人教版（2019）高考英语二轮复习写作突破一应用文写作课件(共80张PPT)

(共80张PPT)
写作一 应用文写作
写作突破篇
告知信通常是告诉或通知对方某些重要信息,如活动安排、上课计划、方案简介、招聘信息等。此类信件要求考生将写作要点清晰准确地传达给对方。具体写作结构为：
文体1 告知信
写作素材要记牢——告知信常用表达(温馨提示：以下内容，尝试背诵)
【先声夺人开头句——交代写信背景及写信目的】
1.I’m more than delighted to know that you will...Therefore,I’m writing to remind/inform you.知道你会……我非常高兴,因此,我写信提醒/通知你……
2.I’m very excited/glad to know that you take a great interest in...Consequently,I’d like to introduce...to you.我很兴奋/很高兴知道你们对……很感兴趣。因此,我想向你们介绍……
3.Knowing you intend to/are going to...,I am delighted to tell you some information about...知道你打算/将要……,我很高兴告诉你一些关于……的信息。
【引人入胜篇中句——阐述活动目的及活动内容】
1.In order to raise our awareness of environmental protection,we will organize a tree- planting activity in the western mountainous area.为了提高我们的环保意识,我们将在西部山区组织一次植树活动。
2.The details of...are as follows.有关……的详情如下。
3.The event is scheduled to start at...活动预计在……开始。
4.Firstly,in order to...,you should... Besides,you’d better...首先,为了……,你应该……另外,你最好……
5.To achieve better performance,you’d better...为了获得更好的表现,你最好……
【画龙点睛结尾句——表达祝愿与期待】
1.If you have any difficulty/trouble in...,please feel free/don’t hesitate to turn to me for help.如果你在……方面有任何困难/麻烦,请随意/不要犹豫向我求助。
2.Wish you a nice/pleasant stay/time in...祝您在……度过愉快时光。
3.I will be very grateful if you can...如果你能……我将非常感激。
写作精进要训练——向外教介绍班级情况
假定你是李华,你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括：
1.询问近况；　2.分享班级最新消息；　3.表达祝愿。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
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[参考范文]
Dear Peter,
I’m very sorry to hear that you asked for sick leave and returned to Ireland the other day.Have you been getting much better now？We all miss you very much and hope you will recover soon. Here is some good news for you.
As expected,we won first prize in our school art festival yesterday.The drama you directed got a big hand.It was well reviewed by judges because of its perfect plots as well as our wonderful performance.We owed our success to your kind and patient guidance.It was you who should walk onto the stage to receive the award.
Wish you a full recovery soon and look forward to seeing you again.
Yours,
Li Hua
文体2 建议信
建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出的建议或忠告,要写得简明扼要、目的明确,具有合理性和说服力。具体写作结构为：
写作素材要记牢——建议信常用表达(温馨提示：以下内容，尝试背诵)
【先声夺人开头句——表明写信意图】
1.I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in doing...at the moment. Here are some tips for you.我很遗憾听说你现在在做……方面有困难。这里有一些建议给你。
2.You have asked me for my advice regarding/with regard to...and I think the following tips can help you.你已经问过我关于……的建议,我认为下面的建议可以帮助你。
3.I have received your letter saying that...It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on...我已经收到了你的来信,信中说……我很高兴就……给你一些建议。
4.I’m delighted to learn that you’re particularly keen on...Here is some practical advice to help you...我很高兴得知你特别喜欢……这里有一些实用的建议可以帮助你……
5. In response to your requirements,I’m writing to provide my humble opinions to help solve your problems.针对您的要求,我写信来提供拙见,以帮助您解决问题。
【引人入胜篇中句——提出具体建议】
1.The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.以下是我的建议/我的建议如下。
2.In my opinion/From my point of view,doing...is a perfect approach to achieving...Additionally, it’s strongly advisable that...Last but not least,it would also be a wise choice if you could...在我看来做……是一个实现……的完美方法。此外,强烈建议……最后但同等重要的是,这也将是一个明智的选择,如果你可以……
3.I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……会更有益。
4.First of all, it is wise of you to work on positive thinking because positive thinking will lead to positive results.首先,你进行积极的思考是明智的,因为积极的思考会带来积极的结果。
5.Additionally, it is strongly advised that you should set realistic goals and break the overall goal into smaller ones, which makes it easy for you to get a sense of accomplishment.此外,强烈建议你最好设定现实的目标,并把整体目标分解成更小的目标,这样你就很容易获得成就感。
6. Last but not least, having a face -to- face talk with your parents peacefully and listening patiently is a better choice.最后但同等重要的是,心平气和地与父母面对面交谈并耐心地倾听是一个更好的选择。
【画龙点睛结尾句——希望接纳建议】
1.I sincerely hope my advice will be of benefit to you.If there is more I can do to help,please let me know.我真诚地希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。如果还有我能帮忙的地方,请告诉我。
2.I am firmly convinced that you will regain confidence with your efforts. Don’t hesitate to contact me with any other questions.我坚信,你的努力会使你重新恢复信心。如有其他问题,请随时联系我。
3.I will be happy if you could take my advice/ideas into consideration.如果你能考虑我的建议/想法,我会很高兴。
写作精进要训练——提出举办活动的建议
(2023·北京卷改编)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括：
1.活动形式；　2.活动内容。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear_Jim,
I’m delighted to receive your email asking me for advice on how to organize a club activity whose theme is“Green Beijing”. I’m more than happy to give you my advice.
