【期末考点培优】专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册期末复习考点培优外研版（2024）（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册期末复习考点培优外研版（2024）
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．随着时代的发展，高铁(High-Speed Train)、移动支付(Mobile Payment)、共享单车(Shared Bike)和网络购物(Online Shopping)被誉为中国新四大发明，它们深刻地改变了我们的生活方式。假如你是李辉，请从新四大发明中任选其一，写一篇英语演讲稿，内容包括：
（1）你认为新四大发明中哪一个最重要；
（2）它如何改变了人们的生活方式；
（3）发出倡议。
注意：
（1）词数80~100，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
China’s New Four Great Inventions
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hui.
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Thank you for your listening!
2．学校英文校刊将开展以遵守规则为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请根据以下图示，以“Follow the Rules”为题投稿。
注意：
（1）词数80～100，标题已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Follow the Rules
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3．上周，你们学校举办了一场关于“最实用的发明”投票活动 (voting activity)。请你就以下表格内容介绍这次活动及结果，并分享你的选择及理由。
Most Practical Invention
Invention shared bike online payment high-speed train online shopping
Percentage 10% 35% 30% 25%
Your favourite invention and reason(s) …
要求：80词左右，包含全部要点，可适当发挥，已给出部分不计入总词数。
Last week, our school held a voting activity about “the most practical invention”.
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4．发明改变了世界，改变了人们的生活。因为各种各样的发明，我们的生活变得越来越舒适与便捷。假设你是李华，最近你和同学在校园里做了一项关于“我最喜爱的发明”的调查，请你写一篇英语短文，报告此次调查的结果，并谈谈你心目中最喜爱的发明是什么及其原因，短文需包括以下要点：
Invention computer smartphone car air conditioner
Percentage of students 45% 32% 13% 10%
Reasons (原因) (请补充)… (请补充)… (请补充)… (请补充)…
Your opinion (看法) (请补充)…
要求：
1.词数为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There are many inventions in history and some of them have greatly changed the world. Recently, we did a survey on “What’s your favorite invention” in our school, and here is the result.
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5．我校将举办校园科技节，本次科技节的主题是“科技让校园更美好”。现组委会向全体同学征集创意，请你设计一款能为同学们的校园生活提供帮助的智能助手，并写一篇短文向组委会介绍你的设计。
参考词汇：smart device智能设备
注意：
1. 词数80词左右，已给出的句子不计入总词数。
2. 短文条理清楚，行文连贯，内容可适当发挥。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
A Smart School Partner
For the upcoming School Science and Technology Festival, I will design a smart school partner —_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Linda想了解你和你最好的朋友的一些情况。请你根据下面的思维导图和要求，给Linda回一封电子邮件，告诉她你和你最好的朋友的相同和不同之处，以及你对待朋友的观点。
要求：
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范；
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名）；
4. 词数：不少于80词。
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7．数字技术(digital technology)极大地改变了我们的生活。学校正在开展“数字科技改变生活”主题演讲活动，请你以“Digital Technology: A Great Helper in My Life”为题，写一篇发言稿。要点如下：
(1)介绍数字技术在生活中的重要性；
(2)具体描述数字技术在你学习、娱乐或生活等方面的应用；
(3)你对数字科技未来发展的期待。
注意：
(1)词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear students,
Nowadays, digital technology plays a very important part in our lives.
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8．你是否曾因一个偶然的发现而心跳加速？或许一群蚂蚁的奇特路线，或是一道数学题的意外解法——正是这些看似微小的“好奇心瞬间”，点亮了人类文明的星空。好奇心的作用有很多，其中就包含可以使人勇敢。比如万户“飞天”。
提示：1. 核心观点：好奇心使人们勇敢。
2. 事例简述：万户；明朝先驱者；好奇宇宙；发明 “飞天椅”；测试时遇难；人们受启发，发明更安全的探索宇宙方式；
3. 简单感悟：分享你对好奇心的理解。
注意事项：
1. 短文词数：80词左右。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
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9．学校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“My story of getting along with others”为题的征稿活动。假如你是李华，请结合你自身的经历，谈谈你的感受，并给学弟学妹们建议。
要求：(1)包括思维导图所给信息，可适当发挥；
(2)条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
(3)80词左右。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My story of getting along with others
As a student, I believe getting along with others is very important.
