句话。
提示：the Tianshan Mountain 天山 the Tianchi Lake天池
地点：新疆(中国西部)
活动：骑马、爬天山、参观天山天池
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3．看表格，利用句型“主语＋want(s) to go to...”描述自己的家人在假期想去哪里旅游。
My father My mother My brother My sister I
Shanghai √
the West Lake √
Beijing √
the Huangshan Mountain √
Guilin √
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4．书面表达。
学校是我们学习和生活的地方。假如下图是你学校的楼层分布图，请你根据该图，写一篇短文来描述教室和各个功能室所处的位置。(不少于50词)
Hello, everyone. Welcome to our school.
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5．Writing.书面表达。
请以“A visit to a city”为题，根据以下思维导图，写一写你去某个城市旅游的经过。
要求：1.词数：50词左右。
2.字迹工整规范(大小写正确)，内容完整连贯，语言准确。
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6．书面表达。
Wu Binbin想从学校出发去你家玩，但他不知道具体的路线。请参照地图写篇小短文向Wu Binbin介绍具体路线。
要求：（1）. 要点齐全，条理清晰，表达准确；
（2）. 书写规范，语句通顺，不少于5句话；
（3）. 不得出现真实的姓名及学校名。
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7．写作。
Sam对在新城市的生活感到不适应，时常想起昔日乡村的快乐时光，他想找到快速适应新环境的方法。请你结合广州的实际情况，给出一些让他喜欢上城市生活的建议。要求不少于40个单词，内容完整，语句通顺，书写规范。
Let me tell you the ways of adapting(适应) to the new life in Guangzhou.
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8．快乐作文。
日常生活中，你肯定拍了很多有意义的照片，请你以“My Photos”为题给大家介绍几张吧。
要求：语句通顺，书写规范，不少于50个单词，不出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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9．书面表达。
假如你是Sarah，你的新朋友Lucy想去你的学校参观，但是不知道去你学校的具体路线。请以“How can you get to my school ”为题写一篇小短文，向她介绍怎样从她家到你的学校。
要求：（1）. 语句通顺，书写规范；（2）. 不少于5句话(开头已给出，不计入5句话中)。
How can you get to my school
Hi, Lucy! Welcome to my school.
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10．David回到澳大利亚后，想把他在中国的旅行经历介绍给老师和同学们，发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。请你观察图片，结合他的思考，帮助他完成旅行介绍。
写作要求：(1) 围绕主题，内容完整，语意连贯。
(2) 至少介绍三个城市(含北京和杭州)，每个城市至少介绍两个方面的细节(如城市特色、活动及感受等)。
My Wonderful Trips in China
Hello, everyone! I had wonderful trips in China.
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I had a great time in China. I am looking forward to going to China again. Would you like to go with me
11．书面表达。
以“My favourite City”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。
(1) Which is your favourite city
(2) How many people are there in that city
(3) What do people usually do in that city
(4) What do people like eating in that city
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12．写作。
“读万卷书，不如行万里路”。亲爱的同学们，你们一定去过许多地方吧！你最喜欢的城市是哪一个呢？请以My favourite city为题来介绍这个城市的气候特征、特色食物和著名旅游景点或地标建筑。
要求：（1）. 内容要涉及以上三个方面(气候、食物、景点)，可适当发挥；
（2）. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确；
（3）. 不少于8句话。
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13．书面表达。
第19届亚运会于2023年在杭州举行。假如你是一名杭州亚运会的小学生志愿者，请用英语向外国友人们介绍一下我们美丽的杭州吧！
要求：（1）. 条理清晰，语句通顺
（2）. 时态，标点及大小写正确，书写规范。
（3）. 不拘于提示内容，展开丰富的想象，不少于 50 词。
Location (位置): in the east of China How big: about ten million people Famous: people all over the world go there every year Weather: cool, windy, rainy You can visit: the West Lake, Songcheng Temple (宋城), Lingyin Temple (灵隐寺), Broken Bridge (断桥)... You can eat: West Lake Vinegar Fish (西湖醋鱼), Dongpo Pork (东坡肉), andLongjing Shrimp (龙井虾) ...
Welcome to Hangzhou!
