期末培优 读后续写专项练习（含答案与解析）2025-2026学年高二上学期英语外研版(2019)
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期末培优 读后续写
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
The eight﹣year﹣old Carol lived with her father David，mother May and elder brother Rob.The little family happily lived in a beautiful village surrounded with beautiful nature.The village was at the foot of a mountain，with beautiful views of the snowy mountain.The family survived on growing seasonal plants and trees.Their life is totally surrounded by nature and beauty.
While they lived a very happy life，Carol did not love the beautiful atmosphere of the village.She really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life.She wanted to shop，move around the city，watch movies，and eat in fantastic restaurants and cafes，etc.
However，there was hardly any chance that Carol's family moved to the city as they had everything in the village.
One day，Carol fell asleep during the early noon and she had a sound sleep.Of course，she had a strange dream.She saw her grandmother in her dream as a fairy and her deceased grandmother granted her a wish.Carol requested her that she would love to enjoy the city life as she always desired.
Grandmother understood the desire of Carol，but still wanted to convince her that the peaceful village life is better than the city life.
She told Carol，"Baby，you cannot have access to fresh fruits and vegetables from plants as you have at your home.You cannot breathe fresh air.You cannot play with animals.You can hardly find any trees.You will not find peace as you see here!Do you still want to go to the city？"
Without hearing the concerns，Carol asked her grandmother to grant the wish.Grandmother granted her wish but with a condition.Carol was told that she would only have 6 hours to spend in the city.Later，she would return to the village.Carol agreed.
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Carol then found herself in the city with her friends._____
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Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up._____
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
My mom only had one eye.I hated her.She was such an embarrassment.
She ran a small shop at a flea market and collected old clothes and some other things to sell for the money we needed.Once during elementary school，it was field day，and my mom came.I was so embarrassed and wondered how could she do this time？I threw her a hateful look and ran out.The next day at school，my schoolmates asked me，"Your mom only has one eye？ " and laughed at me.
I was so angry with my mom and wished that she would just disappear from this world.So I said to my mom，"Why don't you have the other eye？You're only gonna make me a joke! " My mom trembled with shock，and said in an apologetic tone，"I'm so sorry that I only have one eye，and I was an embarrassment for you.But I was so proud of my son to see a whole new world for me with that eye.I will leave right now.Sorry! " My mom turned around and slipped away.
For the words I had said to her earlier，there was something biting at me in the corner of my heart.Even so，I hated my one﹣eyed mom and our desperate poverty.Maybe because my mom hadn't punished me，I didn't think I had hurt her feelings very badly.
I told myself that I would become successful in the near future，so I studied very hard.Later I got accepted by the Seoul University.I left my mother and came to Seoul to study.I never went back to visit my mom.
Then I got married there.I bought a house of my own.Then I had kids，too.Now I am living happily as a successful man.I enjoy the life in Seoul because it's a place that doesn't remind me of my mom and my past.This kind of happiness was getting bigger and bigger，until one day someone knocked at my door.
注意：续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
It was my mom!And still with her one eye!____
Holding the letter，I cried for the person who only lived for me._______
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood：It was filled with surprise and amusements，all because of my mother—loving，sweet，and yet absent﹣minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota，and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way.As the first day of our trip approached，David，my eight﹣year﹣old brother，and I unwillingly said good﹣bye to all of our friends.Who knew if we'd ever see them again？Finally，the moment of our departure arrived，and we loaded suitcases，books，games，camping equipment，and a tent into the car and bravely drove off.We bravely drove off again two hours later after we'd returned home to get the purse and traveler's checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept："You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go，and I'll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go. " I had terrible pictures in my mind："Honey，where are the kids？" "What？!Oh，Gosh...I thought they were being awfully quiet. " We were never actually left behind in a strange city，but we weren't about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night，we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy.After driving in vain for some time，Mom suddenly got a great idea：Why didn't we find a house with a likely﹣looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there？David and I became nervous.To our great relief，Dad turned down the idea.Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps，Mom would have been delighted.She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is.We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好。
The next day we remembered the brand﹣new tent we had brought with us.______
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.______
4．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的短文。
In a class I teach for adults，I recently did something "unpardonable".I gave the class homework!The assignment was to "go to someone you love within the next week and tell them you love them.It has to be someone you have never said those words to before or at least haven't shared those words with for a long time." Now that doesn't sound like a very tough assignment，until you stop to realize that most of the men were over 35 and were raised in the generation of men that were taught that expressing emotions is not "macho（大男子气概的）".Showing feelings or crying（heaven forbid！）was just not done.So this was a very threatening assignment for some.
At the beginning of our next class，I asked if someone wanted to share what happened when they told someone they loved them.I fully expected one of the women to volunteer，as was usually the case，but on this evening one of the men raised his hand.
He appeared quite moved and a bit shaken.As he unfolded out of his chair，he began by saying，"Dennis，I was quite angry with you last week when you gave us this assignment.I didn't feel that I had anyone to say those words to，and besides，who were you to tell me to do something that personal？But as I began driving home my conscience started talking to me.It was telling me that I knew exactly who I needed to say I love you too."
"You see，five years ago，my father and I had a severe disagreement and really never resolved it since that time.We avoided seeing each other unless we absolutely had to at Christmas or other family gatherings.But even then，we hardly spoke to each other.So last Tuesday by the time I got home I had convinced myself I was going to tell my dad I loved him.It's weird，but just making that decision seemed to lift a heavy load off my chest."
"The next morning I was up bright and early.I was so excited that I could hardly sleep.I got to the office early and accomplished more in two hours than I had the whole day before."
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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At 9：00 I called my dad to see if I could come over after work.__________.
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It was as if a dramatic change came over my dad.__________.
5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was raining pretty hard on Halloween，but that wasn't going to stop my little sister Kate and me from trick﹣or﹣treating.We decided to start at Miss Parson's house.Miss Parson was loved by us kids who lived nearby because she often shared her self﹣made cookies with us.We usually finished them in a second，especially when we were hungry after class.Sometimes，when we visited her or did something for her，she always gave us surprise.
Kate and I wondered what kinds of treats she'd offer.As we walked down the street，I held an umbrella，a bag for candy，and my sister's hand.Jack﹣o﹣Lanterns gave soft light along the street.Spider webs hung in all the windows.Parents who were dressed up like monsters（怪物） stood in doorways.After we had walked a few blocks，we were wet from head to toes，and I felt Kate was trembling with cold.
There was a light on at Miss Parson's house，but there were no ghosts，goblins（小妖精），or Jack﹣o﹣Lanterns.We climbed up the steps and saw Miss Parson through a window.She was drinking a cup of hot tea.
"Maybe she doesn't celebrate Halloween，" Kate said with a sigh，disappointedly.
"Well，even if she doesn't，she usually likes it when we visit her，" I said and knocked on the door.
Miss Parson seemed surprised when she opened it and saw our dressing."Is today Halloween？" she asked."I completely forgot.I am so sorry！"
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Miss Parson rushed us into her house.________
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The next morning，a hot and sweet discussion about Miss Parson and Halloween spread among us kids.________
6．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Five years ago，my father and I had a heated disagreement and really never resolved it since that time.We avoided seeing each other unless we had to be at family gatherings.But even then，we hardly spoke to each other.
Last Tuesday I convinced myself I was going to tell my father I loved him.I called my dad to see if I could come over.When he answered the phone，I just said，"Dad，can I come over after work tonight？I have something to tell you. "My dad responded，"Now what？ "I assured him it wouldn't take long，so he finally agreed.
I came to my parents' house，praying Dad would answer the door.I was afraid that if Mom answered I would chicken out and tell her instead.But as luck would have it，Dad did answer the door.
"Dad，I just came over to tell you that I love you. "
It was as if a transformation（转换；改革；变形）came over my dad.His face softened，and the wrinkles seemed to disappear.He hugged me and said，"I love you too，my son，but I've never been able to say it. "
It was such a precious moment that I didn't want to move.Dad and I hugged for a moment longer and then I left.
Two days later，my dad，who had heart problems，but didn't tell me，had an attack and ended up in the hospital，unconscious.I don't know if he'll make it.
So my message to all of you in this is：Don't wait to do the things that you know need to be done.What if I had waited to tell my dad—maybe I will never get the chance again!Take the time to do what you need to do and do it now!
7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文.续写的词数应为150个左右。
Sam Watts was a 37﹣year﹣old fisherman living and working in Canada.One day，Sam planned to head out into the Pacific at 9 am and work straight through until 5pm the next day.Joining Sam would be his crewman，24﹣year﹣old Tom Buck.
Although Sam had been warned that a storm was coming，there was little that would keep him from going.As he sailed through the waves some 120 kilometers from land，Sam let out his three﹣kilometer﹣long fishing line.The storm was gaining strength on land but had yet to reach the men far offshore.That changed around 1 am.Waves rocked the small boat，which began to turn sideways like an amusement park ride. "Get us out of here! "Tom screamed to Sam. "Let's go back! "
With the winds and waves kicking up，the boat began to fill with water.Sam and Tom tried to pull in the fishing line together，but the high waves filled the boat with water，forcing Sam to make a hard decision.He cut the line，losing thousands of dollars' worth of equipment and fish in the sea.He then pointed the boat toward a port five hours away.Sam then called his boss，William Fox，to report his position.
With dawn coming，Sam spotted the rise of the mountains on the horizon.He was figuring out a route through the dangerous waters when suddenly the motor stopped. "I couldn't believe it，" Sam said. "We were 24 kilometers off the coast，and the motor died." High waves raised and dropped the boat，sending the men crashing into the sides. "William，William! " Sam yelled into the radio. "If you're coming to get me，come now! "
"We're coming! " William shouted back.
Shortly after，the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore，driving the men farther out to sea._________
The next morning，Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance.__________
8．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Eric was working in a selling business.He had been on the road visiting people for more than a month without going home.He couldn't wait to get back to see his wife and children.It was coming up on Mother's Day，so he usually tried to make it "back home"，but this year he was just too busy and too tired.When he was driving in a small town，he saw a flower shop.He said to himself，"I know what I will do.I'll send my mother some roses."
He stopped and went into the flower shop and saw a boy talking to a girl in it. "How many roses can I get for six dollars，Miss？" the boy asked.The girl was trying to explain that roses were expensive.Maybe the boy would be happy with something else.
"No，I have to have roses，" he said. "My mom was badly sick last year and I didn't get to spend much time with her.I want to get something special.It has to be red roses，because they are her favorite." He was stubborn.
The girl in the shop looked up at Eric and was just shaking her head.Something inside of Eric was touched by the boy's voice.He wanted to get those roses so badly.Eric had been blessed（幸运的）in his business，so he looked at the girl and whispered to her that he would pay for the boy's roses.
The girl looked at the boy and said，"OK，I will give you a dozen red roses for your dollars." The boy almost jumped into the air.He took the flowers and ran out of the store.It was worth more than thirty﹣five dollars just to see that kind of excitement.
Eric ordered his own flowers and asked the girl to have them delivered to his mother.After that，with a relief he drove away.Not long after his driving，he saw the boy walking to a graveyard（墓地）.
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Eric stopped his car and followed the boy.___________.
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Eric went into his car in tears.___________.
9．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
John was crazy about playing basketball.Every day after school，he would spend much time practicing basketball skills.Sometimes，he didn't go back home until sunset，which made his mother extremely angry.One day，as he was given a chance to watch a basketball game，he dreamed about being a member of the college basketball team the next year.On the way，he was delighted secretly.He thought no one in the world was luckier than him.Suddenly，a car hit him.What a terrible experience!It seemed like a bad dream.
