期末培优 应用文写作专项练习（含答案与解析）2025-2026学年高二上学期英语外研版(2019)

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末培优 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2022秋 葫芦岛月考）你校将举办关于环保的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
1.环保的重要性；
2.参与环保的方式。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen! ______ That's all.Thank you for listening.
2．（2020秋 鄞州区校级月考）假设你叫李华，是我校高一（2）班的学生．你在校报英语专栏中看到了学校"英语文化节"的一则招募启事．
请阅读启事并写一封应征邮件．内容要点如下：
1．表明意图；
2．陈述应征目的；
3．说明应征条件（性格、能力等）．
Volunteer Wanted
Our English Festival，which is to be held on December 20﹣23，is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show and English Speech Contest．If you are interested，please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Miss Zhao at zhaolaoshi@sina．com．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．（2017 沙坪坝区校级一模）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友John写信邀请你在即将来临的寒假一同去非洲旅游，请你用英语给John写一封回信，告诉他你愿意前往并谈谈你对行程的建议．内容包括：
1．交通方式；
2．观光项目：自然风光、野生动物、当地风俗等；
3．返程安排．
注意：1．词数100左右
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头及结语已为你写好，但不计入总词数．
Dear John，
I'm glad to receive your letter! 　 　
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua
4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom被牛津大学录取了，请写信祝贺他，询问他的暑假打算，并邀请他来中国过端午节。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：牛津大学Oxford University
5．（2023秋 河西区期中）假定你是李华，市博物馆将于本周末举行主题为"美丽中国" （Amazing China）的国画展，请你给你的同学Chris写一封邮件邀请她前往参观。内容包括：
①画展的时间和地点；
②画展活动的内容，如：中国画展示、画作解说、名师现场画等；
③画展的意义。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 100 左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris，
_________
6．（2021 浙江）昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿，内容包括：
1.展览时间、地点；
2.观展感受；
3.推荐观展。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
7．（2020 历下区校级模拟）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Amy来信询问有关新型冠状病毒（novel coronavirus）在中国的情况．请你给Amy回信，内容包括：
1．新型冠状病毒简况；
2．应对措施；
3．是否有信心战胜病毒．
注意：
词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
8．（2019春 余姚市校级期中）假定你是李华，你代表全体高一学生邀请外籍教师史密斯先生参加你们年级于本周五晚上 7 点在校图书馆举办的元旦晚会．请你给他发一封邮件，邀请他参加，内容如下：
1．晚会的举办时间和地点；
2．节目：唱歌、跳舞、讲故事等；
3．请他表演一个节目．
注意：
1．词数 80 左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mr Smith，
I'm Li Hua．_______
Yours，
Li Hua
9．（2020春 濂溪区校级期中）你校校门口在放学时间经常出现交通拥堵，给师生和路人带来很多不便．假如你是李华，请用英文给你校英文报写一封信，提出解决拥堵的建议．内容包括：
1．写信的目的；
2．分析学校门口拥堵的原因；
3．提出2～3点建议．
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Editor，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华，你们学校将在暑假举办艺术节，恰好你的美国笔友Sam那时会来中国度假。请给Sam写一封信，邀请他参加本次活动，要点如下：
（1）艺术节的时间和地点；
（2）艺术节活动的主要内容；
（3）询问Sam的艺术才艺，并邀请他进行表演。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
11．微写作
1.科学摄影师Martin Ogli可以将科学与艺术巧妙地结合在一起。
2.他用扫描电子显微镜捕捉了细菌和昆虫的显微图像，放大了50多万倍。他的照片经常被刊登在电视和杂志上。
3.他说： "我想让更多的人了解世界上最小的生物。它们有完美的身体结构，值得我们关注! "
12．（2023春 丰城市校级月考）假如你是李华，你的外国网友Peter因沉溺于手机游戏而被父母没收了手机，从而与父母发生了争吵。请给他写一封信，劝他与父母和好。要点包括：
1．对发生争吵表示遗憾；
2．指出Peter的错误；
3．给出建议。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
13．（2025 湖北一模）你校英语俱乐部将举办英语演讲比赛，请以Family Education Shapes Me 为主题，写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
（1）良好的家庭教育方式；
（2）成长的启示。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning，boys and girls，
14．（2025春 随州期末）假设你是学校英语俱乐部成员，该俱乐部将举办主题为"How did you spend this Spring Festival？"的交流活动，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，届时与大家分享。
内容包括：
（1）你是怎样过这个春节的；
（2）你的感受或收获是什么。
注意：（1）词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello，everyone!I'm honored to share with you how I spent this Spring Festival.