Obviously, the activity is designed to promote green living. So it is a great idea to hold a speech contest, which can not only improve participants’ ability to speak in public, but also call on the audience to live a green life. Frankly speaking, the activity should be launched in the community center so that it can attract more residents to participate. Besides, you can invite some residents to share what they have done to reduce their carbon footprint in their daily life, which can arouse people’s environmental awareness.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful. Looking forward to your taking an active part in it.
Yours,
Li_Hua
文体3 邀请信
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,在写作时,语气要热情真挚,不要强人所难。具体写作结构为：
写作素材要记牢——邀请信常用表达(温馨提示：以下内容，尝试背诵)
【先声夺人开头句——表明意图，发出邀请】
1.I’m very pleased/more than delighted to invite you to join in...to be held from...to...in...我非常高兴邀请你们参加……从……到……在……(地方)举行的……(活动)。
2.I am sincerely inviting you to participate in... on behalf of...我诚挚地邀请你代表……参加……(活动)。
3.Extremely delighted to know that you are interested in Chinese traditional cultures, I’m writing to invite you to visit the Chinese paper -cutting exhibition. 很高兴得知你对中国传统文化很感兴趣,我写信来邀请你去参观中国剪纸展览。
【引人入胜篇中句——邀请的原因和内容】
1.Here are arrangements for this activity./The following are arrangements for this activity./Arrangements for this activity are as follows.这是这次活动的安排/以下是这项活动的安排/这项活动的安排如下。
2.The activity is scheduled to last approximately...,from...to...活动预计将持续大约……(时间),从……到……
3.The speech, especially designed for our school senior students, is scheduled in the hall from 4: 00 p.m. to 5: 00 p.m. next Friday.本次演讲特别为我校大四学生设计,定于下周五下午4点到5点在大厅举行。
4.Not only will we enjoy the folk art works, but also we can learn a lot about the customs of the Chinese people.我们不仅可以欣赏民间的艺术作品,还能够学到很多中国人的习俗。
5.To acquaint students with a general knowledge of English culture and promote their English learning, you are expected to talk about the customs and history of English -speaking countries and some ways of learning English.为了让学生对英语文化有个大体了解,促进他们的英语学习,你需要谈谈英语国家的风俗习惯和历史,以及一些学习英语的方法。
【画龙点睛结尾句——期待接受邀请】
1.Would you please drop me a line to let me know whether you can come to... 你能不能给我写封信,让我知道你是否能来……？
2.An early/favorable/timely reply will be highly appreciated.如能收到及早/肯定/及时的回复,(我)将不胜感激。
3.If you are interested, please let me know and I’ll send you more relevant/detailed information.如果你有兴趣,请让我知道,我会给你更多的相关/详细信息。
4.We would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.如果您能在方便的时候尽早确认您的参与,我们将不胜感激。
5.I sincerely hope you can accept our invitation/join us and I have the confidence that...我真诚地希望你能接受我们的邀请/加入我们,我有信心……
写作精进要训练——邀请朋友参加探险旅行
假定你是李华,你打算和几位朋友在暑假进行一次探险旅行。请给外国朋友Peter发一封电子邮件介绍这次旅行计划,并邀请他一起参加这次旅行。内容包括：
1.时间和地点；　2.活动内容；　3.注意事项。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
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[参考范文]
Dear Peter,
How is everything going My friends and I have decided to go on an adventure trip to Hainan Island during the summer vacation. I am writing to tell you about our travel plans.
