期末培优 应用文写作专项练习（含答案与解析）2025-2026学年高一上学期英语外研版(2019)
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末培优 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 沙坡头区校级期末）某英文报纸正就"如何保持友谊"这一话题进行征稿。请你以"How to keep friendship"为题，写一篇英语短文来投稿。内容要点如下：
（1）与朋友保持联系；
（2）互相尊重，诚实以待；
（3）及时帮助朋友。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2．（2018秋 蒸湘区校级期中）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Lily给你写了一封邮件，邮件中说她和好朋友Lucy闹矛盾了，因为Lucy弄丢了她最喜欢的那本书．她不知道应该怎么办，想向你寻求帮助．现请你给Lily回一封邮件，提出建议，帮她解决这个问题．
注意：1．词数80左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Lily，
_____________________________．
Yours，
Li Hua
3．（2024秋 泸州模拟）假设你是李华，今年7月即将参加高考．最近，你的笔友Tom写信询问你的学习是否因为新冠病毒（COVID﹣19）疫情受到影响．请你用英语写一封回信，内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．简述疫情下的备考情况；
3．表达决心和希望．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
4．（2024秋 湖北期末）为庆祝新中国成立七十周年，你们学校即将举办一次大型文艺汇演（Grand Art and Cultural Show）．假如你是李华，请给你们学校留学生Eric写一封邮件，邀请他参加观看．
内容包括：
1．汇演时间和地点；
2．汇演内容和意义．
注意：
1．词数：100左右．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
5．（2024秋 虎林市校级期中）假如你随一个中学生代表团去英国访问，期间你们参观了英国伦敦郊区的一个名叫Camden Town的小镇，请你把参观过程写成一篇日记。内容包括：
1.到达小镇的时间；
2.你对小镇的印象；
3.小镇的建筑物；
4.你们第二天的计划。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
April 14th，Sunday Fine
__________.
6．（2024秋 让胡路区校级期中）假如你是李华，今天（星期日，10月25日，晴）在公园散步时遇到一个外国人来旅游，你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇日记。
要点如下：
1.想跟他谈话却不知所措；
2.你向他介绍你的城市；
3.他给你一些学习英语的建议。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使内容连贯；
3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
October 25，Sunday Sunny
________________
7．（2024秋 辽宁期中）请根据内容提示，用英语以"Life in Senior"为题写一篇短文，叙述你的高中生活．
内容提示：
★总体印象：激动、快乐、辛苦．
★实际生活：时间紧，常熬夜；作业多，考试多；设法放松，看书打球；克服困难，不断进步
★展望未来：充满信心．
要求：1．字数100左右．可适当添加细节，使行文连贯，但不能逐字翻译．2．书写工整规范．
8．假设你是李华，你校的英国交换生Tom对中国茶文化一直很感兴趣．你收到学校学生会通知，本周五下午4：00将邀请知名教授在学校报告厅给师生做一场有关中国茶文化的专题报告．请你写一封邮件给Stefan，内容包括：
1．报告会基本信息（时间，地点，主持人，话题等）．
2．报告会具体内容：
a． 中国茶文化的历史及发展；
b．品茶会，品不同种类的茶．
3．询问Stefan是否愿意参加．
要求：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：中国茶文化Chinese tea culture；
学生会Students' Union
9．你叫张扬，是新华中学的高一学生．过了一个漫长的暑假，今天是你高中生活的第一天，你无比激动．请用日记的形式记叙所发生的事以及自己的所思所想．
注意：1．词数：100词左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
10．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter非常喜欢中国饮食，来信希望你能给他做相关介绍．请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1．中国饮食的特点；
2．中国饮食的影响；
3．欢迎来中国体验饮食文化．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
11．假定你是高一学生李华，你校下个月将举办全市英语口语大赛，请用英语给你的朋友李雷写一封信，邀请他参加这次比赛。内容包括：
1.比赛的时间、地点；
2.比赛的内容；
3.发出邀请。
注意：
1.词数80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
12．假如你是李华，去年你和父母第一次到美国旅游，因为"restroom"和"WC"的误解，发生了趣事。请你根据以下内容写一篇80词左右的小故事。
1.餐馆吃饭，寻找WC；
2.服务生提醒没有WC，有restroom；
3.你的感悟。
13．（2024秋 安岳县校级期中）假定你是李华，你的好友Ann邀请你明天晚上去她家做客．但是，你无法赴约．请根据以下要点，给Ann写一封道歉信：
1．对Ann的邀请表示感谢；
2．解释无法赴约的原因：为后天的一场重要考试做准备；
3．表达你的歉意、祝福以及对另一次会面的期待．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯．
14．你校将要举办一次主题为"How to Communicate with Our Parents"的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：
1.与父母进行沟通的原因；
2.与父母沟通的方式；
3.与父母发生争执时的做法。
注意：词数80个左右。
15．假定你是李华，你把Frank借给你的书弄丢了。这本书你一直在看，本打算下周交还的。昨天晚上回房间找不到了。你将尽力去找，找不到的话，买本新的交还。请你对此表示歉意，毕竟新书代替不了旧书，因为它就像是老朋友，有好多珍贵的回忆。这对自己的粗心也是一次教训。词数100左右。
Dear Frank，_______________
Yours truly，
Li Hua
期末培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 沙坡头区校级期末）某英文报纸正就"如何保持友谊"这一话题进行征稿。请你以"How to keep friendship"为题，写一篇英语短文来投稿。内容要点如下：
（1）与朋友保持联系；
（2）互相尊重，诚实以待；
（3）及时帮助朋友。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】How to keep friendship
As we all know， friendship plays an important role in our life. If we have a close friend， we can share happiness and worries， which can make us enjoy a much happier life.
Since friendship makes a great difference to us， we need to take it seriously and try to keep friendship. My tips are as follows： Firstly， we should keep in touch with our friends by sending e﹣mails， writing letters or spending some time together regularly. Secondly， we should respect our friends and be honest with them. In addition， good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. Just as the old saying goes， "A friend in need is a friend indeed."
In a word， if we want to keep friendship， we'd better treat our friends as we want to be treated.
【分析】高分句型一
If we have a close friend， we can share happiness and worries， which can make us enjoy a much happier life.
分析：句子里，If 引导条件状语从句we have a close friend；代指主句 we can share happiness and worries， 关系词which引导非限制性定语从句 can make us enjoy a much happier life.
翻译：如果我们有一个亲密的朋友，我们可以分享快乐和烦恼，这可以使我们享受更幸福的生活。
高分句型二
Since friendship makes a great difference to us， we need to take it seriously and try to keep friendship.
分析：句子里，Since引导原因状语从句 friendship makes a great difference to us.
