期末培优 读后续写+概要专项练习（含答案与解析）2025-2026学年高一上学期英语人教版(2019)

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末培优 读后续写+概要
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 历城区校级月考）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．
Steve was the most amazing person in all of Minneapolis，and he was my cousin．By the age of 19，Steve was a star baseball player at the University of Minnesota．I wanted to be exactly like him．So when Steve asked me to go with him on a spring fishing trip in northern Minnesota，I was excited!
After planning the trip，we gathered clothes and supplies，and began our great adventure．We reached the Superior National Forest in northern Minnesota by early evening．On our way to the campsite，Steve pointed to a small house faraway in one of the mountains，saying that it was the ranger station （护林站） where the forester worked．
Finally，after a long walk，we reached the campsite and set up the camp as the sun was setting．Steve knew all the tricks of an experienced wilderness camper．After we gathered enough wood from the forest，he started the campfire using only stone and steel ﹣ no matches．For supper we feasted on freeze﹣dried beef，wild rice and pea soup．I ate greedily after all that work．
Tired enough，we climbed into our sleeping bags early and talked about our plans for fishing the next day．We were still talking quietly when a sudden north wind picked up；the temperature dropped and it began to snow．Steve found a way to increase the temperature inside the tent．He dragged a log （原木） from the forest to the opposite side of the campfire．Then he wrapped （包裹） aluminum foil （铝箔） around the log．The heat from the fire reflected off the foil and into the tent．Soon images of lake fish were filling my dreams．
The snow had stopped，but sometime later a powerful wind must have kicked up the flames of our dying fire．I was abruptly awakened by Steve．Our tent was on fire．Frightened，I ran out of the tent immediately．The tent collapsed （倒塌） with Steve inside．Without any thought of endangering myself，I reached into the burning tent and pulled him to the icy lake．Fortunately，we were not seriously hurt．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．
Paragraph 1：
Later，as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm，we considered our difficult situation．_____
Paragraph 2：
Suddenly，we heard a noise in the forest．______
2．读后续写
Teenagers around Steve were interested in playing video games and they often shared their experiences about how to play well.Steve was a very clever boy.He was good at playing games.He would win any game he played.He won so many times that everyone around him saw him as a champion.
In fact，Steve not only became an expert at all kinds of skills but he was also good at cheating because he couldn't stand losing to anyone.He became so skilled at cheating that he could play and win any game by cheating without even being noticed.Every time he beat other boys，he would be proud to see others admiring him and praising his excellent sill.He enjoyed that feeling.
No one wants to play with someone who is always going to win.As time went by，almost no one around Steve wanted to play with him.But there was one poor boy named Tom who would always play with him.At first，Tom had few skills and Steve beat him easily.Gradually，Tom learned more skills.It was still a piece of cake for Steve to beat him.One day，Steve found that Tom became more skilled and it was a challenge to win the game.In order to win，Steve used his tricks.Tom was defeated.Since then，the tricks helped Steve win any game.Although Tom lost face，he would always accept Steve's challenges.Champion Steve enjoyed himself at poor Tom's expense and always made that poor boy look funny as he lost.
One day，Steve got bored with just playing around and thought that he could win bigger games.
So he decided to apply for the video game championship as he thought that there he would find some top players that could match him.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
At the Championship，he was excited to have a chance to show off his skills.
Finally，the competition ended and the champion's name was called out.
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Being able to communicate effectively with others is an essential skill for people of all ages.Most people can benefit from improving their communication skills.Some of the best tips for developing communication skills are to learn and practice effective listening，seek feedback（反馈）and use appropriate body language.
One step to developing and improving communication is to learn and practice effective active listening skills.Active listening involves a person listening carefully and attentively to the person speaking，restating what the other person has said and listening more than talking.This kind of listening has more of a focus on understanding and encouragement than on giving advice and solutions，unless they are requested.
Another tip is to use feedback for different types of communication.Before sending out an important email to a boss or colleague，for example，it can be helpful to have another person to read the email for correctness.People giving speeches and presentations are always well advised to practice them before an audience and to ask for feedback before giving the real speech or presentation.Practicing communication and seeking feedback in these ways can help to ensure that there will be no improper expressions in your email.
It is also essential to use appropriate body language and eye contact.These nonverbal cues can convey the feeling behind what people are saying and should match their words.What you should keep in mind is that you should know when and how to use them.Using direct eye contact and body language that indicates openness，like uncrossed arms，can help to get across that a person is ready and willing to listen and speak openly.
4．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
When you are learning English，listening，speaking and writing are important，but reading can also be very helpful.When you read，you can not only learn some new words，but also you can learn how to use these English words.When you read，it gives you a good example for writing.
Read something that you can（more or less） understand.If you need to stop every three words to use a dictionary，it is not interesting.Reading books with a reasonable number of new words is very important.If there are four or five new words on a page，write them in your notebook.But you don't have to write them while you read.Instead，try to guess their meaning as you read，and mark them with a pen.Then come back when you have finished reading to look them up in a dictionary and write them in your own vocabulary book.Then try to remember them.
You should develop a good habit of reading.For example，read for a short time once a day.Fifteen minutes every day is better than two hours every Sunday.Fix（固定）a time to read and keep to it.You could read for fifteen minutes when you go to bed，or when you get up or at lunchtime.
There are a variety of books in the bookstore，so what kinds of books should you choose？Choose a book or a magazine about a subject that you like，because you are going to spend time and money reading it.So，choose an interesting book.You can also read newspapers.There are many English newspapers in China，for example，21st Century Teens.It is easy enough for you to understand it.There is something interesting in it.