We will be traveling around Hainan Island from July 15th to July 21st. While there,we will go hiking, climb mountains, swim near the beach and have a campfire party. We also plan to go diving if weather permits. I’d like you to join us if possible. I am sure we will have a lot of fun being together. If you want to join us, please remember to bring your bathing suit and passport.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体4 感谢信
感谢信是向帮助、关心或支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,要表达出诚挚的谢意。具体写作结构为：
写作素材要记牢——感谢信常用表达(温馨提示：以下内容，尝试背诵)
【先声夺人开头句——表明写信意图】
1.I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks for.../I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks for...我写这封信是为了表达我对……的衷心感谢。
2.Upon leaving.../graduation,I’d like to express my heartfelt/sincere thanks to you for...在离开……/毕业之际,我想对你表示衷心/真诚的感谢。
3.I would like to take this opportunity to express my thanks for your timely help.我愿借此机会对您的及时帮助表示感谢。
【引人入胜篇中句——陈述感谢的理由】
1.Without your timely help, I would not have been.../Thanks to your help,I have made rapid progress in.../But for your help,I would not have made so much progress in...如果没有你及时的帮助,我就不会……/多亏了你的帮助,我在……方面取得了迅速的进步。/如果没有你的帮助,我就不会在……方面取得如此大的进步。
2.There’s no denying that it is very difficult for me to...without your help.不可否认,没有你的帮助,我很难……
3.It was your encouragement that built up my confidence when I had trouble in learning English.当我学习英语有困难时,正是你的鼓励建立起了我的信心。
4.What’s more, whenever I was overwhelmed by homesickness,you were always with me,and were ready to give me a hand.更重要的是,每当我思念家乡时,你总是和我在一起,时刻帮助我。
【画龙点睛结尾句——再次表示感谢】
1.Your kindness and help will always be remembered by me.你的善良和帮助将永远被我铭记。
2.My gratitude is beyond description./Words fail to express my thanks to you.我的感激之情难以言表/语言无法表达我对你的感谢。
3.I deeply appreciate your help and I hope to have the opportunity to reward your kindness.我非常感谢你们的帮助,希望有机会回报你们的好意。
4.Without your assistance, my English couldn’t have gotten better in such a short time. Thanks again for your kind help.没有你的帮助,我的英语不可能在这么短的时间内进步这么快。再次感谢你的善意的帮助。
写作精进要训练——向父母表达感谢
(2024·江西南昌高三第三次模拟考试)假定你是国际交流学生Jim,学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼,校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母,信的内容大致如下：
1.成长与收获；　2.表达感恩；　3.继续努力。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
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[参考范文]
Dear Dad and Mom,
How time flies! Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born. So I’m writing this letter to convey my deepest gratitude and love to you.
During these years, I gradually gained a lot of confidence from your companion and encouragement, and I still remember when I failed in maths exams and even tended to give up, you just patted me on the shoulder and inspired me to keep on. What’s more, you praised me for my earnest effort and progress, which really gave me a sense of achievement. To be good parents is by no means an easy job as I imagined before, so I’m very grateful for your patience, guidance, responsibility and affection as well as all you have done for me.
Love you forever!