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10．旅游已经走进了我们的生活。每年假期，越来越多的人走出家门，外出旅游。但与此同时，我们更应该注意自己的言行举止，做到文明旅游。请你就此话题写一篇短文，号召全体同学文明出游。
要点：
1.在车站或机场，排队等候；
2.公共场合不大声喧哗；
3.禁止乱写乱画，带走垃圾并扔进垃圾桶(dustbin)；
4.遵守规则，如果不允许拍照，就不要拍照；
5.如果做到这些，我相信……
注意：
(1)词数80～100；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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11．家人、朋友是我们人生中不可或缺的伙伴，但在相处的过程中我们难免也会产生矛盾和冲突，需要我们正确对待。近期，我校正开展以“Get along with others”为主题的征文活动，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享这段经历，并谈谈你的感悟。
内容要点：1. What problem did you face
2. How did you solve the problem
3. What can you learn from the experience
要求：1. 文章须包括所给提示内容，可展开思路，适当增加细节；
2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
4. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Getting along well with others is of great importance for us teenagers.
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12．上周，你们学校举办了一场关于“最实用的发明”投票活动(voting activity)。请你就以下表格内容介绍这次活动及结果；并分享你的选择及理由。
Most Practical Invention
Invention Mobile payment Online shopping High-speed train 3D printer
Percentage 40% 30% 25% 5%
Your choice
要求：80词左右，包含全部要点，可适当发挥，已给出部分不计入总词数。
Great inventions have made our life more and more convenient. Last week, our school held a voting activity about “the most practical invention”.
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13．2025年2月8日，四川省宜宾市的一个宁静小村庄不幸遭遇了一场突如其来且极具毁灭性的山体滑坡。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇90~100字的短文。
要点提示：
1. 此前连日的暴雨使山坡上的土壤变得松软。结果，大量的泥土和石块倾泻而下，沿途的房屋都被掩埋；
2. 有人失联了，还有几人不幸遇难；
3. 山体滑坡发生后，当地政府立即展开了紧急救援工作。消防员、警察和医护人员迅速赶往村庄……周边的村民们也纷纷加入救援行列……
4. 尽管山体滑坡带来了巨大的痛苦和损失，但救援过程中展现出的团结与勇气给了每个人希望。我们希望……
参考词汇：landslide山体滑坡；devastating 极具毁灭性的
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14．现代科技飞速发展，各种高科技产品尤其是电脑为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。请以“Computer”为题，并根据下面的内容要点，写一篇短文。
内容包括：
(1) 电脑是最伟大的发明之一。
(2) 第一台电脑在1946年诞生于美国。它体积庞大且价格昂贵，只允许在银行和一些政府机关使用。
(3) 现在，电脑越来越小，且价格越来越便宜。它被广泛地运用于人们的日常生活中。
要求：
(1) 围绕主题展开写作，包含所给出的全部信息，可适当发挥。
(2) 词数： 80~100词左右。
(3) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
Computer
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15．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My view on digital life”. （以“我对数字生活的看法”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。）
假设学校广播站正在征集以“青少年的数字生活利与弊”为主题的英文投稿，你将作为班级代表撰写一篇文章。请结合自身经历，谈谈智能手机、在线学习平台和社交媒体等数字工具对你的生活有什么影响，它们给你带来了哪些好处和问题，以及你认为该怎么正确使用它们。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)
Suggested questions:
1. What do you usually do with your phone/computer
2. What are the good and bad sides of using them
3. How can we use phones and the Internet in a smart way
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16．人工智能AI (Artificial Intelligence) 技术的快速发展和DeepSeek的问世，给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化，同时也引发了人们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。假如你是李华，受邀参加某英语报 “Teenager Says” 栏目，请说说你对人工智能的看法。内容包括：
(1)人工智能的优点：代替人们做危险、枯燥的工作;
(2)人工智能的缺点：人们对AI过度依赖;
(3)你的看法。
注意：
(1)词数80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program.