翻译：因为友谊对我们有很大的影响，我们就要认真对待，努力保持友谊。
【解答】How to keep friendship
As we all know， friendship plays an important role in our life. If we have a close friend， we can share happiness and worries， which can make us enjoy a much happier life.【高分句型一】（朋友的重要性）
Since friendship makes a great difference to us， we need to take it seriously and try to keep friendship. 【高分句型二】My tips are as follows： Firstly， we should keep in touch with our friends by sending e﹣mails， writing letters or spending some time together regularly. Secondly， we should respect our friends and be honest with them. In addition， good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. Just as the old saying goes， "A friend in need is a friend indeed."（关于如何保持友谊的建议）
In a word， if we want to keep friendship， we'd better treat our friends as we want to be treated.（总结自己的观点）
【点评】本文的话题是"如何保持友谊"；可以从与朋友保持友谊的方法：电话，短信，经常聚会等多种方式。与朋友相处时，热情大方，真诚。能为朋友做自己能做的事情。可以从这几个方面着手展开。在你的能力范围之内，要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，选择句式时也要有变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。
2．（2018秋 蒸湘区校级期中）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Lily给你写了一封邮件，邮件中说她和好朋友Lucy闹矛盾了，因为Lucy弄丢了她最喜欢的那本书．她不知道应该怎么办，想向你寻求帮助．现请你给Lily回一封邮件，提出建议，帮她解决这个问题．
注意：1．词数80左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Lily，
_____________________________．
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】I am sorry to hear that there are some problems between you and your friend．（高分句型一）句中that引导宾语从句
听说你和你朋友之间有些问题，我很难过．
As for the book，I advise you to have a look at the bookstore． （高分句型二）句中as for意为"固定搭配"，意为"至于"
至于这本书，我建议你去书店看看．
【解答】Dear Lily，
I am sorry to hear that there are some problems between you and your friend．（高分句型一） I would like to share my thoughts with you．（写信目的）
Lucy didn't lose your book on purpose，did she？If she didn't，she might be as sad as you are now．You are friends．Do you want to lose such a good friend just because of a lost book？As for the book，I advise you to have a look at the bookstore． （高分句型二）Maybe they have the same one as yours．So you can buy a new one． （提出建议，帮她解决这个问题）
We can buy a new book but can we buy a friend？Friends are important in our life．I sincerely hope you and Lucy can make up soon．（期望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
3．（2024秋 泸州模拟）假设你是李华，今年7月即将参加高考．最近，你的笔友Tom写信询问你的学习是否因为新冠病毒（COVID﹣19）疫情受到影响．请你用英语写一封回信，内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．简述疫情下的备考情况；
3．表达决心和希望．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：Now， I have come back to school and everything has returned to normal．
译文：现在，我回到学校，一切都恢复了正常．
分析：使用and连接并列句．
高分句型二： I am filled with confidence and courage， preparing for the coming national examination．
译文：我满怀信心和勇气，为即将到来的国考做准备．
分析：使用现在分词作伴随状语．
【解答】Dear Tom，
I am grateful for your great concern about me． In my opinion， I am getting on well with my study all the time．（表示感谢） During the first two months of fighting against COVID﹣19， I kept learning online at home． From the online classes I learned a lot following teachers． Now， I have come back to school and everything has returned to normal．【高分句型一】 Teachers are giving lessons carefully and classmates are learning attentively． I am filled with confidence and courage， preparing for the coming national examination．【高分句型二】（简述疫情下的备考情况）
With my hard work and teachers' help， I believe I will make n great success in the national examination and be admitted to my dream school﹣Sichuan University!（表达决心和希望）
Best wishes for you!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文是近几年英语书面表达的热点题型．命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式（如书信、报道、通知、日记等）有机结合在一起进行考查，使该类书面表达试题综合性越来越强．
1．提纲作文的特点
提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出，请考生据此进行写作．这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定．因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏．
2．思维空间灵活、开放
为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥．因此，该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力．
3．提纲作文的写作步骤一般分为：审题，明确文体形式；构思，根据提纲全面构思文章内容，根据内容构思词语和句型结构；写作完稿，根据构思的词语和句型结构，按照合理的顺序和语言要求，连句成文．注意句子间的正确联系，注意词语的丰富和句型的多样．
4．（2024秋 湖北期末）为庆祝新中国成立七十周年，你们学校即将举办一次大型文艺汇演（Grand Art and Cultural Show）．假如你是李华，请给你们学校留学生Eric写一封邮件，邀请他参加观看．
内容包括：
1．汇演时间和地点；
2．汇演内容和意义．
注意：
1．词数：100左右．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：I'm writing to invite you to the Grand art and cultural show to be held in our school hall on the evening of Sept.5．
译文：我写信邀请你参加9月5日晚上在我们学校大厅举行的艺术文化大展．
分析：不定式的被动作定语修饰the Grand art and cultural show．
高分句型二：Not only does it enable us to get a better understanding of our motherland，but also it inspires us to work harder and make great contributions to our country．
译文：它不仅使我们对祖国有了更好的了解，而且激励我们更加努力地工作，为国家做出了巨大的贡献．
分析：not only放在句首，后面用倒装句，but also后面句子不倒装．
【解答】Dear Eric，
How is everything going？I'm writing to invite you to the Grand art and cultural show to be held in our school hall on the evening of Sept.5．【高分句型一】（写信目的）
With the aim of celebrating the 70th anniversary of the founding of our motherland and singing praise of great achievements we have achieved over the past seven decades，the show will put on a variety of amazing performances such as singing，dancing and reciting classics．I believe these colorful performances will leave a favorable impression on all international students like you．（汇演时间和地点）
From where I stand，the show is extremely meaningful．Not only does it enable us to get a better understanding of our motherland，but also it inspires us to work harder and make great contributions to our country．
【高分句型二】If you are interested，please let me know．Looking forward to your arrival．（汇演内容和意义）
Yours
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
5．（2024秋 虎林市校级期中）假如你随一个中学生代表团去英国访问，期间你们参观了英国伦敦郊区的一个名叫Camden Town的小镇，请你把参观过程写成一篇日记。内容包括：
1.到达小镇的时间；
2.你对小镇的印象；
3.小镇的建筑物；
4.你们第二天的计划。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
April 14th，Sunday Fine
__________.
【答案】April 14th，Sunday Fine
We had a wonderful time today.Camden Town left a deep impression on me.
This morning after we had breakfast，we started to go to Camden Town by bus.It was eight o'clock when we arrived.The town，clean and tidy，was quite different from what I had seen in other places before.The people there were friendly and kind.After a short break，we paid a visit to the town whose architecture is astonishing.There are both high buildings and old﹣style houses.Strangely enough ，they match each other so well that you even feel they make a beautiful picture.
Tomorrow we are to visit a local middle school，where we'll have a party with its students.I think it will be another pleasant day for all of us.
【分析】高分句型一
The town，clean and tidy，was quite different from what I had seen in other places before.
分析：句子里，what引导宾语从句I had seen in other places before.
翻译：这个城镇干净整洁，与我以前在其他地方看到的完全不同。
高分句型二
After a short break，we paid a visit to the town whose architecture is astonishing.
分析：句子里，修饰先行词the town，关系词whose引导定语从句architecture is astonishing.
翻译：短暂休息后，我们参观了这个建筑令人惊叹的城镇。
【解答】April 14th，Sunday Fine
We had a wonderful time today.Camden Town left a deep impression on me.（点明主题）
This morning after we had breakfast，we started to go to Camden Town by bus.It was eight o'clock when we arrived.（到达小镇的时间）The town，clean and tidy，was quite different from what I had seen in other places before.【高分句型一】The people there were friendly and kind.（对小镇的印象）After a short break，we paid a visit to the town whose architecture is astonishing.【高分句型二】There are both high buildings and old﹣style houses.Strangely enough ，they match each other so well that you even feel they make a beautiful picture.（小镇的建筑物）
Tomorrow we are to visit a local middle school，where we'll have a party with its students.I think it will be another pleasant day for all of us.（第二天的计划）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
6．（2024秋 让胡路区校级期中）假如你是李华，今天（星期日，10月25日，晴）在公园散步时遇到一个外国人来旅游，你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇日记。
要点如下：
1.想跟他谈话却不知所措；
2.你向他介绍你的城市；
3.他给你一些学习英语的建议。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使内容连贯；
3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
October 25，Sunday Sunny
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【答案】October 25，Sunday Sunny
This morning when I was taking a walk in the park，I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the city.This was the first time that I had seen a foreigner.
I wanted to talk with him in English，but I was so excited and nervous that I didn't know what to do and how to start a conversation，though I did well in English classes.Eager to practise my spoken English，I encouraged myself and came up to say "hello and welcome" to him.To my delight，he was very friendly and patient，thus leading to us talking for about 20 minutes.As a native，I introduced some tourist attractions and tasty food to him.
Finally，he gave me some practical advice on how to further improve my English，which is of great use to my English study.I will never forget this memorable experience.
【分析】高分句型一
I wanted to talk with him in English，but I was so excited and nervous that I didn't know what to do and how to start a conversation，though I did well in English classes.
分析：句子里，that引导结果状语从句 I didn't know what to do and how to start a conversation；though引导让步状语从句 I did well in English classes.
翻译：我想要和他用英语进行交流，但是我是如此兴奋和紧张，以至于不知道做什么以及怎样和他开始谈话，尽管我在英语课上做的很好。
高分句型二
Finally，he gave me some practical advice on how to further improve my English，which is of great use to my English study.