Yours loving boy,
Jim
文体5 推荐信
推荐信是向对方推荐一个人、一个地方、一次活动或一个东西等。应给出推荐理由,介绍自己推荐的内容的优点。具体写作结构为：
写作素材要记牢——推荐信常用表达(温馨提示：以下内容，尝试背诵)
【先声夺人开头句——点明写信意图和推荐对象】
1.Hearing that you are hosting an activity to select “The Most Qualified Student” of this school year, I am writing to recommend my best friend Tom to you.听说你正在举办一项活动,选择本学年“最优秀的学生”,我写信向你推荐我最好的朋友汤姆。
2.I’m more than glad/pleased/delighted/cheerful to learn that you are coming to China, and I’d like to offer my recommendation.得知你要来中国,我很高兴,想向你提出我的推荐。
3.Having known that you are in need of a student assistant,I happily recommend Li Mei to you. 知道你需要一个学生助理,我很高兴地向你推荐李梅。
【引人入胜篇中句——提出具体推荐理由】
1.Firstly, Tom,who is among the most diligent students in our school,not only studies hard but also behaves well.首先,汤姆是我们学校最勤奋的学生之一,他不仅学习努力,而且表现良好。
2.Last but not least, he is warm - hearted and willing to help others in need, for which I recommend him to you.最后但同等重要的是,他是一个热心肠的人,愿意帮助有需要的人,因此我把他推荐给你。
3.Besides, he stands out for his diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin.除此之外,他还有多种爱好,包括绘画和拉小提琴。
4.Besides, with different kinds of sea animals,you can enjoy a lovely dolphin show, where the dolphins will jump out of the water and give you an amazing performance.此外,有了不同种类的海洋动物,你可以享受一个可爱的海豚表演,海豚会从水里跳出来,给你一个精彩的表演。
【画龙点睛结尾句——期待对方接受推荐并祝愿】
1.I do hope you can take my recommendation into account/consideration and make a final decision.我真希望你能考虑我的建议并作出最后的决定。
2.Hope my recommendations will be of great help to you.Wish you a good time.希望我的推荐对你有很大的帮助。祝你玩得愉快。
写作精进要训练——推荐中国旅游地点
(2024·广东汕头高三二模)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Richard计划今年暑假来中国旅游并学习中国文化,请你写信给他。内容包括：
1.推荐合适的目的地；　2.说明理由。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear Richard,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Richard,
I’m more than delighted to hear that you are coming to visit China and I’d like to offer my recommendations.
Not only are there countless places of interest in China worth a visit,such as the Summer Palace,the Great Wall and the Terra Cotta Warriors,but also you’ll enjoy some spectacular natural scenery. Besides,if necessary,I’m willing to be your guide,such as booking a hotel or treating you to some bites of snacks. I hold the firm belief that this travel can enable you to have fun as well as experience great Chinese culture.
Wish you a pleasant journey in China!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体6 申请信
申请信类型很多,包括求职信、报考申请信、留学申请信等,其目的是让对方了解自己的经验、能力等,在写申请信时语气应诚恳礼貌。具体写作结构为：
写作素材要记牢——申请信常用表达(温馨提示：以下内容，尝试背诵)
【先声夺人开头句——表明写作目的】
1.I’m writing to apply for your recently advertised position of...我写此信是为了应聘贵公司最近广告招聘的……职位。
2.Informed/Learning that you want...,I strongly recommend myself as a qualified candidate.被告知/得知你想要……,我强烈推荐自己作为一个合格的候选人。
3.Perfectly fit/suitable/qualified for...,I’m writing in reply to your notice for...完全适合/符合……的条件,我写此信是为了回复你的招聘……的通知。
4.My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for this Olympics./ I am writing to apply to be a volunteer. 我叫李华。我想成为本届奥运会的志愿者。/我写信是想申请成为一名志愿者。
【引人入胜篇中句——详细介绍个人优势】
1.总述：I am competent to meet the requirements you’ve listed.我有能力满足你列出的要求。
2.资格：I am confident that I’m suitable for.../qualified to do.../equal to doing...我相信我适合……/有资格做……/胜任做……
3.性格：①Meanwhile, it is my independence that makes it easy for me to adapt to a new environment.与此同时,我的独立性使我很容易适应一个新的环境。
②For my being outgoing and enthusiastic,it’s relatively easy to get along with me.我性格外向、热情,相对容易与人相处。
③Sociable and responsible,I do believe I’m perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.善于交际,有责任心,我相信我完全有资格担任志愿者。
4.交流：①As a graduate majoring in English,I have no difficulty in communicating with others in English.