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Yours,
Li Hua
17．当今科技日新月异，各种发明不断涌现。高科技产品在我们的生活中不可或缺，如智能手机。智能手机是重要的发明，请描述智能手机的功能和带来的便利，以及对我们生活的影响。
参考词汇：benefit 益处
要求：
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范；
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名)。若文中出现人名，请选择使用：Mr. Liu/Ms. Wang/Ma Li/Wang Gang；
4. 词数：不少于70。 (开头已给出，但不计入总词数。)
In today’s rapidly developing world, many inventions have become important in our daily life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18．发明可以改变世界。随着科技的进步，机器人已经越来越多地走进并影响着人们的生活。假如《中学生英语报》正在举办以“我与机器人”为主题的征文比赛，请你写一篇英语短文参加此次比赛。
要点：
1.你想发明的一个什么机器人，发明它的原因是什么？
2.你希望你发明的机器人可以为你做什么(至少两件)？
3.你认为机器人会取代人类吗？为什么？
注意：
1.词数：80词左右(文章的开头已经给出，不计入词数)；
2.必须包括以上全部要点，可以适当发挥；
3.不得透漏学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；
4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
With the development of science and technology, more and more people have begun to use robots in life to serve them.
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19．假如你是李涛，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“正确使用网络”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，参加此次活动。
1. 网络的重要性：
2. 网络的利与弊：
3. 提出希望。
要求：（1）短文必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现任何真实信息；
（4）词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Use the Internet Properly
The Internet is playing an important role in our life now.
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20．你校英语报正在举办主题为“发明改变世界”的征文活动。请你以“The Greatest Invention”为题用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你认为最伟大的一项发明。内容包括：
1. 发明的名称；
2. 对你的影响(生活、学习等)；
3. 你对该发明的看法。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：与……交流(communicate with)，懒惰的(adj. lazy)
The Greatest Invention
Inventions change our lives and they are around us. For me, the greatest invention is
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hui. I think mobile payment is the most important invention. It has greatly changed our lifestyle. First, we no longer need to carry cash. With a phone, we can pay for things quickly. Second, it makes life more convenient. For example, we can buy food, shop online, or even pay bills easily. It saves time and helps us live efficiently.
Let’s make good use of this invention. Also, we should remind the elderly around us to learn it, so that everyone can enjoy the convenience brought by mobile payment.
Thank you for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：选择移动支付（Mobile Payment）作为主题，围绕其重要性、对生活方式的影响以及倡议展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步：明确选择并说明重要性；
第二步：分两点说明移动支付如何改变生活；
第三步：发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①no longer不再
②for example例如
③shop online网上购物
[高分句型]
①I think mobile payment is the most important invention.（that引导宾语从句，that被省略）
②Let’s use mobile payment properly and enjoy the convenience it brings.（祈使句）
2．例文
Follow the Rules
Rules are very important in our life. There is a saying, “No rules, no order.” It tells us that without rules, our life would be in a mess.
We need to follow rules in different places. At home, we should help with housework and go to bed on time. At school, we must listen to teachers and finish homework carefully. In public, we need to wait in line and not talk loudly.
If everyone follows the rules, our life will become more peaceful and beautiful. Let’s start with ourselves and be good rule-followers!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据图示要点完成写作，论点明确，论据充分。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述规则的重要性；
第二步，分场景说明应遵守的规则；
第三步，总结遵守规则的意义并发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①in a mess一团糟
②help with housework帮忙做家务
③wait in line排队等候
④talk loudly大声喧哗
⑤peaceful and beautiful安宁而美好
[高分句型]
①It tells us that without rules, our life would be in a mess. (宾语从句)
②If everyone follows the rules, our life will become more peaceful and beautiful. (if引导条件状语从句)
3．例文：
Last week, our school held a voting activity about “the most practical invention”. There were four options: shared bikes, online payment, high-speed trains, and online shopping. Online payment got the most votes, accounting for 35%. High-speed trains followed with 30%, while online shopping had 25%. Shared bikes received 10% of the votes.
As for me, my favorite invention is online payment. It’s so convenient that I can pay for things anytime and anywhere. It saves me a lot of time and makes life easier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格内容”中的活动介绍及结果要点，并适当发挥，分享自己的选择及理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“上周学校举办的投票活动”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“活动选项及投票结果”方面重点介绍投票活动的具体情况，并分享自己的选择及理由；
第三步，书写结语。分享自己的选择及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①account for 占（比例）
②as for 至于
③convenient 方便的
④save...time 节省……时间
[高分句型]
①It’s so convenient that I can pay for things anytime and anywhere.（“so...that...”句型，表示“如此……以至于……”）
4．
例文
There are many inventions in history and some of them have greatly changed the world. Recently, we did a survey on “What’s your favorite invention” in our school, and here is the result.