__________
Thanks for listening!
15．（2024 西宁一模）假如你是李华，你校英语社团将开展以"Thank You，My Senior High"为主题的交流活动。请根据以下内容写一篇发言稿，要点如下：
（1）最感谢的人；
（2）感谢的事由；
（3）个人的感悟。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear boys and girls，good afternoon.
Thanks for your listening.
期末培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2022秋 葫芦岛月考）你校将举办关于环保的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
1.环保的重要性；
2.参与环保的方式。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen! ______ That's all.Thank you for listening.
【答案】Good morning，ladies and gentlemen!
It's my honor to stand here delivering a speech about environmental protection.
As we can see，our environment is badly damaged by what we human beings have done.The polluted water，air and food have a great effect on our health.Therefore，it's high time that everyone of us should try our best to do what we can to protect the environment.
First of all，we should protect the environment by saving energy，including turning off electrical equipment and taps in time.In addition，we must contact environmental protection departments secretly if we find factories are polluting our environment.Above all，we can call on more people around us to join us.In a word，the effort from everybody can make a great difference to our world.
That's all.Thank you for listening.
【分析】高分句型一
As we can see，our environment is badly damaged by what we human beings have done.
翻译：正如我们所看到的，我们的环境被我们人类的所作所为严重破坏。
分析：句子里，As引导非限制性定语从句we can see，代指主句our environment is badly damaged by what we human beings have done。
高分句型二
First of all，we should protect the environment by saving energy，including turning off electrical equipment and taps in time.
翻译：首先，我们应该通过节约能源来保护环境，包括及时关闭电气设备和水龙头。
分析：句子里，动名词短语saving energy作by的宾语；动名词短语turning off electrical equipment and taps in time作including的宾语。
【解答】Good morning，ladies and gentlemen!
It's my honor to stand here delivering a speech about environmental protection.（点明主题）
As we can see，our environment is badly damaged by what we human beings have done.【高分句型一】The polluted water，air and food have a great effect on our health.Therefore，it's high time that everyone of us should try our best to do what we can to protect the environment.（环保的重要性）
First of all，we should protect the environment by saving energy，including turning off electrical equipment and taps in time.【高分句型二】In addition，we must contact environmental protection departments secretly if we find factories are polluting our environment.Above all，we can call on more people around us to join us.In a word，the effort from everybody can make a great difference to our world.（参与环保的方式）
That's all.Thank you for listening.（结束语）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
2．（2020秋 鄞州区校级月考）假设你叫李华，是我校高一（2）班的学生．你在校报英语专栏中看到了学校"英语文化节"的一则招募启事．
请阅读启事并写一封应征邮件．内容要点如下：
1．表明意图；
2．陈述应征目的；
3．说明应征条件（性格、能力等）．
Volunteer Wanted
Our English Festival，which is to be held on December 20﹣23，is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show and English Speech Contest．If you are interested，please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Miss Zhao at zhaolaoshi@sina．com．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是一封应征邮件．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容主要包括：一表明意图；二陈述应征目的；三说明应征条件；四再次表明决心．
高分句型：
1．I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because，by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organizational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public．
我真的想要获得这个宝贵的机会，因为，通过提供我的服务，我将能够提高我的组织能力，交际能力以及在公共场合用英语说话的自信．
because引导原因状语从句；as well as 表示也包括．
2．Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates．
我成功地帮助老师组织了几个课上活动，获得了老师和同学的称赞．
which引导定语从句，代指主句．
【解答】Dear Miss Zhao ，
I'm，a student from Class 2，Grade 1．I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer．（表明意图）
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because，by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organizational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public．【高分句型一】（陈述应征目的）
As an outgoing girl，I get along well with my classmates．Besides，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as an assistant to my English teacher．Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates．【高分句型二】（说明应征条件）
