【期末考点培优】专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级全册英语期末复习考点培优人教新目标版（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年九年级全册英语期末复习考点培优人教新目标版
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假设你是李华，请你针对多个城市频繁出现的雾霾（haze）天气，给某英文报社的热点话题专栏写一篇短文，分析造成雾霾的原因，并号召人们采取行动来保护环境。
要点：
1.汽车排放的有毒气体（poisonous gas）；
2.不遵守规则燃烧的垃圾；
3.来自化工厂（chemical plants）的烟和飞尘（smoke and flying dust）。
注意：
1.人们为保护环境而采取的行动至少列两条；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.词数80~100，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There has been frequent haze in the last few years in many cities. It’s high time people started paying attention to air pollution.
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2．假如你是你们班的英语科代表，在这次分发试卷的时候发现了一张没有署名的试卷，成绩为满分。请分析一下这张试卷会是谁的。
内容包括：
(1) 因为字迹娟秀整齐，所以不会是男生的；
(2) 不会是玛丽或者露丝的，因为她们已经拿到卷子了；
(3) 补充一至两点个人想法。
注意：
(1) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(2) 语句连贯，词数80左右。
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3．每当大型考试来临，同学们都会表现出不同程度的紧张。请你以“How to relax when facing exams”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对缓解考试焦虑情绪的建议。
内容包括：
分析 考试焦虑的危害
建议 ·端正考试态度，制定科学的学习计划； ·听听音乐，放松心情； ·…… ·…… （请再自拟两点内容）
注意：
1. 必须包含表格中的所有提示要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数80左右。
How to relax when facing exams
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4．假如你是李华，你自制了一些中国结(Chinese knots)。请你根据以下思维导图的提示用英语给开网店的美国朋友Tom写一封信，请他代卖你的中国结。
注意：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假如你是校报编辑，最近你就初三学生的学习和生活做了一项调查，发现同学们有一些共同的烦恼。请你根据调查出来的结果，给同学们提出建议并陈述理由。
烦恼 建议与理由
学习压力大，晚上很晚才睡 做好计划才能更好地利用时间复习
觉得父母给自己制订了太多规则 （请补充）
考试前很紧张 （请补充）
要求：
1. 词数80~120，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 不得透露学校名、姓名等任何个人信息；
3. 写作要点包含以上表格中的内容，可适当发挥。
The school newspaper has carried out a survey on the study and life of Junior 3 students recently. As the result shows, the students have some problems in common.
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6．假如你叫李丹，你想邀请朋友们来参加你的生日派对。请写一封90词左右的邮件给你的朋友们，介绍一下具体情况。开头及格式已给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1. 生日派对于下周六下午3：00在友谊公园举行。乘坐地铁5号线到广场站，沿着广场路走，直到经过兴业街，公园在左边；
2. 能否有朋友准备音乐播放器；
3. 你的照相机坏了，能否有朋友带照相机为大家拍照；
4. 能否告诉哪里可以买到气球；
5. 那天天气会很好，大家是否想要露营。
Dear friends,
Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park.
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Li Dan
7．音乐在我们的生活中起着很重要的作用。请根据以下提示，以“The Role of Music”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点提示：
1. 放松身心，缓解压力；
2. 振奋并鼓舞人心；
3. 抚慰心灵，帮助走出困境；
4. 帮助更好地了解不同的文化。
注意：可根据自己对音乐的理解适当发挥。
The Role of Music
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8．假设这周你们学校英语角谈论的话题是“手机的发展史”。请你在英语角向同学们介绍一下它的发展变化，并描述你对未来手机的畅想。
提示：
1. 发明时间——1973年；
2. 当时的手机——large, heavy ；
3. 现在的手机——take photos, listen to music, pay for things ；
4. 畅想
要求：
1. 语意连贯，语句通顺；
2. 不少于80词。
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9．你校英语报正举办以“My Country, My Pride (骄傲)”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 简要阐述在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等4个方面中国近几年的变化；
2. 谈谈你的感想。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等关键信息。
My Country, My Pride
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10．今天上午你经历了两件难忘的事情。请以“Learning to Forgive Others”为题，参照下面表格内容写一篇英语短文，简要描述事情的经过，并谈一下你的感悟。词数：80—100 （已给出的部分不计入总词数），可适当发挥。
事情经过 你的心情 你的感悟
妈妈起晚了，没做早饭，而且昨天忘了洗你的校服了。 ……
上学路上，你骑车撞倒了一位老人。
老人说：“没事，下次要小心些。”
Learning to Forgive Others
I will always remember what happened to me this morning.
