期末培优 读后续写专项练习(含答案与解析)2025-2026学年高一上学期英语外研版(2019)

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名称 期末培优 读后续写专项练习(含答案与解析)2025-2026学年高一上学期英语外研版(2019)
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末培优 读后续写
一.书面表达(共15小题)
1.(2024秋 锦州期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
One morning in December,Tom Carr was playing with his friend Dot as usual in the yard.Tom was nine years old,and Dot was seven.Tom took very great care of his friend.
Then a man who Tom knew rode into the yard in panic.It was Mr.May,who lived at the next station,where there is a big farm. "Fire!" he cried to Tom's father,Mr.Carr. "Fire!One of the worst fire I've ever seen in my e along,Carr. "
Mr.Carr called his men out.In an hour or so Mrs.May and her baby drove up.Tom and Dot ran to meet them. "Thank you,dear," she said. "The smoke is so bad at home that I was afraid it would choke(呛)the baby. "
She went to the house,and Tom and Dot were following her,when Tom stopped. "Look there,Dot. " he said. "The brown calf(小牛)has gotten out of the yard!" The men were in such a hurry to fight the fire that they forgot to close the gate,and the brown calf was running away.Tom ran at once to bring the calf back,and Dot ran after him.
About half a mile from the farm yard the open land came to an end,and the bush began.The calf ran into the trees,and the children followed.The trees were not thick at first,and it was very easy to follow the brown calf through the bushes.But the calf ran into a deep valley,where Tom could not follow it. "Oh,what a pity,Dot," he said. "The calf is lost now.It will disappear into the bush.But give me your hand.We must go home!"
Tom now tried to find his way home.He felt sure he could easily get home,for they had only gone a little way into the bush.They walked on and on,and Dot got very tired.Tom took his friend or his back,and carried him for a long way. "Oh,how thick the smoke is!" said Dot.There had been smoke in the air all day,but now it was very thick.The fire had to be getting closer.
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Tom began to feel very scared._______________________
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When Mr.Carr came back to the yard,he was told that the two kids got lost.____________________
2.(2024秋 葫芦岛期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,续写的词数应为150左右。
Robert and Henry were two friends in the same class.They always played together and went home together.One day,Robert and Henry were going home from school,when,on turning a corner,Robert cried out, "A fight!Let's go and see!"
"No." said Henry. "Let us go quietly home and not meddle with(插手)this quarrel.We have nothing to do with it and may get into trouble.Also our parents are expecting to have dinner with us together at home and I don't want them to worry about me."
"You are a coward(懦夫),and afraid to go," said Robert,and off he ran.Henry went straight home,and in the afternoon went to school as usual.
But Robert had told all the boys that Henry was a coward,and they laughed at him a great deal.From then on,they looked down upon Henry and didn't want to play with him together.
Henry was sad but he wasn't angry with Robert for his rude behavior,because he knew that they misunderstood him,and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong.Thus,he just ignored(忽略)the other boys' laughter and continued to go to school and study as well.However,Robert didn't invite Henry to go home with him anymore.Instead,he had some other boys who also thought Henry was a coward.Every day after school,they didn't go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play games and had a lot of fun.
A few days later,Robert was bathing with his new friends in a river,and got out of his depth.He struggled and cried for help,but he failed.The boys who had called Henry a coward got out of the water as fast as they could,but they did nothing to help him.
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It seemed as if Robert would be dying.
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Thus,Robert's life was saved.
3.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
We went to Darjelling during the summer holidays and booked a cottage (农舍) for our stay.Our cook Gopi came with us because we could not do without home﹣cooked meals.
Usually all the shopping was done by our home help ﹣ Bharat,who had accompanied (陪伴) us to our holiday destination.However,one early evening, my mother decided to do all the vegetable shopping by herself.She believed that Bharat did not wait to check the really fresh items and instead,bought randomly in a hurry.As a result,the vegetables he brought back were not fresh.
After getting ready,she took her favorite purse with quite an amount of money,thinking she could go to other shops too after finishing at the vegetable market.My mother asked Bharat to get a rickshaw for her and on reaching the market,she asked the rickshaw wallah (人力车车夫) to wait for her.She took a coolie and did her shopping happily,choosing some of the freshest green vegetables available there.At last,her shopping was done.She returned to the rickshaw and sat on it while the coolie put all the things my mother had bought onto the rickshaw.
On reaching home,Bharat took all the packets of vegetables inside and my mother quickly paid the rickshaw wallah and got off,forgetting to collect her purse from the seat of the rickshaw.The rickshaw wallah left soon after saying goodbye to my mother.All of us greeted my mother and asked her about her evening of shopping with much delight.
Then we began to help my mother prepare our dinner.My father came to help chop the meat;I helped wash the vegetables;we were talking and laughing.When dinner was about to be announced,it was late in the evening,almost 9 p.m.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Then my mom realized her purse was missing.______
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We were just about to begin eating when the door bell rang.______
4.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
An 80﹣year﹣old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45﹣year﹣old highly educated son.Suddenly a crow(乌鸦)perched(栖息)on their window.
The father asked his son,"What is this?" The son replied,"It is a crow."
After a few minutes,the father asked his son for the second time,"What is this?" The son said,"Father,I have just now told you,it's a crow!"
After a little while,the old father again asked his son for the third time,"What is this?"
At this time some expression of irritation(恼怒)was felt in the son's tone when he said to his father with a rebuff(生硬回绝)."It's a crow,a crow." A little while later,the father again asked his son the fourth time,"What is this?"
This time,the son shouted at his father,"Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again,although I have told you so many times 'IT IS A CROW'.Are you not able to understand this?"
A little while later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered(发皱的)diary,which he had maintained since his son was born.On opening a page,he asked his son to read that page.When the son read it,the following words were written in the diary:
"Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa,when a crow was sitting on the window.My son asked me 23 times what it was,and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow.I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question.I did not at all feel irritated but I rather felt affection for my innocent son."
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After reading the diary, ___________
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Feeling ashamed,the son got down on his knees before his father. __________
5.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One never knows what one is going to find when one steps out into the world.Even something as simple as a walk through your neighborhood can result in either mild excitement or unusual adventure if the cards are right.