作为一个英语专业的毕业生,我用英语与他人交流没有困难。
②What is more important is that my good communication skills enable me to keep a good relationship with others.更重要的是,我良好的交流技巧使我能够与他人保持良好的关系。
5.经验：①Furthermore,I have participated in community activities for years on end, which makes me cope with various emergencies promptly and efficiently/more qualified for the position.此外,我连续多年参加社区活动,使我能及时有效地应对各种紧急情况/更有资格担任这个职位。
②I once worked as...,which makes me experienced in...我曾经担任……,这使我在……方面有经验。
【画龙点睛结尾句——表示感谢，期待回复】
1.Should you favor me with the position,I am convinced that I would live up to your expectations.如果你能提供给我这个职位,我相信我不会辜负你的期望。
2.I would appreciate it if I’m offered the chance.I will spare no effort to offer my best service.如果您能给我这个机会,我将不遗余力地为您提供最好的服务。
写作精进要训练——申请做一名茶文化交流活动的志愿者
假定你是李华,你从网上得知你的家乡将举办茶文化交流活动。请你写一封英文信申请做志愿者,内容包括：
1.写信目的；　2.对活动的认识；　3.个人优势。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua High School. Learning from the Internet that you need volunteers for a tea culture exchange activity, I’m writing to apply for this position.
In the grand event, guests from various areas will explore a range of tea cultures to promote multilateral exchanges and cooperation.I feel this position is specially tailored for me. To start with, I have learned a lot about tea cultures from its processing, preserving to drinking. Additionally, I have a good command of English and know how to communicate appropriately.
Your timely reply will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体7 求助信
　　求助信是当一个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信,注意语气要委婉、真诚。具体写作结构为：
写作素材要记牢——求助信常用表达(温馨提示：以下内容，尝试背诵)
【先声夺人开头句——表明求助意图】
1.My name is Li Hua, a student of summer courses here. I’m writing this letter to report some of the problems and puzzles I encountered when learning the course of Business English.我叫李华,是这里暑期课程的学生。我写这封信是为了报告我在学习商务英语课程时遇到的一些问题和难题。
2.I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 student.Currently, I’m having trouble learning English so I’m writing in the hope that you could do me a favor.我是李华,一名高三学生。目前,我在学习英语方面有困难,所以我写信是希望您能帮我一个忙。
3.Faced with/Facing so many difficulties,I am anxious to ask you for help.面对如此多的困难,我急切地想向你求助。
【引人入胜篇中句——说明求助事由】
1.I was wondering if you could spare some time to remove the following doubts from me.我想知道你是否能抽出一些时间来消除我的以下疑虑。
2.What troubles me most is that I fail to catch up with the teacher,which has been troubling me a lot.最让我困扰的是我跟不上老师的进度,这一直困扰着我。
3.It can’t be better if you can look through my resume for possible mistakes and polish them up.如果你能看一下我的简历,找出可能出现的错误并加以修改,那就再好不过了。
【画龙点睛结尾句——表达希望和感谢】
1.I would be grateful if you can spare time to do me a favor. Looking forward to your early reply.如果你能抽出时间帮我,我会很感激的。期待你的早日回复。
2.I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I would really appreciate it if you could help me.我想知道你能否帮助我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我,我将感激不尽。
3.I would appreciate it if you could be so kind as to give me some useful/practical tips/suggestions.如果你能给我一些有用的/实用的提示/建议,我将不胜感激。
4.Thanks for considering my request.I’m looking forward to your reply.谢谢你考虑我的要求,我期待着你的答复。
写作精进要训练——求助笔友一些与准备比赛相关的问题
(2024·安徽阜阳统测)假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校将举办一场“唱响青春”校园歌手大赛。你在做这次歌手大赛的准备工作时遇到了一些问题。请给有相关组织经验的美国笔友Mark写一封电子邮件,内容包括：
1.遇到的问题(节目流程安排、如何吸引观众等)；　2.寻求建议。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear Mark,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Mark,
I hope this email finds you well. I am busy organizing a campus singing competition in our school. However, I have encountered some challenges during the preparation and I think your organizational experience can provide valuable insights.