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11．近年来，全球自然灾害频发，极端天气频频出现，环境恶化给全球带来的危害正日益凸显。地球是人类共同的家园。时代的一粒灰落在个人头上就是一座山。没有人能独善其身。假如你叫李华，作为一名学生，应该为环境保护做出哪些贡献呢？请以“Let’s try our best to protect the environment”为题，向学生们发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，尽最大的努力保护环境！
提示：
1.了解并让更多的人知道环境保护的重要性；
2．在日常生活中节约用水，节约能源；
3．为了减少空气污染，最好……
4．学会垃圾分类……
5．保护野生动物……
要求：
1.要点齐全并适当发挥。
2．全文不少于90词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
1．reduce v．减少；
2．sort garbage垃圾分类；
3．four categories (四类垃圾): recyclable waste, harmful waste, kitchen waste and other waste;
4．No business, no killing.没有买卖就没有杀害。
Let’s try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends,
I’m a student of Grade 9. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the earth and unusual weather appeared very often. All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. As students, what should we do
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If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!
A student worrying about the environment
12．假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法。
1．一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。
2．地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。
3．你认为……
要求：1.词数： 80—100。
2．日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3．要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇： begin to vomit开始呕吐； push towards the seats挤向座位； have a quarrel争吵
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home after school, I noticed
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13．每个人都会从不同的经历中获得不同的感受。哪一种感受经常伴随着你呢？请根据下面的图示写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. How do you often feel
2. What makes you so… Why
3. Do you want to make any changes How
要求： 1. 内容完整，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
3. 词数100左右。
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14．安全对每个人都很重要。为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，你校将开展以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示及要求，以“Safety rules at school”为题写一篇演讲稿，介绍你们在学校应该注意的安全准则。
提示：1. 上、下楼梯不要拥挤；2. 不要从楼上往下扔杂物；3. 玩耍时不能使用刀等尖锐物品；4. 在学校不抽烟、不喝酒。
要求：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4. 演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Safety rules at school
Hello, everyone! It’s important for us to keep safe at school. To be safe, we must follow these rules at school.
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That’s all. Thank you!
15．近期，关于父母与孩子间冲突的新闻频现媒体。针对这一现象，某英文报社就“如何处理父母与孩子之间的矛盾”发起了一个专题征文活动。假设你是李华，请根据下表中的内容提示，结合你自己的观点，用英语写一篇小短文，发表在学校“英语角”上。
原因 解决办法
1. 父母与孩子之间缺少交流与沟通； 2. 父母对孩子期待过高，过分严格； 3. 父母的一些坏习惯严重影响了孩子； 4. …… 1. 加强交流与沟通，消除误解； 2. 建立友好、亲密的亲子关系； 3. 树立榜样，培养良好习惯； 4.……
写作要求：1. 包含所有的提示内容，并可做适当发挥。
2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，意思连贯，书写规范。
3. 词数：90词左右，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：misunderstanding n. 误解 develop v. 培养 badly influence 严重影响
be lack of 缺少 build up建立 set good examples 树立榜样 expect too much期待过高
Recently, news about the conflicts (冲突) between parents and children frequently appear on the media. Why are the relationship between parents and children becoming so serious
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16．餐桌礼仪体现一个国家的风俗文化，不同的国家有不同的餐桌礼仪。假设你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Alice下个月要作为交换生来中国学习。请你给她写一封电子邮件介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。
要求：
1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
2. 词数100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I’m glad to receive your letter.