On a sunny afternoon,Mike journeyed into the construction site near his home.Suddenly,he heard something coming from around the side of a nearby building.It sounded like the whining(悲嚎声)cries of an animal.He curiously turned the corner,only to see a small dog standing on its back legs and wagging its tail pitifully.He then noticed that the poor thing seemed to be stuck at the waist between a small concrete wall and an even smaller broken wooden fence.
The poor animal's difficult situation was pretty obvious and Mike knew that if he did nothing and left the dog there,it might not survive.He had no idea how long the animal had been there up until that point.It might not have eaten or drunk anything in days.Determined to help,he looked around to find a stick,proceeded to climb up onto the cement slab and pointed his stick back at the dog.He was trying to pry(撬动)above the animal by insert the stick between the cement wall and the smaller,broken wall,but the terrified animal obviously didn't know his intention and attempted to bite at the tool and barked at him fearfully.The fright in its eyes said everything.
After at least a minute or so of trying to free the dog,Mike found his plan much more difficult in practice than it had stayed inside his own head.The hot sun was beating down.Drops of sweat running down his face,Mike sat down on the ground and scratched his head with annoyance,thinking about what in the world his next move was going to be.Beside him,the dog curled up into a ball,whining miserably.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Then Mike went around to the other side of the wall and grabbed hold of the stick._____
Eventually,with the few well﹣positioned pieces of wood,Mike managed to insert his stick in the right way._____
6.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The cost of a smile
Kathy was a young woman in her 20's who worked in a small restaurant as a waitress.One day,as she went about her shift(轮班)with her usual angry look,a kind old man walked in and sat down at the counter.He read the menu and politely told her what he wanted.
Kathy took his order and yelled,"Your food will be ready soon." As she turned to leave,the man said,"A smile costs nothing".Kathy rolled her eyes at him and walked away.
She brought his order,cleared his plates,and gave him the bill,for which he left a nice tip.
Each time the old man saw her,he smiled and thanked her.This only made her angrier.
A week went by,and every day the man came for lunch and the same thing happened.And each time Kathy took his order he would say,"A smile costs nothing."
But a week later,Kathy picked up a menu,wrote the words "1 SMILE...﹩20" at the bottom,and placed it on the counter for the kind old man to see.He came,and Kathy waited for his reaction as he read the menu.The old man ordered his usual and added,"……and a smile,if you don't mind".Kathy was so surprised.She laughed out loud,"Now,now ..." The man jokingly scolded.
"I ordered a smile,not a laugh".So Kathy put on a bright smile and said, "Coming right up,sir." And to her surprise,he left ﹩20 tip!
A few years went by,and the two bonded like family.Charlie,the kind old man,was a retired manager whose wife passed away long ago.He spent most of his time at home,with the exception of his frequent restaurant visits.Every day Kathy spent her break talking to him.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day he didn't come to the restaurant.______________
Several days after the funeral(葬礼),Kathy received a very important﹣looking letter in the mail._______
7.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A boulder(巨石),as big as a house.That's how the guidebook described Giant Rock.Dad said it arrived here millions of years ago.I was finally going to see it,in snowshoes,with my two older cousins,my dad,and my uncle Don.I'd been snowshoeing before,and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow.
At the parking area,after putting on our snowshoes,we studied the map.Due to the geographical location,electrical devices are inaccessible here.The map is our only guide. "We start here," Dad said," on the red trail(小路).Then we turn left onto the purple road.That's where Giant Rock is." "Remember to stick together and don't wander off,guys," Uncle Don said.
The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall.It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers.At the top of the hill,we turned onto the purple trail.We settled into a pattern,with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back,crunching(嘎吱嘎吱地踩)through the snow.I saw lots of animal tracks — mostly deer,squirrel,and rabbit prints.As the trail wound down,my cousin Andrew said what I'd been thinking :"Will we ever reach Giant Rock?" My cousin Aiden smiled and turned to me, "Luke,do you think your dad invented this idea just to get us away from the TV for a while?" I laughed. "You never know."
Finally,we climbed a hill and saw the massive boulder sitting alone in the forest.It really is as big as a house!My cousins and I high five each other and jogged until we stood at the base,breathless.Standing in the boulders broad shadow,I noticed the sun had sunk lower.
"Let's head back,"Dad said after a few minutes. "There will be several crossroads on the way back.Guys,keep up with the team." Soon we were crunch﹣crunch﹣crunching our way home.I was a little behind the group when we approached a crossroads.And I noticed a set of animal tracks I didn't recognize,so I followed them for a closer look.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten._____________
As going worriedly I heard voices,someone calling far away._____________
8.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The sea's surprise
Jim and Andy walked along the beach,looking for an adventure.They joked that some day they would find a talking fish or a mermaid or a bottle with a treasure map inside.So far they had only found shells and rocks and seaweed.Today though was different.The boys felt excited.
Sea crabs scampered on the rocks.Up one side and down the other.They were quick and lively.The tide didn't seem to ever wash them away.Then Jim saw a fish.It was stranded on the beach,just flopping around.
"Can it talk?" Andy asked.
"It looks like any other fish," Jim said.He picked it up gently and carried it to the water.
"Do you think it will grant us any wishes?" Andy laughed.
The boys watched as the silver fish sped off through the water."No.Maybe next time." Jim grinned.
As the two friends walked farther down the beach they came upon a bottle.It was green with a cork in the mouth.
"Our luck will change.Does it have a map inside or a genie?" joked Andy.
Andy reached down and picked up the bottle.He rubbed it.Nothing happened.He pulled on the cork.Nothing happened.He shook it.Nothing happened.
"Try the cork again.I bet the genie is waiting for us to release him.Or we'll find a treasure map and have a real adventure," Jim exclaimed.
Andy tugged again on the cork.He wiggled it back and forth.He twisted it around and around.Finally it popped out without breaking.Andy shook the bottle.Nothing came out.Looking inside he couldn't see anything.Jim looked too and shook his head.Empty.
"It's just an old wine bottle," Jim complained.He grabbed the bottle and tossed it back onto the sand.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The bottle hit a rock and shattered into many pieces._____________________
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Two boys ran after it._____________________
9.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
We went to Darjelling during the summer holidays and booked a cottage(农舍) for our stay.Our cook Gopi came with us because we could not do without home﹣cooked meals.