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14．书面表达。根据情景和思维导图写话。
情景：Mike 在中国生活了四年，已经是一个“中国通”了。暑假他回英国向朋友们介绍中国……
要求：聚焦话题 (至少选择三方面)，语句连贯有条理；
语言表达正确；书写规范；不少于8句话。
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15．根据思维导图和所给提示展开想象，完成一篇小作文。
作为一名中国人，我们万分自豪，请根据下列提示,以“Welcome to China”为题,写一篇短文向大家介绍中国。
要求：（1）.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，适当发挥想象；
（2）.50个单词左右(含所给单词)。
Welcome to China
China is very beautiful.
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16．书面表达。
“读万卷书，不如行万里路”。你最喜欢的城市是哪一个呢？请以“My favourite city”为题来介绍这个城市的气候特征、特色事物和著名旅游景点或地标建筑。
要求：（1）.内容要涉及以上三个方面，可适当发挥；
（2）.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确；不少于5句话。
My favourite city
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参考答案及试题解析
1．范文：
Dear Amy,
Next weekend, Daming is going to Beijing with his family. They want to go there by train. They will visit Tian'anmen Square at first. Then they'll climb the Great Wall. The Great Wall is very old and long. It is very famous in the world. Daming wants to take some photos on the Great Wall. Do you want to go to Beijing
Best,
Sam
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以Sam的身份给Amy写一封关于打算去北京旅游的信，故时态应是一般将来时，注意题目要求的书信内容及书信格式。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇： by train乘坐火车，visit参观，Tian'anmen Square天安门广场，the Great Wall长城，famous著名的，take some photos拍照
参考句型：Daming is going to…，They want…，They will…，The Great Wall is…，Daming wants…
2．例文
Lingling wants to go to Xinjiang this winter vacation. Xinjiang is in the west of China. She will stay there for a week. She is going to ride a horse. She likes the horse very much. After that, she wants to climb the Tianshan Mountain. It is very famous. Then she is going to visit the Tianchi Lake. It is beautiful. She will have a good time.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目是根据提示，写一写玲玲寒假想去的地方及其活动。时态是一般现在时及一般将来时。要求：语句通顺，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，不少于6句话。
2. 参考词汇及参考句型：
参考词汇：winter holiday寒假，ride a horse骑马，climb the Tianshan Mountain爬天山，Tianchi Lake天池
参考句型：She will…；She is going to…；She wants…
3．参考例文：
My father wants to go to Shanghai. Shanghai is very big and famous. My mother wants to go to the West Lake. There are lots of beautiful places to see. My brother wants to go to Beijing. There is the Great Wall. It's old and long. My sister wants to go to the Huangshan Mountain. I want to go to Guilin. There are lots of mountains and lakes in Guilin.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称利用句型“主语＋want(s) to go to...”描述自己的家人在假期想去哪里旅游。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：famous著名的，the West Lake西湖， the Great Wall万里长城，lots of许多， mountains山脉
参考句型： Shanghai is …； There are …；I want to …； There is …；
4．范文：
Hello, everyone. Welcome to our school. There are six classrooms. Classroom 1, Classroom 2 and Classroom 6 are on the first floor. Classroom 3, Classroom 4 and Classroom 5 are on the second floor. The teachers’ offices are on the first and second floors. The art room, music room, reading room, and lab are all on the third floor. There are toilets on each floor.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据楼层分布图写一段短文。然后再阐述教室和各个功能室所处的位置。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：first第一，second第二，third第三，art room美术室，music room音乐室，reading room阅读室，lab实验室，toilet卫生间
参考句型：There are …；… are on the …
5． A visit to a city
Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. We got there by train, which took us about five hours. In Beijing, we visited the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. We also tried delicious Beijing roast duck. I felt very excited and happy during the trip.
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求以“A visit to a city”为题，写一写你去某个城市旅游的经过。人称用第一人称，时态用一般过去时，同时注意单词数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：by train坐火车，the Great Wall长城，the Palace Museum故宫博物院，Beijing roast duck北京烤鸭，excited兴奋的
参考句型：I went to…，we visited…，I felt…
6．范文：
Hello, Wu Binbin. Welcome to my home. You can go straight from our school, and turn right at the science museum. Then go straight and my home is on your right. We will have a good time.
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求参照地图写篇小短文向Wu Binbin介绍具体路线，时态是一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：go straight一直走，turn right右转，right右边，have a good time玩得开心
参考句型：You can...