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations．I would appreciate it you could take me into consideration．（再次表明决心）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
3．（2017 沙坪坝区校级一模）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友John写信邀请你在即将来临的寒假一同去非洲旅游，请你用英语给John写一封回信，告诉他你愿意前往并谈谈你对行程的建议．内容包括：
1．交通方式；
2．观光项目：自然风光、野生动物、当地风俗等；
3．返程安排．
注意：1．词数100左右
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头及结语已为你写好，但不计入总词数．
Dear John，
I'm glad to receive your letter! 　And I'm so excited to travel with you on winter vocation because I do believe．Africa is a place full of magic and worth visiting．
First，we can meet in HongKong and then fly to Africa together．Maybe it's a good idea to rent a car there and drive through the tropical rainforest，across the grassland the Sahara desert．This way，we can appreciate the unique natural scenery and experience the local customs in Africa．In our journey，we might as well get close to nature　
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
高分句型一：I'm glad to receive your letter !And I'm so excited to travel with you on winter vocation because I do believe．很高兴收到你的来信！我很高兴和你一起去寒假旅行，因为我相信．状语从句中do是强调句，强调的是谓语动词believe．
高分句型二：In our journey，we might as well get close to nature．在我们的旅途中，我们不妨亲近自然．'might as well do something'或者 'may as well do something'，意思就是你没有理由不去做某件事．
【解答】Dear John，
I'm glad to receive your letter !And I'm so excited to travel with you on winter vocation because I do believe．（高分句型一） Africa is a place full of magic and worth visiting．【接受邀请】
First，we can meet in HongKong and then fly to Africa together．Maybe it's a good idea to rent a car there and drive through the tropical rainforest，across the grassland the Sahara desert．This way，we can appreciate the unique natural scenery and experience the local customs in Africa．In our journey，we might as well get close to nature（高分句型二）【具体的安排】
Looking forward to your early reply．
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom被牛津大学录取了，请写信祝贺他，询问他的暑假打算，并邀请他来中国过端午节。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：牛津大学Oxford University
【答案】Dear Tom，
Hearing that you have been admitted to Oxford University，I'm eager to extend my congratulations!All your efforts paid off at last!
In China，after the college entrance examination，we will have a longer summer vacation.I'm sure it is the same with you.What is your plan for this summer holidays？Have you decided when to visit China？Since the Dragon Boat Festival is approaching，I really hope you will come to celebrate it together with us to learn about Chinese culture and customs.Please let me know in advance after you have fixed the date so that I can pick you up at the airport.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Since the Dragon Boat Festival is approaching，I really hope you will come to celebrate it together with us to learn about Chinese culture and customs.
译文：因为端午节快到了，我真的希望你们能来和我们一起庆祝，了解中国的文化和习俗。
分析：这句话使用since引导原因状语从句，hope后面是宾语从句。
高分句型二：Please let me know in advance after you have fixed the date so that I can pick you up at the airport.
译文：请在您确定日期后提前通知我，以便我到机场接您。
分析：这句话使用after引导时间状语从句，so that引导结果状语从句。
【解答】Dear Tom，
Hearing that you have been admitted to Oxford University，I'm eager to extend my congratulations!All your efforts paid off at last!（祝贺）
In China，after the college entrance examination，we will have a longer summer vacation.I'm sure it is the same with you.What is your plan for this summer holidays？（询问他的暑假打算）Have you decided when to visit China？Since the Dragon Boat Festival is approaching，I really hope you will come to celebrate it together with us to learn about Chinese culture and customs.【高分句型一】Please let me know in advance after you have fixed the date so that I can pick you up at the airport.【高分句型二】（邀请他来中国过端午节）
Looking forward to your reply.（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
5．（2023秋 河西区期中）假定你是李华，市博物馆将于本周末举行主题为"美丽中国" （Amazing China）的国画展，请你给你的同学Chris写一封邮件邀请她前往参观。内容包括：
①画展的时间和地点；
②画展活动的内容，如：中国画展示、画作解说、名师现场画等；
③画展的意义。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 100 左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris，
_________
【答案】Dear Chris，
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese literature and art，I'm writing to invite you to attend a traditional Chinese painting show to be held in the city museum.