Usually all the shopping was done by our home help﹣Bharat,who had accompanied(陪伴) us to our holiday destination.However,one early evening,my mother decided to do all the vegetable shopping by herself.She believed that Bharat did not wait to check the really fresh items and instead,bought randomly in a hurry.As a result,the vegetables he brought back were not fresh.
After getting ready,she took her favourite purse with quite an amount of money,thinking she could go to other shops too after finishing at the vegetable market.My mother asked Bharat to get a rickshaw for her and on reaching the market she asked the rickshaw wallah (人力车车夫) to wait for her.She took a coolie and did her shopping happily,choosing some of the freshest green vegetables available there.At last,her shopping was done.She returned to the rickshaw and sat on it while the coolie put all the things my mother had bought onto the rickshaw.
On reaching home,Bharat took all the packets of vegetables inside and my mother quickly paid the rickshaw wallah and got off,forgetting to collect her purse from the seat of the rickshaw.The rickshaw wallah left soon after saying goodbye to my mother.All of us greeted my mother and asked her about her evening of shopping with much delight.
Then we began to help my mother prepare our dinner.My father came to help chop the meat;I helped wash the vegetables;we were talking and laughing.When dinner was about to be announced,it was late in the evening,almost 9 pm.
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Then my mom realised her purse was missing._____________
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We were just about to begin eating when the doorbell rang.___________
10.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
A couple of years ago,just as I do every winter,I bagged up all the items in my closet that I no longer wore,along with the clothes my sons had outgrown.I issued a call to action to all of my family and friends,asking them to do the same.It is always my hope to repurpose those things that do nothing more than take up space in our homes,things others might make better use of.
I found an old,ugly pair of hand﹣woven socks in one of the bags donated(捐赠)by a friend.Not to be mean,but they were an unpleasant mixture of colored yarn:orange,purple,yellow and blue.I had to decide﹣garbage or donation?It wasn't like they were unusable.I imagine they were a homemade gift gone bad.
I put the ugly socks in the garbage,but ten minutes later,I took them back and put them in the donation pile.Later that afternoon,my mother and I drove down to Madison Avenue in downtown Phoenix.Every winter we load up my jeep with our own cast﹣offs and the donations from friends,and we take them downtown,along with food and water,to distribute(分发)them to the men and women living on the street.Sometimes I even get my boys involved.
On this particular afternoon,as Mom and I distributed warm clothes and hot food to a small crowd of people outside a local homeless shelter,I reached into the bag and pulled out the last of the donations the ugly socks.Just as I was about to drop the socks back into the empty bag,laughing at myself for even bringing them along for the ride,a teenage boy came to me.
"Can I please have those socks?" he asked,his blue eyes sparkling in the sun.
My eyebrows lifted.I'm ashamed to say it but I was still a little embarrassed by the donation and disappointed that we hadn't anything left to give him except for those socks.
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"Of course," I replied,handing the boy the thick,ugly,hand﹣woven socks.______________
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"Thank you so much,Ma'am!" he smiled._________________________________________
11.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My sister Jeanne and I were born only 14 months apart,and we once shared many happy moments.She liked telling jokes to me and I would laugh heartily.She always said she loved my laughter and it was the most impressive sound for her.But by the time we were teenagers we had years without speaking and lost touch due to family breaking.By age 19,I had moved away from our home in Wisconsin to live on my father's horse farm in Virginia.Jeanne got married at 20,moved to Chicago,and became—well,I didn't know what.We lived separate lives in separate states,and our connection somehow ended.
Fast forward about five years.I was 24 and on a trip with my best friend to New York City,a place I had never been to.It was so different from my hometown.I was used to riding my horse to the corner store where everyone knew everyone and everything went on in the quiet little cowboy town of Driver,Virginia.We went to New York to visit my friend's cousin and see the sights.We went to Little Italy,the Statue of Liberty,Chinatown,and several Manhattan clubs.I had never seen so many taxis in one spot in all my life.
During a day of sightseeing,we were crossing a very busy street loaded with people.Everyone was in a hurry.I was laughing at something my friend just said,and then I suddenly heard my name yelled from somewhere behind me:"Cheryl!"The voice was so familiar.I froze in my steps in the middle of the road.Tears welled up spontaneously(不由自主地)in my eyes.I knew without a shadow of a doubt that it was my sister Jeanne.I yelled back before even turning to look."Jeanne?"
It was her."Oh my!"I screamed,and I began pushing people out of my way to get to her.The crowd started to part—even by New York standards,we must have seemed crazy.And there we were,standing in the middle of a Manhattan street,facing each other and smiling.I couldn't believe it.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
I later asked how she'd known it was me._____________
Since that time,my sister and I have never been separated._____________
12."Good for you," said the middle﹣aged woman in the swimsuit as I walked by."I see you out here swimming,practicing hard every day." I smiled politely and thanked her.
It was mid﹣August and she was probably the fifth or sixth person in that summer to make this type of comment(评论)on me.I was one of a handful of people who went to the lake almost every day to swim and I'd never heard anyone praise the other swimmers.If I had to guess,I would say that no one would have commented if I had weighed 120 pounds.But as someone who weighed more than twice that,I was sure I stood out.More than likely these people were well meaning,but whenever someone would say "Good for you" or "Way to go",I would hear "Wow…you're pretty active for a 'fat' girl!"
A few summers before,these types of comments would have upset me a lot more.Actually,a few summers before I would even have considered not swimming at that lake.It was not that I wouldn't have loved to.Ever since I was old enough to walk,the water was my favorite place.When I was young,my parents would take me to the lake,and I always got angry when other kids wanted me to play in the sand or on the playground.We had this huge body of water to play in.Why would we want to be on the shore?At that age,I wasn't embarrassed to be seen in a swimsuit as a fat kid,but there were other fat kids.It didn't seem to matter.