分析：句子里，代指先行词some practical advice on how to further improve my English，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句 is of great use to my English study.
翻译：最后，他就如何进一步提高我的英语水平给了我一些切实可行的建议，这对我的英语学习很有帮助。
【解答】October 25，Sunday Sunny
This morning when I was taking a walk in the park，I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the city.This was the first time that I had seen a foreigner.（点明时间，地点和人物）
I wanted to talk with him in English，but I was so excited and nervous that I didn't know what to do and how to start a conversation，though I did well in English classes. 【高分句型一】（想跟他谈话却不知所措）Eager to practise my spoken English，I encouraged myself and came up to say "hello and welcome" to him.To my delight，he was very friendly and patient，thus leading to us talking for about 20 minutes.As a native，I introduced some tourist attractions and tasty food to him.（向他介绍自己的城市）
Finally，he gave me some practical advice on how to further improve my English，which is of great use to my English study. 【高分句型二】I will never forget this memorable experience.（他给了一些学习英语的建议）
【点评】提纲类写作是近年高考英语书面表达的热点题型，命题人 通常以提纲作文的形式考查书信、报道、通知、日记、发言稿、对某人或某物的介绍、欢迎词等。提纲作文的选材范围很广，内容简单易懂，且多是考生熟悉的话题。这类题型的主要特点 是要点明确，范围具体。但考生也容易受中文提纲的制约，将 书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和词汇上的单调，甚至写 出结构不完整的句子。
7．（2024秋 辽宁期中）请根据内容提示，用英语以"Life in Senior"为题写一篇短文，叙述你的高中生活．
内容提示：
★总体印象：激动、快乐、辛苦．
★实际生活：时间紧，常熬夜；作业多，考试多；设法放松，看书打球；克服困难，不断进步
★展望未来：充满信心．
要求：1．字数100左右．可适当添加细节，使行文连贯，但不能逐字翻译．2．书写工整规范．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文属于半开放性作文，指是给出文章所要讨论的主要话题﹣高中生活．文字提示较少，要求考生进行合理的谋篇布局，运用合适的连接词对各要点之间进行串联，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．
亮点部分 本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：far from远不，远非；To our delight 令我们高兴的是；with the help of the teachers在老师的帮助之下；make full use of充分利用； Besides另外；made constant and great progress取得持续的巨大的进步
【解答】Life in Senior
Life in Senior is both tiring，exciting and meaningful．As everyone knows，Senior is far from relaxing and easy．（高分句型）Every minute counts．Working late at night is often the case．There is much homework and we have to take many exams such as monthly exams．（高分句型）We have to meet with and overcome a lot of difficulties in our studies．To our delight，we have made constant and great progress with the help of the teachers．（高分句型）Besides，our lessons of course we also manage to make full use of free time to relax ourselves girls reading colorful magazines and boys playing basketball．Though we are busy and tired，we still feel happy and confident of our future．（高分句型）
【点评】本文属于半开放性作文，动笔前，一定要组织要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
8．假设你是李华，你校的英国交换生Tom对中国茶文化一直很感兴趣．你收到学校学生会通知，本周五下午4：00将邀请知名教授在学校报告厅给师生做一场有关中国茶文化的专题报告．请你写一封邮件给Stefan，内容包括：
1．报告会基本信息（时间，地点，主持人，话题等）．
2．报告会具体内容：
a． 中国茶文化的历史及发展；
b．品茶会，品不同种类的茶．
3．询问Stefan是否愿意参加．
要求：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：中国茶文化Chinese tea culture；
学生会Students' Union
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．So， I am writing to you is that there will be a special report on Chinese tea culture this Friday afternoon at 4 o'clock in the lecture hall of our school．
句子里，that引导表语从句 there will be a special report on Chinese tea culture this Friday afternoon at 4 o'clock in the lecture hall of our school．
因此，我写信告诉你本周五下午4：00在我们学校报告厅有一场有关中国茶文化的专题报告．
2．It will be followed by a tea party and you can taste different kinds of tea while chatting with teachers and students of our school．
句子里，谓语动词 will be followed表示将来时态的被动； while chatting with teachers and students of our school是省略了主语you 和be动词的状语从句．
在它之后，是一个茶聚会，你可以品尝不同种类的茶，同时与老师以及我们学校的学生聊天．
【解答】Dear Tom，
I've learned that you are interested in Chinese tea culture． So， I am writing to you is that there will be a special report on Chinese tea culture this Friday afternoon at 4 o'clock in the lecture hall of our school． 【高分句型一】I wonder if you want to participate in it．（报告会基本信息）
Our Students' Union will invite Professor Zhang to talk about the history and development of Chinese tea culture． It will be followed by a tea party and you can taste different kinds of tea while chatting with teachers and students of our school．【高分句型二】（报告会具体内容）
If you do not have any prior appointment， I am looking forward to your coming．（询问Stefan是否愿意参加）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】考点：提纲类书面表达．
点评：提纲类书面表达主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体，贴近生活，易于动笔．此类试题中有较多的文字说明，实际上规定了考生表述的思路，对考生的写作范围作了较为明确的限定，试题中规定的要点一个也不能回避．考生极易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和语汇上的单调，因此平时要多练习，活用语言，使文章流畅．
9．你叫张扬，是新华中学的高一学生．过了一个漫长的暑假，今天是你高中生活的第一天，你无比激动．请用日记的形式记叙所发生的事以及自己的所思所想．
注意：1．词数：100词左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型：
1．What's more， my classmates are all friendly and helpful and we encourage each other when we feel like quitting．
而且，我的同学都很友好和助人，我们在想要放弃的时候都相互鼓励．
该句中and连接两个简单句构成一个并列句．when引导一个时间状语从句．
2．I have to say that I was nervous at first but soon I felt relaxed after our teacher asked us to introduce ourselves to each other．
我不得不说一开始我是很紧张的，但是很快在老师要求我们互相做完自我介绍之后我就放松了．
该句中that引导一个宾语从句，after引导的是一个时间状语从句
【解答】Monday，September 1，2019 Fine
I found that my new school is much larger than my previous one， and the classrooms are amazing with a computer in each．（学校的总体情况）The head teacher is strict but great． He spent the whole day with us during the military training． What's more， my classmates are all friendly and helpful and we encourage each other when we feel like quitting．（高分句型一）（同学和老师的情况）
I have to say that I was nervous at first but soon I felt relaxed after our teacher asked us to introduce ourselves to each other．（高分句型二） I like my new school very much and I think I can make great progress in this school．（我的感受）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．
10．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter非常喜欢中国饮食，来信希望你能给他做相关介绍．请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1．中国饮食的特点；
2．中国饮食的影响；
3．欢迎来中国体验饮食文化．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【答案】Dear Peter，
I am glad to know that you like Chinese diet， so I want to introduce it to you.
Chinese diet is considered to be one of the most healthy diet in the world because it contains less sugar and fat ， keeping us away from obesity . Due to its benefits to health， Chinese diets are increasingly popular all over the world. You can see Chinese restaurant everywhere. In order to maintain our health ， it is a must to keep a balanced diet with less sugar and fat but more fruit and vegetables .
Welcome to China and experience Chinese diets. I am sure you will be attracted to it.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Chinese diet is considered to be one of the most healthy diet in the world because it contains less sugar and fat ， keeping us away from obesity .
译文：中国饮食被认为是世界上最健康的饮食之一，因为它含有较少的糖和脂肪，使我们远离肥胖。
分析：这句话使用because引导原因状语从句；现在分词作伴随状语。
高分句型二： In order to maintain our health ， it is a must to keep a balanced diet with less sugar and fat but more fruit and vegetables .