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Yours,
Li Hua
17．一群感恩的学生，带火了一座善良的城市！
2022年疫情期间，山东大学12000名学生被分配到淄博隔离，淄博的百姓和领导没有把这群学生当成负担，反而尽可能的给子他们温暖的照顾。于是在今年春暖花开之时，这群心中充满感恩的孩子，带着当初的那份情深意重，回到了淄博，带火了这座善良的城市！这条温暖的新闻感动了很多人，生活中、学习中，你的家人、亲人朋友，老师、医生甚至是陌生人也一定给予了你温暖、支撑和爱，让你心生温暖、充满希望，请你以“A person I want to thank” 为题，写一篇英语短文。
要点：1.简述对感恩对象的感激之情
2.具体地叙述他（她）如何感动你的一件事
3.简述你经过这件事之后的感悟。
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18．请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述上周三你生日那天发生的一件神秘的事。
要点提示：1. 放学回家后，家里没有人；2. 我发现我的房间很乱；3. 分析可能的原因，如小偷闯入；4. 后来发现是一只小狗在房间里，这是妈妈送给我的生日礼物。
写作要求：1. 词数90左右 (开头已经给出，不计入总词数)；2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇：in a mess乱糟糟；break in闯入
It was my birthday last Wednesday.
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19．行为举止是否文明礼貌体现的不仅仅是个人形象和城市形象，也在一定程度上反映了社会的文明程度。为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校号召同学们做一个文明的中学生，特举办以“How to Behave Well”为题的英文征文比赛。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇90词左右的短文。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1. 在学校我们应该怎么做；
2. 在校外我们应该怎么做；
3. 号召大家为此次活动共同努力。
How to Behave Well
To be a civilized student is very important for a student. Here are what we should do and shouldn’t do.
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20．假如你是李华, 下周你的英国朋友Joseph要来中国做交换生。他向你询问了有关中国的礼仪。请你根据以下提示和要求, 用英语给他回一封邮件。
提示:
1. 表达问候;
2. 简述中国人的见面礼仪
3. 介绍中国人的餐桌礼仪。
要求:
1. 不少于90词（格式及开头已给出, 不计入总词数）;
2. 需包含所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。
Dear Joseph,
I am very happy that you will come to China to study.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
There has been frequent haze in the last few years in many cities. It’s high time people started paying attention to air pollution.
What are the reasons behind the terrible weather First, the number of cars has been increasing in the last few years, and they produce too much poisonous gas. Second, a lot of rubbish is burnt without following the rules. Besides, smoke and flying dust from chemical plants add to the problem.
It is time for us to fight against air pollution. We should take the bus more often instead of driving cars. Planting more trees can also help to improve the air quality.
Let’s take action now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕城市雾霾问题分析原因并号召环保行动；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③要求：需涵盖给定的雾霾原因要点，至少两条环保行动，行文连贯且符合词数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明雾霾频发的现状，引出对空气污染的关注；
第二步：从汽车尾气、垃圾违规焚烧、化工厂烟尘三个维度分析雾霾成因；
第三步，提出至少两条环保行动建议，呼吁人们立即行动。
[亮点词汇]
①poisonous gas有毒气体
②chemical plants化工厂
③flying dust飞尘
④improve air quality改善空气质量
[高分句型]
①What are the reasons behind the terrible weather (特殊疑问句引出原因分析)
②It is time for us to fight against air pollution. (“It is time for sb. to do sth.”句型，强化呼吁语气)
③We should take the bus more often instead of driving cars. (“instead of”结构，作方式状语)
2．参考范文
We had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it but it got full marks. Whom can it belong to
It can’t be a boy’s because the handwriting is so good and tidy. Rose, Mary, and Lucy are good at handwriting. It can’t be Mary’s or Rose’s because they have got their papers already. So it must be Lucy’s. Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too. So I think it must be hers.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”；
③提示：需围绕“无名满分试卷归属”展开推理。
[写作步骤]
第一步，交代背景，说明昨天进行了考试，现在正在发试卷，发现一份无名满分试卷；
第二步，逐步推理排除，先排除男生，再排除已领试卷的Rose和Mary；
第三步，得出结论，结合Lucy生病在家且英语成绩好的情况，推断试卷一定是Lucy的。
[亮点词汇]
①hand out分发
②belong to属于
③be good at擅长
④do well in在……方面做得好
[高分句型]
①There’s a paper without a name on it but its mark is full. (there be结构)
②It can’t be a boy’s because the handwriting is so good and tidy. (because引导原因状语从句)
3．例文
How to relax when facing exams
Many of us feel somehow nervous whenever we are taking an important exam.