5．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的短文．
Want to know how to survive a plane crash？What about a terrorist attack？To put your mind at ease in nearly any situation，you can almost guarantee your survival if you never leave the house without 3 necessary items，i．e．a lighter（打火机），a lifestraw（救命吸管） and a raincoat．
Right off the place full of danger，your first instinct（本能） might be to search for help the minute you realize you're in trouble．But survival experts insist you should stay where you are until help finds you，instead；doing so will make it easier for the search and rescue teams to locate your location．
What should you do until then，you ask？Prepare to hunker down（盘腿坐下） for the long run．That's where your three pieces of survival necessities come into play，Stewart says．
For one，you should have something to start a fire on you at all times．Fire﹣starting tools are inexpensive to purchase，and you can easily carry them around in a backpack or pant pocket．But even without a fancy item，all you really need is something to light the first flame．
"You can use cotton balls covered in petroleum jelly（凡士林油） as a fire starter，" Stewart told USA TODAY． "They are water resistant and will start a fire with just a spark．"
Second，you'll need something to make your drinking water fit to drink，such as a canteen（饭盒） that can boil water．Stewart recommends buying a ＄20 lifestraw，which "can be struck into the muddiest pool of water you can find and you suck the water out like a straw．" Any doubt？It could still save your life，Stewart says．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头词或句子已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．
"I always say that your life depends on your water source，" he said．______
You can keep all three items with you when you are away from your home．_______
6．（2022 南京模拟）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A long time ago，there was a huge apple tree.A little boy loved to come and play with it every day.He climbed to the tree top，ate the apples，have a rest under the shadow...He loved the tree and the tree loved him.
Time went by and the little boy had grown up and he no longer played around the tree every day.One day，the boy came back to the tree，looking quite sad."Come and play with me!" the tree asked the boy."I am no longer a kid.I don't play around the trees anymore，" the boy replied，"I want toys.I need money to buy them.""Sorry，I don't have money but you can pick all my apples and sell them.So you will have money." The boy was so excited.He grabbed all the apples and left happily.
One day，the boy returned and the tree was so excited."Come and play with me!" the tree said."I don't have time to play.I have to work for my family.We need a house to live in.Can you help me？""Sorry，but I don't have a house.But you can cut off my branches to build your house." So the boy cut all the branches off the trees and left happily.The tree was glad to see him happy but felt lonely without the boy.
One hot summer，the boy returned and the tree was delighted."Come and play with me!" the tree said."I am sad and getting tired.I want to go sailing to relax myself.Can you give me a boat？""Use my trunk to build your boat.You can sail far away and be happy." So the boy cut the tree trunk to make a boat.He went sailing and never showed up for a long time.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
Finally，the boy returned after he left for so many years.___________.
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This is a story of everyone.The tree is actually your parents.___________.
7．（2024秋 荆州区校级期中）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．
Why do earthquakes happen？Scientists believe that the surface of the earth is covered by a number of moving plates．Sometimes two plates move towards and push against each other．Sometimes they stop for years but at other times they jump and an earthquake is felt．Because of the movements of these plates，California，China and Japan have a lot of earthquakes．You can see the result in San Francisco where the Pacific plate meets the North American plate．When the 1906 earthquake happened，the Pacific plate jumped 5 to 6 metres to the north．
China is a country where many earthquakes happen．The Pacific plate is pushing China from the east and the Indian plate is pushing China from the southwest．The power of this movement created the Himalayas and Mount Qomolongma．It now causes earthquakes in China．We cannot stop earthquakes but we can do things to make sure they do not destroy whole cities．First it is not a good idea to build houses along the line where two plates meet．Second，if you think there may be an earthquake，make sure to build houses on rock rather than sand．Third，you must make the houses as strong as possible．Weak buildings will fall down in an earthquake，but strong ones may stay up．
8．阅读下列材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The highway closed down in both directions due to flooding，leaving thousands of people having no way to return home.Hundreds of people had been trapped for at least 30 hours since the road was cut.
One benefit was that there was a short road tunnel（隧道） that had provided shelter from the pouring rain as well as some lighting after nightfall.So how was the situation that people faced depends on how well they stored food.A man，who was driving a truck full of raw（生的） chicken leaving for center supermarket，opened his truck's door and shared the chicken around by dinner time.Many people became volunteers to cook the raw chicken by the tools which were found in their cars.Seeing this，I quickly looked for cooking tools in my car.Finally，I got a tool to light a fire successfully.Besides，I found some snacks to share.We encouraged each other and did what we could.Soon，the dinner was ready.
注意：续写词数应为50左右。
A plate of delicious chicken was handed to me by the truck driver._________
9．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．
When a tornado struck a small town nearby， many families were left completely ruined． One Sunday，a particular picture especially touched me． A young woman stood in front of an entirely ruined home． A young boy，seven or eight years old， stood at her side，eyes downcast．
Clutching（突然抓住） at her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera， eyes wide with confusion and fear． The article that went with the picture gave the clothing sizes of each family member． With growing interest， I noticed that their sizes closely matched ours． This would be a good opportunity to teach my children to help those less lucky than themselves． I taped the picture of the young family to our refrigerator，explaining their difficulties to my seven﹣year﹣old twins，Brad and Brett，and to three﹣year﹣old Meghan．
"These poor people now have nothing，" I said．"We'll share what we have with them．" I brought three large boxes and placed them on the living room floor， encouraging the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their less favorite things． Meghan watched seriously， as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with goods and foods．
Meghan walked up with Lucy， her much﹣loved doll， hugging it tightly to her chest． She stopped in front of the box， gave her doll a final kiss， and then laid her gently on top of the other toys．"Oh，honey，" I said．"You don't have to give Lucy．You love her so much．" Meghan nodded seriously， "Lucy makes me happy， Mommy． Maybe she will make that little girl happy，too．"
注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为90左右；
2．续写一段，该段的开头语已为你写好．
The boys watched， open﹣mouthed， when their sister placed her favorite doll in the box． ___________
10．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Speed is very important in avalanche （雪崩）rescues.There will be narrow chances to escape if a skier is buried for 30 minutes or more.Now that 30 minutes can mean the difference between life and death for a skier lost on a snowy mountain，most people would depend on lifesaving dogs.
Noble works as a rescue team member in a vacation land，California.He tells us，"Dogs run fastest when an accident happens." His partner Wylee，a lifesaving dog，can search an accident scene the size of a football field.It only needs 5 to 10 minutes.However，5 rescue team members have to spend a couple of hours in the same area.
Apart from its excellent speed，Noble chooses Wylee as his partner partly because it weighs only about half what other kinds of dogs weigh.Rescue team members have to carry their dogs to search sites in addition to carrying 60 pound backpacks with food，water and other equipment.The dogs need the lift so that don't get tired before they start working.