The show，with the theme of Amazing China，is scheduled to start this weekend.Various types of Chinese paintings will be on exhibition.At the same time，an introduction to this type of painting will also give us a deeper understanding.Besides，well﹣known artists will be present to paint on the spot.In my opinion，it's a good chance for us to know Chinese culture in depth and broaden our horizons.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Knowing that you are interested in Chinese literature and art，I'm writing to invite you to attend a traditional Chinese painting show to be held in the city museum.
翻译：知道你对中国文学和艺术感兴趣，我写信邀请你参加在市博物馆举行的中国传统画展。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语Knowing that you are interested in Chinese literature and art作状语。
高分句型二：In my opinion，it's a good chance for us to know Chinese culture in depth and broaden our horizons.
翻译：在我看来，这是我们深入了解中国文化、开阔视野的好机会。
分析：本句运用了it作形式主语，动词不定式短语for us to know Chinese culture in depth and broaden our horizons作真正主语。
【解答】Dear Chris，
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese literature and art，I'm writing to invite you to attend a traditional Chinese painting show to be held in the city museum.【高分句型一】（写信目的和画展地点）
The show，with the theme of Amazing China，is scheduled to start this weekend.（画展的时间）Various types of Chinese paintings will be on exhibition.At the same time，an introduction to this type of painting will also give us a deeper understanding.Besides，well﹣known artists will be present to paint on the spot.（画展活动的内容）In my opinion，it's a good chance for us to know Chinese culture in depth and broaden our horizons.【高分句型二】（画展的意义）
Looking forward to your coming.（表达期盼）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
6．（2021 浙江）昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿，内容包括：
1.展览时间、地点；
2.观展感受；
3.推荐观展。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】An Art Exhibition Held in Our School
To show students' artistic achievements and promote campus culture，our school successfully organized an student art exhibition yesterday.
After our headmaster made a short speech at 8：00 a.m，we began to appreciate a variety of works finished by some students in our school，including painting，photography，sculpture，paper cutting and so on.When watching the works exhibited，not only was I impressed by students' superb artistic skills and special thinking angle，but also I was moved by their love and inheritance of Chinese traditional culture.
I together with my schoolmates hope some other similar activities will be held once again.
【分析】昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿。
高分句型一
To show students' artistic achievements and promote campus culture，our school successfully organized an student art exhibition yesterday.
分析：句子里，动词不定式To show students' artistic achievements and promote campus culture作目的状语。
翻译：为展示学生的艺术成就，弘扬校园文化，我校昨天成功举办了学生艺术展。
高分句型二
When watching the works exhibited，not only was I impressed by students' superb artistic skills and special thinking angle，but also I was moved by their love and inheritance of Chinese traditional culture.