Nervousness is not only harmful to our health but also bad for our study. So it’s necessary for us to learn to relax. I think it’s very important to have a right attitude towards exams. Exams are only a way of checking what we have learned. Therefore, there is no need to worry too much about the results of the exams. Before an exam, making a scientific study plan and listening to some music can help reduce the stress. We can also do sports, such as playing basketball, climbing mountains and taking a walk. Besides, enough sleep and a balanced diet will work as well.
Follow my advice and you will be better at facing exams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：需涵盖考试焦虑的危害、至少四个建议，需注意行文连贯，词数控制在80左右。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出考试焦虑的普遍现象；
第二步，分析考试焦虑的危害，说明其对健康和学习的负面影响；
第三步，提出具体建议；
第四步，总结全文，呼吁遵循建议，更好地面对考试。
[亮点词汇]
①be harmful to对……有害
②have a right attitude towards对……有正确的态度
③scientific study plan科学的学习计划
④reduce the stress减轻压力
⑤balanced diet均衡饮食
[高分句型]
①Nervousness is not only harmful to our health but also bad for our study. (not only ... but also ...并列结构，清晰阐述焦虑的双重危害)
②Exams are only a way of checking what we have learned. (what引导宾语从句，解释考试的本质，逻辑清晰)
③We can also do sports, such as playing basketball, climbing mountains and taking a walk. (such as举例说明运动方式，使建议更具可操作性)
4．范文：
Dear Tom,
How are you I’ve made some Chinese knots by hand recently. I know you have an online store, so I wonder if you could help me sell them.
Chinese knots are made of red thread with beautiful patterns. In Chinese culture, they symbolize good luck and happiness. Many people like to hang them at home or give them as gifts.
I think your customers may find them special and meaningful. Would you like to give it a try I really hope you can help me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③提示：需包含请求、中国结介绍及希望，适当拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步，提出代卖请求；
第二步，介绍中国结的外观与象征意义；
第三步，表达希望对方同意。
[亮点词汇]
①made of red thread用红线制作
②symbolize象征
③hang悬挂
[高分句型]
①I wonder if you could help me sell them. (if引导的宾语从句)
②Many people like to hang them at home or give them as gifts. (并列动词结构)
5．例文
The school newspaper has carried out a survey on the study and life of Junior 3 students recently. As the result shows, the students have some problems in common.
First of all, stress from studies makes them sleep late. Besides, recently, their parents have made too many rules of study and life, which also make them feel stressed. What’s more, before a test, it is very stressful for them because they are afraid of getting bad grades.