John woke up in a hospital room.He was frightened to death.He realized that he couldn't move both of his legs.At that time，the doctor came in.When the doctor told him that both his legs were broken and he had to sit in the wheelchair for the time being，he knew his college basketball dream was over.He was really depressed.John followed what the doctors had told him，but it did not work entirely.When he left hospital，John was sent to a health recovery center.He never heard of this center before，but it was not far away from his house.Although he felt unwilling to go there，he had no choice but to accept the fact.
A week later，he arrived there unhappily.The first person he met was Sunny Chen，who was so kind and friendly that he warmly welcome John to go there.Sunny's legs were badly hurt in a skating accident.He told John that he would help him recover soon.Though Sunny couldn't move his legs，he became the coach of a basketball team called the Suns.After a period of recovery training.John felt his legs were all right.So Sunny invited him to join the game.Sunny guided the team on his wheelchair.John played badly，but for the first time since the accident，he stopped feeling sorry for himself.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
John was glad that his dream of being a member of the basketball team came true._________
Sunny saw all John did，lost in thought._________
10．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was a small town with nice landscapes that attracted a lot of rich people to live in.Ming was also attracted by the scenic spots of the town.But he had little money，so he rented a cheap house after he arrived.But what drew his attention most here was those wealthy people.So he took up a job to sell cell phones.But his cell phones were not good in quality.
One day，Ming's pocket was empty again and wanted to earn money.Luckily，there was still a phone in his pocket to sell.Soon enough，he spotted a target—a seemingly wealthy middle﹣aged man in an old jacket.Ming came up to him and smiled politely，saying，"Hey，friend..." But the man was very cautious and asked，"What's up？"
Ming said to him immediately，"Friend，I have a phone.I bought it at 5，000 yuan.But now I could sell it to you at only 3，000 yuan." The man seemed uninterested in his phone and wanted to go away.Ming stopped him and said，"What about 2，000 yuan？" the man shouted at him，"What do you want to do with me？"
Ming immediately put up a poor face and hugged the man's legs，crying to him，"Oh，my dear friend!Only 1，000 yuan，is it OK？" Ming began pouring out his "sad story" as he was crying.The man，after seeing this，felt a little bit moved and put his hands into his pocket.Then he took out 1，000 yuan to Ming and took the phone away.
After earning 1，000 yuan，Ming felt happy.As he felt hungry，he went to a small restaurant to have lunch.Ming ordered several dishes and handed over a note of 100 yuan to the cashier.The cashier stared at the banknote（钞票） for quite a while，as if checking if it was a fake note（假币），and then said to Ming，"Sorry，I could not find the change for you for the moment.Please wait a minute." Then he went away.Staying in the restaurant without anything to do，Ming sat at a table and started to watch TV.After all，his cheap﹣rented house had no TV.
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The TV was broadcasting a piece of news._______
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The police car stopped before the small restaurant and two policemen came out of the car and arrested Ming._________
11．（2023春 上高县校级期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Eric was working in a selling business.He had been on the road visiting people for more than a month without going home.He couldn't wait to get back to see his wife and children.It was coming up on Mother's Day，and he usually tried to make it "back home"，but this year he was just too busy and too tired.The day when he was driving in a small town，he saw a flower shop.He said to himself，"I know what I will do.I'll send my mother some roses."
He stopped and went into the flower shop and saw a young man talking to the girl in it."How many roses can I get for five dollars，Miss？"the young man asked.The girl was trying to explain that roses were expensive.Maybe the young man would be happy with something else.
"No.I have to have roses，" he said."My mom was badly sick last year and I didn't get to spend much time with her.I want to get something special.It has to be red roses，because that is her favorite." He was so stubborn.
The girl in the shop looked up at Eric and was just shaking her head.Something inside of Eric was touched by the young man's voice.He wanted to get those roses so badly.Eric had been lucky in his business，and he looked at the girl and silently said that he would pay for the young man's roses.
The girl looked at the young man and said，"OK，I will give you a dozen red roses for your dollars." The young man almost jumped into the air.He took the flowers and ran down the store.It was worth more than fifty dollars just to see that kind of excitement.
Eric ordered his own flowers and asked the girl to have it delivered to his mother.After that，with a relief he drove down the road.Not long after his driving，he saw the young man walking to a graveyard（墓地）．
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Eric stopped his car and followed the young man.
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Eric went into the car in tears.
12．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was eight years old my seven﹣year﹣old cousin，Juliana，got sick.My brother and I were in the family room watching television when my mom came in to tell us the bad news.I wasn't really sure what a heart operation meant，but I could tell it wasn't a good thing.Juliana's family was on a tight budget（预算），so was mine.My parents' faces were full of worry and tears，and that was enough to make me cry，too.
When we went to see Juliana in the hospital，she was lying in bed，and she had tubes （管子） and other things hooked to her.It was confusing and scary.
The treatments continued，but Juliana was weaker and weaker.Every time I visited her，it was hard for me to believe her change.She seemed to lose all her strength and her lovely face turned pale.She lost a lot of weight even though she had proper food.As a child，I really couldn't understand what the doctors were doing to her﹣it seemed like they were making her feel worse not better.
Seeing my cousin in so much pain made me feel like my own heart was aching.Something needed to be done.I knew I wanted to help her get better faster，but at eight years old，I wasn't sure how I could make a difference﹣I just knew I had to do something to help her.
One night after we visited Juliana，all the way home I couldn't stop thinking about her.A hospital can be a very scary，cold place.I imagined how lonely Juliana must have felt lying there during the night.
When we got home，I sat down at our kitchen table.I always liked writing stories and drawing pictures，and I started working at it like I had done so many other nights.But this night was different﹣I was thinking about Juliana.I thought， "Juliana is going to receive rehabilitation training（康复训练） but money is tight.What if I can sell my drawings？Then I can raise money to help her get well faster."
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I told my parents，they thought it was a wonderful idea，but then we came up with an even better one._______
Soon，we made enough money to pay for Juliana's rehabilitation training._______
13．（2024秋 元宝山区期末）
A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming.Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last.After the happy family got ready，they set out for the grandparents' eagerly.On the way，the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared.Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa.They arrived at the driveway，at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.
Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room，shouting excitedly "Grandpa，we are back!"
Seeing his grandsons，Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain.A helpless expression flashed on his face.Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn't stand up on his own forever.But Grandpa declared stubbornly（倔强地）， "I can! " Certainly，he was stuck in his boyish way.Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time.They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation，went out and wandered into the forest.Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other，while young ones rose straight like soldiers.Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom.He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs.The trees，birds，lizards，lots of bugs...How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn't get up，which made them worried. "We'd think out a way to cheer him up." Jack said. "Grandpa is a bird lover，and we can catch him a bird." Berlin suggested. "But he hates birds being caged!" Jack shook his head.
Then a bright idea came to Jack's mind. "Why not make a cane（拐杖）out of a young tree!"
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Berlin thought it was a good idea.______ Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.______
14．（2024秋 仁寿县校级期末）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
"I'm going to miss you so much，Poppy，" said the tall，thin teenager.He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye.He stood up，hugged his parents，and smiled，trying not to let his emotions get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control.They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying.It was time to say goodbye for now at least.The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder，and flashed a bright smile. "I guess this is it，" he said. "I'll see you back home in a month，okay？" His parents nodded，and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents.The boy's mother turned to the dog，"Okay，Poppy，time to go back home."
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there.All that week，Poppy didn't seem interested in her dinner，her favorite toy，or even in her daily walk.Her owners were sad too，but they knew their son would be back to visit.Poppy didn't.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats.They even let her sit on the sofa，but the old girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self.Her owners started to get worried. "What should we do to cheer Poppy up？" asked Dad. "We've tried everything."
"I have an idea，but it might be a little crazy，" smiled Mom. "Without anybody left in the house but us，this place could use a bit of fun.Let's get a little dog for Poppy."
It didn't take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box.Poppy welcomed them home as usual but when she saw the box，she stopped.She put her nose on it.Her tail began wagging（摆动）ever so slowly，then faster as she caught the smell.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Para 1.Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. ﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
Para 2.A few weeks later，the boy arrived home from university. ﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
15．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Probably，most of you had the feeling before，at least once—you had been waiting for a long time，yet being afraid of getting.It was exactly my state of mind before the first day at college.I had been working hard to pass the necessary tests and have my application to the undergraduate programme in management approved.And when the time had come for me to visit the college for the first day of the study，I couldn't sleep all night because of being anxious about how to look good physically in front of the whole new world I was about to enter.However，the positive attitude and readiness to accept support from others helped a lot in a new environment.
It was Monday morning.Being too excited to sleep the night before，I came to the college half an hour earlier for the first lecture and was walking nervously through the hallway.About 15 minutes after I came，the hallway started to be full of students.Professors who walked on their business probably didn't pay attention to me.I knew which hall to go to and had already checked that it was open.However，I was hesitant to enter the hall and sit there alone.People were moving around me as if they hadn't seen me.I felt disappointed with the fact that I had nobody to talk to in the new and seemingly unfriendly place.
Suddenly，a well﹣dressed man who seemed to be in his late twenties approached me.He introduced himself as Mathews and asked whether I was lost and whether he could help me with anything.In that situation，I realized it was very kind of him and that he was exactly the person I wanted to ask in my thoughts a minute before，but then I was too nervous for a friendly chat.As a result，instead of welcoming the opportunity to make the first acquaintance（相识），I told the man to mind his business and leave me alone since I was an adult capable of finding my class without anybody's assistance.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Luckily，the man didn't seem to be angry.__________.
Professor Mathews turned out to be an excellent speaker and the lecture went really well.__________.
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1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
The eight﹣year﹣old Carol lived with her father David，mother May and elder brother Rob.The little family happily lived in a beautiful village surrounded with beautiful nature.The village was at the foot of a mountain，with beautiful views of the snowy mountain.The family survived on growing seasonal plants and trees.Their life is totally surrounded by nature and beauty.
While they lived a very happy life，Carol did not love the beautiful atmosphere of the village.She really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life.She wanted to shop，move around the city，watch movies，and eat in fantastic restaurants and cafes，etc.
However，there was hardly any chance that Carol's family moved to the city as they had everything in the village.
One day，Carol fell asleep during the early noon and she had a sound sleep.Of course，she had a strange dream.She saw her grandmother in her dream as a fairy and her deceased grandmother granted her a wish.Carol requested her that she would love to enjoy the city life as she always desired.
Grandmother understood the desire of Carol，but still wanted to convince her that the peaceful village life is better than the city life.
She told Carol，"Baby，you cannot have access to fresh fruits and vegetables from plants as you have at your home.You cannot breathe fresh air.You cannot play with animals.You can hardly find any trees.You will not find peace as you see here!Do you still want to go to the city？"
Without hearing the concerns，Carol asked her grandmother to grant the wish.Grandmother granted her wish but with a condition.Carol was told that she would only have 6 hours to spend in the city.Later，she would return to the village.Carol agreed.
Paragraph 1：
Carol then found herself in the city with her friends._____
Paragraph 2：
Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up._____
【答案】Carol then found herself in the city with her friends.Carol and her friends went to watch movies.After they ate delicious food in a restaurant and shopped in a huge mall，Carol was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the city.Yet at the same time，she understood that everything told by her grandmother was true in the city.There was no peace and no silence；the city life was fast and rushing.The air quality is not satisfying.She could hardly find any animal or even a tree.
Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up.She recalled what happened just now in her dream and realized that her life in the village with her family was far more wonderful than the city life.Carol understood that she was having a more joyful life.She shared her dream with her family while enjoying the fresh fruits and vegetables，and they laughed together.Carol also developed love for plants，animals and beautiful nature.
【分析】本文讲述了卡罗尔一家在乡村平静而幸福的生活，但是卡罗尔却不喜欢这种生活，而是向往城市的生活。有一天，卡罗尔做了一个梦...
高分句型一：After they ate delicious food in a restaurant and shopped in a huge mall，Carol was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the city.
翻译：之后，他们在一家餐馆吃了美味的食物，在一家大型购物中心购物，卡罗尔很高兴有机会体验城市生活。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：She recalled what happened just now in her dream and realized that her life in the village with her family was far more wonderful than the city life.
翻译：她回忆起刚才在梦中发生的事情，意识到她和家人在村子里的生活远比城市生活精彩。
分析：本句使用了what引导的宾语从句；that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Carol then found herself in the city with her friends.Carol and her friends went to watch movies.After they ate delicious food in a restaurant and shopped in a huge mall，Carol was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the city.【高分句型一】Yet at the same time，she understood that everything told by her grandmother was true in the city.There was no peace and no silence；the city life was fast and rushing.The air quality is not satisfying.She could hardly find any animal or even a tree.（描述了卡罗尔梦里的生活）
Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up.She recalled what happened just now in her dream and realized that her life in the village with her family was far more wonderful than the city life.【高分句型二】Carol understood that she was having a more joyful life.She shared her dream with her family while enjoying the fresh fruits and vegetables，and they laughed together.Carol also developed love for plants，animals and beautiful nature.（梦醒了，卡罗尔意识到乡村的生活更美好）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
My mom only had one eye.I hated her.She was such an embarrassment.
She ran a small shop at a flea market and collected old clothes and some other things to sell for the money we needed.Once during elementary school，it was field day，and my mom came.I was so embarrassed and wondered how could she do this time？I threw her a hateful look and ran out.The next day at school，my schoolmates asked me，"Your mom only has one eye？ " and laughed at me.
I was so angry with my mom and wished that she would just disappear from this world.So I said to my mom，"Why don't you have the other eye？You're only gonna make me a joke! " My mom trembled with shock，and said in an apologetic tone，"I'm so sorry that I only have one eye，and I was an embarrassment for you.But I was so proud of my son to see a whole new world for me with that eye.I will leave right now.Sorry! " My mom turned around and slipped away.
For the words I had said to her earlier，there was something biting at me in the corner of my heart.Even so，I hated my one﹣eyed mom and our desperate poverty.Maybe because my mom hadn't punished me，I didn't think I had hurt her feelings very badly.
I told myself that I would become successful in the near future，so I studied very hard.Later I got accepted by the Seoul University.I left my mother and came to Seoul to study.I never went back to visit my mom.
Then I got married there.I bought a house of my own.Then I had kids，too.Now I am living happily as a successful man.I enjoy the life in Seoul because it's a place that doesn't remind me of my mom and my past.This kind of happiness was getting bigger and bigger，until one day someone knocked at my door.
注意：续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
It was my mom!And still with her one eye!____
Holding the letter，I cried for the person who only lived for me._______
【答案】It was my mom!And still with her one eye!Reminded instantly of my dark past and embarrassment，I felt as if the whole sky was falling apart on me.Overwhelmed with rage，I growled at her， "Who are you？How dare you come to my house! " My mom narrowed her eye and opened her mouth but nothing came out there.Dead silence!Tears streaming down the gloomy winkled face，she thrust a letter into my hand，turned around and slipped away.Heart stung by her withered back，I just cast a glance at the letter.My mom gave that eye to me!My world shattered.
Holding the letter，I cried for the person who only lived for me.How she wanted her own son to see the world clearly!But how deeply I had hurt her!Heart knotted with deep regret，I called out loudly， "Mom! " I ran after my mom，grabbed her and knelt down. "Mom，would you forgive me and accept me again？ " Tears dried and her expression of forgiving，a smile stole into her cheeks.It's never too old﹣fashioned to say mom's love is the greatest in the world.
【分析】本文为记叙文，因为作者的妈妈只有一只眼睛，让自己在学校很尴尬，因此恨自己的妈妈。
高分句型一：Tears streaming down the gloomy winkled face，she thrust a letter into my hand，turned around and slipped away.
译文：眼泪顺着那张闷闷不乐的脸流下来，她把一封信推到我手里，转过身来，溜走了。
分析：这句话使用独立主格结构。
高分句型二：It's never too old﹣fashioned to say mom's love is the greatest in the world.
译文：说妈妈的爱是世界上最伟大的爱从来都不太过时。
分析：这句话使用too...to...结构。
【解答】It was my mom!And still with her one eye!Reminded instantly of my dark past and embarrassment，I felt as if the whole sky was falling apart on me.Overwhelmed with rage，I growled at her， "Who are you？How dare you come to my house! " My mom narrowed her eye and opened her mouth but nothing came out there.Dead silence!Tears streaming down the gloomy winkled face，she thrust a letter into my hand，turned around and slipped away.【高分句型一】Heart stung by her withered back，I just cast a glance at the letter.My mom gave that eye to me!My world shattered.（有一天妈妈来看他，他却言辞狠厉地让妈妈离开，妈妈给了作者一封信，作者知道妈妈的眼睛给了他）
Holding the letter，I cried for the person who only lived for me.How she wanted her own son to see the world clearly!But how deeply I had hurt her!Heart knotted with deep regret，I called out loudly， "Mom! " I ran after my mom，grabbed her and knelt down. "Mom，would you forgive me and accept me again？ " Tears dried and her expression of forgiving，a smile stole into her cheeks.It's never too old﹣fashioned to say mom's love is the greatest in the world.【高分句型二】（作者请求妈妈原谅，妈妈原谅了作者）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood：It was filled with surprise and amusements，all because of my mother—loving，sweet，and yet absent﹣minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota，and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way.As the first day of our trip approached，David，my eight﹣year﹣old brother，and I unwillingly said good﹣bye to all of our friends.Who knew if we'd ever see them again？Finally，the moment of our departure arrived，and we loaded suitcases，books，games，camping equipment，and a tent into the car and bravely drove off.We bravely drove off again two hours later after we'd returned home to get the purse and traveler's checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept："You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go，and I'll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go. " I had terrible pictures in my mind："Honey，where are the kids？" "What？!Oh，Gosh...I thought they were being awfully quiet. " We were never actually left behind in a strange city，but we weren't about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night，we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy.After driving in vain for some time，Mom suddenly got a great idea：Why didn't we find a house with a likely﹣looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there？David and I became nervous.To our great relief，Dad turned down the idea.Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps，Mom would have been delighted.She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is.We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好。
The next day we remembered the brand﹣new tent we had brought with us.______
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.______
【答案】The next day we remembered the brand﹣new tent we had brought with us.But then we were half an hour away from the hotel，where the tent was left behind.Dad recommended buying a new one，while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it，saying "Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly，so it's unwise to give up the tent. " Finally，we got back the tent and hit the road again.If Mom hadn't been that absent﹣minded，it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.One day，towards evening，we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain.David and I helped Dad put up the tent，and Mom was busy preparing supper.When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains，the tent was set up and the meal was ready.Sitting around the camp fire，we talked and laughed.Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom's face.
【分析】本文讲述了我和妈妈的假期。
高分句型一：But then we were half an hour away from the hotel，where the tent was left behind.
翻译：但是我们离旅馆还有半个小时的路程，帐篷就落在那里了。
分析：本句使用了where引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains，the tent was set up and the meal was ready.
翻译：当夕阳在山上投下橙色的光时，帐篷搭好了，饭菜也准备好了。
分析：本句为when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】The next day we remembered the brand﹣new tent we had brought with us.But then we were half an hour away from the hotel，where the tent was left behind.【高分句型一】Dad recommended buying a new one，while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it，saying "Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly，so it's unwise to give up the tent. " Finally，we got back the tent and hit the road again.If Mom hadn't been that absent﹣minded，it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.（我们去找丢了的帐篷）
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.One day，towards evening，we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain.David and I helped Dad put up the tent，and Mom was busy preparing supper.When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains，the tent was set up and the meal was ready.【高分句型二】Sitting around the camp fire，we talked and laughed.Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom's face.（我们欣赏沿途的风景，心情愉快）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
4．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的短文。
In a class I teach for adults，I recently did something "unpardonable".I gave the class homework!The assignment was to "go to someone you love within the next week and tell them you love them.It has to be someone you have never said those words to before or at least haven't shared those words with for a long time." Now that doesn't sound like a very tough assignment，until you stop to realize that most of the men were over 35 and were raised in the generation of men that were taught that expressing emotions is not "macho（大男子气概的）".Showing feelings or crying（heaven forbid！）was just not done.So this was a very threatening assignment for some.
At the beginning of our next class，I asked if someone wanted to share what happened when they told someone they loved them.I fully expected one of the women to volunteer，as was usually the case，but on this evening one of the men raised his hand.
He appeared quite moved and a bit shaken.As he unfolded out of his chair，he began by saying，"Dennis，I was quite angry with you last week when you gave us this assignment.I didn't feel that I had anyone to say those words to，and besides，who were you to tell me to do something that personal？But as I began driving home my conscience started talking to me.It was telling me that I knew exactly who I needed to say I love you too."
"You see，five years ago，my father and I had a severe disagreement and really never resolved it since that time.We avoided seeing each other unless we absolutely had to at Christmas or other family gatherings.But even then，we hardly spoke to each other.So last Tuesday by the time I got home I had convinced myself I was going to tell my dad I loved him.It's weird，but just making that decision seemed to lift a heavy load off my chest."
"The next morning I was up bright and early.I was so excited that I could hardly sleep.I got to the office early and accomplished more in two hours than I had the whole day before."
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
At 9：00 I called my dad to see if I could come over after work.__________.
Paragraph 2：
It was as if a dramatic change came over my dad.__________.
【答案】Paragraph 1：
At 9：00 I called my dad to see if I could come over after work.My dad sounded still angry with me even after such a long time but he finally agreed，not knowing my really purpose of this visit.At 5：30，I was at my parents' house ringing the doorbell，praying that Dad would answer the door.I was afraid if Mom answered that I would change my mind and not carry out my tough assignment.But as luck would have it，Dad did answer the door.I didn't waste any time—I took one step in the door and said， "Dad，I just came over to tell you that I love you."
Paragraph 2：
It was as if a dramatic change came over my dad.His face softened.The wrinkles seemed to disappear and he began to cry.He reached out and hugged me and said， "I love you too，son，but I've never been able to say it." Two days after that visit， my dad had a heart attack and passed away.So my message to all of you is：Don't wait to do the things you need to do.What if I had waited to tell my dad？
【分析】本文讲述了关于一个学会表达爱意的故事。
高分句型一：My dad sounded still angry with me even after such a long time but he finally agreed，not knowing my really purpose of this visit.
翻译：我的父亲不知道我这次拜访的真正意图，所以他很长一段时间过后仍然在对我生气，但是他最终同意了。
分析：现在分词not knowing my really purpose of this visit做原因状语。
高分句型二：Dad，I just came over to tell you that I love you.