译文：为了保持我们的健康，必须保持饮食平衡，少糖少脂肪，多吃水果和蔬菜。
分析：这句话使用in order to do表示目的，主句使用it作为形式主语，不定式内容是真正的主语。
【解答】Dear Peter，
I am glad to know that you like Chinese diet， so I want to introduce it to you.（写信目的）
Chinese diet is considered to be one of the most healthy diet in the world because it contains less sugar and fat ， keeping us away from obesity . 【高分句型一】（中国饮食的特点）Due to its benefits to health， Chinese diets are increasingly popular all over the world. You can see Chinese restaurant everywhere. In order to maintain our health ， it is a must to keep a balanced diet with less sugar and fat but more fruit and vegetables .【高分句型二】 （中国饮食的影响）
Welcome to China and experience Chinese diets. I am sure you will be attracted to it.（欢迎来中国体验饮食文化）
Looking forward to your reply.（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
11．假定你是高一学生李华，你校下个月将举办全市英语口语大赛，请用英语给你的朋友李雷写一封信，邀请他参加这次比赛。内容包括：
1.比赛的时间、地点；
2.比赛的内容；
3.发出邀请。
注意：
1.词数80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Li Lei，
How has everything been going recently？I'm writing to invite you to take part in the English Oral Competition.What is known to all is that we learn English not just for tests but mainly for communication.That is why the English Oral Competition counts.
The competition will be held in our school hall on the afternoon of December the 15th.Participants are expected to give an English speech on a given topic and then answer some questions related to your speech.The top three will be awarded prizes.Since I know you are willing to show yourself，I am expecting you to come to participate in the competition.For further information，you can visit our school website or contact me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：What is known to all is that we learn English not just for tests but mainly for communication.
译文：众所周知，我们学习英语不仅仅是为了考试，而且主要是为了交流。
分析：本句使用了what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句。
高分句型二：Since I know you are willing to show yourself，I am expecting you to come to participate in the competition.
译文：既然我知道你愿意展示自己，我希望你能来参加比赛。
分析：本句使用了since引导的原因状语从句。
【解答】Dear Li Lei，
How has everything been going recently？I'm writing to invite you to take part in the English Oral Competition.What is known to all is that we learn English not just for tests but mainly for communication.【高分句型一】That is why the English Oral Competition counts.（写信目的）
The competition will be held in our school hall on the afternoon of December the 15th.（比赛的时间、地点） Participants are expected to give an English speech on a given topic and then answer some questions related to your speech. （比赛的内容）The top three will be awarded prizes.Since I know you are willing to show yourself，I am expecting you to come to participate in the competition.【高分句型二】For further information，you can visit our school website or contact me.（发出邀请）
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
12．假如你是李华，去年你和父母第一次到美国旅游，因为"restroom"和"WC"的误解，发生了趣事。请你根据以下内容写一篇80词左右的小故事。
1.餐馆吃饭，寻找WC；
2.服务生提醒没有WC，有restroom；
3.你的感悟。
【答案】Last summer，I went abroad to the USA for a trip with my parents.The first day we went to a restaurant and looked around for a toilet.However，they didn't find it.When they asked the waitress，she indicated a sign to the "restroom".But my parents didn't want to rest.Then I asked for the "WC" but the girl said they didn't have one.We were confused.At last，she understood what we wanted.She laughed and we also laughed.From this experience，I made up my mind to study English harder.
【分析】高分句型一：When they asked the waitress，she indicated a sign to the "restroom".
译文：当他们问女服务员时，她示意"洗手间"的标志。
分析：这句话使用when引导时间状语从句。
高分句型二：At last，she understood what we wanted.
译文：最后，她明白了我们想要什么。
分析：这句话使用what引导宾语从句。
【解答】Last summer，I went abroad to the USA for a trip with my parents.The first day we went to a restaurant and looked around for a toilet.（餐馆吃饭，寻找WC）However，they didn't find it.When they asked the waitress，she indicated a sign to the "restroom".【高分句型一】（服务生提醒没有WC，有restroom）But my parents didn't want to rest.Then I asked for the "WC" but the girl said they didn't have one.We were confused.At last，she understood what we wanted.【高分句型二】She laughed and we also laughed.From this experience，I made up my mind to study English harder.（你的感悟）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
13．（2024秋 安岳县校级期中）假定你是李华，你的好友Ann邀请你明天晚上去她家做客．但是，你无法赴约．请根据以下要点，给Ann写一封道歉信：
1．对Ann的邀请表示感谢；
2．解释无法赴约的原因：为后天的一场重要考试做准备；
3．表达你的歉意、祝福以及对另一次会面的期待．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型：
1． Unfortunately， it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family， because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow．
不幸的是，我很遗憾不能去你家做客了，因为我后天要参加一场重要的考试所以要好好准备．
it为形式主语，that引导一个主语从句；because又引导一个原因状语从句．
2． If so， please don't hesitate to call me．
如果是这样的话请一定直接告诉我．
if so为一个条件状语从句的省略，省略了it is．
【解答】Dear Ann，
Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening．（对Ann的邀请表示感谢）Unfortunately， it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family， because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow．（高分句型一）（解释无法赴约的原因：为后天的一场重要考试做准备）I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get﹣together， and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time． Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward？ If so， please don't hesitate to call me．（高分句型二）I do long for a pleasant chat with you．（表达你的歉意、祝福以及对另一次会面的期待）
Please allow me to say sorry again．
Regards，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
14．你校将要举办一次主题为"How to Communicate with Our Parents"的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：
1.与父母进行沟通的原因；
2.与父母沟通的方式；
3.与父母发生争执时的做法。
注意：词数80个左右。
【答案】
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Hello，everyone.I'd like to share my ideas about the topic of communicating with our parents.Parents are the people who love us most，so it's necessary to keep a good relationship with them.Here are my ideas on how to make it easier to communicate with parents.
First，we should respect and trust our parents.Don't be rude to them even if they have done something wrong.They have experienced more and always try their best to protect us from dangers.Second，if we often talk with them about our life and experiences，we will know each other better.What's more，we can often tell our parents how much we love them.Remember what they really want is only the best for us.
Thank you for listening.
【分析】高分句型一：Parents are the people who love us most，so it's necessary to keep a good relationship with them.
翻译：父母是最爱我们的人，所以有必要和他们保持良好的关系。
分析：本句使用了who引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：Don't be rude to them even if they have done something wrong.
翻译：即使他们做错了什么，也不要对他们无礼。
分析：本句使用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Hello，everyone.I'd like to share my ideas about the topic of communicating with our parents.Parents are the people who love us most，so it's necessary to keep a good relationship with them.【高分句型一】（与父母进行沟通的原因） Here are my ideas on how to make it easier to communicate with parents.
First，we should respect and trust our parents.Don't be rude to them even if they have done something wrong.【高分句型二】They have experienced more and always try their best to protect us from dangers.Second，if we often talk with them about our life and experiences，we will know each other better.What's more，we can often tell our parents how much we love them.Remember what they really want is only the best for us.（与父母进行沟通的具体建议）
Thank you for listening.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
15．假定你是李华，你把Frank借给你的书弄丢了。这本书你一直在看，本打算下周交还的。昨天晚上回房间找不到了。你将尽力去找，找不到的话，买本新的交还。请你对此表示歉意，毕竟新书代替不了旧书，因为它就像是老朋友，有好多珍贵的回忆。这对自己的粗心也是一次教训。词数100左右。
Dear Frank，_______________
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Frank，
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you lent to me last week.I read it every day and intended to finish it next week.Last night when I came to my room，it was nowhere to be found.I will try to recover it as soon as possible.If I fail to find it，I will get a new book for you.But I am afraid it can never take the place of the old one.Old books are like old friends，once lost，they can never be replaced.They are connected with precious memories which the new ones can never have.And for this irrecoverable loss，I am to blame if I had been more careful，it would not have been lost.I was so careless with things.This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you lent to me last week.
翻译：我非常抱歉告诉你我把你上周借给我的宝贵的书弄丢了。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：They are connected with precious memories which the new ones can never have.