There aren't adequate data on how often dogs take part in avalanche searches or how often they are able to help local people in danger.But the dogs don't save that many people.That's because there aren't that many to save.A quarter of people in danger die from serious injuries before the snow stops moving.Of those buried who weren't killed by injuries，half die within 20 minutes.If there is a chance of rescue，though，the dogs also cut search time for the remains.
Erica Mueller，a famous director，wanted to see how the lifesaving dogs worked，so she volunteered to spend part of an hour in a roomy snow cave waiting to be found.She was armed with a radio and was wearing several layers to stay warm.After being rescued by Wylee，she said，"I can't talk like a survivor，but it was definitely a cool way to see how well trained those dogs are."
11．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。续 写的词数应为150左右。
Cold December wind passed right through my worn coat.I might have wished to be at home，but those days it wasn't much warmer there than it was standing at the bus stop.Mama had written a letter to the electric company explaining that we were late paying our bill because my sister was ill and Daddy had been laid off，but the power was cut off anyway.That's why we were on our way into town to pay the bill in person.
I sat close to Buddy Earl for warmth on the bus when it finally showed up.The walk to the electric company office from the bus stop was only a couple of blocks，but it was a relief to get inside.
After settling the bill Mama brought us over to Rich's department store.There was Santa in a big wooden chair. "You two go talk to him，" she said. "Just don't expect to get all you ask for." Buddy Earl and I joined the line of children waiting，and Mama sat on a bench nearby.
Then Santa started talking with us and asked us what we wanted.Santa reached in his pocket，pulled out a notepad and scribbled something with a pencil. "Is your mother with you two？" he asked.I pointed to the bench. "That's our mama over there.She's waiting for us to finish." Santa lifted Buddy Earl off his knee. "Could you ask her to come and talk to me？" he said.
Later，Mama and Santa talked for a few minutes.Santa took a couple more notes.Then Mama brought us home.We didn't dare ask about their private conversation.Christmas morning Mama and Daddy gathered us around our tree to give thanks for all we had.There were no toys from Santa under the tree.No presents at all，really.But that was okay，especially since we had electricity again.I felt pretty good as I took my seat at the kitchen table.
Paragraph 1：
Suddenly，there was a knock at the door.____________
Paragraph2：
Mama and Daddy looked at each other，and she unpacked the food from the box.___________
12．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
A trained Search and Rescue （SAR） dog can help us locate victims of natural disasters，accidents and crime.So，do you want to train your dog for search and rescue work？A dog that is friendly and approachable makes for a fantastic search dog.While it is true that training a puppy（小狗）is definitely easier，it doesn't mean that training a grown dog is a lost cause.Puppies need to interact with several humans of all ages as much as possible，so that they become more approachable.
Take your dog out on regular walks in the park，make him run and sweat regularly.SAR dogs are required to be good at swimming，hiking and walking in various areas that aren't safe.Ideally，this dog needs to be exposed to all the elements of nature so that the conditions during an actual task don't take him by surprise.
An average dog can hear sounds between frequencies ranging from 40 Hz（赫兹）to 60 kHz，which is really sharp.A SAR dog，on several occasions，needs to take helicopter，snowmobile or speed boat rides，which can be really noisy for their sensitive ears.Dogs that are used to harsh sounds perform well under any circumstances，and those sharp ears always come in handy to locate sounds that even humans can't hear.
Following a scent（气味）is a quality that comes naturally to all dogs.To train your dog to follow the scent，you'll need a piece of cloth and three or four small buckets（桶）.The buckets should be placed close to each other in the upside down position.Then，take the piece of cloth and let the dog smell it.This piece of cloth should be taken away from the dog and placed under one of the buckets.
Allow the dog to smell your clothing and secretly hide in another room.Let another person command the dog to find you.When the dog has found you successfully，a reward in the form of a treat should follow.As your training advances，you must repeat this exercise using different people，and on different outdoor locations，under varied weather conditions and at different time of the day.
13．阅读下面的短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．
"He who bears the greatest hardship becomes the greatest man．" This idiom shows Chinese people's traditional belief in the vital role that hardship plays in a person's life as they grow up．But today，as our lives have greatly improved，do we still need this socalled "hardship education"？
"We definitely do，" said Wang Weiqiong，mother of a 15﹣year﹣old girl in Jiangxi， "Many children take everything for granted，as they've never known how difficult it is to make money．"
Wang is not alone．According to a recent survey of 2，017 people done by China Youth Daily．81.8 percent of the interviewees supported hardship education including experiencing life in poor areas，outdoor training，taking parttime jobs，and doing housework．
Qiao Yu，from Tianjin Foreign Languages School，also supports the idea． "Hardship helps us grow and be prepared for the difficulties of society，" said the 18﹣year﹣old，who worked in a cake store this summer．
But while it contributes to students' development， "hardship education shouldn't be seen as simply making students suffer，" Sun Yunxiao，deputy director of the China Youth and Children Research Center told China Youth Daily． "It should follow teenagers' growth．" Sun said that students could also do sports to learn to face difficulties，for doing sports can greatly strengthen their bodies and minds．
14．（2022秋 新城区校级月考）读后续写
"Class，please line up!Let's welcome Marti，" said Ms.Baroni，our taekwondo（跆拳道） teacher.
I was excited that my best friend Marti would be taking lessons，too.
Everyone said， "Hi." Marti went red in the face.
"You don't need to be shy here，" I said to Marti in a quiet voice. "Everyone's really nice.
After warm﹣up exercises ，Ms.Baroni divided everyone into groups.Even though I was a level above Marti，Ms.Baroni told us to practice together. "Jenna，why don't you show Marti some basic kicks？"
I said sure and showed her a front kick.Marti copied it.Her kick was as high as my shoulder. "Great job，Marti!Let me show you something，" said Ms.Baroni.She then spent the next five minutes working with Marti.I leaned （倚靠） against the wall and watched Marti copy everything Ms.
Baroni did.The more Marti did，the more praise she received from Ms.Baroni.
I practiced my form half﹣heartedly. "What if Marti became better than me？What if Marti became Ms.Baroni's favorite student？" I couldn't help thinking.
"Watch your form!"
"Who is Ms.Baroni speaking to？" I wondered.I turned and saw Ms.Baroni looking directly at me.Nothing could have been worse.