分析：句子里，否定词not only位于句首，句子was I impressed by students' superb artistic skills and special thinking angle用部分倒装。
翻译：在观看展出的作品时，我不仅对学生们高超的艺术技巧和独特的思维角度印象深刻，更让我感动的是他们对中国传统文化的热爱和传承。
【解答】An Art Exhibition Held in Our School
To show students' artistic achievements and promote campus culture，our school successfully organized an student art exhibition yesterday.【高分句型一】
After our headmaster made a short speech at 8：00 a.m，we began to appreciate a variety of works finished by some students in our school，including painting，photography，sculpture，paper cutting and so on. （展览时间、地点）When watching the works exhibited，not only was I impressed by students' superb artistic skills and special thinking angle，but also I was moved by their love and inheritance of Chinese traditional culture.【高分句型二】（个人感受）
I together with my schoolmates hope some other similar activities will be held once again.（推荐观展）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
7．（2020 历下区校级模拟）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Amy来信询问有关新型冠状病毒（novel coronavirus）在中国的情况．请你给Amy回信，内容包括：
1．新型冠状病毒简况；
2．应对措施；
3．是否有信心战胜病毒．
注意：
词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：Since the outbreak of an infectious disease in Wuhan in December 2019，the Chinese government has decisively closed down the city to prevent the spread of the disease．
译文：自2019年12月武汉爆发传染病以来，中国政府果断关闭武汉，以防止疾病蔓延．
分析：since引导时间状语从句．
高分句型二：If we go out，we must wear protective masks to prevent ourselves from getting infected．
译文：如果我们出去，我们必须戴上防护面具，以防止自己受到感染．
分析：使用if引导条件状语从句．
【解答】Dear Amy，
It is so considerate of you to receive your letter inquiring about novel coronavirus in Wuhan．I am writing to tell you about this．（写信目的）
Since the outbreak of an infectious disease in Wuhan in December 2019，the Chinese government has decisively closed down the city to prevent the spread of the disease． 【高分句型一】At the same time，although cases have been found throughout the country，the Chinese people actively face it，together with Wuhan to fight the epidemic．（新型冠状病毒简况）
At this particular time，we should go out as little as possible，isolated．If we go out，we must wear protective masks to prevent ourselves from getting infected．【高分句型二】In addition，we should keep good healthy habits and keep our body clean．（应对措施）
As many Chinese say， "come on，Wuhan"，we believe we can certainly overcome the epidemic!（是否有信心战胜病毒）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
8．（2019春 余姚市校级期中）假定你是李华，你代表全体高一学生邀请外籍教师史密斯先生参加你们年级于本周五晚上 7 点在校图书馆举办的元旦晚会．请你给他发一封邮件，邀请他参加，内容如下：
1．晚会的举办时间和地点；
2．节目：唱歌、跳舞、讲故事等；
3．请他表演一个节目．
注意：
1．词数 80 左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mr Smith，
I'm Li Hua．_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型：
1．I'm writing to invite you to join us in a party to celebrate the coming of a new year on behalf of Senior One．（高分句型一）句中to celebrate the coming of a new year on behalf of Senior One为不定式作目的状语．
我写这封信是为了邀请你和我们一起参加一个聚会，代表高一学生庆祝新年的到来．
2．There will be plenty of entertainment，including singing，dancing，and storytelling． （高分句型二）句中including为介词，其后跟动名词．
会有很多娱乐活动，包括唱歌、跳舞和讲故事．
【解答】Dear Mr Smith，
I'm writing to invite you to join us in a party to celebrate the coming of a new year on behalf of Senior One．（高分句型一）（写信目的）
The party is to be held in the school library at seven o'clock this Friday evening． （晚会的举办时间和地点）There will be plenty of entertainment，including singing，dancing，and storytelling． （高分句型二）We hope that you can bring us some special performances，like singing an English song or playing a musical instrument．（节目：唱歌、跳舞、讲故事等）
We sincerely hope you can come and have a good time with us．（请他表演一个节目） Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
9．（2020春 濂溪区校级期中）你校校门口在放学时间经常出现交通拥堵，给师生和路人带来很多不便．假如你是李华，请用英文给你校英文报写一封信，提出解决拥堵的建议．内容包括：
1．写信的目的；
2．分析学校门口拥堵的原因；
3．提出2～3点建议．
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Editor，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．With so many parents coming to pick up their children，traffic jams are frequent near the school gate ，causing much inconvenience to us and passers﹣﹣by．
句子里，With的符合结构 so many parents coming to pick up their children做原因状语；现在分词causing much inconvenience to us and passers﹣﹣by做结果状语．
有这么多家长来接孩子，学校门口经常堵车，给我们和路人带来很多不便．
2．I do hope my suggestions can be considered and the problem can disappear soon．
句子里，用助动词 do 强调谓语动词hope．
我真的希望我的建议能得到考虑，问题能很快消失．
【解答】Dear Editor，
I'm Li Hua． I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate， which is very serious now．（点明书信目的）With so many parents coming to pick up their children，traffic jams are frequent near the school gate ，causing much inconvenience to us and passers﹣﹣by．【高分句型一】（分析学校门口拥堵的原因）
I strongly recommend some effective measures be taken． First， we should encourage students to ride a bicycle or walk to school by themselves． It is also a good idea to allow junior student to leave school 10 minutes earlier than others． Besides， cars should not be allowed to park near the school gate．（提出2～3点建议）
I do hope my suggestions can be considered and the problem can disappear soon．【高分句型二】（标点希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲类书面表达主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体，贴近生活，易于动笔．此类试题中有较多的文字说明，实际上规定了考生表述的思路，对考生的写作范围作了较为明确的限定，试题中规定的要点一个也不能回避．考生极易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和语汇上的单调，因此平时要多练习，活用语言，使文章流畅．
10．假定你是李华，你们学校将在暑假举办艺术节，恰好你的美国笔友Sam那时会来中国度假。请给Sam写一封信，邀请他参加本次活动，要点如下：
（1）艺术节的时间和地点；
（2）艺术节活动的主要内容；
（3）询问Sam的艺术才艺，并邀请他进行表演。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Sam，
How are you recently？I'm so happy that you will spend your summer vacation in China.As you know，there is an interesting Art Festival in our high school every summer，and I am writing to invite you to join the wonderful event this time when you visit China!