The computer is the most popular invention, chosen by 45% of students because it helps with studies and provides information. 32% prefer smartphones for communication and entertainment. 13% like cars for convenient travel, while 10% choose air conditioners for cooling in hot weather.
In my opinion, the computer is my favorite invention. It not only makes learning easier but also connects me to the world. With its help, I can study efficiently and explore new knowledge.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍调查的主题是“我最喜爱的发明”；
第二步，根据表格内容具体介绍调查结果及原因；
第三步，谈谈你心目中最喜爱的发明是什么及其原因。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer sth. for…因……偏爱某物
②in my opinion在我看来
③not only…but also…不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①The computer is the most popular invention, chosen by 45% of students because it helps with studies and provides information.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②With its help, I can study efficiently and explore new knowledge.（介词短语作伴随状语）
5．例文：
A Smart School Partner
For the upcoming School Science and Technology Festival, I will design a smart school partner—“EduPal”. It is a palm-sized smart device with a smooth screen and a lightweight body, making it easy to carry around.
In school life, EduPal can help students in many ways. It can act as a personal tutor, explaining complex concepts through vivid videos and interactive quizzes. Also, it can manage students' schedules, reminding them of upcoming classes, exams, and club activities.
EduPal can make our school life better because it offers personalized learning and efficient time management. With EduPal, school life will be more fruitful and enjoyable.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，围绕智能校园助手设计展开。
②时态：一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意包含所有内容，适当添加细节，使短文内容连贯且符合词数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借已给开头引出智能助手的设计。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从智能助手的外观、对校园生活的帮助、让校园生活更美好的原因几方面，介绍设计。
第三步，按逻辑完成内容阐述。
[亮点词汇]
①palm-sized掌心大小的
②lightweight body轻便机身
③personal tutor私人家教
④interactive quizzes互动测验
⑤personalized learning个性化学习
[高分句型]
①It is a palm-sized smart device with a smooth screen and a lightweight body, making it easy to carry around. (making现在分词作结果状语，说明智能助手的便携性)
②It can act as a personal tutor, explaining complex concepts through vivid videos and interactive quizzes. Also, it can manage students’ schedules, reminding them of upcoming classes, exams, and club activities. (说明智能助手的功能，体现实用性)
③EduPal can make our school life better because it offers personalized learning and efficient time management. (because引导原因状语从句，说明智能助手让校园生活更美好的原因)
6．例文
Dear Linda,
How’s it going I’m writing to tell you something about my best friend and me.
We have many things in common. For example, we both like singing.
We also have many differences. I have short black hair and wear glasses, while my friend has long brown hair and doesn’t need glasses. I am shy, while she is outgoing. She is talented in languages, so she’s better at English than me.
We always help each other. I hope we can be friends forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示要点，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：先表达写作目的，引出话题；
第二步：具体介绍和好朋友之间的相同之处和不同之处，可从爱好、外貌、性格、学习等方面来介绍；
第三步：书写结束语，表达希望友谊长存的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①have things in common有相同之处
②for example例如
③be talented in在某方面有天赋
④each other互相
[高分句型]
①I have short black hair and wear glasses, while my friend has long brown hair and doesn’t need glasses. (while表对比)
②I hope we can be friends forever. (宾语从句)
7．
范文：
Dear students,
Nowadays, digital technology plays a very important part in our lives. It makes our life more convenient and efficient.
In my daily life, digital technology helps me a lot. For study, I often use learning apps to review lessons and watch online courses to improve my weak subjects. For entertainment, I enjoy listening to music and watching movies on my smartphone. Besides, my family often use mobile payment when shopping, which saves us much time.
I believe digital technology will bring us more surprises in the future. Maybe we can use VR to travel around the world at home. I’m looking forward to a smarter life with digital technology.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：围绕数字技术的重要性、具体应用和未来期待展开，注意内容连贯，词数达标。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头点明数字技术的重要性；
第二步：具体描述数字技术在学习、生活等方面的应用；
第三步：表达对数字技术未来发展的期待；
第四步：自然结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①convenient and efficient便捷高效
②learning apps学习应用
③mobile payment移动支付
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①Besides, my family often use mobile payment when shopping, which saves us much time. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
8．
Curiosity truly makes people brave. A brilliant historical example is Wan Hu in the Ming Dynasty. He was so curious about the universe that he invented a special “flying chair”. Although he died during the test, his bravery inspired others to develop safer ways to explore space.