In fact, there are some suggestions to help them solve these problems. On the one hand, students should make a good plan to make full use of time. On the other hand, they can communicate with their parents and friends when they feel unhappy. It is helpful for them to solve the problems. Only in these ways can they study better and live more happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：需包含初三学生的共同烦恼及对应的建议和理由等信息，可适当发挥，使文章通顺、完整，词数80~120词，开头已给出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，说明校报对初三学生学习和生活的调查结果；
第二步，阐述学生的共同烦恼（学习压力大晚睡、觉得父母规则多、考试前紧张）；
第三步，给出解决这些烦恼的建议及理由；
[亮点词汇]
①in common共同的
②make full use of充分利用
③communicate with与……交流
[高分句型]
①First of all, stress from studies makes them sleep late.（make sb. do sth.结构，说明学习压力的影响）
②Besides, recently, their parents have made too many rules of study and life, which also make them feel stressed.（which引导非限制性定语从句，说明父母规则多的影响）
③On the one hand,students should make a good plan to make full use of time.（on the one hand用于分点阐述，使建议更有条理）
④Only in these ways can they study better and live more happily.（倒装句，强调解决问题的方法的重要性）
6．例文
Dear friends,
Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park. It will start at 3:00 p.m. I would like everyone to come.
Now let me tell you how to get there. First, you can take Subway Line 5 to Square Station. Then, go along Square Road until you pass Xingye Street. The park is on your left.
Some preparations for the party need to be made, so I need your help. Could you please lend me your music player And there is something wrong with my camera. Please bring a camera to take photos. I’m not sure where I can get balloons, so please tell me, too. The weather will be fine that day. Would you like to go camping there
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Li Dan
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括5个方面的提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍生日派对的时间和地点，邀请大家参加；
第二步，介绍如何到达派对地点，陈述交通路线；
第三步，介绍需要朋友帮忙做的准备工作，请求朋友提供帮助；
第四步，表达期待。
［亮点词汇］
① go camping 去露营
② look forward to 期待
［高分句型］
① Then, go along Square Road until you pass Xingye Street. (until引导时间状语从句)
② Now let me tell you how to get there. (疑问词+不定式)
7．例文：
The Role of Music
Music plays an important role in our lives.
First, it can make us feel completely relaxed, and help reduce our pressure at work or in our lives. Second, music can cheer us up whenever we are in trouble or feel sad. What’s more, music has a comforting effect when we are worried and helps us step out of difficulty. In addition, music can be of great help in learning different cultures.
In a word, music is part of our lives. We can’t live a happy life without music.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，说明音乐在我们的生活中起着很重要的作用。
第二步，阐述音乐的作用。
第三步，总结全文，呼应主题。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in在某方面起重要作用
②make sb. do sth.使某人做某事
③cheer sb. up使某人振作
[高分句型]
①What’s more, music has a comforting effect when we are worried and helps us step out of difficulty. (when引导时间状语从句)
8．参考例文：
Cell phones are becoming more and more important. Do you know the history of cell phones
The first cell phone was invented in 1973. At that time, it was as large as a building brick and much heavier than the cell phone today. Now, cell phones have many uses. For example, we can use cell phones not only to talk to others, but also to take photos or listen to music. We can even pay by cell phones.
I believe that cell phones will become thinner and thinner and they may take the place of computers in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达手机的重要性，引出手机发展史的话题；
第二步，介绍手机的发明时间，以及过去手机的外观和现在手机的功能；
第三步，书写结束语，表达对未来手机的畅想。
[亮点词汇]
①invent 发明
②at that time 在那时
③as...as 和……一样
④for example 例如
⑤not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
⑥take the place of 代替
[高分句型]
①Cell phones are becoming more and more important.（形容词比较级）
②I believe that cell phones will become thinner and thinner and they may take the place of computers in the future.（that引导的宾语从句）
9．例文：
My Country, My Pride
Obviously, great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures. Clear rivers and blue sky return to our life. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. What’s more, China has made great progress in its space industry. Many spaceships have been successfully launched, making China’s space dream a reality. Finally, with the improvement of people’s living standard, people not only travel to the country, but also travel to the whole world.