As I grew up.I was more self﹣conscious(难为情的).I would still enjoy a swim,but I was quick to reach for a cover﹣up or a towel to wrap around myself as soon as I came out from the water.Even in regular clothes,I sometimes felt self﹣conscious﹣like everyone was looking at how big I was and silently judging me.It was a little easier when I was around the people that I trusted.My friend Mary,had a pool in her back yard and sometimes she strongly advised me to go for a swim.
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One hot summer day,my heart was becoming cold as I pulled into Dirk's driveway. _____________
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Hearing her words,I found a huge burn mark running through her entire back. _________________
13.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要.
Every summer,hundreds of thousands of students travel to other countries looking for work and adventure.Most of the chances are inseasonal work,mainly connected with tourism and agriculture.The pay is usually poor,but most people work abroad for the thrill(令人兴奋的经历)of travel.You can pick grapes in France,work on a family campsite,entertain kids on American summer camps,and of course,there are always jobs in hotels and restaurants.
But it is not as easy as it used to be to find work. "Unless you speak the language of the country,there will be very few openings," says Anthea Ellis,an adviser on vacation work for students. "If you work as a nanny with a family in Italy,then of course you'll have to speak Italian.When you want to wash dishes in a restaurant in Paris,the owner will expect you to speak French."
Not everyone enjoys the experience.Sarah James was an assistant responsible for a summer camp group of forty American children in Europe.One child lost his passport;another became seriously ill and was sent home;four children were lost in Madrid for a whole day;the whole group was thrown out of one hotel because of the noise they made. "I did visit a lot of new places," she says, "but it wasn't worth it.The pay was awful and it was really a 24﹣hour﹣a﹣day job.The kids never slept!"
In practice,all vacation work is informal work.You'll have a job when the hotel,the restaurant,or the campsite is busy and you have few employment rights.As soon as the holiday season is finished,they'll get rid of you.If you don't work hard,or if your employer doesn't like you,you'll get fired.Therefore,think twice before you make decisions to travel abroad.
14.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.
Jenny was the only child in her family.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and ran out of the house angrily.She couldn't help crying when she thought of the scolding(责骂) from her mother.Getting around aimlessly in the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.She stood beside a stand(货摊) for a while,watching the middle﹣aged man busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand,she had to leave.The man behind the stand noticed Jenny and asked, "Hey,do you want to have the noodles?" "Oh,yes,but I don't have money," she replied.
"I'll treat you today," said the man.He brought her a bowl of noodles,the smell so attractive.As she was eating,Jenny cried silently. "What is it?" asked the man kindly."Actually I was just touched by your kindness!" said Jenny as she wiped her tears. "Even a stranger will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother drove me out of the house." Hearing the words,the man smiled, "I only gave you a bowl of noodles.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have you expressed your thankfulness to her?"
Jenny sat there,speechless;she remembered her mother's familiar face."A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful.Why haven't I thanked my mum for what she has done for me?" On the way home,Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为90左右;
2.续写一段,该段的开头语已为你写好.
Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.____________________________________
15.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Michelle was 5 years old when she heard her mom and dad talking about her little brother Jack,only an infant (婴儿).He was very sick and they were completely out of money.Only a very costly operation could save Jack,but there was no one to whom they could turn for the money needed.She heard her daddy say to her tearful mom, "Only a miracle can save him now."
Hearing the words,Michelle went to her bedroom and took all the coins from her little money box.After counting the coins three times,she slipped out of the room and made her way to the drug store 6 blocks away…
She waited for a long time before the pharmacist(药剂师)turned around and asked her,"What do you want?"
"Well,it's about my brother," Michelle answered,"He's really sick.And I want to buy a miracle."
"I beg your pardon?" said the pharmacist.
"His name is Jack.And he has something very bad growing inside his body.And my daddy says only a miracle can save him now.So how much does a miracle cost?"
"We don't sell miracles here,little girl.I am sorry,but I can't help you." the pharmacist said.
"Listen,I have the money to pay for it." With these words,Michelle poured out all the coins from her pocket.
At this time,a well﹣dressed man behind Michelle stooped down stairs and asked the little girl, "I am selling the miracle you want.Tell me how much money you have."
"One dollar and eleven cents," Michelle answered in a low voice,"That's all the money I have.But I can get some more if I need to."
"Well," smiled the man, "a dollar and eleven cents.The exact price of a miracle for your little brother.Show me the place where your brother lives."
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
Holding the man's hand firmly,Michelle took him home._______
Paragraph 2:
When asked why he chose to help the family,the man detailed.________
期末培优 读后续写
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共15小题)
1.(2024秋 锦州期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
One morning in December,Tom Carr was playing with his friend Dot as usual in the yard.Tom was nine years old,and Dot was seven.Tom took very great care of his friend.
Then a man who Tom knew rode into the yard in panic.It was Mr.May,who lived at the next station,where there is a big farm. "Fire!" he cried to Tom's father,Mr.Carr. "Fire!One of the worst fire I've ever seen in my e along,Carr. "
Mr.Carr called his men out.In an hour or so Mrs.May and her baby drove up.Tom and Dot ran to meet them. "Thank you,dear," she said. "The smoke is so bad at home that I was afraid it would choke(呛)the baby. "
She went to the house,and Tom and Dot were following her,when Tom stopped. "Look there,Dot. " he said. "The brown calf(小牛)has gotten out of the yard!" The men were in such a hurry to fight the fire that they forgot to close the gate,and the brown calf was running away.Tom ran at once to bring the calf back,and Dot ran after him.
About half a mile from the farm yard the open land came to an end,and the bush began.The calf ran into the trees,and the children followed.The trees were not thick at first,and it was very easy to follow the brown calf through the bushes.But the calf ran into a deep valley,where Tom could not follow it. "Oh,what a pity,Dot," he said. "The calf is lost now.It will disappear into the bush.But give me your hand.We must go home!"
Tom now tried to find his way home.He felt sure he could easily get home,for they had only gone a little way into the bush.They walked on and on,and Dot got very tired.Tom took his friend or his back,and carried him for a long way. "Oh,how thick the smoke is!" said Dot.There had been smoke in the air all day,but now it was very thick.The fire had to be getting closer.