翻译：爸爸，我过来就是想告诉你我爱你。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Paragraph 1：
At 9：00 I called my dad to see if I could come over after work.My dad sounded still angry with me even after such a long time but he finally agreed，not knowing my really purpose of this visit.【高分句型一】At 5：30，I was at my parents' house ringing the doorbell，praying that Dad would answer the door.I was afraid if Mom answered that I would change my mind and not carry out my tough assignment.But as luck would have it，Dad did answer the door.I didn't waste any time—I took one step in the door and said， "Dad，I just came over to tell you that I love you."【高分句型二】（我对爸爸说爱他）
Paragraph 2：
It was as if a dramatic change came over my dad.His face softened.The wrinkles seemed to disappear and he began to cry.He reached out and hugged me and said， "I love you too，son，but I've never been able to say it." Two days after that visit， my dad had a heart attack and passed away.So my message to all of you is：Don't wait to do the things you need to do.What if I had waited to tell my dad？（不要等待对爱的人表达爱意）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
5．（2022秋 江北区校级月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was raining pretty hard on Halloween，but that wasn't going to stop my little sister Kate and me from trick﹣or﹣treating.We decided to start at Miss Parson's house.Miss Parson was loved by us kids who lived nearby because she often shared her self﹣made cookies with us.We usually finished them in a second，especially when we were hungry after class.Sometimes，when we visited her or did something for her，she always gave us surprise.
Kate and I wondered what kinds of treats she'd offer.As we walked down the street，I held an umbrella，a bag for candy，and my sister's hand.Jack﹣o﹣Lanterns gave soft light along the street.Spider webs hung in all the windows.Parents who were dressed up like monsters（怪物） stood in doorways.After we had walked a few blocks，we were wet from head to toes，and I felt Kate was trembling with cold.
There was a light on at Miss Parson's house，but there were no ghosts，goblins（小妖精），or Jack﹣o﹣Lanterns.We climbed up the steps and saw Miss Parson through a window.She was drinking a cup of hot tea.
"Maybe she doesn't celebrate Halloween，" Kate said with a sigh，disappointedly.
"Well，even if she doesn't，she usually likes it when we visit her，" I said and knocked on the door.
Miss Parson seemed surprised when she opened it and saw our dressing."Is today Halloween？" she asked."I completely forgot.I am so sorry！"
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Miss Parson rushed us into her house.________
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The next morning，a hot and sweet discussion about Miss Parson and Halloween spread among us kids.________
【答案】Miss Parson rushed us into her house."It's cold out here，" she said.My sister's face was shining from the rain and Miss Parson dried her cheeks."Thank you，" Kate said."Trick or treat？""Oh，right！Treats，" said Miss Parson in surprise.Then she disappeared for a moment and came back with a big smile on her face."Open those bags wide，" she said.She dropped two boxes of cocoa into our bags."Winter is just around the corner，"she said."Some hot cocoa will keep you warm.""Thank you，" we both said."Happy Halloween！"
The next morning，a hot and sweet discussion about Miss Parson and Halloween spread among us kids.We told Mom about how Miss Parson had forgotten Halloween and about what she had given to us and the other kids."It sounds as if nobody was very upset，even though she forgot Halloween，" said Mom."No，we were happy，" I said."Although she didn't give us candy，it was kind of fun for us all to get something different for a change.I hope it will become a Halloween tradition to give out unusual treats."
【分析】本文讲述了作者和姐姐去帕森小姐家的一个特殊的万圣节。
高分句型一：We told Mom about how Miss Parson had forgotten Halloween and about what she had given to us and the other kids.
翻译：我们告诉妈妈帕森小姐是如何忘记万圣节的，以及她给了我们和其他孩子什么。
分析：本句使用了how引导的宾语从句和what引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Although she didn't give us candy，it was kind of fun for us all to get something different for a change.
翻译：虽然她没有给我们糖果，但换一种口味对我们大家来说都很有趣。
分析：本句使用了although引导的让步状语从句。
【解答】Miss Parson rushed us into her house."It's cold out here，" she said.My sister's face was shining from the rain and Miss Parson dried her cheeks."Thank you，" Kate said."Trick or treat？""Oh，right！Treats，" said Miss Parson in surprise.Then she disappeared for a moment and came back with a big smile on her face."Open those bags wide，" she said.She dropped two boxes of cocoa into our bags."Winter is just around the corner，"she said."Some hot cocoa will keep you warm.""Thank you，" we both said."Happy Halloween！"（帕森小姐在家里热情的招待了我们）
The next morning，a hot and sweet discussion about Miss Parson and Halloween spread among us kids.We told Mom about how Miss Parson had forgotten Halloween and about what she had given to us and the other kids.【高分句型一】"It sounds as if nobody was very upset，even though she forgot Halloween，" said Mom."No，we were happy，" I said."Although she didn't give us candy，it was kind of fun for us all to get something different for a change.【高分句型二】I hope it will become a Halloween tradition to give out unusual treats."（作者妈妈认为帕森小姐给了他们一些不同的东西，她希望这可以成为万圣节的传统）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
6．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Five years ago，my father and I had a heated disagreement and really never resolved it since that time.We avoided seeing each other unless we had to be at family gatherings.But even then，we hardly spoke to each other.
Last Tuesday I convinced myself I was going to tell my father I loved him.I called my dad to see if I could come over.When he answered the phone，I just said，"Dad，can I come over after work tonight？I have something to tell you. "My dad responded，"Now what？ "I assured him it wouldn't take long，so he finally agreed.
I came to my parents' house，praying Dad would answer the door.I was afraid that if Mom answered I would chicken out and tell her instead.But as luck would have it，Dad did answer the door.
"Dad，I just came over to tell you that I love you. "
It was as if a transformation（转换；改革；变形）came over my dad.His face softened，and the wrinkles seemed to disappear.He hugged me and said，"I love you too，my son，but I've never been able to say it. "
It was such a precious moment that I didn't want to move.Dad and I hugged for a moment longer and then I left.
Two days later，my dad，who had heart problems，but didn't tell me，had an attack and ended up in the hospital，unconscious.I don't know if he'll make it.
So my message to all of you in this is：Don't wait to do the things that you know need to be done.What if I had waited to tell my dad—maybe I will never get the chance again!Take the time to do what you need to do and do it now!
【答案】There was a time when the relation between Father and me was tense.Finally I decided to make peace with him.After fierce struggle I picked up all my courage to tell him I loved him.After two days，Father was badly ill in hospital，senseless，which left me in sorrow and in relief（松了口气）.In our life，don't delay what you should do today.
【分析】本文为记叙文，文章介绍作者和父亲关系紧张，她想和父亲和好，鼓起勇气告诉父亲她爱他，两天后，父亲住院了，作者悲伤的同时也松了口气，及时告诉父亲自己对他的爱。
高分句型一：There was a time when the relation between Father and me was tense.
译文：有一段时间我和父亲的关系很紧张。
分析：这句话使用when引导定语从句。
高分句型二：In our life，don't delay what you should do today.
译文：在我们的生活中，不要耽误今天该做的事。
分析：这句话使用what引导宾语从句。
【解答】There was a time when the relation between Father and me was tense. 【高分句型一】（父亲和我关系紧张）Finally I decided to make peace with him. （我决定和他和好）After fierce struggle I picked up all my courage to tell him I loved him. （我告诉他我爱他）After two days，Father was badly ill in hospital，senseless，which left me in sorrow and in relief（松了口气）. （父亲生病住院，作者感到悲伤也松了口气）In our life，don't delay what you should do today. 【高分句型二】（不要延误该做的事情）
【点评】概要写作，简言之就是对所读过的文章简要概括，写出文章的中心大意，也可称之为摘要。写概要时，读者要是把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而不是抄袭文章的原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，对文章的具体信息进行概括，再用合适的语言表述出来。这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力，同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。因此，概要写作是基于阅读理解和书面表达，是二者的有机结合体，是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。
7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文.续写的词数应为150个左右。
Sam Watts was a 37﹣year﹣old fisherman living and working in Canada.One day，Sam planned to head out into the Pacific at 9 am and work straight through until 5pm the next day.Joining Sam would be his crewman，24﹣year﹣old Tom Buck.
Although Sam had been warned that a storm was coming，there was little that would keep him from going.As he sailed through the waves some 120 kilometers from land，Sam let out his three﹣kilometer﹣long fishing line.The storm was gaining strength on land but had yet to reach the men far offshore.That changed around 1 am.Waves rocked the small boat，which began to turn sideways like an amusement park ride. "Get us out of here! "Tom screamed to Sam. "Let's go back! "
With the winds and waves kicking up，the boat began to fill with water.Sam and Tom tried to pull in the fishing line together，but the high waves filled the boat with water，forcing Sam to make a hard decision.He cut the line，losing thousands of dollars' worth of equipment and fish in the sea.He then pointed the boat toward a port five hours away.Sam then called his boss，William Fox，to report his position.
With dawn coming，Sam spotted the rise of the mountains on the horizon.He was figuring out a route through the dangerous waters when suddenly the motor stopped. "I couldn't believe it，" Sam said. "We were 24 kilometers off the coast，and the motor died." High waves raised and dropped the boat，sending the men crashing into the sides. "William，William! " Sam yelled into the radio. "If you're coming to get me，come now! "
"We're coming! " William shouted back.
Shortly after，the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore，driving the men farther out to sea._________
The next morning，Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance.__________
【答案】Shortly after，the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore，driving the men farther out to sea.They had been drifting for hours.After what seemed a century，suddenly Sam shouted and pointed at a nearby place， "Look!There is an island! " Sam and Tom quickly jumped into the sea，which became calmer，and they managed to land on the island.They were surprised to find that there were people living on it.The people there gave them some food.The storm seemed to be over and they had a good sleep that night.
The next morning.Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance.It belonged to the people on the island.These kind people gave the boat to Sam as a present and warned him that the storm would come back again in two days，so he must hurry up!Sam thanked them and set off on the route he had planned.After two days' sailing，they finally reached the coast.At that time，Sam's radio rang：I'm William!I'm in the middle of the sea.The storm is rocking my boat terribly.Help me!
【分析】本文为记叙文。文章介绍Sam和船员出海打渔，遇到暴风雨，将船打翻，他们看见一座岛，试图登上岛屿。
高分句型一：Sam and Tom quickly jumped into the sea，which became calmer，and they managed to land on the island.
译文：萨姆和汤姆很快跳进海里，海水变得平静了，他们设法在岛上着陆。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：These kind people gave the boat to Sam as a present and warned him that the storm would come back again in two days，so he must hurry up!
译文：这些好心的人把船送给萨姆作为礼物，并警告他暴风雨两天后会再次来临，所以他必须快点！
分析：这句话使用that引导宾语从句，so引导结果状语从句。
【解答】Shortly after，the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore，driving the men farther out to sea.They had been drifting for hours.After what seemed a century，suddenly Sam shouted and pointed at a nearby place， "Look!There is an island! " Sam and Tom quickly jumped into the sea，which became calmer，and they managed to land on the island. 【高分句型一】They were surprised to find that there were people living on it.The people there gave them some food.The storm seemed to be over and they had a good sleep that night. （他们找到了小岛）
The next morning.Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance.It belonged to the people on the island.These kind people gave the boat to Sam as a present and warned him that the storm would come back again in two days，so he must hurry up! 【高分句型二】Sam thanked them and set off on the route he had planned.After two days' sailing，they finally reached the coast.At that time，Sam's radio rang：I'm William!I'm in the middle of the sea.The storm is rocking my boat terribly.Help me! （好心人给了他们小船）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细
期末培优 读后续写
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
The eight﹣year﹣old Carol lived with her father David，mother May and elder brother Rob.The little family happily lived in a beautiful village surrounded with beautiful nature.The village was at the foot of a mountain，with beautiful views of the snowy mountain.The family survived on growing seasonal plants and trees.Their life is totally surrounded by nature and beauty.