At the end of class，I took my bag and hurried outside to find my mom.I had planned to wait and say goodbye to Marti，but now I wanted to be alone.For the next several weeks，Marti continued to impress our teacher with her skills.Honestly，I felt a little jealous （忌妒的） of her.And as Marti turned into a star student，I became less and less excited about taekwondo.
One day，as we walked down the hallway at school，Marti said， "Ms.Baroni thinks I'm ready to take the test for the next level."
I was surprised. "It's harder than you think.Two judges other than Ms.Baroni will give you points，" I said.
Marti looked disappointed （失望的）."You don't think I'm good enough to take the test yet？"
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
I felt my face get hot，and I explained， "I didn't say that."
"I haven't been a very good friend，" I thought sadly.
15．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Whether it's joining a school club，going to a friend's birthday party，or travelling by train，we can meet new people anywhere and anytime in our lives.However，many of us feel awkward when meeting people for the first time，especially when we aren't quite sure what to say.The situation feels cold，even icy.
"Breaking the ice" is a term widely used in the English﹣speaking countries to describe a small talk skill that can help save a conversation from certain failure.
So where do you even begin？Well，a good start is to accept that it is perfectly normal to feel a little nervous when talking to someone for the first time.They might look scary，but they could turn out to be the nicest person you've ever met.
You might think that breaking the ice is difficult.But sometimes just a simple "hello"，followed by a three﹣second smile，can make all the difference.
Complimenting（恭维）someone on their clothes or accessories（饰品）is also a great，easy way to break the ice.You might say， "I love your jacket.Where did you buy it？"
Being in an uncomfortable or unpleasant situation with someone new might feel terrible，but it can actually be one of the best icebreakers.By focusing on the situation you come together to fight the common enemy：the long bathroom queue，for example，or the overcrowded bus.
You can make observations too."What kind of drink is that？""That's a lovely name.What does it mean？""Do you study here too？" There are opportunities all around you to ask questions that don't seem strange，as long as you have some follow﹣up questions in mind.
If you're feeling extra bold（大胆的），make a joke.Jokes can be difficult to master but if you get them right，they show the lovely and smart side of your character. "What's your name？""Well，people usually call me Mike，but you can call me tonight."
期末培优 读后续写+概要
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 历城区校级月考）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．
Steve was the most amazing person in all of Minneapolis，and he was my cousin．By the age of 19，Steve was a star baseball player at the University of Minnesota．I wanted to be exactly like him．So when Steve asked me to go with him on a spring fishing trip in northern Minnesota，I was excited!
After planning the trip，we gathered clothes and supplies，and began our great adventure．We reached the Superior National Forest in northern Minnesota by early evening．On our way to the campsite，Steve pointed to a small house faraway in one of the mountains，saying that it was the ranger station （护林站） where the forester worked．
Finally，after a long walk，we reached the campsite and set up the camp as the sun was setting．Steve knew all the tricks of an experienced wilderness camper．After we gathered enough wood from the forest，he started the campfire using only stone and steel ﹣ no matches．For supper we feasted on freeze﹣dried beef，wild rice and pea soup．I ate greedily after all that work．
Tired enough，we climbed into our sleeping bags early and talked about our plans for fishing the next day．We were still talking quietly when a sudden north wind picked up；the temperature dropped and it began to snow．Steve found a way to increase the temperature inside the tent．He dragged a log （原木） from the forest to the opposite side of the campfire．Then he wrapped （包裹） aluminum foil （铝箔） around the log．The heat from the fire reflected off the foil and into the tent．Soon images of lake fish were filling my dreams．
The snow had stopped，but sometime later a powerful wind must have kicked up the flames of our dying fire．I was abruptly awakened by Steve．Our tent was on fire．Frightened，I ran out of the tent immediately．The tent collapsed （倒塌） with Steve inside．Without any thought of endangering myself，I reached into the burning tent and pulled him to the icy lake．Fortunately，we were not seriously hurt．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．
Paragraph 1：
Later，as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm，we considered our difficult situation．_____
Paragraph 2：
Suddenly，we heard a noise in the forest．______
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本题是一篇文章续写，写作要求已经给出，包括：1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2）应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．通过阅读所给文章可知：我的表弟．19岁的时候，史蒂夫是明尼苏达大学的明星棒球运动员．我想和他一模一样．所以当史蒂夫让我和他一起去明尼苏达州北部钓鱼时，我是兴奋的！在计划好这次旅行后，我们收集了衣服和用品，开始了我们的伟大冒险．下雪了，温度很低．史蒂夫找到了一种提高帐篷内温度的方法．他拖着沉重的步子．从森林到营火的对面，他用铝箔包住了一根木头，可是我们的帐篷着火了．幸运的是，我们没有受到严重的伤害．续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：后来，当我们站在燃烧的帐篷旁取暖时，我们考虑到了我们的困难处境．所以本段应该继续写考虑到我们的困难之后的做法．第二段开头是：突然，我们听到森林里有声音．所以本段要继续写声音来自哪里，又发生了什么．写作时考生需要注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采．
高分秘诀
□重点短语
①as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm当我们站在燃烧的帐篷旁取暖时．as当…时候，引导时间状语从句．
②far away from 远离．
③including包括．现在分词作定语．
④rather than 而不是．
□高分句型
高分句型一
We were in the middle of nowhere，wearing only underwear，with our supplies burnt into ashes，including our cellphones．我们不在任何地方，只穿着内衣，我们的补给被烧成灰烬，包括我们的手机．wearing是现在分词做伴随状语，with的复合结构的使用，增添了文章的色彩．
高分句型二
We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to the ranger station，where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents．我们跳上暖和的车，森林管理员把我们送到了护林员站，在那里我们得到了补偿．where引导的定语从句是文章的一个亮点．
【解答】One possible version：
Later，as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm，①we considered our difficult situation．Our campsite was in the deep of the forest，really far away from ②the highway．We were in the middle of nowhere，wearing only underwear，with our supplies burnt into ashes，including③our cellphones．（高分句型一）Even Steve was unsure what to do next．The only thing we could do was just sitting in the cold air and wondering how to get out of the forest．（要点1 帐篷着火）
Suddenly，we heard a noise in the forest．Anxiously we listened and stared into the darkness．A jeep appeared．A forester had spotted the light from the fire and had come to have a check．We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to the ranger station，where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents．（高分句型二）Steve and I had many more camping adventures from then on，but it was on this trip that Steve began to treat me more like a friend and equal，rather than ④a younger cousin．Our friendship continues to this day．（要点2 有人来营救）
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务．
2．读后续写
Teenagers around Steve were interested in playing video games and they often shared their experiences about how to play well.Steve was a very clever boy.He was good at playing games.He would win any game he played.He won so many times that everyone around him saw him as a champion.