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Tom began to feel very scared._______________________
Paragraph 2:
When Mr.Carr came back to the yard,he was told that the two kids got lost.____________________
【答案】Paragraph1:
Tom began to feel very scared.He tried to move faster,but he could not find the way out of the bush.He was getting tired because Dot was too heavy to carry for a young boy.At last he came into an open space with a large pool in the middle. "Look,I've found some water,Dot!" Tom shouted.While Dot was drinking,Tom looked around and found a hole in the rocks nearby.He quickly made his clothes and Dot's wet,for the approaching smoke could choke them,and then the two children hid in the shelter,waiting for the fire to pass.
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When Mr.Carr came back to the yard,he was told that the two kids got lost.He immediately ran out to search for them.Mr.May ran after him.They soon found the footprints of the children and followed them into the bush.They both felt afraid because a big fire had just passed through the bush. "Poor children,the flame could have burnt them to death!" thought Mr.Carr desperately.While they walked on without hope,there came a sweet voice. "Mr.Carr!" It was from Dot,who was being carried by Tom. "Thank God,you are safe!" Mr.Carr jump with joy and hugged the brave kids.
【分析】本文从一场火灾开始写起,讲述了两个小孩Tom Carr和Dot为追回在火灾中跑走的小牛,跑进了灌木丛,迷路遇险,最终得救的故事。
高分句型一:He was getting tired because Dot was too heavy to carry for a young boy.
译文:他累了,因为多特太重了,小男孩背不动。
分析:这句话使用because引导原因状语从句。
高分句型二:While they walked on without hope,there came a sweet voice.
译文:当他们毫无希望地往前走的时候,传来了一个甜美的声音。
分析:这句话使用while引导时间状语从句,主句是倒装句。
【解答】Paragraph1:
Tom began to feel very scared.He tried to move faster,but he could not find the way out of the bush.He was getting tired because Dot was too heavy to carry for a young boy. 【高分句型一】At last he came into an open space with a large pool in the middle. "Look,I've found some water,Dot!" Tom shouted.While Dot was drinking,Tom looked around and found a hole in the rocks nearby.He quickly made his clothes and Dot's wet,for the approaching smoke could choke them,and then the two children hid in the shelter,waiting for the fire to pass.(Tom知道迷路了,和Dot一起在灌木丛中采取的一系列自救措施。)
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When Mr.Carr came back to the yard,he was told that the two kids got lost.He immediately ran out to search for them.Mr.May ran after him.They soon found the footprints of the children and followed them into the bush.They both felt afraid because a big fire had just passed through the bush. "Poor children,the flame could have burnt them to death!" thought Mr.Carr desperately.While they walked on without hope,there came a sweet voice. 【高分句型二】"Mr.Carr!" It was from Dot,who was being carried by Tom. "Thank God,you are safe!" Mr.Carr jump with joy and hugged the brave kids.(Tom的父亲Mr.Carr组织人员寻找Tom Carr和Dot的过程及结果。)
【点评】解题方法点拨(1)品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速回读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
2.(2024秋 葫芦岛期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,续写的词数应为150左右。
Robert and Henry were two friends in the same class.They always played together and went home together.One day,Robert and Henry were going home from school,when,on turning a corner,Robert cried out, "A fight!Let's go and see!"
"No." said Henry. "Let us go quietly home and not meddle with(插手)this quarrel.We have nothing to do with it and may get into trouble.Also our parents are expecting to have dinner with us together at home and I don't want them to worry about me."
"You are a coward(懦夫),and afraid to go," said Robert,and off he ran.Henry went straight home,and in the afternoon went to school as usual.
But Robert had told all the boys that Henry was a coward,and they laughed at him a great deal.From then on,they looked down upon Henry and didn't want to play with him together.
Henry was sad but he wasn't angry with Robert for his rude behavior,because he knew that they misunderstood him,and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong.Thus,he just ignored(忽略)the other boys' laughter and continued to go to school and study as well.However,Robert didn't invite Henry to go home with him anymore.Instead,he had some other boys who also thought Henry was a coward.Every day after school,they didn't go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play games and had a lot of fun.
A few days later,Robert was bathing with his new friends in a river,and got out of his depth.He struggled and cried for help,but he failed.The boys who had called Henry a coward got out of the water as fast as they could,but they did nothing to help him.
Paragraph 1
It seemed as if Robert would be dying.
Paragraph 2
Thus,Robert's life was saved.
【答案】Para.1
It seemed as if Robert would be dying.Just at the moment,Henry happened to be passing by.Hearing the screams,Henry ran to the riverside,threw off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation.He reached Robert just as he was sinking the last time.By great effort,and with much danger to himself,he brought Robert to the shore.
Para.2
Thus,Robert's life was saved.Robert and his new friends were ashamed at having called Henry a coward.They realized that Henry had true courage.They said sorry to Henry for their rude behavior and asked for his forgiveness.Henry forgave them happily.He and Robert were friends again and they went home together as usual.From this,Robert learned what true courage was never be afraid to do good,but always fear to do evil.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文,讲述了一个何为勇气的故事。
高分句型一:Hearing the screams,Henry ran to the riverside,threw off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation.
翻译:听到尖叫声,Henry跑到河边,脱掉衣服,毫不犹豫地跳入水中。
分析:本句使用了现在分词Hearing the screams做伴随状语。
高分句型二:From this,Robert learned what true courage was:never be afraid to do good,but always fear to do evil.
翻译:从这一点上,Robert明白了真正的勇气是什么:永远不要害怕行善,但要始终害怕作恶。
分析:本句使用了what引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Para.1
It seemed as if Robert would be dying.Just at the moment,Henry happened to be passing by.Hearing the screams,Henry ran to the riverside,threw off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation.【高分句型一】He reached Robert just as he was sinking the last time.By great effort,and with much danger to himself,he brought Robert to the shore.(Henry去救Robert)
Para.2
Thus,Robert's life was saved.Robert and his new friends were ashamed at having called Henry a coward.They realized that Henry had true courage.They said sorry to Henry for their rude behavior and asked for his forgiveness.Henry forgave them happily.He and Robert were friends again and they went home together as usual.From this,Robert learned what true courage was:never be afraid to do good,but always fear to do evil.【高分句型二】(误会解开,Robert明白了什么叫勇敢)
【点评】解题方法点拨
(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后,最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
(5)关键用词,标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语这一点可以帮助考生自己检查关键词的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后在誊写文字时,务必做到"字迹工整、清晰"。
3.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
We went to Darjelling during the summer holidays and booked a cottage (农舍) for our stay.Our cook Gopi came with us because we could not do without home﹣cooked meals.