翻译：它们有着新书无法替代的宝贵记忆。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的定语从句。
【解答】Dear Frank
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you lent to me last week.【高分句型一】（道歉原因） I read it every day and intended to finish it next week.Last night when I came to my room，it was nowhere to be found.I will try to recover it as soon as possible.（事情经过） If I fail to find it，I will get a new book for you. （补偿）But I am afraid it can never take the place of the old one.Old books are like old friends，once lost，they can never be replaced.They are connected with precious memories which the new ones can never have.【高分句型二】And for this irrecoverable loss，I am to blame if I had been more careful，it would not have been lost.I was so careless with things.This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future.（经验教训）
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
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一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 沙坡头区校级期末）某英文报纸正就"如何保持友谊"这一话题进行征稿。请你以"How to keep friendship"为题，写一篇英语短文来投稿。内容要点如下：
（1）与朋友保持联系；
（2）互相尊重，诚实以待；
（3）及时帮助朋友。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2．（2018秋 蒸湘区校级期中）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Lily给你写了一封邮件，邮件中说她和好朋友Lucy闹矛盾了，因为Lucy弄丢了她最喜欢的那本书．她不知道应该怎么办，想向你寻求帮助．现请你给Lily回一封邮件，提出建议，帮她解决这个问题．
注意：1．词数80左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Lily，
_____________________________．
Yours，
Li Hua
3．（2024秋 泸州模拟）假设你是李华，今年7月即将参加高考．最近，你的笔友Tom写信询问你的学习是否因为新冠病毒（COVID﹣19）疫情受到影响．请你用英语写一封回信，内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．简述疫情下的备考情况；
3．表达决心和希望．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
4．（2024秋 湖北期末）为庆祝新中国成立七十周年，你们学校即将举办一次大型文艺汇演（Grand Art and Cultural Show）．假如你是李华，请给你们学校留学生Eric写一封邮件，邀请他参加观看．
内容包括：
1．汇演时间和地点；
2．汇演内容和意义．
注意：
1．词数：100左右．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
5．（2024秋 虎林市校级期中）假如你随一个中学生代表团去英国访问，期间你们参观了英国伦敦郊区的一个名叫Camden Town的小镇，请你把参观过程写成一篇日记。内容包括：
1.到达小镇的时间；
2.你对小镇的印象；
3.小镇的建筑物；
4.你们第二天的计划。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
April 14th，Sunday Fine
__________.
6．（2024秋 让胡路区校级期中）假如你是李华，今天（星期日，10月25日，晴）在公园散步时遇到一个外国人来旅游，你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇日记。
要点如下：
1.想跟他谈话却不知所措；
2.你向他介绍你的城市；
3.他给你一些学习英语的建议。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使内容连贯；
3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
October 25，Sunday Sunny
________________
7．（2024秋 辽宁期中）请根据内容提示，用英语以"Life in Senior"为题写一篇短文，叙述你的高中生活．
内容提示：
★总体印象：激动、快乐、辛苦．
★实际生活：时间紧，常熬夜；作业多，考试多；设法放松，看书打球；克服困难，不断进步
★展望未来：充满信心．
要求：1．字数100左右．可适当添加细节，使行文连贯，但不能逐字翻译．2．书写工整规范．
8．假设你是李华，你校的英国交换生Tom对中国茶文化一直很感兴趣．你收到学校学生会通知，本周五下午4：00将邀请知名教授在学校报告厅给师生做一场有关中国茶文化的专题报告．请你写一封邮件给Stefan，内容包括：
1．报告会基本信息（时间，地点，主持人，话题等）．
2．报告会具体内容：
a． 中国茶文化的历史及发展；
b．品茶会，品不同种类的茶．
3．询问Stefan是否愿意参加．
要求：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：中国茶文化Chinese tea culture；
学生会Students' Union
9．你叫张扬，是新华中学的高一学生．过了一个漫长的暑假，今天是你高中生活的第一天，你无比激动．请用日记的形式记叙所发生的事以及自己的所思所想．
注意：1．词数：100词左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
10．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter非常喜欢中国饮食，来信希望你能给他做相关介绍．请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1．中国饮食的特点；
2．中国饮食的影响；
3．欢迎来中国体验饮食文化．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
11．假定你是高一学生李华，你校下个月将举办全市英语口语大赛，请用英语给你的朋友李雷写一封信，邀请他参加这次比赛。内容包括：
1.比赛的时间、地点；
2.比赛的内容；
3.发出邀请。
注意：
1.词数80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
12．假如你是李华，去年你和父母第一次到美国旅游，因为"restroom"和"WC"的误解，发生了趣事。请你根据以下内容写一篇80词左右的小故事。
1.餐馆吃饭，寻找WC；
2.服务生提醒没有WC，有restroom；
3.你的感悟。
13．（2024秋 安岳县校级期中）假定你是李华，你的好友Ann邀请你明天晚上去她家做客．但是，你无法赴约．请根据以下要点，给Ann写一封道歉信：
1．对Ann的邀请表示感谢；
2．解释无法赴约的原因：为后天的一场重要考试做准备；
3．表达你的歉意、祝福以及对另一次会面的期待．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯．
14．你校将要举办一次主题为"How to Communicate with Our Parents"的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：
1.与父母进行沟通的原因；
2.与父母沟通的方式；
3.与父母发生争执时的做法。
注意：词数80个左右。
15．假定你是李华，你把Frank借给你的书弄丢了。这本书你一直在看，本打算下周交还的。昨天晚上回房间找不到了。你将尽力去找，找不到的话，买本新的交还。请你对此表示歉意，毕竟新书代替不了旧书，因为它就像是老朋友，有好多珍贵的回忆。这对自己的粗心也是一次教训。词数100左右。
Dear Frank，_______________
Yours truly，
Li Hua
期末培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 沙坡头区校级期末）某英文报纸正就"如何保持友谊"这一话题进行征稿。请你以"How to keep friendship"为题，写一篇英语短文来投稿。内容要点如下：
（1）与朋友保持联系；
（2）互相尊重，诚实以待；
（3）及时帮助朋友。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】How to keep friendship
As we all know， friendship plays an important role in our life. If we have a close friend， we can share happiness and worries， which can make us enjoy a much happier life.
Since friendship makes a great difference to us， we need to take it seriously and try to keep friendship. My tips are as follows： Firstly， we should keep in touch with our friends by sending e﹣mails， writing letters or spending some time together regularly. Secondly， we should respect our friends and be honest with them. In addition， good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. Just as the old saying goes， "A friend in need is a friend indeed."
In a word， if we want to keep friendship， we'd better treat our friends as we want to be treated.
【分析】高分句型一
If we have a close friend， we can share happiness and worries， which can make us enjoy a much happier life.
分析：句子里，If 引导条件状语从句we have a close friend；代指主句 we can share happiness and worries， 关系词which引导非限制性定语从句 can make us enjoy a much happier life.
翻译：如果我们有一个亲密的朋友，我们可以分享快乐和烦恼，这可以使我们享受更幸福的生活。
高分句型二
Since friendship makes a great difference to us， we need to take it seriously and try to keep friendship.
分析：句子里，Since引导原因状语从句 friendship makes a great difference to us.