In fact，Steve not only became an expert at all kinds of skills but he was also good at cheating because he couldn't stand losing to anyone.He became so skilled at cheating that he could play and win any game by cheating without even being noticed.Every time he beat other boys，he would be proud to see others admiring him and praising his excellent sill.He enjoyed that feeling.
No one wants to play with someone who is always going to win.As time went by，almost no one around Steve wanted to play with him.But there was one poor boy named Tom who would always play with him.At first，Tom had few skills and Steve beat him easily.Gradually，Tom learned more skills.It was still a piece of cake for Steve to beat him.One day，Steve found that Tom became more skilled and it was a challenge to win the game.In order to win，Steve used his tricks.Tom was defeated.Since then，the tricks helped Steve win any game.Although Tom lost face，he would always accept Steve's challenges.Champion Steve enjoyed himself at poor Tom's expense and always made that poor boy look funny as he lost.
One day，Steve got bored with just playing around and thought that he could win bigger games.
So he decided to apply for the video game championship as he thought that there he would find some top players that could match him.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
At the Championship，he was excited to have a chance to show off his skills.
Finally，the competition ended and the champion's name was called out.
【答案】At the Championship，he was excited to have a chance to show off his skills.When the competition started，everyone made all their efforts to play best.Steve also tried all means to play but just then he realized that he couldn't make it.That was because he had got used to using cheats and tricks.Although he was a good player，without his usual tricks，he could not make it to beat anyone.He felt awkward.Soon he had to leave the competition.He sat there，sad and ashamed.
Finally the competition ended and the champion name was called out.Steve was surprised to know that it was the "poor"boy Tom who won the title.Steve couldn't believe it.After all，he had always beaten Tom before.Then he thought a lot and realized Tom had learned quite a lot from failures and made great progress.From then on，Steve decided to give up the desire of winning all the time.He was quite happy to lose sometimes，because that was when he would learn and improve his skills.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了史蒂夫周围的青少年都对玩电子游戏很感兴趣，史蒂夫不仅成为了各种技能的专家，他还糟长作弊，史蒂夫身边几乎没有人愿意和他一起玩，有一个可怜的男孩叫汤姆，他总是和他一起玩，史蒂夫用作弊的手段打败汤姆，后来史蒂夫决定申请电子游戏冠军。
高分句型一 Steve was surprised to know that it was the "poor" boy Tom who won the title.
翻译：史蒂夫很惊讶地知道，是"可怜"的男孩汤姆赢得了冠军。
分析：句中使用了连接词that引导的宾语从句和强调句。
高分句型二 He was quite happy to lose sometimes，because that was when he would learn and improve his skills.
翻译：有时他很高兴输了，因为那是他学习和提高技能的时候。
分析：句中使用了连接词because引导的原因状语从句和when引导的表语从句。
【解答】At the Championship，he was excited to have a chance to show off his skills.When the competition started，everyone made all their efforts to play best.Steve also tried all means to play but just then he realized that he couldn't make it.That was because he had got used to using cheats and tricks.Although he was a good player，without his usual tricks，he could not make it to beat anyone.He felt awkward.Soon he had to leave the competition.He sat there，sad and ashamed.（他在比赛中的情况）
Finally the competition ended and the champion name was called out.Steve was surprised to know that it was the "poor" boy Tom who won the title.【高分句型一】Steve couldn't believe it.After all，he had always beaten Tom before.Then he thought a lot and realized Tom had learned quite a lot from failures and made great progress.From then on，Steve decided to give up the desire of winning all the time.He was quite happy to lose sometimes，because that was when he would learn and improve his skills.【高分句型二】（比赛的结果和史蒂夫的所感所想及改变）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Being able to communicate effectively with others is an essential skill for people of all ages.Most people can benefit from improving their communication skills.Some of the best tips for developing communication skills are to learn and practice effective listening，seek feedback（反馈）and use appropriate body language.
One step to developing and improving communication is to learn and practice effective active listening skills.Active listening involves a person listening carefully and attentively to the person speaking，restating what the other person has said and listening more than talking.This kind of listening has more of a focus on understanding and encouragement than on giving advice and solutions，unless they are requested.
Another tip is to use feedback for different types of communication.Before sending out an important email to a boss or colleague，for example，it can be helpful to have another person to read the email for correctness.People giving speeches and presentations are always well advised to practice them before an audience and to ask for feedback before giving the real speech or presentation.Practicing communication and seeking feedback in these ways can help to ensure that there will be no improper expressions in your email.
It is also essential to use appropriate body language and eye contact.These nonverbal cues can convey the feeling behind what people are saying and should match their words.What you should keep in mind is that you should know when and how to use them.Using direct eye contact and body language that indicates openness，like uncrossed arms，can help to get across that a person is ready and willing to listen and speak openly.
【答案】There are many ways to improve our communication skills，three of which are effective：listening，seeking feedback and using appropriate body language.While listening，we should listen carefully instead of giving advice unless asked.Seeking feedback from a third party can help avoid improper expressions.To use body language in our communication，we should remember when and how to use it properly.
【分析】本文讲述了如何与人有效沟通。
高分句型一：There are many ways to improve our communication skills，three of which are effective：listening，seeking feedback and using appropriate body language.
翻译：这里有很多提高沟通技能的方法，其中三个有效方法：倾听，找反馈和使用合适的身体语言。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：To use body language in our communication，we should remember when and how to use it properly.