Usually all the shopping was done by our home help ﹣ Bharat,who had accompanied (陪伴) us to our holiday destination.However,one early evening, my mother decided to do all the vegetable shopping by herself.She believed that Bharat did not wait to check the really fresh items and instead,bought randomly in a hurry.As a result,the vegetables he brought back were not fresh.
After getting ready,she took her favorite purse with quite an amount of money,thinking she could go to other shops too after finishing at the vegetable market.My mother asked Bharat to get a rickshaw for her and on reaching the market,she asked the rickshaw wallah (人力车车夫) to wait for her.She took a coolie and did her shopping happily,choosing some of the freshest green vegetables available there.At last,her shopping was done.She returned to the rickshaw and sat on it while the coolie put all the things my mother had bought onto the rickshaw.
On reaching home,Bharat took all the packets of vegetables inside and my mother quickly paid the rickshaw wallah and got off,forgetting to collect her purse from the seat of the rickshaw.The rickshaw wallah left soon after saying goodbye to my mother.All of us greeted my mother and asked her about her evening of shopping with much delight.
Then we began to help my mother prepare our dinner.My father came to help chop the meat;I helped wash the vegetables;we were talking and laughing.When dinner was about to be announced,it was late in the evening,almost 9 p.m.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Then my mom realized her purse was missing.______
Paragraph 2:
We were just about to begin eating when the door bell rang.______
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型:
1.She had forgotten to pick up her purse which contained a lot of money
她忘了拿里面含有很多钱的钱包.
该句中which引导一个定语从句,修身先行词purse.pick up拾起,捡起.
2.When my mother opened her purse,she found all the cash in it.
当妈妈打开钱包后发现所有的钱都在里面.
本句为一个主从复合句,其中when引导一个时间状语从句.
【解答】Paragraph 1:
Then my mom realized her purse was missing.She looked everywhere for it and suddenly remembered that after paying the_rickshaw_wallah,_she kept the purse on the_seat before getting off.She had forgotten to pick up her purse which contained a lot of money. (高分句型一)When my father came to know about this,he said that it was too late to look for the rickshaw wallah.We all decided that it was better to forget it.Mom felt sad and worried while sitting for dinner.(妈妈意识到钱包丢了可能找不回来了很难过)
Paragraph 2:
We were just about to begin eating when the door bell rang. Bharat opened the door and called my_mother to see who it was.To our surprise,it was the poor rickshaw wallah standing at our entrance with a big smile on his weather beaten face.He had the purse in his hand.He explained that he had returned to the market before he realized what had happened.When my mother opened her purse,she found all the cash in it.(高分句型二) We wanted to reward the lovely man but he smiled and said,"Madam,I'm poor but not a thief" and went away quickly.(钱包失而复得欲用金钱酬谢被婉拒)
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧
4.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
An 80﹣year﹣old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45﹣year﹣old highly educated son.Suddenly a crow(乌鸦)perched(栖息)on their window.
The father asked his son,"What is this?" The son replied,"It is a crow."
After a few minutes,the father asked his son for the second time,"What is this?" The son said,"Father,I have just now told you,it's a crow!"
After a little while,the old father again asked his son for the third time,"What is this?"
At this time some expression of irritation(恼怒)was felt in the son's tone when he said to his father with a rebuff(生硬回绝)."It's a crow,a crow." A little while later,the father again asked his son the fourth time,"What is this?"
This time,the son shouted at his father,"Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again,although I have told you so many times 'IT IS A CROW'.Are you not able to understand this?"
A little while later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered(发皱的)diary,which he had maintained since his son was born.On opening a page,he asked his son to read that page.When the son read it,the following words were written in the diary:
"Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa,when a crow was sitting on the window.My son asked me 23 times what it was,and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow.I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question.I did not at all feel irritated but I rather felt affection for my innocent son."
Paragraph 1:
After reading the diary, ___________
Paragraph 2:
Feeling ashamed,the son got down on his knees before his father. __________
【答案】Paragraph 1:
After reading the diary,the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father.His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritation while his father asked him the same question just four times! The son thought to himself:If I attain old age,how will my son look at me? Will he think of me as a burden? Will he shout at me because of my poor sight,poor hearing or poor understanding?
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Feeling ashamed,the son got down on his knees before his father.He made an apology to his father,begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior.He said this aloud,"I promise to see you happy forever,Dad.It is you who have cared for me since I was a little child,showering your selfless affection on me.You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university.I will serve you in the best day."
【分析】高分句型一:His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritation while his father asked him the same question just four times!
译文:他的父亲会耐心地回答同一个问题23次而不感到恼火,而他的父亲只问了他同样的问题四次!
分析:这句话使用while连接并列部分,表示对比。
高分句型二:It is you who have cared for me since I was a little child,showering your selfless affection on me.
译文:是你从小就关心我,把你无私的爱洒在我身上。
分析:这句话使用强调句,since引导时间状语从句,showering…是现在分词短语作状语。
【解答】Paragraph 1:
After reading the diary,the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father.His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritation while his father asked him the same question just four times! 【高分句型一】The son thought to himself:If I attain old age,how will my son look at me? Will he think of me as a burden? Will he shout at me because of my poor sight,poor hearing or poor understanding?(儿子想起以前父亲耐心地教自己,感到羞愧)
Paragraph 2:
Feeling ashamed,the son got down on his knees before his father.He made an apology to his father,begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior.He said this aloud,"I promise to see you happy forever,Dad.It is you who have cared for me since I was a little child,showering your selfless affection on me.【高分句型二】You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university.I will serve you in the best day."(儿子向父亲道歉,希望父亲原谅他)
【点评】解题方法点拨(1)品读原文.确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索.如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)".
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语.续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数".
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速回读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路.同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容.
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后.最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿.拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯.
5.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One never knows what one is going to find when one steps out into the world.Even something as simple as a walk through your neighborhood can result in either mild excitement or unusual adventure if the cards are right.