翻译：因为友谊对我们有很大的影响，我们就要认真对待，努力保持友谊。
【解答】How to keep friendship
As we all know， friendship plays an important role in our life. If we have a close friend， we can share happiness and worries， which can make us enjoy a much happier life.【高分句型一】（朋友的重要性）
Since friendship makes a great difference to us， we need to take it seriously and try to keep friendship. 【高分句型二】My tips are as follows： Firstly， we should keep in touch with our friends by sending e﹣mails， writing letters or spending some time together regularly. Secondly， we should respect our friends and be honest with them. In addition， good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. Just as the old saying goes， "A friend in need is a friend indeed."（关于如何保持友谊的建议）
In a word， if we want to keep friendship， we'd better treat our friends as we want to be treated.（总结自己的观点）
【点评】本文的话题是"如何保持友谊"；可以从与朋友保持友谊的方法：电话，短信，经常聚会等多种方式。与朋友相处时，热情大方，真诚。能为朋友做自己能做的事情。可以从这几个方面着手展开。在你的能力范围之内，要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，选择句式时也要有变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。
2．（2018秋 蒸湘区校级期中）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Lily给你写了一封邮件，邮件中说她和好朋友Lucy闹矛盾了，因为Lucy弄丢了她最喜欢的那本书．她不知道应该怎么办，想向你寻求帮助．现请你给Lily回一封邮件，提出建议，帮她解决这个问题．
注意：1．词数80左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Lily，
_____________________________．
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】I am sorry to hear that there are some problems between you and your friend．（高分句型一）句中that引导宾语从句
听说你和你朋友之间有些问题，我很难过．
As for the book，I advise you to have a look at the bookstore． （高分句型二）句中as for意为"固定搭配"，意为"至于"
至于这本书，我建议你去书店看看．
【解答】Dear Lily，
I am sorry to hear that there are some problems between you and your friend．（高分句型一） I would like to share my thoughts with you．（写信目的）
Lucy didn't lose your book on purpose，did she？If she didn't，she might be as sad as you are now．You are friends．Do you want to lose such a good friend just because of a lost book？As for the book，I advise you to have a look at the bookstore． （高分句型二）Maybe they have the same one as yours．So you can buy a new one． （提出建议，帮她解决这个问题）
We can buy a new book but can we buy a friend？Friends are important in our life．I sincerely hope you and Lucy can make up soon．（期望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
3．（2024秋 泸州模拟）假设你是李华，今年7月即将参加高考．最近，你的笔友Tom写信询问你的学习是否因为新冠病毒（COVID﹣19）疫情受到影响．请你用英语写一封回信，内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．简述疫情下的备考情况；
3．表达决心和希望．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：Now， I have come back to school and everything has returned to normal．
译文：现在，我回到学校，一切都恢复了正常．
分析：使用and连接并列句．
高分句型二： I am filled with confidence and courage， preparing for the coming national examination．
译文：我满怀信心和勇气，为即将到来的国考做准备．
分析：使用现在分词作伴随状语．
【解答】Dear Tom，
I am grateful for your great concern about me． In my opinion， I am getting on well with my study all the time．（表示感谢） During the first two months of fighting against COVID﹣19， I kept learning online at home． From the online classes I learned a lot following teachers． Now， I have come back to school and everything has returned to normal．【高分句型一】 Teachers are giving lessons carefully and classmates are learning attentively． I am filled with confidence and courage， preparing for the coming national examination．【高分句型二】（简述疫情下的备考情况）
With my hard work and teachers' help， I believe I will make n great success in the national examination and be admitted to my dream school﹣Sichuan University!（表达决心和希望）
Best wishes for you!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文是近几年英语书面表达的热点题型．命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式（如书信、报道、通知、日记等）有机结合在一起进行考查，使该类书面表达试题综合性越来越强．
1．提纲作文的特点
提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出，请考生据此进行写作．这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定．因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏．
2．思维空间灵活、开放
为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥．因此，该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力．
3．提纲作文的写作步骤一般分为：审题，明确文体形式；构思，根据提纲全面构思文章内容，根据内容构思词语和句型结构；写作完稿，根据构思的词语和句型结构，按照合理的顺序和语言要求，连句成文．注意句子间的正确联系，注意词语的丰富和句型的多样．
4．（2024秋 湖北期末）为庆祝新中国成立七十周年，你们学校即将举办一次大型文艺汇演（Grand Art and Cultural Show）．假如你是李华，请给你们学校留学生Eric写一封邮件，邀请他参加观看．
内容包括：
1．汇演时间和地点；
2．汇演内容和意义．
注意：
1．词数：100左右．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：I'm writing to invite you to the Grand art and cultural show to be held in our school hall on the evening of Sept.5．
译文：我写信邀请你参加9月5日晚上在我们学校大厅举行的艺术文化大展．
分析：不定式的被动作定语修饰the Grand art and cultural show．
高分句型二：Not only does it enable us to get a better understanding of our motherland，but also it inspires us to work harder and make great contributions to our country．
译文：它不仅使我们对祖国有了更好的了解，而且激励我们更加努力地工作，为国家做出了巨大的贡献．
分析：not only放在句首，后面用倒装句，but also后面句子不倒装．
【解答】Dear Eric，
How is everything going？I'm writing to invite you to the Grand art and cultural show to be held in our school hall on the evening of Sept.5．【高分句型一】（写信目的）
With the aim of celebrating the 70th anniversary of the founding of our motherland and singing praise of great achievements we have achieved over the past seven decades，the show will put on a variety of amazing performances such as singing，dancing and reciting classics．I believe these colorful performances will leave a favorable impression on all international students like you．（汇演时间和地点）
From where I stand，the show is extremely meaningful．Not only does it enable us to get a better understanding of our motherland，but also it inspires us to work harder and make great contributions to our country．
【高分句型二】If you are interested，please let me know．Looking forward to your arrival．（汇演内容和意义）
Yours
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
5．（2024秋 虎林市校级期中）假如你随一个中学生代表团去英国访问，期间你们参观了英国伦敦郊区的一个名叫Camden Town的小镇，请你把参观过程写成一篇日记。内容包括：
1.到达小镇的时间；
2.你对小镇的印象；
3.小镇的建筑物；
4.你们第二天的计划。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
April 14th，Sunday Fine
__________.
【答案】April 14th，Sunday Fine
We had a wonderful time today.Camden Town left a deep impression on me.
This morning after we had breakfast，we started to go to Camden Town by bus.It was eight o'clock when we arrived.The town，clean and tidy，was quite different from what I had seen in other places before.The people there were friendly and kind.After a short break，we paid a visit to the town whose architecture is astonishing.There are both high buildings and old﹣style houses.Strangely enough ，they match each other so well that you even feel they make a beautiful picture.
Tomorrow we are to visit a local middle school，where we'll have a party with its students.I think it will be another pleasant day for all of us.
【分析】高分句型一
The town，clean and tidy，was quite different from what I had seen in other places before.
分析：句子里，what引导宾语从句I had seen in other places before.
翻译：这个城镇干净整洁，与我以前在其他地方看到的完全不同。
高分句型二
After a short break，we paid a visit to the town whose architecture is astonishing.
分析：句子里，修饰先行词the town，关系词whose引导定语从句architecture is astonishing.
翻译：短暂休息后，我们参观了这个建筑令人惊叹的城镇。
【解答】April 14th，Sunday Fine
We had a wonderful time today.Camden Town left a deep impression on me.（点明主题）
This morning after we had breakfast，we started to go to Camden Town by bus.It was eight o'clock when we arrived.（到达小镇的时间）The town，clean and tidy，was quite different from what I had seen in other places before.【高分句型一】The people there were friendly and kind.（对小镇的印象）After a short break，we paid a visit to the town whose architecture is astonishing.【高分句型二】There are both high buildings and old﹣style houses.Strangely enough ，they match each other so well that you even feel they make a beautiful picture.（小镇的建筑物）
Tomorrow we are to visit a local middle school，where we'll have a party with its students.I think it will be another pleasant day for all of us.（第二天的计划）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
6．（2024秋 让胡路区校级期中）假如你是李华，今天（星期日，10月25日，晴）在公园散步时遇到一个外国人来旅游，你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇日记。
要点如下：
1.想跟他谈话却不知所措；
2.你向他介绍你的城市；
3.他给你一些学习英语的建议。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使内容连贯；
3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
October 25，Sunday Sunny
________________
【答案】October 25，Sunday Sunny
This morning when I was taking a walk in the park，I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the city.This was the first time that I had seen a foreigner.
I wanted to talk with him in English，but I was so excited and nervous that I didn't know what to do and how to start a conversation，though I did well in English classes.Eager to practise my spoken English，I encouraged myself and came up to say "hello and welcome" to him.To my delight，he was very friendly and patient，thus leading to us talking for about 20 minutes.As a native，I introduced some tourist attractions and tasty food to him.
Finally，he gave me some practical advice on how to further improve my English，which is of great use to my English study.I will never forget this memorable experience.
【分析】高分句型一
I wanted to talk with him in English，but I was so excited and nervous that I didn't know what to do and how to start a conversation，though I did well in English classes.
分析：句子里，that引导结果状语从句 I didn't know what to do and how to start a conversation；though引导让步状语从句 I did well in English classes.
翻译：我想要和他用英语进行交流，但是我是如此兴奋和紧张，以至于不知道做什么以及怎样和他开始谈话，尽管我在英语课上做的很好。
高分句型二
Finally，he gave me some practical advice on how to further improve my English，which is of great use to my English study.
分析：句子里，代指先行词some practical advice on how to further improve my English，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句 is of great use to my English study.