翻译：为了在交流中使用身体语言，我们应该记住什么时候并且如何正确的使用它。
分析：这句话使用了不定式To use body language in our communication做目的状语。
【解答】There are many ways to improve our communication skills，three of which are effective：listening，seeking feedback and using appropriate body language.【高分句型一】（要点1）While listening，we should listen carefully instead of giving advice unless asked.（要点2）Seeking feedback from a third party can help avoid improper expressions.（要点3）To use body language in our communication，we should remember when and how to use it properly.【高分句型二】（要点4）
【点评】需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
4．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
When you are learning English，listening，speaking and writing are important，but reading can also be very helpful.When you read，you can not only learn some new words，but also you can learn how to use these English words.When you read，it gives you a good example for writing.
Read something that you can（more or less） understand.If you need to stop every three words to use a dictionary，it is not interesting.Reading books with a reasonable number of new words is very important.If there are four or five new words on a page，write them in your notebook.But you don't have to write them while you read.Instead，try to guess their meaning as you read，and mark them with a pen.Then come back when you have finished reading to look them up in a dictionary and write them in your own vocabulary book.Then try to remember them.
You should develop a good habit of reading.For example，read for a short time once a day.Fifteen minutes every day is better than two hours every Sunday.Fix（固定）a time to read and keep to it.You could read for fifteen minutes when you go to bed，or when you get up or at lunchtime.
There are a variety of books in the bookstore，so what kinds of books should you choose？Choose a book or a magazine about a subject that you like，because you are going to spend time and money reading it.So，choose an interesting book.You can also read newspapers.There are many English newspapers in China，for example，21st Century Teens.It is easy enough for you to understand it.There is something interesting in it.
【答案】Reading is an important way to help you learn English well.Here are a few tips on reading books.Firstly，while reading books at the right level，you should try to increase the number of your new words.Besides，it's very important for you to read regularly and form a good reading habit.Lastly，you should choose the books and newspapers that interest you most.
【分析】本文介绍了一些读书的建议。
高分句型一：Firstly，while reading books at the right level，you should try to increase the number of your new words.
翻译：首先，在阅读适当水平的书籍时，你应该设法增加你新词的数量。
分析：这句话使用了while引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Lastly，you should choose the books and newspapers that interest you most.
翻译：最后，你应该选择你最感兴趣的书和报纸。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的定语从句。
【解答】Reading is an important way to help you learn English well.Here are a few tips on reading books.（要点一）Firstly，while reading books at the right level，you should try to increase the number of your new words.【高分句型一】（要点二）Besides，it's very important for you to read regularly and form a good reading habit.（要点三）Lastly，you should choose the books and newspapers that interest you most.【高分句型二】（要点四）
【点评】书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上，也反映在书面形式上。一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，是别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，从而提高自己的得分档次。
5．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的短文．
Want to know how to survive a plane crash？What about a terrorist attack？To put your mind at ease in nearly any situation，you can almost guarantee your survival if you never leave the house without 3 necessary items，i．e．a lighter（打火机），a lifestraw（救命吸管） and a raincoat．
Right off the place full of danger，your first instinct（本能） might be to search for help the minute you realize you're in trouble．But survival experts insist you should stay where you are until help finds you，instead；doing so will make it easier for the search and rescue teams to locate your location．
What should you do until then，you ask？Prepare to hunker down（盘腿坐下） for the long run．That's where your three pieces of survival necessities come into play，Stewart says．
For one，you should have something to start a fire on you at all times．Fire﹣starting tools are inexpensive to purchase，and you can easily carry them around in a backpack or pant pocket．But even without a fancy item，all you really need is something to light the first flame．
"You can use cotton balls covered in petroleum jelly（凡士林油） as a fire starter，" Stewart told USA TODAY． "They are water resistant and will start a fire with just a spark．"
Second，you'll need something to make your drinking water fit to drink，such as a canteen（饭盒） that can boil water．Stewart recommends buying a ＄20 lifestraw，which "can be struck into the muddiest pool of water you can find and you suck the water out like a straw．" Any doubt？It could still save your life，Stewart says．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头词或句子已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．
"I always say that your life depends on your water source，" he said．______
You can keep all three items with you when you are away from your home．_______
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1．认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2．依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3．准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
If you are in a bad situation and have to drink water not fit to drink，you take the risk of drinking wild poisonous water，which can quickly kill you
本句是which引导的非限定性定语从句；意为：如果你处境不好，不得不喝不适合饮用的水，你就冒着喝有毒水的危险，这会很快杀死你．
高分句型二：
You can keep them in a backpack if you're hiking or camping，or even a car if you're traveling on the road．
本句是if引导的条件状语从句；意为：如果你正在徒步旅行或露营，你可以把它们放在背包里，如果你在路上旅行，你甚至可以把它们放在背包里．
【解答】Paragraph 1：
"I always say that your life depends on your water source，"he said．"If you are in a bad situation and have to drink water not fit to drink，you take the risk of drinking wild poisonous water，which can quickly kill you（高分句型一）．"In this case，a lifestraw will come into play．Finally，Stewart recommends having a raincoat，or anything that can be used to protect you against the weather．Even food should take a back seat to these three necessary items，he says．"Everyone gets really worried about food，but the human body is designed to last a long time without food．When it comes to survival necessary items，food's on the bottom of the list，"he said（你的生命取决于你的水源）．
Paragraph 2：
You can keep all three items with you when you are away from your home．You can keep them in a backpack if you're hiking or camping，or even a car if you're traveling on the road（高分句型二）．But in a word，the best thing you can do to ensure your own survival happens before you even leave（在你离开之前确保你自己的生存）．
【点评】开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．
6．（2022 南京模拟）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A long time ago，there was a huge apple tree.A little boy loved to come and play with it every day.He climbed to the tree top，ate the apples，have a rest under the shadow...He loved the tree and the tree loved him.
Time went by and the little boy had grown up and he no longer played around the tree every day.One day，the boy came back to the tree，looking quite sad."Come and play with me!" the tree asked the boy."I am no longer a kid.I don't play around the trees anymore，" the boy replied，"I want toys.I need money to buy them.""Sorry，I don't have money but you can pick all my apples and sell them.So you will have money." The boy was so excited.He grabbed all the apples and left happily.
One day，the boy returned and the tree was so excited."Come and play with me!" the tree said."I don't have time to play.I have to work for my family.We need a house to live in.Can you help me？""Sorry，but I don't have a house.But you can cut off my branches to build your house." So the boy cut all the branches off the trees and left happily.The tree was glad to see him happy but felt lonely without the boy.