I think curiosity is like a key. It opens new doors and encourages us to take risks. Without it, we might never make any progress. Therefore, we must always remember to stay curious and brave in our daily lives!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
时态：运用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
提示：需包含核心观点、事例简述和个人感悟，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：明确核心观点 (好奇心使人勇敢)，并引出万户的事例；
第二步：简要描述万户的故事，突出其因好奇心产生的勇敢行为及影响；
第三步：分享对好奇心的理解，强调其重要性，并鼓励保持好奇心。
[亮点词汇]
①curious好奇的
②inspire激励
③take risks冒险
④make progress取得进步
[高分句型]
①Although he died during the test, his bravery inspired others to develop safer ways to explore space. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
②I think curiosity is like a key. It opens new doors and encourages us to take risks. (运用了比喻修辞和并列结构)
9．例文：
My story of getting along with others
As a student, I believe getting along with others is very important.
Last term, I had a fight with my deskmate over a small thing. We didn’t talk for days, and I felt lonely and regretful. Later, I took the first step to say “sorry”. We made up quickly, and our friendship became stronger.
For you, younger students, here is my advice. First, be honest and kind when communicating. Second, when we have trouble, we should calm down and talk it out instead of being silent. Finally, share joys and troubles.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引出话题，指出和他人友好相处很重要；
第二步：介绍自己的相关经历；
第三步：给出一些如何友好相处的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①have a fight with sb.和某人打架
②make up和好
③calm down冷静
④instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①Second, when we have trouble, we should calm down and talk it out instead of being silent. (when引导的时间状语从句)
10．例文
As more and more people would like to travel on holiday, we hope everyone can show good manners during the trip.
Firstly, always wait in line patiently at stations or airports instead of pushing others. Secondly, avoid speaking loudly in public places to respect those around you. Thirdly, never draw on walls and remember to take your rubbish away and to put rubbish into dustbins. Besides, follow the rules strictly—if taking photos is not allowed, don’t do it. If everyone does these, I believe our trips will be more enjoyable and we’ll leave beautiful places to future generations.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇指出文明旅游的重要性；
第二步，根据题干的要点，给出具体的建议；
第三步，发出号召并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①in public当众
②take photos拍照
[高分句型]
①Firstly, always wait in line patiently at stations or airports instead of pushing others.（祈使句）
②If everyone does these, I believe our trips will be more enjoyable and we’ll leave beautiful places to future generations.（宾语从句，if引导的条件状语从句）
11．
例文
Getting along well with others is of great importance for us teenagers.
Last month, my best friend Lily and I had a fight. She forgot to return my favorite storybook on time, and I got angry, saying some harsh words. We didn’t talk for a week. Later, I realized I was too impulsive. I wrote her a note to apologize, and she said she was sorry too. We talked openly and made up soon.
This experience teaches me that communication is key to solving conflicts. When disagreements happen, we should stay calm and express our feelings politely instead of blaming others. Only by understanding each other can we keep our friendships strong.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示问题的信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明“与他人和睦相处对青少年至关重要”的主题；
第二步，具体叙事，按时间顺序清晰叙述了与好友Lily因书籍归还问题产生矛盾、冷战、反思、道歉到和解的过程；
第三步，表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①have a fight吵架
②on time准时
③harsh words恶言恶语
④talk openly开诚布公地交谈
⑤be key to是……的关键
[高分句型]
①When disagreements happen, we should stay calm and express our feelings politely instead of blaming others. (When引导的时间状语从句)
②Only by understanding each other can we keep our friendships strong. (倒装句)
12．
例文
Great inventions have made our life more and more convenient. Last week, our school held a voting activity about “the most practical invention”. The results show that mobile payment is the most popular, with 40% of the votes. Online shopping takes 30%, followed by high-speed train at 25% and 3D printer at 5%.
I chose high-speed train because it is fast, safe and comfortable. It shortens the travel time between cities greatly. For example, I can visit my grandparents in another city in just two hours.
In my opinion, these inventions make our daily life more convenient. We should appreciate the power of technology.