翻译：最后，他就如何进一步提高我的英语水平给了我一些切实可行的建议，这对我的英语学习很有帮助。
【解答】October 25，Sunday Sunny
This morning when I was taking a walk in the park，I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the city.This was the first time that I had seen a foreigner.（点明时间，地点和人物）
I wanted to talk with him in English，but I was so excited and nervous that I didn't know what to do and how to start a conversation，though I did well in English classes. 【高分句型一】（想跟他谈话却不知所措）Eager to practise my spoken English，I encouraged myself and came up to say "hello and welcome" to him.To my delight，he was very friendly and patient，thus leading to us talking for about 20 minutes.As a native，I introduced some tourist attractions and tasty food to him.（向他介绍自己的城市）
Finally，he gave me some practical advice on how to further improve my English，which is of great use to my English study. 【高分句型二】I will never forget this memorable experience.（他给了一些学习英语的建议）
【点评】提纲类写作是近年高考英语书面表达的热点题型，命题人 通常以提纲作文的形式考查书信、报道、通知、日记、发言稿、对某人或某物的介绍、欢迎词等。提纲作文的选材范围很广，内容简单易懂，且多是考生熟悉的话题。这类题型的主要特点 是要点明确，范围具体。但考生也容易受中文提纲的制约，将 书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和词汇上的单调，甚至写 出结构不完整的句子。
7．（2024秋 辽宁期中）请根据内容提示，用英语以"Life in Senior"为题写一篇短文，叙述你的高中生活．
内容提示：
★总体印象：激动、快乐、辛苦．
★实际生活：时间紧，常熬夜；作业多，考试多；设法放松，看书打球；克服困难，不断进步
★展望未来：充满信心．
要求：1．字数100左右．可适当添加细节，使行文连贯，但不能逐字翻译．2．书写工整规范．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文属于半开放性作文，指是给出文章所要讨论的主要话题﹣高中生活．文字提示较少，要求考生进行合理的谋篇布局，运用合适的连接词对各要点之间进行串联，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．
亮点部分 本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：far from远不，远非；To our delight 令我们高兴的是；with the help of the teachers在老师的帮助之下；make full use of充分利用； Besides另外；made constant and great progress取得持续的巨大的进步
【解答】Life in Senior
Life in Senior is both tiring，exciting and meaningful．As everyone knows，Senior is far from relaxing and easy．（高分句型）Every minute counts．Working late at night is often the case．There is much homework and we have to take many exams such as monthly exams．（高分句型）We have to meet with and overcome a lot of difficulties in our studies．To our delight，we have made constant and great progress with the help of the teachers．（高分句型）Besides，our lessons of course we also manage to make full use of free time to relax ourselves girls reading colorful magazines and boys playing basketball．Though we are busy and tired，we still feel happy and confident of our future．（高分句型）
【点评】本文属于半开放性作文，动笔前，一定要组织要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
8．假设你是李华，你校的英国交换生Tom对中国茶文化一直很感兴趣．你收到学校学生会通知，本周五下午4：00将邀请知名教授在学校报告厅给师生做一场有关中国茶文化的专题报告．请你写一封邮件给Stefan，内容包括：
1．报告会基本信息（时间，地点，主持人，话题等）．
2．报告会具体内容：
a． 中国茶文化的历史及发展；
b．品茶会，品不同种类的茶．
3．询问Stefan是否愿意参加．
要求：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：中国茶文化Chinese tea culture；
学生会Students' Union
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．So， I am writing to you is that there will be a special report on Chinese tea culture this Friday afternoon at 4 o'clock in the lecture hall of our school．
句子里，that引导表语从句 there will be a special report on Chinese tea culture this Friday afternoon at 4 o'clock in the lecture hall of our school．
因此，我写信告诉你本周五下午4：00在我们学校报告厅有一场有关中国茶文化的专题报告．
2．It will be followed by a tea party and you can taste different kinds of tea while chatting with teachers and students of our school．
句子里，谓语动词 will be followed表示将来时态的被动； while chatting with teachers and students of our school是省略了主语you 和be动词的状语从句．
在它之后，是一个茶聚会，你可以品尝不同种类的茶，同时与老师以及我们学校的学生聊天．
【解答】Dear Tom，
I've learned that you are interested in Chinese tea culture． So， I am writing to you is that there will be a special report on Chinese tea culture this Friday afternoon at 4 o'clock in the lecture hall of our school． 【高分句型一】I wonder if you want to participate in it．（报告会基本信息）
Our Students' Union will invite Professor Zhang to talk about the history and development of Chinese tea culture． It will be followed by a tea party and you can taste different kinds of tea while chatting with teachers and students of our school．【高分句型二】（报告会具体内容）
If you do not have any prior appointment， I am looking forward to your coming．（询问Stefan是否愿意参加）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】考点：提纲类书面表达．
点评：提纲类书面表达主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体，贴近生活，易于动笔．此类试题中有较多的文字说明，实际上规定了考生表述的思路，对考生的写作范围作了较为明确的限定，试题中规定的要点一个也不能回避．考生极易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和语汇上的单调，因此平时要多练习，活用语言，使文章流畅．
9．你叫张扬，是新华中学的高一学生．过了一个漫长的暑假，今天是你高中生活的第一天，你无比激动．请用日记的形式记叙所发生的事以及自己的所思所想．
注意：1．词数：100词左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型：
1．What's more， my classmates are all friendly and helpful and we encourage each other when we feel like quitting．
而且，我的同学都很友好和助人，我们在想要放弃的时候都相互鼓励．
该句中and连接两个简单句构成一个并列句．when引导一个时间状语从句．
2．I have to say that I was nervous at first but soon I felt relaxed after our teacher asked us to introduce ourselves to each other．
我不得不说一开始我是很紧张的，但是很快在老师要求我们互相做完自我介绍之后我就放松了．
该句中that引导一个宾语从句，after引导的是一个时间状语从句
【解答】Monday，September 1，2019 Fine
I found that my new school is much larger than my previous one， and the classrooms are amazing with a computer in each．（学校的总体情况）The head teacher is strict but great． He spent the whole day with us during the military training． What's more， my classmates are all friendly and helpful and we encourage each other when we feel like quitting．（高分句型一）（同学和老师的情况）
I have to say that I was nervous at first but soon I felt relaxed after our teacher asked us to introduce ourselves to each other．（高分句型二） I like my new school very much and I think I can make great progress in this school．（我的感受）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．
10．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter非常喜欢中国饮食，来信希望你能给他做相关介绍．请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1．中国饮食的特点；
2．中国饮食的影响；
3．欢迎来中国体验饮食文化．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【答案】Dear Peter，
I am glad to know that you like Chinese diet， so I want to introduce it to you.
Chinese diet is considered to be one of the most healthy diet in the world because it contains less sugar and fat ， keeping us away from obesity . Due to its benefits to health， Chinese diets are increasingly popular all over the world. You can see Chinese restaurant everywhere. In order to maintain our health ， it is a must to keep a balanced diet with less sugar and fat but more fruit and vegetables .
Welcome to China and experience Chinese diets. I am sure you will be attracted to it.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Chinese diet is considered to be one of the most healthy diet in the world because it contains less sugar and fat ， keeping us away from obesity .
译文：中国饮食被认为是世界上最健康的饮食之一，因为它含有较少的糖和脂肪，使我们远离肥胖。
分析：这句话使用because引导原因状语从句；现在分词作伴随状语。
高分句型二： In order to maintain our health ， it is a must to keep a balanced diet with less sugar and fat but more fruit and vegetables .