7．范文：
Let me tell you the ways of adapting to the new life in Guangzhou. First, you can visit beautiful parks like Yuexiu Park. You can see flowers and lakes there. Second, try delicious food like dim sum and noodles. They are very tasty. Third, make new friends at school or in your neighborhood. You can play games together. Fourth, go to fun places like Chimelong Paradise. You will have a great time. Finally, remember that Guangzhou is now your home. You will soon love it here.
8．范文：
Here are my three photos. In the first photo, there is a boy reading under the tree. He is my brother. He has glasses and short hair. He likes reading very much. In the second photo, there is a beautiful park. There is a lake in the park. Some ducks are on it. In the third photo, there is a dog. His name is Doudou. He is playing with a ball. He is a nice dog!
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My Photos”，写一篇短文。然后再阐述照片里的景象。注意文章为一般现在时态和现在进行时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：under the tree在树下，beautiful漂亮的，lake湖，play with和……一起玩
参考句型：In the first/second/third photo, there is …；He is …；He has …
9．范文：
How can you get to my school
Hi, Lucy! Welcome to my school. My school is near the hospital. It’s not very far. Now let me tell you how to get to my school. Go straight from your home. Turn right at the bookstore and go straight. Then turn left at the hospital. Go straight again and you can see my school on your right.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“How can you get to my school ”为题写一篇小短文。然后再阐述路线。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：near在……附近，go straight直走，turn right右转，bookstore书店，turn left左转，on your right在你的右边
参考句型：My school is …； Go straight from …；Turn right at …； Then turn left at …；Go straight again and you can see ...
10．范文：
My Wonderful Trips in China Hello, everyone! I had wonderful trips in China. First, I went to Beijing. I visited the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. I took many photos there. Next, I went to Hangzhou. I celebrated Dragon Boat Festival with my friends. It was very interesting. And I also visited the West Lake. Finally, I went to Sanya. It was very hot, but I had fun there. I went swimming in the sea. I went shopping and I bought some gifts for you.
I had a great time in China. I am looking forward to going to China again. Would you like to go with me
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题要求以“My Wonderful Trips in China”为题，描写自己在中国旅游时去过的地方，至少介绍三个城市，包括城市的特色、活动以及感受等，时态为一般过去时，要求内容完整，语意连贯。
2. 参考词汇和参考句型：
参考词汇：visited the Great Wall参观长城，the Palace Museum故宫博物馆，took photos拍照，celebrated Dragon Boat Festival庆祝端午节，the West Lake西湖，went swimming游泳，went shopping购物
参考句型：First, I went to...；Next, I...；It was...；Finally, I...
11．范文：
My favourite City
My favourite city is Dalian. It’s in the northeast of China. It has a population of about six million. The weather in Dalian is fine. It’s not hot in summer and not cold in winter. There are many places of interest there. And there are a lot of supermarkets too. People usually visit some interesting places and buy everything they want. People can eat delicious seafood in Dalian too. I like eating seafood very much. I hope you can visit Dalian one day.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题要求以“My favourite City”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。注意时态为一般现在时。
2.参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：northeast东北，population人口，weather天气，fine好的，summer夏季，winter冬天，supermarket超市，delicious美味的，seafood海鲜
参考句型：My favourite city is …；It’s in …；It has a population of …；The weather …；There are many…；And there are a lot of…；People usually…；People can…；I like…
12．范文：
My favourite city
My favourite city is Nanjing. It is a very beautiful and interesting place.
The weather in Nanjing is quite nice. In spring, it gets warm and the trees turn green. Summer is hot, but we can eat yummy ice-cream. Autumn is cool, and the leaves on the trees turn red and yellow. Winter is a bit cold, but we can have fun when it snows.
Nanjing has lots of delicious food. Duck blood soup is really popular. It tastes so good. Also, the salted duck is a must-try. The meat is tender and full of flavour.
There are many famous places in Nanjing. The Confucius Temple is very famous. There are always lots of people there. We can enjoy the old-style buildings and buy some special gifts. Another great place is the Purple Mountain. It is very beautiful, and we can have a great time climbing it.
I love Nanjing because it is a wonderful city with great food and nice places. I hope more people can visit it.