One hot summer，the boy returned and the tree was delighted."Come and play with me!" the tree said."I am sad and getting tired.I want to go sailing to relax myself.Can you give me a boat？""Use my trunk to build your boat.You can sail far away and be happy." So the boy cut the tree trunk to make a boat.He went sailing and never showed up for a long time.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
Finally，the boy returned after he left for so many years.___________.
Paragraph 2：
This is a story of everyone.The tree is actually your parents.___________.
【答案】Paragraph 1
Many years later，the boy finally returned.Tired and sad，he returned to the apple tree. Seeing him，the tree said， "I'm sorry，boy，but now I have nothing for you." "I don't intend to get anything from you.With time going by，I come to realize nothing is better than a comfortable place to rest." replied the boy.Hearing this，the tree smiled with relief，adding， "my dying trunk is suitable for you.Please come here and rest." The boy did as told and the tree smiled heartily.
Paragraph 2
The apple tree is our mother.When we are young，she tries to attend to families and play with us.After growing up，we leave her for some reasons and only come back when in trouble.But she is always out there，devoting whatever she owns without complaint.It is our happiness，rather than rewards，that she desires for.Therefore，try to put ourselves in her situation and show concern for her.
【分析】本文讲述了小男孩和一棵苹果树的故事。
高分句型一：With time going by，I come to realize nothing is better than a comfortable place to rest.
翻译：随着时间的推移，我逐渐意识到没有什么比有一个舒适的地方休息更好了。
分析：这句话使用了with的复合结构，以及realize后省略that的宾语从句。
高分句型二：But she is always out there，devoting whatever she owns without complaint.
翻译：但她总是在那里，毫无怨言的奉献着她所拥有的一切。
分析：现在分词devoting whatever she owns without complaint做伴随状语。
【解答】Paragraph 1
Many years later，the boy finally returned.Tired and sad，he returned to the apple tree. Seeing him，the tree said， "I'm sorry，boy，but now I have nothing for you." "I don't intend to get anything from you.With time going by，I come to realize nothing is better than a comfortable place to rest."【高分句型一】 replied the boy.Hearing this，the tree smiled with relief，adding， "my dying trunk is suitable for you.Please come here and rest." The boy did as told and the tree smiled heartily.（描述这棵苹果树为这个人提供了最后的归宿）
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The apple tree is our mother.When we are young，she tries to attend to families and play with us.After growing up，we leave her for some reasons and only come back when in trouble.But she is always out there，devoting whatever she owns without complaint.【高分句型二】It is our happiness，rather than rewards，that she desires for.Therefore，try to put ourselves in her situation and show concern for her.（描述母亲和这棵苹果树的相似之处）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
7．（2024秋 荆州区校级期中）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．
Why do earthquakes happen？Scientists believe that the surface of the earth is covered by a number of moving plates．Sometimes two plates move towards and push against each other．Sometimes they stop for years but at other times they jump and an earthquake is felt．Because of the movements of these plates，California，China and Japan have a lot of earthquakes．You can see the result in San Francisco where the Pacific plate meets the North American plate．When the 1906 earthquake happened，the Pacific plate jumped 5 to 6 metres to the north．
China is a country where many earthquakes happen．The Pacific plate is pushing China from the east and the Indian plate is pushing China from the southwest．The power of this movement created the Himalayas and Mount Qomolongma．It now causes earthquakes in China．We cannot stop earthquakes but we can do things to make sure they do not destroy whole cities．First it is not a good idea to build houses along the line where two plates meet．Second，if you think there may be an earthquake，make sure to build houses on rock rather than sand．Third，you must make the houses as strong as possible．Weak buildings will fall down in an earthquake，but strong ones may stay up．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：Thus，in areas，like California，China and Japan，where different plates meet，earthquakes happen a lot．
译文：因此，在加利福尼亚、中国和日本等不同板块交汇的地区，地震经常发生．
分析：where引导定语从句．
高分句型二：To protect our cities from this deadly power，we'd better build houses in the regions with few earthquakes or on more solid bases if necessary，making them strong enough to survive earthquakes．
译文：为了保护我们的城市不受这种致命力量的破坏，我们最好在地震较少的地区建造房屋，或者在必要的时候建造更坚固的基础，使它们能够经受住地震的袭击．
分析：使用不定式作目的状语，现在分词作状语．
【解答】Earthquakes happen when two moving plates jump and push against each other．（地震的发生） Thus，in areas，like California，China and Japan，where different plates meet，earthquakes happen a lot．【高分句型一】（不同的板块） To protect our cities from this deadly power，we'd better build houses in the regions with few earthquakes or on more solid bases if necessary，making them strong enough to survive earthquakes．【高分句型二】（保护城市）
【点评】这是一篇概要类作文，写摘要主要包括三个步骤：（1）阅读；（2）写作；（3）修改成文．
第一步：阅读
A．认真阅读给定的原文材料．如果一遍不能理解，就多读两遍．阅读次数越多，你对原文的理解就越深刻．
B．给摘要起一个标题．用那些能概括文章主题思想的单词、短语或短句子作为标题．也可以采用文中的主题句作为标题．主题句往往出现在文章的开头或结尾．一个好标题有助于确定文章的中心思想．
C．现在，就该决定原文中哪些部分重要，哪些部分次重要了．对重要部分的主要观点进行概括．
D．简要地记下主要观点﹣﹣主题、标题、细节等你认为对概括摘要重要的东西．
第二步：动手写作
A．摘要应该只有原文的三分之一或四分之一长．因此首先数一下原文的字数，然后除以三，得到一个数字．摘要的字数可以少于这个数字，但是千万不能超过这个数字．
B．摘要应全部用自己的话完成．不要引用原文的句子．
C．应该遵循原文的逻辑顺序．这样你就不必重新组织观点、事实．
D．摘要必须全面、清晰地表明原文所载的信息，以便你的读者不需翻阅原文就可以完全掌握材料的原意．
8．阅读下列材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The highway closed down in both directions due to flooding，leaving thousands of people having no way to return home.Hundreds of people had been trapped for at least 30 hours since the road was cut.