On a sunny afternoon,Mike journeyed into the construction site near his home.Suddenly,he heard something coming from around the side of a nearby building.It sounded like the whining(悲嚎声)cries of an animal.He curiously turned the corner,only to see a small dog standing on its back legs and wagging its tail pitifully.He then noticed that the poor thing seemed to be stuck at the waist between a small concrete wall and an even smaller broken wooden fence.
The poor animal's difficult situation was pretty obvious and Mike knew that if he did nothing and left the dog there,it might not survive.He had no idea how long the animal had been there up until that point.It might not have eaten or drunk anything in days.Determined to help,he looked around to find a stick,proceeded to climb up onto the cement slab and pointed his stick back at the dog.He was trying to pry(撬动)above the animal by insert the stick between the cement wall and the smaller,broken wall,but the terrified animal obviously didn't know his intention and attempted to bite at the tool and barked at him fearfully.The fright in its eyes said everything.
After at least a minute or so of trying to free the dog,Mike found his plan much more difficult in practice than it had stayed inside his own head.The hot sun was beating down.Drops of sweat running down his face,Mike sat down on the ground and scratched his head with annoyance,thinking about what in the world his next move was going to be.Beside him,the dog curled up into a ball,whining miserably.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Then Mike went around to the other side of the wall and grabbed hold of the stick._____
Eventually,with the few well﹣positioned pieces of wood,Mike managed to insert his stick in the right way._____
【答案】Then Mike went around to the other side of the wall and grabbed hold of the stick.He tried from a different angle.For a brief moment,he made eye contact with the dog in an attempt to assure the dog that he was there to save him.Seeming to sense his kindness,the dog became calmer and less scared.However,after several unsuccessful attempts,he sank himself to the ground,frustrated.Just at the moment,he glanced at some pieces of wood.An idea occurred to him.He tried wedging the pieces into the gap,pried and pushed.At the same time,he stayed cautious not to frighten the poor dog.
Eventually,with the few well﹣positioned pieces of wood,Mike managed to insert his stick in the right way.A little unsteadily,the animal got to its feet and pulled itself out fully. "Yes!" The rescuer exclaimed in excitement,unable to deal with blood dropping off his hand—he was injured while saving the dog.Behind him,the dog wagged its tail furiously and sniffed at his feet,happy to be free.Mike knelt down and stroked the dog,saying "Go home,boy!" Seeing the dog disappear in the distance,Mike continued his way,bathed in the warm sunshine.
【分析】本文讲述了在平静的一天里迈克拯救在工地附近的一条小狗的故事。
高分句型一:For a brief moment,he made eye contact with the dog in an attempt to assure the dog that he was there to save him.
翻译:有一小会儿,他与那条狗目光接触,试图向它保证他是来救他的。
分析:本句使用了that引导的定语从句。
高分句型二:Seeing the dog disappear in the distance,Mike continued his way,bathed in the warm sunshine.
翻译:看到狗消失在远处,迈克继续前行,沐浴在温暖的阳光下。
分析:本句使用了现在分词Seeing the dog disappear in the distance作伴随状语。
【解答】Then Mike went around to the other side of the wall and grabbed hold of the stick.He tried from a different angle.For a brief moment,he made eye contact with the dog in an attempt to assure the dog that he was there to save him.【高分句型一】Seeming to sense his kindness,the dog became calmer and less scared.However,after several unsuccessful attempts,he sank himself to the ground,frustrated.Just at the moment,he glanced at some pieces of wood.An idea occurred to him.He tried wedging the pieces into the gap,pried and pushed.At the same time,he stayed cautious not to frighten the poor dog.(迈克试图让狗平静下来,不想吓到狗)
Eventually,with the few well﹣positioned pieces of wood,Mike managed to insert his stick in the right way.A little unsteadily,the animal got to its feet and pulled itself out fully. "Yes!" The rescuer exclaimed in excitement,unable to deal with blood dropping off his hand—he was injured while saving the dog.Behind him,the dog wagged its tail furiously and sniffed at his feet,happy to be free.Mike knelt down and stroked the dog,saying "Go home,boy!" Seeing the dog disappear in the distance,Mike continued his way,bathed in the warm sunshine.【高分句型二】(迈克成功的救下了小狗)
【点评】解题方法点拨
(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
6.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The cost of a smile
Kathy was a young woman in her 20's who worked in a small restaurant as a waitress.One day,as she went about her shift(轮班)with her usual angry look,a kind old man walked in and sat down at the counter.He read the menu and politely told her what he wanted.
Kathy took his order and yelled,"Your food will be ready soon." As she turned to leave,the man said,"A smile costs nothing".Kathy rolled her eyes at him and walked away.
She brought his order,cleared his plates,and gave him the bill,for which he left a nice tip.
Each time the old man saw her,he smiled and thanked her.This only made her angrier.
A week went by,and every day the man came for lunch and the same thing happened.And each time Kathy took his order he would say,"A smile costs nothing."
But a week later,Kathy picked up a menu,wrote the words "1 SMILE...﹩20" at the bottom,and placed it on the counter for the kind old man to see.He came,and Kathy waited for his reaction as he read the menu.The old man ordered his usual and added,"……and a smile,if you don't mind".Kathy was so surprised.She laughed out loud,"Now,now ..." The man jokingly scolded.
"I ordered a smile,not a laugh".So Kathy put on a bright smile and said, "Coming right up,sir." And to her surprise,he left ﹩20 tip!
A few years went by,and the two bonded like family.Charlie,the kind old man,was a retired manager whose wife passed away long ago.He spent most of his time at home,with the exception of his frequent restaurant visits.Every day Kathy spent her break talking to him.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day he didn't come to the restaurant.______________
Several days after the funeral(葬礼),Kathy received a very important﹣looking letter in the mail._______
【答案】Paragraph1:
One day he didn't come to the restaurant.She called his home,only to hear an answering machine.With nervousness wrapped into anxiety,Kathy went to his house and found out from his neighbor that he had died the previous night.On hearing the bad news,she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn't help crying bitterly.Because Charlie had no family or close friends,Kathy put herself in charge of his funeral arrangements.She and the neighbor were the only people to attend.