While they lived a very happy life，Carol did not love the beautiful atmosphere of the village.She really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life.She wanted to shop，move around the city，watch movies，and eat in fantastic restaurants and cafes，etc.
However，there was hardly any chance that Carol's family moved to the city as they had everything in the village.
One day，Carol fell asleep during the early noon and she had a sound sleep.Of course，she had a strange dream.She saw her grandmother in her dream as a fairy and her deceased grandmother granted her a wish.Carol requested her that she would love to enjoy the city life as she always desired.
Grandmother understood the desire of Carol，but still wanted to convince her that the peaceful village life is better than the city life.
She told Carol，"Baby，you cannot have access to fresh fruits and vegetables from plants as you have at your home.You cannot breathe fresh air.You cannot play with animals.You can hardly find any trees.You will not find peace as you see here!Do you still want to go to the city？"
Without hearing the concerns，Carol asked her grandmother to grant the wish.Grandmother granted her wish but with a condition.Carol was told that she would only have 6 hours to spend in the city.Later，she would return to the village.Carol agreed.
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Carol then found herself in the city with her friends._____
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Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up._____
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
My mom only had one eye.I hated her.She was such an embarrassment.
She ran a small shop at a flea market and collected old clothes and some other things to sell for the money we needed.Once during elementary school，it was field day，and my mom came.I was so embarrassed and wondered how could she do this time？I threw her a hateful look and ran out.The next day at school，my schoolmates asked me，"Your mom only has one eye？ " and laughed at me.
I was so angry with my mom and wished that she would just disappear from this world.So I said to my mom，"Why don't you have the other eye？You're only gonna make me a joke! " My mom trembled with shock，and said in an apologetic tone，"I'm so sorry that I only have one eye，and I was an embarrassment for you.But I was so proud of my son to see a whole new world for me with that eye.I will leave right now.Sorry! " My mom turned around and slipped away.
For the words I had said to her earlier，there was something biting at me in the corner of my heart.Even so，I hated my one﹣eyed mom and our desperate poverty.Maybe because my mom hadn't punished me，I didn't think I had hurt her feelings very badly.
I told myself that I would become successful in the near future，so I studied very hard.Later I got accepted by the Seoul University.I left my mother and came to Seoul to study.I never went back to visit my mom.
Then I got married there.I bought a house of my own.Then I had kids，too.Now I am living happily as a successful man.I enjoy the life in Seoul because it's a place that doesn't remind me of my mom and my past.This kind of happiness was getting bigger and bigger，until one day someone knocked at my door.
注意：续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
It was my mom!And still with her one eye!____
Holding the letter，I cried for the person who only lived for me._______
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood：It was filled with surprise and amusements，all because of my mother—loving，sweet，and yet absent﹣minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota，and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way.As the first day of our trip approached，David，my eight﹣year﹣old brother，and I unwillingly said good﹣bye to all of our friends.Who knew if we'd ever see them again？Finally，the moment of our departure arrived，and we loaded suitcases，books，games，camping equipment，and a tent into the car and bravely drove off.We bravely drove off again two hours later after we'd returned home to get the purse and traveler's checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept："You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go，and I'll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go. " I had terrible pictures in my mind："Honey，where are the kids？" "What？!Oh，Gosh...I thought they were being awfully quiet. " We were never actually left behind in a strange city，but we weren't about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night，we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy.After driving in vain for some time，Mom suddenly got a great idea：Why didn't we find a house with a likely﹣looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there？David and I became nervous.To our great relief，Dad turned down the idea.Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps，Mom would have been delighted.She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is.We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好。
The next day we remembered the brand﹣new tent we had brought with us.______
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.______
4．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的短文。
In a class I teach for adults，I recently did something "unpardonable".I gave the class homework!The assignment was to "go to someone you love within the next week and tell them you love them.It has to be someone you have never said those words to before or at least haven't shared those words with for a long time." Now that doesn't sound like a very tough assignment，until you stop to realize that most of the men were over 35 and were raised in the generation of men that were taught that expressing emotions is not "macho（大男子气概的）".Showing feelings or crying（heaven forbid！）was just not done.So this was a very threatening assignment for some.
At the beginning of our next class，I asked if someone wanted to share what happened when they told someone they loved them.I fully expected one of the women to volunteer，as was usually the case，but on this evening one of the men raised his hand.
He appeared quite moved and a bit shaken.As he unfolded out of his chair，he began by saying，"Dennis，I was quite angry with you last week when you gave us this assignment.I didn't feel that I had anyone to say those words to，and besides，who were you to tell me to do something that personal？But as I began driving home my conscience started talking to me.It was telling me that I knew exactly who I needed to say I love you too."
"You see，five years ago，my father and I had a severe disagreement and really never resolved it since that time.We avoided seeing each other unless we absolutely had to at Christmas or other family gatherings.But even then，we hardly spoke to each other.So last Tuesday by the time I got home I had convinced myself I was going to tell my dad I loved him.It's weird，but just making that decision seemed to lift a heavy load off my chest."
"The next morning I was up bright and early.I was so excited that I could hardly sleep.I got to the office early and accomplished more in two hours than I had the whole day before."
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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At 9：00 I called my dad to see if I could come over after work.__________.
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It was as if a dramatic change came over my dad.__________.
5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was raining pretty hard on Halloween，but that wasn't going to stop my little sister Kate and me from trick﹣or﹣treating.We decided to start at Miss Parson's house.Miss Parson was loved by us kids who lived nearby because she often shared her self﹣made cookies with us.We usually finished them in a second，especially when we were hungry after class.Sometimes，when we visited her or did something for her，she always gave us surprise.
Kate and I wondered what kinds of treats she'd offer.As we walked down the street，I held an umbrella，a bag for candy，and my sister's hand.Jack﹣o﹣Lanterns gave soft light along the street.Spider webs hung in all the windows.Parents who were dressed up like monsters（怪物） stood in doorways.After we had walked a few blocks，we were wet from head to toes，and I felt Kate was trembling with cold.
There was a light on at Miss Parson's house，but there were no ghosts，goblins（小妖精），or Jack﹣o﹣Lanterns.We climbed up the steps and saw Miss Parson through a window.She was drinking a cup of hot tea.
"Maybe she doesn't celebrate Halloween，" Kate said with a sigh，disappointedly.
"Well，even if she doesn't，she usually likes it when we visit her，" I said and knocked on the door.
Miss Parson seemed surprised when she opened it and saw our dressing."Is today Halloween？" she asked."I completely forgot.I am so sorry！"
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Miss Parson rushed us into her house.________
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The next morning，a hot and sweet discussion about Miss Parson and Halloween spread among us kids.________
6．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Five years ago，my father and I had a heated disagreement and really never resolved it since that time.We avoided seeing each other unless we had to be at family gatherings.But even then，we hardly spoke to each other.
Last Tuesday I convinced myself I was going to tell my father I loved him.I called my dad to see if I could come over.When he answered the phone，I just said，"Dad，can I come over after work tonight？I have something to tell you. "My dad responded，"Now what？ "I assured him it wouldn't take long，so he finally agreed.
I came to my parents' house，praying Dad would answer the door.I was afraid that if Mom answered I would chicken out and tell her instead.But as luck would have it，Dad did answer the door.
"Dad，I just came over to tell you that I love you. "
It was as if a transformation（转换；改革；变形）came over my dad.His face softened，and the wrinkles seemed to disappear.He hugged me and said，"I love you too，my son，but I've never been able to say it. "
It was such a precious moment that I didn't want to move.Dad and I hugged for a moment longer and then I left.
Two days later，my dad，who had heart problems，but didn't tell me，had an attack and ended up in the hospital，unconscious.I don't know if he'll make it.
So my message to all of you in this is：Don't wait to do the things that you know need to be done.What if I had waited to tell my dad—maybe I will never get the chance again!Take the time to do what you need to do and do it now!
7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文.续写的词数应为150个左右。
Sam Watts was a 37﹣year﹣old fisherman living and working in Canada.One day，Sam planned to head out into the Pacific at 9 am and work straight through until 5pm the next day.Joining Sam would be his crewman，24﹣year﹣old Tom Buck.
Although Sam had been warned that a storm was coming，there was little that would keep him from going.As he sailed through the waves some 120 kilometers from land，Sam let out his three﹣kilometer﹣long fishing line.The storm was gaining strength on land but had yet to reach the men far offshore.That changed around 1 am.Waves rocked the small boat，which began to turn sideways like an amusement park ride. "Get us out of here! "Tom screamed to Sam. "Let's go back! "
With the winds and waves kicking up，the boat began to fill with water.Sam and Tom tried to pull in the fishing line together，but the high waves filled the boat with water，forcing Sam to make a hard decision.He cut the line，losing thousands of dollars' worth of equipment and fish in the sea.He then pointed the boat toward a port five hours away.Sam then called his boss，William Fox，to report his position.
With dawn coming，Sam spotted the rise of the mountains on the horizon.He was figuring out a route through the dangerous waters when suddenly the motor stopped. "I couldn't believe it，" Sam said. "We were 24 kilometers off the coast，and the motor died." High waves raised and dropped the boat，sending the men crashing into the sides. "William，William! " Sam yelled into the radio. "If you're coming to get me，come now! "
"We're coming! " William shouted back.
Shortly after，the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore，driving the men farther out to sea._________
The next morning，Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance.__________
8．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Eric was working in a selling business.He had been on the road visiting people for more than a month without going home.He couldn't wait to get back to see his wife and children.It was coming up on Mother's Day，so he usually tried to make it "back home"，but this year he was just too busy and too tired.When he was driving in a small town，he saw a flower shop.He said to himself，"I know what I will do.I'll send my mother some roses."
He stopped and went into the flower shop and saw a boy talking to a girl in it. "How many roses can I get for six dollars，Miss？" the boy asked.The girl was trying to explain that roses were expensive.Maybe the boy would be happy with something else.
"No，I have to have roses，" he said. "My mom was badly sick last year and I didn't get to spend much time with her.I want to get something special.It has to be red roses，because they are her favorite." He was stubborn.
The girl in the shop looked up at Eric and was just shaking her head.Something inside of Eric was touched by the boy's voice.He wanted to get those roses so badly.Eric had been blessed（幸运的）in his business，so he looked at the girl and whispered to her that he would pay for the boy's roses.
The girl looked at the boy and said，"OK，I will give you a dozen red roses for your dollars." The boy almost jumped into the air.He took the flowers and ran out of the store.It was worth more than thirty﹣five dollars just to see that kind of excitement.
Eric ordered his own flowers and asked the girl to have them delivered to his mother.After that，with a relief he drove away.Not long after his driving，he saw the boy walking to a graveyard（墓地）.
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Eric stopped his car and followed the boy.___________.
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Eric went into his car in tears.___________.
9．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
John was crazy about playing basketball.Every day after school，he would spend much time practicing basketball skills.Sometimes，he didn't go back home until sunset，which made his mother extremely angry.One day，as he was given a chance to watch a basketball game，he dreamed about being a member of the college basketball team the next year.On the way，he was delighted secretly.He thought no one in the world was luckier than him.Suddenly，a car hit him.What a terrible experience!It seemed like a bad dream.