I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍中国近几年的发展；
第二步，具体阐述中国在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等方面的变化；
第三步，表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②interested in对……感兴趣
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures.（时间状语从句）
②At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it.（定语从句）
10．One possible version:
Learning to Forgive Others
I will always remember what happened to me this morning. When I got up, I found my mother didn’t make breakfast for me because she got up late. So I had to go to school without breakfast. And when I was going to put on my school uniform, I found my mother forgot to wash it. It made me unhappy. Later, I knew my mother didn’t sleep well at night because of her headache. I felt sorry for her. What’s more, when I went to school by bike, I knocked down an old man. I thought he would be hard on me, but he said, “Never mind. Be careful next time!” I was deeply moved.
From these two things I know we should learn to understand each other. Society is like a big family. As long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become much more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示中的主要内容，详细介绍事情的经过，你的心情以及你的感悟，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，直入主题，介绍发生在自己身上的两件事，包括事情的经过和你当时的心情；
②第二步，表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②put on穿上
③because of因为
④by bike骑自行车
⑤be hard on sb对某人苛刻
[高分句型]
① When I got up, I found my mother didn't make breakfast for me because she got up late.（when引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）
② I found my mother forgot to wash it.（宾语从句）
③ As long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become much more beautiful.（as long as引导的条件状语从句）
11．例文：
Let’s try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends,
I’m a student of Grade 9. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one Earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the Earth and unusual weather appeared very often. All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. As students, what should we do
First, in order to protect our environment, we can give talks on how important the environment is. Second, we should save water and energy in our daily life. Third, in order to reduce air pollution, it’s better to go to school by bus, by bike or on foot. Fourth, we should divide the garbage into four kinds before putting it into the dustbins, and we should learn how to sort it. And we can reuse bags instead of plastic bags. Last but not least, no business, no killing. We all should know that wild animals are part of the environment, so we shouldn’t eat them. It’s time for us to protect wild animals.
If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!
A student worrying about the environment
【详解】[总体分析]
①题型：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：用一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意描述的全面性，将提示的内容利用上并加以补充、拓展；结合材料内容，向中学生们发出倡议，大家一起为环境保护做贡献。本文主要是第一人称，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对题目中的提示材料进行合理表达。
第二步，选择适当的连词将建议进行串联。
第三步，呼吁大家抓紧时间行动。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②in our daily life在日常生活中
③instead of 代替
④last but not least不得不提的是
[高分句型]
①We can give talks on how important the environment is. (使用宾语从句)
②We all should know that wild animals are part of the environment. (使用that引导的宾语从句)
③It’s time for us to protect wild animals. (使用句型It is adj. for sb to do sth)
12．例文
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed two things around me．
The first thing I met was about a boy. The boy didn’t feel well and suddenly began to vomit. A lady in good clothes noticed him and helped him clean the floor. Then the boy thanked her for helping. The second thing was about the underground. When the underground got to the station, a lot of people pushed towards the seat. While some people couldn’t get off the underground. Some had a quarrel because of this.
The two things impreesed me very much. If we act like the lady and think more of others, I believe our world will be a much more beautiful place.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，要介绍放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情。
第二步，具体描述放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情。
第三步，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
②thank sb. for doing sth.谢谢某人做某事
③get off下车
[高分句型]
①When the underground got to the station, a lot of people pushed towards the seat. (when引导时间状语从句)
②If we act like the lady and think more of others, I believe our world will be a much more beautiful place. (if引导条件状语从句)
13．例文
I often feel angry. I’m angry with myself. I hope to develop some healthy habits like getting up early or taking more exercise, but I still spend most of my time staying up playing computer games. I’m also angry with my best friend Bill. He argued with me several days ago and I don’t want to talk to him any more. But I really want to make a change. Maybe I should be strict with myself and maybe I should say sorry to Bill first. After all, I don’t want to lose my best friend.