The Art Festival will be held on our school playground on 1 August.There will be several main activities，including the magic show，singing contest，dancing，and painting，and we will even invite a band to perform，which is the most exciting part.
By the way，have you got any particular interest or talent in art？If you have，you can perform on that day，and I'm sure you will make a lot of Chinese friends.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：There will be several main activities，including the magic show，singing contest，dancing，and painting，and we will even invite a band to perform，which is the most exciting part.
译文：将有几个主要的活动，包括魔术表演、歌唱比赛、舞蹈和绘画，我们甚至会邀请乐队表演，这是最激动人心的部分。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：If you have，you can perform on that day，and I'm sure you will make a lot of Chinese friends.
译文：如果你有，你可以在那天表演，我相信你会交到很多中国朋友。
分析：这句话使用if引导条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Sam，
How are you recently？I'm so happy that you will spend your summer vacation in China.As you know，there is an interesting Art Festival in our high school every summer，and I am writing to invite you to join the wonderful event this time when you visit China!（写信目的）
The Art Festival will be held on our school playground on 1 August.（艺术节的时间和地点）There will be several main activities，including the magic show，singing contest，dancing，and painting，and we will even invite a band to perform，which is the most exciting part.【高分句型一】（艺术节活动的主要内容）
By the way，have you got any particular interest or talent in art？If you have，you can perform on that day，and I'm sure you will make a lot of Chinese friends.【高分句型二】（询问Sam的艺术才艺，并邀请他进行表演）
Looking forward to your reply!（期望）
Yours
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
11．微写作
1.科学摄影师Martin Ogli可以将科学与艺术巧妙地结合在一起。
2.他用扫描电子显微镜捕捉了细菌和昆虫的显微图像，放大了50多万倍。他的照片经常被刊登在电视和杂志上。
3.他说： "我想让更多的人了解世界上最小的生物。它们有完美的身体结构，值得我们关注! "
【答案】Science photographer Martin Ogli could skillfully combine science and art.He used a scanning electronic microscope to capture microscopic images of bacteria and insects with magnification of more than half a million times.His photographs are often published on the TV channels and magazines.He said： "I want to make the tiniest organisms in the world known to more people.They have the perfect body structure and deserve our attention! "
【分析】高分句型一：He used a scanning electronic microscope to capture microscopic images of bacteria and insects with magnification of more than half a million times.
译文：他用扫描电子显微镜拍摄细菌和昆虫的显微图像，放大倍数超过50万倍。
分析：这句话使用不定式作目的状语。
高分句型二：I want to make the tiniest organisms in the world known to more people.