John woke up in a hospital room.He was frightened to death.He realized that he couldn't move both of his legs.At that time，the doctor came in.When the doctor told him that both his legs were broken and he had to sit in the wheelchair for the time being，he knew his college basketball dream was over.He was really depressed.John followed what the doctors had told him，but it did not work entirely.When he left hospital，John was sent to a health recovery center.He never heard of this center before，but it was not far away from his house.Although he felt unwilling to go there，he had no choice but to accept the fact.
A week later，he arrived there unhappily.The first person he met was Sunny Chen，who was so kind and friendly that he warmly welcome John to go there.Sunny's legs were badly hurt in a skating accident.He told John that he would help him recover soon.Though Sunny couldn't move his legs，he became the coach of a basketball team called the Suns.After a period of recovery training.John felt his legs were all right.So Sunny invited him to join the game.Sunny guided the team on his wheelchair.John played badly，but for the first time since the accident，he stopped feeling sorry for himself.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
John was glad that his dream of being a member of the basketball team came true._________
Sunny saw all John did，lost in thought._________
10．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was a small town with nice landscapes that attracted a lot of rich people to live in.Ming was also attracted by the scenic spots of the town.But he had little money，so he rented a cheap house after he arrived.But what drew his attention most here was those wealthy people.So he took up a job to sell cell phones.But his cell phones were not good in quality.
One day，Ming's pocket was empty again and wanted to earn money.Luckily，there was still a phone in his pocket to sell.Soon enough，he spotted a target—a seemingly wealthy middle﹣aged man in an old jacket.Ming came up to him and smiled politely，saying，"Hey，friend..." But the man was very cautious and asked，"What's up？"
Ming said to him immediately，"Friend，I have a phone.I bought it at 5，000 yuan.But now I could sell it to you at only 3，000 yuan." The man seemed uninterested in his phone and wanted to go away.Ming stopped him and said，"What about 2，000 yuan？" the man shouted at him，"What do you want to do with me？"
Ming immediately put up a poor face and hugged the man's legs，crying to him，"Oh，my dear friend!Only 1，000 yuan，is it OK？" Ming began pouring out his "sad story" as he was crying.The man，after seeing this，felt a little bit moved and put his hands into his pocket.Then he took out 1，000 yuan to Ming and took the phone away.
After earning 1，000 yuan，Ming felt happy.As he felt hungry，he went to a small restaurant to have lunch.Ming ordered several dishes and handed over a note of 100 yuan to the cashier.The cashier stared at the banknote（钞票） for quite a while，as if checking if it was a fake note（假币），and then said to Ming，"Sorry，I could not find the change for you for the moment.Please wait a minute." Then he went away.Staying in the restaurant without anything to do，Ming sat at a table and started to watch TV.After all，his cheap﹣rented house had no TV.
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The TV was broadcasting a piece of news._______
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The police car stopped before the small restaurant and two policemen came out of the car and arrested Ming._________
11．（2023春 上高县校级期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Eric was working in a selling business.He had been on the road visiting people for more than a month without going home.He couldn't wait to get back to see his wife and children.It was coming up on Mother's Day，and he usually tried to make it "back home"，but this year he was just too busy and too tired.The day when he was driving in a small town，he saw a flower shop.He said to himself，"I know what I will do.I'll send my mother some roses."
He stopped and went into the flower shop and saw a young man talking to the girl in it."How many roses can I get for five dollars，Miss？"the young man asked.The girl was trying to explain that roses were expensive.Maybe the young man would be happy with something else.
"No.I have to have roses，" he said."My mom was badly sick last year and I didn't get to spend much time with her.I want to get something special.It has to be red roses，because that is her favorite." He was so stubborn.
The girl in the shop looked up at Eric and was just shaking her head.Something inside of Eric was touched by the young man's voice.He wanted to get those roses so badly.Eric had been lucky in his business，and he looked at the girl and silently said that he would pay for the young man's roses.
The girl looked at the young man and said，"OK，I will give you a dozen red roses for your dollars." The young man almost jumped into the air.He took the flowers and ran down the store.It was worth more than fifty dollars just to see that kind of excitement.
Eric ordered his own flowers and asked the girl to have it delivered to his mother.After that，with a relief he drove down the road.Not long after his driving，he saw the young man walking to a graveyard（墓地）．
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Eric stopped his car and followed the young man.
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Eric went into the car in tears.
12．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was eight years old my seven﹣year﹣old cousin，Juliana，got sick.My brother and I were in the family room watching television when my mom came in to tell us the bad news.I wasn't really sure what a heart operation meant，but I could tell it wasn't a good thing.Juliana's family was on a tight budget（预算），so was mine.My parents' faces were full of worry and tears，and that was enough to make me cry，too.
When we went to see Juliana in the hospital，she was lying in bed，and she had tubes （管子） and other things hooked to her.It was confusing and scary.
The treatments continued，but Juliana was weaker and weaker.Every time I visited her，it was hard for me to believe her change.She seemed to lose all her strength and her lovely face turned pale.She lost a lot of weight even though she had proper food.As a child，I really couldn't understand what the doctors were doing to her﹣it seemed like they were making her feel worse not better.
Seeing my cousin in so much pain made me feel like my own heart was aching.Something needed to be done.I knew I wanted to help her get better faster，but at eight years old，I wasn't sure how I could make a difference﹣I just knew I had to do something to help her.
One night after we visited Juliana，all the way home I couldn't stop thinking about her.A hospital can be a very scary，cold place.I imagined how lonely Juliana must have felt lying there during the night.
When we got home，I sat down at our kitchen table.I always liked writing stories and drawing pictures，and I started working at it like I had done so many other nights.But this night was different﹣I was thinking about Juliana.I thought， "Juliana is going to receive rehabilitation training（康复训练） but money is tight.What if I can sell my drawings？Then I can raise money to help her get well faster."
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I told my parents，they thought it was a wonderful idea，but then we came up with an even better one._______
Soon，we made enough money to pay for Juliana's rehabilitation training._______
13．（2024秋 元宝山区期末）
A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming.Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last.After the happy family got ready，they set out for the grandparents' eagerly.On the way，the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared.Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa.They arrived at the driveway，at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.
Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room，shouting excitedly "Grandpa，we are back!"
Seeing his grandsons，Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain.A helpless expression flashed on his face.Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn't stand up on his own forever.But Grandpa declared stubbornly（倔强地）， "I can! " Certainly，he was stuck in his boyish way.Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time.They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation，went out and wandered into the forest.Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other，while young ones rose straight like soldiers.Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom.He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs.The trees，birds，lizards，lots of bugs...How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn't get up，which made them worried. "We'd think out a way to cheer him up." Jack said. "Grandpa is a bird lover，and we can catch him a bird." Berlin suggested. "But he hates birds being caged!" Jack shook his head.
Then a bright idea came to Jack's mind. "Why not make a cane（拐杖）out of a young tree!"
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Berlin thought it was a good idea.______ Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.______
14．（2024秋 仁寿县校级期末）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
"I'm going to miss you so much，Poppy，" said the tall，thin teenager.He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye.He stood up，hugged his parents，and smiled，trying not to let his emotions get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control.They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying.It was time to say goodbye for now at least.The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder，and flashed a bright smile. "I guess this is it，" he said. "I'll see you back home in a month，okay？" His parents nodded，and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents.The boy's mother turned to the dog，"Okay，Poppy，time to go back home."
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there.All that week，Poppy didn't seem interested in her dinner，her favorite toy，or even in her daily walk.Her owners were sad too，but they knew their son would be back to visit.Poppy didn't.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats.They even let her sit on the sofa，but the old girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self.Her owners started to get worried. "What should we do to cheer Poppy up？" asked Dad. "We've tried everything."
"I have an idea，but it might be a little crazy，" smiled Mom. "Without anybody left in the house but us，this place could use a bit of fun.Let's get a little dog for Poppy."
It didn't take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box.Poppy welcomed them home as usual but when she saw the box，she stopped.She put her nose on it.Her tail began wagging（摆动）ever so slowly，then faster as she caught the smell.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Para 1.Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. ﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
Para 2.A few weeks later，the boy arrived home from university. ﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
15．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Probably，most of you had the feeling before，at least once—you had been waiting for a long time，yet being afraid of getting.It was exactly my state of mind before the first day at college.I had been working hard to pass the necessary tests and have my application to the undergraduate programme in management approved.And when the time had come for me to visit the college for the first day of the study，I couldn't sleep all night because of being anxious about how to look good physically in front of the whole new world I was about to enter.However，the positive attitude and readiness to accept support from others helped a lot in a new environment.
It was Monday morning.Being too excited to sleep the night before，I came to the college half an hour earlier for the first lecture and was walking nervously through the hallway.About 15 minutes after I came，the hallway started to be full of students.Professors who walked on their business probably didn't pay attention to me.I knew which hall to go to and had already checked that it was open.However，I was hesitant to enter the hall and sit there alone.People were moving around me as if they hadn't seen me.I felt disappointed with the fact that I had nobody to talk to in the new and seemingly unfriendly place.
Suddenly，a well﹣dressed man who seemed to be in his late twenties approached me.He introduced himself as Mathews and asked whether I was lost and whether he could help me with anything.In that situation，I realized it was very kind of him and that he was exactly the person I wanted to ask in my thoughts a minute before，but then I was too nervous for a friendly chat.As a result，instead of welcoming the opportunity to make the first acquaintance（相识），I told the man to mind his business and leave me alone since I was an adult capable of finding my class without anybody's assistance.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Luckily，the man didn't seem to be angry.__________.
Professor Mathews turned out to be an excellent speaker and the lecture went really well.__________.
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参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
The eight﹣year﹣old Carol lived with her father David，mother May and elder brother Rob.The little family happily lived in a beautiful village surrounded with beautiful nature.The village was at the foot of a mountain，with beautiful views of the snowy mountain.The family survived on growing seasonal plants and trees.Their life is totally surrounded by nature and beauty.
While they lived a very happy life，Carol did not love the beautiful atmosphere of the village.She really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life.She wanted to shop，move around the city，watch movies，and eat in fantastic restaurants and cafes，etc.
However，there was hardly any chance that Carol's family moved to the city as they had everything in the village.
One day，Carol fell asleep during the early noon and she had a sound sleep.Of course，she had a strange dream.She saw her grandmother in her dream as a fairy and her deceased grandmother granted her a wish.Carol requested her that she would love to enjoy the city life as she always desired.
Grandmother understood the desire of Carol，but still wanted to convince her that the peaceful village life is better than the city life.
She told Carol，"Baby，you cannot have access to fresh fruits and vegetables from plants as you have at your home.You cannot breathe fresh air.You cannot play with animals.You can hardly find any trees.You will not find peace as you see here!Do you still want to go to the city？"
Without hearing the concerns，Carol asked her grandmother to grant the wish.Grandmother granted her wish but with a condition.Carol was told that she would only have 6 hours to spend in the city.Later，she would return to the village.Carol agreed.
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Carol then found herself in the city with her friends._____
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Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up._____
【答案】Carol then found herself in the city with her friends.Carol and her friends went to watch movies.After they ate delicious food in a restaurant and shopped in a huge mall，Carol was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the city.Yet at the same time，she understood that everything told by her grandmother was true in the city.There was no peace and no silence；the city life was fast and rushing.The air quality is not satisfying.She could hardly find any animal or even a tree.
Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up.She recalled what happened just now in her dream and realized that her life in the village with her family was far more wonderful than the city life.Carol understood that she was having a more joyful life.She shared her dream with her family while enjoying the fresh fruits and vegetables，and they laughed together.Carol also developed love for plants，animals and beautiful nature.
【分析】本文讲述了卡罗尔一家在乡村平静而幸福的生活，但是卡罗尔却不喜欢这种生活，而是向往城市的生活。有一天，卡罗尔做了一个梦...
高分句型一：After they ate delicious food in a restaurant and shopped in a huge mall，Carol was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the city.
翻译：之后，他们在一家餐馆吃了美味的食物，在一家大型购物中心购物，卡罗尔很高兴有机会体验城市生活。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：She recalled what happened just now in her dream and realized that her life in the village with her family was far more wonderful than the city life.
翻译：她回忆起刚才在梦中发生的事情，意识到她和家人在村子里的生活远比城市生活精彩。
分析：本句使用了what引导的宾语从句；that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Carol then found herself in the city with her friends.Carol and her friends went to watch movies.After they ate delicious food in a restaurant and shopped in a huge mall，Carol was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the city.【高分句型一】Yet at the same time，she understood that everything told by her grandmother was true in the city.There was no peace and no silence；the city life was fast and rushing.The air quality is not satisfying.She could hardly find any animal or even a tree.（描述了卡罗尔梦里的生活）
Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up.She recalled what happened just now in her dream and realized that her life in the village with her family was far more wonderful than the city life.【高分句型二】Carol understood that she was having a more joyful life.She shared her dream with her family while enjoying the fresh fruits and vegetables，and they laughed together.Carol also developed love for plants，animals and beautiful nature.（梦醒了，卡罗尔意识到乡村的生活更美好）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
My mom only had one eye.I hated her.She was such an embarrassment.
She ran a small shop at a flea market and collected old clothes and some other things to sell for the money we needed.Once during elementary school，it was field day，and my mom came.I was so embarrassed and wondered how could she do this time？I threw her a hateful look and ran out.The next day at school，my schoolmates asked me，"Your mom only has one eye？ " and laughed at me.
I was so angry with my mom and wished that she would just disappear from this world.So I said to my mom，"Why don't you have the other eye？You're only gonna make me a joke! " My mom trembled with shock，and said in an apologetic tone，"I'm so sorry that I only have one eye，and I was an embarrassment for you.But I was so proud of my son to see a whole new world for me with that eye.I will leave right now.Sorry! " My mom turned around and slipped away.
For the words I had said to her earlier，there was something biting at me in the corner of my heart.Even so，I hated my one﹣eyed mom and our desperate poverty.Maybe because my mom hadn't punished me，I didn't think I had hurt her feelings very badly.
I told myself that I would become successful in the near future，so I studied very hard.Later I got accepted by the Seoul University.I left my mother and came to Seoul to study.I never went back to visit my mom.
Then I got married there.I bought a house of my own.Then I had kids，too.Now I am living happily as a successful man.I enjoy the life in Seoul because it's a place that doesn't remind me of my mom and my past.This kind of happiness was getting bigger and bigger，until one day someone knocked at my door.
注意：续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
It was my mom!And still with her one eye!____
Holding the letter，I cried for the person who only lived for me._______
【答案】It was my mom!And still with her one eye!Reminded instantly of my dark past and embarrassment，I felt as if the whole sky was falling apart on me.Overwhelmed with rage，I growled at her， "Who are you？How dare you come to my house! " My mom narrowed her eye and opened her mouth but nothing came out there.Dead silence!Tears streaming down the gloomy winkled face，she thrust a letter into my hand，turned around and slipped away.Heart stung by her withered back，I just cast a glance at the letter.My mom gave that eye to me!My world shattered.
Holding the letter，I cried for the person who only lived for me.How she wanted her own son to see the world clearly!But how deeply I had hurt her!Heart knotted with deep regret，I called out loudly， "Mom! " I ran after my mom，grabbed her and knelt down. "Mom，would you forgive me and accept me again？ " Tears dried and her expression of forgiving，a smile stole into her cheeks.It's never too old﹣fashioned to say mom's love is the greatest in the world.
【分析】本文为记叙文，因为作者的妈妈只有一只眼睛，让自己在学校很尴尬，因此恨自己的妈妈。
高分句型一：Tears streaming down the gloomy winkled face，she thrust a letter into my hand，turned around and slipped away.
译文：眼泪顺着那张闷闷不乐的脸流下来，她把一封信推到我手里，转过身来，溜走了。
分析：这句话使用独立主格结构。
高分句型二：It's never too old﹣fashioned to say mom's love is the greatest in the world.
译文：说妈妈的爱是世界上最伟大的爱从来都不太过时。
分析：这句话使用too...to...结构。
【解答】It was my mom!And still with her one eye!Reminded instantly of my dark past and embarrassment，I felt as if the whole sky was falling apart on me.Overwhelmed with rage，I growled at her， "Who are you？How dare you come to my house! " My mom narrowed her eye and opened her mouth but nothing came out there.Dead silence!Tears streaming down the gloomy winkled face，she thrust a letter into my hand，turned around and slipped away.【高分句型一】Heart stung by her withered back，I just cast a glance at the letter.My mom gave that eye to me!My world shattered.（有一天妈妈来看他，他却言辞狠厉地让妈妈离开，妈妈给了作者一封信，作者知道妈妈的眼睛给了他）
Holding the letter，I cried for the person who only lived for me.How she wanted her own son to see the world clearly!But how deeply I had hurt her!Heart knotted with deep regret，I called out loudly， "Mom! " I ran after my mom，grabbed her and knelt down. "Mom，would you forgive me and accept me again？ " Tears dried and her expression of forgiving，a smile stole into her cheeks.It's never too old﹣fashioned to say mom's love is the greatest in the world.【高分句型二】（作者请求妈妈原谅，妈妈原谅了作者）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood：It was filled with surprise and amusements，all because of my mother—loving，sweet，and yet absent﹣minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota，and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way.As the first day of our trip approached，David，my eight﹣year﹣old brother，and I unwillingly said good﹣bye to all of our friends.Who knew if we'd ever see them again？Finally，the moment of our departure arrived，and we loaded suitcases，books，games，camping equipment，and a tent into the car and bravely drove off.We bravely drove off again two hours later after we'd returned home to get the purse and traveler's checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept："You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go，and I'll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go. " I had terrible pictures in my mind："Honey，where are the kids？" "What？!Oh，Gosh...I thought they were being awfully quiet. " We were never actually left behind in a strange city，but we weren't about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night，we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy.After driving in vain for some time，Mom suddenly got a great idea：Why didn't we find a house with a likely﹣looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there？David and I became nervous.To our great relief，Dad turned down the idea.Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps，Mom would have been delighted.She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is.We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好。
The next day we remembered the brand﹣new tent we had brought with us.______
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.______
【答案】The next day we remembered the brand﹣new tent we had brought with us.But then we were half an hour away from the hotel，where the tent was left behind.Dad recommended buying a new one，while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it，saying "Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly，so it's unwise to give up the tent. " Finally，we got back the tent and hit the road again.If Mom hadn't been that absent﹣minded，it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.One day，towards evening，we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain.David and I helped Dad put up the tent，and Mom was busy preparing supper.When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains，the tent was set up and the meal was ready.Sitting around the camp fire，we talked and laughed.Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom's face.
【分析】本文讲述了我和妈妈的假期。
高分句型一：But then we were half an hour away from the hotel，where the tent was left behind.
翻译：但是我们离旅馆还有半个小时的路程，帐篷就落在那里了。
分析：本句使用了where引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains，the tent was set up and the meal was ready.
翻译：当夕阳在山上投下橙色的光时，帐篷搭好了，饭菜也准备好了。
分析：本句为when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】The next day we remembered the brand﹣new tent we had brought with us.But then we were half an hour away from the hotel，where the tent was left behind.【高分句型一】Dad recommended buying a new one，while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it，saying "Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly，so it's unwise to give up the tent. " Finally，we got back the tent and hit the road again.If Mom hadn't been that absent﹣minded，it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.（我们去找丢了的帐篷）
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.One day，towards evening，we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain.David and I helped Dad put up the tent，and Mom was busy preparing supper.When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains，the tent was set up and the meal was ready.【高分句型二】Sitting around the camp fire，we talked and laughed.Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom's face.（我们欣赏沿途的风景，心情愉快）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
4．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的短文。
In a class I teach for adults，I recently did something "unpardonable".I gave the class homework!The assignment was to "go to someone you love within the next week and tell them you love them.It has to be someone you have never said those words to before or at least haven't shared those words with for a long time." Now that doesn't sound like a very tough assignment，until you stop to realize that most of the men were over 35 and were raised in the generation of men that were taught that expressing emotions is not "macho（大男子气概的）".Showing feelings or crying（heaven forbid！）was just not done.So this was a very threatening assignment for some.
At the beginning of our next class，I asked if someone wanted to share what happened when they told someone they loved them.I fully expected one of the women to volunteer，as was usually the case，but on this evening one of the men raised his hand.
He appeared quite moved and a bit shaken.As he unfolded out of his chair，he began by saying，"Dennis，I was quite angry with you last week when you gave us this assignment.I didn't feel that I had anyone to say those words to，and besides，who were you to tell me to do something that personal？But as I began driving home my conscience started talking to me.It was telling me that I knew exactly who I needed to say I love you too."
"You see，five years ago，my father and I had a severe disagreement and really never resolved it since that time.We avoided seeing each other unless we absolutely had to at Christmas or other family gatherings.But even then，we hardly spoke to each other.So last Tuesday by the time I got home I had convinced myself I was going to tell my dad I loved him.It's weird，but just making that decision seemed to lift a heavy load off my chest."
"The next morning I was up bright and early.I was so excited that I could hardly sleep.I got to the office early and accomplished more in two hours than I had the whole day before."
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
At 9：00 I called my dad to see if I could come over after work.__________.
Paragraph 2：
It was as if a dramatic change came over my dad.__________.
【答案】Paragraph 1：
At 9：00 I called my dad to see if I could come over after work.My dad sounded still angry with me even after such a long time but he finally agreed，not knowing my really purpose of this visit.At 5：30，I was at my parents' house ringing the doorbell，praying that Dad would answer the door.I was afraid if Mom answered that I would change my mind and not carry out my tough assignment.But as luck would have it，Dad did answer the door.I didn't waste any time—I took one step in the door and said， "Dad，I just came over to tell you that I love you."
Paragraph 2：
It was as if a dramatic change came over my dad.His face softened.The wrinkles seemed to disappear and he began to cry.He reached out and hugged me and said， "I love you too，son，but I've never been able to say it." Two days after that visit， my dad had a heart attack and passed away.So my message to all of you is：Don't wait to do the things you need to do.What if I had waited to tell my dad？
【分析】本文讲述了关于一个学会表达爱意的故事。
高分句型一：My dad sounded still angry with me even after such a long time but he finally agreed，not knowing my really purpose of this visit.
翻译：我的父亲不知道我这次拜访的真正意图，所以他很长一段时间过后仍然在对我生气，但是他最终同意了。
分析：现在分词not knowing my really purpose of this visit做原因状语。
高分句型二：Dad，I just came over to tell you that I love you.