I hope my life can be filled with peace and happiness.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：一般现在时、一般过去时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我经常感到愤怒”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“生活习惯、与朋友相处等”几个方面重点介绍自己愤怒的对象及其原因；
第三步，书写结语。表达“生活充满和平与幸福”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① be angry with 对……生气
② develop some healthy habits 养成一些健康的习惯
③ staying up 熬夜
④ not ... any more 不再……
⑤ make a change 做出改变
⑥ be strict with 对……严格
⑦ say sorry to 对……道歉
⑧ be filled with 充满
[高分句型]
① I hope to develop some healthy habits like getting up early or taking more exercise, but I still spend most of my time staying up playing computer games.（but连接并列句，spend some time doing sth.句式）
② I hope my life can be filled with peace and happiness.（宾语从句）
14．One possible version:
Safety rules at school
Hello, everyone! It’s important for us to keep safe at school. To be safe, we must follow these rules at school.
First, don’t crowd when we go upstairs or downstairs, or we may hurt ourselves by falling off steps. Second, we are not allowed to throw rubbish out of the windows of tall buildings. Third, we mustn’t use sharp things like knives when we play with our classmates. Fourth, smoking and drinking are not allowed at school, either. They’re bad for our health. Last, we should be friendly to our teachers and classmates. Don’t fight with our classmates.
Remember these rules, and we’ll be safe at school.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“在学校保持安全非常重要”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——不要拥挤、不要扔杂物、不拿尖锐物品、不抽烟喝酒均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“谢谢您的聆听”的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①follow these rules遵守这些规则
②hurt ourselves伤害我们自己
③fight with与……战斗
[高分句型]
①Third, we mustn’t use sharp things like knives when we play with our classmates. (when引导的状语从句）
②Don’t fight with our classmates. (祈使句)
15．例文：
Recently, news about the conflicts between parents and children frequently appear on the media. Why are the relationship between parents and children becoming so serious It’s my pleasure to share my opinions with you.
For one thing, they are lack of communication, so it’s of great importance for parents to create more chances to talk with their children so that they can understand each other better. For another, because parents are always strict with their children and expect too much from them, it will cause misunderstanding between them. Therefore, it’s necessary for parents to build up friendly and close relationship with their kids before expressing their expectations. Besides, parents’ bad habits will influence their children badly. Thus, setting good examples for children is helpful to gradually develop their good habits. Last but not least, many parents are so busy at work that they don’t have enough time to spend with their children. So it’s vital for parents to spare more time for their children to build up close relationship.
In short, to solve the problems, love and communication are of great significance.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格内容介绍父母和孩子之间存在矛盾的原因以及解决方法，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍父母和孩子之间存在矛盾；
第二步，根据表格内容详细介绍父母和孩子之间存在矛盾的原因以及解决方法；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be of great importance很重要
②be strict with sb.对某人严格
③spare time to do sth.抽出时间做某事
[高分句型]
①For one thing, they are lack of communication, so it’s of great importance for parents to create more chances to talk with their children so that they can understand each other better. (so that引导的目的状语从句)
②For another, because parents are always strict with their children and expect too much from them, it will cause misunderstanding between them. (because引导的原因状语从句)
③Last but not least, many parents are so busy at work that they don’t have enough time to spend with their children. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
16．例文
Dear Alice,
I’m glad to receive your letter. I’m excited to know that you’ll come to China next month. Let me tell you something about table manners in China.
It’s polite to wait till everyone is at the table. We use chopsticks to have meals while you use your forks at table. You can’t stick your chopsticks into your food. It’s not polite to use your chopsticks to hit a bowl. You shouldn’t point at anyone with your chopsticks. It’s impolite to start eating first if there are older people at the table. It’s also rude to speak with your mouth full of food. And don’t make noise when you have your soup. If you know the manners, I think you’ll enjoy yourself in China.
I can’t wait to see you and tell your more. Hope you’ll have a good time in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章向笔友Alice介绍中国的餐桌礼仪，适当增加细节，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开头已经给出，注意内容衔接，引出话题：介绍中国餐桌礼仪；
第二步，具体介绍中国餐桌礼仪；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
［亮点词汇］
① can’t wait to do sth 迫不及待做某事
② point at sb. 指着某人
③ make noise 发出噪音
［高分句型］
① If you know the manners, I think you’ll enjoy yourself in China. (if引导条件状语从句、宾语从句)
② It’s not polite to use your chopsticks to hit a bowl. (it作形式主语)
17．例文：
A person I want to thank
In my junior high school life, a lot of people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher—Ms. Lee.