Paragraph2:
Several days after the funeral,Kathy received a very important﹣looking letter in the mail.It was sent to her from Charlie's lawyer.Enclosed was a check for almost $600,000!Kathy nearly fainted,but then she noticed a handwritten note which read: "Dear Kathy,by the time you read this,I will be gone.Here I have left a small token of my gratitudefor my best friend.I can never repay you for what you've given me.You see,Kathy,a smile is worth much more than $20".Indeed,a smile is priceless.
【分析】本文讲述了善良的凯西和老人查理之间的故事。
高分句型一:On hearing the bad news,she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn't help crying bitterly.
翻译:一听到这个坏消息,她感到一阵悲伤,忍不住痛苦了起来。
分析:本句为on引导的时间状语,意为"一...就..."。
高分句型二:I can never repay you for what you've given me.
翻译:我永远无法报答你给我的一切。
分析:what引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Paragraph1:
One day he didn't come to the restaurant.She called his home,only to hear an answering machine.With nervousness wrapped into anxiety,Kathy went to his house and found out from his neighbor that he had died the previous night.On hearing the bad news,she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn't help crying bitterly.【高分句型一】Because Charlie had no family or close friends,Kathy put herself in charge of his funeral arrangements.She and the neighbor were the only people to attend.(查理去世了,凯西为他做葬礼安排)
Paragraph2:
Several days after the funeral,Kathy received a very important﹣looking letter in the mail.It was sent to her from Charlie's lawyer.Enclosed was a check for almost $600,000!Kathy nearly fainted,but then she noticed a handwritten note which read: "Dear Kathy,by the time you read this,I will be gone.Here I have left a small token of my gratitudefor my best friend.I can never repay you for what you've given me.【高分句型二】You see,Kathy,a smile is worth much more than $20".Indeed,a smile is priceless.(查理留给凯西一张近60万美元的钞票,告诉她微笑是无价的)
【点评】解题方法点拨
(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
对于这种题型,要分析句子意思,再从结构和意义上对答案进行确定。
7.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A boulder(巨石),as big as a house.That's how the guidebook described Giant Rock.Dad said it arrived here millions of years ago.I was finally going to see it,in snowshoes,with my two older cousins,my dad,and my uncle Don.I'd been snowshoeing before,and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow.
At the parking area,after putting on our snowshoes,we studied the map.Due to the geographical location,electrical devices are inaccessible here.The map is our only guide. "We start here," Dad said," on the red trail(小路).Then we turn left onto the purple road.That's where Giant Rock is." "Remember to stick together and don't wander off,guys," Uncle Don said.
The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall.It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers.At the top of the hill,we turned onto the purple trail.We settled into a pattern,with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back,crunching(嘎吱嘎吱地踩)through the snow.I saw lots of animal tracks — mostly deer,squirrel,and rabbit prints.As the trail wound down,my cousin Andrew said what I'd been thinking :"Will we ever reach Giant Rock?" My cousin Aiden smiled and turned to me, "Luke,do you think your dad invented this idea just to get us away from the TV for a while?" I laughed. "You never know."
Finally,we climbed a hill and saw the massive boulder sitting alone in the forest.It really is as big as a house!My cousins and I high five each other and jogged until we stood at the base,breathless.Standing in the boulders broad shadow,I noticed the sun had sunk lower.
"Let's head back,"Dad said after a few minutes. "There will be several crossroads on the way back.Guys,keep up with the team." Soon we were crunch﹣crunch﹣crunching our way home.I was a little behind the group when we approached a crossroads.And I noticed a set of animal tracks I didn't recognize,so I followed them for a closer look.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten._____________
As going worriedly I heard voices,someone calling far away._____________
【答案】paragraph1:
I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten. "Where is everyone?" I shouted.Nothing. "They couldn't have gone far.I'll catch up if I hurry." I comforted myself.After a short walk,I came to the crossroads where I could turn left or go straight,but both trails had red markers.I turned to the left which looked familiar.Unfortunately,it got quieter and quieter.Soon it might be too dark to tell what color these markers were.What if I couldn't find my way back?
Paragraph 2:
As going worriedly I heard voices,someone calling far away.Following the voices noticed the stone wall,the trail running alongside it.It must be right way back!I rushed downhill with big steps.Then,I saw the parking area,and my family!I shouted as ran toward them.Luke?Are you OK?The voice of Dad was urgent.I'd only been lost for minutes,but it seemed like forever.Now all I wanted was a bear hug from Dad and to make tracks for home.
【分析】本文讲述了作者和家人一起去参观巨石,没有导航只有地图的情况下,作者一行通过一条小路爬上山,最终这一行人找到了巨石,观赏之后开始归程,而返程路上作者因为观察小动物的足迹而跟丢了队伍。
高分句型一:After a short walk,I came to the crossroads where I could turn left or go straight,but both trails had red markers.
分析:本句使用了where引导的定语从句。
翻译:在走了一小段路后,我到了一个可以向左拐也可以直行的十字路口,但是两条路都有红色的标记。
高分句型二:Soon it might be too dark to tell what color these markers were.
分析:本句使用了what引导的宾语从句。
翻译:不久之后,它可能变得太暗了以至于不能区分这三种颜色是什么。
【解答】paragraph1:
I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten. "Where is everyone?" I shouted.Nothing. "They couldn't have gone far.I'll catch up if I hurry." I comforted myself.After a short walk,I came to the crossroads where I could turn left or go straight,but both trails had red markers.【高分句型一】I turned to the left which looked familiar.Unfortunately,it got quieter and quieter.Soon it might be too dark to tell what color these markers were. 【高分句型二】What if I couldn't find my way back?(作者跟丢之后的场景)
Paragraph 2:
As going worriedly I heard voices,someone calling far away.Following the voices noticed the stone wall,the trail running alongside it.It must be right way back!I rushed downhill with big steps.Then,I saw the parking area,and my family!I shouted as ran toward them.Luke?Are you OK?The voice of Dad was urgent.I'd only been lost for minutes,but it seemed like forever.Now all I wanted was a bear hug from Dad and to make tracks for home.(作者最后终于找到了父亲)
【点评】解题方法点拨
(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下
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