【总体分析】① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时；
③ 提示：需包含表格数据及个人选择理由。
【写作步骤】第一步：简要介绍投票结果，按表格数据顺序说明百分比；
第二步：说明自己的选择并列举理由；
第三步：总结这些发明的积极影响，表达对科技的看法。
【亮点词汇】① comfortable舒适的
② convenient方便的
③ in one’s opinion在某人看来
【高分句型】① The results show that mobile payment is the most popular…（宾语从句）
② I chose high-speed train because it is fast, safe and comfortable.（原因状语从句）
13．One possible version:
On February 8th, 2025, a peaceful village in Yibin, Sichuan, was struck by a sudden, devastating landslide. Days of heavy rain had softened the soil, causing earth and rocks to crash down, burying the houses along its path. Some people went missing, and several died.
The local government launched emergency rescue work at once. Firefighters, police, and medics rushed there, searching tirelessly. Neighboring villagers also joined in. They provided food and shelter for the affected people. Though the landslide brought great pain and loss, unity and courage gave hope. We hope that the village can recover soon and that the people can rebuild their homes.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：主要为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，介绍山体滑坡的原因、后果、救援行动及希望，不要遗漏信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明山体滑坡发生的时间、地点及原因；
第二步，具体阐述山体滑坡的后果及救援行动；
第三步，最后表达对于此次事件的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① be struck by 遭受（某种灾害或不幸）
② launch emergency rescue work 启动紧急救援工作
③ search tirelessly 不懈地搜寻
④ provide sth. for sb. 为某人提供某物
[高分句型]
①Days of heavy rain had softened the soil, causing earth and rocks to crash down, burying the houses along its path.（现在分词短语作结果状语）
②Though the landslide brought great pain and loss, unity and courage gave hope.（though引导让步状语从句）
14．例文
Computer
The computer is one of the greatest inventions. The first computer was invented in America in 1946. It was very big and the price was very high. It was only used in banks and government organisations. Now, the computer is becoming smaller and smaller and the price is lower and lower. It is widely used in people’s daily life. It is used for helping us to work and study. People can use it to chat online, search for information, watch movies, shop online and so on. It has become one of the most necessary things in our life.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时与一般现在时；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应围绕“电脑”这一主题展开写作，包含所给出的全部信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，直接点明“电脑是最伟大的发明之一”这一核心要点；
第二步，介绍第一台电脑的诞生时间、地点、体积、价格及使用范围的限制，并对比描述电脑变小变便宜的特点，并举例说明其在日常生活中的广泛应用；
第三步，结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①daily life日常生活
②search for搜寻
③shop online网购
④and so on等等
[高分句型]
①The computer is one of the greatest inventions.（运用了最高级句型）
②Now, the computer is becoming smaller and smaller and the price is lower and lower.（运用了比较级句型）
15．例文
My view on digital life
Digital tools like smartphones, online learning platforms, and social media are a big part of our lives. They bring many good things. For example, online platforms help me learn anytime, anywhere. Smartphones make it easy to talk to friends and find information quickly. Social media helps me know what’s happening.
But there are also problems. Using phones too much hurts my eyes and makes it hard to sleep. Sometimes, I spend too much time on games or videos and forget to do homework. Social media can also make me feel worried if I see everyone else seems perfect.
I think we should use these tools wisely. We should set time limits for fun. We must finish homework first before playing. And remember, life offline is just as important!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开头点明智能手机、在线学习平台等数字工具已成为自己生活的重要部分，并概述其积极作用以及自己通常用手机/电脑做什么。
第二步、介绍其弊端；
第三步、介绍如何明智地使用手机和互联网。
[亮点词汇]
①too much太多
②forget to do sth.忘记做某事
③set time limits设定时间限制
[高分句型]
Social media can also make me feel worried if I see everyone else seems perfect.(if引导的条件状语从句)
16．One possible version:
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program. With the development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence is getting more and more popular in our daily life. On the one hand, AI can be used to do dangerous, boring and tiring work so that we will live a better and happier life. On the other hand, with AI being widely used, a large number of workers are losing their jobs. However, some people rely too much on AI.