翻译：爸爸，我过来就是想告诉你我爱你。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Paragraph 1：
At 9：00 I called my dad to see if I could come over after work.My dad sounded still angry with me even after such a long time but he finally agreed，not knowing my really purpose of this visit.【高分句型一】At 5：30，I was at my parents' house ringing the doorbell，praying that Dad would answer the door.I was afraid if Mom answered that I would change my mind and not carry out my tough assignment.But as luck would have it，Dad did answer the door.I didn't waste any time—I took one step in the door and said， "Dad，I just came over to tell you that I love you."【高分句型二】（我对爸爸说爱他）
Paragraph 2：
It was as if a dramatic change came over my dad.His face softened.The wrinkles seemed to disappear and he began to cry.He reached out and hugged me and said， "I love you too，son，but I've never been able to say it." Two days after that visit， my dad had a heart attack and passed away.So my message to all of you is：Don't wait to do the things you need to do.What if I had waited to tell my dad？（不要等待对爱的人表达爱意）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
5．（2022秋 江北区校级月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was raining pretty hard on Halloween，but that wasn't going to stop my little sister Kate and me from trick﹣or﹣treating.We decided to start at Miss Parson's house.Miss Parson was loved by us kids who lived nearby because she often shared her self﹣made cookies with us.We usually finished them in a second，especially when we were hungry after class.Sometimes，when we visited her or did something for her，she always gave us surprise.
Kate and I wondered what kinds of treats she'd offer.As we walked down the street，I held an umbrella，a bag for candy，and my sister's hand.Jack﹣o﹣Lanterns gave soft light along the street.Spider webs hung in all the windows.Parents who were dressed up like monsters（怪物） stood in doorways.After we had walked a few blocks，we were wet from head to toes，and I felt Kate was trembling with cold.
There was a light on at Miss Parson's house，but there were no ghosts，goblins（小妖精），or Jack﹣o﹣Lanterns.We climbed up the steps and saw Miss Parson through a window.She was drinking a cup of hot tea.
"Maybe she doesn't celebrate Halloween，" Kate said with a sigh，disappointedly.
"Well，even if she doesn't，she usually likes it when we visit her，" I said and knocked on the door.
Miss Parson seemed surprised when she opened it and saw our dressing."Is today Halloween？" she asked."I completely forgot.I am so sorry！"
Paragraph 1：
Miss Parson rushed us into her house.________
Paragraph 2：
The next morning，a hot and sweet discussion about Miss Parson and Halloween spread among us kids.________
【答案】Miss Parson rushed us into her house."It's cold out here，" she said.My sister's face was shining from the rain and Miss Parson dried her cheeks."Thank you，" Kate said."Trick or treat？""Oh，right！Treats，" said Miss Parson in surprise.Then she disappeared for a moment and came back with a big smile on her face."Open those bags wide，" she said.She dropped two boxes of cocoa into our bags."Winter is just around the corner，"she said."Some hot cocoa will keep you warm.""Thank you，" we both said."Happy Halloween！"
The next morning，a hot and sweet discussion about Miss Parson and Halloween spread among us kids.We told Mom about how Miss Parson had forgotten Halloween and about what she had given to us and the other kids."It sounds as if nobody was very upset，even though she forgot Halloween，" said Mom."No，we were happy，" I said."Although she didn't give us candy，it was kind of fun for us all to get something different for a change.I hope it will become a Halloween tradition to give out unusual treats."
【分析】本文讲述了作者和姐姐去帕森小姐家的一个特殊的万圣节。
高分句型一：We told Mom about how Miss Parson had forgotten Halloween and about what she had given to us and the other kids.
翻译：我们告诉妈妈帕森小姐是如何忘记万圣节的，以及她给了我们和其他孩子什么。
分析：本句使用了how引导的宾语从句和what引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Although she didn't give us candy，it was kind of fun for us all to get something different for a change.
翻译：虽然她没有给我们糖果，但换一种口味对我们大家来说都很有趣。
分析：本句使用了although引导的让步状语从句。
【解答】Miss Parson rushed us into her house."It's cold out here，" she said.My sister's face was shining from the rain and Miss Parson dried her cheeks."Thank you，" Kate said."Trick or treat？""Oh，right！Treats，" said Miss Parson in surprise.Then she disappeared for a moment and came back with a big smile on her face."Open those bags wide，" she said.She dropped two boxes of cocoa into our bags."Winter is just around the corner，"she said."Some hot cocoa will keep you warm.""Thank you，" we both said."Happy Halloween！"（帕森小姐在家里热情的招待了我们）
The next morning，a hot and sweet discussion about Miss Parson and Halloween spread among us kids.We told Mom about how Miss Parson had forgotten Halloween and about what she had given to us and the other kids.【高分句型一】"It sounds as if nobody was very upset，even though she forgot Halloween，" said Mom."No，we were happy，" I said."Although she didn't give us candy，it was kind of fun for us all to get something different for a change.【高分句型二】I hope it will become a Halloween tradition to give out unusual treats."（作者妈妈认为帕森小姐给了他们一些不同的东西，她希望这可以成为万圣节的传统）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
6．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Five years ago，my father and I had a heated disagreement and really never resolved it since that time.We avoided seeing each other unless we had to be at family gatherings.But even then，we hardly spoke to each other.
Last Tuesday I convinced myself I was going to tell my father I loved him.I called my dad to see if I could come over.When he answered the phone，I just said，"Dad，can I come over after work tonight？I have something to tell you. "My dad responded，"Now what？ "I assured him it wouldn't take long，so he finally agreed.
I came to my parents' house，praying Dad would answer the door.I was afraid that if Mom answered I would chicken out and tell her instead.But as luck would have it，Dad did answer the door.
"Dad，I just came over to tell you that I love you. "
It was as if a transformation（转换；改革；变形）came over my dad.His face softened，and the wrinkles seemed to disappear.He hugged me and said，"I love you too，my son，but I've never been able to say it. "
It was such a precious moment that I didn't want to move.Dad and I hugged for a moment longer and then I left.
Two days later，my dad，who had heart problems，but didn't tell me，had an attack and ended up in the hospital，unconscious.I don't know if he'll make it.
So my message to all of you in this is：Don't wait to do the things that you know need to be done.What if I had waited to tell my dad—maybe I will never get the chance again!Take the time to do what you need to do and do it now!
【答案】There was a time when the relation between Father and me was tense.Finally I decided to make peace with him.After fierce struggle I picked up all my courage to tell him I loved him.After two days，Father was badly ill in hospital，senseless，which left me in sorrow and in relief（松了口气）.In our life，don't delay what you should do today.
【分析】本文为记叙文，文章介绍作者和父亲关系紧张，她想和父亲和好，鼓起勇气告诉父亲她爱他，两天后，父亲住院了，作者悲伤的同时也松了口气，及时告诉父亲自己对他的爱。
高分句型一：There was a time when the relation between Father and me was tense.
译文：有一段时间我和父亲的关系很紧张。
分析：这句话使用when引导定语从句。
高分句型二：In our life，don't delay what you should do today.
译文：在我们的生活中，不要耽误今天该做的事。
分析：这句话使用what引导宾语从句。
【解答】There was a time when the relation between Father and me was tense. 【高分句型一】（父亲和我关系紧张）Finally I decided to make peace with him. （我决定和他和好）After fierce struggle I picked up all my courage to tell him I loved him. （我告诉他我爱他）After two days，Father was badly ill in hospital，senseless，which left me in sorrow and in relief（松了口气）. （父亲生病住院，作者感到悲伤也松了口气）In our life，don't delay what you should do today. 【高分句型二】（不要延误该做的事情）
【点评】概要写作，简言之就是对所读过的文章简要概括，写出文章的中心大意，也可称之为摘要。写概要时，读者要是把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而不是抄袭文章的原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，对文章的具体信息进行概括，再用合适的语言表述出来。这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力，同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。因此，概要写作是基于阅读理解和书面表达，是二者的有机结合体，是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。
7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文.续写的词数应为150个左右。
Sam Watts was a 37﹣year﹣old fisherman living and working in Canada.One day，Sam planned to head out into the Pacific at 9 am and work straight through until 5pm the next day.Joining Sam would be his crewman，24﹣year﹣old Tom Buck.
Although Sam had been warned that a storm was coming，there was little that would keep him from going.As he sailed through the waves some 120 kilometers from land，Sam let out his three﹣kilometer﹣long fishing line.The storm was gaining strength on land but had yet to reach the men far offshore.That changed around 1 am.Waves rocked the small boat，which began to turn sideways like an amusement park ride. "Get us out of here! "Tom screamed to Sam. "Let's go back! "
With the winds and waves kicking up，the boat began to fill with water.Sam and Tom tried to pull in the fishing line together，but the high waves filled the boat with water，forcing Sam to make a hard decision.He cut the line，losing thousands of dollars' worth of equipment and fish in the sea.He then pointed the boat toward a port five hours away.Sam then called his boss，William Fox，to report his position.
With dawn coming，Sam spotted the rise of the mountains on the horizon.He was figuring out a route through the dangerous waters when suddenly the motor stopped. "I couldn't believe it，" Sam said. "We were 24 kilometers off the coast，and the motor died." High waves raised and dropped the boat，sending the men crashing into the sides. "William，William! " Sam yelled into the radio. "If you're coming to get me，come now! "
"We're coming! " William shouted back.
Shortly after，the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore，driving the men farther out to sea._________
The next morning，Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance.__________
【答案】Shortly after，the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore，driving the men farther out to sea.They had been drifting for hours.After what seemed a century，suddenly Sam shouted and pointed at a nearby place， "Look!There is an island! " Sam and Tom quickly jumped into the sea，which became calmer，and they managed to land on the island.They were surprised to find that there were people living on it.The people there gave them some food.The storm seemed to be over and they had a good sleep that night.
The next morning.Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance.It belonged to the people on the island.These kind people gave the boat to Sam as a present and warned him that the storm would come back again in two days，so he must hurry up!Sam thanked them and set off on the route he had planned.After two days' sailing，they finally reached the coast.At that time，Sam's radio rang：I'm William!I'm in the middle of the sea.The storm is rocking my boat terribly.Help me!
【分析】本文为记叙文。文章介绍Sam和船员出海打渔，遇到暴风雨，将船打翻，他们看见一座岛，试图登上岛屿。
高分句型一：Sam and Tom quickly jumped into the sea，which became calmer，and they managed to land on the island.
译文：萨姆和汤姆很快跳进海里，海水变得平静了，他们设法在岛上着陆。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：These kind people gave the boat to Sam as a present and warned him that the storm would come back again in two days，so he must hurry up!
译文：这些好心的人把船送给萨姆作为礼物，并警告他暴风雨两天后会再次来临，所以他必须快点！
分析：这句话使用that引导宾语从句，so引导结果状语从句。
【解答】Shortly after，the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore，driving the men farther out to sea.They had been drifting for hours.After what seemed a century，suddenly Sam shouted and pointed at a nearby place， "Look!There is an island! " Sam and Tom quickly jumped into the sea，which became calmer，and they managed to land on the island. 【高分句型一】They were surprised to find that there were people living on it.The people there gave them some food.The storm seemed to be over and they had a good sleep that night. （他们找到了小岛）
The next morning.Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance.It belonged to the people on the island.These kind people gave the boat to Sam as a present and warned him that the storm would come back again in two days，so he must hurry up! 【高分句型二】Sam thanked them and set off on the route he had planned.After two days' sailing，they finally reached the coast.At that time，Sam's radio rang：I'm William!I'm in the middle of the sea.The storm is rocking my boat terribly.Help me! （好心人给了他们小船）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细
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