【解析】1.题干解读：题目要求以 “My Favourite City”为题写作，要求从气候、食物、景点方面阐述，时态用一般现在时，同时符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇和句型：
参考单词：favourite最喜欢的；warm暖和；turn green变绿；lots of许多；be popular受欢迎；famous places著名的地方；have a great time玩得开心
参考句型：The weather in... is...；... is really popular.；There are many famous places in...；We can...；I hope...
13．例文
Welcome to Hangzhou! Hangzhou is in the east of China. It’s about ten million people. Hangzhou is a famous city. People all over the world go there every year. It’s cool, windy and rainy in Hangzhou. If you come to Hangzhou, you can visit the West Lake, Songcheng Temple, Lingyin Temple and Broken Bridge. The food in Hangzhou is delicious. You can eat West Lake Vinegar Fish, Dongpo Pork and Longjing Shrimp. How beautiful it is! You will have a good time.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目是第19届亚运会于2023年在杭州举行。假如你是一名杭州亚运会的小学生志愿者，请用英语向外国友人们介绍一下我们美丽的杭州。时态是一般现在时。 要求：条理清晰，语句通顺；时态，标点及大小写正确，书写规范；不拘于提示内容，展开丰富的想象，不少于 50 词。
2. 参考词汇及参考句型：
参考词汇：in the east of China在中国东部，about ten million people大约一千万人，all over the world世界各地，cool凉爽的，windy有风的，rainy下雨的，the West Lake西湖，Songcheng Temple宋城，Lingyin Temple 灵隐寺，Broken Bridge断桥，West Lake Vinegar Fish西湖醋鱼；Dongpo Pork东坡肉；andLongjing Shrimp龙井虾
参考句型：Hangzhou is…；You can visit…；It’s…；You can eat…
14．范文：
I will tell you about China. Chinese people often have some porridge and steamed buns for breakfast. And they always use chopsticks when they eat food. There are some interesting cities in the country, for example, Beijing and Shanghai. You will find some places like the Palace Musuem, the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Bund. The Spring Festival is the most popular and biggest festival in China. On the Chinese New Year’s Eve, the family usually get together and have a big dinner. After dinner, they watch the Spring Festival Gala. Children can get lucky money from their parents and grandparents.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称介绍中国，内容包括运动、食物、城市、节日、动物等至少三个方面。注意文章为一般现在时，并且保证一定词数的要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：porridge粥，steamed buns馒头，chopsticks筷子，the Palace Museum故宫，the Great Wall长城，the Summer Palace颐和园，the Bund外滩，on the Chinese New Year’s Eve在除夕夜，the Spring Festival Gala春晚，lucky money压岁钱
参考句型：Chinese people often have…；They always use…；There are…；The Spring Festival is…；The family usually…；They watch…；Children can get…
15．
Welcome to China
China is very beautiful. There are many nice cities in China, such as Beijing and Shanghai. The weather here is different in different seasons. You can find a lot of interesting places in China. My favourite place is the Great Wall. You can also see many animals here, for example, the cute pandas in Sichuan. The most popular sport in China is table tennis, because it is exciting. Welcome to China. You will have a good time here.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据思维导图和所给提示介绍中国，时态为一般现在时，注意单词数量要求以及书写。
2. 参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：city城市，weather天气，different不同的，season季节，interesting有趣的，place地方，the Great Wall长城，sport运动，animal动物，panda熊猫，popular受欢迎的，table tennis乒乓球，exciting令人兴奋的
参考句型：There are...；The weather is...；My favourite...；You can...；The most popular...；You will...
16．例文：
My favourite city
My favourite city is Beijing. It’s a great city.
It’s often sunny. I like to go to the Summer Palace. The Palace Museum is wonderful too. I can learn a lot from it. The food in Beijing is delicious, for example, the Beijing duck and the Beijing snacks.
Welcome to Beijing.
【解析】1.题干解读：该文要求以“My favourite city”为题写一篇作文，要求介绍这个城市的气候特征、特色事物和著名旅游景点或地标建筑，主语为第一人称，时态为一般现在时，并符合句子的数量要求。
2.参考词汇或句型：
参考词汇：sunny晴朗的，the Summer Palace颐和园，the Palace Museum故宫，delicious美味的，the Beijing duck北京烤鸭，the Beijing snacks北京小吃
参考句型：My favourite city is...；It is...；I can...；Welcome to...
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