译文：我想让更多的人知道世界上最小的生物。
分析：这句话使用过去分词短语作宾语补足语。
【解答】Science photographer Martin Ogli could skillfully combine science and art.（科学摄影师Martin Ogli可以将科学与艺术巧妙地结合在一起）He used a scanning electronic microscope to capture microscopic images of bacteria and insects with magnification of more than half a million times.【高分句型一】His photographs are often published on the TV channels and magazines.（他用扫描电子显微镜捕捉了细菌和昆虫的显微图像，放大了50多万倍。他的照片经常被刊登在电视和杂志上。）He said： "I want to make the tiniest organisms in the world known to more people.【高分句型二】They have the perfect body structure and deserve our attention! "（他用扫描电子显微镜捕捉了细菌和昆虫的显微图像，放大了50多万倍。他的照片经常被刊登在电视和杂志上。）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
12．（2023春 丰城市校级月考）假如你是李华，你的外国网友Peter因沉溺于手机游戏而被父母没收了手机，从而与父母发生了争吵。请给他写一封信，劝他与父母和好。要点包括：
1．对发生争吵表示遗憾；
2．指出Peter的错误；
3．给出建议。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Peter，
It's a pity that you quarreled with your parents.Attractive as mobile games are，they do cost you much time and energy，which does harm to your health and study.To be honest，it is our primary task to study hard now.I think what your parents did is because they care about you.How can you let them down？So it is necessary to say sorry to them and drown yourself in study.
Hope you will get on well with your parents soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Attractive as mobile games are，they do cost you much time and energy，which does harm to your health and study.
分析：句子里，让步状语从句Attractive as mobile games are用部分倒装；关系词which一点非限制性定语从句does harm to your health and study。
翻译：尽管手机游戏很吸引人，但它们确实会耗费你大量的时间和精力，这对你的健康和学习有害。
高分句型二
I think what your parents did is because they care about you.
分析：在省略了that的宾语从句里，what引导主语从句your parents did；because引导表语从句they care about you。
翻译：我认为你父母所做的是因为他们关心你。
【解答】Dear Peter，
It's a pity that you quarreled with your parents.（对发生争吵表示遗憾）Attractive as mobile games are，they do cost you much time and energy，which does harm to your health and study.【高分句型一】To be honest，it is our primary task to study hard now.I think what your parents did is because they care about you.【高分句型二】（指出Peter的错误）How can you let them down？So it is necessary to say sorry to them and drown yourself in study.（给出建议）
Hope you will get on well with your parents soon.（表达希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
13．（2025 湖北一模）你校英语俱乐部将举办英语演讲比赛，请以Family Education Shapes Me 为主题，写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
（1）良好的家庭教育方式；
（2）成长的启示。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning，boys and girls，
【答案】Good morning，boys and girls，
The theme of my speech today is that family education shaped me.My family education has always had a deep influence on me.It helps me a lot.
Remember once，my teacher gave me a prize when I got full marks in an exam.But when I got home，my mother found a mistake on the paper and asked me to explain the situation to the teacher.I did what Mom said.The teacher asked me to keep the prize as a reward for my honesty.Although I lost full marks，I gained the most beautiful qualities.My honest upbringing has served me well throughout my life and removed many obstacles in my life.Thank you for listening!
【分析】高分句型一
I did what Mom said.
翻译：我照妈妈说的做了。
分析：运用了what引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二
Although I lost full marks，I gained the most beautiful qualities.
翻译：虽然我失去了满分，但我获得了最美的品质。
分析：运用了although引导的让步状语从句。
【解答】Good morning，boys and girls，
The theme of my speech today is that family education shaped me.My family education has always had a deep influence on me.It helps me a lot.（良好的家庭教育方式）
Remember once，my teacher gave me a prize when I got full marks in an exam.But when I got home，my mother found a mistake on the paper and asked me to explain the situation to the teacher.I did what Mom said.【高分句型一】The teacher asked me to keep the prize as a reward for my honesty.Although I lost full marks，I gained the most beautiful qualities.【高分句型二】My honest upbringing has served me well throughout my life and removed many obstacles in my life.Thank you for listening!成长的启示）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
14．（2025春 随州期末）假设你是学校英语俱乐部成员，该俱乐部将举办主题为"How did you spend this Spring Festival？"的交流活动，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，届时与大家分享。
内容包括：
（1）你是怎样过这个春节的；
（2）你的感受或收获是什么。
注意：（1）词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello，everyone!I'm honored to share with you how I spent this Spring Festival.