In my opinion, AI will never completely take the place of human beings, so there is no need to worry about it too much. It is a tool we invented and we are surely able to make it under control. The key is to make the best use of AI to make our life more convenient and more colourful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：书信作文
②时态：一般现在时（主要讨论客观事实和个人观点）
③提示：需覆盖人工智能的优点、缺点及个人看法，词数80~100。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头表明身份和写作目的（已给出开头）。
第二步：分段描述AI的优点（如替代危险工作）、缺点（如过度依赖）及个人观点（合理使用）。
第三步：结尾总结并呼应主题（注意书信格式）。
[亮点词汇]
①On the one hand 一方面
②On the other hand 另一方面
③rely on 依赖
④take the place of 取代
[高分句型]
①AI can be used to do dangerous, boring and tiring work so that we will live a better and happier life.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
②It is a tool we invented and we are surely able to make it under control.（定语从句）
17．
例文：
In today’s rapidly developing world, many inventions have become important in our daily life.
The smartphone is one of the most significant inventions. It has many functions, such as making calls, sending messages, taking photos and surfing the Internet. It brings us great convenience. For example, we can shop online, learn new knowledge and keep in touch with friends easily. Ms. Wang says it helps her work more efficiently. However, it also has some negative effects. Some people spend too much time on it, which may affect their health and study. We should use smartphones wisely to enjoy their benefits.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，介绍智能手机的功能、便利及影响；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目中要求的信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“当今世界许多发明在日常生活中变得重要”来引出重点介绍的内容——智能手机；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“功能、便利、影响”几个方面重点介绍智能手机的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我们应该明智地使用智能手机以享受其益处”的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①one of the most significant inventions最重要的发明之一
②such as例如
③keep in touch with与……保持联系
④affect影响
⑤use...wisely明智地使用……
⑥enjoy their benefits享受其益处
[高分句型]
①For example, we can shop online, learn new knowledge and keep in touch with friends easily.（并列结构）
②Some people spend too much time on it, which may affect their health and study.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
18．
例文
With the development of science and technology, more and more people have begun to use robots in life to serve them. I want to invent a helpful robot called “Study Buddy”. Many students feel stressed about homework, so I hope it can make our study easier and more fun.
First, it can explain difficult questions in a simple way. Second, it can create interesting games to help us remember knowledge. I believe robots will never replace humans because they are created by us. Although robots are smart, they don’t have feelings or creative minds like humans.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时与一般将来时；
③提示：需覆盖三点要求（发明内容及原因、功能描述、取代人类的观点）。
【写作步骤】第一步：首段呼应开头句，说明发明动机（帮助学生缓解压力）；
第二步：中间段用序数词分点描述功能（讲解题目、设计游戏）；
第三步：末段表明立场（不会取代人类），并给出两个理由（无情感、无创造力）。
【亮点词汇】①helpful有用的
②replace取代
【高分句型】①I believe robots will never replace humans because they are created by us.（宾语从句和原因状语从句）
②Although robots are smart, they don’t have feelings or creative minds like humans.（although引导的让步状语从句）
19．
例文
Use the Internet Properly
The Internet is playing an important role in our life now.
It is significant because it helps us study, communicate and relax. For example, we can find useful information online and talk to friends easily. However, the Internet is a double-edged sword. On one hand, it makes our life convenient. On the other hand, it may cause problems if we use it improperly. Some students spend too much time playing games, which is bad for their health and study.
I hope everyone can make full use of the Internet and avoid its bad effects. Let’s use it wisely to learn more and become better!
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③提示：需覆盖网络重要性、利与弊、提出希望三点，适当发挥，语言简洁。
【写作步骤】第一步，说明网络在生活中的重要作用；
第二步，分别阐述网络的优点和缺点，结合实际例子说明；
第三步，呼吁大家正确使用网络。
【亮点词汇】① significant重要的
② double-edged sword双刃剑
③ make full use of充分利用
【高分句型】Some students spend too much time playing games, which is bad for their health and study. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
20．例文
The Greatest Invention
Inventions change our lives and they are around us. For me, the greatest invention is the computer. It has changed me a lot. With the help of the computer, I can search for some useful information and read different kinds of books. When I feel stressed, I can listen to music online to relax myself. But if I meet some difficult problems in my homework, I often look for answers on the Internet. This makes me lazy and too much computer work is bad for my eyes. So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求围绕“最伟大的发明”展开论述，需包含电脑的优缺点并提出合理使用建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山提出观点，指出电脑是最伟大的发明；
第二步，具体阐述电脑带来的便利与存在的问题；
第三步，总结提出合理使用电脑的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①search for搜索
②different kinds of不同种类的
③look for寻找
[高分句型]
But if I meet some difficult problems in my homework, I often look for answers on the Internet. (条件状语从句)
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