One of the main issues I’m facing is how to arrange the program in a way that keeps the audience engaged. I want to ensure that the competition is not only entertaining but also appealing from start to finish. Do you have any suggestions Additionally, I am also seeking ideas on how to attract a larger audience to the competition. Are there any strategies that have worked well for you in similar events
I appreciate any advice you can provide. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Li Hua
文体8 咨询信
咨询信,又称询问信,是写信人对不理解、不熟悉的事情或对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解详细信息的信件。具体写作结构为：
写作素材要记牢——咨询信常用表达(温馨提示：以下内容，尝试背诵)
【先声夺人开头句——表明写信意图】
1.I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding...我写这封信是想看看你是否可以向我提供有关……的信息。
2.I’m writing to enquire some detailed/further information about...我写信是想询问有关……的详细/进一步的信息。
3. I’m so interested in it that I’m writing to ask for more detailed information concerning swimming training.我对此很感兴趣,所以写信来询问有关游泳训练的更多详细信息。
4.I’m more than delighted to join in a poetry recitation competition to be held in our school. So I’m writing to consult you about something relevant to it.我非常高兴能够参加即将在我们学校举办的诗歌朗诵比赛。所以我写信是想咨询您与之相关的一些事情。
【引人入胜篇中句——阐明咨询的具体内容】
1.First and foremost,could you please tell me how the course is arranged and how long it lasts？首先,您能告诉我这门课程是怎么安排的,上多长时间吗？
2.Aside from that,I intend to know how much I have to pay for the course if I sign up for it.除此之外,我想知道如果我报名这门课程,我需要付多少钱。
3.Last but not least,I’d like to inquire if there is any discount available for students.最后但同等重要的是,我想询问一下学生是否有折扣。
4.If there is anything else that needs special attention,please inform me at your convenience.如果还有其他需要特别注意的事情,请在方便的时候通知我。
【画龙点睛结尾句——表达期望和感谢】
1.I would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.如果你能在方便的时候尽早回复,我将不胜感激。
2.Thank you for your kindness,and your prompt attention/early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.感谢您的盛情款待,如能及时回复,我们将不胜感激。
写作精进要训练——咨询游学项目相关信息
假定你是李华,在网上看到某国际机构组织暑期到新西兰游学(study tour)的广告。请用英语给该项目的负责人写一封邮件,询问参加游学的费用、住宿方式和行程安排等情况。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
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[参考范文]
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China.I read your advertisement for a study tour of New Zealand on the Internet.Having dreamed of traveling to New Zealand since my childhood, I am writing to make some inquiries about it.
First of all,could you tell me how much I should pay if I am going to join the study tour Secondly, where are we going to stay during the study tour Are we going to stay in hotel rooms or in a student dormitory I think we can experience the local culture if we stay on campus. More importantly, could you give me a detailed schedule so that I can make arrangements in advance
I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua　　
文体9 祝贺信
在英语中,祝贺信使用的频率很高,当亲友晋升、毕业、获奖等时会写祝贺信。祝贺信的用词应亲切有礼,表达出真诚的喜悦之情。具体写作结构为：
写作素材要记牢——祝贺信常用表达(温馨提示：以下内容，尝试背诵)
【先声夺人开头句——表明写信意图】
1.I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations to you on your receiving first prize of English Composition Competition.我写这封信是想对你获得英语作文比赛一等奖表示最诚挚的祝贺。
2.Congratulations! All of us feel proud of your remarkable achievements in the school.恭喜！我们都为你在学校取得的杰出成就感到骄傲。
3.Good news travels fast! Please accept my upmost congratulations on your being elected as the president of the Students’ Union.好消息传得真快！请接受我最诚挚的祝贺,祝贺你当选为学生会主席。
【引人入胜篇中句——肯定对方、表达缘由】
1.It’s the great efforts which you have made that result in this excellent achievement. The prize is a reward you deserve.是你的巨大努力造就了这一卓越的成就。奖品是你应得的奖赏。
2.I have read your poem, which not only reflects your knowledge of Chinese language and your love for Chinese culture, but is also full of unique and creative thinking.我读过你的诗,这首诗不仅反映了你对中国语言的了解和对中国文化的热爱,而且富有独特的创造性思维。
【画龙点睛结尾句——再次表达祝贺和期望】
1.Congratulations to you again from the bottom of my heart！再次衷心地祝贺你！
2.Congratulations again and wish you a prosperous future！再次祝贺你,并祝愿你有一个美好的未来！
写作精进要训练——向笔友表达祝贺
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛并获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件向他表示祝贺,内容包括：
1.祝贺他获奖； 　2.肯定他付出的努力；　3.询问何时方便,在网上切磋棋艺。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
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[参考范文]
Dear Peter,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge. As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success.
“Everything comes to him who waits.” For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess and persisted in practicing it on a daily basis. Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but you have also competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contests. Now all your efforts have paid off.
Congratulations again! I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when you have time.
Yours,
Li Hua