译文：为了保持我们的健康，必须保持饮食平衡，少糖少脂肪，多吃水果和蔬菜。
分析：这句话使用in order to do表示目的，主句使用it作为形式主语，不定式内容是真正的主语。
【解答】Dear Peter，
I am glad to know that you like Chinese diet， so I want to introduce it to you.（写信目的）
Chinese diet is considered to be one of the most healthy diet in the world because it contains less sugar and fat ， keeping us away from obesity . 【高分句型一】（中国饮食的特点）Due to its benefits to health， Chinese diets are increasingly popular all over the world. You can see Chinese restaurant everywhere. In order to maintain our health ， it is a must to keep a balanced diet with less sugar and fat but more fruit and vegetables .【高分句型二】 （中国饮食的影响）
Welcome to China and experience Chinese diets. I am sure you will be attracted to it.（欢迎来中国体验饮食文化）
Looking forward to your reply.（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
11．假定你是高一学生李华，你校下个月将举办全市英语口语大赛，请用英语给你的朋友李雷写一封信，邀请他参加这次比赛。内容包括：
1.比赛的时间、地点；
2.比赛的内容；
3.发出邀请。
注意：
1.词数80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Li Lei，
How has everything been going recently？I'm writing to invite you to take part in the English Oral Competition.What is known to all is that we learn English not just for tests but mainly for communication.That is why the English Oral Competition counts.
The competition will be held in our school hall on the afternoon of December the 15th.Participants are expected to give an English speech on a given topic and then answer some questions related to your speech.The top three will be awarded prizes.Since I know you are willing to show yourself，I am expecting you to come to participate in the competition.For further information，you can visit our school website or contact me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：What is known to all is that we learn English not just for tests but mainly for communication.
译文：众所周知，我们学习英语不仅仅是为了考试，而且主要是为了交流。
分析：本句使用了what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句。
高分句型二：Since I know you are willing to show yourself，I am expecting you to come to participate in the competition.
译文：既然我知道你愿意展示自己，我希望你能来参加比赛。
分析：本句使用了since引导的原因状语从句。
【解答】Dear Li Lei，
How has everything been going recently？I'm writing to invite you to take part in the English Oral Competition.What is known to all is that we learn English not just for tests but mainly for communication.【高分句型一】That is why the English Oral Competition counts.（写信目的）
The competition will be held in our school hall on the afternoon of December the 15th.（比赛的时间、地点） Participants are expected to give an English speech on a given topic and then answer some questions related to your speech. （比赛的内容）The top three will be awarded prizes.Since I know you are willing to show yourself，I am expecting you to come to participate in the competition.【高分句型二】For further information，you can visit our school website or contact me.（发出邀请）
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
12．假如你是李华，去年你和父母第一次到美国旅游，因为"restroom"和"WC"的误解，发生了趣事。请你根据以下内容写一篇80词左右的小故事。
1.餐馆吃饭，寻找WC；
2.服务生提醒没有WC，有restroom；
3.你的感悟。
【答案】Last summer，I went abroad to the USA for a trip with my parents.The first day we went to a restaurant and looked around for a toilet.However，they didn't find it.When they asked the waitress，she indicated a sign to the "restroom".But my parents didn't want to rest.Then I asked for the "WC" but the girl said they didn't have one.We were confused.At last，she understood what we wanted.She laughed and we also laughed.From this experience，I made up my mind to study English harder.
【分析】高分句型一：When they asked the waitress，she indicated a sign to the "restroom".
译文：当他们问女服务员时，她示意"洗手间"的标志。
分析：这句话使用when引导时间状语从句。
高分句型二：At last，she understood what we wanted.
译文：最后，她明白了我们想要什么。
分析：这句话使用what引导宾语从句。
【解答】Last summer，I went abroad to the USA for a trip with my parents.The first day we went to a restaurant and looked around for a toilet.（餐馆吃饭，寻找WC）However，they didn't find it.When they asked the waitress，she indicated a sign to the "restroom".【高分句型一】（服务生提醒没有WC，有restroom）But my parents didn't want to rest.Then I asked for the "WC" but the girl said they didn't have one.We were confused.At last，she understood what we wanted.【高分句型二】She laughed and we also laughed.From this experience，I made up my mind to study English harder.（你的感悟）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
13．（2024秋 安岳县校级期中）假定你是李华，你的好友Ann邀请你明天晚上去她家做客．但是，你无法赴约．请根据以下要点，给Ann写一封道歉信：
1．对Ann的邀请表示感谢；
2．解释无法赴约的原因：为后天的一场重要考试做准备；
3．表达你的歉意、祝福以及对另一次会面的期待．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型：
1． Unfortunately， it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family， because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow．
不幸的是，我很遗憾不能去你家做客了，因为我后天要参加一场重要的考试所以要好好准备．
it为形式主语，that引导一个主语从句；because又引导一个原因状语从句．
2． If so， please don't hesitate to call me．
如果是这样的话请一定直接告诉我．
if so为一个条件状语从句的省略，省略了it is．
【解答】Dear Ann，
Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening．（对Ann的邀请表示感谢）Unfortunately， it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family， because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow．（高分句型一）（解释无法赴约的原因：为后天的一场重要考试做准备）I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get﹣together， and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time． Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward？ If so， please don't hesitate to call me．（高分句型二）I do long for a pleasant chat with you．（表达你的歉意、祝福以及对另一次会面的期待）
Please allow me to say sorry again．
Regards，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
14．你校将要举办一次主题为"How to Communicate with Our Parents"的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：
1.与父母进行沟通的原因；
2.与父母沟通的方式；
3.与父母发生争执时的做法。
注意：词数80个左右。
【答案】
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Hello，everyone.I'd like to share my ideas about the topic of communicating with our parents.Parents are the people who love us most，so it's necessary to keep a good relationship with them.Here are my ideas on how to make it easier to communicate with parents.
First，we should respect and trust our parents.Don't be rude to them even if they have done something wrong.They have experienced more and always try their best to protect us from dangers.Second，if we often talk with them about our life and experiences，we will know each other better.What's more，we can often tell our parents how much we love them.Remember what they really want is only the best for us.
Thank you for listening.
【分析】高分句型一：Parents are the people who love us most，so it's necessary to keep a good relationship with them.
翻译：父母是最爱我们的人，所以有必要和他们保持良好的关系。
分析：本句使用了who引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：Don't be rude to them even if they have done something wrong.
翻译：即使他们做错了什么，也不要对他们无礼。
分析：本句使用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Hello，everyone.I'd like to share my ideas about the topic of communicating with our parents.Parents are the people who love us most，so it's necessary to keep a good relationship with them.【高分句型一】（与父母进行沟通的原因） Here are my ideas on how to make it easier to communicate with parents.
First，we should respect and trust our parents.Don't be rude to them even if they have done something wrong.【高分句型二】They have experienced more and always try their best to protect us from dangers.Second，if we often talk with them about our life and experiences，we will know each other better.What's more，we can often tell our parents how much we love them.Remember what they really want is only the best for us.（与父母进行沟通的具体建议）
Thank you for listening.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
15．假定你是李华，你把Frank借给你的书弄丢了。这本书你一直在看，本打算下周交还的。昨天晚上回房间找不到了。你将尽力去找，找不到的话，买本新的交还。请你对此表示歉意，毕竟新书代替不了旧书，因为它就像是老朋友，有好多珍贵的回忆。这对自己的粗心也是一次教训。词数100左右。
Dear Frank，_______________
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Frank，
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you lent to me last week.I read it every day and intended to finish it next week.Last night when I came to my room，it was nowhere to be found.I will try to recover it as soon as possible.If I fail to find it，I will get a new book for you.But I am afraid it can never take the place of the old one.Old books are like old friends，once lost，they can never be replaced.They are connected with precious memories which the new ones can never have.And for this irrecoverable loss，I am to blame if I had been more careful，it would not have been lost.I was so careless with things.This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you lent to me last week.
翻译：我非常抱歉告诉你我把你上周借给我的宝贵的书弄丢了。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：They are connected with precious memories which the new ones can never have.
翻译：它们有着新书无法替代的宝贵记忆。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的定语从句。
【解答】Dear Frank
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you lent to me last week.【高分句型一】（道歉原因） I read it every day and intended to finish it next week.Last night when I came to my room，it was nowhere to be found.I will try to recover it as soon as possible.（事情经过） If I fail to find it，I will get a new book for you. （补偿）But I am afraid it can never take the place of the old one.Old books are like old friends，once lost，they can never be replaced.They are connected with precious memories which the new ones can never have.【高分句型二】And for this irrecoverable loss，I am to blame if I had been more careful，it would not have been lost.I was so careless with things.This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future.（经验教训）
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
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