One benefit was that there was a short road tunnel（隧道） that had provided shelter from the pouring rain as well as some lighting after nightfall.So how was the situation that people faced depends on how well they stored food.A man，who was driving a truck full of raw（生的） chicken leaving for center supermarket，opened his truck's door and shared the chicken around by dinner time.Many people became volunteers to cook the raw chicken by the tools which were found in their cars.Seeing this，I quickly looked for cooking tools in my car.Finally，I got a tool to light a fire successfully.Besides，I found some snacks to share.We encouraged each other and did what we could.Soon，the dinner was ready.
注意：续写词数应为50左右。
A plate of delicious chicken was handed to me by the truck driver._________
【答案】A plate of delicious chicken was handed to me by the truck driver.Tears filled my eyes，and I took the food and expressed my thanks sincerely.Every time he passed someone and handed out a piece of food，a smile lit up the face of the person around him.Finally，as the rain stopped，the people trapped here gradually got out of the situation.However，this experience left me a deep impression.I didn't expect that strangers could be so warm.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，讲述了由于洪水，作者和其他人被困在公路上，人们在路上相互帮助的故事。
高分句型一：Every time he passed someone and handed out a piece of food，a smile lit up the face of the person around him.
翻译：每次他路过某人并分发一块食物时，周围人的脸上都会露出笑容。
分析：本句使用了every time引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：I didn't expect that strangers could be so warm.
翻译：我没想到陌生人会这么热情。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】A plate of delicious chicken was handed to me by the truck driver.Tears filled my eyes，and I took the food and expressed my thanks sincerely.Every time he passed someone and handed out a piece of food，a smile lit up the face of the person around him.【高分句型一】Finally，as the rain stopped，the people trapped here gradually got out of the situation.However，this experience left me a deep impression.I didn't expect that strangers could be so warm.【高分句型二】（大家互相帮助以及作者的感想）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
9．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．
When a tornado struck a small town nearby， many families were left completely ruined． One Sunday，a particular picture especially touched me． A young woman stood in front of an entirely ruined home． A young boy，seven or eight years old， stood at her side，eyes downcast．
Clutching（突然抓住） at her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera， eyes wide with confusion and fear． The article that went with the picture gave the clothing sizes of each family member． With growing interest， I noticed that their sizes closely matched ours． This would be a good opportunity to teach my children to help those less lucky than themselves． I taped the picture of the young family to our refrigerator，explaining their difficulties to my seven﹣year﹣old twins，Brad and Brett，and to three﹣year﹣old Meghan．
"These poor people now have nothing，" I said．"We'll share what we have with them．" I brought three large boxes and placed them on the living room floor， encouraging the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their less favorite things． Meghan watched seriously， as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with goods and foods．
Meghan walked up with Lucy， her much﹣loved doll， hugging it tightly to her chest． She stopped in front of the box， gave her doll a final kiss， and then laid her gently on top of the other toys．"Oh，honey，" I said．"You don't have to give Lucy．You love her so much．" Meghan nodded seriously， "Lucy makes me happy， Mommy． Maybe she will make that little girl happy，too．"
注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为90左右；
2．续写一段，该段的开头语已为你写好．
The boys watched， open﹣mouthed， when their sister placed her favorite doll in the box． ___________
【答案】The boys watched， open﹣mouthed， when their sister placed her favorite doll in the box. Without a word， the boys rose and went to their rooms and came back carrying their favorite toys to the living room. Astonished， I realized that the boys had also recognised what little Meghan's action meant. I think all of them want to make these poor people happy like them. Seeing that， I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes， replacing it with the new jacket. I hoped the young woman in the picture would love it as much as I did. What Meghan did taught me that the true spirit of donation is to give with your heart.
【分析】高分句型一：Seeing that， I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes， replacing it with the new jacket.
译文：看到这一点，我把旧夹克从衣服盒里拿了下来，换上了新夹克。
分析：这句话使用现在分词作状语。
高分句型二：What Meghan did taught me that the true spirit of donation is to give with your heart.
译文：梅根教会我，真正的捐赠精神是用心去奉献。
分析：这句话使用what引导主语从句，that引导宾语从句。
【解答】The boys watched， open﹣mouthed， when their sister placed her favorite doll in the box. Without a word， the boys rose and went to their rooms and came back carrying their favorite toys to the living room. Astonished， I realized that the boys had also recognised what little Meghan's action meant. I think all of them want to make these poor people happy like them. Seeing that， I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes， replacing it with the new jacket. 【高分句型一】I hoped the young woman in the picture would love it as much as I did. What Meghan did taught me that the true spirit of donation is to give with your heart.【高分句型二】（ Meghan用自己的行动告诉作者捐赠的真正含义）
【点评】解题方法点拨（1）品读原文．确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索．如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"．
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语．续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"．
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路．同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容．
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后．最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿．拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯．
10．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Speed is very important in avalanche （雪崩）rescues.There will be narrow chances to escape if a skier is buried for 30 minutes or more.Now that 30 minutes can mean the difference between life and death for a skier lost on a snowy mountain，most people would depend on lifesaving dogs.
Noble works as a rescue team member in a vacation land，California.He tells us，"Dogs run fastest when an accident happens." His partner Wylee，a lifesaving dog，can search an accident scene the size of a football field.It only needs 5 to 10 minutes.However，5 rescue team members have to spend a couple of hours in the same area.
Apart from its excellent speed，Noble chooses Wylee as his partner partly because it weighs only about half what other kinds of dogs weigh.Rescue team members have to carry their dogs to search sites in addition to carrying 60 pound backpacks with food，water and other equipment.The dogs need the lift so that don't get tired before they start working.
There aren't adequate data on how often dogs take part in avalanche searches or how often they are able to help local people in danger.But the dogs don't save that many people.That's because there aren't that many to save.A quarter of people in danger die from serious injuries before the snow stops moving.Of those buried who weren't killed by injuries，half die within 20 minutes.If there is a chance of rescue，though，the dogs also cut search time for the remains.
Erica Mueller，a famous director，wanted to see how the lifesaving dogs worked，so she volunteered to spend part of an hour in a roomy snow cave waiting to be found.She was armed with a radio and was wearing several layers to stay warm.After being rescued by Wylee，she said，"I can't talk like a su