__________
Thanks for listening!
【答案】Hello，everyone!I'm honored to share with you how I spent this Spring Festival.
On New Year's Eve，my family gathered together and had a reunion dinner while watching the Spring Festival Gala.When the clock struck 12，my brother and I rushed out to set off fireworks to welcome the New Year.What impressed me most was that I decorated our house with red lanterns，put up couplets and made dumplings with my parents happily.Additionally，I played sports and games with my friends besides learning.
I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework，during which I learned lots of life skills.After all，the Spring Festival is important because it's a new beginning which brings hope to us and it's also a time to show our gratitude and take our responsibility.
Thanks for listening!
【分析】高分句型一：What impressed me most was that I decorated our house with red lanterns，put up couplets and made dumplings with my parents happily.
翻译：给我印象最深的是我和父母一起用大灯笼装饰房子，贴对联，包饺子。
分析：本句运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句。
高分句型二：I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework，during which I learned lots of life skills.
翻译：我真的很喜欢帮父母做家务，在这期间我学到了很多生活技能。
分析：本句运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Hello，everyone!I'm honored to share with you how I spent this Spring Festival.（开场白）
On New Year's Eve，my family gathered together and had a reunion dinner while watching the Spring Festival Gala.When the clock struck 12，my brother and I rushed out to set off fireworks to welcome the New Year.What impressed me most was that I decorated our house with red lanterns，put up couplets and made dumplings with my parents happily.【高分句型一】Additionally，I played sports and games with my friends besides learning.（作者是怎样过这个春节的）
I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework，during which I learned lots of life skills.【高分句型二】After all，the Spring Festival is important because it's a new beginning which brings hope to us and it's also a time to show our gratitude and take our responsibility.（作者的感受或收获）
Thanks for listening!（结束语）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
15．（2024 西宁一模）假如你是李华，你校英语社团将开展以"Thank You，My Senior High"为主题的交流活动。请根据以下内容写一篇发言稿，要点如下：
（1）最感谢的人；
（2）感谢的事由；
（3）个人的感悟。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear boys and girls，good afternoon.
Thanks for your listening.
【答案】Dear boys and girls，good afternoon.It's my honor to stand here and give you a speech，whose theme is "Thank You，My Senior High".The person I thank most is my English teacher.
First of all，my English teacher treats all students equally，no matter how strong or weak your basic knowledge of English is.Secondly，she is very patient.Knowing my English is poor，she always helps me with every problem patiently.Finally.She is a caring teacher.I remember once I caught a cold and had a fever.She sent me to the hospital in time and contacted my family.My teacher was there to take care of me until my family arrived，as if I were her own child.
At this moment，my heart is full of gratitude，thanks to my English teacher，thanks to my high school.
Thanks for your listening.
【分析】高分句型一：It's my honor to stand here and give you a speech，whose theme is "Thank You，My Senior High".
翻译：我很荣幸站在这里给你们演讲，我的主题是"谢谢你，我的高中"。
分析：本句运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：First of all，my English teacher treats all students equally，no matter how strong or weak your basic knowledge of English is.
翻译：首先，我的英语老师对待所有的学生都是平等的，不管你的英语基础知识是强是弱。
分析：本句运用了no matter how引导的让步状语从句。
【解答】Dear boys and girls，good afternoon.It's my honor to stand here and give you a speech，whose theme is "Thank You，My Senior High".【高分句型一】The person I thank most is my English teacher.（最感谢的人）
First of all，my English teacher treats all students equally，no matter how strong or weak your basic knowledge of English is.【高分句型二】Secondly，she is very patient.Knowing my English is poor，she always helps me with every problem patiently.Finally.She is a caring teacher.I remember once I caught a cold and had a fever.She sent me to the hospital in time and contacted my family.My teacher was there to take care of me until my family arrived，as if I were her own child.（感谢的事由）
At this moment，my heart is full of gratitude，thanks to my English teacher，thanks to my high school.（个人的感悟）
Thanks for your listening.（结束语）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
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