Ms. Lee is very kind and easy-going. She helps me a lot. She is very tall. She has long hair and big eyes. She takes good care of me and often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. Thanks to her, I have made great progress in English and am becoming more and more interested in it.
I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. I’ll try my best to study hard to live up to her expectations.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给的写作要点介绍你想感恩的对象以及事情，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，点明想感谢的人是李老师；
第二步，具体通过一件事来阐述为什么要感谢她；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多
②take good care of好好照顾
③be in trouble陷入麻烦
④cheer sb up使某人振作起来
[高分句型]
①When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset.(that引导的宾语从句)
18．例文：
It was my birthday last Wednesday. After school, I came home as usual. To my surprise, I found my room was in a mess when I opened the door. My books were everywhere. I didn’t know who did that.
There must be someone visiting my room. I was very angry and decided to find out who did this. I guessed it might be a thief who broke in my room, but other rooms were clean and tidy. Then I thought it could be my little brother, who played in my room. However, he was too short to open the door. As I wondered, a lovely dog came out. At the same time, my parents came and told me it was my birthday present.
I was so happy that I didn’t care about the mess anymore. That birthday present is the best one that I’ve ever received.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”。
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“放学后回到家后，房间的情况”；“见到房间很乱，心里活动是什么样的”；以及“最后发觉是妈妈送的宠物狗”等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍事件发生的背景。
第二步，介绍事件发生的经过，重点介绍作者的心理活动。
第三步，收尾并表达作者对礼物的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①mess混乱
②angry生气的
③birthday present生日礼物
[高分句型]
①There must be someone visiting my room.（there be句型）
②Then I thought it could be my little brother, who played in my room. （定语从句）
19．例文
How to Behave Well
To be a civilized student is very important for a student. Here are what we should do and shouldn’t do.
As a middle school student, it’s very important to keep our environment clean and tidy and take care of flowers and trees. Don’t throw litter everywhere. And we should respect our parents and teachers and help our parents do housework.
We are supposed to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite to others and ready to help others in need. And remember to obey the traffic rules, family rules and school rules. We’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
If everyone behaves well, our city and school will become more and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：文章应围绕题目，根据要点提示进行写作，准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语等，注意语句通顺，表述连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接文章开头。
第二步，表述在学校应该怎么举止文明。
第三步，表述在校外我们应该怎么举止文明。
第四步，号召大家为此次活动共同努力。
[亮点词汇]
①be very important to do sth做某事非常重要
②take care of照顾
③respect尊重
④help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
⑤be supposed to do sth应该做某事
⑥keep promises遵守承诺
⑦remember to do sth记得做某事
[高分句型]
If everyone behaves well, our city and school will become more and more beautiful.（If引导的条件状语从句）
20．参考范文：
Dear Joseph，
I am very happy that you will come to China to study. I learned from your letter that you want to know something about the ways Chinese people greet each other and table manners. In China, when people meet for the first time, they will shake hands. And if you meet someone who asks you whether you have eaten, you should know that’s also a way of saying hello. As for table manners, you should know that it is not good to speak loudly when you are eating. And you should wait until the elders start eating. And don’t point at others with chopsticks. If you have any further questions, I will help you.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达问候；
第二步，具体阐述中国人的见面礼仪和餐桌礼仪；
第三步，书写结语表达“愿意提供帮助”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①a way of……的方式
②As for关于
③point at指向
[高分句型]
①And if you meet someone who asks you whether you have eaten, you should know that’s also a way of saying hello.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②As for table manners, you should know that it is not good to speak loudly when you are eating.（that引导的宾语从句）
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